M2U - Lunatic Sky [Osu|CatchTheBeat] · forum

Nunnally Lamperouge wrote:
MOD
以下是建议
EXTRA
00:02:827 (1,2) - 好好想想这样是不是不太合适，我感觉至少对角跳的不合适 fixed but someone may dont like this.
00:06:578 (1,2) - 有点别扭换了下下。
00:14:641 感觉这里还有个音确实有之前因为太难看改梗的时候不小心删了。
00:19:141 (5,6) - 试试类似这样算了
01:20:828 (7) - 斟酌一下不知道是啥不过还是改改
01:27:016 (1) - 难看，太突出 fixed
01:27:297 (2) - 同↑ 直接红点。
01:30:578 (13) - 拉出去点选择的是把两个滑条扯开。

你好观赏图，我打不动GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
总体来说图十分不错！祝RANK！

Thx for modding!(射星原则[逃]

_Stan

Beatmap Nominator

767 posts

Joined June 2012

_Stan 2014-06-21T16:59:50+00:00

can I use ENGLISH?!

食屎吧我, 明明是中国人...

[General]
为什么EZ和NM的kiai time和Extre 不一样??

[Easy]

00:01:516 (1,2) - 真心觉得blanket一下, 在节奏和排列符合DS的情况下, 弄美观点??
00:12:016 - 加一个note 太空了
00:13:516 (1,2,3) - DS!! DS=distance snap 就是间距=snap
00:18:016 (1,2,3) - 你这里DS一样, 但是看看时间轴, 节奏真的一样么
01:54:016 (1,2) - blanket

那个... snap真心要看看呢, 这方面re一下??

[Normal]

00:03:766 (2,1) - blanket
00:04:516 (1,2,1) - 我试了下DS你大概是x1.0, 这里的 DS是不是小了??
00:11:266 (1,2,1,2) - ^
00:16:516 (3,4,5) - 很明显DS问题
00:37:797 (2,1,2,3) - 你摆的间距都差不多但是时间轴上节奏一样么?? 这就是DS问题
00:40:516 (2,3) - ^
00:42:016 (4,5) - 太远了而且有点难了对于NM
00:44:641 (7,1) - 同上上
00:46:516 (1,2,3) - 1,2节奏上差那么多你snap那么短 2,3节奏上那么紧凑你snap又比1,2大...
00:57:766 (3,4) - 难了
00:58:141 (4,1) - DS
01:00:203 (2,3,1) - blanket
01:09:766 (3,4) - DS
01:10:328 (5,6) - ^
01:18:016 (1,2,3) - ^
01:22:516 (3,1) - 远点
01:34:141 (3,1) - ^
01:48:016 (1,2,3,4) - 梗很好但是NM里还是先放弃吧, 用在Hard里面
02:01:516 (1,1) - DS

很明显snap你还需要改正 re一下把DS问题解决

[Extra]

00:05:827 (5) - 这是一个节奏重音放远点,尽然是Extra
00:07:702 (1,2,3) - re selection不是更爽??
00:14:266 (3,4) - DS
01:01:516 (3,4) - 难看
01:21:297 (2,4) - 遮挡了
01:39:391 (1,2,1) - 音效减小
01:43:328 (3,4) - 不要这样

其实问题主要在DS和blanket上多注意一下

加油哦~

zhengyuanhang

58 posts

Joined February 2013

zhengyuanhang 2014-06-26T06:34:19+00:00

我给你一些建议吧

General
1. 不同难度的Kiai Time应该一致。
2. 不同难度的Slider Tick Rate应该一致。

Easy
1. Easy难度最大的问题是没有时刻遵循Distance Snap原则，例如
00:13:516 (1,2) 和 00:15:016 (2,3) 等不符合Distance Snap原则。
在Easy难度中必须时刻遵循Distance Snap原则。
2. 另一个问题就是AR<OD。一般情况下AR应大于（也可以等于）OD，但是一般不小于OD。
3. 另外不应当过于频繁地使用break，1~2次break就可以了。

Normal
1. Normal的第一个问题与Easy类似，例如01:32:828 (3,1) 和 01:33:016 (1,2) 等。
Normal应当和Easy一样，遵循Distance Snap原则（但是一些可读的重叠是允许的）。
2. 我认为Normal不应当出现过多蓝线开头的Note。
3. 和Easy类似，不应当过于频繁地使用break。

Hyper
1. 00:12:391 (1) 我认为这里应当放一个note，转盘的开头应该放到00:12:484处（结尾不动）。
2. 00:13:516 Slider速度不应当降低。
3. 00:23:641 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) Hyper不应当用这么长的串。
4. 00:32:641 (4,5) 间距过大。
5. 00:49:797 (2,3)，00:52:516 (1,2)，00:54:016 (1)，00:55:797 (2) 等，
这些地方不应当用3/4，不符合节奏。
这个问题从00:49:516至00:59:922和01:01:516至01:11:922都存在，应该修改这些排列。

