yf_bmp wrote:

Hi Sharlo~

from pm req

[mnemonic]
00:40:286 (3,4) - 错开一点? test一下可以知道是有足够时间看到有没有折返箭头的
00:49:558 - 这里怎么突然美丽 没鼓点没音乐
01:20:922 (5,6,7,8,1) - 其实vocal的节奏也不是像现在这样, 而且音乐里的鼓点也不是这样的...打起来和听起来都觉得有些怪 我知道 但为了好打一点 就做成了5连
02:10:013 (4) - 音乐里没这个节奏阿 而且这之后也没有旋律的变化, 也不建议这样自创1/8.. 干脆直接1/4+一次折返就好了 这……伴奏里有 抱歉 用伴奏做的图 伴奏是最原始的母带 和人声混缩后会有损耗
02:14:377 (3) - ^ ^
02:18:740 (1) - 像这个因为之后的旋律变了 所以我觉得还是可以用 必须严重说明我这里没有overmap 只是被人声盖住了【好吧我也不知道这样究竟算不算……
02:48:195 (5,6,7,8,1) - 这里我倒觉得没违和......估计是vocal正好对上节奏了吧
03:15:058 (5,6,7) - 等距? 我按DS排的呀
03:18:740 , 03:19:013 , 03:19:422 - 有三个音被吃了 因为觉得是Hard嘛主要还是想跟跟人声……fixed
03:27:468 , 03:27:740 , 03:28:149 - ^ fixed
上面的两条因为我觉得这个break有点长了...除非是故意弄成这样的梗0.0

03:43:831 (2,3,4) - 这里的间距突然变得很大..建议缩短 按前面的1/2距离(而且03:45:195 (4,5) - 这个1/1也很容易误读的) fixed
03:54:877 (1) - 转盘的音量降低 或者 消音 或者提前1/2或延后1/1结束 提前1/2结束
03:58:968 (1) - 转盘的音量降低 或者 消音 消音
04:51:740 (3,4) - 这两个位置不太好 和前后的挤在一起的感觉.. 可以再拉开些

[Normal]
00:24:740 (4,5) - ctrl+G 现在的4遮在滑条下对新人不太友好 fixed
01:20:377 (1) - 红线起的连续这么多1/2对normal有些难掌握 不如前移1/2? 或者像前面一样01:20:649 (2,3) - 这两个弄成滑条 fixed
02:47:650 (1,2,3,4) - ^ fixed
03:58:831 (1) - 降低音量 或者 消音 fixed
04:38:923 (2,3,4,5) - 你懂的 fixed
04:48:195 (4) - 红线起不太好啊感觉 延后1/2起头然后再补物件 会好点感觉


昨晚只睡4个小时 现在摸这图听这歌感觉困得不行了QAO
Good Luck~

sjoy wrote:

