1. Easy (1 stars, 94 notes)
2. Hard (4.32 stars, 362 notes)
3. Normal (2.09 stars, 214 notes)
4. orion's Nonstop (4.32 stars, 374 notes)

S i R i R u wrote:

Dled ~

just wait for update when you Finished XD

Leorda wrote:

[Kiai]
Set this kiai to all diff
01:10:126 - 01:31:944
02:26:490 - 02:37:399

Lokamp wrote:

orion's Nonstop
02:42:853 (1) - move it 2 squares down

Leorda wrote:

Ayeonghaseyo!!!!

[General]
1) Source? Postponed..I will ask orion.
Put it in~
2) Argh! I can't hear a hitsound! Make it louder?! I arranged higher 1/2 tick my diff which is same orion's. I think this volume is good. >_<
(Well, If you can't hear well, arrange effect volume in game option > Audio tab.)

[Kiai]
Set this kiai to all diff
01:10:126 - 01:31:944
02:26:490 - 02:37:399
I will not~. I think this form is enough~

[Easy]
01:23:932 (1) - Move forward to red tick and cut short to 01:26:489 Replaced another form....


[Normal]
02:28:876 (x) - Add note here Added.

Not bad
STAR

Lokamp wrote:

Easy
00:23:251 (spinner) - let it start on 00:23:591 (same end point)
01:23:932 (spinner) - let it start on 01:24:273 (same end point)
Hmm..spinner problem is similar that Leorda. Anyway, Replaced these spinner. But not exactly placing with your modding list.

Normal
It's Ok!

Hard
Ok even this mode!

Make the Easy mode as long as Normal and Hard to see this well-spaced map closer to the rank goal!
Hmm..this spacing is unrankable...? Well I will consider it~
I don't change.

DJPop wrote:

~orion's Nonstop~
00:15:922 (1) - remove hitfinish
00:16:944 (3) - remove sliderwhistle
00:28:535 (7) - new combo
00:34:331 (6) or (7) - ^
00:39:785 (6) - ^
00:39:785 (6) - remove hitfinish
00:44:899 (7) - new combo
00:50:353 (5) - weird clap
00:50:694 (6) - new combo
00:56:490 (6) - ^
01:01:603 (9) - ^
01:34:331 (5) - ^
01:39:785 (9) - ^
01:50:183 (5) - ^
02:09:444 (1) - remove new combo
02:10:467 (2) - new combo
02:12:854 (7) - ^
02:56:830 (4) - ^
03:01:604 (5) - ^
03:07:058 (9) - ^
03:17:456 (5) - ^

DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
Fine.

~Normal~
02:01:944 (1,2) - looks weird, make them more symmetrical
Fixed

~Hard~
01:25:126 (8) - new combo
02:30:581 (8) - ^
No~~~
02:47:626 (3,4) - stack on the end of previous slider
02:51:206 (1) - start on red tick
Fixed~~


+Star

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

orioncomet.jpg is kinda weirdly sized, lol. Resize to 800x600? < It ok =,=

I'd recommend copying the .osb into the individual .osu files, and then cutting off the ends. For example, Easy should fade out the credits (at 1:52 or so, not at the beginning) sooner and end right there, since there are no notes past that point anyways.

Timings are inconsistent; please fix.

orion's is at the same star count as Hard; my screen put his diff above Hard on the list. Since it has a higher max score, adjust difficulty settings or something on Hard or orion's so that his is properly placed in the last slot. < It's because my diff have Circle Size is 2, not 3, make my diff look easy for star count

SPOILER

A1,A2: "Lyric translate by" should be "Lyrics translated by".
L3: Typo? "he" should be "The"?
L5: "ring off"? Don't know what that means, sorry.
L5, L6: I feel like "Here's" or "Here is" should be "He's".
L8: "dreaming to you isn't" should be "dreams of you aren't".
L11: "You are" should probably just be "You're", since you used that on L10.
L13: Don't capitalize "It's", and it should end with "your heart" instead of just "heart".

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Timings are inconsistent; please fix.
Where? @.@

[Hard]

00:16:944 (3,4) - I guess I'll be nazi picky on one thing. XD Stacking isn't perfect here, use 0.0x distance snap with grid snap off to align it to look nicer.Fixed. But stacking system is unjustly.

Tanmak wrote:

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Timings are inconsistent; please fix.
Where? @.@

[Hard]

00:16:944 (3,4) - I guess I'll be nazi picky on one thing. XD Stacking isn't perfect here, use 0.0x distance snap with grid snap off to align it to look nicer.Fixed. But stacking system is unjustly.

Thanks~ >.<

Mystearica wrote:

The translations could use better grammar but hell if I'll start nazing English for a Thai song. Pretty good overall. < orz,, sorry, my grammar so poor ;_;

[orion's Nonstop]

03:29:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Add a fadeout effect on this with a few whistles (default soft whistle, not your custom) or no whistles.

Mystearica wrote:

[Easy]

I think making the circles 1 tick bigger would look a bit better, but it's not necessary.
Changed~ >.<

Mystearica wrote:

Normal and Easy uses different offset from theo ther 2, just wondering if you were intentionally doing this.

Good job.

Kytoxid wrote:

For initial offsets,

Easy/Normal: 10126
Hard/orion: 12854

Please mmake them the same.

Mystearica wrote:

• 1: I can't hear CLAP usually
  2: I bet it's no important, The bookmarks are little late than the timeline

• 00:39:104 (3) Make it more curved
  01:32:967 (x) Add note
  02:28:535 (4) Down 1 grid

• 02:43:876 (2) Better slider?
  02:46:433 (x) Add Note?
  02:48:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) 1 Grid up

• 01:30:581 (6) New combo
  01:51:035 Why kiai?
  03:30:922 (7) Finish

sonnyc wrote:

[General]

• 1: I can't hear CLAP usually
  2: I bet it's no important, The bookmarks are little late than the timeline

[Orion]

• 01:30:581 (6) New combo < no
  01:51:035 Why kiai? < why not?
  03:30:922 (7) Finish. < no

sonnyc wrote:

Kawaii Boy~
My Kawaii Boy~

[General]

• 1: I can't hear CLAP usually Hmm..I can hear well.
  2: I bet it's no important, The bookmarks are little late than the timeline
  (....) 북마크는 실제 게임상에서는 아무런 상관이 없습니다..;
  단지 맵 만들 때 위치 찾기 편하게 책갈피처럼 걸어두는 것 뿐이에요.

[Normal]

• 00:39:104 (3) Make it more curved Fixed
  01:32:967 (x) Add note No.
  02:28:535 (4) Down 1 grid No..-.-

[Hard]

• 02:43:876 (2) Better slider? what is that mean? I think it's fine.
  02:46:433 (x) Add Note? No.
  02:48:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) 1 Grid up I fixed slider instead of all note grid upping.

Yay! No jumps!
Good map, star.

Tanmak wrote:

Oh....then pubble is popped..?

ztrot wrote:

About 10ms early
Fix that and I'll bubble

osuplayer111 wrote:

Nice and relaxing map. Love it.

Ranked!