1. Hard (4.72 stars, 349 notes)
2. Insane (4.94 stars, 437 notes)
3. Normal (3.51 stars, 164 notes)

1. You have a unused .osb file inside the folder.
2. What is the second offset for? I think it would be fine without it. Also, the first offset should be 159~

1. The first offset is not the same as the other difficulties (by 1ms).

Gens wrote:

[General]

1. You have a unused .osb file inside the folder. oops
2. What is the second offset for? I think it would be fine without it. Also, the first offset should be 159~ >_< I don't agree atm (about the second offset not being needed), but maybe

[Normal]

1. The first offset is not the same as the other difficulties (by 1ms).

D'oh

The map is very nice, just those little things above. ^^

Shinde wrote:

Add kiai, or a SB/video. If you can find something that fits that is. It seems to be lacking something visually, least to me. theres no exact point where I wanted to added kiai (since the whole map sped up when i used the 2x point). I found this song via searching for albums, so I don't think there's a video for this, and can't think of an SB that's worth it ;_; so, I can't find something that fits

Everything else was spiffy. I was going to suggest turning HP Drain down one on Insane but it'd mess with the score considerably."Spiffy" ? o-o, and I don't mind the drain on Insane (its easy to recover once you pass the slow start)

Zekira wrote:

This was so annoyingly confusing to time, so I just timed from scratch. Eh..

First offset: 145ms, 87.50, 3/4 time signature ok?
Second Offset: 49516ms, 87.50, 4/4 time signature Over here? Fine..

...honestly, low BPMs are kind of making me cringe, why not use 175 instead? >: doesn't matter too much for me...

First offset: Seems kinda early; Try 160.

Dusty wrote:

[Normal]
This feels so slow compared to Hard. But it's the lowest difficulty, I guess that's OK.

00:26:897 (4,5) - Surround the beat a little nicer? (I had to turn grid snap off and move top/bottom sliderpoints a couple osunits up/down)
(Right now the overlapping and lopsidedness make it ugly ) XD okay, got it close

02:02:201 (3) - Right and up? hmmmm agreed

[Hard]
Good beatmap.

Some of the overlapping notes felt weird, but most of them I managed to hit without combobreaking

[Lunatic]
01:57:058 (6,1,2) - weird stacking Don't wanna move any notes, so atm, no solution, oh well >_<

alvisto wrote:

Hello Shinxyn, sorry for the late mod. T.T

NORMAL
Don't you think the OA is too low ? Increase by 1 ? xD OA? Overall Accuracy? (Difficulty), mmm I'll keep it as it is since this is the easier diff..

HARD
01:47:630 (2) - This make me cry... D: xD Coz to me, imho, it's kinda hard to read. mmm, I really don't wanna move these... and making this a new combo wouldn't make sense to the combo patterns I'm following... so.. I just tried making (1) a wave slider... not that I think it makes too much of a difference (didn't wanna turn it up or down)
I like where you suddenly make the pace faster after the initial slow BPM parts. xD

INSANE Mommy~~~~ OMG jumps xD *orz* (learn from your mod post in yoshi's map ;p) B-but this isn't -that- hard
01:51:401 (3,4) - Can you please be don't so cruel ? lol, coz I thought 3 and 4 are connected with a slider. ._. inorite~ just react fast enough to catch (4)
02:21:401 (1) - Map design is nice, but comboburst obscuring it make it kinda hard to expect there's something here. I didn't test with comboburst on nor expect it to pop up exactly on this time... NOT MY FAULT!

Actually these are not issues I think, by playing through the map several jumps and memorizing them, they are fine. xD theres lots of hidden(ish) patterns, I don't want them to be an issue, just lots of places mods can point out "this is kinda hidden"

BTW, I love the jumps, even though I can't pass it. ._. I can pass it!... once in a while >_>

xD

Star for sure, as always, good and fun map. ^.^

P.S. : Actually I don't quite agree with the 1st offset, I feel it's around 143 ms, but I don't have confidence in my timing anymore.... Hrmm.... I dunno anymore either! -waits for another timing expert-

EDIT : I just realized Zekira also posted 145 ms. xD *which make me happy a little orz*

Zekira wrote:

First offset: 145ms, 87.50, 3/4 time signature
Second Offset: 49516ms, 87.50, 4/4 time signature

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Normal:
Combo mod:
01:15:915 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with your combos following 2 horns (or at least some wind instrument) kk

Hard:
Combo mod
01:21:058 (5) - new combo for the second horn kk

Insane:
Why is the hp drain so high? Before the guitar started, I had 86% acc with no misses and lost half my health already T_T
Pass the slow part then you can recover! Plus Shinde already pointed this out, too >_< keeping it for the points as well
Normal mod:
01:07:344 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - it took me 3 tries to read this correctly T_T Too bad, I'm keeping thissss
02:26:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this slow stream is disorienting mmmm dunno, I don't really know what to change this to then (don't wanna spread out nor stack)

Combo mod:
00:32:040 (7) - new combo for the last syllable of the line like your previous combos kk
01:37:001 (3) - new combo to follow your lyrical combo pattern? (somewhere around here) kk
01:39:744 (3) - ^ kk

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Very nice map. Star.

Cyclone wrote:

Zekira wrote:

First offset: 145ms, 87.50, 3/4 time signature
Second Offset: 49516ms, 87.50, 4/4 time signature

I support this timing if you say so~

I also pointed out the BG would be of Imperishable Night, but i can't really find a suitable BG, so this one is fine. xD

Zekira wrote:

First offset: 145ms, 87.50, 3/4 time signature
Second Offset: 49516ms, 87.50, 4/4 time signature

Cyclone wrote:

Zekira wrote:

First offset: 145ms, 87.50, 3/4 time signature
Second Offset: 49516ms, 87.50, 4/4 time signature

I support this timing

Larto wrote:

All difficulties:
00:49:516 - What is this red timing section doing here? I checked, if you remove it, the timing stays the same o_o

Ephemeral wrote:

Am I alone in thinking this sounds very similar to early Pendulum stuff minus the Rob Swire vocals?