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Uchida Maaya - Soushou Innocence [CatchTheBeat]

posted 2014-07-09T22:32:16+00:00

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QHideaki13 2014-08-26T08:13:52+00:00

Kurokami

00:24:107 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is weird. I can't describe it other way. If you listen it a bit more you will recognize two types of rhythm here. One is the vocal and the other one is the drum on every white tick. White tick can be followed with a circle on every white tick. But for vocal you need to be careful. And you choose the worst way to follow both. You don't need to have slider start on every drum especially because you don't have jumps during this pattern (just a little movement jump). And because of this I can suggest you to sometimes merge notes and just use longer slider between two white tick to break the mono rhythm. ( Changed )
00:28:351 (6,7) - To be honest a jump would be nice here. ( Fixed )
00:28:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Here the rhythm again can be much better. I can' give you an image so I hope my instruction will be understandable. You don't need to follow it though. ( Great idea, changed~ Also, 00:30:107 - 00:30:399 I pick the first one )
```
[*]00:28:790 - 00:28:936 Short slider
[*]00:29:082 and 00:29:229 Two circle
[*]00:29:521 - 00:29:814 Slider
[*]00:30:107 - 00:30:399 You have two options here. Use two circle (which I think should be the best) or using a long slider.
```
00:31:131 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Similar pattern can be used here as I said before. ( Changed )
00:33:180 (8) - I personally think this circle is useless but if you want to keep it please use a jump. ( Removed the circle )
00:36:399 (5) - This slider feels weird because you followed a weaker vocal and ignored the stronger one at 00:36:546. I think something like this would be nice: ( Nice one, changed~ )
```
00:35:960 Empty
00:36:107 - 00:36:399 Long slider
00:36:546 - 00:36:839 Long slider with a repeat till 00:37:131
```
00:42:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - This is feels weird again. The drum becomes intense after 00:44:887 (4) but you used the same 1/2 rhythm before it as well. As I said before you can sometimes use longer slider to cover one more beat and make difference in the look. Here is two place which can be changed: ( Changed )
```
00:42:839 - 00:43:131 Long slider
00:43:278 Empty
00:43:717 - 00:44:009 Long slider
00:44:156 Empty
```
00:50:595 (5,1,2,3) - 1/2 repeat slider from 00:50:595 and a longer 1/1 one from 00:51:034. ( Changed )
01:24:692 (1,2,3) - Maybe this is a little bit hard for Platter. ( Changed )

I won't say more but if you take my suggestions as an example you can re-make your map. Currently this diff is a little boring because of the many 1/2 rhythm and after a small break 1/2s are coming again. You can make your map more interesting with changing the patterns from time to time. You don't need to map on every single line in order to get rhythm, to be honest this is the most boring way. You have a nice vocal to follow too. Please take that account too when you decide what to map at a specific part. Following music and vocal is both important. You can just ignore one because that way you can't vary your patterns. My suggestion is after this wall of text is to try to change your 1/2s into nice patterns with more long slider and small breaks.

( Thanks, I'll keep this in mind )

lordraika

00:09:180 (6) - move this a bit to left to generate a Hdash on 00:09:034 (5) -
to make it have the same feel with these two 00:07:717 (4,5) - ( Fixed )
00:24:692 (3) - Ctrl+G and i feel the rhythm better ^^ ( I made some changes at this part ;w; )
01:06:839 (1,2) - remove slider and make them 2 notes each? with quite good distance of dash ( Nice one, changed~ )
01:26:156 - i hope this will be a sharp jump to finish this part ( I pick at 01:26:595 instead )
00:37:863 - add finish ( Added )
00:38:448 - add clap and 00:38:741 (3) - change this clap into whistle
00:38:887 (4) - add whistle and 00:39:034 - clap
and so on... i think u really need some hitsound check for this... since your hitsound is seems a bit off to me XD
well... its jst different with the other...
its your call ^^ ( Done I guess .w. )

But everything looks neat...
good spacing as well ( Thanks w )

alienflybot

00:06:692 (2) - Better shorten this slider a bit and add a circle right at 00:07:131, it sounds much better ( Nice one, changed~ )
00:07:424 (3,4,5,1) - Tilt the sliders a little bit to increase movement, and if possible you can reverse 1 or 2 sliders to have another pattern ( Made a small changes at this part )
00:54:546 (3,4) - Tilt the sliders ( I'm in a blunder at this part, no changes for now )
01:08:741 (5) - This slider doesn't suit the rhythm, consider adding circle at 01:08:741 and slider at 01:08:887 to 01:09:180
( Changed )
01:19:717 (6,1,2) - Not saying that straight sliders are not good, but in my opinion, having more movement is better ( I would consider this if this is on the kiai part. No changes, sorry. )
01:26:302 - 1. Add a slider here to 01:26:595; or 2. Circles at 01:26:302 and 01:26:595 (maybe you can make the distance farther with red-fruit, just because of the rhythm ( Great idea, changed~ )

Thanks for the mod, Kurokami, lordraika and alienflybot~

Update

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ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2014-08-26T18:06:30+00:00

LordRaika wrote:
[ZiRoX's Salad]
00:24:692 (4,1,2,3) - this last one, (3) , the distance is different , far to different from the rest,
suggest to move it to x : 228 same as 00:24:985 (1) -
and 00:25:863 (4) - this can go the X with 00:24:692 (4) - or 00:25:278 (2) - if (2) then u might want to move this position 00:26:156 (1) - Fixed~
00:22:497 - missing whistle? suggest to add one ^^
00:23:082 - add whistle too, kick kick clap fits here ....
00:27:912 - add clap as well?
i assume this is missing clap, 00:43:424 - and 00:43:717 - , make it same as 00:44:302 (2) - as the start and end has both clap as well...
00:46:497 - whistle and 00:46:643 - whistle
Strongly recommended : 00:50:595 - whistle and 00:50:595 - whistle , my favorite hitsound pattern on drum
this part is a sequence >>> 00:51:765 - whistle 00:52:058 - whistle 00:52:351 - whistle
00:55:278 - missing whistle
01:00:839 - ^
01:05:960 - add NC here [Done~
01:19:570 - add clap
01:22:204 - ^
Thats all ^^b nice way of hitsounding

Fixed all hitsounds~
HitsoundCopier FTW

alienflybot wrote:
Hello, mod as requested :3
(Best #late 2014 lol)

[ZiRoX's Salad]
00:00:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Have some more movements here, consider changing the path to left for a little bit I kept this the way it is, but added more movement to 00:02:741 (1,2,3,4) - (the movement slowly builds up~)
00:17:960 (1,2,3) - The slider (2) doesn't seem fitting the rhythm well. My solution here would be: 1. 00:17:960 - Add a circle here, then 00:18:107 - add a slider here + circle at 00:18:692 / reverse-slider; or 2. Simply remove 00:18:253 (2) and add a circle at 00:18:399. Fixed
00:21:326 (1) - Tilt a little bit to the left in order to have more movements Done
00:22:936 (2) - Not necessary to have a slider here, it is okay just with a circle at 00:22:936 so that there will be a little stress Ok
01:06:399 (8) - NC here, 13 combo is pretty high Fixed with previous mod~
01:26:595 - It is better to 1. add a circle / slider here before starting the spinners, just to fit the rhythm ~~(lol again I suck at music stuff)~~ and add spinner after that note Done~

AFB pro mapper

Thanks~

ZiRoX's Salad

osu file format v13

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TitleUnicode:Soushou Innocence (TV Size)
Artist:Uchida Maaya
ArtistUnicode:Uchida Maaya
Creator:newtoniorock8
Version:ZiRoX's Salad
Source:悪魔のリドル
Tags:Akuma No Riddle Opening R.O.N yoc1e Pony Canyon Chiaki Ishikawa Saori Codama QHideaki13 ZiRoX
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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-08-28T05:14:31+00:00

modded since 26th august, if you already fixed some of my mentions here, i'm sorry

Cup

00:07:131 (4) - give more movement here example x:176
00:14:741 (1) - remove this one, after the spin at least please give 1/1 break since this is Cup diff
00:20:009 (2) - a little bit far for newbie here imo. would be better if you move to left slightly example x:320
00:23:229 (2) - the object who need has futher spacing is on 00:23:814 (4) - because the stanza. i would say move 00:23:229 (2) - x:340
00:26:156 (3) - finish because cymbal here
00:32:887 (5) - i kinda disagree with this circle since the tail of slider who has cymbal is mapped with less movement here.. i hope you can make more movement
00:46:643 (5) - try make the spacing further by move to x:360
00:58:058 (4) - x:260 for consistent spacing please
00:40:497 (1) - kinda hard to catch for newbie x:336 pls
01:13:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the music is stop here so please reduce all of spacings become "friendly" for newbie example http://puu.sh/b8x0F/bbe0bd0021.jpg
01:17:668 (3) - this is really need nice timing to catch it which it feel impossible for newbie. reduce the spacing pls
01:26:302 (4) - x:216 for better flow. and 01:26:595 (5) - x:384 for normal gap of movement here
well actually i feel this cup is kinda hard imo because the spacing of those times i mentioned on this line. the flows are too monotone with same "high" spacing here example 00:58:936 - until 01:02:741 - , 00:24:985 - until 00:37:863 - which feel boring here
Also the NC pattern is kinda bad here. i would say every stanza or every 2 stanza here

