yanaginagi - Tokohana [Osu|Taiko] · forum

HabiHolic

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Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2014-04-22T02:57:08+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014년 11월 10일 월요일 at 오후 6:56:02

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Tokohana
Source: ブラック・ブレット
Tags: black bullet kinema citrus ending no_gu KantoKun mingmichael
BPM: 150
Filesize: 15632kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.58 stars, 90 notes)
Gu's Insane (4.38 stars, 266 notes)
Hard (3.28 stars, 214 notes)
Insane (4.73 stars, 292 notes)
Kanto's Insane (4.06 stars, 238 notes)
m1ng's Muzukashii (2.77 stars, 256 notes)
m1ng's Oni (3.69 stars, 348 notes)
Normal (1.93 stars, 126 notes)

Download: yanaginagi - Tokohana
Download: yanaginagi - Tokohana (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 15th Ranked Beatmap
2nd yanaginagi map~
very very nice song!! and many ranked map
Enjoy~

Map Set

Easy - By. HabiHolic (Done)

Normal - By. HabiHolic (Done)

Hard - HabiHolic (Done)

Insane - By. HabiHolic (Done)

Kanto's Insane - By. KantoKun (Done) Thank you KantoKun^^

Gu's Insane - By. No_Gu (Done) Thank you No_Gu^^

m1ng's Muzukashii - By. mingmichael (Done) Thank you mingmichael^^

m1ng's Oni - By. mingmichael (Done) Thank you mingmichael^^

Last edited by HabiHolic 2014-11-12T00:37:20+00:00, edited 47 times in total.

S o a p

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S o a p 2014-04-24T06:08:43+00:00

S o a p's Normal

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DeletedUser_3044645 2014-04-24T20:26:48+00:00

blub

Piine

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Piine 2014-04-24T20:29:30+00:00

Good lucky

~

HabiHolic

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Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2014-04-25T00:40:32+00:00

No Dap wrote:
blub

Thanks star No Dap!!!

smallboat

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Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-04-25T02:06:22+00:00

Short hitsound suggest

2014-04-25 09:24 HabiHolic: S.boat!
2014-04-25 09:24 HabiHolic: Hi!!
2014-04-25 09:24 HabiHolic: oromoder
2014-04-25 09:24 HabiHolic: pro*
2014-04-25 09:24 smallboat: lol
2014-04-25 09:24 smallboat: nono I"m no pro

2014-04-25 09:24 smallboat: hihi
2014-04-25 09:25 HabiHolic: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/410051 Jin ft. MARiA from GARNiDELiA - daze (TV Size) [Habi's Insane]]
2014-04-25 09:25 HabiHolic: My GD Testplay poddible?
2014-04-25 09:25 HabiHolic: possible*
2014-04-25 09:27 smallboat: testplay req?
2014-04-25 09:28 HabiHolic: yes
2014-04-25 09:30 smallboat: sure,but I "m not good at playing ins,then I try to play it 0.0
2014-04-25 09:30 HabiHolic: oh np!!
2014-04-25 09:31 HabiHolic: thanks!
2014-04-25 09:31 smallboat: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/408298 yanaginagi - Tokohana (TV Size)]
2014-04-25 09:35 HabiHolic: Good play~
2014-04-25 09:36 smallboat: sure,I have played many times 0.0
2014-04-25 09:38 smallboat: so many mapper map this song..
2014-04-25 09:38 smallboat: I"m have mod this map from xchippy
2014-04-25 09:41 smallboat: internet broken
2014-04-25 09:42 smallboat: 00:05:500 (6) - feel no need add whistle here, you can follow vocal as the same 00:04:900 (5) , so you can add 00:05:700 (7) head
2014-04-25 09:43 HabiHolic: ok!
2014-04-25 09:43 HabiHolic: Fixed
2014-04-25 09:44 smallboat: 00:52:310 (7) - red line have clap hitsound, try to listen it?
2014-04-25 09:45 smallboat: I think can add clap here
2014-04-25 09:45 HabiHolic: sure
2014-04-25 09:45 HabiHolic: Fixed
2014-04-25 09:50 smallboat: 01:21:423 (1) - this part..as the same my ex diff
2014-04-25 09:50 smallboat: xD
2014-04-25 09:51 HabiHolic: i think so that's ok
2014-04-25 09:51 HabiHolic: don'T fIXED
2014-04-25 09:51 HabiHolic: Fixed
2014-04-25 09:51 smallboat: nono,just say
2014-04-25 09:51 smallboat:

