This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年9月3日 at 14:02:07

Artist: Linda, Chung Ka Yan
Title: coi wan gwok mat jyu
Source: Saiunkoku Monogatari (The Story of Color-cloud Land)
Tags: Hong Kong yue zh
BPM: 112
Filesize: 5200kb
Play Time: 02:47
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.21 stars, 129 notes)
2. Hard (4.36 stars, 297 notes)
3. Insane (4.83 stars, 412 notes)
4. Normal (3.52 stars, 234 notes)

Download: Linda, Chung Ka Yan - coi wan gwok mat jyu
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The Story of Color-cloud Land Opening Song

[Hajimari no Kaze(HONGKONG VER.)]

This is my first beatmap.

30/3/2010
sb upload

22/4/2010
easy upload

19/5/2010
rename hard as insane
rename normal as hard
rename easy as normal
easy upload

LK'MOD IS COMING!~

BPM和offest应该没问题

总体来说，建议改一下note颜色，换成比较柔和的
比如：4种颜色分别用第一行的第1，2，3，6个

normal

• slider略快，normal的难度用2.5的速度有些快
  关于音效(HITSOUND)要放在歌曲的重音上，但也不是所有音效都能用在一首歌里，一般Whistler是强调高音，clap是打节奏用的，应该选择合适的音效
  有的slider用上了1/8，可能是歌曲问题，你为了迎合歌声才这样做的，但有的slider却没压上歌声，可以再慢慢听一遍，我在下面有提到，但没有都找出来。总之我建议统统放在红白线上，至少节奏不会错

[00:03:67] 8 向左一个格子
[00:21:62] 5 新颜色
[00:28:38] 2 开始在[00:28:32] 结束在[00:28:58] 我不知道为什麽你要用1/8来做这个slider，但是这一般不常用
[00:30:19] 4 新颜色
[00:30:66] 2 结束在[00:30:73]
[00:32:60] 同上
[00:52:15] 设置kiai time ，结束在[01:05:31]
[00:59:38] 8 向左一个格子
[01:46:52] 3，4 和前面放在一起
[01:55:36] 同上
[02:05:54] 2，3，4，5 2尾和3重叠 2头和4尾重叠 4头和5尾重叠 不要露出来
[02:22:14] 设置kiai time 结束在，[02:33:66]
[02:26:43] 新颜色
[02:36:61] 同上
[02:37:68] 同上


Hard

• 总体和normal的建议差不多
  kiai time同 normal
  注意在突然改变间距的时候要用新颜色 我在下面提了几个但不全

[00:16:53] 8 不要音效
[00:21:62] 5 新颜色
[00:50:95] 6 新颜色
[02:02:32] 同上
[01:14:79] 同上

这是你的第一个map，恩，加油，先照我说的改一下，然后http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewforum.php?f=60来这里发帖找人来看你的map就好了

STAR FOR YOU！

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CHAS wrote:

normal我把2.5的速度改成2的速度
但發現slider & distance都要作出更正 恩。。这东西要在一开始就设置好
(完全沒有留意slider velocity就是速度 )


有個小問題...kiai time究竟是........?见下面

另外有沒有人覺得
normal
00:22:16的slider有點奇怪? 或者你可以把这四个向后1/8，然后结束的地方不变
00:28:32同上
00:30:46同上
00:32:60同上

hard
00:22:16 2,3 用了1/8 其實是否錯誤?恩换成1/4或者不要
01:54:16 同上

关于KIAI TIME

关于KUDOSU

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hard:
0:16:535 (8) - 0.5x time slider
0:17:071 (x) - remove break
0:37:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - remove sound effect / lower the sound
0:40:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
0:54:032 ~ 1:25:904 - the clap sound noisy... maybe put less "clap" or use another sound effect/ use other sound file
1:00:460 (x) - end kiai
1:53:759 (1) - spacing
2:03:669 (x) - suggestion: 0.5 slider
2:05:008 - suggestion : kiai time
2:05:008 ~ 2:10:900 a bit noisy
2:09:561 (2) - a bit right
2:13:311 - suggestion : end kiai
2:25:095 (9) - forbidden slider
2:29:113 ~ - a bit noisy
ending - please cut the unused part of the song

