1. Pandemic (5.98 stars, 1708 notes)

Fujiyama Panic wrote:

Push for awesomeness !!!! D=!!!!

Nvirjskly wrote:

No KD, just a comment. Autoplay sliderbreaks on 02:40:681 (6) , thus auto can't get SS.

Zweib wrote:

Hi~from #modreqs

01:50:154 (1,3) - stack properly?　fixed
02:15:417 (1) - slider body might be off-screen No problem imo. I can play it http://puu.sh/cMmkv.jpg
03:57:953 (1) - ^ same
04:29:216 (7,1,2,3,4) - ah these 5 sliders can be placed in a star shape maybe ;w; keep
04:49:111 (1) - move the red dot down by several grid? it's quite easy to get a combo break at the slider tick fixed
06:39:637 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is hard to aim imo, I suggest do ctrl + G to 06:39:795 (2,3) or let the 4 sliders point to same direction (left is better) fixed
06:58:901 (1,2,3,4) - shorten the distance by a little or enlarge the space of 06:59:216 (1,2,3,4) ? because it's equal to 1/2 circles in fact. fixed

I'm your fan and love all your maps hardcore is not my type tho haha

1. 01:05:628 (3) - 01:05:312 (1,2,3)が同じ音で、01:05:786 (x)と01:06:102 (4)が同じ音だから、 スライダーじゃなくてジャンプのほうがなんかこうstop & goみたいな感じで合う気がします!!01:05:628 (3)と座標同じとこにサークルおいて、01:05:786のx136,y236あたりにサークル置いてみたらどうだろう。
   
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2. 01:10:681 (3) - ^
3. 01:13:207 (3) - ^
4. 01:16:681 (3,4,5,6) - もうちょっと飛ばしてあげたい! 雰囲気こんな感じとかどうでしょう(汚い)
   
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   224,24,76681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   260,224,76838,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   384,56,76996,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   224,160,77154,1,0,0:0:0:0:

5. 02:09:102 (1,2,1,2,3) - ここらへん禁断の1/8スライダー置きたくなる音してる(にっこり)
6. 03:48:479 (1,2,3,4) - こんな感じとかどうだろう・・・。直前の4ノートの繰り返しパターンになるから、次の(1)への流れがマイルドになる気がする。03:48:953 (4) - を03:49:427 (3) - にstackさせることで王道三角パターンにはめ込む感じ
   
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   104,100,228479,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   148,276,228637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   332,280,228795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   392,108,228953,1,8,0:0:0:0:

7. 04:15:164 (10,11,12,1) - ここらへん結構フローが厳しいきがする。04:15:479 (12) - をx132,y352あたりにもってくると、04:15:479 (12,1) - に謎の連帯感が生まれる気がする。
8. 04:16:269 (4,5) - 4と5でCtrl+Gしちゃおう!!!
9. 04:19:664 (x) - 勢いに乗ってサークル挟んじゃったらどうだろう
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10. 04:58:427 (3,4) - この音鳥はどうだろう。04:57:322 (1,2) からの流れで考えると音鳥が変に感じます。
11. 06:49:743 (1,2) - 終点softの方がいいきがします。

terametis wrote:

(駅前ビルからきました)
from #modreq

全部提案です!　

1. 01:05:628 (3) - 01:05:312 (1,2,3)が同じ音で、01:05:786 (x)と01:06:102 (4)が同じ音だから、 スライダーじゃなくてジャンプのほうがなんかこうstop & goみたいな感じで合う気がします!!01:05:628 (3)と座標同じとこにサークルおいて、01:05:786のx136,y236あたりにサークル置いてみたらどうだろう。　初見殺しだけど好きだから即採用です
   
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2. 01:10:681 (3) - ^
3. 01:13:207 (3) - ^
4. 01:16:681 (3,4,5,6) - もうちょっと飛ばしてあげたい! 雰囲気こんな感じとかどうでしょう(汚い)　距離を伸ばした配置は自分で考えた
   
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   224,24,76681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   260,224,76838,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   384,56,76996,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   224,160,77154,1,0,0:0:0:0:

