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moph

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-08-21T08:18:49+00:00

Thankyou!
Fixed the blankets, orz I'm so bad at blanketing.

Moo-Chan wrote:
From my modding queue~ o/
Blanket nazi is here

[Insane]
00:19:338 (2,3) - Could blanket better fixed
00:20:444 (6,7) - ^ fixed
00:21:549 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:22:023 (2,4) - ^ fixed
00:24:075 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:26:444 (9,1) - ^ fixed
Ahhh, the blankets
00:31:654 (1,3) - Blanket betterr fixed
00:32:759 (5,6) - ^ fixed
00:36:075 (6) - Maybe rotate this by 170 and ctrl - g it. Then move it to where ever you want. Then ofc, blanket these 00:36:075 (6,7) - if you make the change. My example: (my example doesn't have the blanket) cool, fixed
00:43:023 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing seems inconsistent here. Fix it up a bit? fixed
00:52:180 (5,6) - Blanket fixed
basically gonna rework the map from this point onwards, hopefully it ends up better
00:53:759 (4) - Make the tail of this stack under the tail of 00:52:970 (2)
00:56:601 (10) - Move to x:245 y:344
02:03:233 (2) - Move to x:233 y:85
02:21:707 (5,6) - Blanket
02:58:733 (5) - Move to x:320 y:191, then move 02:58:812 (6) - to x:303 y:157

This song <3 Good luck~

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2014-08-21T13:15:08+00:00

Hello there from my modding queue

[Extra]

00:23:759 (10,2) - Should stack more perfectly for better flow
00:24:391 (2,3,4) - Should line up for consistent flow, well you intend line up here 00:24:391 (2,3) - but you break the line up concept here 00:24:391 (2,4) - and it also the same combo
00:31:180 (9) - x=116 y=128 to stack 00:30:075 (4) - for better view
00:33:865 (12,2,4) - You can stack this perfectly you just need to make slider a little more curvy
00:35:759 (7,8,9,10) - This curve could be better by move (8) to x=102 y=132 and move (9) to x=168 y=192 you can ignore this overlap 00:34:970 (4,10) - if you made change
00:39:075 (10,1) - Should line up for more consistent flow
00:39:865 (3) - y+1 if you intend to line up 00:39:233 (1,3) -
00:40:180 (4) - x-1 if you intend to line up 00:39:549 (2,4) -
00:42:075 (2) - y+1 if you intend to line up 00:41:759 (1,2) -
00:42:391 (3,4) - It better to line up perfectly by make x equal
00:42:707 (4,1) - Line up by make y equal
00:45:233 (5,7) - Should symmetry with 00:44:601 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/b1H3N/37bd721063.jpg better view and flow
00:48:233 (8) - Should NC looks better without waypoint from 00:47:917 (7) - and it's a new pattern
00:53:601 (3) - x=144 y=212 to stack 00:52:654 (6) -
00:57:865 (5,1) - Should stack for better square from 00:58:970 (10,11,12,1) -
00:59:917 (2) - x=244 y=228 to stack 00:58:970 (10) -
01:02:444 (4,5,6,7,8) - Bad flow here you can line up 01:02:601 (5,6) - better it just looks bad to me ( copy-paste this 01:02:286 (3,4) - then adjust the placement (easy ) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1950050
01:04:180 (5) - Undermapped here well this is extra diff feel free to make it hard and it just passed by only 1 minute players should still have enough stamina for that
01:20:444 (2,5) - Should stack by move (5) to x=364 y=140
01:21:549 (8,1) - Can stack perfectly by make (1) a little bit more curvy
01:29:128 (1,6) - x=255 y=123 for perfect stack with 01:29:601 (4) -
01:41:759 (2,6) - Should stack more perfectly https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1950074
02:19:812 (2,2) - Should stack by move 02:21:075 (2) - to x=256 y=200
An okay Extra but it still need more improvement in notes placement , try using x,y indicator on the upper-right of editor screen to help adjust the notes

[Fxtra]

00:20:128 (5) - Move slider tail a little bit up so 00:19:496 (3,5) - will line up better
00:26:601 (1,2,3,4) - Should line up for straight flow
00:28:023 (8,10) - Should line up for better flow (x=456)
00:31:023 (5,6) - Should line up so it will consist like 00:30:549 (2,5) - or make symmetry pattern from 00:30:707 (3,4) -
00:40:180 (2) - Should curve better flow
00:40:654 (3) - NC to delete waypoint of 00:40:180 (2,3) - and also for new pattern
01:01:023 (7) - NC for new pattern and delete waypoint of 01:00:549 (6,7) -
01:03:865 (7) - NC for change in spacing
01:06:865 (10,2) - Should stack more perfectly http://puu.sh/b1IJe/74951f8231.jpg
01:16:654 (6) - NC it just looks better without waypoint of 01:16:496 (5,6) -
01:25:812 (2,2) - Should stack more perfectly http://puu.sh/b1IVD/c236061cfc.jpg
01:50:444 (3,4) - Better arrow shape http://puu.sh/b1J7M/2b03b9fcba.jpg
02:12:391 - to 02:18:707 - It just looks like you use too much the same rhythm over and over. You need to make one more attractive the rhythm for this section of the music so it not too bored
02:23:049 (6) - NC for change in spacing
02:43:654 (5,6,8) - Should line up

Good Extra diff. This diff should need a little bit more fix

[Hard]

00:19:496 (2,5) - Should stack
00:33:865 (7,3) - Should stack
00:47:286 (4,5,6) - Should place higher to avoid overlap
01:50:444 (2,2) - Should stack
02:39:391 (6,3) - Should stack
01:24:549 (1,2,3) - Should line up for more consistent flow
01:58:496 (5,6,7) - Should line up for more consistent flow

Not many problems here

[Normal]

00:27:075 (2,3) - Blanket
01:58:970 (3,4) - Should line up

Only 2 suggestions here

[Easy]

00:19:022 (1,1) - Should stack
02:00:075 (1,2) - Better arrow shape http://puu.sh/b1Lor/87a60ececf.jpg

Only 2 suggestions xD

Skip Insane, don't want many mods here
You can add one more set of HS I think only one set of HS maybe too low for this song

Extra need some fix to be considered good for me

Good luck

[ Joey ]

390 posts

Joined May 2013

[ Joey ] 2014-08-22T01:10:12+00:00

Wow this song is so good! I wish there was room for a GD

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-08-22T11:11:17+00:00

CelsiusLK

CelsiusLK wrote:
Hello there from my modding queue

[Extra]
00:23:759 (10,2) - Should stack more perfectly for better flow fixed
00:24:391 (2,3,4) - Should line up for consistent flow, well you intend line up here 00:24:391 (2,3) - but you break the line up concept here 00:24:391 (2,4) - and it also the same combo fixed
00:31:180 (9) - x=116 y=128 to stack 00:30:075 (4) - for better view fixed
00:33:865 (12,2,4) - You can stack this perfectly you just need to make slider a little more curvy fixed
00:35:759 (7,8,9,10) - This curve could be better by move (8) to x=102 y=132 and move (9) to x=168 y=192 you can ignore this overlap 00:34:970 (4,10) - if you made change fixed
00:39:075 (10,1) - Should line up for more consistent flow fixed
00:39:865 (3) - y+1 if you intend to line up 00:39:233 (1,3) - fixed
00:40:180 (4) - x-1 if you intend to line up 00:39:549 (2,4) - fixed
00:42:075 (2) - y+1 if you intend to line up 00:41:759 (1,2) - fixed
00:42:391 (3,4) - It better to line up perfectly by make x equal fixed
00:42:707 (4,1) - Line up by make y equal fixed
00:45:233 (5,7) - Should symmetry with 00:44:601 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/b1H3N/37bd721063.jpg better view and flow cool idea, fixed
00:48:233 (8) - Should NC looks better without waypoint from 00:47:917 (7) - and it's a new pattern fixed
00:53:601 (3) - x=144 y=212 to stack 00:52:654 (6) - fixed
00:57:865 (5,1) - Should stack for better square from 00:58:970 (10,11,12,1) - fixed
00:59:917 (2) - x=244 y=228 to stack 00:58:970 (10) - fixed
01:02:444 (4,5,6,7,8) - Bad flow here you can line up 01:02:601 (5,6) - better it just looks bad to me ( copy-paste this 01:02:286 (3,4) - then adjust the placement (easy ) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1950050 cool! fixed
01:04:180 (5) - Undermapped here well this is extra diff feel free to make it hard and it just passed by only 1 minute players should still have enough stamina for that seemed fine to me but eh, fixed
01:20:444 (2,5) - Should stack by move (5) to x=364 y=140 fixed
01:21:549 (8,1) - Can stack perfectly by make (1) a little bit more curvy fixed
01:29:128 (1,6) - x=255 y=123 for perfect stack with 01:29:601 (4) - fixed
01:41:759 (2,6) - Should stack more perfectly https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1950074 fixed
02:19:812 (2,2) - Should stack by move 02:21:075 (2) - to x=256 y=200 fixed
An okay Extra but it still need more improvement in notes placement , try using x,y indicator on the upper-right of editor screen to help adjust the notes
I'm so bad at stacking orz, I will spend more time on placement

[Hard]
00:19:496 (2,5) - Should stack fixed
00:33:865 (7,3) - Should stack fixed
00:47:286 (4,5,6) - Should place higher to avoid overlap fixed
01:50:444 (2,2) - Should stack fixed
02:39:391 (6,3) - Should stack fixed
01:24:549 (1,2,3) - Should line up for more consistent flow fixed
01:58:496 (5,6,7) - Should line up for more consistent flow
fixed
Not many problems here

[Normal]
00:27:075 (2,3) - Blanket fixed
01:58:970 (3,4) - Should line up
fixed
Only 2 suggestions here

[Easy]
00:19:022 (1,1) - Should stack fixed
02:00:075 (1,2) - Better arrow shape http://puu.sh/b1Lor/87a60ececf.jpg
fixed
Only 2 suggestions xD

Skip Insane, don't want many mods here
You can add one more set of HS I think only one set of HS maybe too low for this song
Extra need some fix to be considered good for me

Good luck

Thankyou

Helpful mod!

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-08-25T12:14:03+00:00

Fxtra update

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: FIRSTUTAU.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74045
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 44239,104880,150354
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:FIRST
TitleUnicode:FIRST
Artist:Cillia
ArtistUnicode:Cillia
Creator:moph
Version:Fxtra
Source:
Tags:vocaloid niki utau kasane teto fort
BeatmapID:467689
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"0.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,145534,149787
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,255,255,255

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24071,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
24150,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
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182913,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,5,0,0
186861,-66.6666666666667,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,0,255
Combo2 : 255,198,140
Combo3 : 255,159,113
Combo4 : 192,129,129
Combo5 : 167,84,84
Combo6 : 255,0,0

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484,224,174387,70,0,P|452:248|396:256,7,67.5000025749208,8|0|10|0|12|0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,336,175019,5,8,0:0:0:0:
367,319,175097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,306,175176,1,10,0:0:0:0:
289,297,175255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,293,175334,1,12,0:0:0:0:
208,292,175413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,296,175492,1,14,0:0:0:0:
128,304,175571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,317,175650,70,0,P|32:280|44:192,1,135.000005149842,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,176,175966,1,6,0:0:0:0:
44,92,176124,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,88,176282,2,0,P|268:136|272:200,1,135.000005149842,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,108,176597,2,2,L|440:80,1,270.000010299683,14|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,248,177071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,268,177229,2,0,P|152:272|96:244,1,135.000005149842,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,177545,2,0,P|476:208|472:284,1,135.000005149842,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,328,177861,1,6,0:0:0:0:
276,176,178019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,64,178176,5,10,0:0:0:0:
358,62,178254,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,60,178333,1,10,0:0:0:0:
290,58,178412,1,8,0:0:0:0:
257,56,178491,1,14,0:0:0:0:
152,180,178650,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,336,178808,1,10,0:0:0:0:
233,334,178886,1,8,0:0:0:0:
267,332,178965,1,10,0:0:0:0:
301,330,179044,1,8,0:0:0:0:
334,328,179123,1,14,0:0:0:0:
256,192,179203,12,0,184492,0:0:0:0:

im ignore some stacking cause its not really big matter

Ichigaki

1,767 posts

Joined February 2013

Ichigaki 2014-08-25T13:46:14+00:00

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map

Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪

[General]

I suggest you to change the artist name to 'kyaami' (http://vocaloid.wikia.com/wiki/FIRST) and move 'cillia' to tags
Add 'Cover' to tags

[Easy]

Each kiai start here, your pattern always start from red tick, how about make it as a new timing points? (but you must change it to other diff, so this's optional)
Try to reduce stacking in easy, and watch the spacing
Some part like 00:44:286 - 01:13:338 - are not following the main beat
01:16:970 (1,2,3,4) - better to make this same as 01:14:444 (1,2) - ( i mean just 5/2 slider )
01:24:549 (1,2,1,2) - same as above

[Normal]

Increase OD to 3
00:24:075 (1) - how to make this to 1/1 slider? it more better, and add 00:24:707 - new circle
00:26:601 (1,2) - avoid this on normal
00:59:917 (2) - avoid every kind of this in normal, but you can still use it, but better not to do it
01:12:075 (1,2,3,4,5) - remap this
01:24:549 (1,1) - i suggest you to avoid this slider in normal, i know it's okay, but avoid it

[Overall]
I highly suggest you to avoid following vocal sound to make it as a note... try to following the main beat, and if it's make better, then add follow the vocal sound

Good luck moph, this song's really nice

Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2014-08-25T17:16:22+00:00

Hello, from my queue. No kd please.
Here is my testplay on Extra diff, first play

SPOILER

Not bad at all for a new mapper, but i find this diff a bit weird, flow could be really improved. There is mainly a "linear" flow, and no "linked jumps", i mean you can arrange the structure to make something funny, and not adding notes with a consistent DS for a challenging diff.
And it is a bit overmapped for my taste try to avoid triplets which start on a white tick, they should start on a red tick, the 3rd note emphasizes the strong beat, and the strong beat is the white tick. Only start a triplet on a white tick if only the song justifies.
Let me give you a few suggestions.

00:19:338 (2) - move this note upward for the same movement as 00:21:549 (1,2,3) -, the movement will be better and smoother.
00:38:759 (8,9,10,1) - here you could improve the flow, you could improve the shape here for a better and smoother circular movement, just see
SPOILER
01:12:075 (1,2) - wrong rhythm here, the rhythm should be
SPOILER
01:49:496 (2,3,4) - this transition is odd, you don't expect an antijump between these circles 01:49:496 (2,3) - , it should be better if you make something consistent like this
SPOILER

I hope it has helped
Good Luck.

