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f4rdiyan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 14 Juli 2014 at 21:44:47

Artist: E-girls
Title: Follow Me -COLORFUL ROCK-
Tags: E-girls
BPM: 143
Filesize: 4585kb
Play Time: 03:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,88 stars, 234 notes)
Download: E-girls - Follow Me -COLORFUL ROCK-
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 10 Juli 2014 at 1:41:16
Artist: E-girls
Title: Follow Me -COLORFUL ROCK-
Tags: E-girls
BPM: 143
Filesize: 4585kb
Play Time: 03:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,09 stars, 233 notes)
Download: E-girls - Follow Me -COLORFUL ROCK-
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Help me to fix this beatmap.. :D
Kritikally
IRC modded:

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2014-07-09 12:48 Kritikally: might wanna round out that bpm, it's exactly 143.00
2014-07-09 12:48 Kritikally: it goes out of sync near the end slower
2014-07-09 12:49 Kritikally: remove that extra inherited point at 2:10:371
2014-07-09 12:49 f4rdiyan: ok
2014-07-09 12:50 Kritikally: 00:07:238
2014-07-09 12:50 Kritikally: need something there, it's a strong point
2014-07-09 12:51 f4rdiyan: what 00:07:238 mean?
2014-07-09 12:53 Kritikally: it's the exact time
2014-07-09 12:53 Kritikally: 7.238 into it
2014-07-09 12:53 Kritikally: 00m, 00s, 238ms
2014-07-09 12:53 Kritikally: 07s
2014-07-09 12:53 Kritikally: 00:11:853 (6) - silent hitsound, might want to change that back to auto
2014-07-09 12:54 Kritikally: oh, another timing issue
2014-07-09 12:54 Kritikally: time signature is 4/4, not 3/4
2014-07-09 12:55 f4rdiyan: so i must change 8.497 -> 7.238?
2014-07-09 12:56 Kritikally: or add a circle at 7.238
2014-07-09 12:56 f4rdiyan: ok
2014-07-09 12:57 Kritikally: in your timing setup
2014-07-09 12:57 Kritikally: 143bpm, 7238 offset
2014-07-09 12:57 Kritikally: it starts on the wrong tick, so changing the offset fixes it
2014-07-09 12:58 Kritikally: there's a lot of distance snapping issues as well
2014-07-09 12:59 Kritikally: 00:16:049 (1,2,3,4,5) notice how they're all the same distance rhythmically, but different in the beatmap?
2014-07-09 12:59 Kritikally: 00:16:049 (1,2,3,4,5) - notice how they're all the same distance rhythmically, but different in the beatmap?
2014-07-09 13:00 Kritikally: 00:34:510 (1,2,3,4,5) way too spread out for easy, tighten them up distance-wise
2014-07-09 13:00 Kritikally: 00:34:510 (1,2,3,4,5) - way too spread out for easy, tighten them up distance-wise
2014-07-09 13:01 Kritikally: 00:37:447 (1,2,3,4) - same here
2014-07-09 13:02 f4rdiyan: i dont get it.. =="
2014-07-09 13:02 Kritikally: what don't you get?
2014-07-09 13:03 Kritikally: If I say something like 00:16:049 (1,2,3,4,5) - I mean starting 16.049s, events 1,2,3,4,5 of the combo
2014-07-09 13:04 f4rdiyan: what must i change at 16:049?
2014-07-09 13:05 Kritikally: the distance between each event
2014-07-09 13:05 Kritikally: needs to be the same
2014-07-09 13:05 Kritikally: as they all have a full step gap
2014-07-09 13:06 f4rdiyan: ok
2014-07-09 13:10 Kritikally: 00:44:160 (1) - Slider starts too early, shorten it so it ends at same point but starts at 00:45:839
2014-07-09 13:10 Kritikally: err, spinner starts too early
2014-07-09 13:13 f4rdiyan: so i must add another circle at 44.160?
2014-07-09 13:13 Kritikally: one second
2014-07-09 13:14 Kritikally: maybe change the 5 just before it to a slider
2014-07-09 13:14 f4rdiyan: okay
2014-07-09 13:14 Kritikally: then add another slider and circle to close the gap
2014-07-09 13:15 f4rdiyan: *by the way,, thanks for teach me (and sorry if my english bad, i cant english well..)