5. 02:09:102 (1,2,1,2,3) - ここらへん禁断の1/8スライダー置きたくなる音してる(にっこり)
6. 03:48:479 (1,2,3,4) - こんな感じとかどうだろう・・・。直前の4ノートの繰り返しパターンになるから、次の(1)への流れがマイルドになる気がする。　03:48:953 (4) - を03:49:427 (3) - にstackさせることで王道三角パターンにはめ込む感じ　ここは５角形ジャンプさせたいからそのままで
   
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   104,100,228479,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   148,276,228637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   332,280,228795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   392,108,228953,1,8,0:0:0:0:

7. 04:15:164 (10,11,12,1) - ここらへん結構フローが厳しいきがする。04:15:479 (12) - をx132,y352あたりにもってくると、04:15:479 (12,1) - に謎の連帯感が生まれる気がする。　重ならないようにはなして流れは提案どおりにした
8. 04:16:269 (4,5) - 4と5でCtrl+Gしちゃおう!!!　しちゃいました！
9. 04:19:664 (x) - 勢いに乗ってサークル挟んじゃったらどうだろう
   SPOILER

   
   ここは音ない様に思えるのでno
10. 04:58:427 (3,4) - この音鳥はどうだろう。04:57:322 (1,2) からの流れで考えると音鳥が変に感じます。　前のほうにadd noteした
11. 06:49:743 (1,2) - 終点softの方がいいきがします。直した

06:52:269 あたりからのストリームかっこいい・・・　カッコいいけどここで何人も散っていくのを見た

-Chata- wrote:

add in tags : NNI Original
count down解除してAudio Lead-Inをちょっと長くしよう。0.4秒は短すぎる

05:24:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - ここのおとに違和感がする　わざとだったけど分かるから直した
07:23:864 (5) - Note is unsnapped

Tarrasky wrote:

Hi, random mod from #modreqs

Pandemic

00:57:733 (3,4) - this stack is not good because it does not match what you mapped, sounds perfect move from x:172 y:244　nope
01:30:575 (3) - move from x:204 y:216 to increase the flow nope
01:39:260 (3) - try press Ctrl + G, for me is better ok
01:45:417 (2) - opposite direction is good http://puu.sh/gny2G/b05fc283e8.jpg nope
02:58:049 (4,5) - so low distance :c, and 02:58:365 (5) - is outside the window, move 02:58:365 (5) - from x:368 y:220 nope
03:09:918 (6) - add NC nope
03:20:766 (5) - add NCnope
06:09:795 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - slightly unreadable to AR=9, i recommend you nerf nope
07:14:864 (1) - 07:19:594 (1) - remove NC or add in 07:10:064 (7) - 07:23:864 (5) - nope


Amazing music, good luck ^^

TheOnlyLeon wrote:

Hey, your mod as requested.

PANDEMIC

Miscellaneous - Frankly this song is a little fast for 9.0 AR IMO. I'd feel 9.4 is much more fitting. I talk friends and reconsider it

01:18:260 - (8) This slider feels wrong, I'd aim it up and to the right. fixed

01:21:819 - (1) The NC here just confuses me when I'm reading it, I think it'd be better without. removed

01:52:681 - (1) This slider is at a bit of an awkward angle, maybe make the tail aim a little higher? fixed

02:32:154 - (6) This placement makes reading (8) quite difficult, I'd suggest either A) Make (8) a NC instead of the current nearest NC or B) Move (6) slightly to the right for some visual offset between the two. reservation it. because it may be settled by AR

06:43:111 - (4) This positioning is still awkward to read, it'd be better off if this slier were offset to be a little bit higher than the (1) ahead of it. same

Honestly, Nice work so far. I quite enjoy the map, Hope I was able to help. GL with this one.

M o k o r i wrote:

ウス
暇だったので

General

1. normal-hitclap3.wav　使ってないので、この先使う予定無ければ消しましょう

消しましたもう見ることはないでしょう

Pandemic

1. 00:21:279 (5) - にNC入れて00:22:397 (1) - のNC消しませんか 00:21:279 (5)にadd NCした
2. 01:07:838 (1,2,3) - ここはDSそろえたほうが当てやすいかも 何でそろってなかったんだここ・・・