wmfchris wrote:

hard:
0:16:535 (8) - 0.5x time slider done
0:17:071 (x) - remove break done
0:37:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - remove sound effect / lower the sound done
0:40:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ done
0:54:032 ~ 1:25:904 - the clap sound noisy... maybe put less "clap" or use another sound effect/ use other sound file 改良...."||(音效果然很麻煩 真想乾脆把所有音效都關掉 )
1:00:460 (x) - end kiai done
1:53:759 (1) - spacing done
2:03:669 (x) - suggestion: 0.5 slider done(雖然不知道有什麼用途)(汗)
2:05:008 - suggestion : kiai time done
2:05:008 ~ 2:10:900 a bit noisy done
2:09:561 (2) - a bit right done
2:13:311 - suggestion : end kiai done
2:25:095 (9) - forbidden slider 真的不可以嗎 ??(淚目)
2:29:113 ~ - a bit noisy done
ending - please cut the unused part of the song..? 他本身不會自動結束嗎...???

多謝你的星星

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Download: Linda, Chung Ka Yan - coi wan gwok mat jyu (CHAS) [Hard].osu

Breeze wrote:

BPM : 112
Offset : -336

hit声音大了点,降低一些
关于声效,可以尝试每隔2个白线加一个clap,那样往往不会错
我在前面加了些音效设置和音量变化的进去
你可以参考一下

OMG 浅色note+KIAI 我等见光死

不要一堆一堆的用clap,很难听的
有什么疑问就PM我

star

首先多謝你的星星 (還有更正我的offset)

offset對我來說果然是謎一樣的東西

我聲效大部份都改良了(雖然不知道是變差還是變好 (汗.."|||)

廣東的(嚇...
我不知道該怎挑啦-.-...挑也是門學問

STAR~~

cscs3158 wrote:

廣東的(嚇...
我不知道該怎挑啦-.-...挑也是門學問

STAR~~

嗯
因為我第一張map想支持一下自己所使用的語言XDD(港式粵語 )
(而且剛巧我想製作MAP的時候 身旁的電視台正在播放彩雲國物語 嗯 所以就決定就這個吧XDD"|||)
(更重要的是我不討厭香港版的彩雲國OP..更更重要的是正是第一張MAP 所以我沒有選擇自己目前最愛的歌曲...因為我覺得第一張MAP會做得比較差XDDD)

支持本地歌!
star~

原来仲有粤语版噶,几好听啊

thank you for your star

支持本地歌+1
star

Thank you for star

star

I like this song><
好少廣東歌被ranked~

thank you for star^_______________________^~







總覺得此譜很糟糕....
修改起來很頭痛
真想砍掉重練(製)

送星星

純加星

thank you for star~~~

[General]:

1. 歌曲需要設置一個preview point（也就是在map list里點上歌曲從哪裡開始播放） 移到需要設置的地方然後選擇timng-->set current position as preview point即可 記住所有難度均要設置而且要一樣

[Easy]:

1. Cirlce Size -1
2. 其他的雖然遮擋很多 但是還是可以接受的

[Normal]:

1. 既然Easy沒有用KIAI 那麼這裡也不要用好了...（大部份人都不喜歡KIAI的）
2. 02:30:735 (1,2,3,4) - 還是規律spacing比較好 也就是3和4換一下
3. 02:39:306 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Hard]:

1. 00:01:538 (4) - 這個完全看不出轉的方向了 建議不要把末尾全擋住
2. 00:10:110 (4) - ^
3. 02:22:163 (1,2,3,4) - 這個很難讀
4. 02:25:110 (4) - ...
5. 建議不要用KIAI :3

have a kudosu star~

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. 歌曲需要設置一個preview point（也就是在map list里點上歌曲從哪裡開始播放） 移到需要設置的地方然後選擇timng-->set current position as preview point即可 記住所有難度均要設置而且要一樣

