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Orianthi - According To You

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saymun
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saymun
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, 31 January 2010 at 1:42:49 AM

Artist: Orianthi
Title: According To You
Tags: Electric Guitar Rock Pop
BPM: 131
Filesize: 6963kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.9 stars, 81 notes)
  2. Hard (4.81 stars, 413 notes)
  3. Insane (4.99 stars, 606 notes)
  4. Normal (3.33 stars, 247 notes)
Download: Orianthi - According To You
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My second finished beatmap ;D
Thanks to Breeze for the hitcircle ;D
Last edited by saymun , edited 35 times in total.
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
Insane is crazy XD

Full of streams but fun.

Put a bg to normal and hard

and get more star plz XD

First star <3
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
aesopl19193
All in all , no technical problems i can find, so here are my suggestions only~ =]


Normal

I think it is too hard for normal ...
too many 1/2 streams...
I just think that all of the timing of bpmx2 should be cancel .


Hard
No problems found

insane
02:52:909 - 4 - It's seem that the jump is unnecessary

Great song and great map =]
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Normal
Sounds fine!

Hard
00:45:581 (5,1) - move them a square left
01:48:100 (1) - whistle and clap this slider's end

Insane
00:13:291 (2) - move it 7 squares right
00:15:123 (2) - maybe move this 5 squares down and 5 squares left
00:44:894 (1,2,3,4) - stack these sliders's ends exactly one on another one
01:03:901 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move them 2 squares down
01:37:336 (2,3,4,5,6) - strange spacing... fix it and/or set new combos
01:45:352 (4,5,6,7) - like upper...
01:51:306 (7) - move it 1-2 squares left
02:09:397 (6,7,8) - move 8th a square down and the others a square up
02:45:809 (1,2,3,4) - stack these sliders's ends exactly one on another one

I've finally found high quality!
Your streams and jumping section are well-playable, so enjoy a double star ;3
saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
saymun

aesopl19193 wrote:

02:52:909 - 4 - It's seem that the jump is unnecessary
I like accelerating and decelerating spacing ;D

Lokamp wrote:

Hard
00:45:581 (5,1) - move them a square left
01:48:100 (1) - whistle and clap this slider's end

Insane
00:44:894 (1,2,3,4) - stack these sliders's ends exactly one on another one
01:03:901 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move them 2 squares down
02:45:809 (1,2,3,4) - stack these sliders's ends exactly one on another one
Fixed these

Lokamp wrote:

Insane
00:13:291 (2) - move it 7 squares right
00:15:123 (2) - maybe move this 5 squares down and 5 squares left
I wanted to keep them change their spacing every 1/2 beat... if more people want to keep it consistent, ill change it

Lokamp wrote:

01:37:336 (2,3,4,5,6) - strange spacing... fix it and/or set new combos
01:45:352 (4,5,6,7) - like upper...
I tried following the half-backing mapping technique. I moved the beats around so it may be easier to notice now

Lokamp wrote:

01:51:306 (7) - move it 1-2 squares left
I can't anymore because of the distance spacing (1.4x)=S

Lokamp wrote:

02:09:397 (6,7,8) - move 8th a square down and the others a square up
If I do that, it won't be a neat circle anymore?
Teara
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Teara
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Azure_Kite
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Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Overall]
  1. Tags: Tags are helpful for helping others find your beatmap. Can you add some to all difficulties?
[Normal]
these 2x timing sections really shouldn't be in the easiest difficulty of the beatmap. I suggest either mapping this without 2x sections or mapping an Easy difficulty. The difficulty is also just a little too high for newer players, so I suggest you just make an Easy.

Apart form this, no problems found

[Hard]
No problems found

[Insane]
No problems found, pretty insane, though.

I find no problems with this map. I recommend you make an Easy over changing Normal to make it easier, I don't see the point of changing an already problem free map. Add some tags if you can think of any, make an Easy diff and I think this will be ready for a proto bubble.

Starred

EDIT: With the inclusion of an Easy and a few minor changes I think this is ready for a proto-bubble
Alace
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Alace
Pretty nice work

IMO insane doesn`t fit the song well.some 1/2 jumps are really crazy
01:35:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - lol
01:53:596 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:19:245 (1) - this part is 1/6 1/4 doesn`t sounds good

Hard is the best diff <3
saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
saymun
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
jericho2442
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jericho2442
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Last edited by jericho2442 , edited 1 time in total.
saymun
299 posts
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Topic Starter
saymun
Stroke out what i did ;D

jericho2442 wrote:

EDIT: oh add some TAG's you have none ;)

