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Haru - Children Festival (Instrumental)

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Hikato
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Hikato
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 18 March 2010 at 19:07:11

Artist: Haru
Title: Children Festival (Instrumental)
Source: Touhou
Tags: Techno Instrumental Viotex
BPM: 140
Filesize: 5687kb
Play Time: 02:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (3.03 stars, 120 notes)
  2. Hard (4.88 stars, 558 notes)
  3. Normal+ (4.27 stars, 332 notes)
Download: Haru - Children Festival (Instrumental)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Made for Nexy's project

Hard - Done
Normal+ - Done
Easy - Done *Remapped*

Modding go! :<

*Please redownload if downloaded before 18th Feb 2010*
Last edited by Hikato , edited 29 times in total.
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Ooh I wish 0_o diff was added too
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Last edited by Teara , edited 2 times in total.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Starring yet.
Kujo
149 posts
Joined July 2009
Kujo
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
heintsi
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Joined January 2009
heintsi
:)
Gabi
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Joined December 2008
Gabi
just taking a quick look at this. it looks fine really so i don't have much to say.

-20 (or -15 your call) to the offset

[E]
omg overall and HP drain hahah you must have forgott to change them :P

spacing seems pretty large, but maybe that is because of the overall that is set right now :P

[N]
lots of tiny breaks D:

02:11:796 (1,1,1) - ask a BAT about this, i think it is considered as spinner spam, but im not sure.
02:18:439 (1,1,1) - ^ (same goes for the rest of these spinner things)

[Hard]
the combo colors in this diff are a little inconsistent. i won't mod them, mainly cause i don't like forcing my combo coloring on people, but also for you to check out if it is right for yourself. for example

00:42:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:48:867 (1,2,3,4,1,2) -

both of those have the same melody/rythm but the second one has a new combo.

00:31:082 (3,4) - is this spacing neccesary? i'd rather you find a different pattern but it's up to you

like i said, i didn't take a closer look, mainly cause everything looks pretty nice, otehr then that.....

i love this song, it is so good, also great map, have a pink stars
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Hikato

Gabi wrote:

[E]
omg overall and HP drain hahah you must have forgott to change them :P Lmao >_< fixed.

[H]
00:31:082 (3,4) - is this spacing neccesary? i'd rather you find a different pattern but it's up to you D: left.

i love this song, it is so good, also great map, have a pink stars
Thanks for modding and the <3 pink star. ^_^
Hanyuu
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Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
[S]tar :)
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Hikato
Fixes done, kudosu awarded. Thanks for modding. :)
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
Haru ~ :oops:
Takuma
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Takuma
in general, the hitsounds are a bit messy.. as in they sometimes don't go with the music and feel randomly placed at certain points. :\ ps kiai does not fit well in this map @__@;

hard:
02:43:281 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ugly stack. :( check in-game.

normal:
why are there so many breaks here? ;__;

orzstar
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Hikato
Woo~ revived and updated! :)
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
vivere
Easy

01:01:281 untill 01:02:567- I recommend a slider

02:25:281- would have to lift a little slider (looks better if they separated a bit) ;)
02:32:138- ^
02:37:710- ^

Normal

I watched this very slowly and everything ok :| (though lacks the odd break)

Hard

02:03:638- has to be separated as the slider 1 Circle 2
02:48:852-I have a doubt here, this right of the slider protruding grid? :oops:


I give you a star :P
jericho2442
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jericho2442
[Easy]
it feels like most of the combos are not in pattern to me so it feels kinda random :/
like i think a new combo would go much better here 01:20:138 (5) - then leaving it to continue without one .

just go through the map and my advice is to try and make your combo's have more of a pattern to them

[Normal]
00:36:852 (1,2,3,4) - 4 is too far out of line for it to be classed as nazi, its just plain ugly :/, line 4 up with the end of the slider or line the whole combo up with 4, it looks much better that way
00:57:424 (4,5,6,1) - take the new combo off (1) and put it onto (4) then 00:59:138 (2) - new combo, this way it makes more sence
01:05:567 (6) - new combo
......>_> soo many random changes in combo style :/, your choice but i REALLY think you need to make more of a readable pattern to your combos
02:11:781 (1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1) - ...........this is waaaay too much spinner spam :/
02:57:852 (1,2,3) - spacing is messed up, fix spacing
03:20:138 (1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1) - .................you kno what im gonna say ;)
03:58:067 (1) - end at 04:00:852 - insted of the blue tick, as it is, its out of time

[Hard]
00:46:495 (7,8,9) - this pattern feel unnatural to play, maybe map this differnt? :/
01:28:067 (11) - new combo
02:24:638 (1) - spinner must make 2000, this does not

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i do see more problems in the maps than i have pointed out, but these are the ones what i feel really affect playing quality of the maps :/

anyway even though there is quite a few probs these maps are still very fun to play so have a star :)
Hikato
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Topic Starter
Hikato
Updated~
Leorda
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Leorda
Hello

[Easy]
00:33:424 (4) - Make parallel?
00:35:567 (1) - Allign with 5, overlapped by previous slider is bad
00:50:567 (2) - Allign with 2, do not this object OVERLAPPED with slider
00:50:995 (3) - Make parallel?
01:05:138 (1) - Make it like this? (do you like it?)