- D a s z x -'s Another
1. 00:19:703 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 不应当使用这些1/8 Kick Slider,不符合节奏。
2. 00:37:141 (1,2) 不应当用Slider变速，读出它们非常困难。
3. 从00:49:516至00:59:922，问题同Hyper。
4. 01:15:203 (2,3)，01:15:766 (5,6)，01:32:828 (1,2,3) 不应当使用大间距的1/4节奏。
5. 01:34:516 (1,2,3,1,2,3)，01:58:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6) 不应当使用这些1/3 Slider，不符合节奏。
6. 01:49:516 不应当在这个地方使Slider变速和增大Note间距。

Extra
1. 我认为soft-hitfinish.wav这个音效非常难听，太明显，应该换一个不是很明显的音效。
2. 00:34:703 (11,12)，00:34:984 (1,2)，00:35:265 (3,4)，00:35:547 (1,2,3)，00:37:328 (1,2,3)
不应当使用大间距的1/4节奏。
3. 00:49:516至01:11:922，这个部分出现了之前提到的问题，包括在没有3/4节奏的地方使用不符合节奏的3/4，使用不合适的大间距1/4节奏，不恰当地使用Slider变速等。这些问题应当修正。
4. 01:13:516往后的部分，不应当使用1.50x和2.00x的Slider变速。

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2014-06-26T20:24:54+00:00

Nunnally Lamperouge wrote:
00:43:328 (6,1) - blancket 重摆了
00:43:328 (6,1,7,8) - 拉的远一点恩
01:29:641 (5) - 拉到4的头吧我个人觉得ds很重要
01:29:641 (5,5,6) - 这可以···？我也不知道··· 其实我也不知道233
中间有几小段kiai是怎么回事··· 改了

zhengyuanhang wrote:
- D a s z x -'s Another
1. 00:19:703 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 不应当使用这些1/8 Kick Slider,不符合节奏。符合
2. 00:37:141 (1,2) 不应当用Slider变速，读出它们非常困难。我能读
3. 从00:49:516至00:59:922，问题同Hyper。？？？
4. 01:15:203 (2,3)，01:15:766 (5,6)，01:32:828 (1,2,3) 不应当使用大间距的1/4节奏。前两个改了，第三个reserved
5. 01:34:516 (1,2,3,1,2,3)，01:58:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6) 不应当使用这些1/3 Slider，不符合节奏。符合
6. 01:49:516 不应当在这个地方使Slider变速和增大Note间距。爷爷这是kial

thx for modding

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Hakurei Yoru

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Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2014-06-27T16:19:42+00:00

_Stan wrote:
can I use ENGLISH?!

食屎吧我, 明明是中国人...

[General]
为什么EZ和NM的kiai time和Extre 不一样?? fixed

[Easy]

00:01:516 (1,2) - 真心觉得blanket一下, 在节奏和排列符合DS的情况下, 弄美观点?? fixed
00:12:016 - 加一个note 太空了 fixed
00:13:516 (1,2,3) - DS!! DS=distance snap 就是间距=snap fixed
00:18:016 (1,2,3) - 你这里DS一样, 但是看看时间轴, 节奏真的一样么稍微换了下不过说实话没理解到这里的意思
01:54:016 (1,2) - blanket fixed

那个... snap真心要看看呢, 这方面re一下?? 是RE了不过还是觉得影响不太大。。。

[Normal]

00:03:766 (2,1) - blanket fixed
00:04:516 (1,2,1) - 我试了下DS你大概是x1.0, 这里的 DS是不是小了?? 整体改成了0.8 re了一次这里就随之改了。
00:11:266 (1,2,1,2) - ^ fixed
00:16:516 (3,4,5) - 很明显DS问题 fixed
00:37:797 (2,1,2,3) - 你摆的间距都差不多但是时间轴上节奏一样么?? 这就是DS问题 fixed
00:40:516 (2,3) - ^ fixed
00:42:016 (4,5) - 太远了而且有点难了对于NM fixed
00:44:641 (7,1) - 同上上 fixed
00:46:516 (1,2,3) - 1,2节奏上差那么多你snap那么短 2,3节奏上那么紧凑你snap又比1,2大... fixed
00:57:766 (3,4) - 难了 fixed
00:58:141 (4,1) - DS 这样吧。
01:00:203 (2,3,1) - blanket fixed
01:09:766 (3,4) - DS fixed
01:10:328 (5,6) - ^
01:18:016 (1,2,3) - ^
01:22:516 (3,1) - 远点 fixed
01:34:141 (3,1) - ^
01:48:016 (1,2,3,4) - 梗很好但是NM里还是先放弃吧, 用在Hard里面 fixed
02:01:516 (1,1) - DS

很明显snap你还需要改正 re一下把DS问题解决卧槽我为啥要在回MOD前把DSRE了再来一个一个回……

[Extra]

