why this nice map rank yes? 
mapping,skin,hitsound all good
i can't find problem can't more moding
good luck ~
mapping,skin,hitsound all goodi can't find problem can't more moding
good luck ~
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yanaginagi - Tokohana
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Go rank please
Take my stars :33
Take my stars :33
Topic Starter
I'm still not sure that my map should have the SB? if yes, who will do it? because I suck at cut the layer that need to use in SB so I need a SB maker for more epicness on my map. and yes, if It really doesn't need the SB. I think it's ready for checked by BAT.. thanks all btw :3
Maybe it only needs the lyrics ~
Topic Starter
the problem is I don't know any japanese ahaha so I need the helper to help me with SB
Hi!
- [General]
Maybe change the yellow color to some darker, as looks very bright because of the color, and even a yellow rim.
- [Insane]
- 00:57:372 (6) - remove this circle.
- 00:58:260 (1) - ^
- 01:00:035 (5) - ^ and 01:00:212 (6) - start, where the circle was
- 01:37:135 (5) - Reverse Selection maybe?
- 03:43:171 (3) - ^
- 03:44:059 (3) - ^
- 02:45:834 (6) - move into place (4)
I wanna play it as a ranked map :3
Come on BATs :3
Come on BATs :3
Topic Starter
ikr 
I didnt expect that im gonna mod this hahahahaha
ヾ(･ω･*)ﾉ Because pro map
Good Luck!! :3
IRC Moddddd
2014-07-12 02:16 -Asagi: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/435273 yanaginagi - Tokohana [Insane]]
2014-07-12 02:17 P A N: XD
2014-07-12 02:17 -Asagi: i really like full version song
2014-07-12 02:17 P A N: a relax map
2014-07-12 02:17 -Asagi: time to testplay ;v
2014-07-12 02:17 P A N: if not count the stream
2014-07-12 02:17 P A N: gogo
2014-07-12 02:17 P A N: specing
2014-07-12 02:19 P A N: woops
2014-07-12 02:19 -Asagi: dat stream
2014-07-12 02:19 P A N: ;w;
2014-07-12 02:20 P A N: but it follow the song >_>
2014-07-12 02:22 -Asagi: how2map
2014-07-12 02:24 P A N: nice
2014-07-12 02:24 -Asagi: DAFAQ
2014-07-12 02:24 -Asagi: SRTVGCWNI TUGDRSVGTGYU
2014-07-12 02:24 -Asagi: DAT 1 MISS AWETVESRYRTUBRTUYHBRTUJNTYUYVESRTC
2014-07-12 02:24 P A N: omg
2014-07-12 02:24 P A N: that miss
2014-07-12 02:24 P A N: lol
2014-07-12 02:24 -Asagi: i really hate that kind of pattern
2014-07-12 02:24 -Asagi: straight
2014-07-12 02:25 -Asagi: and i didnt expect that
2014-07-12 02:25 -Asagi: i expect its more edgy-like pattern
2014-07-12 02:25 P A N: someone told me the last pattern is too easy
2014-07-12 02:25 P A N: so I did that
2014-07-12 02:25 -Asagi: its too hard for me XD
2014-07-12 02:25 -Asagi: just for me lol
2014-07-12 02:25 -Asagi: because i hate that kind of pattern
2014-07-12 02:25 -Asagi: but the map
2014-07-12 02:25 -Asagi: OMG ITS REALLY AWESOME
2014-07-12 02:25 -Asagi: how2map
2014-07-12 02:26 -Asagi: just little suggestion
2014-07-12 02:26 P A N: omg
2014-07-12 02:26 -Asagi: 01:13:171 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - i think putting jump here
2014-07-12 02:26 P A N: I think my map is too easy..