Mod for your birthday
happy birthday ^0^
[mnemonic]
00:10:831 (5) - 这个跳感觉大了，而且音乐没感觉跳的样子 那!又!不!说!怎!么!改!
00:21:740 加个物件 感觉比较连贯
00:22:695 (4) - 感觉可删 瞎好重一个鼓的
00:23:104 (5) - 这个滑条形状感觉略蠢... 擦你好歹拉一个再说蠢啊
00:24:468 (1) - http://puu.sh/9NV32/3cae66fe7c.jpg 为什么你总是要盖住鼓点
00:30:468 加个物件
00:32:649 ^ 为啥要把节奏塞得那么满阿
00:40:286 (3) - http://puu.sh/9NVa9/df0acafda8.jpg 为何要叠尾巴 感觉挺别扭的
00:51:740 (6,7,8,9) - OVERMAP 拉 http://puu.sh/9NVhL/bd78e6bcc1.jpg 你这么一说我反而觉得00:51:331 (4) - overmap了
00:59:922 (6,7) - http://puu.sh/9NVl8/bdcdd10860.jpg 跟歌词比较顺 不想红线起
01:01:558 (1) - http://puu.sh/9NVoQ/f26d3e600f.jpg 改了另一种
01:07:558 (4) - http://puu.sh/9NVrf/ec66f13234.jpg 没看见我不想遮住01:08:104 (1) - 吗
01:09:877 (7) - 删了 没音 去听伴奏
01:27:740 (1) - 156,308 比较有甩尾感 k
01:49:013 加物件
01:56:377 (2,3,4) - 真心觉得猎奇 尤其是折返滑条蓝线起的 就要这么猎奇
02:00:195 (6,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/9NVDu/41068d0259.jpg 又遮我02:00:877 (2) -
02:10:013 (4) - 为啥是1/8折返 感觉没有阿
02:14:377 (3) - ^
02:15:740 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/9NVLL/9ea45a83b4.jpg
02:18:740 (1) - 为啥是1/8折返 感觉没有阿
02:49:559 (2) - 碰到HP条了移下来点 猴
03:14:922 (4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/9NVVm/26bba930de.jpg
03:23:922 加个NOTE吧 overmap啦
03:49:558 (5) - http://puu.sh/9NW3d/acc6d2228b.jpg
03:53:922 (3) - http://puu.sh/9NW5Z/edabbbd0de.jpg

怎么我都在挑节奏阿 莫名

Mei wrote:

mod for birthday

[mnemonic]

• 
  这歌我感觉大部分地方都用不上1/4的节奏，比如00:51:468 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ，1/2完全足够了，唔为了送分着想考虑不用1/4？
  
  * 00:40:286 (3,4) - 这个地方我感觉flow蛮不顺，叠在尾巴上可能会好看些但是不太好打，建议吧3移到x72 y64 ， 这样234是个等间距的跳 好
  
  * 00:41:240 (5,6) - 不太喜欢这样的三连/.\
  
  * 00:46:286 (1,2,3) - 这个柑橘有点随便了，做个三角或者等ds的跳会显得干净一点 我忘了我当时怎么摆的……
  
  * 00:56:104 (2,3,4) - 不顺。。。建议这样 这样跳好大啊
  
  Picture

  
  
  * 01:03:740 (1) - 这个滑条感觉问题多多，按照前面你的做法，滑条都是更着人声的，这里却跟了鼓，而且01:04:558 也漏了音 跟的是后面那个"啊啊啊"
  
  * 01:20:922 (5,6,7,1) - 突发奇想。。这里貌似可以做成2个二连的节奏 那01:21:194 (7) - 怎么办
  
  * 02:06:740 唔。漏音? 这一段是跟的鼓
  
  * 02:29:922 (2,3,4) - 用ds调一下 好
  
  * 02:37:285 (5) - 感觉应该从这里开始就来个1/2的滑条 没看懂
  
  * 03:58:558 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g fixed
  
  * 04:23:649 (3,4) - ctrl+g fixed

其实我感觉不太美观。。。但是音效很不错，sb也很棒
不过那个sb显示的不是歌词吧，是什么呢 是台词

Hollow Wings wrote:

as ur req

General

• 
  02:20:104 (1) - 这里这种sb的fade突变，柑橘还是改成快速过度比较好 唔。。。想突变

mnemonic

1. 01:02:377 (2,3,4,5,6) - 正五边形，类似的你看着改吧 这个五边形是特地搞死强迫症的你信不信

没啥好说的啦，只是凑sp（其实还是想说no kd因为没啥好吐槽的噗 明明就是偷懒=。=

good luck

1. 00:36:740 (2,3) - ctrl+g this rhythm? I feel the stronger beats on 00:36:740 - and 00:37:286 -
2. 02:04:013 (2,3) - same as ^
3. 02:27:195 - missed slidertick clap?

