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ztrot

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Joined February 2008

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ztrot 2009-12-09T19:57:02+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Last edited by ztrot 2009-12-15T06:16:17+00:00, edited 8 times in total.

Kytoxid

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Joined April 2009

Kytoxid 2009-12-09T20:46:15+00:00

[Normal]

Looks okay.

01:08:028 (1) - Align this with the previous endpoint?

[Hard]

Some parts were a little off, but it's fine as a whole. If you really want the nazi-ing, these things aren't "in line":

00:34:068 (1,2,3,4) - 3 should be down a bit.
00:39:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 4, 5, 6 should be moved up a bit, 4 should also be left a bit.
00:51:059 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move 4, 7 a grid down.
00:56:045 (3) - Left a grid.
01:05:074 (3) - Could be aligned a bit better if you turn grid snap off.

frost-b-spec

783 posts

Joined February 2009

frost-b-spec 2009-12-10T09:07:47+00:00

i like this song

Normal
00:35:006(3) - right 1tick
00:35:640(5) - ^
00:38:386(2) - ^
00:39:020(4) - ^
00:41:766(2) - left 1tick
00:42:400(4) - right 1tick
00:50:006(2) - left 1tick
00:53:386(2) - ^
00:56:776(2) - ^
00:58:457(2) - right 1tick
01:03:527(6) - ^
01:04:372(2) - ^
01:06:485(2) - ^
01:10:288(2) - ^

Hard
00:15:358(4) - right 1tick
00:17:048(3) - ^
00:22:224(3) - end 00:22:647
00:23:809(3) - right 1tick
00:25:499(5) - ^
00:35:006(2) - left 1tick
00:35:745(4) - end 00:35:957
00:38:386(2) - right 1tick
00:39:020(4) - ^
00:41:766(2) - left 1tick
00:42:400(4) - right 1tick
00:45:781(3) - ^
00:53:386(4) - left 1tick
00:56:776(4) - ^
00:58:457(7) - right 1tick
01:03:527(11) - ^
01:04:372(15) - ^
01:08:597(2) - ^
01:10:288(2) - ^
01:11:978(2) - ^

sorry,noooobie mod and poooor english.
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GladiOol

4,475 posts

Joined August 2008

GladiOol 2009-12-10T14:57:36+00:00

General / All diff.
Not sure about offset, it feels little early. Maybe 7.440 ~ 7.445 ish?

Hard

Please map till end =D

Normal

00:15:046 (3) - Put this on the blue tick, 1/4 earlier.
00:17:004 (3) - ^
00:59:072 (5,6) - Please, no 1/4 in a normal o.o
Please map till end =D

Kerensa

167 posts

Joined January 2009

Kerensa 2009-12-15T05:16:56+00:00

woooo ~

Normal:
00:18:742 [2] one tiny square down?
00:31:101 [1] ^ but to the left?

Hard:
Fine >_<

Lilac

Elite Mapper

1,515 posts

Joined December 2008

Lilac 2009-12-15T05:46:46+00:00

Hitcircle colour change. The current ones just don't seem right. (Blue and Green should be changed.)

[Normal]
00:22:65 (1,2,3,4) - That is just confusing after 1,2.
01:13:14 (2,3) Center it to the playfield.

This is just a suggestion.

[Hard]
I also agree with Gladi, map it until the end.

I can't really pick out anything... Just watch out for your spacing in 00:13:14 for that combo. AIMod is picking up some weird things.

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