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Girls' Generation - Chocolate Love

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ouranhshc
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ouranhshc
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, January 31, 2010 at 7:33:28 AM

Artist: Girls' Generation
Title: Chocolate Love
Source: LG Chocolate Advertisement
Tags: LG CYON Shulin Retro Pop Version m980
BPM: 138
Filesize: 10878kb
Play Time: 02:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dark Chocolate (4.61 stars, 238 notes)
  2. iNiS980 Chocolate (3.68 stars, 115 notes)
  3. Milk Chocolate (3.74 stars, 220 notes)
  4. White Chocolate (1.29 stars, 61 notes)
Download: Girls' Generation - Chocolate Love
Download: Girls' Generation - Chocolate Love (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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REDOWNLOAD

spinner circle - rena
Thank you strager for the trimmed video
300s, etc. - bassmaster
Thank you Shulin and m980
Last edited by ouranhshc , edited 35 times in total.
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Nice.

01:05:568 (1,2,3) - < Doesn't fit the flow of the map, I no like. maybe stack it?

I'll star when you move to pending, and I'll do a full mod then
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
Lower the hitsound volume? It hurts my ears.

00:12:552 (5) - Haha, awesome
00:55:412 (1,2,3,4) - not symmetrical
01:21:264 (4) - like this?
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
I LOVE CHOCOLATE!! *ahem*

Here is it :P

Download: Girls' Generation - Chocolate Love (ouranhshc) [Shulin's Milk Chocolate].osu
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
For first timing section
Offset 3,905

For second Timing section
BPM: 130
Offset: 14,873
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

bmin11 wrote:

For first timing section
Offset 3,905

For second Timing section
BPM: 130
Offset: 14,873
i like the current offset i have for the first section,but the second offset sounds worse
Wizard Of Orz
965 posts
Joined May 2008
Wizard Of Orz
-for notes like these in hard 00:44:179 (1,2) - you need to extend the slider by 1/6 and move the other note forward by 1/6.
-timing seems a bit off.
-00:18:481 (1,2,3,4,5) - overlapping sliders are fugly
-most of your slider slowdowns are stupid. i think you are just spamming them.
-your map has improved from before but..
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

supergarlic wrote:

-for notes like these in hard 00:44:179 (1,2) - you need to extend the slider by 1/6 and move the other note forward by 1/6.It sound UGLY
-timing seems a bit off.fixed
-00:18:481 (1,2,3,4,5) - overlapping sliders are fuglyim keeping them
-most of your slider slowdowns are stupid. i think you are just spamming them.removed
-your map has improved from before but..but?
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11

ouranhshc wrote:

bmin11 wrote:

For first timing section
Offset 3,905

For second Timing section
BPM: 130
Offset: 14,873
i like the current offset i have for the first section,but the second offset sounds worse
You shouldn't have gave me the kudos if you hated it
Just wanted to post this thing
[Dark Chocolate]
01:22:562 (1) - This is hidden. It's actually hard to tell the slider
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
i still found it helpful
Mystearica
Mystearica
[Dark Chocolate]

This difficulty has +10 ms more offset than the rest, hm?

00:41:938 (5) - Start a new combo here, adjust the spacing to be consistent within that combo for 00:41:938 (5,6,7) since right now 6 and 7 are both incorrectly spaced.
01:10:252 (6) - I know this is a mirror but spacing is tricky this way, you could rearrange this and still make it look pretty with correct spacing.

Probably shouldn't use whistles at the end, or if you want to keep them, add volume control to follow the music. Even if you don't anything to the whistles, please still add volume control to follow the music at the end. (Loudness)

[Shulin's]

Set a preview point.

Consider volume control for the end again please.

No whistles were so much better :3

[White Chocolate]

Too many whistles for a short difficulty I think, at the very least, the drawnout whistles on the long sliders sound really bad to me.

No issues otherwise.
Breeze
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2009
Breeze
star power
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
1,179 posts
Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
Chocolate <3!
The second BPM is off, I really don't see why its 129.97, the notes are really off timing near the end, a clean 130BPM works >:
(when/if you do change the bpm, double check EVERY note, since it doesn't really resnap well with 1/3 or 1/6)

White Chocolate-
Seems to be missing some claps
SPOILER
00:08:647 - clap?
00:44:861 - ^
00:52:248 - ^
00:58:711 - ^ (instead of whistle)
01:14:407 - ^ (^)
There are -some- more that can be mixed into the music but whatever~

Shulin's- weee
01:33:180 (4) - was this supposed to be on the white tick? if -not- then it's spaced odd and could use a new combo
nazi-
SPOILER
00:42:092 (5) - new combo for change of pattern
01:33:796 (5) - clap?
02:12:574 - clap?
02:18:979 - too much of a sudden volume decrease imo >:
Pretty solid :D

Dark Chocolate-
00:35:398 (7) - ... for some reason this just doesn't seem to play right... I'm guessing its cuz of the notes leading up to this... just saying.. (there are a few parts like this...)
00:36:398 (1,3) - if this is to vocal, shouldn't these be on the red tick? Okay, nvm, it seems most notes are like this and doesn't really follow vocal...
00:37:929 (5) - not sure this goes here.... maybe move 1/6 forward? or to the white tick?
01:03:327 - clap?
01:07:020 - ^
01:07:944 (2) - ^
01:21:331 (4) - make it clearer which way the slider's going (this is "unrankable")
ehh... not easy to mod with timing a bit off (I load to original to post times)

Center the spinner more please, its kinda wobbly
Overall, the map is okay, its star worthy
Shinde
osu! Alumni
707 posts
Joined April 2009
Shinde
Add Shulin to the tags on all diffs. Spinner BG. End Kiai on Easy where you did Normal/Hard.

