Suga Shikao - Hajimari No Hi (TV Size) · forum

Mok

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Mok 2009-12-16T13:12:52+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on giovedì 28 gennaio 2010 at 20:33:21

Artist: Suga Shikao
Title: Hajimari No Hi (TV Size)
Source: Letter Bee
Tags: Tegami Bachi Tegamibachi Hiroyuki Asada
BPM: 127
Filesize: 6511kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

Bee~ (4,18 stars, 161 notes)
Head Bee~ (4,84 stars, 203 notes)
Letter~ (3,07 stars, 109 notes)

Download: Suga Shikao - Hajimari No Hi (TV Size)
Download: Suga Shikao - Hajimari No Hi (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Letter Bee (Tegami Bachi) opening. Easy (Letter~), Normal (Bee~), Hard (Head Bee~) by me, tmokb93.

Complete.

Last edited by Mok 2010-01-28T19:33:34+00:00, edited 21 times in total.

mks_old

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mks_old 2009-12-16T14:05:06+00:00

Love this anime, starred!

Diasios

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Diasios 2009-12-16T14:15:31+00:00

Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

Set preview point in all diffs.
Offset = 13000

[Letter~]

Add kiai
00:19:037 (2) - End on red tick (00:19:850)
00:42:099 (1) - lol do something else, this slider is boring.
01:11:582 (x) - Add a break
01:24:057 (1) - End on white tick (01:28:590)

[Bee~]

Add kiai
00:21:071 (5,1) - Spacing

[Head Bee~]

00:05:041 (1) - 1 square left (grid level 3)
00:38:001 (1) - Remove new combo
01:28:094 (x) - Add a circle
01:28:330 (x) - ^
01:28:556 (x) - ^

Starred~

Mok

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Mok 2009-12-16T17:12:14+00:00

fixed x3

Leorda

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Leorda 2009-12-17T00:51:27+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Mok

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Mok 2009-12-20T11:31:16+00:00

fixed x3

Armin

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Armin 2009-12-20T17:33:07+00:00

L'audio è bassissimo, scarica questo mp3:

Download: Suga Shikao - Hajimari No Hi (tmokb93) [Head Bee~].osu

Download: Letter_Bee_-_Hajimari_no_Hi_TV_Size.mp3

[_Edward_]

16 posts

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[_Edward_] 2009-12-21T10:20:39+00:00

Complete the Head Bee one, Starred <3

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2009-12-24T05:15:42+00:00

Bee~
01:11:818: What's with the break?

Hard Bee~
Too much streams. (if your planning to incorporate those in the finished map)

Mok

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Mok 2009-12-24T08:13:48+00:00

fixed x3

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2009-12-26T01:04:50+00:00

Head Bee

00:09:432 (9) - new combo ?
00:12:976 (25) - ^
00:14:629 (6) - end at 00:16:755 ? and 00:16:991 - add a note ?
00:20:062 - add a note ?
00:20:298 - ^
00:21:952 - ^
00:23:842 - ^
00:23:960 - ^
00:24:078 - ^
00:25:023 (3,4,5) - sliders ?
01:08:960 - add a note ?
01:09:196 - ^

01:17:936 (4) - move to 01:18:172 and 01:17:227 (2,3,4,5) - sliders ?

Bee

00:55:519 (4,1,2) - Spacing

nice map!!!

star~

quintessence

88 posts

Joined September 2009

quintessence 2009-12-27T12:38:24+00:00

Nice song!
<Bee>
(suggestion)
00:45:834(5) Remove this slider,and add a note.
00:46:070 Add a slider. (Lenght: From 00:46:070 to 00:46:543)

<Head Bee>
00:46:046(1) This slider's end move to 00:46:519.
00:52:661(1) This slider's end move to 00:54:078.
01:18:172(4) Check spacing.

☆Star

Mok

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Mok 2009-12-31T18:58:15+00:00

fixed x3

Mok

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Mok 2010-01-01T01:08:15+00:00

Corrected things AImod told me.

Hange

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Hange 2010-01-01T15:20:14+00:00

random mod~

[Overall]
Louder the mp3 by 5dB if you use Audacity (http://audacity.sourceforge.net/)
(^Remember also increase the hitsound volume by at lease 3 ticks if you have louden the mp3)

The maximum size of a background is 1024*768, your current BG size is 1365*768. Please resize it.