00:05:827 (5) - 这是一个节奏重音放远点,尽然是Extra Fixed
00:07:702 (1,2,3) - re selection不是更爽?? 好啊
00:14:266 (3,4) - DS Fixed
01:01:516 (3,4) - 难看 Fixed
01:21:297 (2,4) - 遮挡了切到（1）的那里了因为是AR9所以这样应该不会太严重了。
01:39:391 (1,2,1) - 音效减小这里感觉意义不是很大。。
01:43:328 (3,4) - 不要这样

其实问题主要在DS和blanket上多注意一下一说到这个我的采纳率就高得跟*一样

加油哦~

Hakurei Yoru

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Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2014-06-27T16:20:02+00:00

Magaki_redwhite wrote:
_Stan wrote:
can I use ENGLISH?!

食屎吧我, 明明是中国人...

[General]
为什么EZ和NM的kiai time和Extre 不一样?? fixed

[Easy]

00:01:516 (1,2) - 真心觉得blanket一下, 在节奏和排列符合DS的情况下, 弄美观点?? fixed
00:12:016 - 加一个note 太空了 fixed
00:13:516 (1,2,3) - DS!! DS=distance snap 就是间距=snap fixed
00:18:016 (1,2,3) - 你这里DS一样, 但是看看时间轴, 节奏真的一样么稍微换了下不过说实话没理解到这里的意思
01:54:016 (1,2) - blanket fixed

那个... snap真心要看看呢, 这方面re一下?? 是RE了不过还是觉得影响不太大。。。

[Normal]

00:03:766 (2,1) - blanket fixed
00:04:516 (1,2,1) - 我试了下DS你大概是x1.0, 这里的 DS是不是小了?? 整体改成了0.8 re了一次这里就随之改了。
00:11:266 (1,2,1,2) - ^ fixed
00:16:516 (3,4,5) - 很明显DS问题 fixed
00:37:797 (2,1,2,3) - 你摆的间距都差不多但是时间轴上节奏一样么?? 这就是DS问题 fixed
00:40:516 (2,3) - ^ fixed
00:42:016 (4,5) - 太远了而且有点难了对于NM fixed
00:44:641 (7,1) - 同上上 fixed
00:46:516 (1,2,3) - 1,2节奏上差那么多你snap那么短 2,3节奏上那么紧凑你snap又比1,2大... fixed
00:57:766 (3,4) - 难了 fixed
00:58:141 (4,1) - DS 这样吧。
01:00:203 (2,3,1) - blanket fixed
01:09:766 (3,4) - DS fixed
01:10:328 (5,6) - ^
01:18:016 (1,2,3) - ^
01:22:516 (3,1) - 远点 fixed
01:34:141 (3,1) - ^
01:48:016 (1,2,3,4) - 梗很好但是NM里还是先放弃吧, 用在Hard里面 fixed
02:01:516 (1,1) - DS

很明显snap你还需要改正 re一下把DS问题解决卧槽我为啥要在回MOD前把DSRE了再来一个一个回……

[Extra]

00:05:827 (5) - 这是一个节奏重音放远点,尽然是Extra Fixed
00:07:702 (1,2,3) - re selection不是更爽?? 好啊
00:14:266 (3,4) - DS Fixed
01:01:516 (3,4) - 难看 Fixed
01:21:297 (2,4) - 遮挡了切到（1）的那里了因为是AR9所以这样应该不会太严重了。
01:39:391 (1,2,1) - 音效减小这里感觉意义不是很大。。
01:43:328 (3,4) - 不要这样

其实问题主要在DS和blanket上多注意一下一说到这个我的采纳率就高得跟*一样

加油哦~

Hakurei Yoru

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Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2014-06-27T16:20:43+00:00

holy shit 服务器又脱了回了两次

Hakurei Yoru

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Hakurei Yoru 2014-06-27T16:44:16+00:00

zhengyuanhang wrote:
我给你一些建议吧

General
1. 不同难度的Kiai Time应该一致。 Fixed
2. 不同难度的Slider Tick Rate应该一致。 Fixed

Easy
1. Easy难度最大的问题是没有时刻遵循Distance Snap原则，例如
00:13:516 (1,2) 和 00:15:016 (2,3) 等不符合Distance Snap原则。
在Easy难度中必须时刻遵循Distance Snap原则。 RE了。
2. 另一个问题就是AR<OD。一般情况下AR应大于（也可以等于）OD，但是一般不小于OD。 Fixed
3. 另外不应当过于频繁地使用break，1~2次break就可以了。

Normal
1. Normal的第一个问题与Easy类似，例如01:32:828 (3,1) 和 01:33:016 (1,2) 等。
Normal应当和Easy一样，遵循Distance Snap原则（但是一些可读的重叠是允许的）。
2. 我认为Normal不应当出现过多蓝线开头的Note。实在想不到有方法可以更好的取歌曲主调
3. 和Easy类似，不应当过于频繁地使用break。 Fixed