ふぁいと

1. 00:20:534 (3,4) - ^
2. 00:24:575 (2,3,4) - i suggest you change the sliderend into a soft hitsound because you're clearly mapping the clock-ticks here. this way you can show it a bit more and the ends don't get that much attention. otherwise this feels a bit weird to play you could continue that hitsounding until 00:34:681 -
3. 00:34:838 (2,2) - some emphasize here maybe? the notes here are different so maybe hitsound here something
4. 00:37:207 (1,2) - i don't understand that stack. i know diversity is important in a map and all, but this is really off. you treat 00:37:365 (2) - like it's not that much of an important note, even though the sound is really loud here. this is not nice to play at all and feels really wrong while playing. At least add a slider here. better would be if you add a jump. a nice forth-and-back-motion would fit
5. 00:38:470 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:43:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - there's no 1/4 in the background why are you mapping this? maybe change this into a spinner? else it's overmapped.
7. 00:44:470 (1,3,1,3,1,3,1,3) - this plays really boring, imo. those noises are really loud and you treat them like the ghost-notes afterwards and this is no good, imo. maybe make a 1/2 slider out of those. there's some sound in the background so this would fit and you can stick with that square
8. 01:05:786 (4,5) - how about you put some kick in here? this is really loud in the music and you could make a bigger sliderspeed here (slider velocity) and make it look like this:
   
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9. 01:14:391 (2,3) - this is difficult to read and therefore to tap. do you know about polarity? apply it please.
10. 01:14:944 (3,4,8,9) - the ds between those two is different but it's both 1/2 and there's no change in music so no jump is suggested so i think you should make those distances the same.
11. 01:15:417 (8) - there's no sound suggesting this repeating slider. overmap again. it's 1/2 and not 1/4 here
12. 01:15:733 (9) - ^
13. 01:22:049 (7,8) - before you go with clockwise flow and it suddenly changes and feels a bit off. maybe ctrl + g those two for better flow?
14. 01:25:523 (8,9) - like before there's no 1/4 but 1/2
15. 01:30:496 - i suggest in this part you map the synths from the music because they are in the foreground. this is more interesting than a lon 1/2 spam
16. 01:30:575 (3,4) - i don't understand that sudden jump. please use the same ds for those 3 sliders
17. 01:41:154 (3) - i don't think the emphasized sound should be on a sliderend especially because you're making it tappable in the next sliders 01:41:786 (4,5) -
18. 01:42:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - again the thing i said about polarity from before. this is difficult to read and this rhythm has never been there before so how should i be supposed to read this?
19. 01:44:075 (2,3,4,5) - ^
20. 01:50:944 - again this emphasize. please. make this tappable
21. 01:58:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - cool
22. 02:09:102 (1,2,1,2,3) - again hard to read
23. 02:33:102 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
24. 02:34:365 (1,2,3,4) - ^
25. 02:41:075 - this is a really loud drop here maybe map it
26. 03:16:698 (1,2) - readability
27. 03:47:690 (8,1) - this may be difficult because you used the same ds for 1/4 and 1/2. don't do this.
28. 04:03:637 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - how am i supposed to tap that? i suggest you use sliders here
29. 04:06:795 (1) - cool slider
30. 04:14:137 - maybe add a circle here? the song suggests it
31. 04:17:848 (6) - two 1/4 slider instead for the sirens?
32. 04:20:058 (3,4) - maybe add a jump here to emphasize the change in the pitch
33. 04:25:190 - add a circle again? especially because you mapped those synths before at 04:24:243 (2,3,4) -
34. 05:57:637 (7,8) - i think you should ctrl + h this jump because of the flow. you suddenly change the direction for that jump and this feels awkward. make it look like this? nice circular flow
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35. 06:10:269 (3,4) - again ctrl + g for flow?
36. 06:25:111 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - maybe use sliders instead, again
37. 06:36:795 (9) - this is overmapped. there's no 1/4 there's 1/2 again. please change this
38. 06:39:164 (4,5,6) - you first mapped the synthesizer and then you suddenly change to drums again. this is weird. please stick to either of them. i suggest synthesizer because you map this all the time
39. 07:25:455 (7) - the bell is a bit earlier. timed wrong a bit?
40. 07:26:266 (8) - ^
41. 07:27:077 (9) - ^
42. 07:27:481 (1) - i don't understand this spinner. let it end on the note before to have a bigger impact.

Hard wrote:

Hello there. From my queue.


