Misato Aki - Kuchibiru Daydream · forum

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-12-13T07:15:04+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年12月17日 at 18:19:02

Artist: Misato Aki
Title: Kuchibiru Daydream
Source: Strawberry Panic
Tags: anime Strawberry Panic
BPM: 145
Filesize: 12645kb
Play Time: 02:39
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.65 stars, 169 notes)
Hard (4.92 stars, 348 notes)
Normal (4.29 stars, 224 notes)
Taka's Hard (4.96 stars, 364 notes)

Download: Misato Aki - Kuchibiru Daydream
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Strawberry Panic OP2

" Kuchibiru Daydream "

YURI ! !ヽ(*⌒∇⌒*)ﾉ::･'ﾟ☆｡.::･'ﾟ★｡.::･'ﾟ☆｡Yay ~ !!

- STATUS -

Easy > Finished
Normal > Finished
Hard > Finished
Taka's Hard > Finished

MOD 1 : miccoliasms
MOD 2 : Card N'FoRcE
MOD 3 : DJPop
MOD 4 : osuplayer111

Last edited by Cyril Scarlet 2009-12-17T11:19:36+00:00, edited 21 times in total.

taka1235

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taka1235 2009-12-13T08:32:20+00:00

出来た!

Download: Misato Aki - Kuchibiru Daydream (S i R i R u) [Taka's Hard].osu

Estelle18

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Estelle18 2009-12-13T09:54:43+00:00

แปะ ดาว เพื่อ นางิสะ >W<~

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-12-13T10:19:18+00:00

UPLOADED ! Taka's Hard =w=//

Estelle > ไม่มีเพื่อคนทำเรอะ -3-

Tanmak

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Tanmak 2009-12-13T13:16:50+00:00

Finally, siriru san become osu supporter, and uploaded!

Then, star

I envy you about osu supporter. ; _ ;

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-12-13T13:29:52+00:00

orion help me about that =w=

I think i want to sup OSU long time since I'm play OSU but I dont have Card =w=

miccoliasms

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miccoliasms 2009-12-13T17:39:40+00:00

全て提案です

[Easy]
00:38:932 - breakを入れたほうがいいと思います
00:45:003 (4,1) - 1grit下げた方が形がいいと思います
01:12:034 (5,6,7,1) - 5と6、7と1の間隔は同じ方がいいかもしれません
01:56:000 (1,2,3,4) - 1grit左にずらした方が形がいいと思います
02:13:017 (1,2,3,4) - 少しなっている音とリズムが違ってEasyとしてはやりづらいかもしれません

[Normal]
00:22:007 (2) - 00:22:007にnoteで00:22:027~00:22:069までスライダーの方が音に合っていると思います
00:34:048 (2,3) - (2)は00:35:031までの往復スライダーにして(3)は00:35:051~0035:093までの往復スライダーの方が音にあってると思います
00:51:086 (1) - Finishを入れたほうが好みです
01:00:034 (1) - ^
02:32:020 (3,4) - 今までのパターン的に02:32:020~02:32:082の往復スライダーの方がいいと思います

[Hard]
00:51:086 (1) - ここからx1に戻して00:52:038にnoteを追加した方が音に合っていると思います
01:15:024 (5) - 01:15:065までの普通のスライダーにして01:15:086~01:16:027までのスライダーを追加した方が音にあってると思います
01:18:013 (4,5) - 個人的にはここはスライダー(4)~(5)までのスライダーにした方が押しやすいと思います
01:45:065 (1) - ここからはx1に戻した方が曲調にあってると思います
02:13:038 (6,7) - 00:51:086 (1)と同じです

[Taka's Hard]
00:31:058 (1,2,3) - 間隔が統一じゃないのが気になります 00:33:024 (2,3,4)これと同じ間隔にした方がいいと思います