2014-04-25 09:52 smallboat: It"s ok
2014-04-25 09:52 HabiHolic: ㅇㅅㅇ
2014-04-25 09:52 HabiHolic: okl
2014-04-25 09:54 smallboat: 01:23:553 (9) - The vocal is start here,so I think you can use 2revese here, make the slider head = vocal head
2014-04-25 09:55 HabiHolic: not flow vocal
2014-04-25 09:55 HabiHolic: drum flow
2014-04-25 09:57 smallboat: wait, I try to place rhythm here..

2014-04-25 09:58 smallboat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544217
2014-04-25 09:59 HabiHolic: i think that's ok
2014-04-25 09:59 HabiHolic: no Fixed
2014-04-25 09:59 smallboat: okay,
2014-04-25 10:01 smallboat: Last,and the flow is okay , no hard to read part,imo
2014-04-25 10:01 smallboat: done
2014-04-25 10:01 HabiHolic: Thanks Help!!
2014-04-25 10:01 smallboat: sorry just help hitsound fixed

HabiHolic

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Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2014-04-25T02:08:48+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Short hitsound suggest
2014-04-25 09:24 HabiHolic: S.boat!
2014-04-25 09:24 HabiHolic: Hi!!
2014-04-25 09:24 HabiHolic: oromoder
2014-04-25 09:24 HabiHolic: pro*
2014-04-25 09:24 smallboat: lol
2014-04-25 09:24 smallboat: nono I"m no pro
2014-04-25 09:24 smallboat: hihi
2014-04-25 09:25 HabiHolic: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/410051 Jin ft. MARiA from GARNiDELiA - daze (TV Size) [Habi's Insane]]
2014-04-25 09:25 HabiHolic: My GD Testplay poddible?
2014-04-25 09:25 HabiHolic: possible*
2014-04-25 09:27 smallboat: testplay req?
2014-04-25 09:28 HabiHolic: yes
2014-04-25 09:30 smallboat: sure,but I "m not good at playing ins,then I try to play it 0.0
2014-04-25 09:30 HabiHolic: oh np!!
2014-04-25 09:31 HabiHolic: thanks!
2014-04-25 09:31 smallboat: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/408298 yanaginagi - Tokohana (TV Size)]
2014-04-25 09:35 HabiHolic: Good play~
2014-04-25 09:36 smallboat: sure,I have played many times 0.0
2014-04-25 09:38 smallboat: so many mapper map this song..
2014-04-25 09:38 smallboat: I"m have mod this map from xchippy
2014-04-25 09:41 smallboat: internet broken
2014-04-25 09:42 smallboat: 00:05:500 (6) - feel no need add whistle here, you can follow vocal as the same 00:04:900 (5) , so you can add 00:05:700 (7) head
2014-04-25 09:43 HabiHolic: ok!
2014-04-25 09:43 HabiHolic: Fixed
2014-04-25 09:44 smallboat: 00:52:310 (7) - red line have clap hitsound, try to listen it?
2014-04-25 09:45 smallboat: I think can add clap here
2014-04-25 09:45 HabiHolic: sure
2014-04-25 09:45 HabiHolic: Fixed
2014-04-25 09:50 smallboat: 01:21:423 (1) - this part..as the same my ex diff
2014-04-25 09:50 smallboat: xD
2014-04-25 09:51 HabiHolic: i think so that's ok
2014-04-25 09:51 HabiHolic: don'T fIXED
2014-04-25 09:51 HabiHolic: Fixed
2014-04-25 09:51 smallboat: nono,just say
2014-04-25 09:51 smallboat:
2014-04-25 09:52 smallboat: It"s ok
2014-04-25 09:52 HabiHolic: ㅇㅅㅇ
2014-04-25 09:52 HabiHolic: okl
2014-04-25 09:54 smallboat: 01:23:553 (9) - The vocal is start here,so I think you can use 2revese here, make the slider head = vocal head
2014-04-25 09:55 HabiHolic: not flow vocal
2014-04-25 09:55 HabiHolic: drum flow
2014-04-25 09:57 smallboat: wait, I try to place rhythm here..
2014-04-25 09:58 smallboat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544217
2014-04-25 09:59 HabiHolic: i think that's ok
2014-04-25 09:59 HabiHolic: no Fixed
2014-04-25 09:59 smallboat: okay,
2014-04-25 10:01 smallboat: Last,and the flow is okay , no hard to read part,imo
2014-04-25 10:01 smallboat: done
2014-04-25 10:01 HabiHolic: Thanks Help!!
2014-04-25 10:01 smallboat: sorry just help hitsound fixed

