1. Easy (1.82 stars, 229 notes)
2. Hard!mania - 4Key (2.65 stars, 1007 notes)
3. Hard (3.37 stars, 480 notes)
4. Nightmare (4.9 stars, 941 notes)
5. Normal (2.4 stars, 367 notes)

Chirikatori wrote:

Hey there Tadeshi-kun!
Here's my opinion about your map.

BPM: Alright!
Combo colours: Perhaps you should change the colours? Changed!

[Hard]

First of, I wouldn't recommend using Approach Rate 9 on a Hard Difficulty.. Use 7 or 8 instead. AR 8. Got it!

1. 00:12:989 (5) - This note sounds abit weird. Quite unneccessary. Remove or move it to 00:12:813 Removed!
2. 00:13:077 (0) - The melody starts here. Add a note here. Added!
3. 00:14:489 (1) - It sounds weird when it's ending on the blue tick. Shorten it by one tick. Shortened!
4. 00:29:275 (1,2) - Sounds really weird, you probably should take a look at this part. Forgot that was reversed. Fixed!
5. 00:33:359 (1,1) - A little bit weird with the overlapping, move it a little bit from the yellow slider. Moved!
6. 00:37:942 (3,4) - It sounds better if you add a repeat to the slider, and remove the note. Fixed!
7. 00:51:025 (2,3) - Tuck this in properly, to make the blanket combo better. Like this Fixed!
8. 01:42:525 (1) - Sounds like it starts from here, 01:42:609 , perhaps change it? Changed!
9. 01:57:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is quite hard. Give them some air, and some space between each other, than stacking them. It will make it an easier chain combo. I got the idea from someone's map, forgot who's though. I think it was neat, but it created a bit of a problem for me too. Added spaces!
10. 02:12:449 (5,1) - Stack them, or move it aside, since it's overlapping. Looks really weird. Moved aside!
11. 02:18:802 (2) - I would probably remove this one, since it doesn't sound familiar to the song. Changed the pattern starting from 02:16:596. Replaced the unfamiliar stuff into a repeating slider!
12. 02:22:949 (1,2) - looks really nice, but people would probably appreciate that you give them some space between each other. Cursors are constantly moving, when they're on a slider. Let the movement and the flow continue. A space for you.
13. 02:57:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - You probably already know what I'm trying to say here. Give them some space. A space for you.
14. 03:03:526 (2,3) - ^ Same. Have more space.
15. 03:05:026 (2) - This note is really confusing, since the slider is going back again. Refrain from making sliders such as these. Noticed and fixed it right after I uploaded the map. Forgot to update the map before you mod it. It should be fixed on the next update!
16. 03:13:276 (1,14) - Have you tried this stream out? It's really fast for a hard song. You should probably replace it with something, and shorten it by an inch or two. Thought I'd make something unexpected. Replaced it with sliders!
17. 03:34:765 (0) - I know that the melody ends here: 03:40:236 .. But the spinner is way too long. You should probably shorten it alot. Moved the end to 03:38:294!

Other than that, I really like how much effort you have put into it, to make it sound good to the melody. Some general problems, which I didn't state out, was to fix some blankets. Here!
I didn't really understand your combo's either, since sometimes there were a new combo when it wasn't.
Another suggestion is, that you check your distance snap. Try regulating the distance snap throughout the song.

This is all from me! Good luck with your beatmap!
Chirikatori

Hi_Hello wrote:

Hi!

[ -Fur- ] wrote:

00:07:083 (4) - Sounds late, move to 00:06:999 Moved!

00:18:724 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds much better if you move it to 00:18:636 Moved!

00:27:442 (4,5) - I don't know but this part I was having trouble putting something on that part.
I removed the 5th circle, and shorten the slider by one tick.

00:27:859 (1,2,3,1) - This part sounds late I recommend you to move it to 00:27:859 You mean the one at 00:27:942 (1,2,3,1) Yeah, I moved it.

00:37:775 (5,1,2,3) - This sounded weird, I don't know why-- maybe it's the slider but..try listening to it. Doesn't sound that weird to me.

01:05:692 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - In my opinion..this looks impossible.. It's a struggle, but it isn't impossible. But I moved them closer to each other.

03:07:692 (1,2,3) - Sounds early.. move 'em to 03:08:442 If you listen to it closely, there's a violin changing tones. It sounds pretty fine.