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Merci

Ultimate wrote:

BPM: 176,10
Offset: 1.544

Put BPM and Offset as suggested by Ultimate.
To do this, press F6 when edit and adjust BPM and offset manually. Then go to "Timing"---> "Resnap All Notes"
Do that on all difficulty.

Easy
00:18:580 (9) - Move to 00:18:410
00:31:361 (4) - Move to 00:31:190
00:32:213 (5) - Move to 00:32:042
00:32:553 (1) - Move to 00:32:383 and add a reverse arrow (see image below).
00:55:899 (7) - End this slider at 00:56:581 (see image below).

Normal
Some problem with spacing, I suppose.
For example at 00:12:445 (5,6,7) - where (6) and (7) are too close to (5)
Search and fix problems like this.

Hard
This is just insane XD
00:18:564 (3) - Move to 00:18:394
00:33:222 - New beat?
00:49:244 (1) - Move to 00:49:159 ?
00:50:096 - New beat?
00:56:403 (5) - End the slider at 00:57:085 and revert it (see image below).
01:00:493 (5) - End this slider at 01:01:005
01:06:800 (3) - End this slider at 01:07:652
01:14:811 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move two ticks backwards.



Remember to spacing when you edit the beatmap.

I hope that it can help you, even if I'm not a pro modder XD
Starred*

Thanks

goood maap !

star

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Mod V2

Général :

Le [Normal] est un peu dur pour du [Normal], c'est plus un [Hard]

Pas grand chose à dire sur le [Easy]


[Insane] :

00:02:566 (10) - Overlap avec le (9). Si tu sais pas comment on fait, tu enlève le Distance Snap, et le Grid Snap, et tu le place juste en dessous
00:34:082 (3) - Met le à 00:33:911
00:34:252 (4) - Met le à 00:34:082
00:34:423 (5) - Met le à 00:34:252
00:34:593 (6) - Met le à 00:34:423
00:34:763 (7) - Met le à 00:34:593
00:34:763 (x) - Si tout au dessus fait : Met une note


Et vu que je suis pas bon pour trouvé les erreurs c'est tout :>
Peut être revoir l'esthétique de la map, mais ça, c'est à toi de voir

Hello
I got it in #mod

[General]

• Set the kiai time properly

[Easy]

• 00:17:898 (8) Finish
  00:33:570 (6) New combo
  00:40:725 (x) Add note with Finish
  01:21:441 (2) Move to 01:21:270[/color]

[Hard]

• 00:17:898 (7) Finish at end
  00:46:006 (1) Unsuitable jump for me
  00:47:540 (x) Add note
  00:47:710 (7) New combo
  00:48:051 (1) De-New combo
  00:52:821 (1) Decrease 1 1/4 Length

[Insane]

• 01:04:746 (9) 2 Grids Left
  No more streams? o.o

Star

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Modded in IRC :3

Merci pour ton Mod en IRC

Mod by requested.


Music is too soft. Make it louder pls.

~Hard~
Add more hitsounds.
00:02:225 (9,10) - move up 1 grid (Lv2)
00:02:736 (1) - use normal-hitfinish
00:03:162 (2) - on white tick
00:06:995 (6) - new combo
00:08:017 (11) - move 1/2 right
00:09:039 (3,4) - too close
00:09:891 - add note
00:15:172 (6) - end on red tick
00:18:239 (2) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
00:30:334 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - move 1/2 right
00:36:467 (5) - ^
00:40:896 (3) - move 1/2 left
00:41:237 (5) - move 1/2 right
00:44:474 (1) - move 1/2 left
00:44:985 (4) - end on white tick
00:47:540 (1) - move 1/2 right
00:48:051 (2) - delete
00:49:244 (2,3,4,5) - move 1/2 right
00:50:095 (6) - end on red tick
00:50:947 (7) - move 1/2 left
00:51:118 - add note
00:51:228 - ^
00:52:140 (5,6) - move 1/2 right
00:52:651 (7) - delete
00:52:992 (9) - move 1/2 right
00:55:377 (5) - delete
00:55:717 (1) - ^
00:58:102 (5) - move 1/2 right
00:59:806 (1) - delete
01:00:487 (5) - start on right red tick
01:00:487 - add note
01:01:169 (1) - ^
01:01:850 (5) - end on right white tick
01:06:791 (3) - ^
01:10:198 (5) - end on white tick
01:12:923 (5) - ^
01:14:968 (2) - delete
01:15:308 (4,5) - move 1/2 right
01:15:479 (5) - end on red tick
01:17:182 (6) - move 1/2 right
01:18:375 (4) - end on right white tick
01:19:397 (1) - start on right white tick and end on white tick
01:20:419 (2) - delete
01:20:760 (4) - ^
01:21:271 (7) - start on red tick
01:21:782 (1) - delete
01:22:634 (6) - move 1/2 right
01:23:826 (1) - ^
01:24:848 (2) - delete
01:25:360 (5) - ^
01:25:700 - add note
01:26:041 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - move 1/2 left
01:27:404 (5) - end on white tick
01:28:256 (1) - move 1/2 left
01:30:641 - add note
01:31:492 (2) - move 1/2 right
01:31:833 (3) - delete
01:32:515 (2) - ^
01:32:855 (3) - start on left red tick and end on white tick
01:33:707 (1) - move 1/2 left
01:34:900 (1,2) - move 1/2 right
01:35:751 (1) - move 1/2 left
01:36:262 (4) - end on red tick