[Easy]
01:37:794 (1) - a bit too far offscreen

[Normal]
00:22:222 (3) - new combo
00:22:451 (1) - remove new combo
00:43:978 (1,2) - spacing is wrong, move closer
00:54:970 (1,2,3) - line up (3) with (1)
(suggestion) 01:50:390 (3,4,5,6,7) - ewww ugly
01:53:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - these could be lined up better
02:12:274 - wow this break feels waay to long, when playing it i had enough time to start messing around in #mod >_>
start mapping again at either 02:25:199 - or 02:26:573 -
02:41:688 (2) - line up with (1) and (3)

[Hard]
00:22:222 (3) - new combo
00:22:451 (1) - remove new combo
00:36:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i like this, but i think it would be better for both sides to tilt the same amount [I prefer having a linear increase in distance spacing XD so i'll leave this]
00:47:642 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - <33333 great job :)
01:35:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - dont like this spacing messup at all, my suggestion is 01:35:276 (1,2,3,4) - then a jump, then 01:36:192 (1,2,3,4) - i will leave you to place them ;)
01:53:596 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this could look better :/ just feels ugly to play
02:02:528 (1) - line up with (2)
(suggestion) 02:53:825 (6) - i dont like the slow down on this

[Insane]
01:26:115 (1,2,3,4) - the spacing of (3,4) is different than (1,2) would look and play much better with them all the same
01:35:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hahaha im a sucker for this pattern, <333333 great job :D
stream sorted out in irc ;)
02:52:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - dont like this spacing messup at all, my suggestion is 01:35:276 (1,2,3,4) - then a jump, then 01:36:192 (1,2,3,4) - i will leave you to place them ;)

LOVE this difficulty hehe XD

____________________
will star once these stuff are fixed
jericho2442
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jericho2442
hey :P

remove "according to you orianthi" from tags, there not needed since there in the title

also starred now ;)

do not kudo this post
Diasios
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Joined August 2008
Diasios
This map is already proto-bubbled D:

Btw, all it's ok, starred~
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

~ Remove "According to You" and "Orianthi" from tags in all difficulties these are covered by the song title and artist. Also is Michael Jackson really relevant to this song even if she had some connection to him?
~ BG color black?

Easy:

~ Remove audio lead in.

Some new combo spam but meh.

Normal:

~ Remove audio lead in.

01:35:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing weird for a normal, doesn't play too well either.

Hard:

~ Stacking Leniency 0.4.
~ Remove audio lead in.

No other major issues, very jumpy for a Hard it plays like another insane. I agree with Alace this was the best difficulty.

Insane:

~ Raise Stacking Leniency to 0.4 - 0.2 is unrankable and you have a lot of hidden notes.
~ Remove Audio lead in.

01:37:336 (2,3,4) - Not fun.
01:37:909 (5) - New combo for readability.
01:44:779 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Hard to see the patterns for this whole section, I blame the white hit circles.
02:20:390 (8,9,10,11) - New combo 9 or something it's almost impossible to tell what's going on,
02:21:650 (5,6,7) - ^ New combo 6 or 7
02:24:512 (12) - Not aligned to the stack.
02:36:190 (7) - New combo...
02:43:519 (7) - ^

This difficulty was hard to read, the streams were ok.

Popping the pubble, stacking leniency needs fixing, might benefit from some more modding in insane.
saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
saymun
Stroke out what i fixed

Shulin wrote:

General:

~Remove "According to You" and "Orianthi" from tags in all difficulties these are covered by the song title and artist. Also is Michael Jackson really relevant to this song even if she had some connection to him? Yeah, She was Michael Jackson's lead guitarist
~ BG color black?

Easy:
~ Remove audio lead in.

Some new combo spam but meh.

Normal:

~ Remove audio lead in.
01:35:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing weird for a normal, doesn't play too well either.

Hard:
~ Stacking Leniency 0.4.
~ Remove audio lead in.

No other major issues, very jumpy for a Hard it plays like another insane. I agree with Alace this was the best difficulty.

Insane:

~ Raise Stacking Leniency to 0.4 - 0.2 is unrankable and you have a lot of hidden notes.
~ Remove Audio lead in.

01:37:336 (2,3,4) - Not fun. I don't think EVERYTHING needs to be fun...but if you really insist, I'll change it
01:37:909 (5) - New combo for readability.
01:44:779 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Hard to see the patterns for this whole section, I blame the white hit circles.
02:20:390 (8,9,10,11) - New combo 9 or something it's almost impossible to tell what's going on,
02:21:650 (5,6,7) - ^ New combo 6 or 7
02:24:512 (12) - Not aligned to the stack.
02:36:190 (7) - New combo...
02:43:519 (7) - ^
This difficulty was hard to read, the streams were ok.

Popping the pubble, stacking leniency needs fixing, might benefit from some more modding in insane.
Breeze
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Breeze
Sorry for my late mod
Then mod start!

