Kloyd wrote:

• Hard

1. 01:30:307 (5) - 4:315 for better overlapping changed to another style now
2. 02:36:514 (4) - rotate just a bit(10'). itll better shaped nope for uhmm... ds snap? lol... composing is fine here imo.
3. 02:50:738 (9,1) - unstacking these can have better feeling. changed to another style as well
4. 03:01:600 (6) - many might surprised so NC? hmm ok~

• Normal

1. 00:52:548 (2,3,4) - for better flow and shape, u can make this pattern a triangle. sure

good song and map but i'm concerned at normal diff being controvercial due to the undiscernable slider length for noobs. hmm the sv in normal can be really easy to catch to noobs imo... ;w;

1. 00:01:341 - ~ 00:05:221 - 我覺得你可以用soft-whistle跟一些比較重的音 像是00:02:117 - 00:03:152 - 00:03:669 - 之類的
2. 02:15:307 - ^
3. 03:01:600 (1) - 硬要湊那個音還不如不跟..破壞整個慢慢的意境了

Flask wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:01:341 - ~ 00:05:221 - 我覺得你可以用soft-whistle跟一些比較重的音 像是00:02:117 - 00:03:152 - 00:03:669 - 之類的 哎！这里加了太吵啦！OVQ
2. 02:15:307 - ^ ^
3. 03:01:600 (1) - 硬要湊那個音還不如不跟..破壞整個慢慢的意境了 哎，这个多好啊！！！OVQQQ

我覺得你Hard最後一段kiai做得不錯. 不過也僅限於最後一段, 前面kiai沒有激昂的感覺啊.. 其實這種歌還是可以做的出燃點來的, 不過主要跟vocal, 你都跟背景音的話就會有點散散的=3= 姆，就是想做善良嘛OVQ

加油吧 OVQ

1. 04:05:479 - I can't here anything and there's a red line. What's this for?
2. artist should be in traditional chinese, which is “許慧欣”
   then, the album name in tags should be changed to “美麗的愛情”as well.
3. might want to have 192kbps mp3 instead of 128 one. i'll try to offer one later~http://puu.sh/d4tX3/9c1ef2eed2.mp3

1. 00:15:566 (2,3) - spacing inconsistency here, try placing it somewhere around 344,156
2. 00:32:376 (2,3,1) - fix the spacing here so they're all 2.1x away from each other.
   and many more, go through the diff to balance the spacing please~
3. 00:37:290 (4,1) - might be a bit tricky on such low AR. it's your call tho.
4. 01:17:635 (2,3) - you're following vocal for most cases so i don't get why you ignore it here. was expecting you follow the vocal here as well. Just like what you did in Hard.
5. 01:34:186 (2,3) - ^
6. 02:40:135 (2,3) - ^
7. 02:56:945 (2,3) - ^ this one sounds more natural tho
8. 02:15:307 (1) - a symmetrical one?

1. 03:15:824 (2) - ctrl+G works better for me.
2. 00:59:014 (1) - 把第一个red tick往右挪动一点吧，跟白线对应上。http://puu.sh/d4quR/71028ffe65.jpg

Oracle wrote:

m4m

General

1. 04:05:479 - I can't here anything and there's a red line. What's this for? reset timing... isn't it old rules stoke... anyway fixed.
2. artist should be in traditional chinese, which is “許慧欣” added
   then, the album name in tags should be changed to “美麗的愛情”as well. added
3. might want to have 192kbps mp3 instead of 128 one. i'll try to offer one later~http://puu.sh/d4tX3/9c1ef2eed2.mp3 ok, done.

Normal

1. 00:15:566 (2,3) - spacing inconsistency here, try placing it somewhere around 344,156 oops, i rearranged 00:13:755 (1) - 's setting and ds is ok now.
2. 00:32:376 (2,3,1) - fix the spacing here so they're all 2.1x away from each other. fixed
   and many more, go through the diff to balance the spacing please~ fixed some with larger off than 0.1
3. 00:37:290 (4,1) - might be a bit tricky on such low AR. it's your call tho. this can be fine to noobs playing normal coz dat low bpm imo.
4. 01:17:635 (2,3) - you're following vocal for most cases so i don't get why you ignore it here. was expecting you follow the vocal here as well. Just like what you did in Hard. lol nope, i didn't follow vocal track both here and hard diff orz. same as below.
5. 01:34:186 (2,3) - ^
6. 02:40:135 (2,3) - ^
7. 02:56:945 (2,3) - ^ this one sounds more natural tho
8. 02:15:307 (1) - a symmetrical one? i hate symm.

Hard

1. 03:15:824 (2) - ctrl+G works better for me. ofc, changed.
2. 00:59:014 (1) - 把第一个red tick往右挪动一点吧，跟白线对应上。http://puu.sh/d4quR/71028ffe65.jpg good, fixed

good song, call me~

Flower wrote:

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[Hard]
00:45:824 (6) - changing to a 1/2 slider at 00:46:341 - would have more feelings (and add a note at 00:45:824 - ) seems better to me as well, changed.
02:04:250 - reduce volume by like 10%, the bonus covers music too much changed.
02:51:772 (2) - move to like 132,240 or so to avoid touch with 02:50:997 (1) - changed.
02:53:066 (5) - change to a 1/2 slider + a circle to follow vocal? hmm nope here.
03:01:600 (1,1) - latter 1 is totally covered. it's very risky, so please move latter 1 to a more visible position thou i still think it's ok... it's just a stack pattern with a really short slider... still changed to another style.
03:53:647 (1) - make a fade-out volume arrange changed.

[Normal]
01:25:652 (2) - extend by 1/2? 01:26:169 - sounds stronger nope for just wanna follow drum and ignore that hit-hat beat.
02:01:341 (1) - same as Hard changed.
02:15:307 (1,2) - if you feel unsafe, there's a simple way to compromise: delete them, and drag beginnings to 02:17:893 - . I think the gap is totally acceptable, though. Therefore, the decision is up to you. when the spinner totally disappear, the slider followed is totally not appear. so i think this is safe and no change.
02:40:135 (2) - extend by 1/2? same as above.
03:00:048 (1,2,3,4) - I'd prefer this pattern: i think beat at 03:01:600 really need a tap to emphasis, so no change.

SPOILER

03:19:962 (1) - if you feel unsafe, there's a simple way to compromise: end the spinner at 03:23:066 - . changed coz this is not like the previous one.
03:53:647 (1) - same as hard changed.

吗的怎么都泡了还能摸出这么多，是不是你都reject了 你是人？
还有你要不要择个凶日rank，比如1213纪念国耻，这样你可以先不改。择不呢热爆挖鼻，还是赶紧rank了吧奥拉都拖了我半个月。。。
有什么想法直接pm我就好 好~ OVO

Good luck!

Flower wrote:

I think there's no reason not making our final step. let's do xxx to the end w.

Qualified!

Autumn wrote:

玛雅 我竟然FL了HW的图

Autumn wrote:

玛雅 我竟然FL了HW的图