49937400 wrote:

angel太萌了

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO!

[General]

SPOILER

1) Hatsune Miku it's in the artist so we don't need "Hatsune Miku" on tags
2) DECO*27 it's in the Source so we don't need "DECO*27" on tags
3) The color combo is diffrent on each difficulty, I think is unrankable, please match the color combo with No Slider or Normal

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:37:890 (3) - Move 1 grid right
00:39:293 (3) - Move 1 grid up

MOE MOE ANGELHONEY!!!!!!

Teara wrote:

I'm sorry, I don't like cluster maps like this~

and I'm bad at modding them too.

I'd advise to remap it with a larger distance snap :<

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Well, there are several things you need to see.

1. Change the source to Vocaloid2. Then move the DECO*27 to the tags with lowercase.fix
2. Remove "Hatsune Miku" from the tags.its Hatsune Miku :D
3. I suggest you to add kiai time from 02:30:157 to all diffs.fix

Also for the [Normal] diff, make the distance snapping bigger. It will be better.fix
Idk why but I don't really like the [No Slider] diff. Is that because of the small circles? Or maybe the concept which has no slider? Idk. But so far, I don't see any major mistake. 0.0

Star. Good luck.Thank you~

Joyeden wrote:

AH酱 =w=

kaiser240 wrote:

:)
路过

Hiromi_Yuasa wrote:

捧场捧场~~

digiaria wrote:

送你星星再加一张好人卡 -_,-

VanMoNky wrote:

Listen AngelHoney. Trust me. You have to remove the hatsune miku from the tags.

DJPop wrote:

~Normal~
00:38:591 (1) - remove new combo
00:40:346 (4) - new combo
00:48:415 (5) - ^
01:05:957 (6) - ^
01:10:167 (5) - ^
02:00:336 (8) - ^
02:05L248 - break time is too long imo
02:42:787 (5) - new combo

~No Slider!~
00:03:683 (9) - move right 2 grid (Lv3)
00:08:420 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - wrong spacings
00:27:891 (7) - new combo
00:30:698 (1) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:05:957 (11) - new combo
00:58:940 (7) - ^
01:01:747 (7) - ^
01:10:167 (9) - ^
01:12:973 (7) - ^
01:16:482 (6) - ^
02:11:914 (7) - ^
02:38:577 (7) - ^
02:45:594 (7) - ^


+Star

Loogiesquared wrote:

Normal
[*] Make the universal offset 1,403.fix

02:23:141 (3) : Delete, then put a beat at 02:23:141.fix
02:30:157 (5) : Make the Kiai-time start on this beat.fix
02:45:594 (1,2,3,4,5) : Too hard for a normal map.fix

Very good~


No Sliders?!
[*] Make the universal offset 1,403.fix

00:05:087 (4) : Move to the right by 1 in grid-level 3.fix
00:05:262 (5) : Move to the left by 1 in grid-level 3.fix
00:08:420 (6) : New combo.fix
00:08:420 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) : This *might* be unrankable.fix
00:45:608 (1,1) : Too big of a jump. i think its OK
01:26:480 (4,5) : Put the 4 where the 5 is and vice-versa. i think its OK

Good.

abalee wrote:

BPM 85.50 or 171.00, and resnap all plz.

1. osb文件不需要,删掉再full submit

1. 说实话,刚开始那感觉太挤了,note都放一堆了o.o,其他都很不错

1. 00:46:315 - 00:51:578 (1-12,1-12) - 这个模式很好,不过放的时候至少保证他们最后的note放在同一个地方吧,不然看起来很花

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hiiii~

Here are some suggestions for your map. Of course you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me~

Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Add a Source? Maybe Vocaloid or something like that? oxo i think its ok...
- Consider making an easier diff. normal(HR) you will find its soooooo easy ...
- Stacking Leniency on 0.2 isn't rankable, please increase it. :S fix

~Normal~
- Why does this have 0 Offset? Change it please

02:27:368 (1) - Replace this with a break.fix

~No Slider!~
00:02:456 (4) - New Combo?fix
00:24:035 (3) - Delete this note.
00:24:385 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Move this 1/2 earlier.
00:46:315 (3,6,9,12,3,6,9,12) - Overlap these correctly.fix
02:27:543 (1) - Delete this spinner? I find it too much oxo...


Cute! Good Job Angel moe moe~ *stars*

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Remove the excess .osb and full submit.fix
Stack leniency is too low.fix
Move No Slider?!'s offset back to match Normal's.fix
Background is a little low-res. T.T i will fix...

Normal feels a bit too hard to read at times to be the easiest difficulty; get a second opinion on this.

[Normal]

OD feels a little low.(if you open HR mods ...you will feel good...> <

00:40:701 (2) - Shorten by 1/2?what?
00:43:508 (2) - ^what?

[No Slider?!]

Change difficulty name to "No Sliders?!" ? i think its OK...

