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Topic Starter
lol here is your map fixed up:
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Alphonse].osu
download and replace it with yours in your songs map
osu/songs/...
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Alphonse].osu
download and replace it with yours in your songs map
osu/songs/...
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Aqui está o fácil pronto. Espero que ajude. Here is the right easy. Hope I help.
[attachment=0:bf53e]Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Edward].osu[/attachment:bf53e]
[attachment=0:bf53e]Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Edward].osu[/attachment:bf53e]
This is what I got so far
Done with beats. WIP on hitsounds
Teara, I changed some timing sections so can you edit it again? Thanks
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Code B11].osu
Done with beats. WIP on hitsounds
Teara, I changed some timing sections so can you edit it again? Thanks
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Code B11].osu
Me and Bmin's parts sofar~
@ Bmin~ Ok done it, but please for the love of that all is holy~ work on the collaboration diff now~ delete the diff Code B11. Its hard to do things like this =p
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
@ Bmin~ Ok done it, but please for the love of that all is holy~ work on the collaboration diff now~ delete the diff Code B11. Its hard to do things like this =p
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
o.o 鋼の錬金術師
The title Cool Joke - UNDO(FMA 3rd Opening)
I think (FMA 3rd Opening) is uncessary to add in title, you should write it in tag or source
Star
The title Cool Joke - UNDO(FMA 3rd Opening)
I think (FMA 3rd Opening) is uncessary to add in title, you should write it in tag or source
Star
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
*Easy dif is... Short.
*Medium. Not all errors, but ...
- 00:56:727 > add a beat
- 00:59:665 > remove the beat
- 00:59:665 - 01:02:339 > the beats are a bit off of time
- 01:03:700 > move the beat to here {10}
- 01:42:297 > ^ {1}
*Collaboration diff is cool, really cool.
You win a star (Y)
*Medium. Not all errors, but ...
- 00:56:727 > add a beat
- 00:59:665 > remove the beat
- 00:59:665 - 01:02:339 > the beats are a bit off of time
- 01:03:700 > move the beat to here {10}
- 01:42:297 > ^ {1}
*Collaboration diff is cool, really cool.
You win a star (Y)
altought i don't like FMA, this looks like a nice beat map to play :3
n.n
boa!!!!!
boa!!!!!
there was not much to do in this difficulty, really niinii Dx
but i still work in taiko map and i hope i doing ok
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Medium].osu
but i still work in taiko map and i hope i doing ok
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Medium].osu
To Fhatii-chan
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Fhatii Taiko Oni].osu
Fixed timing and some hitsound as Taiko only map :3
Good luck XD
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Fhatii Taiko Oni].osu
Fixed timing and some hitsound as Taiko only map :3
Good luck XD
OwO take this Diff, you did it, not me ^_- its correctarken1015 wrote:
To Fhatii-chan
[attachment=0:aafa1]Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Fhatii Taiko Oni].osu[/attachment:aafa1]
Fixed timing and some hitsound as Taiko only map :3
Good luck XD
[Easy]
01:19:797 (7) - Ugly overlap.
[Medium]
Hit sounds need MAJOR work. have a pattern instead of slamming a different hitsound on each note.
Beats are not snapped at all
Not modding this until you get it fixed.
[Collab]
Looks good enough.
01:19:797 (7) - Ugly overlap.
[Medium]
Hit sounds need MAJOR work. have a pattern instead of slamming a different hitsound on each note.
Beats are not snapped at all
Not modding this until you get it fixed.
[Collab]
Looks good enough.
Topic Starter
Done and Done \oJInxyjem wrote:
[Easy]
01:19:797 (7) - Ugly overlap.
[Medium]
Hit sounds need MAJOR work. have a pattern instead of slamming a different hitsound on each note.
Beats are not snapped at all
Not modding this until you get it fixed.
[Collab]
Looks good enough.
MattWin's-
Can't expect much from a one star I guess~
01:19:797 (7) - newcombo please
Remap the last combo please, it throws the the pace you mapped for the rest of the map >:!
Medium-
Lol, please fix what JInxyjem said first, cuz the map's really messed up right now
You resnapped all notes, good, but fix hitsounds.... and....... please move the notes to 1/2 (red and white ticks) beat snap divisor, most of the notes that resnapped went on 1/4 (blue ticks)...