2014-07-12 02:26 -Asagi: fits perfectly
2014-07-12 02:26 -Asagi: like you should unstack the notes and make them jump instead
2014-07-12 02:27 -Asagi: since that part is kinda intense
2014-07-12 02:27 -Asagi: actually its not that easy
2014-07-12 02:27 -Asagi: its really tiring you know ;w;
2014-07-12 02:28 P A N: ;w;
2014-07-12 02:28 P A N: stack is more fit for me I don't know
2014-07-12 02:28 -Asagi: well...i was expecting big jumps on that part
2014-07-12 02:29 P A N: LOL
2014-07-12 02:29 -Asagi: maybe the stack fits
2014-07-12 02:29 -Asagi: but the spacing is not
2014-07-12 02:30 P A N: as I said, my map is too easy :(
2014-07-12 02:30 -Asagi: 01:21:692 (1) - this stream
2014-07-12 02:30 -Asagi: >easy
2014-07-12 02:30 -Asagi: are you serious? lol
2014-07-12 02:30 P A N: hm
2014-07-12 02:30 P A N: not count the stream lol
2014-07-12 02:30 -Asagi: hahahaha
2014-07-12 02:31 -Asagi: no, the jumps are hard too you know
2014-07-12 02:31 P A N: maybe because excited too
2014-07-12 02:31 P A N: because many of combo
2014-07-12 02:32 -Asagi: 8 consecutive circle jump is already hard
2014-07-12 02:32 -Asagi: not totally hard, but its good enough for insane
2014-07-12 02:34 P A N: yea
2014-07-12 02:34 P A N: but I'm kind of agree with you
2014-07-12 02:34 P A N: about jump
2014-07-12 02:34 -Asagi: it fits perfectly
2014-07-12 02:34 -Asagi: RIP with DT
2014-07-12 02:34 -Asagi: dat streams
2014-07-12 02:34 -Asagi: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/435273 yanaginagi - Tokohana [Insane]] -NoFail +Hidden +DoubleTime
2014-07-12 02:34 -Asagi: lol
2014-07-12 02:35 P A N: but my note is connected
2014-07-12 02:35 P A N: so it's hard to fix
2014-07-12 02:35 P A N: let's see
2014-07-12 02:35 P A N: I'm trying
2014-07-12 02:35 P A N: lol
2014-07-12 02:36 -Asagi: fix?
2014-07-12 02:36 -Asagi: where?
2014-07-12 02:36 P A N: 01:13:171 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
2014-07-12 02:37 P A N: if I make them jump
2014-07-12 02:37 -Asagi: it just remind me
2014-07-12 02:37 P A N: I should make 02:24:177 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - also
2014-07-12 02:37 -Asagi: of frostmourne jump
2014-07-12 02:37 -Asagi: the rhythm is kinda similar
2014-07-12 02:37 P A N: and 03:22:402 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -
2014-07-12 02:37 P A N: ah
2014-07-12 02:37 -Asagi: on this map
2014-07-12 02:37 -Asagi: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/188797 ChouCho - Yasashisa no Riyuu]
2014-07-12 02:37 P A N: I'm trying :P
2014-07-12 02:37 P A N: first part done
2014-07-12 02:38 P A N: oh that song
2014-07-12 02:38 P A N: I used to random miss on his map
2014-07-12 02:38 P A N: lol
2014-07-12 02:38 -Asagi: hahahaha
2014-07-12 02:38 -Asagi: it just remind me that, so thats why i suggest jump is kinda more fitting
2014-07-12 02:42 P A N: omg
2014-07-12 02:42 P A N: your map have 30 favs
2014-07-12 02:43 -Asagi: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/166315
2014-07-12 02:43 -Asagi: idk why i got many favs LOL
2014-07-12 02:44 -Asagi: oh...and this part 03:43:704 (1,2,3) - almost got me
2014-07-12 02:44 P A N: omg lol
2014-07-12 02:44 -Asagi: and the star priority...i didnt expect that
2014-07-12 02:45 P A N: yea
2014-07-12 02:45 P A N: it's like just only part of a whole map that kick slider
2014-07-12 02:45 -Asagi: the kick slider is fine, but im not sure if the spacing is too much
2014-07-12 02:45 P A N: lol one fav = one sheep
2014-07-12 02:46 P A N: the spacing is like 1/2
2014-07-12 02:47 -Asagi: 03:58:260 (1,1) - try to reduce the audio here
2014-07-12 02:47 -Asagi: 70% is too much
2014-07-12 02:47 -Asagi: maybe the 1st one is 60 or 50, and the 2nd one is 50 or 40
2014-07-12 02:48 P A N: meh you can post this to forum to get kds lol
2014-07-12 02:48 -Asagi: lol
2014-07-12 02:49 -Asagi: is it just me? or this is kinda awkward to play? 04:09:088 (5,1,2) -
2014-07-12 02:50 P A N: hm no one complain about that yet
2014-07-12 02:50 -Asagi: there is one now lol
2014-07-12 02:50 P A N: the most complain about the ending pattern lol
2014-07-12 02:50 -Asagi: http://puu.sh/a6XWT.jpg try this?