NiceMap~♪

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-12-13T19:10:29+00:00

miccoliasms wrote:
全て提案です

[Easy]
00:38:932 - breakを入れたほうがいいと思います
00:45:003 (4,1) - 1grit下げた方が形がいいと思います
01:12:034 (5,6,7,1) - 5と6、7と1の間隔は同じ方がいいかもしれません
01:56:000 (1,2,3,4) - 1grit左にずらした方が形がいいと思います
02:13:017 (1,2,3,4) - 少しなっている音とリズムが違ってEasyとしてはやりづらいかもしれません

[Normal]
00:22:007 (2) - 00:22:007にnoteで00:22:027~00:22:069までスライダーの方が音に合っていると思います
00:34:048 (2,3) - (2)は00:35:031までの往復スライダーにして(3)は00:35:051~0035:093までの往復スライダーの方が音にあってると思います
00:51:086 (1) - Finishを入れたほうが好みです
01:00:034 (1) - ^
02:32:020 (3,4) - 今までのパターン的に02:32:020~02:32:082の往復スライダーの方がいいと思います

[Hard]
00:51:086 (1) - ここからx1に戻して00:52:038にnoteを追加した方が音に合っていると思います
01:15:024 (5) - 01:15:065までの普通のスライダーにして01:15:086~01:16:027までのスライダーを追加した方が音にあってると思います
01:18:013 (4,5) - 個人的にはここはスライダー(4)~(5)までのスライダーにした方が押しやすいと思います
01:45:065 (1) - ここからはx1に戻した方が曲調にあってると思います
02:13:038 (6,7) - 00:51:086 (1)と同じです

02:32:020 (3,4) だけ好みで取っておきましたが、残りは修正しました！

ＭＯＤありがとうです！巫女さん

DeadAlready

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DeadAlready 2009-12-14T09:42:03+00:00

nice map and nice song

Stared <3

taka san and siriru san gogogo~ >w</

Aenna

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Aenna 2009-12-14T10:39:25+00:00

Nice ~ ☆

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-12-14T11:46:47+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2009-12-14T13:33:41+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Iluhiwizel

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Iluhiwizel 2009-12-14T13:34:50+00:00

star~*

ให้เพลงน่ะ ไำม่ใช่คนทำ XD

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-12-14T13:34:57+00:00

大好きｗ

xen > ไม่เป็นไร สาวก yuri 555

Furawa

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Furawa 2009-12-15T10:05:17+00:00

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-12-15T10:47:13+00:00

thanks SOGA chu :3

Card N'FoRcE

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Here since the beginning

Card N'FoRcE 2009-12-15T14:31:15+00:00

- General:

Great Great Storyboard, as always. It's alays a pleasure modding your maps
Hitsounds are really low in all difficulties; try to boost them a bit

- Easy:

.Opinions:
from 00:43:00 to 00:56:00 - no hitsounds here?
.Suggestions:
01:06:34 (3) - clap here does NOT sound good imho D:
.Errors/Mistakes:
02:13:17 (1) - make it 1/4 longer. It sounds waaaaaaaaaaaaay better.

- Normal:

.Suggestions:
00:21:03 (8) - add clap; then remove clap from the beginning of 00:21:44 (1).
01:02:00 (1,2) - this spacing feels weird, because the whole map has a fixed spacing...
01:20:00 (1) - make this end in 01:21:86.
01:43:38 (2) - add whistle?

- Hard:

.Suggestions:
00:16:07 (1) - the Finish hitsound at the beginning sounds really weird o.o
00:17:31 (1) - clap here feels wierd, too.
00:39:13 (1) - remove new combo

- Taka's Hard:

.Opinions:
02:39:76 - in my opinion, removing KIAI here fits better
.Suggestions:
00:33:86 (1) - this new combo feels really weird

Love your simple yet awesome Storyboards, S i R i R u. Keep up the good work ^^
Star (and why not, another kd-star) ^^

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-12-15T15:05:41+00:00

Thank you very much Card N' for help me everytime and thank you for STAR.

