1. Hard (4.55 stars, 429 notes)
2. kino's Relaxing (4.12 stars, 128 notes)
3. Normal (4.31 stars, 271 notes)

1. 00:10:075 (1) - Make this slider 1/4 longer. (Add one extra reverse arrow)
2. 03:18:025 (1,1,1) - Don't like this ending with 3 spinners, maybe make it a little diffrent. Seems so boring now.

1. Decrease overall difficulty by one.

Gladi wrote:

- Hard.

1. 00:10:075 (1) - Make this slider 1/4 longer. (Add one extra reverse arrow) Fixed
2. 03:18:025 (1,1,1) - Don't like this ending with 3 spinners, maybe make it a little diffrent. Seems so boring now.

I would keep it for now, sorry

- Kino's Easy.

1. Decrease overall difficulty by one.

Fixed

Starred~

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

Nice map
但是offset错了
记住：滴滴声是对鼓声的。offset : 498 fixed
normal
01:07:99 (8) - no finish
01:14:99 - no SB sound
01:23:99 (8) - no finish
01:32:31 (1) - 白线开始
01:39:99 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1258 4不加hitsound,1加finish 这里我把4的hitsound去掉,在01:40:498加SB finish
01:44:49 (9,10,11) - 降50%的音量，后面都一样，不说了
01:50:99 - 不加SB sound ，后面3/4拍都不加SB sound
最后加一个4拍的spinner. All fixed!


hard
01:32:25 (3) - 改成note
01:32:50 - 开始spinner ,4拍
01:40:00 - 跟normal一样改
02:50:25 - 这两个sb sound都不要

还有有时出现的normal hitsound降低50%音量
基本根normal一样改下。 All fixed

其他还好

tsukamaete wrote:

:D looks fine.
I have no suggestion for this map :p
nice done

P.S:storyboard hitsounds very well done

James2250 wrote:

easy:
looks cool

normal:
01:50:099 (3) - either move to 01:50:087 or fix spacing lol yes, I noticed...the result of resnaped by 1/2 snap divisor

hard:
looks cool

*star*

kino77 wrote:

Thanks for modding~

Mod Breeze's diffs in game,
Here is my star~

Zekira wrote:

Offset: 496 (-2)... very good offset there. *autostar*

[General]
Uh, slider ball looks really weird...

gdeath wrote:

微风

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Map is awesome
But this girl don't know how to act xD lol

[kino's Easy]
Add "kino77" to the tags. added
The volume is too low. I can hear almost any note. Could you please rise it a bit?
One more thing: Use a kiai explosion, please >_<
Just to say, here = chorus

These wait for kino77 to decide how to fix

Normal - nice
00:45:998(4) - Move one grid down

Fixed

Hard - wow
There is no kiai explosion for the last chorus, could you please use one?

I used to like use KIAI time, but now I think it's too glaring to my eyes D:
ps.: Using level 2 grid

Poor sheep. Keep spinning and spinning on the slider... ;__;
Star for it's healthy ;__;

Lokamp wrote:

Easy
[General] The song's volume covers the hitsounds... try to raise their volume and to use claps along the map, like on the other modes!
01:32:049 (spinner) - no hitsounds's volume for this spinner

Normal
01:32:049 (spinner) - no hitsounds's volume here Does it? you mean SB clap?
01:50:099 (3) - move it to 01:50:087 (previous blue tim ing tick) lol I resnaped by 1/2 snap divisor, fixed
02:04:074 (6) - new combo
02:05:074 (9) - ^ Keep it for now, they are all in a completed lyric
02:20:074 (5) - ^
02:21:074 (7) - ^ ^
02:30:049 (spinner) - remove hitsounds's volume for this spinner Used

Hard
[General] too easy for an Hard mode... try to make it a little bit harder! lol Just "hard" than normal...
00:24:099 (7) - move it a square upper (grid level 3)
01:20:099 (9) - move it 2-3 squares left (grid level 3) all fixed
03:00:099 (7) - new combo

Remember: easier map doesn't mean shorter map! Try to make all modes as long as Hard one to make this lovely song rankable! ;3 yea, you're right, but you know, when I was a beginner, a long map was always trouble me lol, anyway, just let it more easy to a newcomer

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Remove "Online Game" from the source, leave just "Mabinogi". (which is actually misspelt on Hard)
Other than Fantasy Life and kino77, which should be the tags in all difficulties, the other tags are redundant and should be removed. Fixed, you're so careful

[Normal]

00:35:248 (5) - Up a grid? Your other formations have had the 3 notes touch, and it looks a little uneven. Fixed
00:42:498 (3) - Turn off grid snap and align it so that 1,2,3 looks nice as a triangle. fixed
01:03:248 (6,7,8) - Adjust the sliders a bit to make 6,8 touch? Fixed
01:20:248 (6) - Delete this, and replace it with a copy of 2 reversed. fixed
01:43:748 (7,8,9) - Packed a bit too tightly, I'd adjust it so that 7,9 had the same spacing as 6,7, to look nice. fixed

