1. good job in SB, but I had to say, the white flash hurts eye ;_;, it appears too much

1. 00:26:253 - put this timing section a little early, if someone hit the circle too early, the slider speed would from slow to fast,remmber timing secion with sound/BPM change should be put a little early than notes
2. 00:35:484 (1), 00:36:253 (3) - why here no clap?
3. 00:57:792 - add a note?
4. 01:06:253 (2) - make the end of slider overlapped with 01:07:023 (2)
5. 01:49:715 (2,3,4), 01:55:869()1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - these notes huddle together, hard to read
6. 02:17:792 (1) - add clap
7. 02:33:753 (1,2) - these 2 notes seem to be a little strange, they don't match the music

1. 00:38:176 (1) - add finish
2. 03:05:484 - these notes confused me *_*
3. [hard] is fun to play

Shulin wrote:

General:

~ Update the beatmap description to say to download from Dec 29th (new mp3 needs new download). Fixed
~ BG color to black (prevents the blue flash when loading though no one else seems to care but me lol) Fixed
~ Lunatic Princess.jpeg doesn't seem to be used, delete? It's used for the other parts of the SB. The bg is too big so I resized it.


Timing:

Offset: 110 ~ this could be my UO (so you may want a second opinion) but this works much better for me, try it and see what you think fixed

Also the offset currently starts on the vocal instead of the beat, this only seems to mess with the stanza's a little so nothing major.

Normal:

00:52:994 (1) - Remove new combo
00:53:571 (3) - Add new combo
01:55:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I didn't like the slow down here it plays too cramped you could reposition the notes so they fall vertically or horizontally so they are easier to hit, nothing technically wrong though.
02:06:840 (1) - Remove new combo

Hard:

00:11:638 (1) - End on the white tick.
03:05:676 (3) - Not snapped
03:05:771 (4) - ^

Nice map, I'll happily proto bubble when the unsnapped objects are fixed :D

~ Star

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Mapped.png",320,240
 M,0,15879,,232,394
 S,0,15879,,0.6825598
 M,0,15879,17561,232,394,261,394
 F,0,17417,18330,1,0.02720016

Gladi wrote:

1. This map needs an Easy diff, since Normal is too hard.

Shulin wrote:

Since you added an Easy I thought I'd check it

Easy:

~ I know Gladi said Easy but this is unfailable right now, raise HP drain rate by 1-2 ticks and overall difficulty by 2-3 ticks doing this still brings the star rating at 2.03ish, so it's still an Easy.

00:00:108 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Perhaps replace some of the sliders for single beats, that way you can break up this long combo and spread the sliders out a little.
00:35:107 (1) - Extend to white tick [Confusing because it ends on a blue tick quite suddenly]
00:35:877 (2) - Shorten to white tick, add a return?
00:36:838 (3) - Delete if you take ^ suggestions.
00:52:992 (3) - Looks neater underneath 00:50:877 (2) - adjust rest of combo if you take this suggestion.
00:53:569 (4) - New combo

Ending the easy at 01:33:954 seems a better place.

Make sure to raise the OD it makes the map look a lot neater and more fun to play.

Normal:

Raise the Hp drain rate a little (4th tick works well imo) ~ sorry for missing this earlier but it shouldn't be on the lowest tick especially for a Normal.

I won't pop the proto bubble but Easy does need some tweaking, feel free to ask me to recheck

Skyripper wrote:

[Easy]
00:58:569 (2) - You need to storyboard an arrow pointing which way the slider goes, or extend it so you can see the endpoint. In easy or any difficulty, sliders like this are generally unrankable

[Normal]
03:05:492 (1) - one less repeat

post when you've done this stuff and I'll gladly bubble! Great map!

Skyripper wrote:

If you added the arrow I don't see it. Normal is now fine.

Try a full upload?

Skyripper wrote:

Ok.. had to delete it and redownload. It's showing up now!

bubbled! great job

A vocal version of:
Flight of the Bamboo Cutter ~ Lunatic Princess


*Kaguya Houraisan's Theme*


Vocals: Sayuri
Arrangement: NYO
Circle: Silver Forest
Album: Lunatic Beat

Lybydose wrote:

All difficulties

Resnap kiai sections. 1st should begin at 69,338 and 2nd should begin at 149,338. Fixed

Is this from an album called "Lunatic Beat"? It looks kind of odd seeing the same source and song name on the song selection list. Album is named Lunatic Beat >.<

Easy

00:35:107 (1) - did you forget a clap here? The claps don't match up at this spot in all difficulties. Check this part to make sure it's hitsounded like you want it. fixed
01:02:223 (5) - I see you mapped this to the lyrics, but I think it sounds better if you move it ahead 1/4 to the white tick because that follows the clap pattern you've set up, and it's also more appropriate to this difficulty level. Also add a clap to it if you do that. fixed

Normal

01:54:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - Confusing (especially for normal), even though it is spaced properly. I suggest either increasing the space between 2 and 3 or mapping the 3,4,5 to go in a different direction, or make it obvious in some other manner (see example). http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2074 Made easier

Misaki Takahashi wrote:

01:54:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - Confusing (especially for normal), even though it is spaced properly. I suggest either increasing the space between 2 and 3 or mapping the 3,4,5 to go in a different direction, or make it obvious in some other manner (see example). http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2074 Made easier

Lybydose wrote:

Misaki Takahashi wrote:

01:54:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - Confusing (especially for normal), even though it is spaced properly. I suggest either increasing the space between 2 and 3 or mapping the 3,4,5 to go in a different direction, or make it obvious in some other manner (see example). http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2074 Made easier

Huh, it's the same as it was before. Did you forget to upload or save or something?

Lybydose wrote:

Ok uhh, could you make all the storyboard elements that occur after 01:34:723 difficulty specific? They way you have it now is making the map not end properly on Easy. It's simple to do this if you just copy the lines out of the .osb file into the normal/hard .osu files. Make sure you do a full submission if you do that. Alternatively, you could map Easy to the end. Mapped easy to end

Didn't notice the sliderball before because I was already using that skin... Did you ask Cyclone if you could use it? For some reason, it went into my folder. I don't even remember placing it into the folder... But removed anyway

Normal

01:57:607 (2) - bugged slider fixed

Lybydose wrote:

Ok, new section mod go!

Easy

02:19:146 (2) - (suggestion) This seems to end early. Extend to the white tick? Don't forget to adjust spacing to the next circle if you do. Also you could do this in normal as well, though if you did it there it might be better to add a circle at 02:20:107 instead of extending.
02:22:223 - (suggestion) add circle? (also adjust spacing if you do)
02:25:492 (5) - this slider goes off the grid
02:25:492 (5,1) - spacing