2014-07-09 13:15 Kritikally: you're welcoem :
2014-07-09 13:15 Kritikally: welcome :)
2014-07-09 13:17 Kritikally: 01:07:447 (2) - probably best to avoid that from stacking, especially since the approach circle starts at the very moment you trigger the slider
2014-07-09 13:19 Kritikally: 01:24:440 (1) - probably best to move that slider start to the red tick at 01:24:650 -
2014-07-09 13:19 Kritikally: I mean spinner, sorry
2014-07-09 13:20 Kritikally: 01:27:797 - might want to put a break here
2014-07-09 13:21 Kritikally: 01:59:685 (2,3,4,5) - each event is too far away from each other, bring them closer
2014-07-09 13:22 Kritikally: 02:03:041 (1,2,3,4) - same here
2014-07-09 13:22 f4rdiyan: done..
2014-07-09 13:22 f4rdiyan: but i dont understand 1.07.447
2014-07-09 13:23 Kritikally: move the circle so it's not directly below the slider
2014-07-09 13:24 f4rdiyan: done..
2014-07-09 13:26 f4rdiyan: actually,, i prefer play osu!mania..
2014-07-09 13:26 f4rdiyan: and i cant play osu! well
2014-07-09 13:26 Kritikally: 02:13:111 (3,4) - move 3 and 4 so it's more like [http://puu.sh/a3Rvm/4e14ef4f05.jpg this]
2014-07-09 13:27 Kritikally: that way slider 5 blankets 4
2014-07-09 13:28 Kritikally: 02:32:831 (2) - Click on that and press Ctrl+G to reverse the slider so it goes from top right to bottom left, otherwise the distance is too much
2014-07-09 13:29 Kritikally: [http://puu.sh/a3RGQ/d0a9d31882.jpg like this]
2014-07-09 13:30 Kritikally: 02:37:027 (1) - this slider feels way too long, shorten it by half and fill the gap
2014-07-09 13:31 Kritikally: 02:49:824 (4) - Bring 4 closer to 3
2014-07-09 13:31 Kritikally: 03:03:461 (1) - Extend spinner to 03:05:139
2014-07-09 13:32 Kritikally: 03:25:698 (1,2,3,4) - Spread too far apart, bring them closer to each other
2014-07-09 13:33 Kritikally: 03:31:573 (2) - rotate slider so it's going straight up (overlap is bad)
2014-07-09 13:34 Kritikally: 03:33:461 (1) too far from previous slider in too short of a time, need to move 1 and 2 closer
2014-07-09 13:34 Kritikally: 03:33:461 (1) - too far from previous slider in too short of a time, need to move 1 and 2 closer
2014-07-09 13:35 Kritikally: 03:40:279 (1) - Resize and move spinner so it starts at 03:40:384 - and ends at 03:41:642 -
2014-07-09 13:37 Kritikally: 03:47:097 (4)- either shorten so slider ends at 03:47:936 or move it so the whole spinner fits on screen (ending at 03:48:356 - if you do that method instead)
2014-07-09 13:37 Kritikally: 03:47:097 (4)- either shorten so slider ends at 03:47:936 - or move it so the whole spinner fits on screen (ending at 03:48:356 - if you do that method instead)
2014-07-09 13:38 Kritikally: 03:52:132 (1) - Ctrl+G it so it inverts the start and end points (too far away from previous event)
2014-07-09 13:39 Kritikally: 03:55:489 - Add a circle here and start a new combo, use finish hitsound
2014-07-09 13:39 Kritikally: and that's pretty much it for now
2014-07-09 13:40 f4rdiyan: when i edit,, should i upload it again?
2014-07-09 13:40 Kritikally: when you're done
2014-07-09 13:40 Kritikally: save and upload again
2014-07-09 13:40 Kritikally: so we can see the changes
Sorarei
it seems you're new in mapping stuff, create more difficult
Kritikally
IRC mod:
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2014-07-13 10:12 f4rdiyan: kritikally,, i want you to check my beatmap "follow me".. it is good??