2014-07-12 02:50 P A N: yea lol
2014-07-12 02:50 -Asagi: more likely, similar to this 04:08:378 (3,4,5) -
2014-07-12 02:51 P A N: ah interesting
2014-07-12 02:51 -Asagi: somewhat, it was reversed
2014-07-12 02:52 -Asagi: strcecrtet, cant point anything out anymore hahaha
2014-07-12 02:52 -Asagi: map too perfect
2014-07-12 02:52 P A N: >_>
2014-07-12 02:53 P A N: the thing you point is already helpful
2014-07-12 02:53 -Asagi: meeeh :v
2014-07-12 02:53 -Asagi: 00:25:952 (6) -
2014-07-12 02:53 -Asagi: not sure if the 1/4 slider is fitting here
2014-07-12 02:53 P A N: lol
2014-07-12 02:53 P A N: that shit
2014-07-12 02:53 -Asagi: more likely, nothing follows the blue tick
2014-07-12 02:53 -Asagi: and triples fits better imo
2014-07-12 02:54 P A N: it's triple but
2014-07-12 02:54 -Asagi: and the bell-like hitsound confuse me for a bit XD
2014-07-12 02:54 P A N: the last note is stretch
2014-07-12 02:54 -Asagi: yeah hahaha
2014-07-12 02:54 -Asagi: maybe try normal triples lol
2014-07-12 02:54 P A N: so maybe
2014-07-12 02:54 -Asagi: oh wait
2014-07-12 02:55 P A N: maybe mute the slider tail?
2014-07-12 02:55 -Asagi: the rhythm makes sense lol wait
2014-07-12 02:55 P A N: instead of whistle
2014-07-12 02:55 -Asagi: maybe you should remove the whistle instead
2014-07-12 02:55 -Asagi: and its fine...i guess
2014-07-12 02:56 -Asagi: jsut a little nazi bit... 00:38:378 (1) - try to move this a bit right
2014-07-12 02:57 -Asagi: so its not overlapped here 00:38:733 (1) -
2014-07-12 02:57 P A N: I afraid the spacing will too big
2014-07-12 02:57 P A N: XD
2014-07-12 02:57 -Asagi: naaaah
2014-07-12 02:58 P A N: 03:32:343 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) -
2014-07-12 02:58 P A N: are these should be further?
2014-07-12 02:58 -Asagi: somewhat, the pitch change here 03:32:875 (2) -
2014-07-12 02:59 -Asagi: hmmm... dunno, maybe its fine in that way
2014-07-12 03:00 -Asagi: 01:01:810 (1) - this slider
2014-07-12 03:01 -Asagi: if you following the vocals, same as the instrument
2014-07-12 03:01 -Asagi: it was ended here 01:03:053 -
2014-07-12 03:02 P A N: what about 01:03:230 -
2014-07-12 03:02 P A N: it has a breathing sound
2014-07-12 03:02 P A N: lol
2014-07-12 03:02 -Asagi: oh
2014-07-12 03:02 -Asagi: ah yeah hahahaha
2014-07-12 03:02 P A N: LOL
2014-07-12 03:03 -Asagi: oh, pro hitsound btw
2014-07-12 03:03 -Asagi: how2hitsound
2014-07-12 03:03 P A N: my method is pity
2014-07-12 03:03 P A N: :(
2014-07-12 03:04 -Asagi: oAo
2014-07-12 03:04 -Asagi: 01:35:449 (2) - not sure if curving this slider is better
2014-07-12 03:04 -Asagi: like http://puu.sh/a6Z2c.jpg
2014-07-12 03:04 -Asagi: but nvm if you dont want lol
2014-07-12 03:05 P A N: I should say I though like that
2014-07-12 03:05 P A N: but it out of screen like yours
2014-07-12 03:05 P A N: lol
2014-07-12 03:05 -Asagi: its offscreen on the editor
2014-07-12 03:05 -Asagi: but on gameplay, its not
2014-07-12 03:05 -Asagi: http://puu.sh/a6Z8o.jpg almost XD
2014-07-12 03:06 -Asagi: i just a suggestion so i dont mind if you ignore lol
2014-07-12 03:07 P A N: sec
2014-07-12 03:07 P A N: osu lag
2014-07-12 03:07 -Asagi: rip
2014-07-12 03:07 -Asagi: 02:32:520 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - actually, this is already hard XD