Hyper
1. 00:12:391 (1) 我认为这里应当放一个note，转盘的开头应该放到00:12:484处（结尾不动）。 Fixed
2. 00:13:516 Slider速度不应当降低。也许有点奇怪但转盘后又直接开始1/2确实不太符合我的想法。
3. 00:23:641 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) Hyper不应当用这么长的串。放着先，Hyper这段节奏太难想梗了。
4. 00:32:641 (4,5) 间距过大。
5. 00:49:797 (2,3)，00:52:516 (1,2)，00:54:016 (1)，00:55:797 (2) 等，
这些地方不应当用3/4，不符合节奏。
这个问题从00:49:516至00:59:922和01:01:516至01:11:922都存在，应该修改这些排列。十分抱歉我真的想不通为什么。

- D a s z x -'s Another
1. 00:19:703 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 不应当使用这些1/8 Kick Slider,不符合节奏。
2. 00:37:141 (1,2) 不应当用Slider变速，读出它们非常困难。
3. 从00:49:516至00:59:922，问题同Hyper。
4. 01:15:203 (2,3)，01:15:766 (5,6)，01:32:828 (1,2,3) 不应当使用大间距的1/4节奏。
5. 01:34:516 (1,2,3,1,2,3)，01:58:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6) 不应当使用这些1/3 Slider，不符合节奏。
6. 01:49:516 不应当在这个地方使Slider变速和增大Note间距。

Extra
1. 我认为soft-hitfinish.wav这个音效非常难听，太明显，应该换一个不是很明显的音效。好的
2. 00:34:703 (11,12)，00:34:984 (1,2)，00:35:265 (3,4)，00:35:547 (1,2,3)，00:37:328 (1,2,3)
不应当使用大间距的1/4节奏。
3. 00:49:516至01:11:922，这个部分出现了之前提到的问题，包括在没有3/4节奏的地方使用不符合节奏的3/4，使用不合适的大间距1/4节奏，不恰当地使用Slider变速等。这些问题应当修正。
4. 01:13:516往后的部分，不应当使用1.50x和2.00x的Slider变速。也许可以。

liaoxingyao

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liaoxingyao 2014-07-05T02:45:53+00:00

._.

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Fycho

Global Moderator

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Fycho 2014-07-09T11:02:31+00:00

liaoxingyao wrote:
TAG太少可以加M2U啊 Rhythm Master啊（不对啊Source也有了还有Lunatic Sky（你的是缩写）
No KD

artist和title有过了别加，加了也白家，M2U和lunatic sky都在标题里。
另外根本没tag太少这种说法，tag空的都没事。希望你不知道的时候不要误导别人

-[Hikari]-

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-[Hikari]- 2014-07-10T02:16:06+00:00

Another和Extra打不动111
渣摸勿怪

Hyper
00:17:266 (3,4) - 间距大了点，有点太突然的感觉
00:39:859 (1,2,3,4) - 这个stack太难读了
01:13:516 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - 这一段的timing都不是很准吧？(Highly Recommend)

Normal
总体感觉间距太小了，然后图就不好读，而且M2U的拍点也比较独特……（打了hrdt acc坠毁有感而发
00:16:516 (6,7) - 虽然很漂亮但normal还是不要来这种大跳了吧？
00:44:453 (9) - 摆歪了

Hakurei Yoru

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Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2014-07-10T07:23:58+00:00

- H i k a r i - wrote:
Another和Extra打不动111
渣摸勿怪

Hyper
00:17:266 (3,4) - 间距大了点，有点太突然的感觉不会。
00:39:859 (1,2,3,4) - 这个stack太难读了 Fixed 怀疑时间段标错233333
01:13:516 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - 这一段的timing都不是很准吧？(Highly Recommend) 小失误 Fixed

Normal
总体感觉间距太小了，然后图就不好读，而且M2U的拍点也比较独特……（打了hrdt acc坠毁有感而发其实这图以前AR6 CS4 间距真的不小。
00:16:516 (6,7) - 虽然很漂亮但normal还是不要来这种大跳了吧？ RS了下下。
00:44:453 (9) - 摆歪了 Fixed

还好啊起码还是找到很多（啥）关键的问题。

liaoxingyao

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liaoxingyao 2014-07-11T04:18:34+00:00

.-.