Thanks S.Boat!!!

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DeletedUser_3044645 2014-04-25T02:12:33+00:00

펭귄님 00:44:855 - 클랩없음

mingmichael

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mingmichael 2014-04-27T01:48:43+00:00

sorryy i am late >.<

m1ng's Muzukashii
m1ng's Oni

Enon

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined November 2012

Enon 2014-04-27T11:15:24+00:00

고수홀릭

굇홀릭

씹캐리홀릭

mingmichael

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mingmichael 2014-04-28T09:09:55+00:00

m1ng's Muzukashii
m1ng's Oni
i just changed some of my patterns~ please update ww

No_Gu

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No_Gu 2014-05-02T02:53:06+00:00

http://puu.sh/8vDVQ.rar
done

HabiHolic

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Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2014-05-02T02:59:49+00:00

Move Pending~

Beige

Elite Mapper

2,192 posts

Joined February 2011

Beige 2014-05-02T15:51:46+00:00

As your request!

[General]

Tag 넣는거 잊으셨군요, Koreapenguin, No_Gu, S_o_a_p, mingmichael 을 추가해주세요~

그리고 마지막에 끝내는 시간이 동일한게 좋은 것 같습니다. (겟난은 예외하셔도 되고..)

[Easy]

slidertick을 힛사로 하면 좋을 것 같아요.

00:05:100 (3) - 00:03:500 (1) - 과 스택 시켜주세요~

00:21:778 (1,2) - 개인적 의견이지만, 디스턴스가 너무 뒤죽박죽인것 같습니다. 맞춰주세요.

00:33:849 (2) - 전체 휘슬 제거

00:44:500 (1) - 마지막 점을 (36,164)로 옮겨주세요

00:47:340 (1) - 오른쪽으로 2칸만

01:26:748 (2) - 디스턴스 1.1x로 맞춰주세요.

[Normal]

So many spins... I don't want to command these patterns...

Please Add some notes like 00:00:300 (1) - that part, And correspond distance 1.20x

01:04:381 (2) - NC

01:10:062 (1) - Really weird rhythm rlly, rlly strange. Please fix another patterns.

01:15:742 (1) - ^

[Hard]

00:20:358 (1) - 휘슬 추가

00:35:801 (1,2,3) - (1)에 NC를 제거하셔서 슬라이더 턴으로 해보세요.
연타로 게다가 1/1을 쉬게 되버리면 치기 되게 어렵습니다. o_o...

00:44:855 (1) - 클랩 추가

01:25:683 (2,3) - ctrl + G 하셔서 바꾸시면 더 좋은 흐름을!