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-08-27T14:17:11+00:00

hue

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-09-01T06:42:12+00:00

Sorry for late reply .__. back working on this now

ichia7x

ichia7x wrote:
Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪

[General]
I suggest you to change the artist name to 'kyaami' (http://vocaloid.wikia.com/wiki/FIRST) and move 'cillia' to tags added kyaami to tags, don't want to change unless completely necessary[/color]
Add 'Cover' to tags
done

[Easy]
Each kiai start here, your pattern always start from red tick, how about make it as a new timing points? (but you must change it to other diff, so this's optional) I think its fine as is
Try to reduce stacking in easy, and watch the spacing I'll keep that in mind
Some part like 00:44:286 - 01:13:338 - are not following the main beat I think its fine
01:16:970 (1,2,3,4) - better to make this same as 01:14:444 (1,2) - ( i mean just 5/2 slider ) Leaving as is, might get too repititive
01:24:549 (1,2,1,2) - same as above
^

[Normal]
Increase OD to 3 Done
00:24:075 (1) - how to make this to 1/1 slider? it more better, and add 00:24:707 - new circle Done
00:26:601 (1,2) - avoid this on normal Keeping
00:59:917 (2) - avoid every kind of this in normal, but you can still use it, but better not to do it Keeping
01:12:075 (1,2,3,4,5) - remap this Done
01:24:549 (1,1) - i suggest you to avoid this slider in normal, i know it's okay, but avoid it
Keeping

[Overall]
I highly suggest you to avoid following vocal sound to make it as a note... try to following the main beat, and if it's make better, then add follow the vocal sound

Thanks

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-09-01T06:44:58+00:00

Cherry Blossom

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Hello, from my queue. No kd please.
Here is my testplay on Extra diff, first play
SPOILER

Not bad at all for a new mapper, but i find this diff a bit weird, flow could be really improved. There is mainly a "linear" flow, and no "linked jumps", i mean you can arrange the structure to make something funny, and not adding notes with a consistent DS for a challenging diff.
And it is a bit overmapped for my taste try to avoid triplets which start on a white tick, they should start on a red tick, the 3rd note emphasizes the strong beat, and the strong beat is the white tick. Only start a triplet on a white tick if only the song justifies.
Let me give you a few suggestions.
Made some changes to hopefully improve flow

00:19:338 (2) - move this note upward for the same movement as 00:21:549 (1,2,3) -, the movement will be better and smoother. fixed
00:38:759 (8,9,10,1) - here you could improve the flow, you could improve the shape here for a better and smoother circular movement, just see
fixed
SPOILER
01:12:075 (1,2) - wrong rhythm here, the rhythm should be
fixed
SPOILER
01:49:496 (2,3,4) - this transition is odd, you don't expect an antijump between these circles 01:49:496 (2,3) - , it should be better if you make something consistent like this
fixed
SPOILER

I hope it has helped
Good Luck.

Thanks

was really helpful

Magnolia

Magnolia 2014-09-03T15:25:05+00:00

i was about to yell at you for ruining the extra

Star Stream

2,037 posts

Joined June 2010

Star Stream 2014-09-04T11:55:27+00:00

From queue

[Easy]
01:18:233 (3,4) - (132,140)
02:12:549 (1) - i believe you could map this look better
02:25:338 (5) - NC, or make a slider from 02:24:707 - ~, it's a bit hard to read for noobs
02:35:286 (1) - too early after the spinner, extend the spinner to end 02:35:286 - , or map with some notes instead of the spinner
02:50:444 (1) - looks/plays too bad, you'd better find other ways

[Normal]
00:51:865 (1) - don't overlap the previous note
00:56:917 (1) - ^
01:04:970 ~ 01:13:970 - remap this part, also 01:06:707 (4) - it's pretty hard to read, try making a slider from 01:06:391 - ~ for this
too many things to fix, and it's too hard as a Normal diff. I want you to remap this diff

[Hard]
Will skip this diff,, similar reason with Normal

[Insane]
00:43:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - really plays badly, also the 1 is not even symmetry with 2
01:04:812 - ~ abusing triplets, do you really think they're fit with the song
01:23:286 (5) - NC
01:48:549 (1) - don't hide the arros with hitburst
02:58:496 (5) - NC
03:04:496 - mute(5%) with default soft sound

[Extra]
00:33:549 (10,11) - ctrl+g

I know you're new.. but to be cold, it still needs more works. Sorry to say that

Want 2 Buy Avon

264 posts

Joined February 2014

Want 2 Buy Avon 2014-09-08T04:55:36+00:00

From my modding queue, suuuuuper late (Got busy sorry ><)

[Insane]
00:22:496 (3,4) - You might be able to blanket this better
00:31:654 (1) - Move to x:248 y:152 To make it under the slider start
00:37:812 (4,5,6) - You could also blanket these
00:40:496 (3) - move this to x:256 y:230 To make it under the slider end
00:46:812 (1,2,3,4) - I'd like this more if the 2 was in the middle of the slider to make it symmetrical
00:52:023 (4,7) - These overlap slightly so I'd move the 4 to prevent it
00:53:917 (4) - Move this to x:170 y:179 (from now on assume all these are to make the stacks perfect ><)
01:02:601 (4) - move to x:170 y:94
01:07:417 (2,3) - move these to x:368 y:320 to make them under the slider end
01:09:549 (1) - move to x:481 y:201
01:16:338 (1) - move to x:70 y:221
01:30:865 (5,7) - I think this overlap is kinda messy looking
01:46:338 (6,7) - This blanket could be a tad better
01:48:549 (1) - move to x:356 y:284
01:54:075 (5) - move to x:255 y:295
01:54:075 (5) - Move this to x:255 y:295 so it's perfectly under the previous slider end
02:06:707 (3) - Move to x:123 y:285
02:52:654 (7) - Move to x:296 y:248

That's what I found, Sorry for the nazi positioning mod ><

hehe

1,971 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2014-09-18T13:11:21+00:00

modding becasue 2 kds and i love this song

[extra]
passive slider irks the fuck outta me but it plays well so gj

01:34:733 (6,1) - spacing
01:38:444 (1,2) - these two aren't stacked right, anyway they should be overlapped, not stacked. i thought it was a 1/2. inconsistency with 01:50:444 (3,4), even if its an extra.
01:48:865 (8) - ^ , there are more here and there, fix them if you want.
01:51:707 (9,10) - stack
01:54:391 (1,2) - jump because you can. this was awkward to play
01:59:286 (4,1) - don't like how these lines up
02:04:970 (1,2,3) - boring long slider and easy rhythm at the start of a chorus. 3/4 sliders + 1/4 circle after would fit much better and give opportunity for larger jumps.
02:05:917 (5,6,7,8,9) - show consistency, this is kidna awkward to play too. i felt that this played much better: http://puu.sh/bDYaM/ba291beb40.jpg
02:11:286 (4,5) - too close
02:24:944 (2) - 384,168 for a better curve
02:58:496 (2,3) - stack better

look through this map a few more times for little stack/blanket errors and i think it will be great.

will continue later because i am lazy

Squichu

1,013 posts

Joined November 2012

Squichu 2014-09-20T10:47:16+00:00

hi there!
mod from my queue
keep in mind I'm just making suggestions. feel free to disagree with everything I say. :3

General

background image should be 1366x768 px ()it's just 1 px off, but still
storyboard images should be smaller tho! I don't know the exact dimensions, maybe you could try asking in #modhelp. someone there knows the correct sizes, I believe

Easy
overall quite okay, there are some things that are too hard for E diff, tho

SV changes are not readable for beginners, so you shouldn't change it in E diff and only slightly in N diff. > remove SV changes
00:22:812 (2,1) - how about rotating them a bit to improve the flow?
like this
00:29:128 (1) - move a bit furher up so it doesn't overlap with 00:27:865 (2) -
00:37:970 (2) - rotate by -36° (selection centre)? it improves the flow by a bit
00:53:759 (1) - ctrl+g for better flow?
00:57:549 (2,3,4) - aah, I like it, but I think other people will complain about the back-forth stacking. it might be too hard to read, you should ask some ppl about this ~
01:12:075 (3,4) - this is too confusing. most times standard stacks are too confusing for beginners, but stacks at the end of slidertails are even harder. (appraoch circle overlaps with slider follow which is confusing + no distance = no option to read when the object should be hit)
you use this quite often, I don't think it's okay for Easy, tho.. I'd suggest to remove all end-of-slider-stacks to make the diff enjoyable for beginner players
another major thing - red / white tick changes like here 01:14:444 (1,2,1) - and 01:17:759 (2,3) - and 01:19:023 (4,1,2) - and so forth. they are really hard to read. and keeping in mind you changed SV here this is just too much for Easy diff. ;-; better try to avoid tick changes in easier diffs!
02:00:075 (1,2) - I like the looks, but because the end of (2) is not 100% visible it might be too hard to read.
02:11:286 (2,3,1) - rework the slidershapes, so (2) and (1) don't overlap!
02:31:654 (1) - I don't think this NC is needed here
02:32:917 (1,1) - shorten the spinner or remove it and map the part. the time after the spinner is too short for beginner players to react to the following object
02:49:180 (1,2,1) - similar to 02:11:286 (2,3,1)
02:52:970 (1,1) - same about spinner/reaction time as above
I miss the spinner at the end. you have one in Normal diff, why not in Easy? :c

Normal

same as in Easy - I don't think SV changes should be used here. they match the music, sure, but are (imo!) still too hard to read. it might be rankable, I'm not sure about that so check with some other people what they think about it, please!
your spacing should be more consistent I think. you vary between 1.0 1.2 and 1.4 which makes the diff unnecessarily hard to read. better stick to one DS in easier diffs! (I didn't notice in Easy, but if you varied there, too; better don't do that!)
also the jumps in the end aren't okay for Normal diff (I'll point them out further down)
00:22:180 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - I like these and similar pattern, but don't you think you can improve the flow here a lot if you place them a little different?
example
similar here - 00:27:075 (2,3,4,5,6,1) -
00:55:654 (4,5,6,1) - try to avoid overlaps like 4+1
02:04:812 (4,1) - I like the stack here, why don't you use it more often? for example here 02:08:601 (4,5) - and 02:11:128 (4,5) - and some more. that would add some more variety to the diff, I think
02:18:865 (4,5,1) - similar to what I said in Easy, this pattern might be to hard too read, because the end of (1) isn't visible at all
02:30:391 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - too many circle in a row for Normal diff, I think. try to merge some into sliders?
plus the jump from the last circle to 02:35:286 (1) - is a no-go. jumps are still way too hard for Normal diff
02:36:549 (1) - another jump that shouldn't be there ;-;
02:55:023 (6,7) - ^

Hard
fun to play diff! not much to say:

HP drain seems extremely low for Hard, I'd suggest to increase it to 6 at least.
to keep the spread balanced you should change it to 3.5 or 4 in Normal
00:35:917 (5,1) - overlap doesn't look good to me, change placing of (1)?
00:46:180 (8,10) - another tiiiny little overlap. looks better if they don't touch, don't you think?
00:49:338 (1) - move slider end to 361|149 so the track's perfectly covered by 00:48:707 (8) - . looks better to me
00:56:128 (7,1) - avoid overlap?
01:26:444 (8,1) - ^

sorry, can't mod Insane and above. ;-;
Good luck anyway!
*squee*

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-09-20T11:11:15+00:00

Thanks for the mods! Out of country atm so can't reply till I get back ;w;

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-10-11T06:30:50+00:00

Star Stream

thank you!

[Easy]
01:18:233 (3,4) - (132,140) remapped
02:12:549 (1) - i believe you could map this look better remapped
02:25:338 (5) - NC, or make a slider from 02:24:707 - ~, it's a bit hard to read for noobs remapped
02:35:286 (1) - too early after the spinner, extend the spinner to end 02:35:286 - , or map with some notes instead of the spinner fixed
02:50:444 (1) - looks/plays too bad, you'd better find other ways remapped

[Normal]
00:51:865 (1) - don't overlap the previous note
00:56:917 (1) - ^
01:04:970 ~ 01:13:970 - remap this part, also 01:06:707 (4) - it's pretty hard to read, try making a slider from 01:06:391 - ~ for this
too many things to fix, and it's too hard as a Normal diff. I want you to remap this diff
Going to remap normal

[Insane]
00:43:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - really plays badly, also the 1 is not even symmetry with 2 fixed
01:04:812 - ~ abusing triplets, do you really think they're fit with the song I think its fine
01:23:286 (5) - NC fixed
01:48:549 (1) - don't hide the arros with hitburst fixed
02:58:496 (5) - NC fixed
03:04:496 - mute(5%) with default soft sound fixed

[Extra]
00:33:549 (10,11) - ctrl+g fixed

Xellie

Thank you!
Fixed everything mentioned
[Insane]
00:22:496 (3,4) - You might be able to blanket this better
00:31:654 (1) - Move to x:248 y:152 To make it under the slider start
00:37:812 (4,5,6) - You could also blanket these
00:40:496 (3) - move this to x:256 y:230 To make it under the slider end
00:46:812 (1,2,3,4) - I'd like this more if the 2 was in the middle of the slider to make it symmetrical
00:52:023 (4,7) - These overlap slightly so I'd move the 4 to prevent it
00:53:917 (4) - Move this to x:170 y:179 (from now on assume all these are to make the stacks perfect ><)
01:02:601 (4) - move to x:170 y:94
01:07:417 (2,3) - move these to x:368 y:320 to make them under the slider end
01:09:549 (1) - move to x:481 y:201
01:16:338 (1) - move to x:70 y:221
01:30:865 (5,7) - I think this overlap is kinda messy looking
01:46:338 (6,7) - This blanket could be a tad better
01:48:549 (1) - move to x:356 y:284
01:54:075 (5) - move to x:255 y:295
01:54:075 (5) - Move this to x:255 y:295 so it's perfectly under the previous slider end
02:06:707 (3) - Move to x:123 y:285
02:52:654 (7) - Move to x:296 y:248

handsome

Thank you!
01:34:733 (6,1) - spacing fixed
01:38:444 (1,2) - these two aren't stacked right, anyway they should be overlapped, not stacked. i thought it was a 1/2. inconsistency with 01:50:444 (3,4), even if its an extra. spacing fixed
01:48:865 (8) - ^ , there are more here and there, fix them if you want. spacing fixed
01:51:707 (9,10) - stack spacing fixed
01:54:391 (1,2) - jump because you can. this was awkward to play spacing fixed
01:59:286 (4,1) - don't like how these lines up spacing remapped
02:04:970 (1,2,3) - boring long slider and easy rhythm at the start of a chorus. 3/4 sliders + 1/4 circle after would fit much better and give opportunity for larger jumps. spacing good idea, used the following example
02:05:917 (5,6,7,8,9) - show consistency, this is kidna awkward to play too. i felt that this played much better: http://puu.sh/bDYaM/ba291beb40.jpg
02:11:286 (4,5) - too close spacing remapped
02:24:944 (2) - 384,168 for a better curve spacing fixed
02:58:496 (2,3) - stack better spacing fixed

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-10-11T06:39:25+00:00

Really helpful mod thanks

Squirrel wrote:
General
background image should be 1366x768 px ()it's just 1 px off, but still
storyboard images should be smaller tho! I don't know the exact dimensions, maybe you could try asking in #modhelp. someone there knows the correct sizes, I believe
Thanks for looking at storyboard, I shall fix this soon

Easy
overall quite okay, there are some things that are too hard for E diff, tho
SV changes are not readable for beginners, so you shouldn't change it in E diff and only slightly in N diff. > remove SV changes removed
00:22:812 (2,1) - how about rotating them a bit to improve the flow?
like this
fixed
00:29:128 (1) - move a bit furher up so it doesn't overlap with 00:27:865 (2) - fixed
00:37:970 (2) - rotate by -36° (selection centre)? it improves the flow by a bit fixed
00:53:759 (1) - ctrl+g for better flow? fixed
00:57:549 (2,3,4) - aah, I like it, but I think other people will complain about the back-forth stacking. it might be too hard to read, you should ask some ppl about this ~ keeping it like this for now
01:12:075 (3,4) - this is too confusing. most times standard stacks are too confusing for beginners, but stacks at the end of slidertails are even harder. (appraoch circle overlaps with slider follow which is confusing + no distance = no option to read when the object should be hit)
you use this quite often, I don't think it's okay for Easy, tho.. I'd suggest to remove all end-of-slider-stacks to make the diff enjoyable for beginner players
another major thing - red / white tick changes like here 01:14:444 (1,2,1) - and 01:17:759 (2,3) - and 01:19:023 (4,1,2) - and so forth. they are really hard to read. and keeping in mind you changed SV here this is just too much for Easy diff. ;-; better try to avoid tick changes in easier diffs!
02:00:075 (1,2) - I like the looks, but because the end of (2) is not 100% visible it might be too hard to read.
02:11:286 (2,3,1) - rework the slidershapes, so (2) and (1) don't overlap!
02:31:654 (1) - I don't think this NC is needed here
02:32:917 (1,1) - shorten the spinner or remove it and map the part. the time after the spinner is too short for beginner players to react to the following object fixed
02:49:180 (1,2,1) - similar to 02:11:286 (2,3,1) fixed
02:52:970 (1,1) - same about spinner/reaction time as above fixed
I miss the spinner at the end. you have one in Normal diff, why not in Easy? :c
fixed
Remapped most of the kiai with the suggestions you made. Feels a bit simplistic now

