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KOTOKO - Agony (TV Size)

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Alice
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Alice
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 10 janvier 2010 at 20:49:40

Artist: KOTOKO
Title: Agony (TV Size)
Source: Kannazuki no Miko (ED)
Tags: strager ignorethis Shrine Maidens of the Godless Month Kurusugawa Himeko Himemiya Chikane
BPM: 132
Filesize: 5933kb
Play Time: 01:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,06 stars, 57 notes)
  2. Hard (4,92 stars, 313 notes)
  3. ignore's Insane (4,99 stars, 264 notes)
  4. Normal (3,2 stars, 102 notes)
Download: KOTOKO - Agony (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Amazing storyboard by strager.
Insane by ignorethis
Thanks a lot!
Last edited by Alice , edited 10 times in total.
anonymous_old
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anonymous_old
Combo colour.

Hawrd
00:24:373 (6) - New combo.
00:24:714 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:25:282 (3) - New combo.
00:25:623 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:26:305 (4) - New combo.
00:28:010 (4) - New combo.
00:28:350 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:28:919 (3) - New combo.
00:38:123 (5) - New combo.
Sushi
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Sushi
Karaoke SB <3 nice job strager

[Normal]
(premier passage en jouant)
01:04:487 (5) - certains te diront : "NYA off screens, goes under score bar" etc etc. moi perso je m'en fous, je le vois quand meme. mais bon.

(deuxieme passage en allant dans l'éditeur)
00:01:759 (1,2) - aligne les deux?
00:09:032 (1,3) - faut vraiment être sadique, mais peut etre leur donner la meme inclinaison (celui de gauche est légerement un peu vers le haut)
00:34:487 (4) - fais le finir a 00:34:828?
00:59:941 (1,3) - je suppose que le non alignement est volontaire. d'ailleur ça gene pas.
01:20:964 (break) - Par rapport a d'autres moments qui ont un espacement exactement identiques (ex. 00:51:646), Est-ce que ce break est vraiment utile


[Hard]
BLEARGHF tous ces stacks décalés c'est horrible aligne ça!!!..
JE DECONNE NE ME FOUETTE PAS!!!!
non, rien a dire sur cette diff, elle est géniale


sincerement, j'aime bien la map, donc tu as forcément mon étoile ;)
Alice
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Alice
Thankkksss to both of you <3

strager: merci papillon <3 I'll update when Easy is done

Sushi: merci o/
EDIT: J'ai tout fait sauf l'histoire du offscreen, je crois pas que la barre de score compte vraiment comme le screen..
[DBF]
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[DBF]
SPOILER
anonymous_old
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anonymous_old
Easy
Insert breaks where you can, maybe?

00:08:123 (4) - Meh I don't like this.
00:28:123 (2) - Extend 1/4. It doesn't sound right ending at 00:28:464.
00:41:305 (3,1) - I dislike this 1/2. Move the slider back one 1/2 and it works nicely.
00:49:941 (1,2) - Slider?
01:02:669 (1,2) - Moche. >_<
01:06:532 (2,3) - NO.
01:08:350 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:941 (3) - Add new combo.
01:11:532 - Note here like 01:09:714 (2).

Normal
Insert breaks where you can, maybe?

00:01:759 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Less sliders please? =[
00:19:032 (2) - Ugly and unsymmetrical.
00:20:396 - I feel a note belongs here.
00:29:941 (1,3) - Moche aussi.
00:34:487 (4,5) - Unstack.
00:54:032 (4,5) - Ew, 1/4. Removing this brings the map immediately to 3 stars.
00:55:396 (2,2) - I really like these sliders. (Je sais que ils sont in other places too. =X But they work nicely here.)
01:02:669 (4,5) - Change so the slider tick is on the slider node.
mosluv
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Joined December 2008
mosluv
Lyrics animation are very well done. But I hate the black spaces on the sides. I suggest using the whole picture that fits the whole screen and implement some other kind of animation instead of it going left/right.

Just a suggestion, no need to do anything about it.
jericho2442
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jericho2442
[Normal]
00:31:760 (3) - bit too far offscreen
01:04:487 (5) - waaay too far offscreen

_________________
overall nice maps, good job ;)
Alice
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Alice

strager wrote:

Easy
Insert breaks where you can, maybe? short break sucks

00:08:123 (4) - Meh I don't like this. I do ):
00:28:123 (2) - Extend 1/4. It doesn't sound right ending at 00:28:464. kk <3
00:41:305 (3,1) - I dislike this 1/2. Move the slider back one 1/2 and it works nicely. kkk <3
00:49:941 (1,2) - Slider? non </3
01:02:669 (1,2) - Moche. >_< Pourquoi? >< Je n'y vois aucun inconvénient. ):
01:06:532 (2,3) - NO. kkkk <3
01:08:350 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:941 (3) - Add new combo. Both done
01:11:532 - Note here like 01:09:714 (2). nope, it does sound good as it is

Normal
Insert breaks where you can, maybe?