1. 00:44:922 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - worried about this jump, I think it would be best to make it easier
2. 01:22:831 (3,4,5,1) - another jump i'm worried about, since the flow isn't very good here either.
3. 02:10:013 (4,6) - this overlap causes some readability problems, I'd recommend not stacking 6 like this
4. 02:32:650 (2,3,4,1) - this jump seems a bit much as well, and is pretty harsh flow wise since you have motion stopped with 1 being stacked under the end of 2, and then the large jump to 3
5. 03:53:922 (3) - could be easy to misread, since you've had very small spacing and then this nearly doubles it, try moving closer to 2

captin1 wrote:

hngg mnemonic

[Normal]

1. 00:36:740 (2,3) - ctrl+g this rhythm? I feel the stronger beats on 00:36:740 - and 00:37:286 - Sounds well
2. 02:04:013 (2,3) - same as ^ fixed
3. 02:27:195 - missed slidertick clap? fixed

[mnemonic]

1. 00:44:922 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - worried about this jump, I think it would be best to make it easier OK
2. 01:22:831 (3,4,5,1) - another jump i'm worried about, since the flow isn't very good here either. oh how could I make this
3. 02:10:013 (4,6) - this overlap causes some readability problems, I'd recommend not stacking 6 like this Ok I find a new position for it
4. 02:32:650 (2,3,4,1) - this jump seems a bit much as well, and is pretty harsh flow wise since you have motion stopped with 1 being stacked under the end of 2, and then the large jump to 3 not jump now
5. 03:53:922 (3) - could be easy to misread, since you've had very small spacing and then this nearly doubles it, try moving closer to 2 fixed

sorry for the delay, some of those i pointed out in the hard diff I think just don't fit the calm feel of the song. otherwise great, so call me back

captin1 wrote:

standard diffs are good for me, good luck~

BeatofIke wrote:

Circled already? Sharlo so pro owo
Anyways, call me once fro rank once you get a Piano icon! ^_^

Simple_Star wrote:

STD好快就get icon了lol
Here is Mania Mod.Take a quick mod
[NM]
Ruru. I see this is Poetmia's new GD name hhhhh
00:07:013 (7013|1,7286|4,7422|6) - Ctrl+H better in my opinion

00:25:013 (25013|3) - Maybe Move to 6 is better choose.Because Some players are left-hand space user

00:53:922 - Miss beat? Add a Note here.

01:07:831 (67831|1) - Move to 4

01:35:786 - can't understand why Double Notes.Underline heavy piano? sorry my bad www removed 1

01:42:468 (102468|3) - I think here hasn't piano sound there is x_x

01:43:558 (103558|2) - I think here hasn't drum or piano sound removed

02:21:740 (141740|3) - Move to 5 is better in my opinion

03:22:013 (202013|2,202285|4,202558|2) - This pattern can destroy newbie player hhh Try to Ctrl+J i removed the notes hhh

03:32:240 (212240|2,212513|2) - Move to 5 or 7 fix in different way

04:53:922 - My suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809586 good suggestion

unreplied = fix

[HD]
00:30:468 (30468|4) - Change to Note

00:50:104 (50104|3,50377|4) - Ctrl+J

fixed both of above

01:27:058 - Here has sound i added at 01:27:331 instead the sound is more clear

01:39:468 - Both have piano and drum.You catch them all So here i suggest you Add 1 more Note i think 1 note for all is more consistent , remain

01:41:649 - ^ ^

01:42:468 (102468|3) - Here hasn't sound in my opinion there is a piano there , maybe its low volume ( ? ) i chart using the instrumental mp3 so this one heard clearly

02:27:195 (147195|6) - Move this to 5 or Move 02:27:058 (147058|5) - to 5 fixed!

02:52:558 - It need change to 2 Holds in here remain changed a little pattern here

03:37:013 - Add a Note at 6

04:55:013 - Add a Note at 7.
fixed both ^

That's all.Good Luck~

yoshilove wrote:

ねこちゃんです。

column : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

ruminya~~~~

[Ruru's NM]
00:47:377 (47377|2) - move to 5 onegaiiii ><
01:18:468 (78468|5,78468|3) - remove clap???
02:07:286 (127286|3) - move to 02:07:422 removed clap hitsound but stay note at here cuz of beat , its hard to change the measure here for nm
02:32:649 (152649|0) - remove clap???

