Kuo Kyoka wrote:

why I always forgoting something awww D:
I deeply sorry for the delay long away, I forgot about this and somehow get reminded by checking pending list
So i guess i'm qualifier then

Overall seems it's fine then

[Phantasm Stage]
02:59:419 (179419|0) - move to 2nd for the move balanced. kinda blank around here fixed
03:47:103 (227103|2,227260|2,227418|2,227576|2,227734|2,227892|2,228050|2,228208|2) - somehow I feel it have a different pitch than 03:46:155 (226155|2,226313|2,226471|2,226629|2,226787|2,226945|2) - changed pattern…
04:11:514 (251514|1) - move to 3rd for balance fixed
08:32:058 (512058|0,512058|3) - should be begin on 08:32:141 - fixed. and 08:32:058 - SV moved to 08:32:141 -
08:45:308 (525308|2) - imo, move to 2nd would be more better for hand balance and patterning thing fixed
10:25:307 (625307|1,625390|0) - on here have kick sound, since you only follow kick sound on here so maybe make a rearrange and add more note to fit with this kick sound added notes. 10:30:640 - here also the same
11:52:058 (712058|3,712365|3,712673|1,712827|3,712904|2,712981|3,713134|1) - add clap sound for them
11:53:288 - to 12:03:134 - seems to be need kick sound (soft-hitclap)
11:53:288 (713288|3,713596|3,713904|0,714211|2,714519|2,714827|3,715134|3,715442|1,715750|1,716058|2,716365|2,716673|2,716981|0,717288|0,717596|2,717750|1,717827|2,717904|0,718058|1,718211|2,718519|3,718827|0,719134|1,719442|0,719750|2,720058|2,720365|3,720673|1,720981|1,721288|1,721596|2,721904|1,721981|2,722058|0,722134|1,722211|2,722288|1,722365|0,722442|1,722519|0,722596|2,722673|0,722750|2,722827|1,722904|2,722981|1,723058|0) - I marked them, you only need to add soft-hitclap
no change. 11:52:058 - to 12:03:058 - is not follow kick sound. and i think also that it is important hitsound(hit-normal)
13:44:210 (824210|2,824755|1) - switch them, if you remain 13:44:210 (824210|2) - for pitch like you did for the part before fixed
15:14:319 (914319|0) - unsnapped, should be on 1/6 15:14:337 - fixed
15:55:194 (955194|2) - same pitch with 15:54:766 (954766|3,954873|3,954980|3) - fixed
17:12:936 (1032936|2) - should be 1/6 (17:12:954 - ) fixed
17:23:249 (1043249|1) - should be on 1/6 (17:23:240 - ) fixed
17:56:980 (1076980|2) - move to 2nd, reason i mentioned before fixed
17:57:520 - for outro pattern http://puu.sh/qzztA/84cfc3da30.png fixed

Well, only them left I guess so
Call me soon

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Okay, so the last thing i want to say is

11:03:636 - Change BPM from 70 to 71 fixed. and SV changed *2.14→*2.11

and don't forget to fix preview time snap on 11:04:005 - (it's unsnapped now)

And I don't know why you change preview time, 03:07:313 - in before you put it on here, it's better in my opinion fixed

and move 11:43:442 (703442|2) - to 4th for balance fixed

anymore, there is a lot of poor quality image i found
http://puu.sh/qGGo4/532b8f6926.rar download them and replace it, anymore, it's large the size and scale too but the quality is improved, however, you need to fix the storyboard after you apply these files, if you don't know how to fix it, call me for more information. fixed

that's only, call me later when you done

1. aya-c.jpeg (size changed to 770*480)
2. 5th/momiji-nitori.jpg (SB size 0.625→0.7)