Salad

00:00:400 (1,2,3,4) - little bit weird, at least give less spacings here http://puu.sh/b8xph/676cd76fab.jpg
00:02:887 (2,3) - just suggestion but imo the flow would be better when (2) x: 72 00:03:034 (3) - x:64 here.
00:04:643 (4) - i would say reduce the spacing perhaps around x:376 since still doesn't have music here. so the same spacing as 00:03:765 (2,3) - would keep the consistency
00:11:668 (5) - try x:392? imo no dash would be better here ><
00:12:107 (1) - change finish intead whistle here because the cymbal
00:17:375 (1) - move this slightly to left so it can catched with no dash. since both music and vocal is calm so yeah. i would say x:288 but when you're follow this one, make sure 00:17:521 (2,3,4) - rearrange them ww
00:19:131 (1) - finish on head cause cymbal
00:23:814 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - perhaps you can move each other spacing become little bit closer since they are need to catch with nice timing here
00:26:156 (1) - finish on head for cymbal
00:32:448 (3,4) - make from (2) to (3) and (3) to (4) a little bit closer. imo no need dash here.
00:33:180 (5) - finish for cymbal
00:46:643 (3) - imo would be better to move the tail to x:124 to it flow would be same with 00:46:058 (1) -
00:49:570 (1) - make the spacing further here since the circle has cymbal. x:384 would be fine imo
00:56:302 - add note here since the drum sound is kinda loud
01:20:887 (1) - no need NC here and swap the NC 01:21:180 (2,1) - here so it the combo would be balance
Well the rhythm of the kiai imo kinda hard. i know this is ctb, 1/2 with small spacing is easy to catch but for me the score spread between Cup to Salad to Platter would be unbalance here. my suggestion : remove some of 1/2 rhythm here, i saw your 1/2 mostly following vocal. i won't say map vocal bad but better to map musics instead

Platter

00:01:570 (6) - imo this is overmapped on head since i don't hear any music here. perhaps move to 00:01:424 - to following vocal instead. when you follow this one, you can add note on 00:01:863 -
00:03:912 (6) - same mean as above
00:04:570 (2) - overmap, if you hear a drum around this time, imo the sound is already more than 1/4 like 1/6 or 1/8 (lazy to check), since for the calm part 1/4 or more don't fit here
00:05:082 (1) - finish at head for cymbal
00:09:765 (1) - ^
00:11:668 (2) - the slider is kinda long here that make feel uncomfortable since you're skip 00:11:814 - and 00:11:960 - , well you can use 1/1 slider with circle at 00:12:107 - or 2 sliders of 1/2 slider instead
00:13:131 (2) - give more movement for better flow here. x:176
00:13:278 (3) - also no need finish at tail the current music on that time only a drum
00:15:765 (1) - the flow is too boring because too much going to left on short time. would be better if you ctrl+G it and move to x:80
00:18:692 (2) - try HDash instead to emphasize the vocal? x:416 would work nicely here
00:21:473 (3) - the 1/1 slider here heard bad imo since you seem mapping the part with following vocal and on this time you're skip the vocal, i guess 1/2 slider repeat works better here
00:22:936 (3,4,5) - since you're following vocal mostly here you can map this way easier than this one. http://puu.sh/bbjRi/9703a02245.jpg 1/1 slider and circle would be fine here
00:24:692 (3) - kinda hard to catch (need nice timing to catch i mean), nazi but try x:408 instead?
00:25:278 (4) - x:88 instead so the tail of (4) would be stacked on (3)'s tail. the spacing become more balance imo
00:26:156 (3) - so sad no jump when it has cymbal sound here
00:26:448 (5,6) - the flow become broken when they are mapped on vertical flows like this tbh. at least do like http://puu.sh/bbkkl/7cbfce1cea.jpg or better way
00:28:351 (5,6) - that HDash too far imo. please reduce this one
00:30:107 (5) - actually i don't find the reason why normal vocal like this mapped with HDash. i would say normal spacing instead
00:31:570 (1) - x:80 instead for giving movement?
00:33:180 - why not map this time when the cymbal is appear? add note please
00:33:034 (4) - same as 00:30:107 (5) -
00:35:375 (3) - the rhythm is kinda undermapped imo. 1/1 slider and add note would be better
00:36:546 (2) - you can move slightly to rightward x:272 so the flow would be better to catch here imo. also you're mostly map vocal here 00:37:278 - why not map this one when the vocal is appear?
00:37:497 (2) - sadly but overmap here. remove it
00:37:863 (7) - finish because cymbal
00:47:375 - nazi but lower the volume here around 25%
00:49:570 (1) - finish on head please, cymbal here
00:51:034 (2) - undermapped. 1/1 slider repeat instead >_<
01:17:668 (1) - finish because cymbal
Imo the diff still can improve here. on the flow and rhythm mostly

Rain

HP 6 instead for better hp spread with platter?
00:00:692 (3) - imo the HDash here too earlier here, players need warm up first imo, try 00:00:692 (3,4) - x:280 and then 00:00:985 (1) - x:144?
00:08:595 (4) - HDash instead with move the circle further instead.. this is only pro players who can catch this one
00:13:278 (1) - a little bit hard imo. x:284 instead?
00:13:570 (3) - same as above here. hard to catch next stream. how about x:156 instead?
00:13:717 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - the flow on stream can improved a lot here imo. i guess something like http://puu.sh/bbmd7/8f199df779.jpg
00:19:131 (1) - finish on head please
00:17:521 (2,4) - imo both flow here can improved here. try (2) x:300 (4) x:20 ?
00:21:326 (1) - use HDash instead to emphasize the finish sound. x:48 here
00:23:814 (1) - HDash instead for emphasize the cymbal. x:488. for next sliders you can arrange them as well
00:26:156 (1) - move to x:68 and 00:25:863 (4) - x:216 for HDash. don't forget add finish on (1) for emphasize the cymbal
00:40:204 (4) - make jump instead here since the cymbal :<
00:33:912 (3) - this is hard to catch imo without HDash. i would say reduce x:224 instead
00:36:107 (2) - x:420 instead. hard to catch
00:51:326 (4) - HDash instead here x:376
00:58:058 (3) - the anti jump is really not fit here. the easiest way is move to x:292
01:21:619 - too noisy. 40% instead :<
01:26:595 (1) - i would say circle at 01:26:595 - with jump and start spinner on 01:26:668 - instead
the style is almost same with my taste :3

Ok done~ Good Luck :3

Last edited by Xinely 2014-08-28T13:46:32+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

StickyPicky 2014-08-28T07:26:48+00:00

Xinely wrote:
modded since 26th august, if you already fixed some of my mentions here, i'm sorry

Cup
00:07:131 (4) - give more movement here example x:176 instead at 176 I moved it a x:232
00:14:741 (1) - remove this one, after the spin at least please give 1/1 break since this is Cup diff removed
00:20:009 (2) - a little bit far for newbie here imo. would be better if you move to left slightly example x:320 moved
00:23:229 (2) - the object who need has futher spacing is on 00:23:814 (4) - because the stanza. i would say move 00:23:229 (2) - x:340 fixed
00:26:156 (3) - finish because cymbal here okie
00:32:887 (5) - i kinda disagree with this circle since the tail of slider who has cymbal is mapped with less movement here.. i hope you can make more movement fixed :3
00:46:643 (5) - try make the spacing further by move to x:360 okie
00:58:058 (4) - x:260 for consistent spacing please
00:40:497 (1) - kinda hard to catch for newbie x:336 pls oh yea fixed it
01:13:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the music is stop here so please reduce all of spacings become "friendly" for newbie example http://puu.sh/b8x0F/bbe0bd0021.jpg
01:17:668 (3) - this is really need nice timing to catch it which it feel impossible for newbie. reduce the spacing pls
01:26:302 (4) - x:216 for better flow. and 01:26:595 (5) - x:384 for normal gap of movement here
well actually i feel this cup is kinda hard imo because the spacing of those times i mentioned on this line. the flows are too monotone with same "high" spacing here example 00:58:936 - until 01:02:741 - , 00:24:985 - until 00:37:863 - which feel boring here
Also the NC pattern is kinda bad here. i would say every stanza or every 2 stanza here