[General]
  1. Add a audio lead-in about 1s-2s please, music starts too fast, all diffculties
[Easy]
  1. 01:50:390 and 01:51:306 - why no clap here?
[Normal]
  1. 01:42:604 (1,2,3,4) - maybe (1,2) overlapped and (3,4) overlapped is better
[Hard]
  1. 01:35:962 (1) and 01:36:878 (1) - seem a little hard to understand
  2. 02:38:710 (5) - 1 grid up
  3. 02:39:168 (7) - 2 grid up
[Insane]
  1. fine
and here's your requested hitcircle


nice song and great map~
star
saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
saymun
thanks for the circle Breeze ;D
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
Easy
00:31:153 (1) – Shorten End of Spinner to 00:32:069, newbies aren’t good at spin recoveries

Increase HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty by 1

Normal
01:35:504 (2,4) –
02:35:504 (2, 8) –
02:37:565 (2, 4) – Being Normal, might be better to remove these :)

02:48:558 (stream) – Try building up to the stream instead. See attachments:

Hard & Insane
Nothing wrong from what I can see, but I’m not sure about the spacing. Ask JInxyjem about the spacing.

Overall, I think this is an awesome map. I really hope this gets ranked xD
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
I can't find any major problems in this map, it's very well made ^^

Only some minor things that bugged me:

- Hard:
  • .Suggestions:
    01:14:665 (7) - feels out of the pattern
    02:07:795 (6) - very misreadable, it seems there's a 1/2 delay, when it's actually 1/1. Consider this more than a suggestion, please.
- Insane:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:14:207 (4) - copy 00:13:291 (2), paste where 00:14:207 (4) is, then press CTRL-H Actually, the first three combos are like that, so i suppose it was intentional.
    00:57:260 - where's the spinner? O.O
Here's my star.
I'm not popping the protobubble because the map is great, mine are mostly suggestions. ^^
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

I'm not popping the protobubble because the map is great, mine are mostly suggestions. ^^
;_; wasn't this already popped? Gotta wait a few days till it can be reprotobubbled

Easy-
It's good

Normal-
Since the map is well arranged... I'm just ganna go very nazi here-
SPOILER
01:07:337 (7) - down+right one to have this look like the other side of this combo
01:38:481 (4) - down a tick to equal the spacing of (2)
01:50:161 (2) - down+right a tick ~.~
02:09:856 (8) - up+right to equal (1) in the combo >:

Hard- Nice patterns~
02:26:573 (1,1,1,1,1) - would sound better without claps (like Normal)
02:54:054 - is this clap in the wrong place? remove and add to 02:54:512 (1)?

Insane- weeeeeeeee
01:35:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - whoa, extreme jumps out of nowhere xD! ztrot formation plz
01:46:268 (1,3) - just pointing out, I don't have any problems with these stacked sliders

I'm don't really like a note having two or more hitsounds, but its not technical~ can't re-proto-bubble yet T.T~
ouranhshc
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Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
Insane
00:24:283 (10) - make this a 1/2 slider (slider to next red tick)


this is all i found

Awesome map

star~
vytalibus
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vytalibus
[Hard]

01:55:199 (8) - Spacing is far off in comparison with the other notes in that pattern.

[Expert]

02:23:596 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - It's kind of hard to notice the timing of these beats in this stack. Consider moving some.

This is an awesome map. Really would love to see this get ranked.

EDIT: Changes seen. Starred.
Mystearica
Mystearica
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Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
Very clean maps overall, as you can tell by the other MATs' comments.

[General]

.osb file can be deleted, if you'd like.
Consider mapping to the end; you're almost there already.

[Easy]

00:31:153 (1) - A bit too fast for Easy.
01:29:779 (1) - ^

[Normal]

00:23:367 (4) - Consider adjusting this bit to look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1824
01:53:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1-2-3 and 3-4-5 are slightly different; intentional?
02:55:886 (1,2,3,4) - I thought this looked a bit messy, but it's okay.

[Hard]

00:23:596 (5) - Seems slightly off-symmetrical; duplicated the 3, and flip and reverse it to replace this one.
01:21:764 (4,5) - I recommend new combos on these 2 notes to make the jump a bit easier to read.
01:47:871 (2) - ^
02:08:253 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Consider making this a nicer circle; make copies of the 1, and use the Ctrl-Shift-R to rotate it by 45 degrees at a time.

