*saves from falling off page1 without any comments*
I'm not too fond of the music
but the timing is a lot better than your last attempt - so you've definitely improved. Did you draw that background? If so, I find it really nice - suits the song and adds some originality to this creation. I do find the sliders pretty random, but I guess that is the feel you were going for.
Keep it up - maybe try a song with a bit more melody next time (though this is just my personal preference
).