Rain
HP 6 instead for better hp spread with platter? okie
00:00:692 (3) - imo the HDash here too earlier here, players need warm up first imo, try 00:00:692 (3,4) - x:280 and then 00:00:985 (1) - x:144? ^
00:08:595 (4) - HDash instead with move the circle further instead.. this is only pro players who can catch this one moved at x:188
00:13:278 (1) - a little bit hard imo. x:284 instead? ^
00:13:570 (3) - same as above here. hard to catch next stream. how about x:156 instead? ^
00:13:717 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - the flow on stream can improved a lot here imo. i guess something like http://puu.sh/bbmd7/8f199df779.jpg
00:19:131 (1) - finish on head please oh yea
00:17:521 (2,4) - imo both flow here can improved here. try (2) x:300 (4) x:20 ? moved (2) at x:216
00:21:326 (1) - use HDash instead to emphasize the finish sound. x:48 here
00:23:814 (1) - HDash instead for emphasize the cymbal. x:488. for next sliders you can arrange them as well
00:26:156 (1) - move to x:68 and 00:25:863 (4) - x:216 for HDash. don't forget add finish on (1) for emphasize the cymbal
00:40:204 (4) - make jump instead here since the cymbal :< ok ok :3
00:33:912 (3) - this is hard to catch imo without HDash. i would say reduce x:224 instead moved
00:36:107 (2) - x:420 instead. hard to catch
00:51:326 (4) - HDash instead here x:376
00:58:058 (3) - the anti jump is really not fit here. the easiest way is move to x:292
01:21:619 - too noisy. 40% instead :<
01:26:595 (1) - i would say circle at 01:26:595 - with jump and start spinner on 01:26:668 - instead moved
the style is almost same with my taste :3
~~WIP, don't kudosu first~~ okie thanks

Last edited by StickyPicky 2014-08-28T14:24:37+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

QHideaki13

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QHideaki13 2014-08-28T14:20:45+00:00

Fixed (most) of the suggestions given.

Thanks for the mod, Xinely~

Update

osu file format v13

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Artist:Uchida Maaya
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Version:Q-H's Platter
Source:悪魔のリドル
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rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

rew0825 2014-08-29T16:58:17+00:00

From my requese

[Cup]
00:37:278 (4) - x:400
01:03:326 (2) - x:256

[ZiRoX's Salad]
Nothing

[Q-H's Platter]
00:33:034 (4) - move to 00:33:180 and add hitsound finish

[Rain]
00:48:985 (1,2) - I think you should use slider straight

Good Beatmap from Salad Platter but I think Cup & Rain is a little difficult you should reduce note or move note to closer

Good luck

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2014-08-30T01:22:43+00:00

Xinely wrote:

Salad
00:00:400 (1,2,3,4) - little bit weird, at least give less spacings here http://puu.sh/b8xph/676cd76fab.jpg
00:02:887 (2,3) - just suggestion but imo the flow would be better when (2) x: 72 00:03:034 (3) - x:64 here. I prefer it the way it is now
00:04:643 (4) - i would say reduce the spacing perhaps around x:376 since still doesn't have music here. so the same spacing as 00:03:765 (2,3) - would keep the consistency
00:11:668 (5) - try x:392? imo no dash would be better here ><
00:12:107 (1) - change finish intead whistle here because the cymbal
00:17:375 (1) - move this slightly to left so it can catched with no dash. since both music and vocal is calm so yeah. i would say x:288 but when you're follow this one, make sure 00:17:521 (2,3,4) - rearrange them ww
00:19:131 (1) - finish on head cause cymbal
00:23:814 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - perhaps you can move each other spacing become little bit closer since they are need to catch with nice timing here
00:26:156 (1) - finish on head for cymbal
00:32:448 (3,4) - make from (2) to (3) and (3) to (4) a little bit closer. imo no need dash here.
00:33:180 (5) - finish for cymbal
00:46:643 (3) - imo would be better to move the tail to x:124 to it flow would be same with 00:46:058 (1) -
00:49:570 (1) - make the spacing further here since the circle has cymbal. x:384 would be fine imo
00:56:302 - add note here since the drum sound is kinda loud
01:20:887 (1) - no need NC here and swap the NC 01:21:180 (2,1) - here so it the combo would be balance
Well the rhythm of the kiai imo kinda hard. i know this is ctb, 1/2 with small spacing is easy to catch but for me the score spread between Cup to Salad to Platter would be unbalance here. my suggestion : remove some of 1/2 rhythm here, i saw your 1/2 mostly following vocal. i won't say map vocal bad but better to map musics instead

Thanks for the mod; everything (except the noted one) applied.

ZiRoX's Salad

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QHideaki13

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QHideaki13 2014-08-30T03:02:23+00:00

rew0825 wrote:
00:33:034 (4) - move to 00:33:180 and add hitsound finish ( Fixed )

Thanks for the mod, rew0825~

Update

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: R.O.N - Shoushou Innocence.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47960
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 24107,28497,84692,86156
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Soushou Innocence (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Soushou Innocence (TV Size)
Artist:Uchida Maaya
ArtistUnicode:Uchida Maaya
Creator:newtoniorock8
Version:Q-H's Platter
Source:悪魔のリドル
Tags:Akuma No Riddle Opening R.O.N yoc1e Pony Canyon Chiaki Ishikawa Saori Codama QHideaki13 ZiRoX
BeatmapID:469971
BeatmapSetID:191384

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Akuma BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"BGV.AVI"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,255,128,255

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Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,128

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Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-08-30T05:00:02+00:00

Recheck requested. o/

[Cup]

I got a miss at the second kiai's start. o.o Anyways, I'm not pointing out anything now just saying a suggestion. This is your style and its fine but it would be nice if you can make smaller distances outside of the kiai. Currently no difference between parts and I feel nothing during kiai. So if you can do this the diff will be nice.

[Salad]

00:00:400 (1,2,3,4) - This is maybe just personal taste but a little curve can look nice here.
00:01:424 (1,2) - Remove (2) and make (1) longer.
00:31:278 (3) - Remove this have kinda the same pattern as 00:33:473 (1,2).
00:34:790 (1,2) - Maybe 1/1 slider sounds better here. Sliderend on strong drum is too weird so its better if you just follow the vocal.
00:48:985 (2) - Turn this slider's tail down to make it less edged.
00:51:034 (2,3,4) - 1/2 slider+circle? As you did it at 00:55:717 (2,3).
01:03:912 (2,3) - A small jump would be nice here.
01:06:253 (3,4) - Jump
01:12:692 (8,1) - ^
01:17:521 (6,1) - ^
01:24:692 (2,1,2) - Make the distance between these a bit bigger for larger movement. You can also add a little jump if you want.
01:26:595 (5,1) - I think this would be better as a long slider. The drum sound at (5) is still goes on during the spinner.

I'm not saying more since this is your style so everything here is just suggestion. But I can say this diff is much better now. Nice work. :3

[Platter]

00:24:107 (1,2,3) - The jump between (2) is maybe too high after the HDash. Its possible to catch it but the chance for a miss is also high.

I personally want to see more HDash at least during the kiai to make difference between the parts. Maybe your style is to not use them same as ZHSteven. Feel free to ignore it if this is the case.

[Rain]

00:08:741 (5) - Move this a little bit back to left.
00:15:326 (1,2,3,4) - A little bit higher movement here would be nice to match with the vocal.
01:02:302 - Feels a bit empty since there is a vocal. This can be solved multiple ways such as make 01:02:009 (5) last longer but my suggestion is to divide (5) into 2 circle and add one more to here. This way you can create a triangle pattern for example.
01:06:839 (3,1) - HDash here too to make it consistent with the rest. You already used HDash at 01:05:960 (1,2), 01:07:424 (3,4).

Thats all.

[Overdose]

HP7 to raise the star rating above Rain's? Oh wait, that is still not enough. nvm

00:44:595 (1) - Why is this NC?
00:49:278 (1) - ^
00:55:863 (11,1) - Maybe this jump is a bit high after HDash. Move a few grid left.
01:11:521 (5,1) - I wonder why is this not a HDash. o.o

Some of your NC is really useless. Adding NC to every note in CtB makes no difference although if you can say a good reason why you want to keep them then you can keep them. :3 Aside from this the diff is really nice.
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Seriously, call a BAT already. Only the Salad needs some help but they can do the rest. Everything else is perfect for ranking. I need to give you a star~ Good luck. o/

QHideaki13

Global Moderator

455 posts

Joined March 2011

QHideaki13 2014-08-30T05:28:13+00:00

Kurokami wrote:

00:24:107 (1,2,3) - The jump between (2) is maybe too high after the HDash. Its possible to catch it but the chance for a miss is also high. ( Fixed )

I personally want to see more HDash at least during the kiai to make difference between the parts. Maybe your style is to not use them same as ZHSteven. Feel free to ignore it if this is the case.

Thanks for the recheck, Kurokami~

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Title:Soushou Innocence (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Soushou Innocence (TV Size)
Artist:Uchida Maaya
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Creator:newtoniorock8
Version:Q-H's Platter
Source:悪魔のリドル
Tags:Akuma No Riddle Opening R.O.N yoc1e Pony Canyon Chiaki Ishikawa Saori Codama QHideaki13 ZiRoX
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StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

StickyPicky 2014-08-30T12:02:05+00:00

rew0825 wrote:
Hi From my requese

[Cup]
00:37:278 (4) - x:400 okie
01:03:326 (2) - x:256 ^

[Rain]
00:48:985 (1,2) - I think you should use slider straight hmm nope

Good Beatmap from Salad Platter but I think Cup & Rain is a little difficult you should reduce note or move note to closer

Good luck

thanks!

