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Hotaru Murasaki - Chiisana Tenohira (CBKN House Cover)

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Suimya
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 12 May, 2014 at 11:10:49 AM

Artist: Hotaru Murasaki
Title: Chiisana Tenohira (CBKN House Cover)
Source: CLANNAD
Tags: The palm of a tiny hand KEY Jun Maeda EastNewSound Lia riya kyoto animation Euphoric Tears Sekai
BPM: 126
Filesize: 8667kb
Play Time: 05:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chiisana no Uta (4.86 stars, 756 notes)
Download: Hotaru Murasaki - Chiisana Tenohira (CBKN House Cover)
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This song <3
Bless
baka
20:54 Sekai-nyan: Bless o3o
20:55 Sekai-nyan: can you testplay?
20:56 Bless: what map?
20:57 *Sekai-nyan is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/420768 Hotaru Murasaki - Chiisana Tenohira (CBKN House Cover)]
20:57 Bless: i'm watching LOL all-star
20:57 Sekai-nyan: owo
20:57 Sekai-nyan: lol
20:58 Sekai-nyan: maybe short irc mod will help =w=
21:00 Bless: so long map lol
21:01 Sekai-nyan: lol
21:01 Sekai-nyan: it's app baka
21:01 Sekai-nyan: and it's DTable
21:01 Bless: i'll test it later
21:01 Bless: is it okay? :3
21:01 Bless: i'll tell you when i'm ready
21:02 Sekai-nyan: ahh
21:02 Sekai-nyan: watching something atm =w=
21:02 Sekai-nyan: sure
21:02 Bless: i'm watching the LOL ALL-STAR final live :3
21:03 Sekai-nyan: o.o/
21:44 Bless: :3
21:45 Sekai-nyan: wb Bless owo
21:46 Bless: let's begin?
21:46 Sekai-nyan: owo
21:46 Sekai-nyan: watching ww
21:50 Sekai-nyan: lol
21:50 Sekai-nyan: that ending
21:51 Bless: maybe add a red line here? 04:52:558 -
21:51 Sekai-nyan: oh
21:52 Sekai-nyan: yeah sure i'll add it =3=
21:56 Bless: seems not only one red line =3=
21:57 Sekai-nyan: orz
21:57 Sekai-nyan: but but ;w;
21:58 Bless: but?
21:59 Sekai-nyan: it sounds the same :c
21:59 Bless: 01:28:987 (7) - how do you think about move this to x256,y352?
22:01 Bless: it's not good with (8) now, need some change:3
22:01 Sekai-nyan: wow
22:01 Sekai-nyan: i didn't notice xD
22:01 Sekai-nyan: so changed it www
22:06 Bless: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1596112
22:06 Sekai-nyan: for which o.o
22:07 Bless: 01:33:034 (7) -
22:08 Sekai-nyan: hmm ok seems it flow better now
22:08 Sekai-nyan: so changed it too
22:12 Bless: i think here are some part can be mapped better flow =3=
22:12 Bless: such like 02:01:606 (6,7) - this
22:12 Sekai-nyan: D:
22:13 Sekai-nyan: Bless hidoiii ;w;
22:13 Bless: D:
22:13 Sekai-nyan: omg
22:13 Sekai-nyan: i forgot to ctrl+g
22:13 Sekai-nyan: lol
22:14 Bless: lol
22:15 Bless: 03:48:510 (6) - move to stack 4
22:15 Bless: wait..
22:16 Sekai-nyan: lol
22:16 Sekai-nyan: why stack xD
22:16 Bless: 03:48:987 (8) - stack 4
22:17 Bless: 03:48:749 (7) - stack 5
22:17 Sekai-nyan: and 7?
22:17 Sekai-nyan: o.o
22:17 Bless: feel better
22:18 Sekai-nyan: =w=
22:18 Sekai-nyan: hai hai www
22:18 Bless: =3=
22:19 Bless: so 4 stack 8, 5 stack 7
22:20 Sekai-nyan: yeah
22:20 Sekai-nyan: done that xD
22:20 Sekai-nyan: baka
22:20 Bless: 01:34:225 (9,1) - bad flow
22:21 Sekai-nyan: orz
22:21 Sekai-nyan: is it?
22:21 Bless: imo
22:21 Bless: lol
22:21 Sekai-nyan: `lol
22:21 Sekai-nyan: ok ctrl+g on 1 and 2
22:21 Sekai-nyan: =3=
22:22 Sekai-nyan: i think it's better now
22:22 Bless: but 3
22:23 Sekai-nyan: it's fine lol
22:23 Sekai-nyan: i saw many poeple do like this
22:23 Bless: ok then
22:24 Bless: that's all
22:24 Sekai-nyan: =3=
22:24 Bless: 030
22:24 Sekai-nyan: oh ok ;w;
22:24 Sekai-nyan: you can post and star *runs*
22:25 Sekai-nyan: huehue
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for modding moe Bless o3o/
riffy
Yo, as requested.