Normal
Looking at this diff and there is too much to fix, I'm going to make a full remap of this (or find someone to do it for me ehe)
same as in Easy - I don't think SV changes should be used here. they match the music, sure, but are (imo!) still too hard to read. it might be rankable, I'm not sure about that so check with some other people what they think about it, please!
your spacing should be more consistent I think. you vary between 1.0 1.2 and 1.4 which makes the diff unnecessarily hard to read. better stick to one DS in easier diffs! (I didn't notice in Easy, but if you varied there, too; better don't do that!)
also the jumps in the end aren't okay for Normal diff (I'll point them out further down)
00:22:180 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - I like these and similar pattern, but don't you think you can improve the flow here a lot if you place them a little different?
example
similar here - 00:27:075 (2,3,4,5,6,1) -
00:55:654 (4,5,6,1) - try to avoid overlaps like 4+1
02:04:812 (4,1) - I like the stack here, why don't you use it more often? for example here 02:08:601 (4,5) - and 02:11:128 (4,5) - and some more. that would add some more variety to the diff, I think
02:18:865 (4,5,1) - similar to what I said in Easy, this pattern might be to hard too read, because the end of (1) isn't visible at all
02:30:391 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - too many circle in a row for Normal diff, I think. try to merge some into sliders?
plus the jump from the last circle to 02:35:286 (1) - is a no-go. jumps are still way too hard for Normal diff
02:36:549 (1) - another jump that shouldn't be there ;-;
02:55:023 (6,7) - ^
Hard
fun to play diff! not much to say:
HP drain seems extremely low for Hard, I'd suggest to increase it to 6 at least. fixed
to keep the spread balanced you should change it to 3.5 or 4 in Normal
00:35:917 (5,1) - overlap doesn't look good to me, change placing of (1)? fixed
00:46:180 (8,10) - another tiiiny little overlap. looks better if they don't touch, don't you think? fixed
00:49:338 (1) - move slider end to 361|149 so the track's perfectly covered by 00:48:707 (8) - . looks better to me fixed
00:56:128 (7,1) - avoid overlap? fixed
01:26:444 (8,1) - ^fixed

Fookiz

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Fookiz 2014-10-15T13:34:59+00:00

gogo qualified <3

moph

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moph 2014-10-16T21:18:03+00:00

how to even qq

Ciyus Miapah

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Ciyus Miapah 2014-10-18T13:01:28+00:00

i think i will help you for this one

Edit: im back for my long time sleep XDDDD

moph

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moph 2014-10-18T22:58:01+00:00

woo wb Fort

Sky Trias

Sky Trias 2014-10-19T04:41:40+00:00

Hi! From Endless Modding Queue

[Hard]

01:01:338 (5) - remove ?
01:01:496 - add note here , put in 01:01:654 (6) place
01:30:233 (3) - i'm not sure about this .. remove *i think*
02:37:180 (3) - Ctrl+G ?

[Insane]

00:26:128 (7,8) - Ctrl+G?
00:44:759 (3) - ^
00:45:075 (4) - ^
00:48:391 (7,8) - ^
02:06:233 (1) - ^

[Fxtra]

01:50:917 (4) - short this slider , and put 01:51:075 . then 01:50:917 add note
SPOILER

[Extra]
Perfect !
[]

OK .. that's all ..
GoodLuck!

Ciyus Miapah

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Ciyus Miapah 2014-10-19T07:04:06+00:00

Sky Trias wrote:
[Fxtra]
01:50:917 (4) - short this slider , and put 01:51:075 . then 01:50:917 add note
SPOILER
im just follow instrument not vocal in there

update

osu file format v13

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moph

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Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-10-19T07:09:09+00:00

Sky Trias wrote:
Hi! From Endless Modding Queue

[Hard]
01:01:338 (5) - remove ? removed
01:01:496 - add note here , put in 01:01:654 (6) place added note to 01:01:496 (5)
01:30:233 (3) - i'm not sure about this .. remove *i think*i think so too, removed
02:37:180 (3) - Ctrl+G ? I agree
[Insane]
00:26:128 (7,8) - Ctrl+G? fixed
00:44:759 (3) - ^ fixed
00:45:075 (4) - ^ fixed
00:48:391 (7,8) - ^ fixed
02:06:233 (1) - ^ keeping as is

Thankyou

Zetera

Medal Hunter

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Joined November 2010

Zetera 2014-10-19T07:51:28+00:00

Shooting a star because of the song.

Good Luck!

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-10-19T08:28:02+00:00

thankyou! ^^

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-10-20T09:46:26+00:00

for all people who look this thread: senpai notice this map pls

yurunneram

682 posts

Joined January 2012

yurunneram 2014-10-20T10:49:04+00:00

whee

EASY

00:46:812 (1,2) - They might click 2 before 1. Distance 2 a bit from the slider end.

01:07:023 (1) - Ctrl + G this and then move 01:08:286 (2) - to the other side so the flow is nicer before and after

01:57:549 (1,2,3,1) - Just maybe make a square with these

02:32:917 (3) - The tail should be lower for a neater blanket

02:42:865 (1) - I think Ctrl + G would have better flow (i ain't completely sure on this tho)

02:47:917 (1,2) - Real bad flow

NORMAL

01:00:707 (3) - Move more left. Flow would be better

01:12:075 (1) - I think would look more symmetrical with the last node at x324 y344

01:34:180 (4) - tail down a bit. look at this

Omg my screen shot url

Anyways basically use the approach circle to neaten your blanket

gosh that song was irritating

Sorry if the mod wasn't much

Bai ^^)/

Exote

416 posts

Joined April 2013

Exote 2014-10-20T19:07:12+00:00

I will give you some suggestions .

[Extra]

00:54:865 (3,4) - You can improve the blanket by spacing them a bit?
00:58:023 (6,7) - ^
01:12:075 (1,2) - ^
01:18:233 (5,6) - ^
01:29:917 (5,6) - This blanket can be improved as well.
01:38:444 (1,2) - This one is fine, but spacing it just a lil bit.
01:43:496 (3,4) - Fix blanket~
01:48:549 (6,7) - A bit spacing?
01:50:444 (4,5) - ^
01:57:549 (1,2) - ^
02:02:601 (1,2) - ^
02:12:233 (9,2) - I think it would look cooler if these were spaced a bit more.

This is all I can give you as an advice xD Improving those blankets would make the Extra look nicer you know, everything else is perfectly fine.
Anyway hoping to see the map ranked asap

moph

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Topic Starter

moph 2014-10-21T07:11:10+00:00

yurunneram

yurunneram wrote:
whee

EASY

00:46:812 (1,2) - They might click 2 before 1. Distance 2 a bit from the slider end. fixed

01:07:023 (1) - Ctrl + G this and then move 01:08:286 (2) - to the other side so the flow is nicer before and after fixed

01:57:549 (1,2,3,1) - Just maybe make a square with these fixed

02:32:917 (3) - The tail should be lower for a neater blanket fixed

02:42:865 (1) - I think Ctrl + G would have better flow (i ain't completely sure on this tho) fixed

02:47:917 (1,2) - Real bad flow fixed

NORMAL

01:00:707 (3) - Move more left. Flow would be better fixed

01:12:075 (1) - I think would look more symmetrical with the last node at x324 y344 fixed

01:34:180 (4) - tail down a bit. look at thisfixed

Omg my screen shot url

Anyways basically use the approach circle to neaten your blanket

gosh that song was irritating

Sorry if the mod wasn't much

Bai ^^)/

Thankyou

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-10-21T07:20:34+00:00

Exote

Exote wrote:
I will give you some suggestions .

[Extra]

Fixed blanketing issues, fixed some spacing issues but I think the spacing in some of them are fine

00:54:865 (3,4) - You can improve the blanket by spacing them a bit?
00:58:023 (6,7) - ^
01:12:075 (1,2) - ^
01:18:233 (5,6) - ^
01:29:917 (5,6) - This blanket can be improved as well.
01:38:444 (1,2) - This one is fine, but spacing it just a lil bit.
01:43:496 (3,4) - Fix blanket~
01:48:549 (6,7) - A bit spacing?
01:50:444 (4,5) - ^
01:57:549 (1,2) - ^
02:02:601 (1,2) - ^
02:12:233 (9,2) - I think it would look cooler if these were spaced a bit more.

This is all I can give you as an advice xD Improving those blankets would make the Extra look nicer you know, everything else is perfectly fine.
Anyway hoping to see the map ranked asap

Thankyou

[ C r a c k ]

172 posts

Joined November 2013

[ C r a c k ] 2014-10-29T16:15:23+00:00

Take this star ( 　ﾉ・ω・)ノ

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-10-30T06:33:24+00:00

Thankyou! \:D/

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-11-18T09:04:42+00:00

find mod for this map pls

seems this map so popular

edit: dont let this map graveyarded. update ASAP

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-11-19T01:35:17+00:00

Working on a big update atm, will be done soon.
Will start finding mods again once uni is over \:D/

Lerq

Lerq 2014-11-25T09:26:07+00:00

Have my star \o/

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-11-25T09:39:00+00:00

thankyou! ^^

Kawatta

26 posts

Joined December 2013

Kawatta 2014-11-25T18:18:56+00:00

Fuck i love this map, i really hope it gets ranked soon, keep making beatmaps \ o /

Artavia

454 posts

Joined May 2011

Artavia 2014-11-26T12:13:08+00:00

From My Modding Queue. ~~Sorry for my late.~~

General

Clap sound are properly utilized. (especially, not kiai time in easy and normal diff)

Easy

Short Hitsound Modding

00:44:286 (1) - Add Whistle at head part and Add clap+whistle at tail part.
00:45:549 (2) - Add Clap at tail part.
00:47:444 (2) - Add Clap
00:48:707 (1) - Add Finish at tail part
00:50:601 (3) - Add Clap at tail part.
00:52:496 (2) - Add Clap
00:53:759 (1) - Add Whistle and Finish at tail part (return part)
00:55:654 (2) - Add Clap at tail part.
00:57:549 (2) - Add Clap
00:58:812 (4) - Add Whistle and Finish at tail part
01:01:338 (3) - Add Clap
01:01:970 (1) - Add Clap at tail part.
01:03:233 (2) - ^
01:04:496 (1) - Add Finish at head part
01:05:759 (2) - Add Whistle
01:06:391 (3) - Add Finish
01:07:023 (1) - Add Clap at tail part.
01:08:917 (3) - Add Clap and Finish
01:09:549 (1) - Add Clap at tail part.
01:10:812 (2) - Add Clap and Finish at tail part
01:13:338 (4) - Add Clap Finish and Whistle
01:14:444 (1,2) - Add Clap at tail part.
01:19:496 (1) - Add Finish at head part. also Add Clap at tail part.
01:20:759 (2) - Add Clap at tail part.
01:22:023 (1) - Add Finish at head part.
01:24:549 (1,2) - Add Whistle (only end timing)
01:29:601 (1) - Add Finish at head part. also Add Clap at tail part.
01:30:865 (2) - Add Whistle at head part. also Add Clap at tail part.

00:32:917 (2) - Try*this? I think this flow is better.
00:37:970 (2) - (Click to link!) *This is the natural flow than now.
01:12:075 (3) - Ctrl+H and Move to x256 y184? It is better flow.
02:01:970 (2) - I think this shape is bad blanket shape. I suggest just move to x256 y260
02:34:812 (5,1) - a little fix about distance.
02:59:286 (1) - These are too near for an easy diff.

Normal

00:58:180 (3) - Ctrl+J here? I think it is better flow and copy pattern.
01:19:338 (4,1) - What are you think about stack this?
01:28:812 (3,4) - Try *this?
02:01:970 (4) - Try *this?
02:09:549 (3,4) - bad blanket
02:11:128 (2,3) - stack?
02:19:180 (3,4) - ^

Hard

00:33:233 (7,8,9) - Try *this?
00:35:444 (4,5) - blanket or stack?
00:44:286 (1) - I think it is better flow than now (click here)
01:00:549 (4) - I suggest *this shape.
01:08:601 (5,6,7) - Try *this?
01:26:759 (8) - ^ (click here)
01:27:075 (1,2) - blanket?
01:34:338 (9) - Removal one reverse.
02:38:759 (4) - I think this slider timing is awkward. since 02:39:233 - It did not exist note. so add circle please.
02:56:444 (3,4) - Try *this?

Insane

00:24:549 (2) - Try *this?
00:55:970 (8) - NC here
00:58:812 (9) - ^
01:02:917 (6) - Try *this?
01:15:233 (5,6) - This jump is better, imo.
02:03:865 (10) - NC here
02:36:549 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try *this jump?
02:49:970 (5,7) - I think you should use the curve slider.

Good luck. I think this is very charming song.

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-11-28T02:18:09+00:00

Artavia

Artavia wrote:
From My Modding Queue. ~~Sorry for my late.~~

General
Clap sound are properly utilized. (especially, not kiai time in easy and normal diff)

Easy
Hitsounding applied, thanks a lot
00:32:917 (2) - Try*this? I think this flow is better. fixed
00:37:970 (2) - (Click to link!) *This is the natural flow than now. you linked the same picture?
01:12:075 (3) - Ctrl+H and Move to x256 y184? It is better flow. I think its ok as is
02:01:970 (2) - I think this shape is bad blanket shape. I suggest just move to x256 y260 fixed
02:34:812 (5,1) - a little fix about distance. fixed
02:59:286 (1) - These are too near for an easy diff. fixed

Normal
00:58:180 (3) - Ctrl+J here? I think it is better flow and copy pattern. fixed
01:19:338 (4,1) - What are you think about stack this? I think its ok
01:28:812 (3,4) - Try *this? [fixed
02:01:970 (4) - Try *this? fixed
02:09:549 (3,4) - bad blanket fixed
02:11:128 (2,3) - stack? fixed
02:19:180 (3,4) - ^ fixed

Hard
00:33:233 (7,8,9) - Try *this? fixed
00:35:444 (4,5) - blanket or stack? stacked
00:44:286 (1) - I think it is better flow than now (click here) fixed
01:00:549 (4) - I suggest *this shape. fixed
01:08:601 (5,6,7) - Try *this? fixed
01:26:759 (8) - ^ (click here) fixed
01:27:075 (1,2) - blanket? fixed
01:34:338 (9) - Removal one reverse. fixed
02:38:759 (4) - I think this slider timing is awkward. since 02:39:233 - It did not exist note. so add circle please. fixed
02:56:444 (3,4) - Try *this? fixed

Insane
00:24:549 (2) - Try *this fixed?
00:55:970 (8) - NC here fixed
00:58:812 (9) - ^ fixed
01:02:917 (6) - Try *this? fixed
01:15:233 (5,6) - This jump is better, imo. fixed
02:03:865 (10) - NC here fixed
02:36:549 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try *this jump? fixed
02:49:970 (5,7) - I think you should use the curve slider. I think this is fine

Good luck. I think this is very charming song.