Kurokami wrote:
Recheck requested. o/

[Cup]

I got a miss at the second kiai's start. o.o Anyways, I'm not pointing out anything now just saying a suggestion. This is your style and its fine but it would be nice if you can make smaller distances outside of the kiai. Currently no difference between parts and I feel nothing during kiai. So if you can do this the diff will be nice. fixed it :3 (i think)
[Rain]

00:08:741 (5) - Move this a little bit back to left.
00:15:326 (1,2,3,4) - A little bit higher movement here would be nice to match with the vocal.
01:02:302 - Feels a bit empty since there is a vocal. This can be solved multiple ways such as make 01:02:009 (5) last longer but my suggestion is to divide (5) into 2 circle and add one more to here. This way you can create a triangle pattern for example.
01:06:839 (3,1) - HDash here too to make it consistent with the rest. You already used HDash at 01:05:960 (1,2), 01:07:424 (3,4). fixed all

Thats all.

[Overdose] I removed this diff. for Amir's sake.

HP7 to raise the star rating above Rain's? Oh wait, that is still not enough. nvm

00:44:595 (1) - Why is this NC?
00:49:278 (1) - ^
00:55:863 (11,1) - Maybe this jump is a bit high after HDash. Move a few grid left.
01:11:521 (5,1) - I wonder why is this not a HDash. o.o

Some of your NC is really useless. Adding NC to every note in CtB makes no difference although if you can say a good reason why you want to keep them then you can keep them. :3 Aside from this the diff is really nice.
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Seriously, call a BAT already. Only the Salad needs some help but they can do the rest. Everything else is perfect for ranking. I need to give you a star~ Good luck. o/

Thank you very much

Congrats for being in BAT!

Last edited by StickyPicky 2014-08-30T15:11:13+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Takuneru

97 posts

Joined November 2011

Takuneru 2014-08-30T14:40:15+00:00

Hello !
As requested I'm finally modding this !

I hope my mod will be of help to you, and hopefully it'll get ranked

. Cool music.

[General]
Don't forget to add the video on the cup and salad ! It's set on the platter and rain, but not on these.

[Cup]
Nice cup, I like it. The sliders are great for beginners to move accurately and not 'barely'. And the patterns seems cool, intuitive !
00:53:375 (5) - I feel this one is a bit too far considering you have a slider next, the movement would be a bit awkward for a beginner I guess. I'd advise making it either x 356 or still a bit farther with x 376.
01:18:399 (5) - A bit too far again, we have to fully run there which is a bit sudden I believe. I believe making it a bit less farther would be better !
01:26:302 (4) - for beginner's sake, maybe you can move it a little bit more to the right :p. so there is only a slight movement to the left then to the right. (x 228 maybe? seems slightly better, but I guess that's picky of me).

[ZiRoX's Salad]
A really really fun one. Fitting the music really well, as expected of you ! I believe I don't have much to say...
00:26:741 (3) - I'd move this to 1.59 x because 00:27:912 (3) - is at 1.58x
00:28:204 (4) - according to this modification, I'd move it like this : http://puu.sh/be3lf/1618eb369d.jpg. But that add a bit more difficulty, maybe that would be too much? would emphasize more though, and the overall difficulty is alright pretty tight, which I think is good given the music itself.
01:26:595 (6) - kind of stupid but I believe it'd be better on x 148 :3

[Q-H's Platter]
Wow, a tight platter ~ reminds me of the one I did on Zoetrope, dunno why haha.
Well then.
00:03:326 (5) - seems a bit too far away for me. I calculated the distance with another pattern on the same sound and I think x 336 is perfect
00:37:570 (2) - I think a stream would be better in this case, a stream going to the left.
00:57:765 (3,4,5) - I believe those are too far
01:22:351 (1) - I'd make it at x 400, seems better to catch.
Aside from that... I don't think I can say much more. It's fun !

[Rain]
I can't play it well because I just returned from my holidays and I have to get used to my PC again... (keyboard, screen...) but, was fun again. Those sliders are awesome !
00:00:546 (2) - Okay I'm being really nazi, but for the same spacing as 4, put it at x 452 D:. That makes it slightly smoother.
00:58:058 (3) - Itb bugs me why it's on the right as well ^^'. Though I can kind of understand why, it seems a bit off for me to play... maybe put it at x 68, it'll create an h-dash and it seems cool to play.

[Overall]
I can't say much more ! I hope it'll help you though.

StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

StickyPicky 2014-08-30T15:17:47+00:00

Takuneru wrote:
Hello !
As requested I'm finally modding this !
I hope my mod will be of help to you, and hopefully it'll get ranked . Cool music.

[General]
Don't forget to add the video on the cup and salad ! It's set on the platter and rain, but not on these. fixed o.O ~

[Cup]
Nice cup, I like it. The sliders are great for beginners to move accurately and not 'barely'. And the patterns seems cool, intuitive !
00:53:375 (5) - I feel this one is a bit too far considering you have a slider next, the movement would be a bit awkward for a beginner I guess. I'd advise making it either x 356 or still a bit farther with x 376. moved at 356
01:18:399 (5) - A bit too far again, we have to fully run there which is a bit sudden I believe. I believe making it a bit less farther would be better ! feels ok for me, because it is in kiai time :3 no change
01:26:302 (4) - for beginner's sake, maybe you can move it a little bit more to the right :p. so there is only a slight movement to the left then to the right. (x 228 maybe? seems slightly better, but I guess that's picky of me). this is pretty ok, nothing to change here

[Rain]
I can't play it well because I just returned from my holidays and I have to get used to my PC again... (keyboard, screen...) but, was fun again. Those sliders are awesome !
00:00:546 (2) - Okay I'm being really nazi, but for the same spacing as 4, put it at x 452 D:. That makes it slightly smoother. fixed
00:58:058 (3) - Itb bugs me why it's on the right as well ^^'. Though I can kind of understand why, it seems a bit off for me to play... maybe put it at x 68, it'll create an h-dash and it seems cool to play. I put it there to have a freeze/pause thingy, my mapping style, sorry for that, so no change here >.<

[Overall]
I can't say much more ! I hope it'll help you though.

Thanks!

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2014-08-30T15:38:03+00:00

Thanks Kurokami and Takuneru. Everything applied for both mods; only difference is regarding last note/spinner; which I modified to make it similar to other diffs.

ZiRoX's Salad

osu file format v13

[General]
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PreviewTime: 47521
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
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WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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BeatDivisor: 4
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TitleUnicode:Soushou Innocence (TV Size)
Artist:Uchida Maaya
ArtistUnicode:Uchida Maaya
Creator:newtoniorock8
Version:ZiRoX's Salad
Source:悪魔のリドル
Tags:Akuma No Riddle Opening R.O.N yoc1e Pony Canyon Chiaki Ishikawa Saori Codama QHideaki13 ZiRoX
BeatmapID:472795
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:6.3
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QHideaki13

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QHideaki13 2014-08-30T15:56:47+00:00

Takuneru

Wow, a tight platter ~ reminds me of the one I did on Zoetrope, dunno why haha.
Well then.

00:03:326 (5) - seems a bit too far away for me. I calculated the distance with another pattern on the same sound and I think x 336 is perfect
( Nice one, fixed~ )
00:37:570 (2) - I think a stream would be better in this case, a stream going to the left.
( There was originally a stream at this part, but the spacing somehow makes the pattern a bit hard too hard although it is doable. So, I prefer to stay at the current state, sorry. ;w; )
00:57:765 (3,4,5) - I believe those are too far ( Fixed 00:57:765 (3) - with Ctrl+H )
01:22:351 (1) - I'd make it at x 400, seems better to catch. ( Fixed )
Aside from that... I don't think I can say much more. It's fun ! ( Thanks~ )

( Remind me to mod your Zoetrope soon w )

Thanks for the mod, Takuneru~

Update

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Takuneru

97 posts

Joined November 2011

Takuneru 2014-08-31T12:08:00+00:00

Happy to have been of help to you guys ^^
Also, I forgot to shoot you a star ! though I know it'll go for ranked soon (well, I hope so

) let me show you my support haha :3

QHideaki13 wrote:
( Remind me to mod your Zoetrope soon w )

Okay ^^. I'll check my guests and Kyu will let it go to pending soon I believe

. Thank you =w=

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-08-31T23:53:41+00:00

Call me after a few more mod. I will recheck it and possible bubble it afterward.

PatZar

3,079 posts

Joined March 2013

PatZar 2014-09-02T12:26:36+00:00

hi!
moemoehue requested

[Rain]
00:58:058 (3) - 384
00:58:351 (4) - ctrl + g 102
01:03:912 (2) - ctrl+ g | it's seems good imo
01:24:253 (1) - 284

[Q-H's platter]
00:28:790 (1) - ctrl + g
00:51:034 - http://puu.sh/bifdT/e10fe1208d.png
2: x16
3: x256

[Zirox's salad]
01:17:668 (1) - delete , and put 1 circle 01:17:668 (1) - x256
solid diff!

