where is awesome bg? :<
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that bg is too cute so it not fit with this song. so I changed it.Kodora wrote:
where is awesome bg? :<
saw this on #modreqs so i took my time to trying mod this. but it looks like it's kinda impossible to find which is kinda weird to me so i only give some suggestions. you can ignore it if you don't like it (no KD i mean ._.)
[General]
Preview time should be at 03:12:816 -
00:19:207 - Kiai time kinda unnecessary (or you can use it's fountain instead
)
01:30:567 - ^
[Insane]
00:47:520 - add note?
02:21:248 - ^
03:19:473 - ^
01:47:254 - i kinda hate when you're overuse the Finish. doesn't suit with the song
01:52:934 - ^
if you want to, you can use this hitsound instead
i can only mod 1 diff. as for the others, sorry ._.)/
EDIT : just want to notice that i've shoot my
to your map. hopefully this get ranked soon
[General]
Preview time should be at 03:12:816 -
00:19:207 - Kiai time kinda unnecessary (or you can use it's fountain instead
)01:30:567 - ^
[Insane]
00:47:520 - add note?
02:21:248 - ^
03:19:473 - ^
01:47:254 - i kinda hate when you're overuse the Finish. doesn't suit with the song
01:52:934 - ^
if you want to, you can use this hitsound instead
i can only mod 1 diff. as for the others, sorry ._.)/
EDIT : just want to notice that i've shoot my
nice map
Topic Starter
thank you <3Amamiya Yuko wrote:
nice map
hitsound suggestion on 01:47:254 (1) - to here 02:04:295 (1) -
SPOILER
19:21 mercury2004: อยากให้เสียง snare
19:21 mercury2004: มันเด่นกว่า finish
19:22 mercury2004: เพิ่มซักหน่อยได้ป่ะ
19:22 mercury2004: คือ
19:22 P A N: snare คือเสียงอะไรอะ
19:22 P A N: 55
19:22 mercury2004: finish จะเป้น background
19:22 mercury2004: 01:56:130 (4) -
19:22 mercury2004: snare
19:22 mercury2004: อาจจะงานเยอะหน่อย คือ
19:23 mercury2004: เพิ่มเสียง snare ให้ดังขึ้น
19:23 mercury2004: แล้วก็ timing section all finish
19:23 mercury2004: ให้เบาลง
19:23 mercury2004: ตอนนี้ finish ก็โอแล้ว
19:23 mercury2004: แต่เพิ่ท snare ก็ดี
19:24 mercury2004: 01:46:544 (8) - ดูท่อนนี้ กับ 01:48:496 (7) -
19:24 mercury2004: เหมือนเสียงกลอง อยู่คนละเลเยอกัน
19:21 mercury2004: มันเด่นกว่า finish
19:22 mercury2004: เพิ่มซักหน่อยได้ป่ะ
19:22 mercury2004: คือ
19:22 P A N: snare คือเสียงอะไรอะ
19:22 P A N: 55
19:22 mercury2004: finish จะเป้น background
19:22 mercury2004: 01:56:130 (4) -
19:22 mercury2004: snare
19:22 mercury2004: อาจจะงานเยอะหน่อย คือ
19:23 mercury2004: เพิ่มเสียง snare ให้ดังขึ้น
19:23 mercury2004: แล้วก็ timing section all finish
19:23 mercury2004: ให้เบาลง
19:23 mercury2004: ตอนนี้ finish ก็โอแล้ว
19:23 mercury2004: แต่เพิ่ท snare ก็ดี
19:24 mercury2004: 01:46:544 (8) - ดูท่อนนี้ กับ 01:48:496 (7) -
19:24 mercury2004: เหมือนเสียงกลอง อยู่คนละเลเยอกัน
Topic Starter
thanks :3[ Joey ] wrote:
This is one of my favorite maps
Great job
Take a star
Hi!
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
[Hard]
[Normal]
Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
- I'm not sure but maybe the position of the red line is not appropriate. 00:00:744 - Try to move the red line 00:00:344 - here.
and Please set the volume and Sampleset to constant. other diffs in the same way. - Please check the Warning for storyboard.
- Inconsistency in Kiai Times and Inconsistency in combo colours. I recommend that you set to constant them.