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liaoxingyao

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liaoxingyao 2014-07-11T04:20:26+00:00

~~Rhythm Master~~
还是来水（逃

Lavender

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Lavender 2014-07-12T14:07:57+00:00

Red means it conflicts with the guideline, you must fix it.
Blue means some of my important suggestions, you can ignore it.
Black just means my comments.
我做不了也摸不了easy和normal，见谅
[General]
音效赞一个，然后没了。。
[Hyper]
00:06:016 (1) - 放下面一点，做成blanket又不遮挡
00:08:078 (4,5) - 不整齐的blanket看着难受。。
00:30:578 (4) - 这里放个单点是不是清楚一些
00:45:578 (5,6,7) - 跟钢琴，这段打着很难受
01:14:266 (2) - 这个地方一个音都没有。。音在后面的蓝线上，我觉得应该跟音乐而不是打节拍
01:20:266 (2) - ^
01:26:359 - 这里没音真是。。浑身难受
[- D a s z x -'s Another]
00:12:203 (2) - 移除finish，在00:12:391 - 00:12:766 - 00:12:953 - 00:13:141 - 00:13:328五个note上加上finish->音游曲基本节奏
00:19:703 (2) - 以及后面一堆，不觉得对于player而言十分单调吗，可以插入一些三连什么的（五连还是算了）
00:49:141 (1,2,1,2) - 重叠导致十分难读，unplayable的梗
01:16:328 (8) - 移近一点
01:23:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 我打不来，还是不评论
01:24:766 (1,2) - 这么快的短滑条还是不要遮挡了
01:36:016 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^ 爷爷
[Extra]
00:04:891 - 漏个音，加不加随便
00:47:641 (4,1) - 十分难接，建议修改前一个combo的位置
01:25:703 (3) - 这个滑条几次都读成连打了（应该是我的问题）
01:40:047 (2) - 这个折返滑条和音乐极度不协调
01:48:016 (1,2,3,1) - 按照你之前使用过的梗，这里合适的选择是（滑条+note*2）*2 （puuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuush貌似出问题了）
01:59:641 (1,2,3,4) - 按照原来4个note一组的方式，这一组间距不协调

美丽

hhkkyy

43 posts

Joined October 2013

hhkkyy 2014-07-13T14:54:52+00:00

[Extra]
00:22:515 (1,2) - 间距与后几组有差别
00:25:141 (1) - 这滑条这样拉是不是有点奇怪。。。
00:31:140 (5) - 按照之前的处理这里应该是两个短滑条
01:11:266 (1,1) - 加上finish
01:14:453 (5,6) - 还是一样的处理不一致，感觉改成两个短滑条好点
01:20:078 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这段感觉flow极低啊。。所有滑条都这样反拉真的好么。。。
01:25:141 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ！
01:37:891 (1,1) - 感觉音效还可以再轻一点
[Hyper]
有一段我觉得全跟钢琴比较好。。
01:25:516 开始
01:27:391 (2,3) 01:30:391 (3,4) 01:33:016 (1,2,3) 似乎这几个是跟了鼓点，但是01:25:516 (1,2,3) 和其他一些音是全跟了钢琴感觉不一致不太好，而且这段钢琴的节奏真的很灵动啊。。塞2分拍有点死板。。

Hakurei Yoru

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Hakurei Yoru 2014-07-15T10:16:10+00:00

[Teichan] wrote:
Red means it conflicts with the guideline, you must fix it.
Blue means some of my important suggestions, you can ignore it.
Black just means my comments.
我做不了也摸不了easy和normal，见谅
[General]
音效赞一个，然后没了。。
[Hyper]
00:06:016 (1) - 放下面一点，做成blanket又不遮挡 Fixed
00:08:078 (4,5) - 不整齐的blanket看着难受。。不是Blanket 做成完全遮挡觉得Hyper太难了。
00:30:578 (4) - 这里放个单点是不是清楚一些 Fixed
00:45:578 (5,6,7) - 跟钢琴，这段打着很难受
01:14:266 (2) - 这个地方一个音都没有。。音在后面的蓝线上，我觉得应该跟音乐而不是打节拍 Fixed
01:20:266 (2) - ^ Fixed
01:26:359 - 这里没音真是。。浑身难受[/color] Fixed
果然因为太水所以吧。。。

[Extra]
00:04:891 - 漏个音，加不加随便不加
00:47:641 (4,1) - 十分难接，建议修改前一个combo的位置 Fixed
01:25:703 (3) - 这个滑条几次都读成连打了（应该是我的问题）不会啊
01:40:047 (2) - 这个折返滑条和音乐极度不协调
01:48:016 (1,2,3,1) - 按照你之前使用过的梗，这里合适的选择是（滑条+note*2）*2 （puuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuush貌似出问题了） Fixed
01:59:641 (1,2,3,4) - 按照原来4个note一组的方式，这一组间距不协调[/color] Fixed