[cup]
wow so hard
00:18:107 (2) - ctrl+ g
00:40:497 (1) - 312
01:18:107 (4) - 276 or 256

goodluck~!

QHideaki13

Global Moderator

455 posts

Joined March 2011

QHideaki13 2014-09-02T12:44:47+00:00

Genocide

00:28:790 (1) - ctrl + g ( Fixed )
00:51:034 - http://puu.sh/bifdT/e10fe1208d.png
2: x16
3: x256
( I understand your intention to make this part a bit hard (or maybe following the vocal), but I prefer to keep the pattern at the current state because there is no beat at 00:51:180 - as you suggested )

Thanks for the mod, Genocide~

Update

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: R.O.N - Shoushou Innocence.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47960
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 84692,86156
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
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[Metadata]
Title:Soushou Innocence (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Soushou Innocence (TV Size)
Artist:Uchida Maaya
ArtistUnicode:Uchida Maaya
Creator:newtoniorock8
Version:Q-H's Platter
Source:悪魔のリドル
Tags:Akuma No Riddle Opening R.O.N yoc1e Pony Canyon Chiaki Ishikawa Saori Codama QHideaki13 ZiRoX
BeatmapID:469971
BeatmapSetID:191384

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StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

StickyPicky 2014-09-02T14:47:41+00:00

Genocide wrote:
hi! Atlast!
moemoehue requested

[Rain]
00:58:058 (3) - 384 nuu
00:58:351 (4) - ctrl + g 102
01:03:912 (2) - ctrl+ g | it's seems good imo okie
01:24:253 (1) - 284 ^

[cup]
wow so hard
00:18:107 (2) - ctrl+ g okie
00:40:497 (1) - 312 fixed
01:18:107 (4) - 276 or 256 ^

[Zirox's salad]
01:17:668 (1) - delete , and put 1 circle 01:17:668 (1) - x256 moved at 204
solid diff!
goodluck~!

Thanks!

SUBSTAC9

288 posts

Joined May 2009

SUBSTAC9 2014-09-03T04:38:23+00:00

hum..
mod by your request

General

normal-sliderside and soft-sliderside isn't use in ctb mapset please remove them

Cup
Overall is nice for beginner is can playable and try to be challenge in this difficult

00:11:668 (3) - great flowing but you should reduce a little distance for not a jump in cup
01:05:375 (1) - I think this note should be a right side for make a spin movement so just move to x:472
01:13:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this point need more peek in this play I sure you can make its better
01:22:351 (2,3,4) - beginner's player will

ZiRoX's Salad
look overall has nice pattern are ok and player can be fun to play this game huhu

00:42:253 (6) - I'm serious with this spacing please replace (5) or (6) for flowing
00:46:497 (2) - doesn't use in rhythm please remove it
00:53:375 (2) - stack from 00:52:790 (4) - head
01:12:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I recommend you to use more spacing from (4) and (5) to more harder in salad

Q-H's Platter
ok Q-H let's go!

00:08:009 (3,4) - reduce distance from (2),(3) and make to HDash in (3),(4) is better from music
00:42:399 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - this point I need you make only note to make jumping but It's ok if you not change
01:03:619 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern need more style I think It's a simple flow as like a previous platter please consider about jumping Dash or any movement.
01:21:765 (3,4) - make HDash between this note

Rain

00:00:400 (1,2) - ctrl+G?
00:00:692 (3,4) - ^
00:26:156 (1,2,3,4) - need them to make HDash is proper
00:57:180 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - recommend you to make from this >http://puu.sh/bjhk9/8087798496.jpg
01:12:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - oh man, please make this pattern to be more challeng in rain diff style like this >>http://puu.sh/bjhGP/f780a31085.jpg

sorry my fast reply
and good luck with your mapset NTR

QHideaki13

Global Moderator

455 posts

Joined March 2011

QHideaki13 2014-09-03T05:10:11+00:00

SUBSTAC9

ok Q-H let's go! ( Let's do this! )

00:08:009 (3,4) - reduce distance from (2),(3) and make to HDash in (3),(4) is better from music
( Fixed, together with the previous and the next pattern respectively )
00:42:399 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - this point I need you make only note to make jumping but It's ok if you not change
( Why not? I can finally have some consistent jump at this part, it's a great idea! )
01:03:619 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern need more style I think It's a simple flow as like a previous platter please consider about jumping Dash or any movement. ( Fixed at one part, hope it is challenging enough )
01:21:765 (3,4) - make HDash between this note ( Fixed )

Thanks for the mod, SUBSTAC9~

Update

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StackLeniency: 0.7
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TitleUnicode:Soushou Innocence (TV Size)
Artist:Uchida Maaya
ArtistUnicode:Uchida Maaya
Creator:newtoniorock8
Version:Q-H's Platter
Source:悪魔のリドル
Tags:Akuma No Riddle Opening R.O.N yoc1e Pony Canyon Chiaki Ishikawa Saori Codama QHideaki13 ZiRoX
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StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

StickyPicky 2014-09-03T05:22:40+00:00

SUBSTAC9 wrote:
hum..
mod by your request

General
normal-sliderside and soft-sliderside isn't use in ctb mapset please remove them removed
Cup
Overall is nice for beginner is can playable and try to be challenge in this difficult
00:11:668 (3) - great flowing but you should reduce a little distance for not a jump in cup fixed
01:05:375 (1) - I think this note should be a right side for make a spin movement so just move to x:472 ^
01:13:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this point need more peek in this play I sure you can make its better got it
01:22:351 (2,3,4) - beginner's player will
Rain
00:00:400 (1,2) - ctrl+G? nope
00:00:692 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:26:156 (1,2,3,4) - need them to make HDash is proper oh i see, added some hdash
00:57:180 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - recommend you to make from this >http://puu.sh/bjhk9/8087798496.jpg nope. :/
01:12:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - oh man, please make this pattern to be more challeng in rain diff style like this >>http://puu.sh/bjhGP/f780a31085.jpg oh lol the jump, but its good, applied it
sorry my fast reply
and good luck with your mapset NTR

Thank you very much! :33

Keleron

103 posts

Joined September 2012

Keleron 2014-09-03T20:01:37+00:00

Mod from a unknown location
✔Cup

⬒ZiRoX's Salad
Is posible get a fc without dash
00:28:204 (4) - I think this note must be more distanced or closer . Because its looks like no necessary dash
01:26:302 (5) - You could distance this note for make the unique dash
⬒Q-H's Platter
You way to make the sounds are completly diferent to the others , i think you aren't continuous with the sounds
00:58:936 (5,6) - This pairs of sliders you could make like that http://puu.sh/bk1ZD/dc8c711500.jpg
01:19:717 (6,1,2) - Thats can be improved if you curve a little this sliders
⬒Rain
00:08:595 (4) - +Distance
00:21:326 (1,2,3) - More extended from right to left ( Its more hard and looks better )
00:45:912 (3) - x=400 aprox. +Diff
00:46:717 (6) - x=300 aprox +Diff ( both changes was because looks awesome )
01:24:985 (6,2,4) - In relation with the audio , this notes deserve to be further than the previous note

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2014-09-03T20:37:50+00:00

SUBSTAC9 wrote:
ZiRoX's Salad
look overall has nice pattern are ok and player can be fun to play this game huhu
00:42:253 (6) - I'm serious with this spacing please replace (5) or (6) for flowing
00:46:497 (2) - doesn't use in rhythm please remove it
00:53:375 (2) - stack from 00:52:790 (4) - head
01:12:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I recommend you to use more spacing from (4) and (5) to more harder in salad

Fixed everything~

Keleron wrote:
⬒ZiRoX's Salad
Is posible get a fc without dash
00:28:204 (4) - I think this note must be more distanced or closer . Because its looks like no necessary dash Tried to fix it
01:26:302 (5) - You could distance this note for make the unique dash I don't think it fits. If I had a note on 01:26:595 - instead of the spinner I may think of making a jump there. I'm keeping the spinner for consistency with other diffs, unless someone points out something like this again

Thanks for the mods~

ZiRoX's Salad

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TitleUnicode:Soushou Innocence (TV Size)
Artist:Uchida Maaya
ArtistUnicode:Uchida Maaya
Creator:newtoniorock8
Version:ZiRoX's Salad
Source:悪魔のリドル
Tags:Akuma No Riddle Opening R.O.N yoc1e Pony Canyon Chiaki Ishikawa Saori Codama QHideaki13 ZiRoX
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Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Vhy 2014-09-03T21:13:58+00:00

hello ~
mod from my queue.

Notes ~
Black : minor / normal suggestion, includes coordinates mod for the sake of movement
Italic : personal suggestion that i would really love to see this fixed. it may break your mapping style
Blue : highly suggestion / questionable thing. recommended to fix this
Red : unrankable thing / strongly suggestion. you have to fix this, still you can igrone this unless you have a good reason

[General]
the map is start a bit too early. please add audioleadin by 1000 or 1500. just for preparation
else is fine.