- Clear.
[Hard]
- 00:46:544 (4) - Clap
- 00:49:384 (2) - ^
- 02:39:088 (3) - Slider shape is too ugly.. Try to make calm slider and blanket.
- 02:39:621 (4) - ^almost same above, consider changing that slider shape.
- 04:13:755 - Unsnaped green line here. I recommend that move to 04:13:349 -
[Normal]
- I recommend that HP+1. HP2 is too low for Normal diff imo.
- 02:14:414 - This rhythm is a little difficult for beginners. You followed the vocal here 02:12:816 (1) - ,
but the next to followed the song 02:14:414 - . so I suggest that start a slider at here 02:14:591 - .
Topic Starter
All fixed!! thanks Guy :3
PAN!! Go go Ranked!!!!!!
Star~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Star~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Topic Starter
♥HabiHolic wrote:
PAN!! Go go Ranked!!!!!!
Star~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Topic Starter
thanks so much finally \o/Guy wrote:
Bubbled
go go
if it get ranked i will be the first to download it 
SPOILER
2014-08-10 01:13 captin1: personally i would have done something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1910396 but it's your call
2014-08-10 01:18 captin1: normal: 00:39:088 (4,1) - swap NC
2014-08-10 01:20 captin1: 02:29:680 (6,1) - same
2014-08-10 01:20 captin1: and then 02:32:698 (3) - NC here
2014-08-10 01:20 P A N: hmm why I hear like this http://puu.sh/aM894/c21efbfbf8.jpg XD
2014-08-10 01:21 P A N: all fix
2014-08-10 01:22 captin1: 02:41:396 (4) - I'd recommend a NC here too
2014-08-10 01:23 P A N: ok
2014-08-10 01:23 captin1: 04:00:745 (2) - maybe on this? haha might be cooler
2014-08-10 01:24 P A N: you mean NC? XD
2014-08-10 01:24 captin1: yeah haha
2014-08-10 01:24 P A N: I think two one is weird.. huh? XDD
2014-08-10 01:24 captin1: sure that's fine
2014-08-10 01:26 captin1: although 04:05:183 (5) - 04:06:603 (1) - 04:08:023 (3) - 04:09:443 (1) - 04:10:863 (3) - toggle NC on all of these, it just gets off here at the end :<
2014-08-10 01:27 captin1: hard: 00:09:144 (1,3) - ......swap NC hahahaha
2014-08-10 01:27 P A N: omg why my nc so..
2014-08-10 01:28 captin1: easy to get off sometimes if you're not paying attention
2014-08-10 01:28 P A N: XD
2014-08-10 01:28 captin1: 00:49:029 (1) - i would remove this one, to be consistent with the parts before
2014-08-10 01:28 P A N: you are right
2014-08-10 01:28 captin1: remove nc*
2014-08-10 01:29 P A N: ahaha ok
2014-08-10 01:29 captin1: 01:26:307 (5) - add NC?
2014-08-10 01:30 captin1: 01:57:195 (5) - ^
2014-08-10 01:30 P A N: hmm I think it's the same stanza
2014-08-10 01:31 captin1: you go back and forth between 1 measure and 2 measure
2014-08-10 01:31 captin1: a lot
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: 01:44:414 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this section 2 measure
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: 01:47:254 (1,2,3,4) - 1 measure
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: 01:48:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 2
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: 01:51:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: yeah
2014-08-10 01:32 P A N: woops
2014-08-10 01:32 P A N: ok then
2014-08-10 01:33 P A N: let's NC
2014-08-10 01:33 P A N: ahaha
2014-08-10 01:33 captin1: hahaha
2014-08-10 01:33 captin1: parts like 02:04:295 - it's totally fine to do 2 measure, cause it's so slow, but others it just doesn't make sense
2014-08-10 01:33 P A N: 01:57:195 (5) - NC for this
2014-08-10 01:34 captin1: yeah
2014-08-10 01:40 P A N: btw captin
2014-08-10 01:40 captin1: hm?