OK~

[Easy]:

1. Cirlce Size -1 把它變大..?
2. 其他的雖然遮擋很多 但是還是可以接受的

[Normal]:

1. 既然Easy沒有用KIAI 那麼這裡也不要用好了...（大部份人都不喜歡KIAI的）OK~ 好吧 我認為淺色NOTE殺傷力很大w
2. 02:30:735 (1,2,3,4) - 還是規律spacing比較好 也就是3和4換一下 OK~
3. 02:39:306 (1,2,3,4) - ^ OK~

[Hard]:

1. 00:01:538 (4) - 這個完全看不出轉的方向了 建議不要把末尾全擋住 這裡不想拆掉
2. 00:10:110 (4) - ^
3. 02:22:163 (1,2,3,4) - 這個很難讀 ok~改成circle 我認我放了個很無謂的陷阱w
4. 02:25:110 (4) - ... 改成S狀 這裡原來也是一個很無謂的陷阱www 只是後來拆掉(笑)
5. 建議不要用KIAI :3 ok~

have a kudosu star~

thanks~ 感激不盡w~

NI HAO

[Storyboard]
1) I think the storyboard are same on each diff......
Here the file
Download: SB Codes.rar
Extract to /songs/12393 Linda, Chung Ka Yan - coi wan gwok mat jyu

2) I can see the fade code like 0.8, 0.2, 0.5. If you make a fade, you have to check the osb file, sometime the fade code like "1" and "0", but 08, 02, 0.5 make frame lost, so you have to fix this

[Easy]
00:32:770 (2) - Unsnapped, LOL
00:35:556 (1) - Add a finish at the end??
01:17:878 (1) - Stack with 7 at the end doesn't stack perfectly, stack it??
01:22:164 (1) - ^
01:46:539 (3) - I think is better when this is move to 01:46:806 and cut short and add note at 01:46:539
02:02:315 (3) - Unsnapped, LOL
02:46:806 (1) - Perhaps move this spinner to 02:47:074 and cut short

[Normal]
00:14:128 (3) - I think this object make all player, they this this is a slider, but they don't. You have to find another place of this notes
00:28:391 (2) - Move forward to blue tick??
00:30:534 (2) - ^
01:29:128 (6) - Can you find another place of this object???? It's kinda confusing all people
01:49:820 (2) - Move forward to blue tick??

[Hard]
00:01:538 (4) - Unrankable Slider LOL (Don't let endpoint overlap the startpoint, it could be confusing)
00:10:110 (4) - ^
00:10:110 (4) - Combo spammer, remove new combo
01:26:717 (1,1,1,1) - ^

Perfect song
STAR + KD STAR

~Easy~
This is too hard to be called "Easy", you should make it easier

~Normal~
00:30:601 (2) - move 1/8 right
02:03:815 (1) - silence this spinner
02:46:806 (1) - end on left white tick

~Hard~
00:01:538 (4) - I think this is unrankable ...
00:10:110 (4) - ^
01:10:914 (9) - new combo
01:15:199 (9) - ^
01:19:485 (9) - ^
01:23:771 (9) - ^
01:46:538 (1) - should be moved 1/4 left
02:29:396 (8) - new combo


No Star yet, Easy is not fine for me.

NI HAO~~

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

[Storyboard]
1) I think the storyboard are same on each diff......
Here the file
[attachment=0:dadfa]SB Codes.rar[/attachment:dadfa]
Extract to /songs/12393 Linda, Chung Ka Yan - coi wan gwok mat jyu
oh....thanks!~~~

2) I can see the fade code like 0.8, 0.2, 0.5. If you make a fade, you have to check the osb file, sometime the fade code like "1" and "0", but 08, 02, 0.5 make frame lost, so you have to fix this
okay