[Cup]
00:11:814 - add note here for consistency with 00:07:131 (4). the song is very similar and it deserve a beat here
00:51:619 - it would be nice to listen if you add a note here
00:57:473 (3,4,5) - the vocal here is really strong so i suggest to divide them all to a circle and make a zigzag pattern for a better play
00:58:351 (5) - change the whistle to a finish on tail? as the vocal is still strong here
00:58:936 (1) - ^ vice versa on head

as i though from early play, this cup is a bit too easy. but overall is nice

[ZiRoX's Salad]
00:03:326 (1,2,3) - too less spacing here i think. since here is a constant 1/2 slider it would be better if you increase their spacing more. and also, maybe ctrl+g each all of them to make a higher distance between 00:04:204 (3,4) for a better flow
00:24:107 (2,4) - swap their position of (x) axis to make the distance opposite. i mean there the spacing should be increased on each note periodically
00:36:107 (1) - extend this slider to a 1/1 length due the vocal at 00:36:399
01:06:985 (6) - add NC here to prevent the ryuuta from getting too much stack
01:08:302 (1) - move this farther to the left. a Dash would be nice to set here. move to x:56 or around it
01:12:107 (6) - add NC same as 01:06:985 (6)
01:12:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - here you placed a note on every white tick but the distance is really a little. add more distance pls, doubled the distance if needed
01:20:887 (4,1,2) - and this needs more spacing

in my opinion the degree of this salad is almost like a cup difficulty. i can FC this with a little "shift" usage. especially the kiai. in overall, kiai should be harder and more challenging but here you used too much 1/2 rhythm with a small spacing.

[Q-H's Platter]
00:01:863 (7) - move to x:488 to create a Dash
00:02:887 (2,3,4) - x:160,240,160 for an easy antiflow
00:08:009 (3) - why you set HDash here?
00:25:278 (4) - i guess ctrl+h this fit the vocal better

[Rain]
00:00:400 (1,2,3,4) - as warmup. i prefer to convert them to a 1/2 straight up slider with a same spacing to 00:00:985 (1). it should be something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1998411
00:44:887 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - this pattern is not a rain-friendly i think. well idk either but i prefer to change all of them to a constant 1/2 slider
00:46:936 (7) - flows better if you change this into a c-shape slider with a 2x SV
00:52:497 (4) - if you read the issue below, at least reduce this spacing till HDash dissappear just a preparation to make it easier to FC the issue below
00:53:521 (4) - really hard to catch this note. even i can catch this note, i can't catch the next note instead. actually i can't FC the pattern at 00:53:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
01:26:302 (7) - ctrl+g this maybe as the end of the song

dat spread

good luck c:

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-09-03T21:16:46+00:00

That's what I wanted to see. Apply the last mod and I will check this again. Also ZiRoX, you will start to hate me maybe. :3

QHideaki13

Global Moderator

455 posts

Joined March 2011

QHideaki13 2014-09-03T21:51:21+00:00

Keleron

You way to make the sounds are completly diferent to the others , i think you aren't continuous with the sounds

00:58:936 (5,6) - This pairs of sliders you could make like that http://puu.sh/bk1ZD/dc8c711500.jpg
( Made some changes at this part, I'm not into curvy sliders for some personal reason, my apologies )
01:19:717 (6,1,2) - Thats can be improved if you curve a little this sliders ( No changes, sorry ;w; )

Vhy

00:01:863 (7) - move to x:488 to create a Dash ( Fixed )
00:02:887 (2,3,4) - x:160,240,160 for an easy antiflow
( Fixed with one part at x:256, and the other two at x:160 as suggested )
00:08:009 (3) - why you set HDash here? ( Well... Since you point this out, I make a hyperdash here as it fits with the feedback from the music )
00:25:278 (4) - i guess ctrl+h this fit the vocal better ( Fixed )

Thanks for the mod, Keleron and Vhy~

Update

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: R.O.N - Shoushou Innocence.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 47521
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Soushou Innocence (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Soushou Innocence (TV Size)
Artist:Uchida Maaya
ArtistUnicode:Uchida Maaya
Creator:newtoniorock8
Version:Q-H's Platter
Source:悪魔のリドル
Tags:Akuma No Riddle Opening R.O.N yoc1e Pony Canyon Chiaki Ishikawa Saori Codama QHideaki13 ZiRoX
BeatmapID:469971
BeatmapSetID:191384

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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Video,0,"BGV.AVI"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

StickyPicky 2014-09-03T22:20:33+00:00

Keleron wrote:
Mod from a unknown location

⬒Rain
00:08:595 (4) - +Distance okie
00:21:326 (1,2,3) - More extended from right to left ( Its more hard and looks better ) hmm nope, don't like to spam some hdash here
00:45:912 (3) - x=400 aprox. +Diff cool, moved at 400
00:46:717 (6) - x=300 aprox +Diff ( both changes was because looks awesome ) hue hue xD moved at 300 then fixed the slider (7)
01:24:985 (6,2,4) - In relation with the audio , this notes deserve to be further than the previous note fixed all the pattern from 01:22:351 (1) - to 01:26:302 (7) -

Thank you! nice mod, helped me with some of the pattern/flow

Vhy wrote:
hello ~
mod from my queue.

Notes ~
Black : minor / normal suggestion, includes coordinates mod for the sake of movement
Italic : personal suggestion that i would really love to see this fixed. it may break your mapping style
Blue : highly suggestion / questionable thing. recommended to fix this
Red : unrankable thing / strongly suggestion. you have to fix this, still you can igrone this unless you have a good reason

[General]
the map is start a bit too early. please add audioleadin by 1000 or 1500. just for preparation oh yea, used 1500
else is fine.

[Cup]
00:11:814 - add note here for consistency with 00:07:131 (4). the song is very similar and it deserve a beat here change (3) to a slider
00:51:619 - it would be nice to listen if you add a note here okie
00:57:473 (3,4,5) - the vocal here is really strong so i suggest to divide them all to a circle and make a zigzag pattern for a better play didn't change it to single notes, just fixed the pattern
00:58:351 (5) - change the whistle to a finish on tail? as the vocal is still strong here nope
00:58:936 (1) - ^ vice versa on head ^

as i though from early play, this cup is a bit too easy. but overall is nice lol, i wonder why xD

[Rain]
00:00:400 (1,2,3,4) - as warmup. i prefer to convert them to a 1/2 straight up slider with a same spacing to 00:00:985 (1). it should be something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1998411 okie
00:44:887 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - this pattern is not a rain-friendly i think. well idk either but i prefer to change all of them to a constant 1/2 slider hmm.. won't change it for now, pretty easy to catch by holding shift then by pressing left-right alternately
00:46:936 (7) - flows better if you change this into a c-shape slider with a 2x SV hue ~ fixed it on keleron's mod >.<
00:52:497 (4) - if you read the issue below, at least reduce this spacing till HDash dissappear just a preparation to make it easier to FC the issue below
00:53:521 (4) - really hard to catch this note. even i can catch this note, i can't catch the next note instead. actually i can't FC the pattern at 00:53:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6) reduced distance
01:26:302 (7) - ctrl+g this maybe as the end of the song nope

dat spread
good luck c:

thank you!

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2014-09-04T02:15:01+00:00

Vhy wrote:
[ZiRoX's Salad]
00:03:326 (1,2,3) - too less spacing here i think. since here is a constant 1/2 slider it would be better if you increase their spacing more. and also, maybe ctrl+g each all of them to make a higher distance between 00:04:204 (3,4) for a better flow
00:24:107 (2,4) - swap their position of (x) axis to make the distance opposite. i mean there the spacing should be increased on each note periodically
00:36:107 (1) - extend this slider to a 1/1 length due the vocal at 00:36:399
01:06:985 (6) - add NC here to prevent the ryuuta from getting too much stack
01:08:302 (1) - move this farther to the left. a Dash would be nice to set here. move to x:56 or around it
01:12:107 (6) - add NC same as 01:06:985 (6)
01:12:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - here you placed a note on every white tick but the distance is really a little. add more distance pls, doubled the distance if needed
01:20:887 (4,1,2) - and this needs more spacing

Thanks, everything applied. I can't hate my diff any more

(Shitty) ZiRoX's Salad

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 47521
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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TitleUnicode:Soushou Innocence (TV Size)
Artist:Uchida Maaya
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Creator:newtoniorock8
Version:ZiRoX's Salad
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Sey

1,406 posts

Joined October 2010

Sey 2014-09-04T14:35:06+00:00

Lemme finish this last very short mod quickly.

We already had a chat about the Cup and Rain ingame, so I will only check the other 2 diffs now.