[Hard]

Grid snap has created spacing inconsistencies throughout the map; some 1/2s touch, others don't. That should be addressed by turning off grid snap and respacing. (For example: 00:23:248 (4,5,6))

01:42:248 (3,4,5) - Turn off grid snap and realign, making sure that 4 lines up with the endpoint of 3. fixed

Looks good, just watch out for the stuff on Hard. Star~

Shulin wrote:

I love Girls Generation

General:

~ Delete Mabinogi from the tags in all difficulties because it's already in the Source. well,fixed
~ BG color to black

Normal:

Unsnapped notes:

00:59:000 (2) - Unsnapped note
00:59:062 (1) - Unsnapped spinner fixed
01:32:250 (3) - Unsnapped
01:57:000 (9) - Unsnapped
01:57:062 (1) - Unsnapped ~ Rensap all notes.

Suggestions:

~ Consider adding some kiai (last chorus?), at present you only have a kiai burst at the end of spinners. KIAI time makes notes dazzling to eyes D:

00:54:748 (5) - New combo because it's a new lyric. fixed
01:18:248 (2,3,4) - This and the others like it play a little cramped, It's OK but you might want to consider spreading some of these parts out a little.
01:55:498 (6) - Move this note in grid 3, when you play this slider is to the right of 01:55:248 (5) - even though its in the right place in editor. yea,noticed
02:20:998 (6,7) - Waiting for the note hidden under the slider felt strange here. Respace?:arrow: I had seen this style of notes in other's map, so I think it's ok

There are some nazi issues I could pick up on in this difficulty, but it plays well so I won't bother

Hard:

02:46:498 - Kiai? This is the emphasis of the song. Dazzling notes, DX

That's all good job with the map and nice song

Star + Kudos Star

Shulin wrote:

You still have unsnapped notes in normal at:

00:58:998 (2) -
01:57:000 (9) -
01:57:062 (1) -

Alternatively you can rensnap by:

Timing > Resnap All Notes

No kudos for this post

bmin11 wrote:

[Generall]
add Nexon, devcat, and Tiffani on the tag since she's the main of the video added(I didn't know her name, just know "Girls' Generation as a whole )

[Hard]
01:23:248 (7,9) - spacing. You can just put #6 and #8 closer to the slider fixed
01:24:998 (x) - I wish this clap is gone. Is there anyway to delete it?
I guess no.... It is really loud you know That's SB sound o.o deleteted
most notes are 1 grid off spaced. Try to equalize the spacing fixed
03:13:373 (4) - spacing. It is more noticable because of the stream fixed
03:14:748 (11) - 1 grid up this one is right there o.o

[Normal]
01:43:998 (8) - spacing. I'm just pointing out the spacing that looks bad

That's all for me. Nice map

Lybydose wrote:

Rename kino's difficulty to something other than "Easy." Maybe like kino's Relaxing or something. It's a bit too difficult to call it "easy." Changed

Other than that, I don't see any real problems.

Derekku Chan wrote:

Not gonna pop the pubble, but I have some suggestions.

[General]
*I would add a short audio lead-in to give a tiny intro before the music starts. (1/2 - 1 second is enough)
added

[Normal]
*Raise overall difficulty on this too, please, and perhaps drain by a tick or two (it's pretty low atm). raised
01:18:248 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is a perfectionist nitpick of mine. XP Could you reform the sliders so that they're the same and so that the circles in the middle aren't hidden under or overlapping the sliders? It would looks so much cleaner/nicer if changed. :3 fixed as possible as I could
02:16:248 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - Better, but change (11) so that there's not a gap between it and the inside. fixed
02:30:498 (1) - Silence the whole thing instead of just the end? fixed XD. good idea

[Hard]
00:06:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Could you increase the volume a little bit for these? They're so quiet ;~; well,fixed
02:30:248 (3) - Hmm, maybe make this into a silent slider? sorry I would keep this

Nice job you two~

Derekku Chan wrote:

[kino's Relaxing]
*Could you raise the overall difficulty a tick? The approach speed is kinda slow and clusters some patterns which makes them a little hard to read.
01:32:498 (1) - Maybe end with a finish?
Otherwise, looks good.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Zomg, Mabinogi IRL.

Add a 0.5 second lead-in time in kino77's since the other difficulties have 0.5 lead in times. OK,fixed!

That's about it.

Comboburst is freaking CUTE! XD I love this female sword elf :3 cutie cutie~

JInxyjem wrote:

This was well mapped, but I can't think of why an advertistment goes on for 3 minutes :/