[General]
  1. The song sounds so much like dango daikazoku, it may be a good idea since this tag is related to the song for sure.
  2. Please, disable letterboxes during breaks. It makes no sense to keep it enabled, there're no any breaks, after all.
[Marathon]
I see what you're trying to do, but for those, who don't know japanese/didn't watch the anime the diff name makes no sense, which is quite disappointing. Can't you use something more understandable or at least explain in the creator's word what does the name of the diff mean.
  1. 00:01:368 - ignoring 1/2 beats feels rather uncomfortable. At least try to point it out by curving the slider like you did it with 00:04:939 (1). Iit plays rather confusing and a bit unpleasant as it is now, imo.
    Note: 00:04:939 (1) - whoops, the same here. :( Please, do the same thing to both of these sliders, so we'll make your patterns a bit more consistent, which is awesome, imo.
  2. 00:16:844 (1,2,3) - please, spend some time to get your blalankets cleaner and patterns neater. Here's an example!
    Note: try to spend some time, like ~30 minutes or so to clean up the diff in general. I like your ideas and I see how they work, but some of them look a bit unidy and can be easily improved visually. :)
    Note: 00:36:129 (2,3,4) - uguu, blankets are awesome.
  3. 00:24:939 (3,4) - at such parts, the transitions feels weird comparing to the rest of the map where your flow is amazing and really smooth. here's an example of what you can get
  4. 00:45:891 (7) - the slider looks EXACTLY like the previous ones but it has more repeats which is totally unexpected and rather hard to understand. Consider breakiung it into two sliders or pointed the slider out with a new combo to make it more understandable!
  5. 01:24:939 (3,5) - please, unstack the slider manually to make it more readablee and playable with some modes like Easy/HT. With these modes, the second slider may become pretty hard to notice and bug players. :(
  6. 01:51:606 (5) - the 3/4 slider sounds pretty weird due to the beat ignored at 01:51:844 - try to finish the slider 1/4 earlier or you can try to use the red anchor to emphasize the beat. Either way is fine imo.
    Note: same applies for the sliders like 02:00:177 (3) - and some others. :(
  7. 02:02:677 (9,11) - sounds like you're overmapping a bit. Please, try to remove them in order to reflect the music better and to make your rhythm more precise.
  8. 02:34:463 (3,4) - I do not think that the 1/4 gaps here sound quite good. I understand your point, but the music is going calm there, so, I want you to make the sliders 1/4 shorter. They will end on the red ticks, which will match with the music a bit better and fit with the song's tempo a bit better.
  9. 03:00:177 - don't you feel bad about the beats being ignored here? Why don't you try to map the beat here? It sounds like a good idea to me and I feel like it may fit here.
  10. 03:18:987 (1) - your comboing feels a bit broken here. Tty to remove a new combo, please. It looks a bit unnecessary.
  11. 04:00:415 (2) - minor - your flow here could be slighly improved if you move (2) down. It will give a smoother and more natural transition.
  12. 04:37:320 (1) - the jump here feels too far and does not really reflect the song. Please, try to reduce the DS here, it will make the diff a bit more playable and logical. I think that this jump does not really fits with the diff.
    Note: 04:42:558 (4,1) - same happens here. Though this one does not feels THAT hard, it is still a bit exaggerated.

    The diff is quite good. I do not really like a couple of your patterns, but it's based on my personal preferences and opinion. You did a great job, but some polishing would help you to make it even better!
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Best of luck!
waxman
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[General]
About circle color, 00:31:129 (4,1) seems to be same color. remove any colors.

04:52:558 (1) - 05:08:391 (1) - (UNRANKABLE) UNSNAPPED, NEED TO CHECK TIMING! :arrow: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/13795

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00:33:272 (7) - blanket. x;204 y:304
00:36:844 (5,6) - The objects are close. According to 00:35:415 (1,2,3,4,5) .
00:39:225 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing. 00:39:463 (2,3,4) move to x:228 y:100
00:44:939 (5) - this slider's direction is wrong.
01:14:701 (8,9,1) - spacing. take same distance
01:32:558 (4) - NC?
01:46:606 (1) - This circle would be moved to 01:46:883 imo.
02:13:034 (8) - Ctrl+G, According to the flow. then 02:13:749 (9,10,1) would be moved if you did that.
02:30:653 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - idea
02:35:415 (4) - The end of slider is at 02:36:129 imo.
03:11:606 (8) - According to 03:10:891 (6)'s blanket, move to x:172 y:268
03:15:177 (7) - blanket. move to x:128 y:184
03:15:177 (7) - too far? idea
03:24:939 (1,2) - close a bit. According to 03:24:939 (1,3).
03:45:891 (1) - use this sliderfollowcircle
04:46:844 (3,4,5) - cool guy♂


GOOD LUCK!
yurunneram
sorry I'm not good at modding insane diffs :/ sorry for late I've been contemplating on whether or not to attempt at modding this

I have a violin version of this song ///w///

01:01:606 (6) - Add one repeat?

01:08:272 (2,4) - Cool bro

01:30:177 (11) - Could make blanketing nicer

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01:37:796 (8) - flow would be nicer with ctrl+G

01:43:987 (5) - I think having flow here would suit the map better. have it at x472 y168 or something instead

02:52:558 (1,2) - Blanket properly

03:11:606 (8) - Ignore the distance spacing here. Wouldn't putting it at x184 y272 look nicer?

03:45:891 (1) - Blanket properly

03:54:463 (7) - ^ lift the tail

you should do a proper timing check for the last part of the song ._.

Dun give kudos..
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