美丽

啊啊像我这种图简直太好找BUG了

Hakurei Yoru

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Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2014-07-15T10:21:24+00:00

hhkkyy wrote:
[Extra]
00:22:515 (1,2) - 间距与后几组有差别 Fixed
00:25:141 (1) - 这滑条这样拉是不是有点奇怪。。。 Fixed
00:31:140 (5) - 按照之前的处理这里应该是两个短滑条 Fixed
01:11:266 (1,1) - 加上finish Fixed
01:14:453 (5,6) - 还是一样的处理不一致，感觉改成两个短滑条好点 Fixed
01:20:078 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这段感觉flow极低啊。。所有滑条都这样反拉真的好么。。。 RE掉了已经……
01:25:141 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ！指NC的话Fixed 这段能玩
01:37:891 (1,1) - 感觉音效还可以再轻一点 Fixed
[Hyper]
有一段我觉得全跟钢琴比较好。。
01:25:516 开始
01:27:391 (2,3) 01:30:391 (3,4) 01:33:016 (1,2,3) 似乎这几个是跟了鼓点，但是01:25:516 (1,2,3) 和其他一些音是全跟了钢琴感觉不一致不太好，而且这段钢琴的节奏真的很灵动啊。。塞2分拍有点死板。。这一段也是水分巨大所以还是跟着走了。

求SP;w;

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-07-16T08:51:40+00:00

Hi! as you requested~

[General]
音效有很大进步空间尤其是kiai部分尝试在01:01:516 - 之后不要用现在的音效组了
如果是你现在的style用这种音效组的话只会破坏感觉特别是音乐本身的重音以及军鼓声没有突出
可以试试这种音效 : http://puu.sh/adAoW/f6ea45913f.zip

[Extra]
排列和间距还有很大进步空间
比如00:04:703 (1,2) - 这两个是1/4的距离吧, 00:05:359 (4,5) - 那这两个用的跟刚才距离差不多却又是1/2的节奏, 00:05:828 (6,1) - 这里又突然变成1/4了

类似的还有00:17:078 (3,4) - 与 00:17:640 (5,6,7) - 与00:18:015 (7,1,2) - 之间的关系

00:57:578 (1,2) - 等等等

01:25:797 (7,1) - kiai中也有这种

00:22:515 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 像这种会让人以为这里全是1/4的节奏

大概挑了几处还有很多暂时不全指出处理好这些间距的关系非常影响到一张图的质量

关于slider的走向也很重要这关系到flow问题,比如 00:44:641 (1,2,1) - 想想这个打起来肯定会不是很顺的, 类似的还有00:48:016 (1,1) - 00:49:609 (2) - 00:57:297 (4) - 01:17:828 (7,1) - 等很多..
如果你想做到逆flow 那又是另一回事也不是像现在这些这样摆的

最后想提的是层次感问题整张图玩起来感觉都差不多的话也是没有什么意思应该分成不同的段落每段都有不同的梗这样图的质量才会更高会有更多的人去玩这点Another难度就做的不错

[Another]

请看general部分关于音效

00:19:516 (1,2) - 换一个地方吧叠在这里有些蛋疼
00:21:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 可以试试距离递增很有感觉
00:33:297 (2,4) - 这两个滑条完全重叠时间间隔又很短建议错开一些为好
00:37:141 (1,2) - 可以吧滑条加速换成跳, 不然会和00:37:516 (1) - 的速度反差太大
01:05:547 (5,6) - 看着太近了
01:24:766 (1,2,1,2) - 这里听音乐的话是音调渐进的所以建议这里的滑条距离增大
01:31:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这一段有些毁气氛啊突然来一个这么的梗
01:33:016 (3,4,5,6) - ^, 之前的都是3/4 这里1/2真的有些毁
01:40:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 要摆弧形的话, 摆好
01:53:359 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 建议弧形打起来也会顺一些
01:55:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 同样问题 1/2在这里毁气氛

[Hyper]
00:02:266 (4,1) - 不知你是没考虑到位还是故意这么放的现在的距离太近
00:05:266 (4,1) - ^
00:12:016 (1) - ^
00:14:266 (1,2) - ^
00:18:766 (3,1) - ^
00:52:516 (1,2,3) - ^
00:54:016 (1,2,3) - 2的位置应该靠3
00:57:016 (1,2,3) - ^
01:01:797 (2,3,4) - 等距
01:04:516 (1,2,3) - 太近
01:09:766 (1) - 不能挡折返, unrankable
01:18:016 (1) - ^
01:13:141 (1) - 红线结束

最后一段kiai做的太拘束了都挤在一块改改吧

[Normal]
00:04:516 (1) - 做个包围,而且现在的有些出界了
00:06:016 (1,2) - 太近了而且2叠在00:07:516 (1) - 上也不好
00:09:391 - ...为何空拍
00:12:016 (2) - 提前1/2 而且距离改一下, 这里的节奏明显变了
00:15:203 (3) - normal减少蓝线节奏
00:37:516 (1,2) - 改成折返滑条
00:39:016 (2,3,4) - 这节奏在normal真的略坑改成折返滑条为好
后面很多还有跟上面一条类似的情况不一一指出
01:00:203 (2,3) - 节奏明显不对啊
01:08:266 (3) - 突然来一下3次折返不好
01:09:016 (1,2) - 减少折返
01:10:516 (3,4) - 太近

好多蓝线上的note...有些不想写下去了建议改下蓝线压在滑条上

[Easy]
00:01:516 (1,2) - 包围
00:06:016 (2,3) - ...包好
00:47:266 (1) - 白线结束毕竟是easy
00:48:016 (2) - 太多次折返在easy里不好建议换成很多个滑条
00:49:516 (1,1) - 两个大转盘放在easy里..真的不合适而且这里有很多节奏可以做的
01:07:516 (6) - nc
01:13:516 (2,3,4) - ...easy这样节奏不好啊
01:18:016 (6,7,1) - ^
01:30:016 (3,1) - 不带这样遮的
01:34:141 (2,2) - ^
01:48:766 (5) - 折返太多
01:49:516 (6,7,1) - 干脆全跟鼓点..