[Easy]
00:32:770 (2) - Unsnapped, LOL done
00:35:556 (1) - Add a finish at the end?? okay~
01:17:878 (1) - Stack with 7 at the end doesn't stack perfectly, stack it?? um....had improve.?
01:22:164 (1) - ^
01:46:539 (3) - I think is better when this is move to 01:46:806 and cut short and add note at 01:46:539 done
02:02:315 (3) - Unsnapped, LOL done
02:46:806 (1) - Perhaps move this spinner to 02:47:074 and cut short done~

[Normal]
00:14:128 (3) - I think this object make all player, they this this is a slider, but they don't. You have to find another place of this notes um....had improve..?
00:28:391 (2) - Move forward to blue tick?? done
00:30:534 (2) - ^ done
01:29:128 (6) - Can you find another place of this object???? It's kinda confusing all people done
01:49:820 (2) - Move forward to blue tick?? done

[Hard]
00:01:538 (4) - Unrankable Slider LOL (Don't let endpoint overlap the startpoint, it could be confusing) done
00:10:110 (4) - ^ done
00:10:110 (4) - Combo spammer, remove new combo done...?
01:26:717 (1,1,1,1) - ^ done

Perfect song
STAR + KD STAR

thanks!!~~~~Leorda~~~~

DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
This is too hard to be called "Easy", you should make it easier


~Normal~
00:30:601 (2) - move 1/8 right done
02:03:815 (1) - silence this spinner done
02:46:806 (1) - end on left white tick done

~Hard~
00:01:538 (4) - I think this is unrankable ... done
00:10:110 (4) - ^ done
01:10:914 (9) - new combo done~
01:15:199 (9) - ^ done~
01:19:485 (9) - ^ done~
01:23:771 (9) - ^ done~
01:46:538 (1) - should be moved 1/4 left done
02:29:396 (8) - new combo done


No Star yet, Easy is not fine for me.

thanks mod ~

i will founded a easy(difficulty) again
(i'm not good at English )

Hello!~

I wish I can understand Cantonese~ 我只有學國語 x)

[Storyboard]
When you list the artist and song names, I would suggest a fade in.

[Easy]
Still can be easier. It's more of a normal right now.
00:15:199 (2,3,4,5) - I would suggest making these sliders, and then later in the song, they can be hit circles. This way, it gives an idea of what it is like when the similar phrase comes up again. (ie at 01:23:771 (2,3))
00:21:896 (3) - I would suggest starting this on the red tick :]
00:23:771 (1,2) - Spacing~
00:28:458 (2) - Start on white tick? It's an easy, after all :]
00:32:342 (2) - Personally I don't like this overlap, but I guess it's acceptable.
00:50:958 (5) - I would recommend starting this on the white tick.
01:59:128 (3) - Works better as 1 beat long repeats, but up to you.
02:03:681 (1) - This spinner is way too short for an easy, and even if you keep it, the followup notes come up too soon.
02:36:628 (2) - A little crooked

[Normal]
00:03:414 (4) - Expected a clap :3
00:05:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same hitsound structure as the combo?
00:09:306 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:16:271 (4) - Clap
00:22:030 (3) - Start on white?
00:28:458 (2) - ^
00:30:735 (2) - ^
00:32:744 (2) - ^
00:37:699 (1) - Recommend splitting into two one repeat sliders
00:40:914 (1) - Split into multiple sliders? ie

[Hard]
00:50:958 (6) - Perhaps shorten back to red tick?

[Insane]
00:16:538 (8) - Shorten to white tick?
00:19:485 (1,1,1,1) - Why the new combos?
00:37:699 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These don't sound too good. Perhaps just use 1/4ths?
01:50:289 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Space these farther apart.
Something like so:
As long as they're similar to 02:16:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Meanwhile, streams like 02:43:056 (1,2,3,4,5) are spaced too far apart. Choose one snap and stick with it.
02:37:967 (2) - Reverse this. The jump is nearly impossible.

Good luck! :3

thepianist wrote:

Hello!~
hi~~~~~

I wish I can understand Cantonese~ 我只有學國語 x) 廣東話也不錯阿

[Storyboard]
When you list the artist and song names, I would suggest a fade in.
I dropped a fade...