Your map doesn't follow to anything which confused players while playing.
Also too much issues, no star.

Hi~

Use distance snap and hitsounds! D:

[Easy]

There's a lot of spacing D:

Revise every note with distance snap please,

00:16:024 (4) - New combo
00:32:378 (4) - ^
00:33:570 (1) - Remove new combo
00:54:695 (5) - New combo
00:58:613 (3,4) - Add something between these notes (with new combo)
01:05:597 (4) - New combo
01:09:345 (4) - End this 1/2 later
01:11:049 (6) - And new combo here
01:12:412 (10) - Add a repeat
01:14:626 (2,3) - Move these notes to the next white tick
01:16:330 (6) - New combo ?
01:19:567 (1,2) - Put something between those notes D:
01:21:952 (3) - New combo
01:29:958 (3) - ^
01:32:684 (9) - ^
01:33:536 (1) - Remove new combo, and end it in the next white tick
01:36:091 (2) - Start this here 01:36:262 and end it in 01:37:313, BUT add something between this and the other slider.
01:38:135 (3) - Delete this, and add a spinner here which ends in 01:39:002... anyways I think it's too short for an easy diff but fits better...

[Hard]

Resnap all notes, I think it'll fix the unsnapped notes I mentioned now.

00:10:572 (1) - Make this slider 1/2 shorter and add another 2 repeats.
00:18:920 (4) - Add finish here
00:32:378 (8) - New combo
00:32:719 (1) - Remove new combo
00:43:792 (4) - New combo
00:44:644 (1) - Remove new combo
00:55:887 (4) - New combo
00:56:569 (8) - End this slider in the next white tick
00:58:613 (6) - This isn't snapped...
00:59:635 (1) - ^
01:01:339 (3) - New combo, snap this. A jump now?
01:02:872 (5) - Snap
01:04:746 (5) - ^, and new combo
01:09:175 (1) - Remove new combo
01:09:516 (2) - New combo
01:12:412 (1,2,3,4) - Move all these notes one 1/2 back
01:12:923 (4) - End this 1/2 later
01:21:952 (1) - Snap
01:22:803 (1) - Remove new combo
01:23:655 (1) - ^
01:24:677 (4) - Snap and new combo
01:25:529 (1) - Snap and remove new combo
01:26:210 (2) - Snap


I didn't mod GTO, because you've not fixed yet what DJPop told you! D:



You have to work hard with this map. Have a star!

Thanks Djpop & Sesito71

Alright, here we go...

Easy:
For this, you are going to have to distance snap all of the notes. Go through the song and re-distance snap all of the beats.

Now, for particular things...
00:16:535 - I'd probably make this a new combo color. Probably, since that it's an easier difficulty.
00:30:845 - get rid of the turn around (or whatever you call them)
00:32:037 - put a beat here.
00:51:637 - put the audio back to normal. There is no reason for this to go to soft. especially for a Kiai section.
00:59:465 - either fill in this little section in with something or make 01:00:657 (4) a new combo
01:06:790 (6) - make this slightly shorter to here 01:07:471
01:09:345 (4) - extend it to here 01:10:197
01:10:708 (5) - would probably make this a new combo
01:12:241 (9) - move this back to here 01:12:071
01:14:115 (1) - I'd get rid of this and 01:14:626 (2) as well, and instead put a slider where (1) was and extend it to here 01:14:797 (oh yeah, and also put it back to normal audio)
01:20:418 - This little empty space feels like it should have something in it.
01:27:233 (5) - I would probably replace this with a beat instead of a slider.
01:28:084 - And from here on it just feels really awkward and no real sense of beats at all, either redo this entire ending section to make it more do-able or have it end right there.