'

Thankyou! Great mod ^^

Reiguard

4 posts

Joined August 2013

Reiguard 2014-11-29T09:24:46+00:00

Love this map! Please don't change it

-M I D O-

2 posts

Joined January 2014

-M I D O- 2014-11-30T08:00:11+00:00

This is honestly the best map I think I've ever played. Can't believe it's still unranked

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2014-12-03T01:49:43+00:00

Hello and here as requested from my modding queue. Just wanted to say that beatmap was like sex. It was smooth if you want proof of how well I did you don't even want to know. Only person in the world that can do it. I'm so good at this game

Sex

[Easy]

00:22:812 (2) - Could this be centered in the previous slider more for blanket feeling, or was this your intention?
Seriously nothing wrong with easy. The clap was godtier, so mistakes on hitsound

[Normal]

00:28:812 (4,1) - DS issues here, so snap it back in place
00:36:707 (1) - Same, but this time move it back a little more
01:01:338 (4,5) - Can be spaced more
01:12:075 (1) - This was my fix but it looks better like this than when the red dot was located somewhere else; It's a lot more even (Fixed) http://puu.sh/deNPv/ef5ddbaf5e.jpg
01:19:496 (1) - Try making this exactly diagonal with the previous note (Fixed) http://puu.sh/deNTg/e18d620e0d.jpg
01:21:549 (4) - Moving this back to the red tick wouldn't hurt that bad either. It follows the same pattern as the other 2 but also fills the gap where she sings.
01:25:812 (3) - Idk but this coordinate x:192 y:256 makes it look more parallel and symmetrical to each other, or maybe that's just me

[Hard]

00:29:601 (2) - Move slider end 1 tick up so it has more spacing and it looks cleaner
00:37:180 (2,3,4) - If you flatten slider out more, and blanket it you will get good results

http://puu.sh/deOl0/07fa12b272.jpg
01:31:496 (6) - Move slider end up 1 tick so the blanket looks cleaner

[Insane]

This insane was absolutely amazing tbh

00:32:128 (3) - Move to the right 1 tick so better blanket
Yea I can't find anything of fault, but as I get better I will

Great song and beatmap. Totally waiting for this to be ranked later in the future. Please rate me on how my mod was by clicking on my signature for a free one way ticket there.

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-12-04T04:38:15+00:00

Kocari wrote:
Hello and here as requested from my modding queue. Just wanted to say that beatmap was like sex. It was smooth if you want proof of how well I did you don't even want to know. Only person in the world that can do it. I'm so good at this game
Sex

So pro y u no #1 :c

[Easy]

00:22:812 (2) - Could this be centered in the previous slider more for blanket feeling, or was this your intention?
Seriously nothing wrong with easy. The clap was godtier, so mistakes on hitsound
hmm I think I'll just leave this as is for now

[Normal]

00:28:812 (4,1) - DS issues here, so snap it back in place fixed
00:36:707 (1) - Same, but this time move it back a little more fixed
01:01:338 (4,5) - Can be spaced more fixed
01:12:075 (1) - This was my fix but it looks better like this than when the red dot was located somewhere else; It's a lot more even (Fixed) http://puu.sh/deNPv/ef5ddbaf5e.jpg fixed
01:19:496 (1) - Try making this exactly diagonal with the previous note (Fixed) http://puu.sh/deNTg/e18d620e0d.jpg not sure what you mean here
01:21:549 (4) - Moving this back to the red tick wouldn't hurt that bad either. It follows the same pattern as the other 2 but also fills the gap where she sings. Thats how I mapped it before but here I want to keep to the rhythm of the drums, also I don't want a long slider train :L
01:25:812 (3) - Idk but this coordinate x:192 y:256 makes it look more parallel and symmetrical to each other, or maybe that's just me copied and pasted this so should be even

[Hard]

00:29:601 (2) - Move slider end 1 tick up so it has more spacing and it looks cleaner fixed
00:37:180 (2,3,4) - If you flatten slider out more, and blanket it you will get good results http://puu.sh/deOl0/07fa12b272.jpg fixed
01:31:496 (6) - Move slider end up 1 tick so the blanket looks cleaner fixed

[Insane]

This insane was absolutely amazing tbh

00:32:128 (3) - Move to the right 1 tick so better blanket fixed
Yea I can't find anything of fault, but as I get better I will

Great song and beatmap. Totally waiting for this to be ranked later in the future. Please rate me on how my mod was by clicking on my signature for a free one way ticket there.

Thankyou! Glad you like the map ^^

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2014-12-04T13:37:38+00:00

Hi. I modded this on my own accord. Not much fancies I will apply in this mod.

wow this song. oo

Bold - Highly recommended | Blue - Not really important.

[Extra]
There are some blanket fixes that need to be made. Not gonna mention them here.
00:24:391 (2,3,4,5) - Hmm, for some reason I can't help but think that this flows kinda weird. Perhaps moving to x:168 y:460 will work.
00:40:180 (4,5) - Why the sudden DS drop? orz.
00:46:338 (11) - Hmm. Just stack this on (9) because it kinda plays better IMO. I think it's better than having a random stop somewhere when the flow of the map is continuous.
01:42:707 (7) - lol Try x:500 y:72 on this one.

00:51:549 (4,1,2,3) - Kinda weird flow here. Can be fixed by rotating (1,2,3), selection centre 6deg. Just fix any blanket problems that might appear hahah.
01:26:601 (6) - I think this plays better if it's at y:248.
01:39:865 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm. I think you can improve this part in terms of placement. Make them triangles maybe? Or just make the curve smoother. Your call.
01:52:180 (1) - Move this one to y:116
02:02:838 (2) - I suggest changing this to something like this: (image) since it offers a better flow from (1) to (2). (at least it looks like it to me)

image

02:03:865 (4) - I recommend applying CTRL+G on this because the distance from (3) and (4) is quite close given that they are 316ms away from each other (some notes that are only 158ms away from each other have larger distances than this one

). The same situation goes for 01:13:338 (3,4,5,6).
02:20:917 (4,5,6,1) - Hmm. This part looks really weird as the distance between (4-6) seems consistent but suddenly drops on (6) to (1). Try moving 02:21:391 (1) - on x:184 y:88. Creates a better flow.
02:34:812 (1) - Use your custom finish hitsound here. Make it audible! (which means you need to move the inherited point)
02:55:654 (9) - Pretty sure kiai should've ended right here.
02:57:549 (5,6) - I recommend CTRL+G on this one. It adds a smoother flow between (5-6-7). If you want a more -stop-and-go flow then ignore this suggestion haha.
02:58:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - Okay so, since there's no vocals here anymore, I don't know why you started sliders on a red tick. This one plays better and sounds better. Make sure you put a finish on 02:59:128 (5) - if you follow this one.

Woot. Great map.

[Fxtra]
01:37:338 (1) - 01:39:865 (1) - 01:52:496 (2) - These sliders are covering a beat. I think ticks aren't enough to replace those. Either make these sliders a (1/2 slider + hitcircle | 01:49:970 (1,2) -makes a good example of this) combo or 3 hitcircles. Your call.
01:39:391 (8) - I don't see any reason as to why this should not be turned into something like this HUEHUE.

01:50:917 (4) - Looks kinda weird (yes it looks weird in an obvious way).
02:23:759 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try improving the shape/curve on this part.
02:34:812 (1) - I think a finish would be better here.
02:39:075 (2,3) - Hmm. I think it flows better if you CTRL+G these
02:55:654 (9) - Pretty sure kiai should've ended right here. looooool

Clean. I like the style

[Insane]
needs similar hitsounds to the extra diffs.

00:31:338 (8,9,1) - Hmm. This flows kinda weird. 00:31:496 (9) - Stacking this on (1) seems to help.
00:54:075 (5) - Move to x:64 y:304 and then move 00:54:391 (1) - to x:112 y:96
00:59:444 (3,4) - I don't see any reason why this needs a jump though because the music stays kinda calm in this part. No space for jumps I guess.
01:23:601 (3,4,5) - Awkward spacing here. Please fix.
01:39:865 - You could map this part.
02:52:654 (7) - Something like this could work. Ahahaha.

image

02:55:654 (9) - eyyyyyyyy extra diff check similar suggestion

Nice diff.

That's it for now. Will mod the 3 remaining diffs by tomorrow or Saturday.
^^ ~~(I'll just make a new post)~~

EDIT: Continuation of the mod.

[Hard]
01:59:759 (1,2,3) - Looks pretty weird if you ask me. Try moving to x:100 y:220.
02:34:812 (4) - You can try adding a finish here.
02:37:812 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since it seems like you're following the vocals here, this sounds better.

02:58:180 (1,2,3) - It's better to follow the bass here or something.

02:55:654 (9) - Yeeeeep. Check Extra diff suggestion.

[Normal]
00:55:023 (2,3) - Can improve the blanket here.
01:23:286 (3) - 01:27:075 (1) - 01:28:338 - 01:32:128 (1) - 02:08:759 - 02:10:023 (4) - 02:12:549 (1) - 02:13:812 (3) - 02:14:444 - 02:17:601 (1) - 02:17:601 (1) - 02:18:865 - 02:22:654 (1) - 02:38:444 - 02:39:075 - 02:41:601 - 02:42:865 (1) - 02:44:128 (3) - 02:47:917 (1) - 02:49:180 - 02:52:970
Add a finish on these since there are faint "clashing sounds/finish" you can hear.
02:34:812 (4) - An optional finish addition here please.
02:58:180 (4) - This repeat follows nothing. I suggest extending this slider by 1/4 and removing (5).
02:55:654 (9) - Mmmm. Same suggestion from the Extra.

[Easy]
I found nothing here. Except I just think some of the 5/4 sliders sound weird. lol.

Mod complete.

Great song and map. Good luck!

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-12-05T13:34:08+00:00

Mira-san wrote:
[Fxtra]
01:37:338 (1) - 01:39:865 (1) - 01:52:496 (2) - These sliders are covering a beat. I think ticks aren't enough to replace those. Either make these sliders a (1/2 slider + hitcircle | 01:49:970 (1,2) -makes a good example of this) combo or 3 hitcircles. Your call.
01:39:391 (8) - I don't see any reason as to why this should not be turned into something like this HUEHUE.

01:50:917 (4) - Looks kinda weird (yes it looks weird in an obvious way).
02:23:759 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try improving the shape/curve on this part.
02:34:812 (1) - I think a finish would be better here.
02:39:075 (2,3) - Hmm. I think it flows better if you CTRL+G these
02:55:654 (9) - Pretty sure kiai should've ended right here. looooool

Clean. I like the style

Mod complete. Great song and map. Good luck!

almost fixed all except the triplet and Ctrl+g thing. thanks mira-chan

to Moph: my diff changed by Fort's Extra, im just want to be normal guy

Jumpy

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74049
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

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TitleUnicode:FIRST
Artist:cillia
ArtistUnicode:cillia
Creator:moph
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CircleSize:4
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360,96,154101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,132,154180,37,6,0:0:0:0:
336,172,154259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,224,154338,1,4,0:0:0:0:
356,248,154417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,232,154496,1,4,0:0:0:0:
440,228,154575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,260,154654,1,4,0:0:0:0:
476,304,154733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,336,154812,53,2,0:0:0:0:
280,304,155286,2,2,P|212:264|40:328,1,270.000010299683,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,164,155759,1,6,0:0:0:0:
224,156,155917,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,156,155996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,156,156075,1,10,0:0:0:0:
108,44,156233,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,360,156391,5,4,0:0:0:0:
228,40,156549,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,148,156707,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,228,156865,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,52,157023,1,4,0:0:0:0:
348,288,157180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,288,157259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,288,157338,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,160,157496,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,76,157654,69,4,0:0:0:0:
448,272,157812,1,2,0:0:0:0:
492,32,157970,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,228,158128,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,228,158207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,228,158286,1,4,0:0:0:0:
132,100,158444,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,156,158601,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,192,158759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,48,158917,5,4,0:0:0:0:
232,316,159075,2,10,P|116:316|0:176,1,270.000010299683
304,72,159549,2,0,P|360:116|364:188,1,135.000005149842,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,336,159865,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,136,160023,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,240,160180,1,4,0:0:0:0:
156,216,160338,2,2,P|100:152|224:52,1,270.000010299683
228,292,160812,70,0,P|156:316|88:296,1,135.000005149842,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,160,161128,2,0,P|408:236|400:284,1,135.000005149842,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,136,161444,1,4,0:0:0:0:
336,64,161601,2,10,L|328:344,1,270.000010299683
328,333,161996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,333,162075,5,4,0:0:0:0:
168,352,162233,1,10,0:0:0:0:
116,200,162391,1,10,0:0:0:0:
180,52,162549,2,0,P|256:76|204:220,1,270.000010299683,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,219,162944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,219,163023,69,8,0:0:0:0:
80,120,163180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,284,163338,1,4,0:0:0:0:
400,228,163496,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,300,163654,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,152,163812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,308,163970,1,4,0:0:0:0:
380,68,164128,1,2,0:0:0:0:
488,188,164286,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,64,164444,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,64,164522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,64,164601,1,4,0:0:0:0:
424,140,164759,1,10,0:0:0:0:
184,112,164917,1,10,0:0:0:0:
296,232,165075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,232,165154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,232,165233,1,4,0:0:0:0:
156,32,165391,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,192,165549,69,0,0:0:0:0:
280,148,165707,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,248,165865,1,4,0:0:0:0:
264,324,166023,1,10,0:0:0:0:
424,140,166180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
454,153,166258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
479,176,166337,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,205,166416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,238,166495,1,6,0:0:0:0:
372,336,166654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,244,166812,5,0,0:0:0:0:
228,84,166970,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,56,167128,1,4,0:0:0:0:
408,216,167286,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,164,167444,1,10,0:0:0:0:
416,136,167601,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,136,167759,69,6,0:0:0:0:
320,216,167917,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,216,167996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,216,168075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,156,168233,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,104,168391,1,4,0:0:0:0:
148,276,168549,2,0,L|168:-16,1,270.000010299683,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,6,168944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,6,169023,1,6,0:0:0:0:
60,312,169180,2,10,P|112:356|240:236,1,270.000010299683,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,72,169654,2,0,P|52:144|64:208,1,135.000005149842,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,308,169970,5,10,0:0:0:0:
272,176,170128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,176,170207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,176,170286,1,4,0:0:0:0:
144,276,170444,2,10,P|220:324|412:284,1,270.000010299683
468,156,170917,2,10,P|348:80|160:84,1,270.000010299683,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,172,171391,1,10,0:0:0:0:
232,260,171549,69,4,0:0:0:0:
164,112,171707,2,10,P|40:104|32:240,1,270.000010299683
344,216,172180,2,8,L|496:204,1,135.000005149842,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,132,172496,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,320,172654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,40,172812,1,6,0:0:0:0:
416,172,172970,2,10,P|424:248|260:240,1,270.000010299683
176,132,173444,2,0,L|148:288,1,135.000005149842,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,124,173759,5,8,0:0:0:0:
220,52,173917,1,10,0:0:0:0:
296,196,174075,1,12,0:0:0:0:
412,80,174233,1,10,0:0:0:0:
484,224,174391,70,0,P|452:248|396:256,7,67.5000025749208,8|0|10|0|12|0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,336,175023,5,8,0:0:0:0:
367,319,175101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,306,175180,1,10,0:0:0:0:
289,297,175259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,293,175338,1,12,0:0:0:0:
208,292,175417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,296,175496,1,14,0:0:0:0:
128,304,175575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,317,175654,70,0,P|32:280|44:192,1,135.000005149842,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,176,175970,1,6,0:0:0:0:
44,92,176128,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,88,176286,2,0,P|268:136|272:200,1,135.000005149842,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,108,176601,2,2,L|440:80,1,270.000010299683,14|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,248,177075,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,268,177233,2,0,P|152:272|96:244,1,135.000005149842,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,177549,2,0,P|476:208|472:284,1,135.000005149842,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,328,177865,1,6,0:0:0:0:
276,176,178023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,64,178180,5,10,0:0:0:0:
358,62,178258,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,60,178337,1,10,0:0:0:0:
290,58,178416,1,8,0:0:0:0:
257,56,178495,1,14,0:0:0:0:
152,180,178654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,336,178812,1,10,0:0:0:0:
233,334,178890,1,8,0:0:0:0:
267,332,178969,1,10,0:0:0:0:
301,330,179048,1,8,0:0:0:0:
334,328,179127,1,14,0:0:0:0:
256,192,179207,12,0,184496,0:0:0:0:

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-12-06T09:41:12+00:00

Mira-san wrote:
Hi. I modded this on my own accord. Not much fancies I will apply in this mod.

wow this song. oo

Bold - Highly recommended | Blue - Not really important.