Tags:Tegami Bachi Tegamibachi Hiroyuki Asada

[Head Bee~]
Offset:12,976 (Why different from other difficulties

?)
00:42:976, 00:58:094 - (timing sections)Why red lines

?
Will further mod (and star) once this map is moved to pending.
Good luck~

Polaris03_old

54 posts

Joined February 2009

Polaris03_old 2010-01-09T16:14:31+00:00

Add "(TV Size)" to title
Nice map!

Mok

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Mok 2010-01-12T14:51:28+00:00

Fixed :3

Lokamp

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Lokamp 2010-01-22T17:40:20+00:00

Letter
01:16:070 (4) - move it a square up
01:21:976 (4) - move it a square left

Bee
[General] It was ok but please, avoid beats on the sliders's road [like on 00:38:039 (3,4)]

Head Bee
[General] in my opinion, a map with no sounds can make quite annoying to pass streaming section... However, it's ok!

Except for some tiny spacing problems, this map has good potencial to be improved, even if you don't want to set sounds!
Since it's well made so far, here's your star ;3

simplistiC

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Joined April 2009

simplistiC 2010-01-25T08:19:34+00:00

[Letter~]
00:34:496 (3) - Move 1 grid left
00:34:968 (4) - Move 3 grids left
00:42:999 (1) - Split this slider into 2 or more?
00:49:377 (5) - Move 2 grids left.

[Bee~]
00:29:062 (4) - Align?
00:34:259 (9) - Move a grid down?
00:34:496 (10) - Move 2 grids up and 2 grids left? Looks prettier!

[Head Bee~]
00:14:653 (6) - The reverse arrow is hidden behind the previous note. You might want to move this.

Nice map. Here's a star!

Mok

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Mok 2010-01-25T12:39:48+00:00

Fixed

Card N'FoRcE

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Here since the beginning

Card N'FoRcE 2010-01-25T21:08:23+00:00

- General:

Volume dei suoni molto basso. Alzali un po', dai.

- Letter:

.Opinions:
00:42:999 (1) - noioso

- Bee:

.Opinions:
Ma tutto ai bordi? xD (guarda screen)
.Suggestions:
00:38:275 (4) - nazi, sposta più in giù per fixare spacing

- Hard Bee:

.Opinions:
Troppo KIAI
00:42:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - viene molto male per colpa degli stack
00:50:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - geniale. spero che non ti ci rompano le scatole, però.
.Suggestions:
00:12:055 (10) - nuova combo
00:44:889 (1,1,2) - queste nuove combo non hanno senso. 00:46:070 (1) - rimuovi; 00:47:251 (2) - aggiungi; 00:48:669 (1) - rimuovi;
01:01:897 (1,2) - cosa seguono?
01:11:110 (14) - molto insensato, cosa segue?
01:24:574 (1) - ti diranno che è unrankabile, perché il percorso non è comprensibile. A me non dà fastidio, perché è fattibile anche non conoscendolo, ma ti avviso cmq.

La Hard ha molte cose non chiare.
Stello per potenziale, ma devi fixare un bel po', prima di avere una protobolla da me

Mok

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Mok 2010-01-25T21:56:44+00:00

Fixed

Larto

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Larto 2010-01-26T14:19:29+00:00

Offset: 1,688

Head bee:
00:17:035 (7) - Add New Combo?
00:17:271 (1) - Remove New Combo?
00:28:610 (2) - Add New Combo?
00:32:153 (2) - ^
00:42:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern just sounds and plays weird o_O
00:50:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - ^. Extremely bad here, because you can barely see the notes.
00:52:710 (1) - That slider is a bit ugly
01:09:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - You can keep this stream if you want to, but it doesn't sound right.

Bee:
Why are the circles in this diff smaller than the ones in head bee? If that's intended, it's alright.

Letter:
00:43:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - If you keep that pattern, you definitely need an easier difficulty.

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-01-28T16:51:13+00:00

[Letter~]

00:26:491 (x) - Remove this break.
01:11:373 (4) - End kiai here.
01:13:262 (1) - New kiai section here.
01:24:601 (1) - End kiai at the end of this spinner.

[Bee~]

01:11:373 (7) - End kiai here.
01:13:262 (1) - New kiai section here.
01:26:727 (1) - End kiai at the end of this spinner.

[Head Bee~]

Why different kiai time here? Use the same kiai time for ALL the difficulties, please~

00:40:900 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:50:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Change the spacing of this stream, please.
00:52:711 (1) - Weird slider. Change it, please.

Mok

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Mok 2010-01-28T17:40:05+00:00

fixed :3

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-01-28T17:52:21+00:00

Bubbled.