[Easy]
Still can be easier. It's more of a normal right now.
00:15:199 (2,3,4,5) - I would suggest making these sliders, and then later in the song, they can be hit circles. This way, it gives an idea of what it is like when the similar phrase comes up again. (ie at 01:23:771 (2,3)) okay~
00:21:896 (3) - I would suggest starting this on the red tick :] I think better blue tick
00:23:771 (1,2) - Spacing~ done
00:28:458 (2) - Start on white tick? It's an easy, after all :] I think better blue tick
00:32:342 (2) - Personally I don't like this overlap, but I guess it's acceptable. improve
00:50:958 (5) - I would recommend starting this on the white tick. no
01:59:128 (3) - Works better as 1 beat long repeats, but up to you. okay~
02:03:681 (1) - This spinner is way too short for an easy, and even if you keep it, the followup notes come up too soon. improve
02:36:628 (2) - A little crooked improve

[Normal]
00:03:414 (4) - Expected a clap :3 done
00:05:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same hitsound structure as the combo? okay~
00:09:306 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:16:271 (4) - Clap done
00:22:030 (3) - Start on white? no
00:28:458 (2) - ^
00:30:735 (2) - ^
00:32:744 (2) - ^
00:37:699 (1) - Recommend splitting into two one repeat sliders i like this 0.0
00:40:914 (1) - Split into multiple sliders? ie improve

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:50:958 (6) - Perhaps shorten back to red tick? no0.0

[Insane]
00:16:538 (8) - Shorten to white tick? I think better red tick
00:19:485 (1,1,1,1) - Why the new combos? change
00:37:699 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These don't sound too good. Perhaps just use 1/4ths? done
01:50:289 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Space these farther apart.I think it's ok0.0
Something like so:

SPOILER

As long as they're similar to 02:16:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Meanwhile, streams like 02:43:056 (1,2,3,4,5) are spaced too far apart. Choose one snap and stick with it.
02:37:967 (2) - Reverse this. The jump is nearly impossible. I think it's ok0.0

Good luck! :3

thanks mod~~

CHAS wrote:

thepianist wrote:

Hello!~
hi~~~~~

I wish I can understand Cantonese~ 我只有學國語 x) 廣東話也不錯阿

[Storyboard]
When you list the artist and song names, I would suggest a fade in.
I dropped a fade...

[Easy]
Still can be easier. It's more of a normal right now.
00:15:199 (2,3,4,5) - I would suggest making these sliders, and then later in the song, they can be hit circles. This way, it gives an idea of what it is like when the similar phrase comes up again. (ie at 01:23:771 (2,3)) okay~
00:21:896 (3) - I would suggest starting this on the red tick :] I think better blue tick done
00:23:771 (1,2) - Spacing~ done
00:28:458 (2) - Start on white tick? It's an easy, after all :] I think better blue tick done
00:32:342 (2) - Personally I don't like this overlap, but I guess it's acceptable. improve
00:50:958 (5) - I would recommend starting this on the white tick. noimprove
01:59:128 (3) - Works better as 1 beat long repeats, but up to you. okay~
02:03:681 (1) - This spinner is way too short for an easy, and even if you keep it, the followup notes come up too soon. improve
02:36:628 (2) - A little crooked improve

[Normal]
00:03:414 (4) - Expected a clap :3 done
00:05:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same hitsound structure as the combo? okay~
00:09:306 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:16:271 (4) - Clap done
00:22:030 (3) - Start on white? noimprove
00:28:458 (2) - ^
00:30:735 (2) - ^
00:32:744 (2) - ^
00:37:699 (1) - Recommend splitting into two one repeat sliders i like this 0.0
00:40:914 (1) - Split into multiple sliders? ie improve

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:50:958 (6) - Perhaps shorten back to red tick? no0.0

[Insane]
00:16:538 (8) - Shorten to white tick? I think better red tick
00:19:485 (1,1,1,1) - Why the new combos? change
00:37:699 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These don't sound too good. Perhaps just use 1/4ths? done
01:50:289 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Space these farther apart.I think it's ok0.0
Something like so:

SPOILER

As long as they're similar to 02:16:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Meanwhile, streams like 02:43:056 (1,2,3,4,5) are spaced too far apart. Choose one snap and stick with it.
02:37:967 (2) - Reverse this. The jump is nearly impossible. I think it's ok0.0

Good luck! :3

thanks mod~~

我錯了......easy 跟著白線放還是有不錯的效果...