*03:22:286 - 20% volume plz~~
*03:23:786 - ^

03:37:013 - add note to 3 (kokodake 4 note trill?)

03:58:831 (238831|0) - remove ~~
*03:59:104 - add note to 6

[Ruru's HD]
00:08:649 (8649|2) - remove www
00:16:831 - add note to 2? nyaaaa (same 00:08:104)
00:26:104 (26104|1) - remove
00:34:831 (34831|0) - ^
01:53:377 (113377|1) - ^
02:02:104 (122104|1,122104|5) - ^
02:01:831 - add note to 2

02:32:649 (152649|1) - remove clap???

03:14:377 - add two note
03:14:649 (194649|2) - remove

*03:22:286 - 20% volume plz~~
*03:23:786 - ^

03:58:831 (238831|0) - remove??
or move to 03:58:695

*03:59:104 - add note to 6


04:16:286 (256286|4,256286|1) - remo~... vocal note??? (no piano sound) but nice note ww ww yes vocal note ww

neko neko neko~~
nice chart ~ fit to song
no problem?? meow? www

richardfeder wrote:

/.\ Mania mod
Nice Storyboard
Remove any unnecessary/unused Green line actually used for hitsound volume and sample

Rumia's Normal

0123456
00:22:013 (22013|4,22149|5) - Kind of weird imo, especially referring to 00:20:377 (20377|1,20513|3,20649|5,22013|4,22149|5,22286|6,22558|2,22695|1,22831|0) - . delete? fix a little part on this section

00:52:013 (52013|2,52558|0) - exchange their columns

00:53:649 (53649|2) - consider using double notes to highlight the piano chord?

01:02:649 (62649|1) - add? (+w)

01:24:468 (84468|2) - move to 5

01:27:058 - add a note

01:37:558 (97558|2,101922|2,103831|5,104104|3,104649|5) - delete. Don't mix instruments up. imo just map piano is far more better xD decide to mapp the bass only ww

01:49:831 (109831|3) - add a note

01:58:558 (118558|3) - ^

02:09:331 (129331|2) - add a note?

02:38:377 (158377|3) - add a note
...why blank? >.> mislook 363

02:47:649 (167649|3) - move to 1 2

02:54:331 (174331|3) - add a note

03:10:831 (190831|1) - move to 4
'
03:56:104 - SC1 40% kind of too loud here imo...some even cover piano chord
add a green line and lower to 25~30%?

04:19:422 (259422|3) - delete? moved 1/4 in previous

04:53:240 (293240|2) - delete i think its ok , its not hard tho

Rumia's Hard

00:22:013 (22013|2,22149|3,22286|4) - ctrl+h
00:22:558 (22558|2,22695|1,22831|0) - ctrl+J

01:36:468 (96468|4) - should be double notes

01:38:649 - Again don't mix instruments up -> piano only/drums only/all piano+all drum
Never do half piano half drum hmm actually nvm fixed

02:10:831 (130831|3) - move to 6

02:13:286 (133286|6) - move left by one column
02:13:558 (133558|5,133831|4,134104|3) - right
02:14:377 (134377|4,134513|6,134649|4) - left by one column

02:33:740 (153740|2) - move to 6

02:37:013 - Didn't map 1/4?? highlight the strong part , felt better not to add 1/4

02:40:286 (160286|2,160422|3,160558|4) - move right by one column 345 is more confortable i think , remain

03:56:104 - SC1 40% kind of too loud here imo...some even cover piano chord
add a green line and lower to 25~30%?

04:11:649 (251649|1,251649|3) - add notes

04:13:831 (253831|3) - ^ didnt hear anything!

OK~

Good luck and summon BATs...