Collab- Whoa, its like... Hard-Normal-Insane-Normal-Insane-Hard-Insane-Normal-Hard-Insane-Normal-Hard
not constant at all xD, but the insane parts make 13mil work, I guess
Please increase overall diff by 1
The ending Kiai section could use more hitsounds please
Nevertheless, the map's fairly good
I can't mod Taiko >.<
Can't expect much from a one star I guess~
01:19:797 (7) - newcombo please
Remap the last combo please, it throws the the pace you mapped for the rest of the map >:!
Medium-
You resnapped all notes, good, but fix hitsounds.... and....... please move the notes to 1/2 (red and white ticks) beat snap divisor, most of the notes that resnapped went on 1/4 (blue ticks)...
Collab- Whoa, its like... Hard-Normal-Insane-Normal-Insane-Hard-Insane-Normal-Hard-Insane-Normal-Hard
not constant at all xD, but the insane parts make 13mil work, I guess
Please increase overall diff by 1
The ending Kiai section could use more hitsounds please
Nevertheless, the map's fairly good
I can't mod Taiko >.<
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Whoa, its like... Hard-Normal-Insane-Normal-Insane-Hard-Insane-Normal-Hard-Insane-Normal-HardExactly
Hello there.
Commencing Proto-Bubble checking, go~
Discussing with blissfulyoshi about this.
This color will be things I stated. This color will be things Yoshi pointed out.
~General~
Artist: Yes.
Song: Yes.
Timing: Seems okay.
Tags: Put the guest mapper(s) name(s) in the tags for every difficulty.
Errors
Volume hitsound seems high. Mind lowering it towards the end? (Pointed out by both myself and yoshi)
[MattWin's Easy]
General comment: Why is there an 11-combo and 9-combo in an easy?
00:53:656 (6) - New combo.
00:58:042 (3) - New combo needed.
01:01:200 (5) - New combo.
01:30:323 (5) - This note may look better if it's a horizontal reflection of 1
[Medium]
No idea what the combo pattern Medium may be following. Overlapping notes, plays like an easy...
00:40:148 (8) - Spacing
Check using AIMod for crazy spacing errors (Ctrl-Shift-A)
Doesn't really follow a consistent pattern...
00:53:656 (6) - New combo.
To fix the consistency, I recommend mapping to the lyrics or doing some combo reflections.
[Collaboration]
Many unneeded timing sections.
The collaboration diff is sort of... weird. It fluctuates everywhere, as everyone else stated.
00:11:025 (8) - New combo.
00:45:410 (1) - Spacing fine, remove the combo for lyrics.
This is all the modding we can do for now. Use all other difficulty mods for examples on how to fix.
Make the last timing section's BPM something that divides into 171.Perferrably, it should be 21.375.
[Fhatti Taiko Oni]
Solo modded by AgnesChan. ...Huh, never witnessed a Taiko Oni map that's four stars...
May want to rename this to"Fhattu Taiko Futsuu." Seems too easy to be a true Taiko Oni map... if you REALLY want it to be Oni, follow the beat, but with intense 1/4 streams. I have never mapped a Taiko map before, but I can tell from Taiko mapping experts this isn't really Taiko Oni.
Overall: This is NOT prepared for proto-bubble. Please, fix the mistakes stated above. Remind myself or Yoshi so we can check over again for the proto-bubble. Proto-bubble delay, star delay...
HOLY MOTHER OF GOD I CAN SLEEP NOW. YESSSS
Edit: Star'd for fixes. Yay.
Commencing Proto-Bubble checking, go~
Discussing with blissfulyoshi about this.
This color will be things I stated. This color will be things Yoshi pointed out.
~General~
Artist: Yes.
Song: Yes.
Timing: Seems okay.
Tags: Put the guest mapper(s) name(s) in the tags for every difficulty.
Errors
Volume hitsound seems high. Mind lowering it towards the end? (Pointed out by both myself and yoshi)
[MattWin's Easy]
General comment: Why is there an 11-combo and 9-combo in an easy?
00:53:656 (6) - New combo.
00:58:042 (3) - New combo needed.
01:01:200 (5) - New combo.
01:30:323 (5) - This note may look better if it's a horizontal reflection of 1
[Medium]
No idea what the combo pattern Medium may be following. Overlapping notes, plays like an easy...