2014-07-12 03:08 -Asagi: welcome back lol
2014-07-12 03:09 P A N: lol
2014-07-12 03:10 -Asagi: so you want to follow the vocals here instead of the instru? 03:35:183 (1,1,1) -
2014-07-12 03:12 P A N: that's the other place I want to change
2014-07-12 03:12 -Asagi: yeah
2014-07-12 03:12 -Asagi: start here 03:24:177 (1) -
2014-07-12 03:12 -Asagi: you almost follow the instrue
2014-07-12 03:13 -Asagi: then this is the only one that you follow the vocals 03:35:183 (1,1,1) -
2014-07-12 03:13 P A N: because I changed it all lol
2014-07-12 03:13 P A N: but that one still not
2014-07-12 03:14 -Asagi: you can make some delicious stream on that part hahaha
2014-07-12 03:14 P A N: lol
2014-07-12 03:15 P A N: ok only the part you mention left
2014-07-12 03:15 P A N: you are like a devil
2014-07-12 03:15 P A N: cheer me to make more stream
2014-07-12 03:15 P A N: XD
2014-07-12 03:15 -Asagi: hahahahaha
2014-07-12 03:16 -Asagi: 04:13:704 (1) - just this part
2014-07-12 03:16 -Asagi: the last part
2014-07-12 03:16 -Asagi: i kinda hate it because i dont like that pattern, as a player lol
2014-07-12 03:16 -Asagi: because i cant hit it well >.>
2014-07-12 03:17 P A N: like hws?
2014-07-12 03:17 -Asagi: for some reason, its kinda similar to HW hahaha
2014-07-12 03:18 -Asagi: but it is straight
2014-07-12 03:18 P A N: LOL
2014-07-12 03:18 -Asagi: like the part you always dead on his map
2014-07-12 03:18 -Asagi: something like that hahaha
2014-07-12 03:19 P A N: lol
2014-07-12 03:19 -Asagi: oh and, add tags
2014-07-12 03:19 -Asagi: the character on the BG...idk who is that because i didnt watch this anime yet
2014-07-12 03:19 -Asagi: if youre looking for SB lyrics, call 10nya
2014-07-12 03:19 P A N: even I watch
2014-07-12 03:19 P A N: I forget his name
2014-07-12 03:19 -Asagi: LOOOL
2014-07-12 03:20 P A N: you tell me too slow nooo
2014-07-12 03:20 P A N: I already ask for sharlo
2014-07-12 03:20 P A N: btw
2014-07-12 03:20 -Asagi: because i just saw it just now on the thread lol
2014-07-12 03:20 P A N: 03:35:183 - this part is a bit hard to figure it out what kind of stream
2014-07-12 03:21 -Asagi: hmmm
2014-07-12 03:21 P A N: it's like 1/2 , 5 streams and 9 streams
2014-07-12 03:21 -Asagi: 03:35:183 (1) - im pretty sure the stream didnt start on the long white tick
2014-07-12 03:21 P A N: yes
2014-07-12 03:22 P A N: but on the red tick
2014-07-12 03:22 P A N: but it's kind of.. stop on next red tick
2014-07-12 03:22 P A N: but maybe it's not
2014-07-12 03:22 P A N: hm it's not stop
2014-07-12 03:22 P A N: ok long stream
2014-07-12 03:23 -Asagi: not sure if its like this http://puu.sh/a70yI.jpg
2014-07-12 03:23 -Asagi: oh wait
2014-07-12 03:24 -Asagi: more like http://puu.sh/a70DK.jpg
2014-07-12 03:24 -Asagi: kinda confusing lol
2014-07-12 03:25 P A N: that's why I follow the vocal there lol
2014-07-12 03:25 -Asagi: lol
2014-07-12 03:25 P A N: maybe just long stream
2014-07-12 03:25 P A N: is more playable
2014-07-12 03:26 -Asagi: their is a strong beat here 03:35:538 - and here 03:35:893 -
2014-07-12 03:26 -Asagi: thats why i made them 1/4
2014-07-12 03:26 -Asagi: but not sure, its kinda just wtf it confuse me
2014-07-12 03:26 P A N: LOL
2014-07-12 03:28 -Asagi: map2perfect
2014-07-12 03:28 -Asagi: so this map will have a storyboard?
