KOTOKO - Allegretto -Sora to Kimi- · forum

Aenna

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Aenna 2009-12-31T11:26:48+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年1月3日 at 19:14:16

Artist: KOTOKO
Title: Allegretto -Sora to Kimi-
Source: Kono Aozora ni Yakusoku wo
Tags: Sky and You
BPM: 122
Filesize: 3859kb
Play Time: 03:33
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.79 stars, 407 notes)
Normal (3.55 stars, 264 notes)

Download: KOTOKO - Allegretto -Sora to Kimi-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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6th map.

PC Game "Kono Aozora ni Yakusoku wo" Opening Song.
KOTOKO~

2010/01/02 Mp3 changed.
2010/01/03 Subtitle fix.

Re-download plz!

Last edited by Aenna 2010-01-03T10:14:13+00:00, edited 22 times in total.

taNa

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taNa 2009-12-31T15:48:18+00:00

akeome

Aenna

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Aenna 2009-12-31T17:11:10+00:00

Thank you advice.

akeome kotoyoro !!

Leorda

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Leorda 2009-12-31T17:45:48+00:00

Konnichiwa!

[Normal]
Watch OUT! My nazi modding is make interest too see. If you already fix this, don't forget check the spacing too!
01:01:604 (2) - Move 2 grid up
01:03:079 (5) - Move 2 grid right
01:14:882 (8) - Move 3 grid down
03:22:751 (2) - Move 2 grid up

[Hard]
03:41:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - The combo is too long

GREAT MAP!!!!!
STAR

Aenna

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Aenna 2009-12-31T18:03:07+00:00

All fixed.

Shinxyn

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Shinxyn 2009-12-31T20:02:17+00:00

hi~
Please decrease the volume for the sections with the custom hitsound a bit more... hearing that over and over gets kinda repeatative... I'm not even sure if that's the "right" hitsound to use for this song..
I like how the whistles were used though~

Normal- nothing technical, just think some of your combos can be shorter >:

SPOILER

00:20:046 (6) - new combo for new verse?
00:25:456 (5) - new combo please
00:58:899 (7) - ^
01:02:833 (4) - ^
01:14:636 (7) - ^
01:40:702 (7) - ^
01:54:472 (6) - ^
03:16:604 (5) - ^
03:32:833 (7) - ^
There is probably more other people can point out, but those are the ones I choose >:

Hard-
hmmm again, your combos seem long, nothing technical

SPOILER

00:18:817 (6) - new combo?
01:19:800 (7) - ^
01:26:194 (6) - ^ (and please add some hitsounds here if you're making your own beats a bit)
01:28:161 (6) - ^ (^)
01:45:374 (8) - ^
02:56:194 (7) - ^
There are probably more, but they're quite fine..

The maps are so.... clean? (almost... boring ;_;)

Aenna

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Aenna 2009-12-31T20:53:36+00:00

All fixed.

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2009-12-31T20:56:05+00:00

hard
01:20:538 (11) - whistle?
01:31:849 (7) - one more repeat
01:46:112 (1) - no clap 01:46:604 -
01:50:538 (1) - finish begining?
02:25:210 (6) - whistles beginning and end
02:56:931 (11) - whistle
03:08:243 (7) - one more repeat
03:12:423 (2,3,5) - whistle?
03:19:063 (1) - finish at begnning instead
03:33:817 (9) - finish end

normal
all good n-n

star!

eXseeD

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eXseeD 2009-12-31T21:06:32+00:00

akeomekotoyoro!

☆ミ

Aenna

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Aenna 2009-12-31T21:13:18+00:00

All fixed.

Thank you eXseeD.

kotoyoro !!

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-01-01T07:42:36+00:00

(　ﾟωﾟ)/ ﾉﾉﾉ☆ ﾎﾟﾛｯ

あ、星落としちゃった (´▽｀)

あけおめ～♪
ことよろ～です！

dkey

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dkey 2010-01-01T09:58:54+00:00

nice song~ >w< 期待です

Gens

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Gens 2010-01-02T01:46:06+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2010-01-02T07:03:15+00:00

Adding on to the things Gens said.

Normal:
01:02:833 (1) - remove new combo
01:20:784 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 follow the lyrics

Hard: fine

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Very few technical flaws. Nice map. Star.

Edit: The fixes are done and since I am fine with the silence in the front of the mp3, p-bubbled

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-01-02T09:03:00+00:00

Allfixed.

mp3 changed.

Preview point and offset were changed.

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2010-01-02T18:07:45+00:00

Popping the p-bubble since you changed the mp3.

Your new offset feels very off for me. I got 3134 for the offset, but that is pretty far from yours. I am going to go find someone to confirm the offset before I re-p-bubble this.

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-01-02T19:53:47+00:00

Fixed.

Doomsday

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Doomsday 2010-01-02T23:50:24+00:00

Before Blissfulyoshi protobubbles this, let me have a look

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

-offset - 3,142 (The one you have already is solid. This is just what i got)
-You should remove "Game I've" from the tags. It makes no sense to have it there
-Make an easy? Normal seems a little too hard to be the easiest difficulty. It is not too bad though, so If you do not want to make an easy, I can let it pass, but I recommend making an easy

[NORMAL]

Looks good

[HARD]

01:09:527 (5,1) - I'm not keen on this little jump. You don't have to remove it if you don't want to. I just thought i'd say this.
02:45:920 (5,1) - ^

Overall, a nice little map. I'd be happy to bubble when you fix the "Game I've" in the tags.

starred for now

Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2010-01-03T08:29:38+00:00

Man, I'm late to the party. I'll refrain from repeating what has already been said, leaving just one thing:

Googling for this song seems to show that the subtitle is either "Sora to Kimi" or "Sky and You". Regardless, (I think I personally prefer the Japanese version), it should be properly capitalized.

Star~

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-01-03T08:48:08+00:00

Doomsday93 wrote:
Before Blissfulyoshi protobubbles this, let me have a look

-offset - 3,142 (The one you have already is solid. This is just what i got) Done
-You should remove "Game I've" from the tags. It makes no sense to have it there Done
-Make an easy? Normal seems a little too hard to be the easiest difficulty. It is not too bad though, so If you do not want to make an easy, I can let it pass, but I recommend making an easy I think that Normal is Easy...
[NORMAL]

Looks good

[HARD]

01:09:527 (5,1) - I'm not keen on this little jump. You don't have to remove it if you don't want to. I just thought i'd say this. Done
02:45:920 (5,1) - ^ ^

Overall, a nice little map. I'd be happy to bubble when you fix the "Game I've" in the tags.

starred for now

Thanks.

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-01-03T08:50:14+00:00

Kytoxid wrote:
Man, I'm late to the party. I'll refrain from repeating what has already been said, leaving just one thing:

Googling for this song seems to show that the subtitle is either "Sora to Kimi" or "Sky and You". Regardless, (I think I personally prefer the Japanese version), it should be properly capitalized.

Star~

Fixed.
Thanks.

Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2010-01-03T09:34:37+00:00

Add the English title to the tags too please.

(don't kudosu this, I forgot to add it to the last post)

Aenna

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