Savelog

14:56 Sey: Hi. If you don't mind I would like to do an IRC mod with your because there is not much to point out in these CTB difficulties anymore.
14:57 newtoniorock8: yay okie ~
14:58 Sey: Just for the difficulties you owe. For all the GDs I will make a separate mod in the Forums.
14:59 newtoniorock8: alright :3
15:00 Sey: The Cup is very decent, I barely can find anything here, looks perfect to me. But a few things I wanna suggest here at least.
15:02 Sey: 00:23:814 (4,5,1) - This here plays really boring, even though it is a cup you can at least create a bit more of movement here, for example: 
15:03 Sey: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2000028
15:03 Sey: As you see I made it slightly a bit more lopsided, this would be an option
15:04 Sey: The same counts for this section: 00:38:156 (1,2,3,4) - 
15:06 newtoniorock8: used this one http://puu.sh/bl6kO/ba035ff06c.jpg
15:07 Sey: Yeah that looks fine, did you use it for both sections?
15:07 Sey: And especially is it still FCable without any Dash?
15:07 newtoniorock8: yep
15:08 Sey: Ok one last suggestion for the cup
15:10 Sey: (Wait a moment)
15:11 Sey: 01:03:912 (4,1,2,3) - These 4 notes have all the same distance. Move (2) 3-4 grids to the left and (3) 3-4 grids to the right to create a slight distance increase between these notes.
15:11 Sey: By now maybe it feels a bit plain to play.
15:12 Sey: The same counts again for the section at: 01:09:326 (2,3,4,5) - 
15:13 Sey: 01:15:034 (1) - Also this spinner deserves a hitsound at its end, a clap suits very well imo.
15:14 Sey: Well, in the Rain you put a Whistle there, so it is up to you. Would be great to keep the hitsounds consistent between Rain and Cup anyway.
15:15 Sey: Lemme know when you applied everything
15:15 newtoniorock8: still fixing it >.<
15:16 Sey: Take your time :3
15:17 newtoniorock8: for 01:03:912 (4,1,2,3) - what i do is this one: http://puu.sh/bl7Ae/c119068b07.jpg , i might done wrong here .. check it again pls
15:17 Sey: ugh no, that looks too tricky, let me check it out.
15:19 Sey: What I mean is a pattern like this: http://puu.sh/bl807/be2cda4c2f.jpg
15:20 Sey: (4) is the first note here, then 1-2-3
15:21 Sey: left right left right movement with increasing distances. Just not to have constant distances 4 consecutive times.
15:24 newtoniorock8: done
15:24 newtoniorock8: 01:16:643 added whistle and clap
15:25 Sey: Ok good
15:25 Sey: Let's head over to Rain, the Cup is decent
15:25 newtoniorock8: i hope so >.<
15:27 Sey: Cups are easy, people can't do many mistakes there.
15:27 newtoniorock8: now they can HRHDDTFL it\
15:27 Sey: Well yeah, everyone can lol
15:28 newtoniorock8: XD
15:28 Sey: 00:09:473 (2,3) - Potential part for a HDash in your Rain
15:28 Sey: Or at least a dashier effect than it is now.
15:30 newtoniorock8: like this? http://puu.sh/bl8S8/a93379b889.jpg
15:30 Sey: Well, does it play good for you?
15:30 Sey: I am not the mapper, you have to like it especially
15:30 newtoniorock8: yep
15:30 Sey: Then you can keep it 
15:30 newtoniorock8: lol okie
15:31 Sey: 00:38:156 (1,2,3,4) - here you had two HDashes which is fine
15:31 Sey: But here: 00:39:326 (1,2,3,4) - you only have 1 HDash
15:32 Sey: Try to keep those sections consistent I guess
15:33 Sey: 00:58:058 (3) - x: 312 has a better flow here to avoid the stacks you have here. Having 1/1 break here without any movement feels lame
15:35 Sey: 01:26:595 (1) - whistle 
15:36 newtoniorock8: 00:58:058 (3) - :( i don't know why people dont like to have break thingy here
15:37 Sey: No no, the break is okay
15:37 Sey: But I think moving (3) in the center of (2) and (4) is just better because you just stand there, doing nothing... But really, this is only a suggestion
15:37 Sey: You don't necessarily need to fix this if you don't want to..
15:39 newtoniorock8: okie
15:39 newtoniorock8: done
15:39 Sey: Okie I am done with this, too. Nice Rain.

[ZiRoX's Salad]

Erase one of these, both inherited sections have the same settings.
00:52:204 (2) - Add a clap at the slider start.
00:56:302 (1) - Clap
01:03:619 (1,2,3,4) - Slightly decrease distance here, kinda rough movement imo.
01:26:302 (5,6) - Reduce it just a bit, please. The density is quite low here and this movement is kinda rough ;_;
Nothing really to say here, the Salad is decent.

[Q-H's Platter]

Erase one of these, both inherited sections have the same settings.
00:19:863 (1,2) - Whoa kinda surprising HDash here, I really didn't expect it here, the vocals are too calm for that. Wipe it out, please.
00:47:521 (1) - I would like to see no spinner here, just a short break because it is done like this in all the other difficulties, too. Also I think these vocals really do not suit a spinner.
00:50:741 - Add a clap on the reverse arrow here.
00:51:326 - ^

Welp, I can't find any more issues here. This was one of my shortest mods ever but to me the mapset really feels ready. ~~Go Go, Kuro. I am waiting for your return.~~

QHideaki13

Global Moderator

455 posts

Joined March 2011

QHideaki13 2014-09-04T15:33:47+00:00

Sey

Erase one of these, both inherited sections have the same settings. ( Removed at 00:49:131 - )
00:19:863 (1,2) - Whoa kinda surprising HDash here, I really didn't expect it here, the vocals are too calm for that. Wipe it out, please. ( Fixed )
00:47:521 (1) - I would like to see no spinner here, just a short break because it is done like this in all the other difficulties, too. Also I think these vocals really do not suit a spinner. ( Removed )
00:50:741 - Add a clap on the reverse arrow here. ( Added )
00:51:326 - ^ ( Added )

Thanks for the mod, Sey~

Update

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Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-09-04T21:21:50+00:00

I'm here Sey. I just waited for everyone to finish applying mods. Re-check comming. o/

StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

StickyPicky 2014-09-04T21:30:10+00:00

Sey wrote:
Lemme finish this last very short mod quickly.

Gonna update ZiRoX diff since this is just a small change that need to take care of

[ZiRoX's Salad]

Erase one of these, both inherited sections have the same settings. removed inherited point at 00:49:131
00:52:204 (2) - Add a clap at the slider start. added
00:56:302 (1) - Clap ^
01:03:619 (1,2,3,4) - Slightly decrease distance here, kinda rough movement imo. pretty ok for me, i can catch it without a dash, but I fixed the distance
01:26:302 (5,6) - Reduce it just a bit, please. The density is quite low here and this movement is kinda rough ;_; fixed, moved at x:360
Nothing really to say here, the Salad is decent.

Thanks ~

Kurokami

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4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-09-06T06:09:30+00:00

Its Recheck Time!

[Cup]

00:21:180 (4,1) - I personally find it a but useless to have them divided. Just use one longer slider. The drum at 00:21:180 is loud enough to cover the second vocal part and this is more than enough on Cup.
00:22:643 (3,1) - These two is a bit misplaced. This is exactly the same rhythm as at 00:21:180 just in mirrored position. Short slider comes first. So to make it better use a 3/2 slider from 00:22:497 (if you applied my previous suggestion then this should be a similar slider).
00:23:814 (4,5) - To make this a little bit easier I think you should delete (5), add a repeat to (4) and use a circle at 00:24:692. This is because the vocal starts at 00:24:107 and goes on till 00:24:692 so with a repeat this part will be covered.
00:30:253 (5,2) - These two slider sounds a bit weird because the tail is at main beat. For CtB it doesn't really matter, at least not on this level but I still find it weird. To avoid de-rank I would like to change it but I leave this matter to you to decide because changing these sliders result a complete change on both timeline and grid.
00:38:741 (2,3,4) - Remove (3), add a repeat to (2), Move (4) or (3) back to 00:39:619 and add a circle to 00:40:204. This will follow the vocal better. :3
00:42:839 (2,3) - Change these two into a repeat slider to follow the vocal.
00:45:326 (2) - This plays a bit weird because both white tick has stronger feedback. I think an 1/2 repeat slider can solve this problem.
01:01:863 (2,3,4) - This sounds a little weird again because around (3) both red tick has a stronger vocal part. I think you should move (3) back with 1/2 and make (4) starts at 01:02:302.
01:08:887 (1,2,3,4,5) - A jump almost required at this pattern. I needed to try many times to catch every note w/o dash. Move (2,3,4) a little to right and then move (4) a little more to right. It was an edge dash before so a few grid more than enough to make it easier.
01:24:692 (1,2,3) - Here I think two repeat slider sounds much better. Add a repeat to (1) and start the second repeat slider at 01:25:570.

I wonder why I'm the only one who points out rhythmical problems. o.o Most of these can easily be solved with a few mod. Maybe the problem is with me. /me cries in the corner Ok, nvm. The patterns are much better now, challenging but that is not a problem. :3

[Salad]

Ah yeah, Salad....Come at me!

Why AR/OD 6,3? For the correct and perfect spread it should be 6,5. And that 0,2 really makes no difference so just use 6,5.

