Sorry for the delays. ;_;
Anyway, here's the recheck:
[SB]
In people1.png, do you think you can add some transparency in the crook of her elbow?
On people4.png there's a small piece of the glow cut off on the left guy's head.
[banvi's Normal]
02:55:971 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty. End the spinner at 02:55:075 - ?
03:15:672 (4,5,6,7) - I was hoping these would be on the offbeats with the vocals. :<
04:04:030 (1) - Hrm, another note soon after a spinner... maybe end this spinner at 04:05:821 - and add a note at 04:07:165 - ?
04:18:359 (1,1) - Might be better to map through these spinners.
[Pokie's Hard]
I do agree with James that the score spread is rather poor. And artificially reducing the settings is not the way to do this.
So first: Raise HP drain by 2, OD by 1. That already reduced the score by 2 million. :x
01:36:269 (1,2) - This jump felt a bit too much for a hard.
01:45:001 (2,3) - ^
02:18:135 (7,1) - ^
02:05:374 - Activate kiai here
I think the biggest problem you're going to face in reducing the score in this is the deletion of a lot of notes. There are a lot of points where you're following the drums a lot and this tends to add up the notes considerably so. If you do delete notes, be sure to keep the rhythms consistent with each section of music, of course. I think you'd have a much better time reducing the score if you stuck more against the vocals without as much support from the percussion. It would give the map a bigger distinction from the Insane difficulty and reduce the score considerably imo. It would essentially be a remap though. :x I do like the difficulty as it is, but as for being a part of this map set, it's kind of hard to justify.
[Insane]
01:07:389 (3) - Move half-grid left. Looks so off-center as is. Realign 01:07:613 (4,5) - afterward, of course.
01:30:448 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This would be more memorable if you kept the slow spinning circle going instead of going backwards halfway through. As it is, it almost looks random.
02:05:262 - Activate kiai here. If you intended to do the re-kiai, it looks better at 02:05:821, though I think it's better with less fountains since you'd want to add one at 03:38:956 - for consistency.
02:16:568 (1,2) - Try to get those ends stacked correctly. I moved the end point of each slider further in by two grids and it lined up quite nicely.
03:03:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think these movements are a little too subtle. Maybe try to move a little more or do something a little different? Kind of dull to me as is.
03:22:836 (4) - Hrm, either end this at 03:23:060 - or silence the end of this. Otherwise the hit sound sticks out against the music and just sounds off.
03:49:702 (1,2) - Same comment as before
04:42:090 (3,5) - ^
