This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014년 6월 7일 토요일 at 오후 9:58:53

Artist: Piko
Title: Sakurane
Source: Yorinuki Gintama-san
BPM: 180
Filesize: 4563kb
Play Time: 03:33
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (0.77 stars, 141 notes)
2. Hard (4.96 stars, 459 notes)
3. Normal (3.15 stars, 231 notes)

Download: Piko - Sakurane
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hi Raphael
FromRaphael's Modding Queue


[General]
The volume of hitsound (Clap) is a little loud in the Kiai section
02:48:489 (1) - use S:C1 hitsound
The offset is a littler early for me, how about +5ms

[Hard]
00:29:656 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is not fitted the rhythm here
00:46:823 (3) - remove (3), reverse (2), then add a note at 00:47:156 (3) -


[Normal]
01:07:156 (1,1) - the time is too short for Normal
02:03:156 (1,1) - ^, remove the slider, then add a note at 02:05:823 (1) -
03:33:823 (4) - new combo

[Easy]
00:15:823 (4) - out of the screen
01:07:156 (1,1) - same
02:03:156 (1,1) - same

I really love this song~ Good luck

cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi Raphael
FromRaphael's Modding Queue


[General]
The volume of hitsound (Clap) is a little loud in the Kiai section
02:48:489 (1) - use S:C1 hitsound
The offset is a littler early for me, how about +5ms

[Hard]
00:29:656 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is not fitted the rhythm here

SPOILER

00:46:823 (3) - remove (3), reverse (2), then add a note at 00:47:156 (3) -


[Normal]
01:07:156 (1,1) - the time is too short for Normal - I will fix when it mention again.
02:03:156 (1,1) - ^, remove the slider, then add a note at 02:05:823 (1) -
03:33:823 (4) - new combo

[Easy]
00:15:823 (4) - out of the screen
01:07:156 (1,1) - same - I don't know what you mean ;w;
02:03:156 (1,1) - same - ^

I really love this song~ Good luck

Thank you

Hi, I came from your queue (M4M)!

[Easy]

Rhythmic problems: Try not to make your slider across the 1st beat of every bar, which will make the rhythm rather weak! There're exceptions, I'm not going to explain the music theories in details.

00:02:494 (1) - put a circle here, and slider starts at 00:03:161, which makes the rhythm stronger
00:07:828 (1) - put a circle here, and slider starts at 00:08:494, which makes the rhythm stronger
00:13:161 (1) - put a circle here, and slider starts at 00:13:828, ends at 00:14:494 (remove 2)
00:15:828 (4) - put a circle here, and slider starts at 00:16:494
00:27:828 (1) - (suggestion, you may not change this) put a circle here, and slider starts at 00:28:494, ends at 00:29:161 (remove 2)
00:45:161 (2) - use two circles but not a slider (as being a musician, I just "feel" this way would be better, but you may not change it)
01:47:828 (2) - use two circles but not a slider
02:10:494 (1) - slider ends at 02:11:161, and put a circle at 02:11:828
02:17:161 (2) - use two circles but not a slider
03:09:161 (1,1) - wow this is nice
03:21:161 (2) - use two circles but not a slider

After all, please set new combos for the 1st beat of every bar (or every 2 bars), or the 4th beat if you're using an "up-beat slider"

[Normal]

00:02:494 (1) - suggest a circle here, and slider starts at 00:03:161, ends at the same point

This diff. is almost perfect...

[Hard]

00:57:661 (4,1) - This is not a problem, but if you Ctrl+G the rhythm would be very great!
01:09:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe change the rhythm?
01:14:161 - maybe add a circle here
01:19:494 - maybe add a circle here
01:29:494 (5) - slider ends at 01:29:661, which makes the rhythm stronger!
01:53:828 (1) - remove this, which makes the rhythm stronger!
01:54:494 (7,8,9) - maybe 7,8 change to a slider, and 9 change to a circle (01:54:994 leave it blank)
01:57:828 (2,3,4,5,1) - suggestion:
01:59:828 (3) - slider ends at 01:59:994, then put a circle at 02:00:161
02:15:494 - maybe add a circle here
02:20:661 - maybe add a circle here
02:25:494 (5) - slider ends at 02:25:661, which makes the rhythm stronger!
02:28:828 (4) - use a circle instead
02:29:828 (6) - totally overlap, or move far away from 5
03:05:828 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - you may use some 1/2 or 1/4 reverse sliders
03:09:161 (1) - slider ends at 03:09:828 (remove 2), makes the rhythm stronger
03:14:161 (7) - totally overlap, or move far away from 6
03:29:494 (5) - slider ends at 03:29:661, which makes the rhythm stronger!
03:32:328 (5) - no reverse

Imo, your map is so great, almost perfect, and I love your song so much!
You should make an insane diff.!

FuFuLu wrote:

Hi, I came from your queue (M4M)!

[Easy]

Rhythmic problems: Try not to make your slider across the 1st beat of every bar, which will make the rhythm rather weak! There're exceptions, I'm not going to explain the music theories in details.

00:02:494 (1) - put a circle here, and slider starts at 00:03:161, which makes the rhythm stronger
00:07:828 (1) - put a circle here, and slider starts at 00:08:494, which makes the rhythm stronger
00:13:161 (1) - put a circle here, and slider starts at 00:13:828, ends at 00:14:494 (remove 2)
00:15:828 (4) - put a circle here, and slider starts at 00:16:494
00:27:828 (1) - (suggestion, you may not change this) put a circle here, and slider starts at 00:28:494, ends at 00:29:161 (remove 2)
00:45:161 (2) - use two circles but not a slider (as being a musician, I just "feel" this way would be better, but you may not change it)
01:47:828 (2) - use two circles but not a slider
02:10:494 (1) - slider ends at 02:11:161, and put a circle at 02:11:828
02:17:161 (2) - use two circles but not a slider
03:09:161 (1,1) - wow this is nice - >w<
03:21:161 (2) - use two circles but not a slider

After all, please set new combos for the 1st beat of every bar (or every 2 bars), or the 4th beat if you're using an "up-beat slider"

[Normal]

00:02:494 (1) - suggest a circle here, and slider starts at 00:03:161, ends at the same point

This diff. is almost perfect...

[Hard]

00:57:661 (4,1) - This is not a problem, but if you Ctrl+G the rhythm would be very great!
01:09:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe change the rhythm?
01:14:161 - maybe add a circle here
01:19:494 - maybe add a circle here
01:29:494 (5) - slider ends at 01:29:661, which makes the rhythm stronger!
01:53:828 (1) - remove this, which makes the rhythm stronger!
01:54:494 (7,8,9) - maybe 7,8 change to a slider, and 9 change to a circle (01:54:994 leave it blank)
01:57:828 (2,3,4,5,1) - suggestion:
01:59:828 (3) - slider ends at 01:59:994, then put a circle at 02:00:161
02:15:494 - maybe add a circle here
02:20:661 - maybe add a circle here
02:25:494 (5) - slider ends at 02:25:661, which makes the rhythm stronger!
02:28:828 (4) - use a circle instead
02:29:828 (6) - totally overlap, or move far away from 5
03:05:828 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - you may use some 1/2 or 1/4 reverse sliders
03:09:161 (1) - slider ends at 03:09:828 (remove 2), makes the rhythm stronger
03:14:161 (7) - totally overlap, or move far away from 6
03:29:494 (5) - slider ends at 03:29:661, which makes the rhythm stronger!
03:32:328 (5) - no reverse

Imo, your map is so great, almost perfect, and I love your song so much!
You should make an insane diff.!

Thank you!