That's about it from me. Only played it and checked the technical stuff. The timing seems better? than yesterday which was my chief concern. (I honestly can't tell. When I change the offset to what I was off it just goes blargh and dies on me.) I don't think I had much to say yesterday when I ragequit while trying to time. Map seems pretty solid. Still worried about timing though. Other than that seems good.

Lazy star go.

Since Shinxyn says ur spinner is wobble-like.
SPOILER
Remember. Get a spinner BG. Or I thwack you.
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Kerensa
hi

haisha thinks video offset is -315.. yours feels abit slow, i looked it up on youtube >_< -- maybe.. O.o

White:
00:41:624 [3,4,5]even it up with [1,2]?

Shulins:
00:03:865 [1- to next red lien thing] it feels fast, check it agian.?
01:11:162 [6]new combo?
01:09:778 [1]no new combo?
01:33:778 [*] note here. or else [1]was that deliberate closer spacing?

Dark:
nothing really bad about this map. just it feels abit off in some spots.... O.o

star ~
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
White Chocolate
00:55:931 (1,3) - clap here

Shulin's Milk Chocolate
00:57:316 (5) - move it 2-3 squares up
01:33:778 (5) - move it six squares left

Dark Chocolate
Looks fine!

Finally, with good mapping, I can see some indications in a map which can help players in circular sliders!
It's rare to find maps which suggest people how to pass sliders like the one on 01:21:316 (4)... that was clever storyboarding!
A star for you ;3
vytalibus
osu! Alumni
870 posts
Joined May 2008
vytalibus
<Timing Sections>

Change the offset of the timing section in 3,865 ms to 3,900 ms.

<General>

RESNAP ALL THE DIFFICULTIES.

[Dark Chocolate]
02:00:787 (1) - I think the start point is meant to be snapped at the 1/3 line, not 1/2.
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
Overall :
PreviewTime: 60952[Dark Chocolate]
PreviewTime: 61019[Shulin's Milk Chocolate]
PreviewTime: 60952[White Chocolate]
Set Previewtime all the same.

[Dark Chocolate]
00:05:856 --->>00:07:378 - add some note here?i feel its kinda empty.(suggestion)
00:49:931 (1) - make it end on 00:50:855.

[Shulin's Milk Chocolat ]
Why dont set countdown in this diff since other diffs were setted?
Set countdown in this diff or cancel it in the others

[White Chocolate]
Fine.

star.
Cheedar
95 posts
Joined December 2008
Cheedar
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
I would pubble but I know someone would complain over

dark chocolate:
00:35:393 (1) - auto can only get 1000 (needs 2000)

so fix plz

edit:

ok all looks good
Pubbled! :)
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
[Dark Chocolate]

It might be my imagination, but some of the notes thoughout the map sound really rough on the beat. For example 00:44:162 (1,2,3,1,2,3). Sounds like a mix of 1/6's to 1/8's when I experimented with the notes. I may be wrong, but I suggest having this checked on.

For now, i'm not going to pop the pubble. Sorry, but pubble is popped. The notes has to be readjusted.
James2250
osu! Alumni
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James2250
my bad :(
Wizard Of Orz
965 posts
Joined May 2008
Wizard Of Orz
i told him to use 1/6 snap but he wouldnt listen
m980
Elite Mapper
1,234 posts
Here since the beginning
m980
Better yet just make it 1/3 divisor

Some sliders are also longer than they should be.

Go into 1/3 Divisor. Go to Timing > Recalculate Slider Lengths. And fix the broken sliders.

Also here's a difficulty. Name the difficulty whatever you want. JUST DON'T PUT "m980" IN THE DIFFICULTY NAME.
skiki_old
3 posts
Joined June 2009
skiki_old
[Dark Chocolate]
01:21:316 (4) - This slider is kind of weird

i like this map though, the song is awesome lol (:
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

skiki wrote:

[Dark Chocolate]
01:21:316 (4) - This slider is kind of weird

i like this map though, the song is awesome lol (:
whoops i accidentally kudosu'd you
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
Fixed a few dodgy sliders I noticed when playing, I'd double check the other difficulties to.

*Also adds star I forgot last time :P*

Download: Girls' Generation - Chocolate Love (ouranhshc) [Milk Chocolate].osu
Armin
osu! Alumni
2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Armin
Overall: Add the tag "Shulin" on all the difficulties and optimize the first offset: 3891.