ㅇㅅㅇbb

[Insane]

00:11:300 (1) - 너무 뜬금포로 멀어진 것 같습니다. 조금만 가까이...

00:20:358 (1) - 앞 부분 휘슬 추가

General 참고하세요~ 진짜 잘 만드심...

[Gu's Insane]

00:31:009 (4) - Unsnapped.

Really Fine : D

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-05-12T18:24:27+00:00

[General]

The offset seems a little late to me. Atleast, it does sound very wrong when playing through your maps. I suggest you to call someone for a timing check, as I can't do it 100% accurate.
Widescreen Support is not needed in this mapset, as it has no storyboard. Please disable it.
You could use some custom colours fitting to the background of your mapset :3 Don't use very dark ones though, as they might be hard to see in front of the dark parts of your background. Maybe use a setup like this:
Colours
Code
```
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,180,64
Combo2 : 192,192,192
Combo3 : 255,106,34
Combo4 : 139,109,135
```
Maybe add some more tags such as "Rentaro" and "Kagetane" (which are the main characters) and maybe also "Anime", as people might search for these? The most important ones are the names of the guest mappers though!

[Easy]

Rhythm/Flow/Aesthetic

00:01:900 (3,4,1) - You could move (4) and (1) more down (as you can see in the screenshot) to get a better transition here. Newbies follow the slider's paths exactly, or atleast try to do it, so it's more intuitive for them to move more downwards after (3).
Example
00:05:100 (3) - It would improve the aesthetic and also the structure of your map when this was actually stacked on 00:03:500 (1)'s head. It's not a problem of readability for newbies either.
Example
00:07:900 (2) - Very noticable spacing difference (to the previous and to the following object). Consider to move this circle a bit to fix it.
00:09:500 (4) - Same.
00:21:778 (1,2) - You could improve this pattern. Currently, the spacings are sometimes very high (1,18) or very low (1,04), which makes it look untidy. Also, the curvy transition here 00:20:358 (3,4,1) could be better (1 could be placed more upwards to improve it). Lastly, 00:22:488 (2) could blanket the tail of (1). See how this would look:
Example
Code
```
334,327,21778,6,0,P|342:283|330:231,1,89.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,217,22488,2,0,P|410:174|371:141,1,89.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
00:25:683 (2) - Move to (300|223) to make the transition 00:24:618 (1,2,3) a little bit better.
Example
00:37:754 (2) - Move it to (409|115), again to get a better transition for these 00:35:979 (1,2,3)
Example
00:40:239 (3) - It would be cool if the slider was less curvy, so it fits better to the one afterwards, something like this:
Example
00:41:659 (1) - The spacing for this object is very low. Consider to fix it.
00:44:500 (1) - This slider breaks the flow in my opinion. It's too complex flow for an Easy diff. Try something like this instead:
Example
00:47:340 (1) - The spacing is very high. Spacing changes are not good in Easys and there's no special reason to have such a big one here. Move this object, so the spacing to the previous and following one are both 1,1x.
00:50:180 (1,2,3) - Again, the flow seems a little bit broken. Consider to move (2) more upwards, until the spacing is correct again. Then rotate (3) by 10° (selection center). It will have a much better flow :b
Example
01:10:062 (1) - The rhythm can be improved here. If you use a 3/2-slider + a circle, as seen in the screenshot, it will fit the music much better. In my opinion, the vocals at 01:10:594 need to be emphasized here.
Example
01:17:872 (4) - This object doesn't really fit to the flow of the pattern, and it doesn't look very good at the moment. I suggest you to do it like this:
Example
Code
```
464,328,77872,2,0,P|488:300|496:240,1,89.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
01:26:748 (2) - Why is the spacing so high? Consider to move this, so it looks somehow like this:
Example
NCs/Hitsounds
00:09:900 (5) - NC here? You also got one here 00:03:500 (1), and otherwise the combo is quite long (more than 2 measures is really much)
00:33:849 (2) - I don't know if the sliderwhistle was on purpose, but it doesn't fit very well in my opinion and seems quite random.
01:07:222 (5) - NC? The combo is quite long, and you placed an NC on every second measure all the time before.
01:12:902 (4) - Same.
Opinion
Cool ^^ I think your flow can be improved, but I listed everything that I noticed. You don't have so much freedom with flow in an Easy, because the newbies can't play very good lol That's why there is so much that would work in a Hard diff or in an Insane diff but doesn't work here for me. The rest is nice! Well done :3