2014-07-12 03:31 P A N: yes
2014-07-12 03:32 P A N: but sharlo always online different time with me :X
2014-07-12 03:32 -Asagi: rip timezones
2014-07-12 03:32 -Asagi: 04:13:704 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this is how hollow wings will do this part
2014-07-12 03:32 -Asagi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1807556
2014-07-12 03:33 P A N: true lol
2014-07-12 03:33 P A N: seems like you prepare to map hzhs style now
2014-07-12 03:33 -Asagi: HAHAHAHAHA
2014-07-12 03:34 -Asagi: maybe cryo's version is better
2014-07-12 03:34 -Asagi: like... wait
2014-07-12 03:35 P A N: done
2014-07-12 03:35 -Asagi: lol
2014-07-12 03:35 P A N: seems like many thing have change
2014-07-12 03:36 -Asagi: this is how cryo will do that part http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1807569
2014-07-12 03:37 P A N: that is still hard imo
2014-07-12 03:37 P A N: lol
2014-07-12 03:37 -Asagi: hmmm
2014-07-12 03:37 -Asagi: lol
2014-07-12 03:37 -Asagi: too ez
2014-07-12 03:38 P A N: what is too ez
2014-07-12 03:38 -Asagi: too easy
2014-07-12 03:38 -Asagi: its kinda hard, but not that hard
2014-07-12 03:38 -Asagi: wtf
2014-07-12 03:39 P A N: what part
2014-07-12 03:39 P A N: wait
2014-07-12 03:39 -Asagi: the last part
2014-07-12 03:39 P A N: I forget to remove whistle on that shit
2014-07-12 03:39 -Asagi: hahahaha
2014-07-12 03:39 P A N: you mean mine? XD
2014-07-12 03:40 P A N: ok update again
2014-07-12 03:40 -Asagi: maybe i should really post this log XD
2014-07-12 03:41 P A N: yep
2014-07-12 03:41 P A N: go ahead
2014-07-12 03:41 -Asagi: wait
2014-07-12 03:41 P A N: it's really helpful
2014-07-12 03:41 -Asagi: oAo
Good Luck!! :3
Topic Starter
thanks Asagi
Awesome map, I can't find any problem...except for that part that seems a little off to me.
01:00:035 (5, 6)
Maybe it sounds better If you remove the single note (5) and go back 2 ticks with the slider, then raise it size in 2 ticks. (Like this
I will fit better with her voice imo.
Good luck! o/
01:00:035 (5, 6)
Maybe it sounds better If you remove the single note (5) and go back 2 ticks with the slider, then raise it size in 2 ticks. (Like this
I will fit better with her voice imo.
Good luck! o/
Topic Starter
okTio Fenrir wrote:
Awesome map, I can't find any problem...except for that part that seems a little off to me.
01:00:035 (5, 6)
Maybe it sounds better If you remove the single note (5) and go back 2 ticks with the slider, then raise it size in 2 ticks. (Like this
I will fit better with her voice imo.