00:01:759 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Less sliders please? =[ I like sliders ):
00:19:032 (2) - Ugly and unsymmetrical. Why do you guys are horrible nazi about symmetry? D: I redid this slider anyway <_<
00:20:396 - I feel a note belongs here. Je ne pense pas.
00:29:941 (1,3) - Moche aussi. Il me va.
00:34:487 (4,5) - Unstack. I like it as it is ):
00:54:032 (4,5) - Ew, 1/4. Removing this brings the map immediately to 3 stars.
01:02:669 (4,5) - Change so the slider tick is on the slider node. What

jericho2442 wrote:

[Normal]
00:31:760 (3) - bit too far offscreen
01:04:487 (5) - waaay too far offscreen
HP Bar notes DOESN'T counts as offscreen as I remember. I'll try to ask someone though.

Nexy: thanks for the advice but I like the black sides anyway and I think strager did a pretty good job here. Sorry.
Ema Skye
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Ema Skye
star, great map ~
ignorethis
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ignorethis
Awesome lyrics SB :D

<Easy>
00:09:03 (1) - Lengthen to 10:396
00:19:032 - Add a note, move the spinner to 19:941 and shorten.
00:41:30 (3) - Remove finish, use a whistle instead.
00:41:53 (1) - This one sounds bad, move to next white tick, and add a note at current position.
01:21:76 (1) - Fade out

<Normal>
00:41:53 (1) - Same with easy. I think you made it on purpose, but it really doesn't fit the song.
Also if you accept this remove 2 too.
01:21:75 (1) - Fade out

<Hard>
Fine.

BTW I've made my own difficulty, it's up to you to adopt it or not. It'a bit crazy.

Download: KOTOKO - Agony (TV Size) (Alice Margatroid) [ignore's Insane].osu
Alice
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Alice
ignore: thanks a lot :) I didn't do all the mod, but it was useful. Thanks.
I usually don't support 4+ diffs on a map (osu_CN_yaya asked first yesterday) but I really love your mapping style so I suppose I can make an exception. Though I think I won't accept any more diffs, sorry. ><;;
Scar
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Scar
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
anonymous_old
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anonymous_old
ignore's Insane
Map generally feels sloppy. I think it's due to relatively poor slider construction. I don't know; I don't like it. Normally I do like ignore's maps, though.

An example? 00:14:487 (1,2,3) - looks sloppy mainly due to the placement or rotation of (3). Either move it down or rotate it clockwise.

I also don't like the combo marker placement. It doesn't seem to match the music well.

00:03:350 - Why the hell does it get quiet here? I can't hear any hitsounds now.
00:58:010 (5,6,1) - Felt too close.

Also...

Hard (4,92 stars, 313 notes)
ignore's Insane (4,96 stars, 202 notes)

Heh.
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
[General]

In /sb/english/, 11 and 16 exceed the max width for a storyboard element (1024px).
Thumbs.db are everywhere, please delete.
Why does 8 contain such weird capitalization?

[Easy]

Good.

[Normal]

Hey, this is nice too.

[Hard]

01:10:737 (6) - Ehh, didn't really like these, mostly because they look identical to the slider before, so it was hard to predict. (obviously, if you change it, change the next one too)

[ignore's Insane]

Scores less than Hard, by a lot. (max score is about half that of Hard)

00:03:350 - Offsets to affect audio should be placed 1/4 before the note they start to affect. Please check this throughout the map.

Star~
ignorethis
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ignorethis
>strager: Now that's a weird thing that you say my sliders are badly constructed, because usually I do construct them like the way I did in this map, just varies a bit from time to time.

>kytoxid: oh yes I forgot that. sorry.

About the score problem... It's mainly due to Alice's use of circles, which increased the map's total score a lot. I can't do much about it since my map has been almost fully arranged and barely cannot be added anything to.

[edit] I added a final part to this map and the score now is slightly higher than hard... But I guess that doesn't help much.
Also optimised some sliders and fixed the volume bug.

Download: KOTOKO - Agony (TV Size) (Alice Margatroid) [ignore's Insane].osu
Vanmonky
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Vanmonky
As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for the second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Remove (ED) from the source? I know what you meant about the ED word, but I think it's better to remove it. [?]
2. No capitalization. Lowercase all the tags.
3. 01:07:214 - Add star2 brust effect here using kiai time. [?]