Hi,
hitsound volume is a little imo
some spots with few hitsounds

[easy]
01:25:923 (1) - no new combo? imo

[normal]
fine for me

[hard]
02:00:199 (6,7,8) - all finish seems wierd to me, im not good at hitsounds though, maybe make (7) a clap?

[insane]
fine
00:37:669 (1-7) kinsa bugged me, but its fine

nice map

roflninja wrote:

Hi,
hitsound volume is a little imo
some spots with few hitsounds

[easy]
01:25:923 (1) - no new combo? imo done

[normal]
fine for me

[hard]
02:00:199 (6,7,8) - all finish seems wierd to me, im not good at hitsounds though, maybe make (7) a clap? improve

[insane]
fine
00:37:669 (1-7) kinsa bugged me, but its fine

nice map

thanks for mod

Hello.
Easy
ok
Normal
01:45:735 (2,3) spacing is close.
Hard
00:50:958 (6) 1 grid up(grid lv2)
Insane
Totally , strange symmetry. Bacause of grid lv2...
You should fix some spacing , using grid lv3 & AImod.

nicemap , star & gl

banvi wrote:

Hello.
Easy
ok
Normal
01:45:735 (2,3) spacing is close. done
Hard
00:50:958 (6) 1 grid up(grid lv2) done
Insane
Totally , strange symmetry. Bacause of grid lv2...
You should fix some spacing , using grid lv3 & AImod. improving

nicemap , star & gl

thank you for mod
I'm sorry that I've delayed so long.

Thank you Trans_Am for star

where the kiai time?
隨意看了看
Hard
00:27:521-no clap
00:33:146(1,2,3)-沒重疊好 關掉grid snap 對好它
00:41:449(3)-no clap
00:44:664-^
00:44:128-add clap
00:45:199-^
00:47:342(4)-^
沒有看完xD
Insane的clap比較怪...
clap通常會放在第二第四條白線

[Hard]

increase circle size 1 ~ 2 otherwise map looks all stack together.>_>

[Insane]

many looooooooong long streams dont fit this snog imo.<_<

karenying wrote:

where the kiai time?
隨意看了看
Hard
00:27:521-no clap
00:33:146(1,2,3)-沒重疊好 關掉grid snap 對好它
00:41:449(3)-no clap
00:44:664-^
00:44:128-add clap
00:45:199-^
00:47:342(4)-^
沒有看完xD
Insane的clap比較怪...
clap通常會放在第二第四條白線

完成
而kiai time...經別人建議後我拿掉了lol
我有個問題
如果我offset調早/調晚一個白線 那麼clap不就完全不同嗎 囧?

thank you karenying for mod

deepsea wrote:

[Hard]

increase circle size 1 ~ 2 otherwise map looks all stack together.>_>

[Insane]

many looooooooong long streams dont fit this snog imo.<_<

[Hard]
done

請容許我使用中文發問
[insane]
long streams是指像[00:03:681]的slider嗎?
我嘗試改變一下
Editingdone

thank you deepsea

CHAS wrote:

我有個問題
如果我offset調早/調晚一個白線 那麼clap不就完全不同嗎 囧?

囧 不會 怎會呢

karenying wrote:

CHAS wrote:

我有個問題
如果我offset調早/調晚一個白線 那麼clap不就完全不同嗎 囧?

囧 不會 怎會呢

我用我自己另外一首beatmap作例子
如果我把offset設定去第一個note(Insane)(offset 1033->4681)
不就全部音效都改變了嗎 囧?
不過我的音效都是亂來的wwwwww

咦咦...? 應該還有幾天才會進墳墓的... 失誤了 囧

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