Good luck! o/
in insane 03:44:059 (3) - hmm in CtB it's so uncatchable try Ctrl + G it
Lapis Aoki wrote:
Maybe it onlyneeds the lyrics ~
Topic Starter
hmm but it flow in standard.. maybe can you give it to another Ctb player? to test play it that is it really uncatchable..Genocide wrote:
in insane 03:44:059 (3) - hmm in CtB it's so uncatchable try Ctrl + G it
sorry, it's hard patternP A N wrote:
hmm but it flow in standard.. maybe can you give it to another Ctb player? to test play it that is it really uncatchable..Genocide wrote:
in insane 03:44:059 (3) - hmm in CtB it's so uncatchable try Ctrl + G it
Go Rank please
Topic Starter
I love you ♥10nya wrote:
Topic Starter
that bg is too cute so it not fit with this song. so I changed it.Kodora wrote:
where is awesome bg? :<
saw this on #modreqs so i took my time to trying mod this. but it looks like it's kinda impossible to find which is kinda weird to me so i only give some suggestions. you can ignore it if you don't like it (no KD i mean ._.)
[General]
Preview time should be at 03:12:816 -
00:19:207 - Kiai time kinda unnecessary (or you can use it's fountain instead
)
01:30:567 - ^
[Insane]
00:47:520 - add note?
02:21:248 - ^
03:19:473 - ^
01:47:254 - i kinda hate when you're overuse the Finish. doesn't suit with the song
01:52:934 - ^
if you want to, you can use this hitsound instead
i can only mod 1 diff. as for the others, sorry ._.)/
EDIT : just want to notice that i've shoot my
to your map. hopefully this get ranked soon
[General]
Preview time should be at 03:12:816 -
00:19:207 - Kiai time kinda unnecessary (or you can use it's fountain instead
)01:30:567 - ^
[Insane]
00:47:520 - add note?
02:21:248 - ^
03:19:473 - ^
01:47:254 - i kinda hate when you're overuse the Finish. doesn't suit with the song
01:52:934 - ^
if you want to, you can use this hitsound instead
i can only mod 1 diff. as for the others, sorry ._.)/
EDIT : just want to notice that i've shoot my
nice map
Topic Starter
thank you <3Amamiya Yuko wrote:
nice map
hitsound suggestion on 01:47:254 (1) - to here 02:04:295 (1) -
SPOILER
19:21 mercury2004: อยากให้เสียง snare
19:21 mercury2004: มันเด่นกว่า finish
19:22 mercury2004: เพิ่มซักหน่อยได้ป่ะ
19:22 mercury2004: คือ
19:22 P A N: snare คือเสียงอะไรอะ
19:22 P A N: 55
19:22 mercury2004: finish จะเป้น background
19:22 mercury2004: 01:56:130 (4) -
19:22 mercury2004: snare
19:22 mercury2004: อาจจะงานเยอะหน่อย คือ
19:23 mercury2004: เพิ่มเสียง snare ให้ดังขึ้น
19:23 mercury2004: แล้วก็ timing section all finish
19:23 mercury2004: ให้เบาลง
19:23 mercury2004: ตอนนี้ finish ก็โอแล้ว
19:23 mercury2004: แต่เพิ่ท snare ก็ดี
19:24 mercury2004: 01:46:544 (8) - ดูท่อนนี้ กับ 01:48:496 (7) -
19:24 mercury2004: เหมือนเสียงกลอง อยู่คนละเลเยอกัน
19:21 mercury2004: มันเด่นกว่า finish
19:22 mercury2004: เพิ่มซักหน่อยได้ป่ะ
19:22 mercury2004: คือ
19:22 P A N: snare คือเสียงอะไรอะ
19:22 P A N: 55
19:22 mercury2004: finish จะเป้น background
19:22 mercury2004: 01:56:130 (4) -
19:22 mercury2004: snare
19:22 mercury2004: อาจจะงานเยอะหน่อย คือ
19:23 mercury2004: เพิ่มเสียง snare ให้ดังขึ้น
19:23 mercury2004: แล้วก็ timing section all finish
19:23 mercury2004: ให้เบาลง
19:23 mercury2004: ตอนนี้ finish ก็โอแล้ว
19:23 mercury2004: แต่เพิ่ท snare ก็ดี
19:24 mercury2004: 01:46:544 (8) - ดูท่อนนี้ กับ 01:48:496 (7) -
19:24 mercury2004: เหมือนเสียงกลอง อยู่คนละเลเยอกัน
Topic Starter
thanks :3[ Joey ] wrote:
This is one of my favorite maps
Great job
Take a star
Hi!