加油

Wing My Way

186 posts

Joined September 2013

Wing My Way 2014-07-19T17:31:32+00:00

Kagi's mod for WMW's Extra

00:05:734 (1) - 去NC
00:06:016 (2) - 加NC
00:07:516 (5) - 加NC
00:10:141 (5) - 改成4个
00:10:141 (5) - 建议+NC
然后后面的连打四个或八个一组
00:14:828 (1) - 去掉NC
00:16:516 (4) - 加NC
00:21:016 (4) - ^
00:21:016 (4) - 加NC
00:21:484 (1) - 去除NC
00:21:766 (3) - 加NC
00:48:016 (4) - 独立的变速滑条加个NC
00:53:266 (4) - 加NC
00:57:578 (4,1) - 这里非常难读
01:04:047 (1,2,3) - 同上
01:07:328 (1) - 去掉NC
01:12:016 (1) - 建议Ctrl+G
01:20:266 (4,5,6) - 误读率高
01:26:266 (4) - +NC
01:33:203 (2,3,4) - 不好读
01:43:516 (5) - 这里NC 前面连打四个一组或保持原样
00:23:641 (1) - 这段连打可以加KIAI
00:48:016 (4,5) - 两个滑条加上KIAI也可以营造氛围

thx for Kagi

wantuol

107 posts

Joined October 2010

wantuol 2014-07-20T14:36:07+00:00

M4M
[General]
bg格式不对
[easy]
00:01:516 (1,2) - blanket没做好
00:13:516 (1,2) - 这两个弧度相同更好看点
00:37:516 (1,2) - DS修正
00:47:266 (1) - ^
easy很注重ds 网格调到最大全部ds修正到前后+-0.05最好
00:48:016 (2) - 这个slider可以加音效有很多重音
01:03:391 (1,2,3,4,5) - 太拥挤了
01:07:516 (6) - NC
01:36:016 (2,3,4) - 这个倒退要斟酌不是很好的感觉很贴近hp条无用的遮盖也多
[nor]
nor难度ds也是比较注重不推荐经常换ds
00:12:016 (5) - 做个小弧线包住4
00:19:516 (1,1,1,1) - 1 2 1 2更好
01:13:797 (2) - 这个slider有点不在节奏上试试其他的
[Hyper]
00:09:016 (1,2,3) - 这个遮盖不好看 3形状拉的也奇怪
有点厉害可以多用点强音效本身音乐那么激情不加点口哨什么的吗
[WMW's Shit]

pass
[Extra]
看呆了
多用点copy 旋转工具一些地方可以增强美观看你slider拉的都不一个样（copy党浑身难受
[- D a s z x -'s Another]
00:34:328 (6,1) - 这里间距也和00:34:703 (2,3) - 这种二连一样更好凸显节奏相同不突显slider→note的难易度调整
01:10:328 (1) - 去了NC
01:51:297 (2,3) - 前面flow那么顺这里就特别扭（浑身难受
~~（留点东西让mod找找啊 my god~~

就这些 good luck

[GB]Rush_FTK

217 posts

Joined July 2013

[GB]Rush_FTK 2014-07-24T08:05:33+00:00

Hi~From Ramdon Mod
看这图我在思考我14岁的时候做什么去了。少年有成。
扬名中国的歌曲。

Mod

I'm sorry for my poor Modding skill at first.
[General]
- Tags尽可能的都写，而且请不要写无关的单词，它关系到歌曲搜索系统。

[Easy]
Suggestion:
- Easy遵守DS如何？

- 00:12:016 (1,1) 对于Easy太近。
- 00:45:016 (3) 延长一个折返到00:45:859为止。
- 01:03:766 (2) 不愿用折返用红点滑条也有同样效果。但不要漏音。

My Opinion:
- 00:19:516 (5,6,7,8,1,2) 有点不舒服，换梗不如换折返。
- 00:47:266 (1,2,3) 对于EZ太难。
- 01:03:391 ~ 01:11:641 这里节奏相同，可以利用单打，短曲线滑条，红点滑条和折返滑条使得玩起来不无聊。建议保持1snap一个物件。因此建议remap。
- 01:18:859 (7,1) 太难。
- 01:48:766 (5,6) 太难，一个建议