00:40:148 (8) - Spacing
Check using AIMod for crazy spacing errors (Ctrl-Shift-A)
Doesn't really follow a consistent pattern...
00:53:656 (6) - New combo.
To fix the consistency, I recommend mapping to the lyrics or doing some combo reflections.
[Collaboration]
Many unneeded timing sections.
The collaboration diff is sort of... weird. It fluctuates everywhere, as everyone else stated.
00:11:025 (8) - New combo.
00:45:410 (1) - Spacing fine, remove the combo for lyrics.
This is all the modding we can do for now. Use all other difficulty mods for examples on how to fix.
Make the last timing section's BPM something that divides into 171.Perferrably, it should be 21.375.
[Fhatti Taiko Oni]
Solo modded by AgnesChan. ...Huh, never witnessed a Taiko Oni map that's four stars...
May want to rename this to"Fhattu Taiko Futsuu." Seems too easy to be a true Taiko Oni map... if you REALLY want it to be Oni, follow the beat, but with intense 1/4 streams. I have never mapped a Taiko map before, but I can tell from Taiko mapping experts this isn't really Taiko Oni.
Overall: This is NOT prepared for proto-bubble. Please, fix the mistakes stated above. Remind myself or Yoshi so we can check over again for the proto-bubble. Proto-bubble delay, star delay...
HOLY MOTHER OF GOD I CAN SLEEP NOW. YESSSS
Edit: Star'd for fixes. Yay.
Gave volume change for those useless timing sections (that was the point really....). Blame my head
Fixed the spacing error and newcombos
Now I will wait Teara to fix his timing
Wish you have a good night, Agnes
P.S. don't know how I should fix those fluctuates....... I'll try to fix it
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Fixed the spacing error and newcombos
Now I will wait Teara to fix his timing
Wish you have a good night, Agnes
P.S. don't know how I should fix those fluctuates....... I'll try to fix it
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Unneeded Timing points deleted~
hitsounds finished 100%
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
hitsounds finished 100%
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Fixed some part. Do not upload Teara's version. Mine includes it
Fixed again
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Fixed again
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Hi, Just collab mod requested by bmin.
00:16:286 (3) - unsnapped
01:04:181 (4) - ^
01:05:760 (5) - ^
01:22:602 (3) - ^
01:46:286 (5) - ^
01:46:374 (6) - ^
01:46:637 (8) - ^
00:45:410 (7) - new combo
00:58:918 (6) - spacing
02:39:095 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - no good.. change to (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
02:44:183 (2) - stack it with 1 correctly
03:22:604 (4) - spacing or new combo
star
00:16:286 (3) - unsnapped
01:04:181 (4) - ^
01:05:760 (5) - ^
01:22:602 (3) - ^
01:46:286 (5) - ^
01:46:374 (6) - ^
01:46:637 (8) - ^
00:45:410 (7) - new combo
00:58:918 (6) - spacing
02:39:095 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - no good.. change to (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
02:44:183 (2) - stack it with 1 correctly
03:22:604 (4) - spacing or new combo
star
Of course, MattWin's Easy was modded by Teta268. It was meant to be easy, for starters, with easy timing and short lenght.AgnesChan wrote:
[MattWin's Easy]
General comment: Why is there an 11-combo and 9-combo in an easy?
00:53:656 (6) - New combo.
00:58:042 (3) - New combo needed.
01:01:200 (5) - New combo.
01:30:323 (5) - This note may look better if it's a horizontal reflection of 1
[attachment=0:64dcc]Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [MattWin's Easy].osu[/attachment:64dcc]
Map looks good, just delete the .osb folder, there is some useless Storyboarding going on, with the "fail-background" file
make sure u delete the osb, and make the "fail-background" isn't doing anything in edit/design
*star
make sure u delete the osb, and make the "fail-background" isn't doing anything in edit/design
*star
easy has countdown on halftime while the other 3 have no countdowns
fullmetal does not need to be in tags twice
does stack leniency need to be so far to the left on 2 diff's?