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
[Hard]
[Normal]
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
- I'm not sure but maybe the position of the red line is not appropriate. 00:00:744 - Try to move the red line 00:00:344 - here.
and Please set the volume and Sampleset to constant. other diffs in the same way. - Please check the Warning for storyboard.
- Inconsistency in Kiai Times and Inconsistency in combo colours. I recommend that you set to constant them.
- Clear.
[Hard]
- 00:46:544 (4) - Clap
- 00:49:384 (2) - ^
- 02:39:088 (3) - Slider shape is too ugly.. Try to make calm slider and blanket.
- 02:39:621 (4) - ^almost same above, consider changing that slider shape.
- 04:13:755 - Unsnaped green line here. I recommend that move to 04:13:349 -
[Normal]
- I recommend that HP+1. HP2 is too low for Normal diff imo.
- 02:14:414 - This rhythm is a little difficult for beginners. You followed the vocal here 02:12:816 (1) - ,
but the next to followed the song 02:14:414 - . so I suggest that start a slider at here 02:14:591 - .
Topic Starter
All fixed!! thanks Guy :3
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♥HabiHolic wrote:
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thanks so much finally \o/Guy wrote:
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go go
if it get ranked i will be the first to download it
SPOILER
2014-08-10 01:13 captin1: personally i would have done something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1910396 but it's your call
2014-08-10 01:18 captin1: normal: 00:39:088 (4,1) - swap NC
2014-08-10 01:20 captin1: 02:29:680 (6,1) - same
2014-08-10 01:20 captin1: and then 02:32:698 (3) - NC here
2014-08-10 01:20 P A N: hmm why I hear like this http://puu.sh/aM894/c21efbfbf8.jpg XD
2014-08-10 01:21 P A N: all fix
2014-08-10 01:22 captin1: 02:41:396 (4) - I'd recommend a NC here too
2014-08-10 01:23 P A N: ok
2014-08-10 01:23 captin1: 04:00:745 (2) - maybe on this? haha might be cooler
2014-08-10 01:24 P A N: you mean NC? XD
2014-08-10 01:24 captin1: yeah haha
2014-08-10 01:24 P A N: I think two one is weird.. huh? XDD
2014-08-10 01:24 captin1: sure that's fine
2014-08-10 01:26 captin1: although 04:05:183 (5) - 04:06:603 (1) - 04:08:023 (3) - 04:09:443 (1) - 04:10:863 (3) - toggle NC on all of these, it just gets off here at the end :<
2014-08-10 01:27 captin1: hard: 00:09:144 (1,3) - ......swap NC hahahaha
2014-08-10 01:27 P A N: omg why my nc so..
2014-08-10 01:28 captin1: easy to get off sometimes if you're not paying attention
2014-08-10 01:28 P A N: XD
2014-08-10 01:28 captin1: 00:49:029 (1) - i would remove this one, to be consistent with the parts before
2014-08-10 01:28 P A N: you are right
2014-08-10 01:28 captin1: remove nc*
2014-08-10 01:29 P A N: ahaha ok
2014-08-10 01:29 captin1: 01:26:307 (5) - add NC?
2014-08-10 01:30 captin1: 01:57:195 (5) - ^
2014-08-10 01:30 P A N: hmm I think it's the same stanza
2014-08-10 01:31 captin1: you go back and forth between 1 measure and 2 measure
2014-08-10 01:31 captin1: a lot
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: 01:44:414 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this section 2 measure
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: 01:47:254 (1,2,3,4) - 1 measure
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: 01:48:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 2
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: 01:51:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: yeah
2014-08-10 01:32 P A N: woops
2014-08-10 01:32 P A N: ok then
2014-08-10 01:33 P A N: let's NC
2014-08-10 01:33 P A N: ahaha
2014-08-10 01:33 captin1: hahaha
2014-08-10 01:33 captin1: parts like 02:04:295 - it's totally fine to do 2 measure, cause it's so slow, but others it just doesn't make sense
2014-08-10 01:33 P A N: 01:57:195 (5) - NC for this
2014-08-10 01:34 captin1: yeah
2014-08-10 01:40 P A N: btw captin
2014-08-10 01:40 captin1: hm?