- 02:03:203 (2) 换成一个转盘，跟风声，截止在 02:06:016。

[Normal]
有时间的话remap如何……？
My Opinion:
- SV太高。
- Distance spacing建议为x1.2~x1.3。
- 00:15:016 (2,3,4) 太难。
- 00:38:453 (2) 音阶不同不建议用折返。
后面的就没看了……

[Hyper]
Suggestion:
- 命名Hyper→Hard。要么Easy→Beginner/Basic；Normal→Standard也成。
- AR-0.8。
- 不像是一个人做的。

My Opinion:
- 音效太炫酷了。
- 00:22:516 ~ 00:25:328 夹杂着折返滑条的可能对HR太难。
- 01:00:016 (1,1) 建议短折返。
- 01:07:516 ~ 01:08:828 这样如何？

其他难度摸不动。

祝你好运~

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2014-07-28T10:21:48+00:00

best diff Ano by daszx

liaoxingyao

864 posts

Joined November 2013

liaoxingyao 2014-07-31T09:05:01+00:00

Extra I
Another X
思考

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2014-08-26T15:48:37+00:00

sry for people who mod my eznm............

__________and ex?

Fujiyama Panic

129 posts

Joined December 2012

Fujiyama Panic 2014-08-31T11:27:13+00:00

WOW

AWESOME MAP M8!!

Rank it!! =D SSo good!!

Fujiyama Panic

129 posts

Joined December 2012

Fujiyama Panic 2014-08-31T12:12:39+00:00

Oh yeah I just realized that but....

!!! Epilepsy Warning !!!

In D a s z x's Another the sides are flashing. I think those with a problem might get hurt by it. Just wanted to add that.

Good song.

sodarose

607 posts

Joined July 2011

sodarose 2014-09-03T04:14:34+00:00

爷爷你还需不需要Normal啊

我已经做完了

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2014-09-05T16:12:02+00:00

Fujiyama Panic wrote:
Oh yeah I just realized that but....

!!! Epilepsy Warning !!!

In D a s z x's Another the sides are flashing. I think those with a problem might get hurt by it. Just wanted to add that.

Good song.

yeah Thx very much XD!!!

liaoxingyao

864 posts

Joined November 2013

liaoxingyao 2014-09-06T06:02:59+00:00

爷爷千万不要把这图坟掉啊

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2014-09-06T07:30:42+00:00

liaoxingyao wrote:
爷爷千万不要把这图坟掉啊

一直没有坟啊

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2014-09-07T07:54:53+00:00

Fujiyama Panic wrote:

WOW

AWESOME MAP M8!!

Rank it!! =D SSo good!!

and re dl plz……

Fujiyama Panic

129 posts

Joined December 2012

Fujiyama Panic 2014-09-08T13:33:06+00:00

Hakurei Yoru wrote:
Fujiyama Panic wrote:

WOW

AWESOME MAP M8!!

Rank it!! =D SSo good!!
and re dl plz……

Stan's easy

SPOILER

Soda's Normal

SPOILER

Hyper

SPOILER

That ONE miss though...

GGFFQQ55's Insane

SPOILER

ALsane

SPOILER

Extra

SPOILER

Almooost xD

My favourite is ALsane, then Hyper THEN GGFFQQ55's Insane. The reason is simply because the ALsane fits so well, the hyper is not as hard but still fun, the QQ's is... well it's a bit confusing, but I personally find it kind of boring that there are no responsive hitsounds for the circles. Like the one in ALsane for example where you start with that stream-combo. GGFFQQ55's is... too silent? Yeah, I can't really FEEL that I hit the circles. This takes the fun away, kinda. Apart from that I like them all. I also gotta give you credits for making so many different difficulties. I once was very bad when I was new and maaan... it was really frustrating not being able to pla nice songs like that simply because I am not that good yet.
I'm all for varity in difficulties.

Good map m8, go Rank-u yo!! :3

liaoxingyao

864 posts

Joined November 2013

liaoxingyao 2014-09-09T12:46:55+00:00

Stan's easy
SPOILER
Soda's Normal
SPOILER
Hyper
SPOILER
That ONE miss though...

GGFFQQ55's Insane
SPOILER
ALsane
SPOILER
Extra
SPOILER
Almooost xD

My favourite is ALsane, then Hyper THEN GGFFQQ55's Insane. The reason is simply because the ALsane fits so well, the hyper is not as hard but still fun, the QQ's is... well it's a bit confusing, but I personally find it kind of boring that there are no responsive hitsounds for the circles. Like the one in ALsane for example where you start with that stream-combo. GGFFQQ55's is... too silent? Yeah, I can't really FEEL that I hit the circles. This takes the fun away, kinda. Apart from that I like them all. I also gotta give you credits for making so many different difficulties. I once was very bad when I was new and maaan... it was really frustrating not being able to pla nice songs like that simply because I am not that good yet.
I'm all for varity in difficulties.

Good map m8, go Rank-u yo!! :3

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