easy:
looks fine
medium:
hp drain is very low
00:42:779 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - move onto white ticks to follow lyrics
00:51:902 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:57:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:02:253 (8) - snap endpoint to white tick
01:03:656 (9) - ^
01:05:235 (1) - start at 01:05:060 end at 01:07:867
01:13:656 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - white ticks
01:17:341 (1) - end on white tick
01:23:832 (1,2,3) - white ticks
01:31:902 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:48:393 (10) - new combo
01:53:481 (5) - ^
02:02:077 (3,4) - white ticks
02:08:218 (4) - I wouldn't end with clap
taiko:
*meh* no idea about taiko
collab:
looks nice
fullmetal does not need to be in tags twice
does stack leniency need to be so far to the left on 2 diff's?
easy:
looks fine
medium:
hp drain is very low
00:42:779 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - move onto white ticks to follow lyrics
00:51:902 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:57:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:02:253 (8) - snap endpoint to white tick
01:03:656 (9) - ^
01:05:235 (1) - start at 01:05:060 end at 01:07:867
01:13:656 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - white ticks
01:17:341 (1) - end on white tick
01:23:832 (1,2,3) - white ticks
01:31:902 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:48:393 (10) - new combo
01:53:481 (5) - ^
02:02:077 (3,4) - white ticks
02:08:218 (4) - I wouldn't end with clap
taiko:
*meh* no idea about taiko
collab:
looks nice
I've made the changes as James2250 said.
[attachment=0:15394]Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Medium].osu[/attachment:15394]
Hope I help~
[attachment=0:15394]Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Medium].osu[/attachment:15394]
Hope I help~
MattWin's Easy
Medium
Fhatii Taiko Futsuu
Collaboration
SPOILER
Too short, but no errors here.
Too short, but no errors here.
Medium
SPOILER
00:40:498 (9) : Put a slider here that ends at 00:41:727.
01:11:025 (9) : One grid-space to the left.
01:50:148 (7) : One tick later, (at 01:50:323.)
00:40:498 (9) : Put a slider here that ends at 00:41:727.
01:11:025 (9) : One grid-space to the left.
01:50:148 (7) : One tick later, (at 01:50:323.)
Fhatii Taiko Futsuu
SPOILER
00:40:148 (8) : Remove this beat.
00:51:025 (27,28) : Forward by 2 ticks, and make them both DON.
00:51:551 (29) : KAT.
Use less sliders in a taiko map.
00:40:148 (8) : Remove this beat.
00:51:025 (27,28) : Forward by 2 ticks, and make them both DON.
00:51:551 (29) : KAT.
Use less sliders in a taiko map.
Collaboration
SPOILER
good.
*SB the names of the people in the collab
good.
*SB the names of the people in the collab
Another modding for Taiko diff :3
[Fhatii Taiko Futsuu] Taiko mod
00:20:14 ~ 00:32:77 - [Suggestion] I guess this part needs to be Kiai Time part
00:31:37(48) - Set end into 00:32:77
00:34:18 ~ 00:36:99 - [Suggestion] I don't think blank part is good idea... Why don't you add some patterns?
00:40:49(9) - Set end into 00:41:55
00:59:09(44) - Move to 00:58:91
00:59:27(45) - Set end into 01:00:49
01:05:06(55) - Set end into 01:06:28
01:11:37(65) - Set end into 01:12:42
01:39:44(Kiai start) - Move to 01:40:14
02:02:60(167) - Set end into 02:04:35
Okay...
Good luck for you :3
And keep going.
Geez... I gave a star already...
ps. Don't give a kudosu for this reply :3
[Fhatii Taiko Futsuu] Taiko mod
00:20:14 ~ 00:32:77 - [Suggestion] I guess this part needs to be Kiai Time part
00:31:37(48) - Set end into 00:32:77
00:34:18 ~ 00:36:99 - [Suggestion] I don't think blank part is good idea... Why don't you add some patterns?
00:40:49(9) - Set end into 00:41:55
00:59:09(44) - Move to 00:58:91
00:59:27(45) - Set end into 01:00:49
01:05:06(55) - Set end into 01:06:28
01:11:37(65) - Set end into 01:12:42
01:39:44(Kiai start) - Move to 01:40:14
02:02:60(167) - Set end into 02:04:35
Okay...
Good luck for you :3
And keep going.
Geez... I gave a star already...
ps. Don't give a kudosu for this reply :3
Ok, lets get on with this then
No problems, but this is awfully short. You should map more of the song in this diff if you can
[MEDIUM]
-Lower the tickrate to 1. It sounds better that way to me
00:45:937 (8) - Stack this on the start of (9)?