Pandemic

1. 00:20:534 (3,4) - ^ what?
2. 00:24:575 (2,3,4) - i suggest you change the sliderend into a soft hitsound because you're clearly mapping the clock-ticks here. this way you can show it a bit more and the ends don't get that much attention. otherwise this feels a bit weird to play you could continue that hitsounding until 00:34:681 - I see. changed to use soft hitsound
3. 00:34:838 (2,2) - some emphasize here maybe? the notes here are different so maybe hitsound here something fixed. used drum hitsound
4. 00:37:207 (1,2) - i don't understand that stack. i know diversity is important in a map and all, but this is really off. you treat 00:37:365 (2) - like it's not that much of an important note, even though the sound is really loud here. this is not nice to play at all and feels really wrong while playing. At least add a slider here. better would be if you add a jump. a nice forth-and-back-motion would fit ok. changed placement
5. 00:38:470 (1,2) - ^ same
6. 00:43:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - there's no 1/4 in the background why are you mapping this? maybe change this into a spinner? else it's overmapped. not overmapping. keep
7. 00:44:470 (1,3,1,3,1,3,1,3) - this plays really boring, imo. those noises are really loud and you treat them like the ghost-notes afterwards and this is no good, imo. maybe make a 1/2 slider out of those. there's some sound in the background so this would fit and you can stick with that square boring part i know. but I want to keep
8. 01:05:786 (4,5) - how about you put some kick in here? this is really loud in the music and you could make a bigger sliderspeed here (slider velocity) and make it look like this: Interesting but this time it kept
   
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9. 01:14:391 (2,3) - this is difficult to read and therefore to tap. do you know about polarity? apply it please. I understand that you are saying but 01:14:233 (2) - have not sound. So blue → blue →blue plasemts can't imo. I did the distance widely to understand that it was different from others
10. 01:14:944 (3,4,8,9) - the ds between those two is different but it's both 1/2 and there's no change in music so no jump is suggested so i think you should make those distances the same. kept it. because The difficulty of " jump from stream to stream" is different from "jump from repeat slider to repeat slider" So I think different distance but same difficult.
11. 01:15:417 (8) - there's no sound suggesting this repeating slider. overmap again. it's 1/2 and not 1/4 here 1/4 imo
12. 01:15:733 (9) - ^ same
13. 01:22:049 (7,8) - before you go with clockwise flow and it suddenly changes and feels a bit off. maybe ctrl + g those two for better flow? nope
14. 01:25:523 (8,9) - like before there's no 1/4 but 1/2 nope
15. 01:30:496 - i suggest in this part you map the synths from the music because they are in the foreground. this is more interesting than a lon 1/2 spam I didn't understand that you want to say
16. 01:30:575 (3,4) - i don't understand that sudden jump. please use the same ds for those 3 sliders (3) chaged note
17. 01:41:154 (3) - i don't think the emphasized sound should be on a sliderend especially because you're making it tappable in the next sliders 01:41:786 (4,5) - fixed
18. 01:42:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - again the thing i said about polarity from before. this is difficult to read and this rhythm has never been there before so how should i be supposed to read this? keep
19. 01:44:075 (2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
20. 01:50:944 - again this emphasize. please. make this tappable same to 01:30:496
21. 01:58:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - cool thank you :3
22. 02:09:102 (1,2,1,2,3) - again hard to read keep
23. 02:33:102 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
24. 02:34:365 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
25. 02:41:075 - this is a really loud drop here maybe map it keep
26. 03:16:698 (1,2) - readability
27. 03:47:690 (8,1) - this may be difficult because you used the same ds for 1/4 and 1/2. don't do this. 1/4 imo
28. 04:03:637 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - how am i supposed to tap that? i suggest you use sliders here nope
29. 04:06:795 (1) - cool slider thanks XD
30. 04:14:137 - maybe add a circle here? the song suggests it fixed
31. 04:17:848 (6) - two 1/4 slider instead for the sirens? good!
32. 04:20:058 (3,4) - maybe add a jump here to emphasize the change in the pitch fixe
33. 04:25:190 - add a circle again? especially because you mapped those synths before at 04:24:243 (2,3,4) - yay! added
34. 05:57:637 (7,8) - i think you should ctrl + h this jump because of the flow. you suddenly change the direction for that jump and this feels awkward. make it look like this? nice circular flow fixed
    SPOILER