Hard:

00:51:628 - Please, get rid of soft and put back normal, seriously.
00:55:035 (3) - shorten this slider to here 00:55:546
00:58:613 (6) - Um. make this fit the timing by shortening it slightly and add in another turn around.
00:59:635 (1) - Okay, from here on it gets kinda' off beat so, resnap all of the beats and sliders so that they fit. So, here, extend it slightly.
01:01:339 (3) - extend this to fit the timing.
01:02:020 (4) - I'd change this to a beat.
01:02:872 (5) - make this a new combo color, make this fit the timing.
01:04:746 (5) - make this fit the timing.
01:12:582 (1,2,3,4) - move this entire section back to here 01:12:412
01:14:115 - Do I even have to say to change this to normal sound?
01:21:952 (1) - make this fit the timing and extend it by one turn around.
01:24:677 (4) - Do the same this here.
01:25:529 (1) - Make this fit the timing.
01:26:210 (2) - Make this fit the timing and extend it by one turnaround.

GTO:
Oh ho boy... here we go...

00:44:388 - No soft audio.
00:09:379 (4) - Distance snap this correctly
00:15:172 - put a beat in here.
00:15:342 (6) - Distance snap this correctly
00:18:835 - You know, if this is the hardest map, I'd probably expect a break to not be in here, especially since this is only a short, one minute and thirty second song. So, I'd have to say to get rid of the break and map this section.
00:31:526 - Put a beat in here.
00:36:467 (5) - Move this to here 00:36:637
00:41:066 (4) - I'd probably make this a new combo.
00:44:388 (1) - Move this back to here 00:44:303
00:49:925 (5) - shorten it's ending to here 00:50:266
00:50:607 (6) - Move this back to here 00:50:436
00:51:629 - Soft bad. Normal good.
00:52:140 (5,6) - Move these two up together to here 00:52:310
00:52:992 (9) - Get rid of it.
00:58:102 (5) - move this to here 00:58:273
01:01:850 (5) - I'd extend this to here 01:02:532
01:04:746 (9) - Move this to a better looking location.
01:06:791 (3) - Shorten this to here 01:07:472
01:08:835 (4) - get rid of this
01:09:005 (5) - move this back to where 4 was
01:10:198 (5) - extend this to here 01:10:709
01:12:923 (5) - Extend this to here 01:13:605
01:14:116 - No soft
01:15:479 (5) - Move this to here 01:15:649
01:17:012 (5) - Delete this
01:17:182 (6) - Move this back to where 5 was
01:19:397 (1) - Move this forward to here 01:19:567 and shorten it to here 01:19:908
01:21:101 (6) - Delete this
01:21:271 (7) - Move this back to where 6 was
01:21:782 (1) - Delete this
01:23:826 (1) - I'd get rid of this and put a beat here.
01:23:997 - Add a beat
01:24:167 - Add a beat
01:24:337 - Add a beat
01:25:700 - Add a beat
01:25:871 - Add a beat
01:26:041 (1) - Delete this
01:27:233 (4) - Delete this
01:27:404 (5) - Move this back to where 4 was and probably extend it to 01:28:085
01:32:855 (3) - Shorten this to here 01:33:196

There were a lot of timing issues with these maps, it's like as though you used recalculate slider lengths and didn't bother to check whether it worked or not.

Let's see where we go from there and how it turns out, okay? I'll come back with a follow up after you fix this up, cuz I know that there will be some issues with the modifications that I made. Like for example, I know that a lot of the slider extensions that I told you to make will most likely give you really long sliders, so either make them curve so that you don't have long sliders or just turn them into beats or something. But I'm gonna come back.

A star for you because I'd like to see this map get ranked.

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Revived : )

Easy:

00:30:845 (3) Distance snap
00:37:489 (5) ^
01:31:832 (7.8.1) These three sounds really awful to my ear, try to reorganize them?

Hard:

00:09:891 Try adding a circle here
00:30:674 (5) Sounds better to me when you shorten this slider a tick, move it a tick forward, and then replace this empty place with a circle
00:46:518 (3.4) Here's pretty much the same thing as in above but backwards . Remove 3 and put the slider a tick back and lenghten it a tick
01:27:744 Try adding a circle here
01:30:129 ^
01:30:496 ^

Repost Insane:

Damn, fartownik didn't left nothing for me to mod >.<

Well anyways, have a earned star~

Mianki wrote:

Easy:

00:30:845 (3) Distance snap
00:37:489 (5) ^
01:31:832 (7.8.1) These three sounds really awful to my ear, try to reorganize them?