[Insane]

I really liked this map, except a few parts. XD

01:02:299 (1,2) - Up a grid for consistency.
01:42:604 (1) - This doublet section seemed to not really follow anything in the music; is there a particular reason to use it instead of a normal 1/2 pattern? Threw me off, lol.
02:08:253 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same thing as the last comment on Hard, this could be a cooler circle.
02:49:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - That's mean. Let's not be THAT much of a jerk. XD (especially with such high OD)

Star~
saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
saymun
Stroke out what i changed

Kytoxid wrote:

Very clean maps overall, as you can tell by the other MATs' comments.

[General]

.osb file can be deleted, if you'd like. Do i delete it then do a full submission? because i normally just do a standard submission
Consider mapping to the end; you're almost there already. Hehe ok, i mapped a little further but not to the end, since I think the BPM changes (and slightly also because of a small cbf factor XD)

[Easy]

00:31:153 (1) - A bit too fast for Easy.
01:29:779 (1) - ^

[Normal]

00:23:367 (4) - Consider adjusting this bit to look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1824
01:53:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1-2-3 and 3-4-5 are slightly different; intentional?
02:55:886 (1,2,3,4) - I thought this looked a bit messy, but it's okay.

[Hard]

00:23:596 (5) - Seems slightly off-symmetrical; duplicated the 3, and flip and reverse it to replace this one.
01:21:764 (4,5) - I recommend new combos on these 2 notes to make the jump a bit easier to read.
01:47:871 (2) - ^
02:08:253 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Consider making this a nicer circle; make copies of the 1, and use the Ctrl-Shift-R to rotate it by 45 degrees at a time. (yay I just learnt something new

[Insane]

I really liked this map, except a few parts. XD

01:02:299 (1,2) - Up a grid for consistency.
01:42:604 (1) - This doublet section seemed to not really follow anything in the music; is there a particular reason to use it instead of a normal 1/2 pattern? Threw me off, lol.
02:08:253 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same thing as the last comment on Hard, this could be a cooler circle.
02:49:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - That's mean. Let's not be THAT much of a jerk. XD (especially with such high OD) Hahah XD Alright it shall be changed!

Star~
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
Yeah, you need to full submit if any files other than the .osu files are changed. :)
GladiOol
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GladiOol
IRC Modding~

Pubbled!
CheeseWarlock
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CheeseWarlock
It's no masterpiece, but this map is a lot of fun. One thing, though; it needs to include a hitcircleoverlay.png in the folder. Aside from that, this has my bubble.

Oh, and add 4ms to the offset while you're at it.
Skyripper
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Skyripper
Your notes aren't snapped!

Resnap ALL notes in ALL difficulties!
saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
saymun
i've fixed them, but im having trouble uploading it since im overseas, the internet is really dodgy
Breeze
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Breeze
hitcircleoverlay here


no kds for this post
good luck to your map ：P
saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
saymun
Alright, everything SHOULD be updated if this china-net doesnt fail me.....so BATs come recheck it ASAP XD
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Joined April 2009
Xgor
[All diffs]
I would prefer if you had the preview point at 00:31:619 but if you like it as it is, keep it.

[Easy]
:)

[Normal]
Have pretty high HP drain for an Normal :/
Please lower it!

[Hard]
Also has high HP drain...

[Insane]
I suck......

Great solid map without any mayor problems :)
*star*
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
Easy
00:29:329 (1) - Replace with a spinner to either 00:31:161, 00:32:077 or 00:32:535 (I recommend 00:32:077, but you may think recovery is a bit short, just IMO)

Normal
Feels a bit like a Normal+ (a Hard Normal, Easy Hard), especially with all the continuous beats. Maybe rename? Some other ideas I have.

00:25:665 (1, 1) - Take away one Slider 1/2 tick off the end of the timeline to make it more Normal-ish.
00:29:329 (1) - An awesome idea: Shorten the actual slider so it's half the length, and extend it to 00:31:047.
EDIT: Looks like you did this at 01:27:955 (1), why didn't you do it here? D:

00:56:810 (5) - Remove this, and start the Spinner here instead (ending at the same place though)
01:08:489 (1 ~ 4) - Stack them all.
01:14:215 (5 ~ 7) - Maybe replace with a repeating slider?
01:24:291 (1, 1) - Same as before.

02:27:497 (1) -
02:29:329 (1) - No New Combo

Hard
Feels more like an Easy Insane. Maybe increase Circle Size by 1? Otherwise fine.

Insane
☆EXCELLENT!☆
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
Also, please remove "fun" and "cool" and probably also "sexy" from the tags. XD
Andrea
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Andrea
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
saymun
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Pasonia
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Pasonia
I was about to say "warn of quick sliders" but that might end up spoiling the fun of the map.
Andrea
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Andrea
Ranked.
Breeze
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Breeze
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
ouranhshc
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Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
congratz
Hanyuu
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Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
congrats

overmapped
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
yay, Finally ranked saymun :). Congrats.
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nice rhythm
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