ALI PROJECT - GOD DIVA · forum

Armin

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Topic Starter

Armin 2009-12-20T10:40:27+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunedì 28 dicembre 2009 at 17.37.35

Artist: ALI PROJECT
Title: GOD DIVA
Source: .hack//Roots OST
Tags: .hack//Roots ARI
BPM: 250
Filesize: 9945kb
Play Time: 03:36
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4,99 stars, 642 notes)
Normal (2,79 stars, 210 notes)

Download: ALI PROJECT - GOD DIVA
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I love you, mtmcl ◕ ◡ ◕

Last edited by Armin 2009-12-28T16:37:45+00:00, edited 34 times in total.

Mok

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Joined August 2009

Mok 2009-12-20T21:12:17+00:00

*_* Great job! Starred

cesc

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Joined August 2008

cesc 2009-12-23T15:56:14+00:00

oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh~

fuffolo

139 posts

Joined January 2009

fuffolo 2009-12-23T16:52:07+00:00

amazing, my new preferite map <3

Saixina_x3

248 posts

Joined December 2008

Saixina_x3 2009-12-23T16:53:58+00:00

starred with a kiss :3

Diasios

3,966 posts

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2009-12-23T17:07:34+00:00

Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

Aggiungi il kiai, se lo desideri

[Normal]

E' ok

[Hard]

01:20:255 (2) - Fai in modo che la fine dello slider sia "continuata" dai cerchi.

01:24:815 (8) - Stesso discorso di prima (quasi)
03:11:615 (2) - Come in 01:20:255 (2)
03:16:175 (8) - Come in 01:24:815 (8)

Lokamp

2,530 posts

Joined January 2009

Lokamp 2009-12-24T11:24:43+00:00

Normal
00:12:815 (4) - new combo
00:55:535 (2,4) - no whistles on these sliders's start

Hard
01:47:135 (spinner) - finish instead of whistle

What an amazing work!
Only one last think before starring...
Easier modes doesn't mean Shorter modes, REMEMBER! x3

anonymous_old

0 posts

Here since the beginning

anonymous_old 2009-12-25T14:19:26+00:00

General
Your power of symmetry is impeccable, and your use of jumps is simple yet outstanding.
The map has different parts based on the mood of the song. Change the background image with the mood.
Star, of course.

Normal
Rename to Hard.

00:10:655 (5,1) - Too close.
01:46:895 (1) - Balete.
02:55:775 (5,1) - Too close.
03:29:615 - Starts getting boring here.

You need too look over your combos I think. Good example is at 03:28:655 (3,1) where you seem to have made a mistake.

Hard
Rename to Insane.

James2250

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James2250 2009-12-25T19:01:02+00:00

normal:
02:30:575 (4) - move left on grid to mirror 2
for easiest diff might want to lower hp drain by 1?

hard:
01:29:615 (4) - new combo?
01:46:415 (1) - new combo not needed
03:20:975 (4,1) - switch new combo
03:32:495 (4,1) - ^

very nicely done map
*star*

AngelHoney

2,155 posts

Joined May 2009

AngelHoney 2009-12-25T20:32:05+00:00

Hard

02:52:175 - reomve break time ?

nice map

star~

Vanmonky

986 posts

Joined June 2009

Vanmonky 2009-12-26T02:39:29+00:00

As your request.

[General]
Capitalize all the tag words. Delete .hack//Roots from tag. Delete OST from source.

[Normal]
There are too many jumps here. It will be hard to play for beginners.
Try to use some claps.
00:24:335 (1) - Too close to the spinner. It's too hard since for beginners since this is the easiest diff. To solve this, you can reduce the spinner two 1/2 ticks.
00:30:095 (1) - WTF?! The sound makes my ears burn out!
00:32:495 (1) - Too close to the spinner. It's too hard since for beginners since this is the easiest diff. But it's okay to let it be like that.
01:18:575 (1) - ^
01:47:375 - WTF?! The sound makes my ears burn out!
02:12:335 (1) - Too close to the spinner. It's too hard since for beginners since this is the easiest diff. But it's okay to let it be like that.

[Hard]
Try to use some claps.
No comment for the distance but they ara distanced perfectly IMO.

Nice disturbing sound. Star.

Yuukari-Banteki

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Joined June 2008

Yuukari-Banteki 2009-12-26T20:07:54+00:00

Okay this is gonna be fun~

[Normal]
intro is kinda boring
okay can you maybe map something other than a constant stream of white ticks? You've mapped, as far as I can tell, the bpm and nothing else about the song, and it gets boring really quickly
Technicality: 10/10
Creativity: 1/10
Do you want me to map the lower difficulty for you?

[Hard]
has the same problem as normal - this time you're mapping every 1/2 beat instead of every 1 beat, but its still monotonous

break up the rhythm a little bit, please
01:18:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - this section is actually fun
02:05:375 (5) - maybe delete this note
02:34:895 (4) - try mapping to the violin in this section
Technicality: 9/10
Creativity: 3/10

:/ not really star-worthy, work on this with #mod for a bit

Kuroneko-sHerald

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Joined August 2008

Kuroneko-sHerald 2009-12-26T23:12:17+00:00

Great map. Starred

Yuukari-Banteki

1,534 posts

Joined June 2008

Yuukari-Banteki 2009-12-27T04:48:23+00:00

here you go, a short Normal. Modify it as needed for later edits and I am no longer eligible to mod this map.

Download: ALI PROJECT - GOD DIVA (Armin) [SFG Normal].osu

Armin

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Topic Starter

Armin 2009-12-27T11:49:26+00:00

Thank you for the difficulty SFG but I have to reject it. I'm afraid D:

Kurai

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Kurai 2009-12-27T12:18:55+00:00

Nice map
Star~

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Andrea 2009-12-27T14:18:39+00:00

IRC Modding.

Fixes done. Have a bubble!

Pasonia

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Pasonia 2009-12-27T15:15:10+00:00

Offset is off.

Adjust to 8482 base for BOTH difficulties, then re-snap all.

Maps pose no problems whatsoever.

Personally, I do think the patternmapping is making it a bit bland.

EDIT: Rebubbled.

ztrot

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ztrot 2009-12-27T17:23:43+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

ztrot

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ztrot 2009-12-27T17:42:40+00:00

bubbled