    
35. 06:10:269 (3,4) - again ctrl + g for flow? ok
36. 06:25:111 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - maybe use sliders instead, again keep
37. 06:36:795 (9) - this is overmapped. there's no 1/4 there's 1/2 again. please change this nope
38. 06:39:164 (4,5,6) - you first mapped the synthesizer and then you suddenly change to drums again. this is weird. please stick to either of them. i suggest synthesizer because you map this all the time fixed
39. 07:25:455 (7) - the bell is a bit earlier. timed wrong a bit? fixed
40. 07:26:266 (8) - ^ fixed
41. 07:27:077 (9) - ^ fixed
42. 07:27:481 (1) - i don't understand this spinner. let it end on the note before to have a bigger impact. deleted

hope this helps a bit Yay! helpful your mod

Kloyd wrote:

• Pandemic

1. 00:22:397 (1,2) - 今までのようにOverlapせず離すのはどうでしょうか 直した~
2. 02:46:207 (2) - ちょっとだけ読みにくいのでNC 直した~

言うことないです。。。ｇｌ

Momovely wrote:

1. 00:39:417 (6) - ここうしろのどぅ～んって感じの音にあわせて　sampleset Drum の clap にしない？
   
2. 01:12:181 (9) - add whistle 01:12:102 (8) - ここと同じ音なのに　01:12:181 (9) -には入ってなかったら　ちょっと違和感あるかも
   　
3. 03:39:795 (7) - 後ろのどぅ～ん！！って音とAdditions Drum の　finishが合うと思うけどどうかな？　
   
4. 03:40:269 (1) - と 03:41:532 (1) - の音違うから　03:40:269 (1) -　に　Additions Drum の　finishを追加しない？　で　03:41:532 (1) - はこのままwhistleってのはどうかな？
   
5. 03:40:743 (4) - ^
   
6. 03:42:164 (3) - 終点にAdditions Drum のfinish
   
7. 03:43:111 (1) - 終点にAdditions Drum のclap
   
8. 03:44:848 (6) - Additions Drum のfinish
   
9. 03:45:322 (1) - ^ 始点に
   
10. 04:20:690 (1) - ここにNC入れてもいいかなあ～って思う　入れた
    
11. 04:40:427 (5) - add additions Drum finish
    
12. 04:40:901 (1) - ^　始点
    
13. 04:41:216 (2) - ^ 終点
    
14. 04:42:479 (3) - ^ 始点
    
15. 04:42:795 (4) - ^ 終点
    
16. 04:43:901 (2) - ^
    
17. 04:45:479 (7) - ^
    
18. 04:45:953 (1) - ^
    
19. 04:46:427 (4) - ^
    
20. 04:48:479 (6) - ^
    
21. 06:01:269 (5) - ^
    
22. 06:01:743 (2) - ^ 始点
    
23. 06:02:216 (4) - ^
    
24. 07:20:628 (4) - 後ろに音ないからかなりやりずらE 消した

後ろの音が似てるけどちょっと違う～ってところが多いからそれを聞き分けて音ツケしたらもっとよくなると思う

寝起きでmodしたからわけわからん事書いてるかもしれない 　そういうのがあったらすまそ

ヒットサウンドの指摘は全部直した

Kocari wrote:

Here as requested

[Pandemic]

1. 00:10:099 (6) - I believe the note would fit better here http://puu.sh/hG1Gx/7b9d2f1bab.jpg considering the way how the triples are spaced out and in the way you made them before, feels efficient, and flows the same way without a huge gap in between notes ok fixed
2. 00:21:279 (1) - Since this note is NC and emphasized, I don't believe you need to make them the same distance from one another, since you can stack (4) and have a mini jump here to express that http://puu.sh/hG1Os/85c9969727.jpg good idea
3. 00:24:260 (1) - Space this a tad bit out, because touching seems awkward fixed
4. 01:33:970 (4) - Idk about this, but we can leave that as is and as the other ones keep it.
5. 02:19:207 (2) - Why not just lay it on top for neatness? Wouldn't really change much tbh http://puu.sh/hG25h/c00d7fc55c.jpg Why would I not do so it lol fixed
   To be frank I don't see anything that would be of an issue, it's very consistent with how it's mapped Sorry for short mod but as it is, I believe it to be fine I am also happy to be able to have you say that.