I'll go to Edit now ~ ^^

Card N'FoRcE wrote:
- General:
Great Great Storyboard, as always. It's alays a pleasure modding your maps
Hitsounds are really low in all difficulties; try to boost them a bit
Changed Sounds Volume

- Easy:
.Opinions:
from 00:43:00 to 00:56:00 - no hitsounds here? Done
.Suggestions:
01:06:34 (3) - clap here does NOT sound good imho D: Done
.Errors/Mistakes:
02:13:17 (1) - make it 1/4 longer. It sounds waaaaaaaaaaaaay better.
Done

- Normal:
.Suggestions:
00:21:03 (8) - add clap; then remove clap from the beginning of 00:21:44 (1). Done
01:02:00 (1,2) - this spacing feels weird, because the whole map has a fixed spacing... Changed Style
01:20:00 (1) - make this end in 01:21:86. Done
01:43:38 (2) - add whistle?
Done

- Hard:
.Suggestions:
00:16:07 (1) - the Finish hitsound at the beginning sounds really weird o.o Done
00:17:31 (1) - clap here feels wierd, too. Done
00:39:13 (1) - remove new combo
Done

Love your simple yet awesome Storyboards, S i R i R u. Keep up the good work ^^
Star (and why not, another kd-star) ^^

taka1235

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taka1235 2009-12-15T16:05:43+00:00

:d

Download: Misato Aki - Kuchibiru Daydream (S i R i R u) [Taka's Hard].osu

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-12-15T16:08:54+00:00

UPLOADED !

DJPop

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Here since the beginning

DJPop 2009-12-16T04:15:14+00:00

ทำให้ตากระพริบได้ด้วยสิ

~Easy~
02:13:017 (1) - end on left blue tick

~Normal~
00:21:044 (1) - hitclap at ending
02:19:038 (3) - move 1/4 left
02:32:041 (4) - start on right blue tick

~Hard~
00:15:024 (2) - hitclap
00:17:072 (2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - วาง hitclap สลับตำแหน่งกันแล้ว -*-
00:24:034 (3) - hitclap
00:25:017 (5) - ^

~Taka's Hard~
No major issues.

+Star

gdeath

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gdeath 2009-12-16T05:49:48+00:00

All fine.

star.

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-12-16T15:48:39+00:00

DJPop wrote:
ทำให้ตากระพริบได้ด้วยสิ

~Easy~
02:13:017 (1) - end on left blue tick Changed

~Normal~
00:21:044 (1) - hitclap at ending Done
02:19:038 (3) - move 1/4 left Done
02:32:041 (4) - start on right blue tick Done

~Hard~
00:15:024 (2) - hitclap Done
00:17:072 (2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - วาง hitclap สลับตำแหน่งกันแล้ว -*- Done
00:24:034 (3) - hitclap Done
00:25:017 (5) - ^

+Star

Thank you DJPop for modding and STAR !

Thank you gdeath for STAR !

dkey

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dkey 2009-12-16T16:01:24+00:00

star~

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-12-16T16:02:56+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Andrea

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Andrea 2009-12-17T10:29:36+00:00

[Overall]

Capitalize "anime" on the tags.

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

02:13:048 (2,1) - This is like a jump for an easy difficulty. Too hard for new players. Adjust the spacing please.

[Normal]

00:50:000 (2,3) - This change of spacing maybe can confuse new players, because of the BPM change. Adjust the spacing please.

[Taka's Hard]

01:18:076 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Why new combo spam here? I don't understand the real sense of this new combos.
02:39:086 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^

Fix and I'll bubble.

taka1235

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taka1235 2009-12-17T11:01:11+00:00

FIXED

Download: Misato Aki - Kuchibiru Daydream (S i R i R u) [Taka's Hard].osu

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2009-12-17T11:23:25+00:00

UPLOADED