00:54:358 (4) - Stack this on the start of (5)?
01:05:235 (1) - Move this 1/2 earlier? (and if you do this, make it 1/2 longer
01:25:762 (1) - Make this a whole beat shoter?
[FHATTI TAIKO FUTSUU]
I'm no taiko buff, but this seems fine enough, even though there doesn't seem to be many stacks or streams like the sort i normally see in taiko maps. i guess this isn't intended to be a Taiko Oni map then
[COLLABORATION]
00:16:102 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This sudden spacing change feels awkward to me. You can keep it if you want, I just thought I'd throw that out here.
01:34:348 (2,1) - awkward-feeling jump. with all those stacks going on reading a rather sudden jump like this is a bit jarring. Perhaps close this gap up
03:56:804 (4) - Why not just change this slider for a hitcircle?
Nice map. I wasn't expecting much to be honest, so its a nice little surprise.
Starred
- Offset: 8,910 (a little eariler than yours)
- Like James2250 has already said, you should remove one of the "fullmetal"'s from the tags. having the same word in the tags twice is pointless.
No problems, but this is awfully short. You should map more of the song in this diff if you can
[MEDIUM]
-Lower the tickrate to 1. It sounds better that way to me
00:45:937 (8) - Stack this on the start of (9)?
00:54:358 (4) - Stack this on the start of (5)?
01:05:235 (1) - Move this 1/2 earlier? (and if you do this, make it 1/2 longer
01:25:762 (1) - Make this a whole beat shoter?
[FHATTI TAIKO FUTSUU]
I'm no taiko buff, but this seems fine enough, even though there doesn't seem to be many stacks or streams like the sort i normally see in taiko maps. i guess this isn't intended to be a Taiko Oni map then
[COLLABORATION]
00:16:102 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This sudden spacing change feels awkward to me. You can keep it if you want, I just thought I'd throw that out here.
01:34:348 (2,1) - awkward-feeling jump. with all those stacks going on reading a rather sudden jump like this is a bit jarring. Perhaps close this gap up
03:56:804 (4) - Why not just change this slider for a hitcircle?
Nice map. I wasn't expecting much to be honest, so its a nice little surprise.
Starred
Well okay, as you requested, there is the SB stuff
[attachment=0:645d9]mattwinsb.png[/attachment:645d9]
[attachment=1:645d9]tearasb.png[/attachment:645d9]
[attachment=2:645d9]bminsb.png[/attachment:645d9]
I'll post Teta268 and Fhatii Taiko Futsuu later.
About the .osu files you already have them.
[attachment=0:645d9]mattwinsb.png[/attachment:645d9]
[attachment=1:645d9]tearasb.png[/attachment:645d9]
[attachment=2:645d9]bminsb.png[/attachment:645d9]
I'll post Teta268 and Fhatii Taiko Futsuu later.
About the .osu files you already have them.
[attachment=1:0e460]fhatiisb.png[/attachment:0e460]
[attachment=0:0e460]tetasb.png[/attachment:0e460]
3 attachments per post -.-
[attachment=0:0e460]tetasb.png[/attachment:0e460]
3 attachments per post -.-
All fixed. I still don't have the SB you told me before
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
[General]
Delete the .osb.
Easy and Medium have unrankably low stack leniency.
MattWin's Easy is the only diff with countdown enabled.
[MattWin's Easy]
00:39:095 (2) - I don't think it looks very good to have a hitcircle partially below a slider.
Ends a bit too abruptly, I'd recommend mapping a bit more.
[Medium]
00:30:323 (6,7) - Spacing.
01:02:253 (8) - Move this to the left a bit so that 5,6,7,8 form a diamond?
01:11:025 (9) - Slightly out of line for a square.
01:11:727 - Break seems a bit short; warning arrows appear the instant the break starts. Consider making 10 a slider, and removing the break.
01:25:762 (1) - End this 1/2 later.
01:55:937 - Random break, doesn't fit. Why have breaks in kiai, the most epic part of the song?
02:02:604 (4) - Doesn't end neatly on the stack.
[Collab]
00:16:990 (7) - Identical sliders in a row, one of which is 1/2 BPM, makes me sad.
00:28:392 (1,2) - This jump is not a likable one.
01:03:831 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I thought this part just played like and sounded like chaos. It's just so fast and so unreadable.
