Been watching this map for a while, I think it deserves a star now. Star'd.
修好了Al-Azif wrote:
[normal]
not much to say
[Insane]
00:31:947 - 感覺上少放一個 note
00:21:537 (8,9) - 感覺上這兩個多放了
*00:07:544 至 00:21:425 - 這16拍中, 嘗試把 clap 音效消去, 我相信整個前奏會有更好聽感表現.
*01:08:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 嘗試換成更有趣的音效?
1(紅線) - whistle
2(白線) - clap
3(紅線) - whistle
4(白線) - 空
5(紅線) - whistle
6(白線) - clap
7(紅線) - whistle
8(白線) - 空
9(紅線) - whistle
10(白線) - clap
11(紅線) - whistle
12(白線) - 空
13(紅線) - whistle
14(白線) - clap
*01:15:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 同上
02:16:500 (1,2,3) - 這組合太近了, 把2,3拉下一格
02:19:634 - 感覺上少放一個 note
,所以没办法,需要再做个3星以下的难度才会被rankpeppy wrote:
At least two difficulties per song is required. If your beatmap's difficulty is 4 or more difficulty stars (in the song selection screen), it is necessary that you also include an easier version with 3 or less stars. There are a lot of players who are not so skilled at rhythm games - and this is one of the more difficult ones to get used to, so we should look at providing beatmaps which are passable for even beginners!
very thank you^^!banvi wrote:
Done~
After all , I made the end of this song. XD
You may think my mapset sense is wrong and strange. ;_;
And I don't have hitsound sense.
So let you add hitsound. XD
Sorry...
If some modders tell my diff , you can fix things as possible.
[attachment=0:141e0]supercell - LOVE & ROLL (Full ver) (Clare) [banvi's Normal].osu[/attachment:141e0]
really nice song
and star~
all fixed~Garven wrote:
As per your request:
[Storyboard]
I love it. <3
[banvi's Normal]
00:32:692 (1) - I'd end this spinner at 00:35:379 and add a note at 00:36:274.
02:08:513 (6,7,8,9,1) - I'm kind of worried about these since this is the easiest difficulty in the set. It might be a bit too much for beginners... but it fits in the Normal context, so I'll just mention this and move on, hehe.
03:20:826 (7) - This slider is kind of goofy lookin'
[Pokie's Hard]
00:21:946 (6) - May as well do the new combo here and remove on the next note.
Great beatmap.
[Insane]
04:34:931 (1) - Nice.
Another great diff.
I like. Great set!
fixed thank youLeorda wrote:
NI HAO
[General]
Title : LOVE & ROLL (Full ver.)
[Storyboard]
I can see the fade code like "0.0xxxx". If you want to make a fade, you have to check the osb like "1" and "0". Find (Ctrl+F) 0.0, if you found it, fix it, because it's makes frame lost
[File]
Is m3.png is useless, if yes, delete them
[banvi's Normal]
02:05:821 (1) - Hmm, clap here doesn't fit, IMO. Try finish
02:15:672 (5) - Move 1 grid down?
02:55:971 (1) - Finish?
04:07:612 (1) - ^
[Pokie's Hard]
01:45:001 (2) - Not stack with 1 at the end
01:47:687 (8,9) - Not stack with 7 at the end
02:02:911 (2) - Not stack with 1 at the end
02:07:389 (4) - Not stack with 3 at the end
[Insane]
00:19:030 (2) - Make symetric?
01:02:239 (4,1) - Spacing?
02:02:911 (3,1) - ^
03:06:269 (7) - Move 1 grid right?
Good job
and thx.wmfchris wrote:
[pokie's hard]
0:38:732 (3,4) seems (3,4) isn't the angle bisector of (1,2) and (5,6)...so right+up a bit? no
1:29:329 (6,7,8) strange spacing no
1:36:269 (1) down a bit so that on the same level with (8) k, fix'd
2:48:359 (11) left a bit ^
3:19:030 (3) not parallel with (1,2) even 1 and 2 are not paralle, so, noway
nice song, star
thanks JamesJames wrote:
copied my sounds? tsk tsk
sb is cool~
even made that outerglow thing to... no comment
insane:
00:19:926 (4,1) - spacing
holy shit 15m with... no comment
hard:
omg 13m hard... ill complain if this map gets ranked.. i can map this song with less than 10m with full length.. you guys can also do it~
diff is good though.
normal:
how can you guys put so many circles sliders while having less than 3 star rating? >.<
04:36:269 (1) - clap seems out of place, better to use normal-hitnormal
this song is freaking awesome.
i put my mp3 player on repeat for god knows how long whenever this song randomly pops up.