[S o a p's Normal]

I modded this diff irc.
Mod
2014-05-12 16:57 Desperate-kun: hi ^^
2014-05-12 16:59 S o a p: hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
2014-05-12 16:59 Desperate-kun: i'm currently modding /np
2014-05-12 16:59 Desperate-kun: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/410436 yanaginagi - Tokohana (TV Size) [S o a p's Normal]]
2014-05-12 16:59 Desperate-kun: do you have time for irc? :3
2014-05-12 16:59 Desperate-kun: because i'd prefer that
2014-05-12 17:00 S o a p: T____________________T
2014-05-12 17:00 S o a p: OH MY BAD ENGLISH
2014-05-12 17:00 Desperate-kun: yes but, i can explain things better for you to understand... if i write in the forum you can't ask questions :b
2014-05-12 17:01 S o a p: o.o
2014-05-12 17:01 S o a p: @_@
2014-05-12 17:01 S o a p: let me guess what's your mean (x
2014-05-12 17:02 Desperate-kun: so, should i mod irc?
2014-05-12 17:03 S o a p: ummm maybe you can
2014-05-12 17:03 Desperate-kun: ok , first of all
2014-05-12 17:03 Desperate-kun: all the other diffs have a break in kiai
2014-05-12 17:03 Desperate-kun: http://puu.sh/8JqNt.jpg
2014-05-12 17:04 S o a p: sure
2014-05-12 17:04 Desperate-kun: 01:15:032 - end kiai here
2014-05-12 17:04 Desperate-kun: 01:15:742 - start again here
2014-05-12 17:04 S o a p: wait...
2014-05-12 17:04 S o a p: ;w; i need redownload
2014-05-12 17:05 Desperate-kun: ok
2014-05-12 17:06 S o a p: done~
2014-05-12 17:06 Desperate-kun: then, why is the HP drain set to 5?
2014-05-12 17:06 Desperate-kun: the Hard diff has also 5
2014-05-12 17:07 Desperate-kun: so it would be better to use 4 or 3
2014-05-12 17:07 S o a p: ok
2014-05-12 17:07 S o a p: 5->3
2014-05-12 17:07 Desperate-kun: ok :3
2014-05-12 17:07 Desperate-kun: the most important big problem i have
2014-05-12 17:07 Desperate-kun: there are soo many spinners
2014-05-12 17:08 Desperate-kun: especially at the beginning
2014-05-12 17:08 S o a p: ;_;
2014-05-12 17:08 Desperate-kun: spinners are the hardest to play for newbies
2014-05-12 17:08 Desperate-kun: so they might not enjoy to play it
2014-05-12 17:09 S o a p: maybe you are right
2014-05-12 17:09 Desperate-kun: 00:00:300 (1) - this
2014-05-12 17:09 S o a p: but how to map 00:00:300 - ~00:17:900 -
2014-05-12 17:09 S o a p: T——————————————T
2014-05-12 17:09 Desperate-kun: you could map that out
2014-05-12 17:09 Desperate-kun: look at the Easy
2014-05-12 17:09 Desperate-kun: but don't do it now
2014-05-12 17:09 Desperate-kun: but you can map that out
2014-05-12 17:10 S o a p: i think EZ is not so good o.O
2014-05-12 17:10 Desperate-kun: ok, then don't change it
2014-05-12 17:10 Desperate-kun: but
2014-05-12 17:10 Desperate-kun: 00:00:300 (1) -
2014-05-12 17:10 Desperate-kun: end it at
