Electronic Boutique - Miles · forum

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-01-09T01:52:04+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 2월 6일 토요일 at 오후 1:52:15

Artist: Electronic Boutique
Title: Miles
Source: DJMAX
Tags: DJ MAX BF Trilogy Portable 2 TECHNIKA
BPM: 130
Filesize: 7820kb
Play Time: 02:02
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.32 stars, 125 notes)
Hard (4.84 stars, 372 notes)
Normal (3.81 stars, 215 notes)

Download: Electronic Boutique - Miles
Download: Electronic Boutique - Miles (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Electronic Fusion song in DJMAX Series

Included DJMAX Online, Trilogy, DJMAX Portable 2 and TECHNIKA.

Composed by Electronic Boutique
Visualized by BF.

Enjoy this song yourself XD

Last edited by MoonFragrance 2010-02-06T04:53:01+00:00, edited 14 times in total.

Dusty

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Dusty 2010-01-23T03:23:09+00:00

[General]
Easy and Normal are nice beatmaps, but Hard is much more fun and energetic. Maybe try making Easy and Normal have a little more energy (I really don't know how to explain it very well)?

Hard ends with a spinner, but Easy and Normal don't. Is this intentional?

Delete the unused .osb and full resubmit

Try playing it in Elite Beat Osu! or Ouendan2 skins, if you like how this map sounds in those skins that's good, if you don't then copy the default hitsounds which you don't override and put them in the song folder and full resubmit

[Normal]
01:27:949 (7) - Turn into a slider, or add a slider afterwards?

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-01-23T05:04:08+00:00

General
Everything seems A-OK. Only one thing I don't like...
Your hitsound placements (Note: Of course, this is just IMO).

My suggestions: Put a "Finish" on every beat 1 and a "Whistle" on every beat 3. Just take a listen, I think it sound better.

Also, for every difficulty (except maybe Hard [which you've already done for]), put a spinner at the end to prevent same scores. With hard, try to put a bit more spinners... thought I have no idea where

. Ah well, just suggestions...

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-01-23T08:53:06+00:00

fixed

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-01-23T09:38:20+00:00

Easy
End with spinner as well?

00:07:641 (1 ~ 6) - Flip Horizontally and Vertically, so it isn't the same as before

Normal/Hard
Much better

Breeze

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Breeze 2010-01-23T14:22:35+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

anonymous_old

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anonymous_old 2010-01-23T16:19:52+00:00

Easy

SPOILER

00:18:718 (6) : Move one tick to the left, and on tick upwards. (Grid size: 3)
01:39:949 (4) : Extend this slider by 2 ticks.
01:41:564 (x) : Add a beat here.

Good.

Normal

SPOILER

00:03:949 (7) : Finish hitsound.
00:33:257 (x) : Add a beat here.
00:40:641 (x) : Add a beat here.

Good.

Hard

SPOILER

00:03:949 (1) : Finish hitsound.
01:03:603 (x) : Add a beat here.

Good.

Sushi

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Sushi 2010-01-24T02:53:21+00:00

The hitsounds are too quiet. we can't really hear if we're doing great or not.

[Easy]
00:00:257 (1,2,3,4,5) - symetry.
00:15:949 (2,4) - ^

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
01:21:718 (2,3) - problem here. end of (2) and star of (3) are at the same time.

<3 hitsounds, but not enough loud.

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-01-24T09:12:50+00:00

fixed

Leorda

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Leorda 2010-01-24T12:22:16+00:00

Hayeonghaseyo!

[Easy]
01:09:718 (5) - Allign with 4 (end of slider)?
01:15:949 (x) - Add note?

[Normal]
00:29:680 ~ 00:35:103 (SB) - You have a make a warning of 0.5x speed in here
00:33:257 (x) - Add note?
00:37:064 ~ 00:44:795 (SB) - You have a make a warning of 0.5x speed in here
00:40:641 (x) - Add note?