00:17:375 (1) - I think this note is a but useless. The vocal starts at the next red tick. To make it better I think you can add a repeat to 00:16:643 (4) too.
00:17:960 (1,2) - Just one slider. This is also follows the vocal nicely and easier to play.
00:26:448 (2,3) - One slider.
00:27:619 (2,3) - ^
00:51:034 (2,3) - One 1/1 slider. I know this will ignore the middle of the "innocence" word but this is just Salad. You don't need to follow everything.
00:51:765 (1,2) - Delete (2) and make (1) to last till 00:52:204.
00:54:839 (2,3) - 1/1 slider.
01:03:619 (1,2,3,4,1) - Who suggested this pattern to you? I need to put him/her in jail for sure. Move them a little closer to each other (few grid is more than enough) to avoid edge dash.
01:11:082 (2,3,4) - Remove (2,3) and move (4) back to 01:11:229. The other rhythms are unnecessary for now.
01:11:668 (5,1) - Make (5) the last longer? I think that would be better.
01:12:399 (2,3) - I don't have much problem with this so feel free to keep it although I think can be easier a bit. 2 circle or one 1/1 slider can be use here.

That is all I found. Now this diff is finally starts to be better. :3 My suggestions now mainly for rhythm to make it a bit easier to follow. Patterns are nice now.

[Platter]

00:42:107 (6,1) - (1) is kinda breaks the flow. Just a suggestion but I ctrl+h'd it and moved to x:208 then placed (2) to x:192. This is not good either but the flow between (6,1) is better this way.

Everything else seems fine.

[Rain]

00:19:131 (1,2) - This is a very annoying jump and it breaks the flow badly. The slider is suggesting to go left but instead the circle comes at the right side. Not fun to play. q.q
01:05:668 (4,1) - Again a flow breaker pattern. (4) suggesting to go right but (1) is on the left side.

I personally find this Rain a bit hard, nearly an Overdose level. This is because of two (or three) reason. First is the bpm, well it can't be helped. Second is your mapping style, well I like it. And the third is a mix of the first two. You used high distance between notes 1,8x+ which is a bit hard to adapt at this bpm. For a decent Rain I'm suggesting 1,5x on this bpm but maybe that is just my style. Anyway, after a few (10+) play I started to adapt this style and the map started to be nice. :3 I still think its a bit hard but if you fix those two it will be fun. :3
[]

Hmm, Cup and Salad is a wall of text. lol

Call me back after everything fixed and I will bubble it. o/

QHideaki13

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QHideaki13 2014-09-06T07:36:55+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
00:42:107 (6,1) - (1) is kinda breaks the flow. Just a suggestion but I ctrl+h'd it and moved to x:208 then placed (2) to x:192. This is not good either but the flow between (6,1) is better this way. ( Fixed with both on x:192 )

Thanks for the second recheck, Kurokami~

Update

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StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

StickyPicky 2014-09-06T08:54:06+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Its Recheck Time!

[Cup]

00:21:180 (4,1) - I personally find it a but useless to have them divided. Just use one longer slider. The drum at 00:21:180 is loud enough to cover the second vocal part and this is more than enough on Cup. fixed
00:22:643 (3,1) - These two is a bit misplaced. This is exactly the same rhythm as at 00:21:180 just in mirrored position. Short slider comes first. So to make it better use a 3/2 slider from 00:22:497 (if you applied my previous suggestion then this should be a similar slider).
00:23:814 (4,5) - To make this a little bit easier I think you should delete (5), add a repeat to (4) and use a circle at 00:24:692. This is because the vocal starts at 00:24:107 and goes on till 00:24:692 so with a repeat this part will be covered. pretty hard to do a good pattern using repeat at (4), I'll stick with this for now..
00:30:253 (5,2) - These two slider sounds a bit weird because the tail is at main beat. For CtB it doesn't really matter, at least not on this level but I still find it weird. To avoid de-rank I would like to change it but I leave this matter to you to decide because changing these sliders result a complete change on both timeline and grid.
00:38:741 (2,3,4) - Remove (3), add a repeat to (2), Move (4) or (3) back to 00:39:619 and add a circle to 00:40:204. This will follow the vocal better. :3 The pattern follows the vocal, can't you feel it?
00:42:839 (2,3) - Change these two into a repeat slider to follow the vocal. ^
00:45:326 (2) - This plays a bit weird because both white tick has stronger feedback. I think an 1/2 repeat slider can solve this problem. Follows the Drum Beat
01:01:863 (2,3,4) - This sounds a little weird again because around (3) both red tick has a stronger vocal part. I think you should move (3) back with 1/2 and make (4) starts at 01:02:302. nuu.. sounds bad.. and the pattern will get rekt
01:08:887 (1,2,3,4,5) - A jump almost required at this pattern. I needed to try many times to catch every note w/o dash. Move (2,3,4) a little to right and then move (4) a little more to right. It was an edge dash before so a few grid more than enough to make it easier. fixed
01:24:692 (1,2,3) - Here I think two repeat slider sounds much better. Add a repeat to (1) and start the second repeat slider at 01:25:570.

I wonder why I'm the only one who points out rhythmical problems. o.o Most of these can easily be solved with a few mod. Maybe the problem is with me. /me cries in the corner Ok, nvm. The patterns are much better now, challenging but that is not a problem. :3

[Rain]

00:19:131 (1,2) - This is a very annoying jump and it breaks the flow badly. The slider is suggesting to go left but instead the circle comes at the right side. Not fun to play. q.q moved 00:19:570 (2) - x:256
01:05:668 (4,1) - Again a flow breaker pattern. (4) suggesting to go right but (1) is on the left side. fixed

I personally find this Rain a bit hard, nearly an Overdose level. This is because of two (or three) reason. First is the bpm, well it can't be helped. Second is your mapping style, well I like it. And the third is a mix of the first two. You used high distance between notes 1,8x+ which is a bit hard to adapt at this bpm. For a decent Rain I'm suggesting 1,5x on this bpm but maybe that is just my style. Anyway, after a few (10+) play I started to adapt this style and the map started to be nice. :3 I still think its a bit hard but if you fix those two it will be fun. :3
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Hmm, Cup and Salad is a wall of text. lol

Call me back after everything fixed and I will bubble it. o/

thanks for the recheck! :3

Kin

2,618 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2014-09-06T18:31:21+00:00

Hey
I think I'm kinda late but well :

as req from pm

[cup]
Sometimes I don't really know if you want'd to add a dash or not. But well, the diff is SSable without using dash. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2008219
I won't say to increase distance where you want'd a "dash", because I think it'll kinda break your diff.

- 00:27:619 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern is near to the no dash and dash once between at least 2 fruits. I think it'll be better to decrease the spacing between them. Or at least between 3 and 4. I'd suggest x1,1 spacing instead of symetry.
- 00:41:960 (6,7,1,2) - ^ Almost the same thing, the inconsistent spacing with both of them 00:42:253 (7,2) - make the pattern kinda strange to me

[ZiRoX's Salad]

- 00:03:326 (1,2,3) - reduce the jump between them ? they have the same sound as 00:00:839 (4,5,1) - . But 00:03:326 (1,2,3) - is a way harder.
- 00:09:765 (1,2,3,4) - the other one pattern with the same musical pattern (this one 00:05:082 (1,2,3,4) - ) have a higher X Distance Spacing. Try to be more consistent, by using the same X Distance Spacing.
01:03:619 (1,2,3,4) - I don't feel like the pattern fit with the AR (with the AR, I read a dash here 01:03:765 - 01:04:058 - 01:04:351 - 01:04:643 - ). Maybe reduce the spacing ?
01:12:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here, the spacing increase, but actually, the music decrease. So I think it'll be better if the spacing decrease.

[Q-H's Platter]
The custom hit sound is for drum. I feel like you're using it to follow other thing than drum.

- 00:24:985 - 00:25:570 - add clap
- 00:27:034 - add finish
- 00:29:814 - if you listen clearly, you should add clap here
- 00:32:156 - ^
- 00:36:839 - ^
- 00:37:278 (3) -
- 00:37:570 (2) - this slider is a way too loud.
How about add a green line here 00:37:570 - (hit sound 40%) and then another one here 00:37:863 (hit sound 60%)
- 00:37:863 - delete clap, add whistle + finish
- 00:49:131 (3,4) - I know what's your intention, but if you need to use dash for the triplet, the hyperdash isn't emphasized. I think it'd be better to use a smaller Distance Snap for the triplet. It'll emphasize the hyperdash.
- 00:52:204 - a clap is missing
- 00:58:863 (4,5) - It's just me, but I find it easier if there's a hyper dash here.

[Rain]

hm, I suck too much to testplay this one. If I can't testplay, I can't really feel the flow. And then, can't mod it.

Well, that all from me.

I think my last ctb mod was from 2012.

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-09-06T18:49:16+00:00

If you find anything useful from the last mod, feel free to use it. :3

QHideaki13

Global Moderator

455 posts

Joined March 2011

QHideaki13 2014-09-06T21:03:22+00:00

All fixed!

Thanks for the mod, Kin~

Update

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352,192,80741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,80887,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,192,81034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,192,82936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,192,83082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,83229,2,0,L|288:192,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,83521,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,83668,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,192,83814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,83960,2,0,L|416:192,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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