2014-05-12 17:10 Desperate-kun: 00:04:900 -
2014-05-12 17:10 Desperate-kun: for vocals?
2014-05-12 17:10 Desperate-kun: it sounds much better
2014-05-12 17:11 Desperate-kun: or here 00:05:700 -
2014-05-12 17:13 S o a p: ok
2014-05-12 17:13 S o a p: done~
2014-05-12 17:13 Desperate-kun: 00:06:900 (1) - next one
2014-05-12 17:13 Desperate-kun: 00:00:300 (1) - starts at 00:00:300 - ----> 00:06:900 (1) - should start at 00:06:700 -
2014-05-12 17:15 S o a p: done -3-
2014-05-12 17:15 Desperate-kun: ok
2014-05-12 17:15 Desperate-kun: see this:
2014-05-12 17:15 Desperate-kun: http://puu.sh/8Jrj4
2014-05-12 17:15 Desperate-kun: understand that?
2014-05-12 17:16 S o a p: wow
2014-05-12 17:16 S o a p: yes
2014-05-12 17:16 Desperate-kun: 00:13:100 (1,1) -
2014-05-12 17:16 Desperate-kun: then this is wrong
2014-05-12 17:16 Desperate-kun: http://puu.sh/8Jrvz.jpg
2014-05-12 17:17 Desperate-kun: 00:14:700 (1,1) - and this too
2014-05-12 17:17 S o a p: why o.o
2014-05-12 17:17 Desperate-kun: because the sound is at the white line
2014-05-12 17:17 Desperate-kun: and not at the blue line
2014-05-12 17:17 Desperate-kun: so the spinner should END at the white line, and not start there
2014-05-12 17:18 S o a p: ummmm.....
2014-05-12 17:18 Desperate-kun: you have that http://puu.sh/8JrCu.jpg
2014-05-12 17:19 Desperate-kun: but this http://puu.sh/8JrDf.jpg would be better
2014-05-12 17:19 S o a p: sound is start at white line,so why i cant start at the white line?@_@
2014-05-12 17:20 Desperate-kun: because it sounds strange ingame. you can hear a sound at the end of the spinner, not at the start
2014-05-12 17:20 Desperate-kun: so if you place more then 1 spinner in a row, you have to end them at the white lines
2014-05-12 17:20 Desperate-kun: and start after the white line
2014-05-12 17:21 S o a p: @_@
2014-05-12 17:21 S o a p: ok
2014-05-12 17:22 Desperate-kun: ok
2014-05-12 17:22 Desperate-kun: do you use distance spacing for mapping?
2014-05-12 17:23 S o a p: @_@yes
2014-05-12 17:23 Desperate-kun: but it is very different
2014-05-12 17:23 Desperate-kun: 00:20:358 (3) - for example, here it is 1,4
2014-05-12 17:23 S o a p: @_@hmmm..maybe no
2014-05-12 17:23 Desperate-kun: 00:24:618 (4) -
2014-05-12 17:23 Desperate-kun: but here is 1,2
2014-05-12 17:24 Desperate-kun: but for Normal, it's better to use distance snap
2014-05-12 17:24 Desperate-kun: newbies don't understand different distances
2014-05-12 17:26 Desperate-kun: ok?
2014-05-12 17:26 Desperate-kun: you can fix it later if you want
2014-05-12 17:26 Desperate-kun: the spacing
2014-05-12 17:26 Desperate-kun: because it's hard to do now o:
2014-05-12 17:27 S o a p: ;w;
2014-05-12 17:27 S o a p: ill fix it
2014-05-12 17:27 S o a p: '
2014-05-12 17:27 Desperate-kun: ok