2014-07-13 10:12 Kritikally: link it
2014-07-13 10:12 f4rdiyan: and, can i move to make "normal" ver..
2014-07-13 10:13 f4rdiyan: http://osu.ppy.sh/d/191323
2014-07-13 10:14 Kritikally: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/455475 E-girls - Follow Me -COLORFUL ROCK- [Easy]]
2014-07-13 10:14 Kritikally: 00:25:280 (1)
2014-07-13 10:14 Kritikally: overlaps with slider
2014-07-13 10:15 Kritikally: 00:26:958 missing circle here
2014-07-13 10:15 Kritikally: 00:26:958- missing circle here
2014-07-13 10:15 Kritikally: distance spacing needs to be consistent on easy/normal
2014-07-13 10:15 Kritikally: 00:27:797 (1,2,3,4) - example of distance spacing issue
2014-07-13 10:16 Kritikally: 00:33:684 (4)- slider overlaps with previous slider
2014-07-13 10:17 Kritikally: 00:34:172(4)- you can round out that slider to align with the next slider
2014-07-13 10:17 Kritikally: 00:34:172 (4)-
2014-07-13 10:17 Kritikally: 00:35:770 (2)- Overlaps with slider
2014-07-13 10:17 Kritikally: 00:35:770 (2,3,4,5)- too far seperated
2014-07-13 10:18 Kritikally: Again, you need to make sure your entire beatmap conforms to the same distance spacing unless there's a specific part that's obviously supposed to be different (given the music)
2014-07-13 10:18 Kritikally: For Easy/Normal difficulties
2014-07-13 10:20 Kritikally: 01:12:483 (2)- reposition so most of it can be seen around the slider
2014-07-13 10:21 Kritikally: 01:16:049 (2)- try to avoid sliders that don't tick on beat for Easy
2014-07-13 10:22 Kritikally: 01:23:182 (6)- Press Ctrl+G on that to invert the start and end point, will make more sense flow-wise
2014-07-13 10:23 Kritikally: also, your offset is incorrect... it's one beat early
2014-07-13 10:23 Kritikally: should be 7,238
2014-07-13 10:23 Kritikally: 01:24:651 (1)- remove this slider, add a break
2014-07-13 10:25 Kritikally: 01:39:546 (3)- too big of a jump for Easy, making it closer without overlapping previous circle (1).
2014-07-13 10:26 Kritikally: 01:43:532 (2)- hold alt and shift and reposition that slider VERY slightly so the blanket over (1) is perfect
2014-07-13 10:27 Kritikally: 01:49:196 (1)- Move circle to x-24, y-96
2014-07-13 10:27 Kritikally: 01:50:874- need circle here
2014-07-13 10:29 Kritikally: various spacing issues between 01:59:686- and 02:04:301-
2014-07-13 10:30 Kritikally: 02:39:965 (2)- avoid sliders that don't tick on beat for Easy
2014-07-13 10:31 Kritikally: 02:52:133 (1)- too close to previous circle
2014-07-13 10:32 Kritikally: 03:25:700 (2,3,4)- 3x jumps on easy?
2014-07-13 10:33 Kritikally: 03:30:735 (2)- If you're going to keep a slider there, move it to x:296, y:240
2014-07-13 10:33 Kritikally: gotta move 03:31:993 (3)- if you do
2014-07-13 10:34 Kritikally: In all honesty, I don't know if it even makes sense to finish this mod
2014-07-13 10:34 Kritikally: you have critical distance spacing issues you need to address, offset to fix, and various other changes
2014-07-13 10:35 Kritikally: 03:37:028 (2)- slider bow can be positioned better, will have to reposition your combo to conform with distance spacing
2014-07-13 10:35 Kritikally: 03:37:867 (3)- overlaps with slider (4)
2014-07-13 10:36 Kritikally: so take care of most of those, starting with offset
2014-07-13 10:36 Kritikally: then deal with distance spacing
2014-07-13 10:36 Kritikally: then deal with prettying up sliders, avoiding overlap, etc
2014-07-13 10:37 Kritikally: and msg me and I'll mod your map again
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