[Hard]
00:29:680 ~ 00:35:103 (SB) - You have a make a warning of 0.5x speed in here
00:37:064 ~ 00:42:372 (SB) - ^

[Overall]
I think you need a storyboard of 0.5x speed, so that don't makes all player confuse

Not bad
STAR

bmin11

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bmin11 2010-01-24T19:32:07+00:00

[Hard]
슬라이더 밑에 위치한 노트들이 각각 눌러야할 타이밍이 틀리다보니 많이 헷갈리네요;;; 뭐 몇번 플레이해서 노래를 외운다면야 문제는 없지만요
그 외에는 하드에서 딱히 눈에 띄는건 없네요.

[Easy]
00:07:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 이 부분을 180도 회전시켜보는게 어떨까요? 그전 부분과 판박이처럼 똑같은건 좀 그러니;;
01:03:718 (6) - 슬라이더 몸통에 있는 호루라기소리 없에주세요
01:17:103 (5) - ^
01:19:641 (8) - ^ 이긴 하나 선택사항

역시 문프레님 ㅇㅅㅇb

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-01-25T01:10:18+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Hayeonghaseyo!

[Easy]
01:15:949 (x) - Add note? [/color]
- drum zone :3

[Normal]
00:33:257 (x) - Add note?
00:40:641 (x) - Add note?[/b]
- skipped for ease

[Overall]
I think you need a storyboard of 0.5x speed, so that don't makes all player confuse
- yes, but i can't do it right now

bmin11 wrote:
[Easy]
01:17:103 (5) - 슬라이더 몸통에 있는 호루라기소리 없에주세요
01:19:641 (8) - ^ 이긴 하나 선택사항
- 음.... 이건 삐익 하는 소리를 나타내려고 하는지라 ㅇㅅㅇ

others all fixed

thanks for modding, and star XD

DJPop

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DJPop 2010-01-25T04:42:24+00:00

No Kiai times ?

~Easy~
01:19:637 (8) - add hitfinish at the end

~Normal~
00:40:868 (5) - add whistles
01:13:176 (7,8) - move 1/4 right
01:20:560 (6,7,8) - ^
01:21:252 (9) - delete
01:21:483 (1) - end on right blue tick

~Hard~
00:24:714 (6,9) - add clap
00:27:483 (3) - ^
01:10:406 (1) - ^ at the end
01:15:483 (1) - remove new combo
01:15:714 (2) - new combo
01:20:329 (4) - move 1/4 right
01:21:483 (1) - add hitfinish
01:57:022 (2) - add clap
01:55:868 (5) - new combo
02:02:560 (1) - make it muted if possible

+Star

Vanmonky

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Vanmonky 2010-01-25T10:51:07+00:00

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Lowercase all the tags.
2. Recently, I found that "DJ [SPACE] MAX" is the right title. Idk.
3. Whistle fits this song. Use it more especially for [Easy] diff.

[Easy]
00:01:180 (2,3,4) - Add whistle.
00:04:872 (6) - Add whistle at the whole slider.
00:07:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - CTRL + H?
00:08:564 (2,3,4) - Add whistle.
00:12:256 (6) - Add whistle at the whole slider.
00:15:026 (1) - Add finish.
01:03:718 (6) - Remove whistle from the sliderslide.
01:19:641 (8) - ^
01:23:564 (1) - Too close to the spinner. Hard for an easy diff. [?]

[Normal]
Increase slider tick rate to 2. [?]
00:31:641 (2) - Remove whistle from the sliderslide.
00:33:487 (5) - ^
00:39:026 (2) - ^
00:42:372 (1) - Forward one 1/4 tick. Reduce one 1/4 tick.
01:45:487 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.
02:02:564 (1) - Extend one 1/1 tick. Silence the end.

[Hard]
02:02:564 (1) - Silence the end.

Star.

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-01-25T12:17:08+00:00

fixed :3

kino77

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kino77 2010-01-25T13:10:54+00:00

All good for me~
I love the beats~

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-01-25T13:18:16+00:00

Wow, thank you for blue and pink star~ >A<
I'm glad to people like my map

Lokamp

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Lokamp 2010-01-27T15:12:56+00:00

Easy
00:18:714 (6) - whistle here

Normal
01:57:714 (4,5) - move them a square down

Hard
Spectacular!