2014-05-12 17:27 Desperate-kun: 01:03:316 (1) -
2014-05-12 17:28 Desperate-kun: it should end at 01:04:026 -
2014-05-12 17:28 Desperate-kun: because the vocals
2014-05-12 17:28 Desperate-kun: there is nothing at 01:04:204 -
2014-05-12 17:30 S o a p: o.o
2014-05-12 17:30 S o a p: i think it's ok? -3-
2014-05-12 17:30 Desperate-kun: no. you will not rank it like that
2014-05-12 17:30 Desperate-kun: the BATs will tell you as well
2014-05-12 17:30 Desperate-kun: but ok.. if you don't want to change it don't do it
2014-05-12 17:31 S o a p: o.o...because i'm not follow vocal at this time...
2014-05-12 17:32 Desperate-kun: but what do you follow?
2014-05-12 17:32 Desperate-kun: there is nothing at the red line
2014-05-12 17:32 S o a p: follow nothing sound
2014-05-12 17:32 S o a p: ._.
2014-05-12 17:32 Desperate-kun: that's unrankable
2014-05-12 17:32 Desperate-kun: but ok
2014-05-12 17:32 Desperate-kun: leave it ^^
2014-05-12 17:33 S o a p: ;w;
2014-05-12 17:33 S o a p: anything else?
2014-05-12 17:33 Desperate-kun: yes
2014-05-12 17:33 Desperate-kun: 01:10:062 (1) -
2014-05-12 17:33 Desperate-kun: why is the repeat on a blue line?
2014-05-12 17:34 S o a p: !!!
2014-05-12 17:34 Desperate-kun: 01:11:482 (3) - and here again?
2014-05-12 17:34 S o a p: it's a mistake
2014-05-12 17:34 Desperate-kun: ok
2014-05-12 17:34 Desperate-kun: http://puu.sh/8JsyH.jpg
2014-05-12 17:34 Desperate-kun: this would be a better rhythm
2014-05-12 17:35 S o a p: good idea -3-
2014-05-12 17:36 Desperate-kun: 01:15:742 (1) -
2014-05-12 17:36 Desperate-kun: this too
2014-05-12 17:37 S o a p: ._.done
2014-05-12 17:37 Desperate-kun: ok
2014-05-12 17:39 Desperate-kun: the rest is fine for now
2014-05-12 17:39 Desperate-kun: that were the biggest problems i can find
2014-05-12 17:39 Desperate-kun: but sorry, i enjoy your insanes and hards
2014-05-12 17:39 Desperate-kun: but this normal is not really good ;w;
2014-05-12 17:40 S o a p: when i make normal...i have soooooooooo long time whitou mapping
2014-05-12 17:40 S o a p: *without
2014-05-12 17:41 Desperate-kun: ok
2014-05-12 17:41 Desperate-kun: i understand that
2014-05-12 17:41 S o a p: ....this normal is shit.....i see it
2014-05-12 17:41 Desperate-kun: yeah but if you fix the things i mentioned
2014-05-12 17:41 Desperate-kun: it will be rankable
2014-05-12 17:41 Desperate-kun: and with more mods, it will be ok
2014-05-12 17:41 Desperate-kun: :3 don't give up ^^
2014-05-12 17:42 S o a p: I WILL REMAP@_@
2014-05-12 17:42 Desperate-kun: ok xD if you want it
2014-05-12 17:42 Desperate-kun: then do it ^^
2014-05-12 17:42 Desperate-kun: use spacing though
2014-05-12 17:42 S o a p: -3-~thanks for your mod
2014-05-12 17:43 Desperate-kun: no problem
2014-05-12 17:43 Desperate-kun: :3