[Extra]
There are some blanket fixes that need to be made. Not gonna mention them here. orz keeping an eye out for them
00:24:391 (2,3,4,5) - Hmm, for some reason I can't help but think that this flows kinda weird. Perhaps moving to x:168 y:460 will work. fixed
00:40:180 (4,5) - Why the sudden DS drop? orz. fixed
00:46:338 (11) - Hmm. Just stack this on (9) because it kinda plays better IMO. I think it's better than having a random stop somewhere when the flow of the map is continuous. gonna map this section again
01:42:707 (7) - lol Try x:500 y:72 on this one. fixed
00:51:549 (4,1,2,3) - Kinda weird flow here. Can be fixed by rotating (1,2,3), selection centre 6deg. Just fix any blanket problems that might appear hahah. fixed
01:26:601 (6) - I think this plays better if it's at y:248. fixed
01:39:865 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm. I think you can improve this part in terms of placement. Make them triangles maybe? Or just make the curve smoother. Your call. mapping this section again
01:52:180 (1) - Move this one to y:116 fixed
02:02:838 (2) - I suggest changing this to something like this: (image) since it offers a better flow from (1) to (2). (at least it looks like it to me) good idea, fixed
image
02:03:865 (4) - I recommend applying CTRL+G on this because the distance from (3) and (4) is quite close given that they are 316ms away from each other (some notes that are only 158ms away from each other have larger distances than this one ). The same situation goes for 01:13:338 (3,4,5,6). agree, fixed
02:20:917 (4,5,6,1) - Hmm. This part looks really weird as the distance between (4-6) seems consistent but suddenly drops on (6) to (1). Try moving 02:21:391 (1) - on x:184 y:88. Creates a better flow. fixed
02:34:812 (1) - Use your custom finish hitsound here. Make it audible! (which means you need to move the inherited point) fixed
02:55:654 (9) - Pretty sure kiai should've ended right here. fixed
02:57:549 (5,6) - I recommend CTRL+G on this one. It adds a smoother flow between (5-6-7). If you want a more -stop-and-go flow then ignore this suggestion haha. fixed
02:58:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - Okay so, since there's no vocals here anymore, I don't know why you started sliders on a red tick. This one plays better and sounds better. Make sure you put a finish on 02:59:128 (5) - if you follow this one. fixed

Woot. Great map.

[Insane]
needs similar hitsounds to the extra diffs.

00:31:338 (8,9,1) - Hmm. This flows kinda weird. 00:31:496 (9) - Stacking this on (1) seems to help. fixed
00:54:075 (5) - Move to x:64 y:304 and then move 00:54:391 (1) - to x:112 y:96 fixed
00:59:444 (3,4) - I don't see any reason why this needs a jump though because the music stays kinda calm in this part. No space for jumps I guess. fixed
01:23:601 (3,4,5) - Awkward spacing here. Please fix. fixed
01:39:865 - You could map this part. i agree, mapping this
02:52:654 (7) - Something like this could work. Ahahaha. might keep as is for now
image

02:55:654 (9) - eyyyyyyyy extra diff check similar suggestion
fixed

Nice diff.

[Hard]
01:59:759 (1,2,3) - Looks pretty weird if you ask me. Try moving to x:100 y:220. fixed
02:34:812 (4) - You can try adding a finish here. fixed
02:37:812 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since it seems like you're following the vocals here, this sounds better. good point, fixed

02:58:180 (1,2,3) - It's better to follow the bass here or something. fixed

02:55:654 (9) - Yeeeeep. Check Extra diff suggestion. fixed

[Normal]
00:55:023 (2,3) - Can improve the blanket here. I think its okay?
01:23:286 (3) - 01:27:075 (1) - 01:28:338 - 01:32:128 (1) - 02:08:759 - 02:10:023 (4) - 02:12:549 (1) - 02:13:812 (3) - 02:14:444 - 02:17:601 (1) - 02:17:601 (1) - 02:18:865 - 02:22:654 (1) - 02:38:444 - 02:39:075 - 02:41:601 - 02:42:865 (1) - 02:44:128 (3) - 02:47:917 (1) - 02:49:180 - 02:52:970
Add a finish on these since there are faint "clashing sounds/finish" you can hear. applied all, thankyou!
02:34:812 (4) - An optional finish addition here please. fixed
02:58:180 (4) - This repeat follows nothing. I suggest extending this slider by 1/4 and removing (5). fixed
02:55:654 (9) - Mmmm. Same suggestion from the Extra. fixed

[Easy]
I found nothing here. Except I just think some of the 5/4 sliders sound weird. lol.

Mod complete. Great song and map. Good luck!

Thanks for a really helpful mod! \:D/

Albertol

44 posts

Joined January 2013

Albertol 2014-12-07T17:32:06+00:00

This map need more atention from the BATs.

Star~

Reiguard

4 posts

Joined August 2013

Reiguard 2014-12-07T19:21:37+00:00

Do you still have the Extra beatmap file before the Dec 4th update? I liked it a bit more before lol, it's still good though!

Axarious

Former osu! Champion: 2016

333 posts

Joined May 2013

Axarious 2014-12-07T22:27:50+00:00

[General]
Yo. Complete nazi mod.
Some of these blankets are meant to be blankets but they're the second worst I've seen in a map.
The movements are all blanket fixes, some may also maintain distance snap while others may not.
[Easy]

00:20:286 (2) - Move to x:381 y:192 for a better blanket with (1).
00:21:549 (1) - Move to x:189 for a better blanket with (2).
00:25:338 (2) - Rotate 1 degree around selection center to better blanket with (1).
00:29:128 (1) - Move to x:303 y:37 for a better blanket with (3), also creates 0.81x and 0.80x distance snap.
00:31:654 (1) - Move to x:9 y:207 for a better blanket with slider (2)'s tail, maintains 0.80x distance snap.
00:32:917 (2) - Move to x:219 y:213 for a better blanket with ^, maintains 0.80x distance snap.
00:36:707 (1) - Negligible: move to x:227 y:320.
00:37:970 (2) - Is there a reason why this is 0.85x (0.84x if changed above) and not 0.80x?
00:48:707 (1) - Rotate 1 degree around selection center. Increases the 0.77x distance snap to 0.79x as well as semi-fixes the blanket.
00:53:759 (1,2) - Fix this blanket.
00:58:180 (3,4) - ^
01:03:233 (2,1) - Move (1) to x:27.
01:06:391 (3,1,3) - Move (3,3) to x:191.
01:10:812 (2) - Move to x:402 y:28.
01:15:707 (2) - Move to y:276.
01:18:233 (2) - Move to y:113.
01:28:338 (2,1) - On slider (1), place two white bend points before the red for a better blanket.
01:30:865 (2,1) - ^
01:44:917 (1,2) - Alright you need to fix this blanket. Watch the sliderfollowcircle.png for this.
01:49:970 (1) - Move to x:331 y:234.
01:51:233 (2) - If ^ is followed, move to y:76.
01:54:391 (1) - Move to x:314 y:332.
01:55:654 (2,3,1) - Fix blankets.
02:04:970 (1,2,1) - Fix blankets.
02:11:286 (2,1) - Move (1) to x:336 y:234.
02:13:812 (2,1) - Move (1) to x:272 y:44.
02:35:286 (1,2) - Readjust sliders so (1) ends 02:36:233 - here and (2) ends 02:37:496 - here. For slider (2), make sure the red bend point overlaps the slider tick. Link
02:40:023 (1) - Move this to 02:40:023 -, where she sings.
02:42:865 (1) - Move to x:421.
02:44:128 (2) - Move to x:332 y:236.
02:51:707 (2) - Extend this slider to 02:52:654 - here.
02:55:654 (1) - Make this slider symmetrical.
02:57:233 (2) - Rotate 2 degrees and move to x:353 y:252.

[Normal]

AR5 or 6.
00:20:917 (3,1) - Move (1) to x:255 y:44 or something.
00:24:075 (1) - Put two points before the red to make a better blanket, it's messy right now. Also, make sure the red bend point overlaps with the slidertick
00:27:866 (3) - Move to x:330 y:284.
00:34:180 (1) - Have the red bend point overlapping the slider tick.
00:36:707 (1) - ^
00:44:286 (1) - ^
00:46:813 (1) - ^
00:51:865 (1) - Rotate 4 degrees around selection center. HJ the new slider onto 00 :53:129 (3) - here.
00:55:970 (3) - Move to x:118.
01:05:444 (2,4) - Move to x:131 y:207.
01:09:549 (1) - Red bend point overlap with the slider tick. This slider is also asymmetrical -- test this with ctrl H.
01:21:549 (4) - This doesn't really follow her singing or the bgm.
01:34:180 (4) - Move to x:396 y:327.
01:53:444 (2,3,4) - Fix blanket between (2) and (3) and fix stack between (3,4): Move (4) to x:420 y:137.
01:57:549 (1,2) - Fix stack: Move (2) to x:106 y:316.
02:00:075 (1,2) - Fix stack: Move (2) to y:75.
02:17:601 (1) - Move to y:154.
02:19:180 (3,4) - Fix blanket and distance snap to 02:20:128 (1) - .
02:20:128 (1,2) - Move (1) to x:406 y:304 and (2) to x:211 y:337 for a clean ctrl H and G.
02:24:075 (3) - Move to x:389 y:298.
02:24:707 (4) - Move to x:292 y:171.
02:48:549 (2) - Rotate 2 degrees around selection center.
02:56:128 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Ending rhythm is a bit tricky, I suggest you simplify this into a couple less sliders instead.

[Hard]

00:23:759 (7) - Move to x:79 y:179.
00:27:075 (2,3,4) - Fix blankets.
00:37:970 (3,4) - Move to x:310.
00:38:917 (5) - Have the start and end of the slider parallel.
00:47:286 (2) - Move to y:14.
00:47:917 (4) - Move to y:253.
00:48:391 (5) - Move to x:424 y:371.
00:52:338 (2,3,4) - Fix blankets.
00:54:865 (4,5,6) - ^
00:59:128 (8) - End this slider on this red tick: 00:59:286 - and start this new combo 00:59:601 (1) - on the downbeat white tick 00:59:444 - here instead.
01:01:654 (6,1) - Fix blanket.
01:12:075 (1,2,3) - ^
01:20:759 (8,1) - Why is this not a ctrl HJ of the other -- this should be 3/4ths of a pinwheel.
01:23:286 (7,8) - Check blanket.
01:28:812 (6,7,1) - ^
01:59:759 (1) - Move to x:204 y:59.
02:04:970 (1) - Asymmetrical.
02:05:601 (2,3) - Should start this slider on the white tick.
02:09:549 (8,1) - Move to x:167 y:145.
02:15:075 (1,2,3,4) - You can rotate sliders by 120 degrees to make a perfect triangle rather than freehand them.
02:16:970 (7,8,1) - Fix slider blankets.
02:19:023 (4,5) - Move to x:275 y:373.
02:22:023 (8) - Move to y:275.
02:22:496 (9) - Move to x:379.
02:23:128 (2,3) - //isthatablanket
02:35:286 (1,2,3,4) - Rotate 120 degrees rather than freehand them.
02:36:865 (2,4) - Will be hard to see.
02:37:812 (1,2,3) - Rotate rather than freehand.
02:45:865 (2,4) - Move to x:174 y:241.
02:51:707 (2,3,4,5) - Rotato.
02:59:286 (1) - On the easy difficulty, the spinner ends 03:04:654 - here. However, on hard it ends 03:04:496 - here. Make these the same.

[Insane]

00:32:128 (3,4) - Not stacked.
00:32:128 (3,5) - Ctrl HJ.
00:34:812 (3,4) - //isthisablanket
00:37:812 (4,5,6,7) - Please tell me the placement is intentional.
00:47:759 (5,6) - Blanket fix.
00:52:970 (1) - Move to x:130 y:370.
00:55:970 (1,2) - Awkward antijump into a reverse slider here.
00:57:391 (4,6) - Ctrl HJ these.
01:02:601 (4,5) - Ctrl G, maybe. This'll create a semi-antijump to slider (6).
01:06:391 (6,7) - Ctrl HJ.
01:15:075 (4,5,6,7) - Make symmetrical.
01:23:917 (5,6) - Link From 01:23:286 (1,2,3,4) - clockwise momentum, I think (6) would look better if placed before (5) to continue this clockwise momentum.
01:29:601 (2,3) - Is this a blanket?
01:34:338 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Turn grid snap off when mapping streams.
01:51:075 (1) - Move to y:238.
01:55:338 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2) - Put a slider somewhere in here when she sings extended notes, this many single taps is unusual.
02:01:180 (10) - Move to y:200.
02:03:075 (8) - Move to y:350.
02:03:233 (9) - Maybe ctrl G for experimentation?
02:05:601 (4) - Rotate 1 degree around selection center.
02:11:917 (3,4) - Remove overlap with the previous sliders, even if they can't be seen when playing.
02:20:917 (6,7) - Slider here instead of two circles?
02:24:075 (1,3) - Make (3) different from (1).
02:30:391 (1,1,1,1) - One or two combo (I suggest one because they're all the same length), not four.
02:32:917 (2,1,1,1) - Two combo.
02:50:917 (9) - Rotate -2 degrees around selection center.
02:53:286 (3,4,7,8) - Awkward antijump here.
02:55:970 (1) - Move to x:412 y:139. Ctrl H for (3).