2014-08-10 01:40 P A N: what hitsound should I put on 03:13:171 (1,2,1) -
2014-08-10 01:41 captin1: i don't think you need much hitsounding there, the song takes care of it imo
2014-08-10 01:41 captin1: just leaving it as regular soft samples should be fine
2014-08-10 01:18 captin1: normal: 00:39:088 (4,1) - swap NC
2014-08-10 01:20 captin1: 02:29:680 (6,1) - same
2014-08-10 01:20 captin1: and then 02:32:698 (3) - NC here
2014-08-10 01:20 P A N: hmm why I hear like this http://puu.sh/aM894/c21efbfbf8.jpg XD
2014-08-10 01:21 P A N: all fix
2014-08-10 01:22 captin1: 02:41:396 (4) - I'd recommend a NC here too
2014-08-10 01:23 P A N: ok
2014-08-10 01:23 captin1: 04:00:745 (2) - maybe on this? haha might be cooler
2014-08-10 01:24 P A N: you mean NC? XD
2014-08-10 01:24 captin1: yeah haha
2014-08-10 01:24 P A N: I think two one is weird.. huh? XDD
2014-08-10 01:24 captin1: sure that's fine
2014-08-10 01:26 captin1: although 04:05:183 (5) - 04:06:603 (1) - 04:08:023 (3) - 04:09:443 (1) - 04:10:863 (3) - toggle NC on all of these, it just gets off here at the end :<
2014-08-10 01:27 captin1: hard: 00:09:144 (1,3) - ......swap NC hahahaha
2014-08-10 01:27 P A N: omg why my nc so..
2014-08-10 01:28 captin1: easy to get off sometimes if you're not paying attention
2014-08-10 01:28 P A N: XD
2014-08-10 01:28 captin1: 00:49:029 (1) - i would remove this one, to be consistent with the parts before
2014-08-10 01:28 P A N: you are right
2014-08-10 01:28 captin1: remove nc*
2014-08-10 01:29 P A N: ahaha ok
2014-08-10 01:29 captin1: 01:26:307 (5) - add NC?
2014-08-10 01:30 captin1: 01:57:195 (5) - ^
2014-08-10 01:30 P A N: hmm I think it's the same stanza
2014-08-10 01:31 captin1: you go back and forth between 1 measure and 2 measure
2014-08-10 01:31 captin1: a lot
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: 01:44:414 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this section 2 measure
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: 01:47:254 (1,2,3,4) - 1 measure
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: 01:48:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 2
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: 01:51:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: yeah
2014-08-10 01:32 P A N: woops
2014-08-10 01:32 P A N: ok then
2014-08-10 01:33 P A N: let's NC
2014-08-10 01:33 P A N: ahaha
2014-08-10 01:33 captin1: hahaha
2014-08-10 01:33 captin1: parts like 02:04:295 - it's totally fine to do 2 measure, cause it's so slow, but others it just doesn't make sense
2014-08-10 01:33 P A N: 01:57:195 (5) - NC for this
2014-08-10 01:34 captin1: yeah
2014-08-10 01:40 P A N: btw captin
2014-08-10 01:40 captin1: hm?
2014-08-10 01:40 P A N: what hitsound should I put on 03:13:171 (1,2,1) -
2014-08-10 01:41 captin1: i don't think you need much hitsounding there, the song takes care of it imo
2014-08-10 01:41 captin1: just leaving it as regular soft samples should be fine
worked out some of the NCing and changed a pattern in Insane
should be good to go, ranked
Yay, congrats :3
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Topic Starter
thanks all so much :3
great hitsound
gratz!
gratz!
Ranked already? :O
Congratz, P A N
Glad i know that my stars didn't go waste on this one
Congratz, P A N
Glad i know that my stars didn't go waste on this one
pan please marry me
Congratz >.<!!
Topic Starter
thanks
so late
Congratz :3
so easy miss
Congratz :3
so easy miss