[Easy]

Overall: Honestly I don't like it. The position of all the hitobjects seems a little... random?
Anyway I found just some problems. For the hitsounds modding download the file .osu at the end of the post.

00:14:117(Timing section) Add this timing section at the start of the spinner
00:22:239 (1,2) Move them in the middle of the grid, like in the picture:



00:28:008 (Break) Short break. Consider to remove it.
00:38:854 (1) Remove this new combo
00:40:239 (2) Add a new combo
00:40:701 (1) Remove the new combo
00:42:547 (1) As above

Overall Rating: 7/10

[iNiS980 Chocolate]

Overall: I love the iNiS Style but in this difficulty I think it's boring. Also, during the modding I found some ugly copy/paste.

01:34:085 (1,2,3,1,2,3) These hitobjects are offscreen, and they "hard" to see during the game. Consider to fix it.
01:41:470 (1,2,3,1,2,3) As above

Overall Rating: 7,5/10

[Milk Chocolate]

Overall: Increase the slider tick rate to 1. Good job with the hitsounds!

00:41:931(x) Place a hitcircle here
01:21:316 (4) This broke the clap-rythm. Add a clap at the end of the slider
01:49:008 (1) Finish
02:03:316 (6) 1/3 shorter
02:03:931 (1) 2/3 Back and then make it longer of another 2/3 of BPM
02:09:778 (1,2,3) Make a perfect triangle

Overall Rating 8/10

[Dark Chocolate]

Overall: Good difficulty, very fun to play. No major problems found, just some imperfections.

01:21:316 (4) I think this slider is unrankable. I'm afraid but the SB didn't help to me when I played this map.

For the hitsounds modding see the first attachment.

Overall Rating: 8,5/10

Download: Girls' Generation - Chocolate Love (ouranhshc) [White Chocolate].osu

Download: Girls' Generation - Chocolate Love (ouranhshc) [Dark Chocolate].osu
Last edited by Armin , edited 1 time in total.
Shulin
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Shulin
Fixes. :P

Download: Girls' Generation - Chocolate Love (ouranhshc) [Milk Chocolate].osu
DeathxShinigami
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Joined November 2008
DeathxShinigami
I don't have any complaints Armin took most of what I was going to post anyways xD

Starred.
m980
Elite Mapper
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Here since the beginning
m980

Armin wrote:

[iNiS980 Chocolate]

Overall: I love the iNiS Style but in this difficulty I think it's boring. Also, during the modding I found some ugly copy/paste.

01:34:085 (1,2,3,1,2,3) These hitobjects are offscreen, and they "hard" to see during the game. Consider to fix it.
01:41:470 (1,2,3,1,2,3) As above

Overall Rating: 7,5/10
These AREN'T offscreen. The are NOWHERE NEAR offscreen. What. Since they are on the edge of the grid (on the sides) means they are "Offscreen". I don't get it.
Armin
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Armin

m980 wrote:

Armin wrote:

[iNiS980 Chocolate]

Overall: I love the iNiS Style but in this difficulty I think it's boring. Also, during the modding I found some ugly copy/paste.

01:34:085 (1,2,3,1,2,3) These hitobjects are offscreen, and they "hard" to see during the game. Consider to fix it.
01:41:470 (1,2,3,1,2,3) As above

Overall Rating: 7,5/10
These AREN'T offscreen. The are NOWHERE NEAR offscreen. What. Since they are on the edge of the grid (on the sides) means they are "Offscreen". I don't get it.
Consider them a "bit" offscreen then, but they remain fastidious to see in my opinion.
anonymous_old
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anonymous_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Doomsday
  1. Timing looks good
  2. No tags? Im not sure what you could put in there, but there must be something
[WHITE CHOCOLATE]

Seems fine

[INIS980 CHOCOLATE]

Looks good

[MILK CHOCOLATE]

Good

[DARK CHOCOLATE]

Fine

Nice map. Everything checks out, but I'll let you have a look for some tags before I P-bubble

Starred
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
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Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Doomsday93 wrote:

No tags? Im not sure what you could put in there, but there must be something[/list]
DONE
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Doomsday
Hmm. ok then

Protobubbled
DeathxShinigami
1,176 posts
Joined November 2008
DeathxShinigami
I thought I did irc modding for this earlier on but I can't recall...Whatever.
whymeman
osu! Alumni
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whymeman
Alright then, bubbled.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
I don't wanna pop this, just fix this and i'll rank.

[Overall]

Remove file .osb from the folder and full submit.

[Difficulties]

[White Chocolate]

Remove bookmarks and unused sections from here -> 01:18:085 to 01:50:855.

[iNiS980 Chocolate]

Add m980 into the tags.

02:24:085 (x) - Remove unused timing section.
ouranhshc
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ouranhshc
fixed
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
Ranked.
mm201
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mm201
Online Offset: -10ms
Breeze
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Breeze
I chocolate U ~ ♡ :3
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