01:23:138 (1) - Allign with 2 (end of slider), not good if this object overlapped with previous slider
01:24:424 (3) - Make symetric?
02:14:995 (3) - Make parallel
02:25:281 (2) - Move this to the right place, don't overlapped with previous object

[Normal]
00:58:281 (4) - Make parallel?
01:13:710 (x) - Add note with clap hitsound?
02:08:138 (5) - Allign with 4 from left, overlapped by previous slider is bad to see
02:28:281 (1,2) - Move this to the right place, overlapped by previous slider is bad to see
02:29:995 (1) - ^
04:06:210 (5) - Allign with 4 (end of slider) from up, not good if this object overlapped with previous slider

[Hard]
01:04:495 (3) - Move to the right place, maybe it's hidden if overlapped with previous slider
01:12:209 (2) - ^
01:17:352 (2) - ^
01:31:924 (1) - ^

GREAT MAP!
STAR
Hikato
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Topic Starter
Hikato
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
fartownik
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fartownik
[Easy]
02:23:567 (1) - Expand spinner to 02:23:567?

[Normal]
01:03:852 (2,3) - Spacing
03:01:710 (3,1) - Spacing.

[Hard]
01:52:495 (1,2) - Swap new combo.
02:37:710 (2) - The lonely whistle on the slider end doesn't fit at all :P Delete it.
02:59:138 (7,1) - It might be just me, but I got confused in this place ;) You can move it left a bit, just a suggestion.

There's no much issues, just as expected :P
Great map :) +Star.
Hikato
444 posts
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Topic Starter
Hikato
Updated~ Thanks. :D
oratorio_old
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oratorio_old
Star?
mosluv
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mosluv
Remove "Touhou" from the tags. It's fine being only in the source.

Normal:
Already said I hated the whole thing, but can you at least end it at 03:20:138.

You can insert breaks at these points:
01:44:138 to 01:55:281
02:52:710 to 02:59:352

Hard:
00:45:852 (6) - Ugly slider. Curve it more or make it go a different direction; w/e you can think of.
01:03:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can come up with a better pattern.
01:06:424 (4) - Move this up a bit so the 3 is in the middle of the curve?
01:07:924 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Re-stack.
01:13:281 (4) - Curve or move this up a bit so the end of 3 is in the middle of the curve?
01:23:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - You can come up with a better pattern.
01:27:852 (x) - Add note? If you do this remove 01:28:174 (2) and see if you like how it sounds.
01:28:067 (1,2,3) - Would look better if moved more toward the middle, so the 2 is on the middle grid line.
01:40:067 (3,4,5,6) - These break the slow-going flow you had. Think of a better way to speed up to this part.
02:06:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - You can come up with a better pattern.
02:22:710 (x) - Add note?
02:24:852 (1,2,3) - You can come up with a better pattern.
02:29:138 (4) - Bad positioning.
02:33:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can come up with a better pattern.
02:45:638 (1,2) - Curve these sliders a bit more. Looks really ugly to me ;o.
03:01:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can come up with a better pattern.
03:11:567 (1) - Curve more like you did with 03:10:281 (1).
04:01:281 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - You can come up with a better pattern.
04:06:424 (1) - Add finish?

:?
Hikato
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Topic Starter
Hikato
Updated.
dkey
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dkey
+Star :)
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Joined July 2008
Doomsday
The ZUN original of this is epic. This version isn't no slouch either

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these .

  1. Im fairly the sure the title is "Children's Festival". Also, the original ZUN track is called "Innocent Treasures ~ Kid's Festival". Perhaps you should stick to Children's Festival to keep it consistent with the project I guess
[EASY]

Looks good

[NORMAL]

01:09:852 (1) - Is there something better you could put here. This short spinner out of nowhere is a bit jarring.
02:11:781 (1,1,1) - Long streams of spinners get boring after a while. Map something else here perhaps?
02:18:424 (1,1,1) - ^
03:20:138 (1,1,1) - ^ (This one makes more sense than the others though, I'll give it that)
03:26:995 (1,1,1) - ^

A little hard for a normal, but since theres an easy, I can't fault it on that :p

[HARD]

00:31:281 (3,1) - This jump doesn't make sense to me (Yeah, I'm nazi'ing your jumps again ._.)
01:07:924 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This bit actually confused me on my first run. Perhaps set this out so they are not overlapping each other?
02:18:424 (1) - Another odd short spinner. Put something else here?

Nice. I could nazi the jumps in Hard a bit more but it doesn't really need it.

Starred
Shulin
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Shulin
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Hikato
Updated.
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Almost missed this. should've said this earlier :( .

You're Background is 1280x960, which is too big. 1024x768 is the maximum size for backgrounds.
fix that, and I'll protobubble
Hikato
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Topic Starter
Hikato
BG resized.
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Doomsday
There we go

Protobubbled
Natteke
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Natteke
<3
Chacha17
501 posts
Joined April 2009
Chacha17
Uhh, please remove 'Instrumental' in the tags because it's already in the title of the song

nazi

[Hard]

01:27:852 (1,2,3) - these beats don't look symmetrical :o
03:54:424 (3) - move one grid up?
03:55:067 (4,5,6,1,2) - this pattern is somewhat hard to read :<

those are only suggestions, you may completely ignore them.

Here you go.
daigurren
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Joined January 2010
daigurren
nice map :)
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
Look at Chacha's modding before look at mine.

[Overall]

Remove file .osb and full submit.

[Difficulties]

[Normal]

Rename it to Normal+. 4,30 stars are too much for a normal, really.

01:09:852 (1,1,2) - Too evil for a normal and a bit hard to read.

That's all. SS'd Hard at first test ~
Hikato
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Topic Starter
Hikato
Sorry, seems I forgot to upload after fixing before. Everything fixed as it should be now.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
Good now.

Bubbled~
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Great map~
Ranked!
Tonoko
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Tonoko
It's a long long time ;)
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