Takuma:
Sounds:
Too many random sounds... or other sounds doesnt fit with the song.
imo clap doesnt really fit on some parts.
Those parts with the green lines before the last chorus.. What are those?
Could use some slider ticks, default soft-slidertick really fits the song, but you/we will be needing to be creative for it to make it sound great. And it doesnt even require alot of green lines for it.
I'm supposed to use normal soft, soft whistle, and soft slidertick for this before, but it made my brain hurt ( I got 1 creativity stat :3 )
Layout:
Not as fun as you said
I loved your candyman map though! *hint*
00:18:338 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - they are not snapped? Using 1/8 divisor?
I feel that you rushed the last part of the song... Correct?
Score:
Obviously your diff is harder than mine by a little bit, I'm not sure whether to use this as an easier difficulty or a harder one because of the score. Mine is 4.4m? Yours is less than half of mine since you did not finish until the end of the song I guess.
Again, you could use some slider ticks in your diff? I will full submit later since I added some blank sounds for you to use, and for manipulating slider ticks..
Overall:
Did not passed my standards, but almost there.
Try to update it more, okay?
Question:
Can I have my own kudosu? xD
Thats all for now.