[Fxtra]

00:19:496 (3) - Rotate 3 degrees around selection center.
00:23:759 (11) - Rotate 5 degrees around selection center.
00:27:075 (4) - Move to x:365 y:256.
00:29:444 (3) - Move to y:288 for 2.42x distance snap.
00:31:180 (6,7) - Slider should be on 00:31:180 - .
00:31:812 (2) - Move to x:78 y:126.
00:33:233 (7,8) - I imagine these would look better if you ctrl HJ'd them, kind of like the HJ's found in Cheatreal.
00:36:391 (10) - Rotate 5 degrees around selection center.
00:36:707 (1,2) - Put slider (1)'s tail directly on slider (2), this looks messy.
00:38:601 (8) - Rotate -4 degrees around selection center.
00:45:391 (6,7) - Fix blanket.
00:48:549 (8) - Rotate 5 degrees around selection center.
00:50:286 (4) - Move to x:237 y:315.
00:50:759 (6,7) - Rotate (7) 4 degrees around selection center.
00:59:444 (1,3) - Fix blanket.
01:14:444 (5) - Wow, way to make kiai time stand out!
01:17:680 (2,3,5) - Blanket fix.
01:20:444 (6) - Link Maybe move to x:216 y:58? Creates an interesting momentum change as well as removes overlap with the slider edges.
01:23:917 (4) - Move to x:284 y:148.
01:25:180 (4) - Move to x:481 y:229.
01:25:812 (2) - Move to x:128 y:125 to stack the tail on 01:24:391 (1) - .
01:27:075 (2) - Move to x:171 y:287.
01:29:601 (4) - Move to x:399 y:145.
01:32:759 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make this a perfect star.
01:35:128 (3,5) - Fix blanket.
01:37:812 (2) - Move to x:473 y:274.
01:50:286 (2) - Move to x:47.
01:50:917 (4) - Have the start and end of this slider parallel.
01:52:180 (1) - Move to y:149.
02:04:496 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:04:654 - Start the stream here instead.
02:06:233 (2) - Ctrl G.
02:06:865 (5) - Move to x:124 y:135.
02:10:023 (4) - Ctrl G.
02:10:496 (1) - Move elsewhere to eliminate overlap.
02:11:286 (4) - Surely you can blanket this better with 02:10:496 (1) - .
02:22:023 (2) - Move to y:129.
02:30:391 (1) - Might want to put some reverse sliders in here too, not just 49 circles of stream.
02:38:128 (4,5,6) - This triplet should start 02:38:444 - . Keep the consistency with the previous triples.
02:40:023 (5) - Move to x:187 y:133.
02:49:180 (10) - Move to x:62 y:325.
02:51:391 (7) - Move to x:98 y:176.
02:54:391 (1) - Doesn't fit.

[Extra]

I'll come back to this one, I can't handle the ridiculous amount of misplaced blankets.

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-12-08T06:33:39+00:00

Albertol wrote:
This map need more atention from the BATs.

Star~

Thankyou! \:D/

Banguard wrote:
Do you still have the Extra beatmap file before the Dec 4th update? I liked it a bit more before lol, it's still good though!

Sorry couldn't find a copy :<

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-12-11T13:02:02+00:00

update my latest version pls

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-12-11T22:44:52+00:00

alrighty done, sorry for the delay

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-12-18T06:55:07+00:00

im updating my map, just fix some miss combo and change some pattern

Fort'Extra

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74049
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:FIRST
TitleUnicode:FIRST
Artist:cillia
ArtistUnicode:cillia
Creator:moph
Version:Fort's Extra
Source:
Tags:vocaloid niki utau kasane teto cover kyaami fort
BeatmapID:467689
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moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-12-20T01:25:42+00:00

alright thank you Axarious for the mod!
applied most of it
extra also got parts remapped again :>

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2014-12-25T14:12:13+00:00

moph wrote:
alright thank you Axarious for the mod!
applied most of it
extra also got parts remapped again :>

woa no wonder there are new parts D:

i liek it

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2014-12-28T07:02:26+00:00

from my queue

[Extra]

00:20:128 (5,6) - since it seems that you tried to map by following the vocal sound, what about reversing this rhythm?
for example
00:30:233 (5,6) - ^
this would be nice
00:32:759 (7,1) - sawp NC to fit with the vocal. and this also has rhythmic issue, but since it's a really minor suggestion, it's up to you. both changing them and not feels nice
01:00:549 (1) - it sseems like i'm demanding my style to you lolol, ok try reversing this by using ctrl g
01:07:338 (2) - hmm.. i actually expected a stacked note here rather than current placement because of 01:04:812 (2) - this, maybe some of players may think that 01:07:023 (1,2) - these are 1/2 beat not 1/2 beat. annnnnnnnnnd i think stacking it like previous pattern seems much better for playing
just like this
01:28:023 (4) - consider changing this to triplet, current rhythm is just a little bit weird because of the triplets that you placed on previous sections. oh and you have to 01:28:417 (2) - delete this after chang the slider
01:34:338 (1) - why don't you add a clap here? this sounds awesome
02:17:996 - try adding a note for the same reason with 01:28:023 (4) - here
02:44:917 (9) - since there is proper sound for placing a clap how about adding it?
02:56:601 (5) - is there anything special reason that you didn't add clap on the starting point? (not only hear but other objects as well like 02:57:233 (3,5) - these). try adding them, current one feels really empty

since i found some NC issues (001:42:391 (6,1) - , 1:43:496 (3) - , 01:48:549 (6) - , 01:51:075 (6) - etc.) . i can help you about it if those are a kind of "errors". ignore this if those are intended

perhaps i can finish this by tomorrow

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2014-12-28T10:39:26+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
from my queue

[Extra]
00:20:128 (5,6) - since it seems that you tried to map by following the vocal sound, what about reversing this rhythm? yeah I was, this is much better, fixed
for example
00:30:233 (5,6) - ^ same here
this would be nice
00:32:759 (7,1) - sawp NC to fit with the vocal. and this also has rhythmic issue, but since it's a really minor suggestion, it's up to you. both changing them and not feels nice i see, fixed
01:00:549 (1) - it sseems like i'm demanding my style to you lolol, ok try reversing this by using ctrl g lol I agree, fixed
01:07:338 (2) - hmm.. i actually expected a stacked note here rather than current placement because of 01:04:812 (2) - this, maybe some of players may think that 01:07:023 (1,2) - these are 1/2 beat not 1/2 beat. annnnnnnnnnd i think stacking it like previous pattern seems much better for playing it was meant to be my bad, fixed :L
just like this
01:28:023 (4) - consider changing this to triplet, current rhythm is just a little bit weird because of the triplets that you placed on previous sections. oh and you have to 01:28:417 (2) - delete this after chang the slider considering this, I see what you mean though
01:34:338 (1) - why don't you add a clap here? this sounds awesome added
02:17:996 - try adding a note for the same reason with 01:28:023 (4) - here like before, considering
02:44:917 (9) - since there is proper sound for placing a clap how about adding it? added
02:56:601 (5) - is there anything special reason that you didn't add clap on the starting point? (not only hear but other objects as well like 02:57:233 (3,5) - these). try adding them, current one feels really empty my bad added

since i found some NC issues (001:42:391 (6,1) - , 1:43:496 (3) - , 01:48:549 (6) - , 01:51:075 (6) - etc.) . i can help you about it if those are a kind of "errors". ignore this if those are intended i see what you mean, i will try to fix them!
perhaps i can finish this by tomorrow

Thankyou! ^^

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2014-12-29T03:33:38+00:00

here's the rest

[General]

since you enabled epilepsy warning on N and I, you'd better add it on other diffs as well
i also found that you used different kiai times among the diffs that you made, all of kiai times should be the same unless it's guest difficulty

[Easy]

00:49:970 (2) - i assunme that those missed claps are intended, but i don't think emptying claps like that isn't really good idea, try adding them?

this diff needs adjustment on hitsounds imo

[Normal]

01:29:601 (1) - personally, i don't think using "jump" pattern on low diffs (E and N) isn't great idea even you added NC as indicator, try keeping distance consistently

[Hard]

00:39:233 - this green line is also unsanpped, it's not a big problem though
00:59:759 (3) - missed clap
01:13:812 (6) - unsnapped slider (yea thanks AIBat)
02:52:023 (3,5) - missed claps
02:56:601 (4) - same opinion as Extra too

well.. i think adding some jumps instead of increasing average distnace (actually you used same distance snap but increased SV) would be better for both playing and diff spread issue

[Insane]

00:24:075 (1) - i think a circle + slider works better here beacuase the 1/1 slider ignores the sound at 00:24:233 -
00:32:128 (4,5) - even though i don't enjoy to point some beauty issues out, i think this stack can be improved
00:34:338 (2) - same opinion as 00:24:075 (1) -. but it doesn't mean that current rhythm sucks, i just want to let you know that there is a better way to deal with it
02:44:917 - same as Extra, try adding a clap on the ending point
02:56:601 (3) - yea as i mentioned on Extra, try to add some missed claps on this part

hmmmmmmm i think there are some missed (or misplaced) claps... for example like 00:55:970 (8) - , 00:57:865 (5) - 00:58:338 (7) - etc. i can help you about it if you need, just contact me. oh and there are some NC issues as well (especially on kiai tikmes), try to fix them

others are perfect, you did really nice job

[Fort's Extra]

00:44:601 (3) - maybe you forgot to add finish
00:47:286 (4) - this is currently touching HP bar, so try placing it to downward place. but since it's a guideline, you can leave it
01:12:075 (1) - i think that this finish isn't that necessary, i recommend you to remove it or replace it to SC:1 finish
01:21:707 (3) - missed clap on the ending point
01:28:180 (6,5) - i'm not sure if those notes are intended to be there without clap, what about adding it?
01:34:338 (5) - check those green lines http://puu.sh/dNhmt/096d0a06ef.jpg - found as AIBat lol
01:38:286 (4,5) - hmmm it seems that most of your rhythms are following the vocal sound very well while this rhythm doesn't. what about reversing this rhythm by using ctrl g?
something like this?
02:03:865 (4,5,6) - i highly recommend using 3/4 rhythm on this section, current rhythm is a bit weird to hear
02:18:707 (1) - another missed finish
02:23:128 (7) - ^ since the clap sound is quite loud, i don't recommend emptying some claps like this
02:44:917 (6) - also consider adding clap as i mentioned on Extra
02:54:391 (1) - how about spliting this slider in to 2 sliders? using this type of slider (unless it's 1/8 rhythm) isn't recommended on high diffs imo
for example
02:57:549 (8) - add finish on the ending point

fascinating song with nice maps, good luck!

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-12-30T18:29:08+00:00

Yeah I'm late, thanks to the injuries I sustained

[General]
The SB files are REALLY big. You need to get some help to tone them down a bit.
The easiest way would be to convert them into 960x540 pixels like stated in RC.

[Easy]

00:19:022 (1) - could make this perfectly symmetrical on both slider ends, and check the blanket again
02:59:444 (1) - think you should extend the spinner till 03:05:444 - since the distortion guitar ends there.

[Normal]

01:12:075 (1) - this is not perfectly symmetrical to y axis :S
02:00:075 (1) - try ctrl+h and see if it's symmetrical or not :S
02:53:286 (2,3,4) - check blanket
02:59:286 (1) - same as easy

[Hard]

01:16:496 (6) - I personally think its better to stack in on 7 instead of 5's end
01:45:865 (3) - unstack this
02:40:812 (4,5) - I can't let this one slide because it looks really awkward, check blanket
02:54:075 (3,5) - ctrl+g these
02:59:286 (1) - ofc same as easy for consistency

[Insane]

00:32:128 (4,5) - why aren't they stacked properly o_o
00:37:812 (4,6) - ok
02:34:812 (1) - maybe you can put a darker colored combo here to emphasize the SV slowdown a bit more? Right now it still feels too sudden of a SV drop
02:59:286 (1) - ofc same as other diffs

I can't pass extras
and your mapset makes me look like a terrible modder good job wowowowow

Accel Walker

Accel Walker 2015-01-01T12:08:57+00:00

SPOILER

the storyboard is a masterpiece <3

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2015-01-02T00:01:48+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
here's the rest

[General]
since you enabled epilepsy warning on N and I, you'd better add it on other diffs as well added
i also found that you used different kiai times among the diffs that you made, all of kiai times should be the same unless it's guest difficulty fixed
[Easy]
00:49:970 (2) - i assunme that those missed claps are intended, but i don't think emptying claps like that isn't really good idea, try adding them?
added missing claps and worked on hitsounds slightly
this diff needs adjustment on hitsounds imo
[Normal]
01:29:601 (1) - personally, i don't think using "jump" pattern on low diffs (E and N) isn't great idea even you added NC as indicator, try keeping distance consistently alright changed that part slightly
[Hard]
00:39:233 - this green line is also unsanpped, it's not a big problem though fixed
00:59:759 (3) - missed clap fixed
01:13:812 (6) - unsnapped slider (yea thanks AIBat) orz
02:52:023 (3,5) - missed claps fixed
02:56:601 (4) - same opinion as Extra too cool added

well.. i think adding some jumps instead of increasing average distnace (actually you used same distance snap but increased SV) would be better for both playing and diff spread issue I see your point but I think it might be too hard to make that change now, unless it becomes a serious problem I probably won't change it to that extent
[Insane]
00:24:075 (1) - i think a circle + slider works better here beacuase the 1/1 slider ignores the sound at 00:24:233 - I agree, fixed
00:32:128 (4,5) - even though i don't enjoy to point some beauty issues out, i think this stack can be improved my bad, fixed
00:34:338 (2) - same opinion as 00:24:075 (1) -. but it doesn't mean that current rhythm sucks, i just want to let you know that there is a better way to deal with it alright fixed
02:44:917 - same as Extra, try adding a clap on the ending point cool done
02:56:601 (3) - yea as i mentioned on Extra, try to add some missed claps on this part alright done

hmmmmmmm i think there are some missed (or misplaced) claps... for example like 00:55:970 (8) - , 00:57:865 (5) - 00:58:338 (7) - etc. i can help you about it if you need, just contact me. oh and there are some NC issues as well (especially on kiai tikmes), try to fix them
fixed missing claps orz and tried fixing NC stuff

others are perfect, you did really nice job
fascinating song with nice maps, good luck!

Thankyou so much! fixed many issues

moph

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Topic Starter

moph 2015-01-02T00:06:22+00:00

guineaQ wrote:
Yeah I'm late, thanks to the injuries I sustained

[General]
The SB files are REALLY big. You need to get some help to tone them down a bit.
The easiest way would be to convert them into 960x540 pixels like stated in RC.
Alright hopefully this size is better

[Easy]
00:19:022 (1) - could make this perfectly symmetrical on both slider ends, and check the blanket again fixed blanket
02:59:444 (1) - think you should extend the spinner till 03:05:444 - since the distortion guitar ends there. ahh okay, extended
[Normal]
01:12:075 (1) - this is not perfectly symmetrical to y axis :S changed slider shape :S
02:00:075 (1) - try ctrl+h and see if it's symmetrical or not :S same as above
02:53:286 (2,3,4) - check blanket fixed
02:59:286 (1) - same as easyextended

[Hard]
01:16:496 (6) - I personally think its better to stack in on 7 instead of 5's end alright fixed
01:45:865 (3) - unstack this alrighty
02:40:812 (4,5) - I can't let this one slide because it looks really awkward, check blanket lol fixed
02:54:075 (3,5) - ctrl+g these okay
02:59:286 (1) - ofc same as easy for consistency extended
[Insane]
00:32:128 (4,5) - why aren't they stacked properly o_o my bad .-.
00:37:812 (4,6) - ok improved blanket here lol
02:34:812 (1) - maybe you can put a darker colored combo here to emphasize the SV slowdown a bit more? Right now it still feels too sudden of a SV drop good point, changed
02:59:286 (1) - ofc same as other diffs extended
I can't pass extras
and your mapset makes me look like a terrible modder good job wowowowow

Thankyou! Hope you're okay! :<

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2015-01-02T00:20:06+00:00

Accel Walker wrote:
SPOILER

the storyboard is a masterpiece <3

tyty, someone teach me how to script plz ;-;

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-01-02T01:32:18+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
here's the rest

[Fort's Extra]
00:44:601 (3) - maybe you forgot to add finish
00:47:286 (4) - this is currently touching HP bar, so try placing it to downward place. but since it's a guideline, you can leave it i will think about this one
01:12:075 (1) - i think that this finish isn't that necessary, i recommend you to remove it or replace it to SC:1 finish
01:21:707 (3) - missed clap on the ending point
01:28:180 (6,5) - i'm not sure if those notes are intended to be there without clap, what about adding it?
01:34:338 (5) - check those green lines http://puu.sh/dNhmt/096d0a06ef.jpg - found as AIBat lol
01:38:286 (4,5) - hmmm it seems that most of your rhythms are following the vocal sound very well while this rhythm doesn't. what about reversing this rhythm by using ctrl g? Fixed in another way
something like this?
02:03:865 (4,5,6) - i highly recommend using 3/4 rhythm on this section, current rhythm is a bit weird to hear i think 3/4 too hard
02:18:707 (1) - another missed finish
02:23:128 (7) - ^ since the clap sound is quite loud, i don't recommend emptying some claps like this
02:44:917 (6) - also consider adding clap as i mentioned on Extra
02:54:391 (1) - how about spliting this slider in to 2 sliders? using this type of slider (unless it's 1/8 rhythm) isn't recommended on high diffs imo
for example
02:57:549 (8) - add finish on the ending point not really good
fascinating song with nice maps, good luck!

okay applied all mods except red one, This is my 777th post /o/

http://puu.sh/dWVAr/0c437764f9.txt

xLolicore-

636 posts

Joined June 2014

xLolicore- 2015-01-02T15:20:34+00:00

I can't wait for it to be ranked xD good luck

xLolicore-

636 posts

Joined June 2014

xLolicore- 2015-01-02T15:20:54+00:00

I can't wait for it to be ranked xD good luck

xLolicore-

636 posts

Joined June 2014

xLolicore- 2015-01-02T15:21:59+00:00

Oh shiet double post D: sorry q.q

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-01-04T13:06:46+00:00

you're triple posting

xLolicore-

636 posts

Joined June 2014

xLolicore- 2015-01-04T13:41:54+00:00

The hard diff was fun o: I can't wait for rank c:

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2015-01-04T14:10:15+00:00

Nice one

dat m1/k1

xLolicore-

636 posts

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xLolicore- 2015-01-04T14:16:33+00:00

moph wrote:
Nice one dat m1/k1

Hehe I have my methods XD

kip-

3 posts

Joined June 2014

kip- 2015-01-04T18:38:55+00:00

This map is really well made! I'm not a mapping expert, but at the Chorus on Extra ( 01:13:00 to 01:35:00) the sliders feel like they should be a tiny bit faster, and the jumps a bit more spaced out. Just my own personal opinion, but both Extras feel like they ARE Extra's, which is hard to come by on beatmaps.