Gens wrote:
[General][Hard]
- There has been recent debate regarding (Full Ver) in songs, saying it's largely redundant since people assume it's full version if there's nothing in the title. Remove it?
02:50:150 (4) - Partially hidden... I must admit I was a bit distracted when playing, but I guess it wouldn't be too hard to fix, would it? It's not following a certain pattern or anything. ok!
[Insane]
01:49:702 (1) - I thought this was going to be like a hold slider. i want to keep it as now
03:22:836 (4) - Same as above. Is it intended?^
04:50:598 (3) - Shorten it?^
I agree with James, it looks a bit inappropriate to the difficulty, both Hard and Insane. You could cut out the difficulties a bit, it's a bit long after all.
Nothing special about this map... but I liked the song. The maps are well done by the way, just... nothing special about them. Why do all chinese maps look the same...
Garven wrote:
Sorry for the delays. ;_;
Anyway, here's the recheck:
[SB]
In people1.png, do you think you can add some transparency in the crook of her elbow?
ok
On people4.png there's a small piece of the glow cut off on the left guy's head.
the original picture is losted
[banvi's Normal]
02:55:971 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty. End the spinner at 02:55:075 - ?
03:15:672 (4,5,6,7) - I was hoping these would be on the offbeats with the vocals. :<
04:04:030 (1) - Hrm, another note soon after a spinner... maybe end this spinner at 04:05:821 - and add a note at 04:07:165 -
04:18:359 (1,1) - Might be better to map through these spinners.
[Pokie's Hard]
I do agree with James that the score spread is rather poor. And artificially reducing the settings is not the way to do this.
So first: Raise HP drain by 2, OD by 1. That already reduced the score by 2 million.
01:36:269 (1,2) - This jump felt a bit too much for a hard.
01:45:001 (2,3) - ^
02:18:135 (7,1) - ^
02:05:374 - Activate kiai here
I think the biggest problem you're going to face in reducing the score in this is the deletion of a lot of notes. There are a lot of points where you're following the drums a lot and this tends to add up the notes considerably so. If you do delete notes, be sure to keep the rhythms consistent with each section of music, of course. I think you'd have a much better time reducing the score if you stuck more against the vocals without as much support from the percussion. It would give the map a bigger distinction from the Insane difficulty and reduce the score considerably imo. It would essentially be a remap though. I do like the difficulty as it is, but as for being a part of this map set, it's kind of hard to justify.
[Insane]
01:07:389 (3) - Move half-grid left. Looks so off-center as is. Realign 01:07:613 (4,5) - afterward, of course.
01:30:448 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This would be more memorable if you kept the slow spinning circle going instead of going backwards halfway through. As it is, it almost looks random.
02:05:262 - Activate kiai here. If you intended to do the re-kiai, it looks better at 02:05:821, though I think it's better with less fountains since you'd want to add one at 03:38:956 - for consistency.
02:16:568 (1,2) - Try to get those ends stacked correctly. I moved the end point of each slider further in by two grids and it lined up quite nicely.
03:03:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think these movements are a little too subtle. Maybe try to move a little more or do something a little different? Kind of dull to me as is.
03:22:836 (4) - Hrm, either end this at 03:23:060 - or silence the end of this. Otherwise the hit sound sticks out against the music and just sounds off.
03:49:702 (1,2) - Same comment as before
04:42:090 (3,5) - ^
我承認有點跳了> <Alace wrote:
我覺得insane的間距有點不合曲子,在滿多柔軟的部份都有超可怕的海溝跳,然後再配上突然變小的間距
感覺真的是看map打map,而不是聽歌打map
01:42:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 天阿!!! 像這類的東西還滿多的
也許你想作的有點難,不過這樣慢的歌就只好節哀了 XD
hard is pretty good
thank you^^Mafiamaster wrote:
I don't think bg.png is being used. (In the sb folder) ok, deleted
[Insane]
02:53:060 (1,2) - Confusing.fixed!