Hard:

00:09:891 Try adding a circle here
00:30:674 (5) Sounds better to me when you shorten this slider a tick, move it a tick forward, and then replace this empty place with a circle
00:46:518 (3.4) Here's pretty much the same thing as in above but backwards . Remove 3 and put the slider a tick back and lenghten it a tick
01:27:744 Try adding a circle here
01:30:129 ^
01:30:496 ^

Insane

I'll mod this later, don't have time now. But why does the sliders sound different in this difficulty? Please try to fix it

Fixed : )

Map is great ;p
It's really your first map? o.o
star ofc ^^

Thanks : )

First, and the most important thing - distance spacing. You didn't use it so your map is completely unreadable and confusing. You must turn it on and check all of the difficulties for issues.

Delete last 2 colors? They are the same as previous 2.

Meh, use some hitsounds. I heard few claps only, you need to put more effort on it.

Set preview point the same on all difficulties.

I prefer you use full title of the anime, instead of a shortcut. So the source should be: Great Teacher Onizuka.

[Easy]

Raise HP Drain and Overall Difficulty a bit and call it "Normal".

00:53:161 (2,3,4) - Spacing.
01:12:752 (7,1) - Spacing.
01:21:952 (1,2,3,4) - What's this. It's unrankable. Please unstack these sliders.
01:24:677 (1,2,3) - ^



[Hard]

This difficulty is not bad though. Needs more hitsounds.

01:00:487 (2,3) - Spacing.
01:06:790 (5,6) - Spacing.


[GTO]

Raise Overall Difficulty by 2 ticks. The current level makes the map confusing.

00:02:566 (10,1) - Swap these notes.
00:03:247 (2,3,4) - Spacing.
00:04:950 (5,1) - Unintuitive jump.
00:15:342 (7) - Make this slider 14 longer.
[00:17:898] - Add a circle.
00:33:571 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:44:388 (1,2,3) - Move 1/4 forward.
00:44:814 (3,4) - Spacing.
00:49:925 (5) - Make this slider 1/4 shorter.
00:49:925 (5,6) - Spacing.
00:51:288 (9,1) - Unintuitive jump.
00:56:228 (4,5) - ^
01:01:850 (5) - Make this slider 1/4 longer.
01:04:406 (7,8) - Spacing or spacing 01:04:576 (8,9).
01:10:198 (5) - Make this slider 1/4 longer.
01:12:923 (5) - ^
01:19:567 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and make it 1/4 shorter.
01:23:826 (1) - Make it 1/2 longer.
01:27:233 (4,5) - Unintuitive jump.
01:27:404 (5) - Make it 1/4 shorter.
[01:28:085] - Add a circle.
01:29:618 (1) - Make it 1/4 shorter.
[01:29:959] - Add a note.
[01:30:130] - ^
01:32:855 (3) - Make it 1/4 shorter.
[01:33:537] - Add a note here.
01:35:751 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This fragment feels totally off. Please re-map it.

Fix this and the map will be playable.
+star

Thanks : )

Normal & Hard Fixed
GTO Fixed

Hey, can I make a difficulty, Hard? ^^

Oh,

Hmm, i don't really want to collab on the 1st map, you see?
Sorry,

But, maybe after..

other than hitsounds , which would be greatly appreciated.
Adding Black and white to the colours would be nice
anyways star~ for now

As your request...

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

No star. Request this map again in this queue for re-check if you want.

Thanks for mod : )

-General Fixed

-Normal Fixed

-Hard Fixed

-GTO Fixed

offset is 1530

Normal
00:40:385 little closer
01:04:235 add circle
01:04:575 add circle

Hard
00:25:053 remove clap and volume down
00:51:799 this slider start to 00:51:969 and 00:51:799 add circle
01:22:803(2,3,4,5) arrange a little more beautiful

GTO
clap is noisy .
volume down

00:58:259 add circle
01:01:836 this slider finish is 01:01:177
01:18:361 1grid right

nice~

Thanks : D

-Normal Fixed

-Hard Fixed

-GTO Fixed

eeh man, quick bpm check again

BPM: 176,090
Offset: 1.534

Remember to resnap all your notes after changing the bpm ^^

Thanks : )

[General]:

1. Porno Graffiti - Hitori No Yoru (Slanox).osb remove this file from your folder and full submit.
2. hitsounds are overused imo

[Normal]:

1. 00:32:370 (1) - replace this note with a slider end at 00:32:711
2. 00:32:711 (2) - move this slider to 00:32:881 and put the end at 00:33:222
3. 00:51:622 (1) - move to 00:51:962, remove the last back. then let the KIAI start at 00:51:962.
4. 00:53:155 (2,3,4) - put them at 00:53:325,00:53:666,00:54:007.
5. 00:57:414 (1,2,3) - feels quite off the lyrics, try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:02:866 (1) - make this a slider that ends at 01:03:207
7. 01:03:207 (2) - let this start at 01:03:377 and ends at 01:03:718
8. 01:04:740 (5) - use Grid Level 3 to put this note or just at the same place with (4).
9. 01:34:895 (4) - let it start at 01:34:724
10. 01:36:428 (1) - use finish instead of a clap.