Also on Fort's Extra, there seems to be WAYY too many slider triples. (Slider ending with a double, thus creating a triple)

My Name Is R

159 posts

Joined August 2012

My Name Is R 2015-01-06T06:28:36+00:00

Hey! nice map

A star for this :333333333333

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2015-01-06T06:48:59+00:00

sumaru100 wrote:
Hey! nice map
A star for this :333333333333

tyty! :333333333333333

Akirabread

24 posts

Joined September 2012

Akirabread 2015-01-09T00:35:12+00:00

I like it.. I think there should be a spinner on the insane difficulty before the circles appear, but hey, i'm no mapper so idk... Still a very good map; hope it gets ranked

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2015-01-09T04:50:29+00:00

Akirabread wrote:
I like it.. I think there should be a spinner on the insane difficulty before the circles appear, but hey, i'm no mapper so idk... Still a very good map; hope it gets ranked

hmm not sure it's needed but thanks for the suggestion!

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-01-09T15:19:05+00:00

if you online please chat with me in game, i will find you BAT

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2015-01-10T19:55:18+00:00

#queue

[General]

BG is 1333x768 wich is a wrong size should be 1366x768
Kiai should be the same in the creators diffs.
combo color 3 and 4 look so same try to change it a bit
adding a silent sliderslide would be so nice for this map

AiBat:

sb\background.jpg is not used so remove it

[Easy]

00:47:444 (2) - remove whistle
00:48:075 (3) - delete this cirle and let the slider start from here so you'll finish it on 00:48:707 - and add a note here 00:49:023 - and restart your rhythm from here again 00:49:338 - somethimes the rhythm makes a big difference try mostly for this kind of song wich mostly every lyric starts on a down beat (big white line) to don't finish a slider there is kind of the strong sound in the finish sounds bad somethimes and get you loose the rhythm itself
01:00:707 (2,3) - here i would suggest you to follow this king of rhythm since 01:01:023 - here is kinda missing something even if is an easy diff it shouldn't miss the right rhythm
01:06:391 (3) - remove finish from here
01:07:023 (1) - missing finish
01:08:917 (3) - remove finish
01:09:549 (1) - add finish
01:10:812 (2) - remove finish
02:34:180 (4) - instead of using a cirle here why don't you use a slider untile circle 02:34:812 (5) - ?
02:35:286 (1) - add a finish

[Extra]

01:32:128 (1) - change the color here because is going really slow from the frst and the red colors are not fitting here should be different totally

good luck >_<

Akirabread

24 posts

Joined September 2012

Akirabread 2015-01-10T23:42:34+00:00

moph wrote:
Akirabread wrote:
I like it.. I think there should be a spinner on the insane difficulty before the circles appear, but hey, i'm no mapper so idk... Still a very good map; hope it gets ranked
hmm not sure it's needed but thanks for the suggestion!

It probably isn't needed but, it would I guess make for more competition in who can spin more for those extra points

moph

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Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2015-01-11T05:56:13+00:00

Lally wrote:
#queue

[General]
BG is 1333x768 wich is a wrong size should be 1366x768 already changed, think you might have had to delete then redownload
Kiai should be the same in the creators diffs. fixed
combo color 3 and 4 look so same try to change it a bit alright, changed them
adding a silent sliderslide would be so nice for this map hmm will consider this
AiBat:
sb\background.jpg is not used so remove it again redownload and stuff
[Easy]
00:47:444 (2) - remove whistle ok
00:48:075 (3) - delete this cirle and let the slider start from here so you'll finish it on 00:48:707 - and add a note here 00:49:023 - and restart your rhythm from here again 00:49:338 - somethimes the rhythm makes a big difference try mostly for this kind of song wich mostly every lyric starts on a down beat (big white line) to don't finish a slider there is kind of the strong sound in the finish sounds bad somethimes and get you loose the rhythm itself
good point, extending 00:48:075 (1) - as there aren't any strong beats until the end
01:00:707 (2,3) - here i would suggest you to follow this king of rhythm since 01:01:023 - here is kinda missing something even if is an easy diff it shouldn't miss the right rhythm
good point but i've been missing that same beat the entire time, idk ill have to change a lot if i'm to map this beat out
01:06:391 (3) - remove finish from here fixed
01:07:023 (1) - missing finish fixed
01:08:917 (3) - remove finish fixed
01:09:549 (1) - add finish fixed
01:10:812 (2) - remove finish fixed
02:34:180 (4) - instead of using a cirle here why don't you use a slider untile circle 02:34:812 (5) - ? might keep as is for now, i used circles to show the incoming change in beat
02:35:286 (1) - add a finish fixed
[Extra]
01:32:128 (1) - change the color here because is going really slow from the frst and the red colors are not fitting here should be different totally fixed
good luck >_<

Thanks for the mod

Xgor

Elite Mapper

2,534 posts

Joined April 2009

Xgor 2015-01-12T20:12:34+00:00

SB mod gooo!

[Storyboard]
All the lyric SB images has some unused transparency in them. I highly recommend you crop them.

The dust images takes up a awful amount of space for something that just looks like a blur. A way you can do to make them take less space is to change them into .jpg images and then apply the alpha in game instead of an image basis..

(Suggestion) Move the lyric images move slightly down instead of being still when they are being shown during the verses. I think it would look great and make them feel more dynamic

Anyways other than these points the SB is really solid here. Good job

Otherwise it does look good but the high difficulty spread between Normal, Hard and Insane worries me.
I'll think it would be a good idea to make it smoother.

Ciyus Miapah

3,028 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-01-14T08:17:30+00:00

if you make Hyper diff, i suggest you need to reduce this diff star rating

Hard -> 3.23

try reduce some 1/4 circles and 1/2 cirles tap maybe can help reduce it.

dont kd.

moph

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Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2015-01-14T08:19:43+00:00

Fort wrote:
if you make Hyper diff, i suggest you need to reduce this diff star rating

Hard -> 3.23

try reduce some 1/4 circles and 1/2 cirles tap maybe can help reduce it.

dont kd.

yeah got it down to around 3.1 and got normal up to 2, will upload when fixed storyboard

Zeonive

53 posts

Joined March 2014

Zeonive 2015-01-18T16:50:48+00:00

Note: I already got a bit distracted at the harder difficulties and abbreviated stuff, so you should read the suggestions of the easier difficulties first to get what I'm suggesting at the harder ones

[Easy]

00:48:075 (1,2) - New Combo on the current 2 instead of the current 1, breaks the consistency of your comboing
01:54:391 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]

01:29:128 (1) - Remove the New Combo for consitency
02:10:496 (5) - New Combo for consistency
02:55:023 (1,2) - New Combo on the current 2 instead of the current 1

[Hard]

00:20:128 A circle would fit the music more than nothing
01:21:391 (1,2,3) - New Combo on the current 3 instead of the current 1
01:34:812 (1) - You never added a New Combo on endings like these, I don't think it's special so remove the New Combo
01:59:759 (1,2) - New Combo on the current 2 instead of the current 1
02:09:707 (1,2) - ^, you comboed nothing like this before, this was even noticably awkward while testplaying, even with a skin with only one combocolor...
02:41:601 (1) - Remove New Combo, everything else in this part is two measures long
02:50:128 (1,2,3) - New Combo on the current 3 instead of the current 1
02:58:180 (1) - Remove New Combo, there's no New Combo on the other difficulties

[Insane]

SPOILER

Note: You don't have to delete all of the overmapped 1/4 of course, it still plays good with them but you should rather use the 1/4s that actually are in the music than creating "imaginary/interpretated" 1/4s and not using the existing 1/4s in the music. Some people drop heavily in accuracy when they have to play overmapped 1/4s. Also, there are some overmapped 1/2 in your streams that I didn't mention because generally, there's nothing wrong with overmapped 1/2s.

00:35:996 (3) - Overmapped
00:51:786 (5) - ^
00:58:733 (3) - ^
01:05:444 (4) - ^ wtf, overmapped reverseslider, why?
01:06:154 (4) - ^ but there are 1/4s: 01:06:312 ; 01:06:628 ; 01:07:259 if you want streams
01:07:417 (2) - Overmapped
01:07:970 (1) - ^
01:08:680 (5) - ^ but there is a 1/4: 01:08:838 if you want streams
01:08:917 (7) - Overmapped but there are 1/4s: 01:09:154 ; 01:11:365 ; 01:11:680 ; 01:13:575 if you want streams
01:14:838 (2) - ^
01:17:996 (5) - ^
01:18:944 (4) - ^
01:19:891 (3) - ^
01:21:786 (6) - ^
01:21:944 (8) - ^
01:25:575 (6) - ^
01:26:838 (7) - ^
01:26:996 (9) - ^
01:28:417 (2) - ^
01:28:891 (6) - ^
01:29:049 (8) - ^
01:33:470 (8) - ^

I will stop here with mentioning the overmapping, you get the point. I suggest you delete some of these overmapped 1/4s and add all actual 1/4s.

00:35:601 (1) - Remove New Combo for consistency
00:45:391 (5,1) - Make the current 5 the start of the New Combo instead of the current 1
01:07:970 (1,2) - ^ same concept with these two notes
01:29:128 (1,2,3) - ^ this time the 3
01:30:391 (1,2,3,4) - ^ this time the 4
01:53:128 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:54:707 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:57:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Note: From this point to the next kiai time I got really confused with your comboing because it's really different from what you did before. Sorry if I suggest something very stupid in this part. Nevertheless, you should change the comboing. Nvm, got it.

01:57:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:58:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:59:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:00:391 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:01:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:03:865 (1) - Remove Combo
02:18:865 (5,6,7,1) - Add New Combo on 5 or 7 instead of current 1
02:36:549 (1,2) - ^ same concept with these two circles
02:37:496 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:38:759 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:41:128 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:42:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:43:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:52:970 (1,2) - ^ (not necessary this time)
02:56:917 (7,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This comboing is of course made to make the patterns more visible but makes no sense rhythmwise (last combo number is the main 1 in the rhytm and the beginning of the combo is the 4 in the rhytm --> wat) change it making it based on the rhythm

[~~Fextra~~ Fort's Extra]

Note: There are so many "almost blankets" that I can't tell if it is intentional or like a style. If they should be blankets you should definetely make them better. Also, the same with the overmapping counts here: You should rather map all actual 1/4s than making overmapped 1/4s and leaving the actual 1/4s "in" a slider. But of course, don't delete all overmapped 1/4s, they make these difficulties more interesting

00:30:391 (1) - Remove New Combo for consitency
00:39:865 (1) - ^
00:54:075 (1) - ^
01:01:970 (1) - ^
01:03:233 (5) - NC
01:03:865 (1) - RNC
01:14:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - New Combo on 5 instead of 1
01:15:549 (1,2) - New Combo on 2 instead of 1
I don't quite understand the comboing of the kiai times so I won't mod it explicitly but I suggest to combo it like the other parts, based on the rhythm
01:41:444 (1) - RNC
01:46:496 (1) - ^
01:48:391 (1) - ^
01:52:180 (1,2) - NC on 2 instead
02:01:654 (1) - RNC
03:02:917 I got 1000 points on the spinner before the inherited point made everything silent and it sounded really bad, you might want to set this point earlier or make multiple inherited timing points

[Extra]

Same with the overmapping counts here.

00:24:549 (1) - Remove New Combo for consistency
00:56:601 (11,1) - Make the switch from 1 combo every 2 measure to 1 combo every measure 2 measures later. Makes for sense and won't get that confusing
01:08:286 (10,11,1) - Make the 10 the beginning of the New Combo
01:10:812 (11,1) - ^ same concept just with the 11
01:15:391 (1,2,3) - ^ same concept but with the 3
01:16:654 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:17:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:19:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:20:286 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:29:601 (7,8,9,1) - ^
01:32:601 (1) - Is a New Combo really necessary here?
01:59:444 (1) - ^
02:07:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - New Combo on 5, not on 1 because of consistency
02:08:444 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:09:707 (1,2,3) - ^
02:10:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:18:865 (5) - New Combo
02:41:759 (8,9,10,1) - NC on 8 instead of 1
02:42:865 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^ same concept
02:43:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:45:075 (1) - NC really needed?
02:49:180 (7,8,1) - NC on 7 instead of 1
02:51:233 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same concept
02:52:970 (1,2,3) - ^ (not necessary tough)
03:02:917 I got 1000 points on the spinner before the inherited point made everything silent and it sounded really bad, you might want to set this point earlier or make multiple inherited timing points

Misc:

I didn't mod the style/the spacing/the object because I think the mapping style is pretty much perfect. However, the comboing, which should be based on the rhythm and should be consistent, wasn't.
I hope this maps gets ranked soon, it's really good, good luck!

moph

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Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2015-01-19T02:35:43+00:00

Zeonive

Zeonive wrote:
Note: I already got a bit distracted at the harder difficulties and abbreviated stuff, so you should read the suggestions of the easier difficulties first to get what I'm suggesting at the harder ones

[Easy]

00:48:075 (1,2) - New Combo on the current 2 instead of the current 1, breaks the consistency of your comboing
01:54:391 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]

01:29:128 (1) - Remove the New Combo for consitency
02:10:496 (5) - New Combo for consistency
02:55:023 (1,2) - New Combo on the current 2 instead of the current 1

[Hard]

00:20:128 A circle would fit the music more than nothing
01:21:391 (1,2,3) - New Combo on the current 3 instead of the current 1
01:34:812 (1) - You never added a New Combo on endings like these, I don't think it's special so remove the New Combo
01:59:759 (1,2) - New Combo on the current 2 instead of the current 1
02:09:707 (1,2) - ^, you comboed nothing like this before, this was even noticably awkward while testplaying, even with a skin with only one combocolor...
02:41:601 (1) - Remove New Combo, everything else in this part is two measures long
02:50:128 (1,2,3) - New Combo on the current 3 instead of the current 1
02:58:180 (1) - Remove New Combo, there's no New Combo on the other difficulties

[Insane]

SPOILER
Note: You don't have to delete all of the overmapped 1/4 of course, it still plays good with them but you should rather use the 1/4s that actually are in the music than creating "imaginary/interpretated" 1/4s and not using the existing 1/4s in the music. Some people drop heavily in accuracy when they have to play overmapped 1/4s. Also, there are some overmapped 1/2 in your streams that I didn't mention because generally, there's nothing wrong with overmapped 1/2s.