01:51:376 - Same thing for parts of this kiai section. Maybe I'm just a terrible osu! player.
03:20:498 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Watch for spacing.
03:34:446 (1) - Move it 1/4 later? Sounds better, plays better.
03:43:305 - End kiai here?
Star~
Delete the .osb.
Easy and Medium have unrankably low stack leniency.
MattWin's Easy is the only diff with countdown enabled.
[MattWin's Easy]
00:39:095 (2) - I don't think it looks very good to have a hitcircle partially below a slider.
Ends a bit too abruptly, I'd recommend mapping a bit more.
[Medium]
00:30:323 (6,7) - Spacing.
01:02:253 (8) - Move this to the left a bit so that 5,6,7,8 form a diamond?
01:11:025 (9) - Slightly out of line for a square.
01:11:727 - Break seems a bit short; warning arrows appear the instant the break starts. Consider making 10 a slider, and removing the break.
01:25:762 (1) - End this 1/2 later.
01:55:937 - Random break, doesn't fit. Why have breaks in kiai, the most epic part of the song?
02:02:604 (4) - Doesn't end neatly on the stack.
[Collab]
00:16:990 (7) - Identical sliders in a row, one of which is 1/2 BPM, makes me sad.
00:28:392 (1,2) - This jump is not a likable one.
01:03:831 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I thought this part just played like and sounded like chaos. It's just so fast and so unreadable.
01:51:376 - Same thing for parts of this kiai section. Maybe I'm just a terrible osu! player.
03:20:498 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Watch for spacing.
03:34:446 (1) - Move it 1/4 later? Sounds better, plays better.
03:43:305 - End kiai here?
Star~
Fixed my part. I didn't change the one that you couldn't read. I would consider it if two more people complains about it
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
Download: Cool Joke - UNDO (Teta268) [Collaboration].osu
[Medium]
01:25:762 (1) - This spinner ends 1/2 too short. Could expand it 1/2 more with a finish.
[Collaboration]
02:36:288 (10) - Ends kinda odd like its 1/2 too short or too long.
02:44:007 (5,1) - Was stacking it like this intentional?
Also, your comboburst is a bit too wide. The max px on the width is 500, but the current one is 512. And don't forget to force default the skin....
01:25:762 (1) - This spinner ends 1/2 too short. Could expand it 1/2 more with a finish.
[Collaboration]
02:36:288 (10) - Ends kinda odd like its 1/2 too short or too long.
02:44:007 (5,1) - Was stacking it like this intentional?
Also, your comboburst is a bit too wide. The max px on the width is 500, but the current one is 512. And don't forget to force default the skin....
Medium:
01:07:86 There should be a small break between the spinner and the circle imo. A circle right after a spinner is way too difficult in this difficulty. But not a big prob.
01:19:09 ^^
Nice map and the song rocks
Star~
01:07:86 There should be a small break between the spinner and the circle imo. A circle right after a spinner is way too difficult in this difficulty. But not a big prob.
01:19:09 ^^
Nice map and the song rocks
Star~
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Easy
01:00:148 (3) - Slider end is too far from next combo.
01:05:060 (4) - too far from (3)... Mattafack, the spacing of this combo is generally messy. Move the (3) to make an even triangular patten of (1, 2, and 3), and then throw the (4) where the (1) is.
Medium
00:49:972 (4) - Move slider end closer to (5)
01:08:569 (2) - Should be closer to (3)
Collab
00:14:006 (7) - Lower a tick.
3:06:463 - I feel like you should just start the break here. There's no reason to set up a vibe just to leave it hanging for the next 3 measures.
Nice map overall. Star for you. Good luck, your birthday approaches.
01:00:148 (3) - Slider end is too far from next combo.
01:05:060 (4) - too far from (3)... Mattafack, the spacing of this combo is generally messy. Move the (3) to make an even triangular patten of (1, 2, and 3), and then throw the (4) where the (1) is.
Medium
00:49:972 (4) - Move slider end closer to (5)
01:08:569 (2) - Should be closer to (3)
Collab
00:14:006 (7) - Lower a tick.
3:06:463 - I feel like you should just start the break here. There's no reason to set up a vibe just to leave it hanging for the next 3 measures.
Nice map overall. Star for you. Good luck, your birthday approaches.