wring wrote:

in-game

[Pandemic]
・00:18:298 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 前4つと後ろ4つ. 34のところは飛ばしたくなります. 特に今のままですと後ろの三角形が微妙になるので、それぐらいならもっと狭めてひし形にしたほうがいいです.　配置は変えたけどあまり飛ばしたくないのでそのままで

・00:43:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 個人的にはキックにしてほしい. キックにしてもっと細かくしてもいいと思うレベル. 00:44:470 (1) - をnoteにしたいからキックはやめてる
・00:49:523 (1,2,3,4) - 角度がちょっと足りないです. もっと右に傾けていいと思います. ok
・01:15:102 (4,5,6,7,8) - もっと01:14:786 (1) - に対してblanketさせよう. ok
・01:36:260 (3) - 角度揃えたくならない？ なった

・01:38:312 (2) - ＾　なった

・01:43:365 - 音ほしい（スタックさせて）　(´・д・｀)ﾔﾀﾞ
・01:44:628 - ^　(´・д・｀)
・02:01:207 (4) - 終点whistle　ok
・02:07:838 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 12間のDSは徐々に上げていきませんか？ 1.0→1.2→1.4など. いいね！
・02:36:575 (2) - ,02:36:891 (1) - 前をもっと速度遅くして、後ろをはやしくしたい.　ちょっと違うけどＳＶ変化は採用
・02:46:049 (1) - 1/4スライダーとかどうでしょう.　くっついてる1/4からのstream好きじゃない
・02:48:260 (1) - もうちょっと下に置こう. 流れ的に綺麗にしたい.　ok

・02:53:312 (5) - NC ok
・02:58:365 (5) - ^ ok
・03:00:891 (5) - ^ ok
・03:03:417 (5) - NC? ok
・03:04:838 (2,3) - ctrl+g？ 変えるなら対称の対応するのも一緒にしてもしなくてもあり. 無理にすることはない. やめておく
・03:08:562 (4) - NC 　ok
・03:10:596 (7) - ^　ok
・03:17:545 (1,2,3) - 突然でわかりにくいし、ずらしていきたい.　突然でありたい

・03:19:410 (3) - NC　ok
・03:21:444 (6) - ^　ok
・03:36:006 (3) - もうちょっと上に置きましょう.　ok

・07:23:884 (5) - NC　ok

owariyoshi

handsome wrote:

ticket

pandemic
combine 'niconico' in tags. 2 'nico' is just duplicate. fixed
00:23:515 (4,1) - spacing feels a bit high (its 3/4 slider, but same distance as 00:25:207 (4,5) - ), slidershape of 4 can be improved too. i recommend this: http://i.imgur.com/ExNZjCT.png nice idea XD
00:33:417 (2) - i dislike perfect overlap, especially when you don't use it more than once. it can make players be confused for things like 00:35:470 (5,1) - , they will expect overlap but there isnt one lol. I see
00:49:207 (4,1) - the small spacing here is odd, maybe rotate this by 90deg clockwise http://i.imgur.com/vnOn6Mt.jpg. (alonbg with the rest of the squares) nice
01:02:786 (1,2,1,2,1) - ctrl+G all 1 by 1, so it looks like: http://i.imgur.com/GOY33Hf.jpg (its also nice because 01:04:365 (2) - is different sound, so you can go opposite direction with 1.) fixed
01:05:786 (4,5,6) -keep 6 overlap, so its a nicer, readable 1/1 pattern. http://i.imgur.com/Fh8Ny9d.png ok
01:08:786 (5,6) - because the slider is fast, its possible to misread as 1/4 lol. maybe increase spacing, like jumps. fixed lol
01:46:838 (3) - follow violin http://i.imgur.com/o4BvqNe.png like 01:51:891 (4,5,6) - ? ok
01:47:944 (2) - follow violin http://i.imgur.com/aE32E8s.png ok
01:57:023 (4,2,4) - delete? nope
01:56:470 (6,1) - swap nc fixed
02:04:049 (5) - better rhythm, and fix nc http://i.imgur.com/yxW2XeL.png fixed
02:10:049 (3,4) - better to have closer spacin g, so its not confused for 3/4 ok
02:46:128 - add note and fix stream? http://i.imgur.com/qxIdLPd.png ok
03:43:111 (1) - remove nc ok
06:06:085 (3,5) - delete and do jumps instead ok

thats all, good luck