A good placemant for hitsounds makes this map of an higher level.
Maybe kiai time can make it better! Try it on all modes from 01:30:714 to 01:45:483 or from 01:45:483 to 02:00:252!
(Maybe fountain effect on 01:30:714 and on 01:45:483 is better...)
Now then, for your star. Good luck with ranking! ;3

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-01-27T15:55:59+00:00

fixed :3
but i don't want to add kiai because this song is placid and clam

Lissette

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Lissette 2010-01-28T02:33:50+00:00

General
Remove DJ MAX from tag, is already in source

Easy
00:55:637 (6) - new combo
01:01:176 (4) - ^
01:08:560 (4) - ^
01:38:099 (3) - ^
01:41:791 (6) - ^

Normal
why you put that inherited timing section on top of the offset ? o.O
00:50:099 (6) - new combo
00:57:483 (7) - ^
01:12:253 (5) - ^
01:51:022 (5) - ^

Hard
why you put that inherited timing section on top of the offset ? o.O
00:14:329 - add note?
00:43:753 - sounds nice a note here, just suggesting
01:13:291 (5) - new combo for jump
01:13:868 and 01:13:983 - add notes?
01:19:637 (1,2,3) - instead of these notes, put a slider that start here 01:19:753 - end here 01:19:868 - and reverse 2 times
01:20:445 (4) - new combo for jump
01:23:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - look at the spacing between (1,2,3) and than look at the spacing between (5,6) - be consistence plz
01:25:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - wrong spacing, spacing must be consistent in the same combo
01:28:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - sounds nice notes between (3,4) and (4,5) ^^
02:02:560 (1) - how about ending the spinner here 02:05:791 ? like in Normal

Nice map
Star!

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-01-28T05:19:00+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Lissette

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Lissette 2010-01-29T00:19:18+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-01-29T04:37:25+00:00

Source is DJMAX, tag is 'DJ MAX'. it's okay :3
others all fixed

sesito71

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sesito71 2010-01-30T10:37:56+00:00

Hi~

[Normal]

00:03:945 (7) - New combo here?
00:11:329 (6) - ^

Everything else was good

Have a star! *

Last edited by sesito71 2010-01-31T10:37:50+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-01-30T11:50:50+00:00

fixed :3

hian_old

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hian_old 2010-01-30T15:17:18+00:00

별 쾅!!

Shulin

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Shulin 2010-01-31T14:16:30+00:00

Easy:

00:18:714 (6) - New combo?
00:21:022 (1) - Remove new combo if you take ^ suggestion.
00:26:099 (5) - New combo?
00:28:406 (1) - Remove new combo if you do ^
01:18:253 (6) - New combo.

You can ignore these they aren't very important.

Normal

Great.

Hard:

01:21:483 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing? The jumps are weird in the stream.

Let me know about any changes, and I'll proto bubble

~ Star.

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-01T09:11:04+00:00

fixed :3

LKs

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LKs 2010-02-01T14:14:49+00:00

LK STRICT MODDING~

very nice map!

easy
[01:53:79] (2,3) here a little oblique ,i guess its your design? if not, move (2,3) 1 grid up and 1 grid left

normal
[00:16:86] (5) move 1 grid up and 1 grid right
[00:29:79] (1) move 1 grid up and 1 grid left
[01:20:67] (6,7,8) my suggestion

[01:36;71] (7,8,9) move (7,8,9) 1 grid down and 1 grid left
[01:44:79] (7,8,9,1) fix them

hard
[01:51:00]

BG perfect
colors prefect
hitsound very well
spacing good
song l like this song
rhythm prefect

so, star and kudosu star!

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-01T14:27:52+00:00

fixed what i picked :3
thanks for star XD

Teara

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Teara 2010-02-01T18:06:47+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-02T04:52:31+00:00

Teara wrote:
[Easy]
01:45:022 (2) - Align with 1 and fix rest? or was this meant to be like this?

- Nah

[Normal]

01:13:291 (3) - New combo maybe?
- I think no new combo is more fine.

01:15:022 (*) - hitcircle, no hitsounds?
- skipped for ease