I didn't really like the little hops in a stream, such as at 01:25:438 (12,1), despite the new combo.fix

01:51:578 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing.fix

Looks nice overall, star.

Breeze wrote:

o.o

[General]

1. osb文件不需要,删掉再full submit

嗯 去除了

[Normal]

1. 说实话,刚开始那感觉太挤了,note都放一堆了o.o,其他都很不错

> <這也是爲了觸手開HR 而特地這麼做的o3o

[No slider?!]

1. 00:46:315 - 00:51:578 (1-12,1-12) - 这个模式很好,不过放的时候至少保证他们最后的note放在同一个地方吧,不然看起来很花

嗯 修正了

nice map, star

tsukamaete wrote:

STAR

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

[No slider]
00:18:245 (1) - too far fix
00:21:052 (1) - ^^
01:25:614 (1) - ^^
01:28:421 (1) - ^^
toooo many claps ,, noisy..^
and why you didnt use sliders.. because it "No Slider"diff... :P

WyndII wrote:

hii! :3

[M[]D]
nice song please don't hate me if I like hatsune

[No SLider?!]
This is a bit boring with slow approach circles coming, mind if you increase the Overall Difficulty?
Also Hitsound and it's orzptional, really, if you don't like it then don't lol. XD

SPOILER

Kiai Section: 02:30:175 - I want your map to have something like powah or something so increase volume then, use the finish hitsounds for the bit
I can't explain it well lol in chinese, tagalog, english or wapanese or watever so please take a look at the .osu instead >w< (at Kiai section)[attachment=0:f7c72]Hatsune Miku - haL1 (AngelHoney) [No Slider!1].osu[/attachment:f7c72]

No probs~ :3

[Normal]
Nice, I like this normal :3

[Easy]
02:30:175 - remove kiai section~

STAR!!! ( iloveitbtwxD)

Lokamp wrote:

Normal
01:53:333 (8) - move it a square down

No Slider!
[General] I barely think that Bats can easily rank modes without sliders, but except some hitsound-pacing problems on this map's start it's ok!

Even if I HATE Miku, I must admit this map is well organized and fun to play.
...well... I guess it's time for a star!

Kytoxid wrote:

Pre-pubble mod.

[General]

Delete the .osb file and full submit.fix
Change background colours to pink.fix
Add Vocaloid to the tags?fix

[Easy]

00:46:842 (3) - The slider ticks on the offbeats sound horrible. Replace 3 with a notefix, and then start the slider at 00:47:368 instead? i fix the Volume lets sound better
00:53:333 (1,2,3) - Not aligned.fix
02:01:754 (2) - Up a grid? Your other 1/1s are touching.fix

[Normal]

I kinda want to recommend renaming this to Hard, since looking at a 4.5 star Normal just seems...off, lol. Consider raising OD a bit too, especially if you rename it to Hard. fix

00:40:701 (2,3) - Make these touch? i add a note on 00:41:578/00:44:385 lets feel better ..
02:27:368 - Remove this break.fix

Almost there! PM me when you're done.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

Offset: 1400 (Remember to resnap all notes after the timing change.)

[Difficulties]

[Hard]

Add 1 or 2 secs. Of Lead-In Time.

[No Slider?!]

Add 1 or 2 secs. Of Lead-In Time.

Fix4Bubble.

• .Opinions:
  Try Slider Tick Rate 2 and see if you enjoy it.
  .Suggestions:
  00:35:084 (1) - nazi, move a bit more to the left. It can be confused for a 1/2 spacing.

• .Suggestions:
  02:27:364 - add a beat here?

• .Opinions:
  Actually, i don't like the total absence of sliders, but the map is fine, so... nothing to complain about ^^

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Sorry i got late in modding this one D:

I know it's bubbled, but here's my suggestions anyways ^^"


- Easy:

• .Opinions:
  Try Slider Tick Rate 2 and see if you enjoy it.
  .Suggestions:
  00:35:084 (1) - nazi, move a bit more to the left. It can be confused for a 1/2 spacing.

- Hard:

• .Suggestions:
  02:27:364 - add a beat here?

- No Slider!:

• .Opinions:
  Actually, i don't like the total absence of sliders, but the map is fine, so... nothing to complain about ^^

Choose if you want to follow my suggestions. Anyway, if you don't want to lose your bubble you can ignore them.
Star for you ^^

00:35:084 (1) - nazi, move a bit more to the left. It can be confused for a 1/2 spacing.

1. Some of the sliders look like 2 hitcircles put really close together. Try to avoid those.
   
   E.g.
   00:01:400 (1,2)
   00:22:978 (5,6,7)

Mafiamaster wrote:

Hard~

1. Some of the sliders look like 2 hitcircles put really close together. Try to avoid those.
   
   E.g.
   00:01:400 (1,2)
   00:22:978 (5,6,7)