[Hard]:

1. 01:37:450 (3,4,5) - use finish, not clap

[GTO]:

1. 00:19:252 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - these 3 combos are meaningless, just remap this map without them.
2. 00:24:022 (T) - add a note here or plus a back to 00:23:511 (1).
3. 01:37:450 (7) - finish here and remove the clap
4. 01:37:621 (8) - remove claps and add a finish at the reverse circle.
5. 01:38:132 (9) - finish and no clap.

Looks fine as a first attempt, more modding is needed.

Have my star.

Thanks ^^


-- Fixed

[General]
Delete .osb file and full submit.
Remove "great teacher onizuka hitori no yoru" from the tags, since it's already in the title and source field.

[GTO]
00:36:800 (x) - Add circle.
00:44:807 (1) - End at 00:45:659?(Red tick)
01:23:821 (1) - Remove new combo?

[Timing]
00:01:534 - Custom2?why?

00:02:726 - unneeded timing section, please remove it.

wip?
nice~

Thanks !

Yeah, Wip.. I think xD

-Fixed

[Normal]
00:57:414 (1,2,3,4) - Met des claps
01:02:866 (x) - Slider ici
01:02:866 (2,3) - Clap O:
01:15:281 - Sa sonne bizarre
01:18:199 (4) - 1/2 plus tôt
01:28:421 (5) - ^
01:31:488 (9) - ^

[Hard]
00:23:511 (1) - Pas de clap
01:35:065 (1) - clap

[GTO]
00:44:125 (7) - supprime et rallonge 00:43:785 (6) de 1/4

Merci !

-Fixed

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Move to pending! You must do it before getting the map bubbled/ranked >.< (Or are you waiting for someone to make another diff? o.o)
- Delete the 2 last combocolors, they're unnecessary xD
- Huh.. maybe is there any form to make the combuburst not to flip horizontally? It looks ugly xD

~Normal~
00:16:526 (1) - Fix Spacing here.
00:32:881 (1) - ^
00:53:325 (2) - ^
00:57:925 (2) - ^
01:00:140 (x) - Add a note here?
01:00:992 (6) - Add a repeat to it? That empty space sounds weird xD
01:02:014 (1) - Delete New Combo Here and add it on (2).
01:04:058 (3,4,5) - Fix spacing.
01:04:569 (4,5) - I think it would be nicer if they're stacked, as in, put (5) right behind (4).
01:12:236 (5,6) - ^
01:26:206 (2,3) - ^

~Hard~
- Decrease Overall Difficulty and HP Drain by 1 tick maybe?

00:15:333 (7) - Fix Spacing (Yeah it's a bit nazi, but it just makes that pattern prettier >w<)
00:41:570 (3) - ^
00:42:933 (3) - ^
00:51:962 (4,1) - Fix spacing here too? That jump is weird...
01:23:310 (5) - Fix spacing.
01:30:125 (6) - ^

~GTO~
00:20:785 (5,6) - This sounds weird :/ Move (6) to the white tick?
00:23:000 (3) - Fix spacing.
00:31:177 (6,7,8,1) - Looks a bit ugly, align horizontally? oxo
00:44:807 (1) - Shorten the spinner to the red tick.
01:28:080 (6) - Fix spacing.

Not bad~ There are some weird rythms but I don't think they aren't that bad~ *star*

Thanks !!

-Fixed

[Overall]

Mp3's volume is a bit low. Can you increase it please? If you don't know how to do, I can do it for you. Remember to full submit after this change.

[Difficulties]

[Hard]

00:43:785 (4) - New combo.
00:44:636 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:45:999 (4) - New combo.
00:46:170 (1) - Remove new combo.

Not bad for a first beatmap, but I think you should remove some hitsounds, there are too many.

Thanks for your mod !!!

- Remove Hitsounds ( whistle )

- Hard Fixed

Here you go, volume increased ^^

osuplayer111 wrote:

Here you go, volume increased ^^

Thanks ^^

Looks good now.

Bubbled~

Ranked.

Oh hey, that was fast!!

Congrats on your first ranked map!!

Thanks !!!

Wow, didn't have the chance to look at it... sorry ;(

Congrats by the way.

Thanks ! ^^

PS : No problem