[Storyboard]
Very excited because of the lyrics!
00:52:214 (sephia) - Why don't you change the slideshow to another picture of her? It will be better in my opinion.
00:58:294 (lyrcs 16) - Consider cutting it into two or three parts?
01:05:623 (bleu) - Why don't you change the slideshow to another picture of him? It will be better in my opinion.
01:19:941 (the fake letterbox) - I don't like the letterbox. It's like eating up the picture. Try thinking about other idea to fill up the fake letterbox.
01:34:487 - Black screen start fading in from this point or somewhere else. [?]

[Easy]
00:55:396 (1,1) - Extend 1/4 tick. Will be better in my opinion.
01:08:350 (4) - Finish at the end. [?]

[Normal]
Too much finish @_@
00:51:078 - Add break here? It will be like an effect pointing to the kiai time.

[Hard]
00:04:487 (9) - Add whistle at the second repeat.
00:08:578 (8) - Add whistle.
00:10:282 (6) - Add whistle at the beginning.
00:12:214 (7) - ^
00:17:555 (7) - Add whistle.
00:41:759 (3,3,3) - Add finish at the beginning.
00:45:396 (1) - ^
01:21:759 (7) - Add finish.
01:33:123 (4) - Add finish at the end.

[ignore's Insane]
No mistake were found.
Star.
yaya
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yaya
sorry alice. i'd like delete my diff since i saw ignore's diff . becuz it's good enough .

good map . ignore me . sorry
anonymous_old
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VanMoNky wrote:

[Storyboard]
Very excited because of the lyrics! Thanks! =]
00:52:214 (sephia) - Why don't you change the slideshow to another picture of her? It will be better in my opinion. This is how it is like in the anime.
00:58:294 (lyrcs 16) - Consider cutting it into two or three parts? Meh; I don't wanna redo it. That's how it's shown in the lyrics I got (from gendou).
01:05:623 (bleu) - Why don't you change the slideshow to another picture of him? It will be better in my opinion. This is how it is like in the anime.
01:19:941 (the fake letterbox) - I don't like the letterbox. It's like eating up the picture. Try thinking about other idea to fill up the fake letterbox. It's not a letterbox; the image just isn't 4:3. I made the image scale more, though, to fix this "problem".
01:34:487 - Black screen start fading in from this point or somewhere else. I actually forgot the white fade.
Alice: Download: KOTOKO - Agony (TV Size) (Alice Margatroid).osb
Alice
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Alice
Thanks all. Updated.

Yaya: no problem, thanks anyway for the star =)

Kytoxid: I can't delete Thumbs.db cause I don't see any, lol
DJPop
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DJPop
WOW EPIC SB O_O

~Easy~
01:21:759 (1) - silence this spinner

~Normal~
01:21:759 (1) - silence this spinner

~Hard~
Hate jumps - -"
01:21:873 (1) - silence this spinner

~ignore's Insane~
HP Drain is too high - -"
00:26:305 (9) - new combo
00:29:941 (9) - ^
00:36:305 (2) - ^
00:39:941 (7) - ^
00:43:578 (7) - ^
00:51:078 (7) - ^
01:05:169 (5) - ^


+Star
Mystearica
Mystearica
Epic storyboard indeed, I remember doing karaoke fx for anime in my former years @_@

However, as far as the map goes I'm going to have to quote James >_>

Fully starred for the storyboard effort, most excellent.
Alice
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Alice
DJPop: all done, thank you :P
Mystearica: thanks for the star ^^

ignore, I fixed DJPop's mod myself as I considered it was minor things
If you have something to say about it though you can repost a fixed diff. ^^
Cyril Scarlet
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Yee ~ Favorite Song (●´ω｀●)
Alice
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Alice
Thanks S i R i R u!!! :)
ztrot
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o.o
Alice
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Alice
Thanks :)
anonymous_old
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Thanks. =X
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Alice
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Alice
Thanks mrtn!
anonymous_old
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Thanks mrtn~ <3
Hanyuu
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Hanyuu
great strager wow :) :) :)
Cyril Scarlet
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ヾ(´ー｀)ﾉ｡･:*:･ﾟ'★,｡･:*:･ﾟ'☆ Congratulations･･･
anonymous_old
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Just noticed there's a minor problem with the SB.

Hopefully no one will notice.
Alice
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Alice
S i R i R u thanks :)
Hanyuu it's not to me to say thanks so just thanks for the comment ehe :P
Hanyuu
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Hanyuu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Breeze
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Breeze
Wow, at first I thought that's video. And I remembed I had turned off video...
this SB is really awesome :!:
Map is fun to play, too~I can't play well 'cause the SB is attract me...
strager sensei teach how to make SB>A<
I love nicely done SB and pure map
this one fit two points : P
Lybydose
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Lybydose
er, is the storyboard broken for anyone else?

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8122

Re-downloaded. It's different now, but still not working properly.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8123
anonymous_old
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Lybydose wrote:

Re-downloaded. It's different now, but still not working properly.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8123
This is correct behaviour.
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