00:35:996 (3) - Overmapped
00:51:786 (5) - ^
00:58:733 (3) - ^
01:05:444 (4) - ^ wtf, overmapped reverseslider, why?
01:06:154 (4) - ^ but there are 1/4s: 01:06:312 ; 01:06:628 ; 01:07:259 if you want streams
01:07:417 (2) - Overmapped
01:07:970 (1) - ^
01:08:680 (5) - ^ but there is a 1/4: 01:08:838 if you want streams
01:08:917 (7) - Overmapped but there are 1/4s: 01:09:154 ; 01:11:365 ; 01:11:680 ; 01:13:575 if you want streams
01:14:838 (2) - ^
01:17:996 (5) - ^
01:18:944 (4) - ^
01:19:891 (3) - ^
01:21:786 (6) - ^
01:21:944 (8) - ^
01:25:575 (6) - ^
01:26:838 (7) - ^
01:26:996 (9) - ^
01:28:417 (2) - ^
01:28:891 (6) - ^
01:29:049 (8) - ^
01:33:470 (8) - ^

I will stop here with mentioning the overmapping, you get the point. I suggest you delete some of these overmapped 1/4s and add all actual 1/4s.

00:35:601 (1) - Remove New Combo for consistency
00:45:391 (5,1) - Make the current 5 the start of the New Combo instead of the current 1
01:07:970 (1,2) - ^ same concept with these two notes
01:29:128 (1,2,3) - ^ this time the 3
01:30:391 (1,2,3,4) - ^ this time the 4
01:53:128 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:54:707 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:57:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Note: From this point to the next kiai time I got really confused with your comboing because it's really different from what you did before. Sorry if I suggest something very stupid in this part. Nevertheless, you should change the comboing. Nvm, got it.

01:57:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:58:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:59:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:00:391 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:01:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:03:865 (1) - Remove Combo
02:18:865 (5,6,7,1) - Add New Combo on 5 or 7 instead of current 1
02:36:549 (1,2) - ^ same concept with these two circles
02:37:496 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:38:759 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:41:128 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:42:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:43:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:52:970 (1,2) - ^ (not necessary this time)
02:56:917 (7,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This comboing is of course made to make the patterns more visible but makes no sense rhythmwise (last combo number is the main 1 in the rhytm and the beginning of the combo is the 4 in the rhytm --> wat) change it making it based on the rhythm

[~~Fextra~~ Fort's Extra]

Note: There are so many "almost blankets" that I can't tell if it is intentional or like a style. If they should be blankets you should definetely make them better. Also, the same with the overmapping counts here: You should rather map all actual 1/4s than making overmapped 1/4s and leaving the actual 1/4s "in" a slider. But of course, don't delete all overmapped 1/4s, they make these difficulties more interesting

00:30:391 (1) - Remove New Combo for consitency
00:39:865 (1) - ^
00:54:075 (1) - ^
01:01:970 (1) - ^
01:03:233 (5) - NC
01:03:865 (1) - RNC
01:14:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - New Combo on 5 instead of 1
01:15:549 (1,2) - New Combo on 2 instead of 1
I don't quite understand the comboing of the kiai times so I won't mod it explicitly but I suggest to combo it like the other parts, based on the rhythm
01:41:444 (1) - RNC
01:46:496 (1) - ^
01:48:391 (1) - ^
01:52:180 (1,2) - NC on 2 instead
02:01:654 (1) - RNC
03:02:917 I got 1000 points on the spinner before the inherited point made everything silent and it sounded really bad, you might want to set this point earlier or make multiple inherited timing points

[Extra]

Same with the overmapping counts here.

00:24:549 (1) - Remove New Combo for consistency
00:56:601 (11,1) - Make the switch from 1 combo every 2 measure to 1 combo every measure 2 measures later. Makes for sense and won't get that confusing
01:08:286 (10,11,1) - Make the 10 the beginning of the New Combo
01:10:812 (11,1) - ^ same concept just with the 11
01:15:391 (1,2,3) - ^ same concept but with the 3
01:16:654 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:17:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:19:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:20:286 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:29:601 (7,8,9,1) - ^
01:32:601 (1) - Is a New Combo really necessary here?
01:59:444 (1) - ^
02:07:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - New Combo on 5, not on 1 because of consistency
02:08:444 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:09:707 (1,2,3) - ^
02:10:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:18:865 (5) - New Combo
02:41:759 (8,9,10,1) - NC on 8 instead of 1
02:42:865 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^ same concept
02:43:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:45:075 (1) - NC really needed?
02:49:180 (7,8,1) - NC on 7 instead of 1
02:51:233 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same concept
02:52:970 (1,2,3) - ^ (not necessary tough)
03:02:917 I got 1000 points on the spinner before the inherited point made everything silent and it sounded really bad, you might want to set this point earlier or make multiple inherited timing points

Misc:

I didn't mod the style/the spacing/the object because I think the mapping style is pretty much perfect. However, the comboing, which should be based on the rhythm and should be consistent, wasn't.
I hope this maps gets ranked soon, it's really good, good luck!

Hi Zeonive! Thanks for the mod! how to combo orz
Applied everything in E/N/H
Did some work on the overmapping issue in Insane, fixed some as you suggested and kept some others that were mostly based on vocals instead of the instruments. Also fixed all combo stuff
Fixed most combo issues in Extra, incase you didnt notice I used different combo colours to show SV changes which was my reasoning for some of the NC, however most of them were mistakes lol

Ciyus Miapah

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Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-01-23T15:13:30+00:00

kay ._.

i will re-fix NC by myself

edit: is Fxtra is rankable??? if yes i will change my diff to Fxtra again xD

Zeonive

53 posts

Joined March 2014

Zeonive 2015-01-23T21:24:37+00:00

I'm, not sure if "Fxtra" is a rankable name. You better ask a BAT.
But generally, there should be no problem with that name, it indicates the difficulty and that this isn't a "usual" diff and if your name gets listed in the download page of the map, I don't see any problem with it.

moph

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Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2015-01-23T22:20:43+00:00

I think Fxtra is okay as no one complained earlier
although people thought the F in Fxtra stood for FIRST orz

Ciyus Miapah

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Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-01-24T09:13:04+00:00

yeah it's right >:D

Starfy

1,046 posts

Joined November 2012

Starfy 2015-01-24T09:19:21+00:00

yeah it's right >:D
(runs

AustinsGuitar

61 posts

Joined April 2014

AustinsGuitar 2015-01-24T20:17:03+00:00

rank soon? inevitable

moph

1,147 posts

Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2015-01-24T22:17:25+00:00

AustinsGuitar wrote:
rank soon? inevitable

Soon™ :V

tochiii

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

tochiii 2015-01-25T19:16:42+00:00

From my modding queue

General

Fine

Extra

00:27:075 (4,5) - I don't think this is a good flow, consider changing the flow, maybe like:
Image
00:55:180 (4) - I suggest to move this a bit more down.
02:04:812 (2) - I suggest not to stack this note, simply move it 2 grids to the right or left.
02:09:391 (3,4,5) - IMO this is overmap, i donøt hear any sound that fits for a triple here, also it's a bit sudden.

Fxtra

Why call this diff Fxtra? Mybe call it Expert?
01:16:180 (3,4,5) - Something like this is kinda slowing down the flow, i don't think it fits for kiai times, imo you should change these to 1 circle and then a triple.
00:26:917 (3) - This stacked circle/this jump is too big for a calm part like this, i suggest to move it closer to 00:27:075 (4) -
00:32:601 (5) - This note breaks the flow, imo u should move it to x128 y192.
00:41:444 (8) - Improve this blanket.
01:14:917 (6) - Do Ctrl + G, Ctrl + H & Ctrl + J and move it to x444 y192 for qa better flow.
01:54:549 (11) - Move this to x304 y212
01:57:075 (9,10,11,12) - Distant is too close to each other.

Feedback

I think that Fxtra 's kiai time is a bit messy, maybe it's just me.
But good luck with it! ^^

moph

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Joined January 2013

Topic Starter

moph 2015-01-26T06:56:51+00:00

-Tochi

-Tochi wrote:
From my modding queue

General
Fine

Extra
00:27:075 (4,5) - I don't think this is a good flow, consider changing the flow, maybe like: rip picture, but yea i get what you mean, changed
[box=Image]

00:55:180 (4) - I suggest to move this a bit more down. good idea, okay02:04:812 (2) - I suggest not to stack this note, simply move it 2 grids to the right or left. good point, okay02:09:391 (3,4,5) - IMO this is overmap, i donøt hear any sound that fits for a triple here, also it's a bit sudden. hmm okay i'll change.

Thanks for the mod

(btw Fxtra is by Fort, Fort + Extra = Fxtra~~~www)

Ciyus Miapah

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Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-01-27T14:15:55+00:00

looks im forget update my map

Fxtra

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74049
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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Bookmarks: 44239,104880,150354
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:FIRST
Artist:cillia
ArtistUnicode:cillia
Creator:moph
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EPDLS

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EPDLS 2015-01-27T18:17:51+00:00

This is map is really well made, hope it gets ranked!

Myxo

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Joined December 2012

Myxo 2015-01-31T14:11:05+00:00

I think I will mod this a bit different than usual, since I feel that it's needed this way.
First of all I'd like to say that I really love the song and storyboard. The maps definitely have potential to become epic, but need a lot of work before the mapset can be ranked.
I read through some of the numerous mods this mapset had. The problem is that nobody pointed out the deep issues these maps have. I don't feel that a regular mod would help this in any way. Therefore, I will try to go very in-depth. It's important that you can understand everything and learn from your mistakes, so you don't make the same mistakes again and maybe you'll be able to fix the rest of your map without me having to spend dozens of hours on it.

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Rhythm

00:19:022 to 00:29:128 - The rhythm is way too dense here, which destroys the atmosphere of this section for me. It's relatively calm, vocals and those drums on 2 and 4 are dominant, but you have almost everything filled up with 1/2. I would highly recommend you to use much more 1/1-slider here to follow the vocals. Starting from 00:20:128 - 00:20:759 - 00:23:286 - 00:24:549 - etc
00:29:128 to 00:39:233 - Pretty similar, although now the new instrument (whatever it is) comes in and adds some more density to the music, which makes higher density in the map logical. Consecutive 1/2-circles at some points, for example 00:33:549 (5,6,7,8,1) - make sense now while they wouldn't make sense in the previous section. The triplets at 00:31:496 (1,2,3) - 00:33:391 (3,4,5) - 00:35:917 (4,5,6) - still feel out of place though. Some more 1/1-sliders would also really help keeping the calm atmosphere compared to following sections. For example, start them at 00:30:233 or 00:32:128 or 00:35:286 -
00:38:444 (7,8,9,10,1) - This measure is different from the measures before. There is some kind of noisy sound that gets louder and a cymbal at 00:38:917 - while the other instruments' volume decreases. Some less dense rhythms to emphasize this would add much to the atmosphere: http://puu.sh/fha7X/fe8176e252.png
00:39:233 to 00:44:286 - Nice!
00:44:286 to 01:04:496 - If you turn your music volume to 0% and just listen to the hitsounds, you will notice what a great variation 1/1-sliders give in a mostly monotonous 1/2 section. While you bring them in later, there are none at the beginning of this section, so I would use some 1/1s at 00:45:391 and 00:47:286 for example.
00:49:496 (2) - This would sound better as two circles, since the three vocals that you follow with 00:49:338 (1,2) are all stressed similar.
About the triplets in this section: Some of them work quite well if you keep them consistent. I'm talking about the ones leading to big white ticks, since they work as a nice transition from one musical phrase to another, for example 00:46:338 (6,7,1) - 00:49:180 (8,9,1) - 00:51:707 (1,2,3) - etc. I would recommend you to replace 00:56:759 (7) - with a triplet as well, for consistency. For the same reason, a note could be added at 00:59:365 - although that would require rearranging the placement here.
The rest of the triplets sound weird in my eyes, to be completely honest. 00:48:549 (3,4,5) - 00:55:812 (1,2,3) - 00:58:654 (3,4,5) - I highly recommend you to remove all of them. They feel like you just use them to use them, not for any musical purpose.
About your usage of extended sliders (aka 3/4-sliders) in this section: After all, the only difference between 1/1 and 3/4 is, that with 3/4 you have the following beat clickable, which gives it more stress than a slidertail. So that means, using an extended slider only makes sense if the note afterwards is very special / loud, otherwise a 1/1-slider is probably the better option. 00:54:865 (3,4) - Here, there is nothing special on 00:55:180 so it would be better to use this rhythm: http://puu.sh/fhc6R/cf96a19ba4.jpg 00:58:023 (1,2) - Same applies here.
01:01:654 (7,1) - This extended slider fits very well, since 01:01:970 - has a very loud vocal that should be clickable. The same should be done at 01:02:286 (3) though, since 01:02:601 is of equal importance.
01:01:180 (4,5,6) - Now you will notice that the loud vocals mentioned in the previous suggestion already exist at this point. The consecutive 1/2-circles 01:00:865 (2,3,4,5,6) - don't really stress these vocals properly. I would replace (4) (5) (6) with a 1/1-slider in this way: http://puu.sh/fhcSf/a845d3b964.jpg If you don't want to ignore the sound at 01:01:338 - a 1/2-repeated slider would also be a good option.
01:03:944 (2) - I would delete this note, since the drums start to play the 1/4 notes at 01:04:023
01:04:496 to 01:12:075 - To be honest, 1/4 is abused here a lot. I understand the idea behind 01:07:654 (4,5,6,7,8,9) and similar ones, and it's very good that you've used these consistently. What doesn't work are the streams: 01:06:075 (3,4,5,6,7) - If you delete those objects and listen to the music, triplets are clearly hearable in this way: http://puu.sh/fhfFd/73cff9a026.jpg Combining these to a stream doesn't many any sense to me. Using the rhythm from my screenshot instead would work, or you can use some sliders: http://puu.sh/fhfNx/966f422cb5.jpg Same applies for 01:08:601 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - (although one slider is already used there) and 01:11:128 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
01:12:075 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - This part is a bit too dense if you ask me. Having a slidertail at 01:12:233 or the triplet at 01:13:496 feels overdone for this very calm pre-chorus section. I'd recommend you to use this rhythm: http://puu.sh/fhgaX/42f15a3590.jpg

I will continue this later. For now I'm a bit tired :c This map definitely has so much potential and I see that many players love it, but before it can be ranked so much needs to be done.. Considering the above mod is only for one diff, only rhythm, and only 1 minute :c
I would be thankful if you can try cleaning up the rhythm in the rest of your diff, since the issues are pretty similar to the ones mentioned above. That would save me some work later.

Beastontour

11 posts

Joined December 2013

Beastontour 2015-02-03T12:43:58+00:00

please stop massacring the beatmap

i liked the original idea the most. this ist now just.. meh i dont know...
the cleaner patterns were better.still, hope for the best..

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