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Silver Forest - Phantasm Brigade

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Cyril Scarlet
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pete2528
เปรี้ยง!!
:)
steinsgate
star :)
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
^o^/// ~ ♥
Randy96
It's look good, but I won't star it until it's finished.
Can't wait until then. :)

Lunatic
00:13:019 (1,2,3,4) - I like the beat here.
00:14:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
taka1235
:(
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
Randy96 > thx ~ for star :P
TAKAサマ > ありがとうございます^^
ft1717492
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Aenna
:oops: :oops: :oops:
Furawa
少女幻葬 同人樂>wwww< suki suki
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
ft1717492, cyborg, SOGAChu

Thanks you ^o^

and Merry Chrismas o(^v')b
Randy96
Amazing storyboard work! I would wait for Easy and Medium to finish to star this, but I guess it's going to be just as good as the other difficulties, so I'm giving it out early. :)

Keep up the good work.
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
Thank you Randy for come to re download and see it ^^

Merry Chrismas ^^b
gdeath
Awesoooooooooome!!!!!
Little Suggestion
the last sakura SB is...hm...the sakura SB is nice.but you set it on 03:53:574 that makes players wanna play more.
coz everyone can clearly know that the song is not END.
Star!
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
I'm set for ending effect ^^
I want to make more too

but score is... XD

Thank you gdeath ~
Alice
Falling in love with the storyboard *____*

Lunatic is fun~~ Star <3
Iluhiwizel
Shoot~*

SB ยาวนานมาก รู้สึก ถึงความยากลำบากเลย XD
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
Thank you Alice ^^/

xen ใจแง๊บ ~
AngelHoney
nice map

star :3
termerys
really good map
get my star on your christmas tree!!!!
orioncomet
I will mod soon, If I can,, lol
Nice when I was playing, get my Star <3
gunmilkcom
SB สุดยอด :)
yaya
offset :) you got it

[Hard]
00:49:988 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1633

[Normal]
01:13:738 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1635
01:32:488 - add a note
01:32:845 (1) - spinner start here .

others good
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
okay ,Thank you Yaya

I'll changed it =w=b
DeadAlready
star~ >w</
Dangaard
Nice map, Lunatic got some parts that were hard to read, but managable with some practice ;)
fumoffu star :3
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
Thank you quintitem and Dangaard for come to see may map ^^

and thank you for star.
Randy96
One thing I have noticed is, that I'm pretty sure this is a remix of Yukari's theme "Necrofantasia", but the background you have currently doesn't have her in it, so it doesn't match. Consider changing this. :?
MegaManEXE
Filesize is okay (11.8 MB) since there are storyboard elements
Timing seems fine
BG checks out
SB stuff looks okay to me, but a BAT will want to double check them because I'm not a storyboarding pro

[General]
-Add "Necrofantasia" to tags?
-Add "Yukari Yakumo" to tags (this one is kind of optional I guess)
-Randy96 is right about the BG lacking Yukari, but I don't know if you'd want to change it at this point because you use the BG in part of your storyboard
-I'm a little iffy about the soft hitsounds...they're kind of hard to hear and Necrofantasia is a loud song a lot of the time. But you switched back and forth between soft and normal pretty nicely so it works for me, and the constant clap pattern and use of finishes are good.

[Lunatic]
-Nothing I can find
-Some of the small repeaters in the middle were hard to see because of the score explosions but they're not unrankable or anything.

[Hard]
-Nothing I can find
-A couple of things were technically spaced incorrectly but they didn't trip me up and I can see how you went for symmetry so it's all good.

[Normal]
-This is more like a Normal+ to be honest >_>
-Try increasing the Overall Difficulty by at least 1 tick? The notes came in pretty slow.

[Easy]
-I had a little trouble with a couple small parts where I wasn't 100% sure what you were mapping to but then as I played on it became clearer to me. And I SS'd first try so I can't really complain.

Star for now, call me back or another MAT for a proto-bubble once you've thought about adding the tags and that Overall Difficulty on Normal. :)
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet

Randy96 wrote:

One thing I have noticed is, that I'm pretty sure this is a remix of Yukari's theme "Necrofantasia", but the background you have currently doesn't have her in it, so it doesn't match. Consider changing this. :?
okay , I can replace it ^^

Done



Megaman > Thank you for Modding and.

MegaManEXE wrote:

[General]
-Add "Necrofantasia" to tags?
-Add "Yukari Yakumo" to tags (this one is kind of optional I guess)
-Randy96 is right about the BG lacking Yukari, but I don't know if you'd want to change it at this point because you use the BG in part of your storyboard
-I'm a little iffy about the soft hitsounds...they're kind of hard to hear and Necrofantasia is a loud song a lot of the time. But you switched back and forth between soft and normal pretty nicely so it works for me, and the constant clap pattern and use of finishes are good.
Done

maybe I'll wait for my friend come to translate again.

my english is not good , I'm scray for get wrong meaning from Mod ^^

MegaManEXE wrote:

[Normal]
-This is more like a Normal+ to be honest >_>
-Try increasing the Overall Difficulty by at least 1 tick? The notes came in pretty slow.
Done
Tanmak
:P
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
Thank you Tannyan ^^
Yes_old
No time to mod :( But star~~ Awesome :D
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
it's okay ^^

thank you for come to see map ^^
Randy96
You might need to fix the "black image" for your storyboard.
http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o129 ... hot006.jpg
look at the sides, does this happen for you?
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
thank you randy for come to check many time.

I'll check it again !

SB Remake Black

00:00:000 Done
01:09:988 Done
MegaManEXE
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Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
Thank you For check it again ^^

MegaManEXE wrote:

2. The max score on Lunatic is 15 million.
Edited : 14.9 m
Mystearica
I say they're somewhat hidden since I know they're there but they manage to trick me every time.

On the whole, the above+above post is mostly what I would have to say myself, so consider this my approval post.

But you can always add more Marisa
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
whaaa

thank you for see this map and STAR Mys ~ ^_^//
Dylans222
it is an nice beatmap ;) and i will star this map ^_^

Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
Thank for STAR !!

and playing ^^
Rukario
Love the Sb for this.
A well deserved Star~
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
Thank you ~
Scar
ดวงดาว~ <== bad thai D:
Andrea
[Overall]

Make sure to add the same breaks on all difficulties, please.

[Difficulties]

[Normal]

00:06:774 (5,1) - No jumps on normal difficulty, please. Remember you have to fix all the next spacing too.
02:27:667 (2) - I really don't like how this sounds. Can you change it, please?

[Insane]

Reduce the score if you can, is too high.

00:12:309 (2) - Hidden slider.
00:45:702 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Make this more easy to read.
01:56:417 (3) - This slider ends bad. Remove some wrong repeats.
02:53:395 (1) - Remove this note.
02:53:484 (2) - ^
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

Make sure to add the same breaks on all difficulties, please. Fixed

[Difficulties]

[Normal]

00:06:774 (5,1) - No jumps on normal difficulty, please. Remember you have to fix all the next spacing too. Fixed
02:27:667 (2) - I really don't like how this sounds. Can you change it, please? Fixed

[Insane]

Reduce the score if you can, is too high.

00:12:309 (2) - Hidden slider.
00:45:702 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Make this more easy to read. Fixed
01:56:417 (3) - This slider ends bad. Remove some wrong repeats. Fixed
02:53:395 (1) - Remove this note. Fixed
02:53:484 (2) - ^[/color] Fixed
Thank you for Modding (●´ω`●)
Mafiamaster
Everything looks good.
Bubbled!
Nice SB~
mtmcl
Ranked!
orioncomet
congratz :D
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