2014-08-10 01:40 P A N: what hitsound should I put on 03:13:171 (1,2,1) -
2014-08-10 01:41 captin1: i don't think you need much hitsounding there, the song takes care of it imo
2014-08-10 01:41 captin1: just leaving it as regular soft samples should be fine
2014-08-10 01:18 captin1: normal: 00:39:088 (4,1) - swap NC
2014-08-10 01:20 captin1: 02:29:680 (6,1) - same
2014-08-10 01:20 captin1: and then 02:32:698 (3) - NC here
2014-08-10 01:20 P A N: hmm why I hear like this http://puu.sh/aM894/c21efbfbf8.jpg XD
2014-08-10 01:21 P A N: all fix
2014-08-10 01:22 captin1: 02:41:396 (4) - I'd recommend a NC here too
2014-08-10 01:23 P A N: ok
2014-08-10 01:23 captin1: 04:00:745 (2) - maybe on this? haha might be cooler
2014-08-10 01:24 P A N: you mean NC? XD
2014-08-10 01:24 captin1: yeah haha
2014-08-10 01:24 P A N: I think two one is weird.. huh? XDD
2014-08-10 01:24 captin1: sure that's fine
2014-08-10 01:26 captin1: although 04:05:183 (5) - 04:06:603 (1) - 04:08:023 (3) - 04:09:443 (1) - 04:10:863 (3) - toggle NC on all of these, it just gets off here at the end :<
2014-08-10 01:27 captin1: hard: 00:09:144 (1,3) - ......swap NC hahahaha
2014-08-10 01:27 P A N: omg why my nc so..
2014-08-10 01:28 captin1: easy to get off sometimes if you're not paying attention
2014-08-10 01:28 P A N: XD
2014-08-10 01:28 captin1: 00:49:029 (1) - i would remove this one, to be consistent with the parts before
2014-08-10 01:28 P A N: you are right
2014-08-10 01:28 captin1: remove nc*
2014-08-10 01:29 P A N: ahaha ok
2014-08-10 01:29 captin1: 01:26:307 (5) - add NC?
2014-08-10 01:30 captin1: 01:57:195 (5) - ^
2014-08-10 01:30 P A N: hmm I think it's the same stanza
2014-08-10 01:31 captin1: you go back and forth between 1 measure and 2 measure
2014-08-10 01:31 captin1: a lot
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: 01:44:414 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this section 2 measure
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: 01:47:254 (1,2,3,4) - 1 measure
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: 01:48:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 2
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: 01:51:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1
2014-08-10 01:32 captin1: yeah
2014-08-10 01:32 P A N: woops
2014-08-10 01:32 P A N: ok then
2014-08-10 01:33 P A N: let's NC
2014-08-10 01:33 P A N: ahaha
2014-08-10 01:33 captin1: hahaha
2014-08-10 01:33 captin1: parts like 02:04:295 - it's totally fine to do 2 measure, cause it's so slow, but others it just doesn't make sense
2014-08-10 01:33 P A N: 01:57:195 (5) - NC for this
2014-08-10 01:34 captin1: yeah
2014-08-10 01:40 P A N: btw captin
2014-08-10 01:40 captin1: hm?
2014-08-10 01:40 P A N: what hitsound should I put on 03:13:171 (1,2,1) -
2014-08-10 01:41 captin1: i don't think you need much hitsounding there, the song takes care of it imo
2014-08-10 01:41 captin1: just leaving it as regular soft samples should be fine
worked out some of the NCing and changed a pattern in Insane
should be good to go, ranked
Yay, congrats :3
Gratzz~
Normaland Hard by me is 1#~
Hard by me is 2#~
Normal
Hard by me is 2#~
Tokohana full ver \w/
PAN map fripside black bullet full ver so you will be complete to map black bullet :3
grats anyway baka
PAN map fripside black bullet full ver so you will be complete to map black bullet :3
grats anyway baka
grats pan
Congratz! PANDA-sama!!~
Topic Starter
thanks all so much :3
great hitsound
gratz!
gratz!
Ranked already? :O
Congratz, P A N
Glad i know that my stars didn't go waste on this one
Congratz, P A N
Glad i know that my stars didn't go waste on this one
pan please marry me
Congratz >.<!!
Topic Starter
thanks
so late
Congratz :3
so easy miss
Congratz :3
so easy miss