[K.Penguin's Hard]

00:05:500 (6) - I'd move this whistle to the head of 00:05:700 (7). The sound is much more emphasized, and it fits better to your whistle pattern in this section.
00:11:300 (1) - Maybe it would be better if the slider ended at 00:13:100 (1) . The transition to the spinner sounds better to me then. Also, it would be consistent with the Insane diffs.
00:31:719 (5) - It's probably intentional, but I don't see a reason why this shouldn't be stack on the end of 00:31:009 (3).
01:24:795 (2,3,1) - It's generally not a good idea to stack multiple objects which don't have the same gap between them in the music. It just plays weird, so it would be better to do something like this with (2):
Example
Wow, really impressive Hard! I didn't find many issues at all :3 I especially love your use of 1/2-stacks! Sometimes, the jumps are placed a little bit randomly though in my opinion. For example in this section 00:18:938 : Well, it doesn't seem too random, but you seem to use jumps once and then you use 1/2-stacks instead, which is the exact opposite of movement in my opinion. But well, it's only minor :3

[Gu's Insane]

00:00:300 (1,2,3) - You could turn this into a perfect triangle easily. Just move (3) to 191|271
00:00:900 - I personally don't like your placement in this section. I'm writing this in italic letters, because it's nothing you should fix, but I just want to tell you my opinion. The jumps to these sliders 00:01:700 (1) are very high (the maximum is 7,0x distance snap) and together with the antijumps before (circles stacked on slider's ends) it feels even bigger. The problem is that this section is very calm, so I would not do this myself, as it's kind of over the top imo.
00:05:700 (3) - This slider should definitely end at 00:06:700! You are missing such an important beat. You are not following the vocals either, as they obviously end around here 00:06:700 as well. If you change it, 00:06:900 you could fill that gap out with a circle, or just leave it like this, because I think it fits quite well o:
00:19:648 (4,5,6,7) - You could make it a perfect square ^^ It would look much better :b
00:20:358 (1) - I'd use a 1/2-slider here instead. There's not really anything at the blue line.
00:21:245 (4,5,6) - Maybe you could make it a perfect triangle again?
00:25:683 (5,6) - I would map the blue tick between those. You can hear the triplet in the music clearly, and it would be very fitting to the 1/1-gap afterwards.
00:31:009 (4) - Object's End is not snapped!
Awesome, as always! :3

[Insane]

00:00:300 - The spacing in the section starting here seems pretty random to me. I'd definitely prefer to have a consistent spacing here.
00:04:900 (5,6,7) - It feels strange to follow the path of this slider after the (almost) linear transition leading to it. I suggest to move it more down, like this:
Example
00:11:300 (1) - This jump was very unexpected and is overdone imo. At the end, this is still a calm section. Move this slider more downwards will probably help.
00:26:038 (1) - The flow leading to this object is quite broken in my opinion. The player has to slow down drastically after the jump (00:25:683 (5,6) - ). I suggest to move (1) more to the right, something like this maybe:
Example
00:33:139 (1) - I'd ctrl+g this slider. Currently, you have to slow down very much after this jump 00:32:429 (7,8), if you don't want to miss 00:33:139 (1). With my version, it would create a nice zig-zag-pattern. Also, the transition to the following objects will be nice as well!
00:36:689 (6) - You could give this slider a different shape, like you can see in my screenshot. It would be a better transition from 00:36:511 (5) to 00:37:044 (7).
Example
01:16:807 (3,4,5) - The transition doesn't feel good here. You are forcing the player to slow down in a pretty weird way again. I'd just move (4) so that it creates a consistent spacing to the previous and to the following object.
Example
Nice diff. It's fun to play! I sometimes don't really like the flow, but it's my personal opinion. I pointed out the most important issues above though :3

Cool mapset! The Normal needs some more work, but the other diffs are already quite good ^^ Have my star :b

Please reply to my mod, and tell me what you fixed and what you didn't fix! Thank you~

Good luck :3

S o a p

359 posts

Joined March 2012

S o a p 2014-05-13T09:34:35+00:00

S o a p's Normal (remap._.)

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qoot8123

1,500 posts

Joined March 2011

qoot8123 2014-05-16T01:57:58+00:00

Hi! HabiHolic and ming

Here is a taiko mod that request by ming via in game chat

[

Muzukashii]

00:24:263 (1,1) - these two big notes are too strong to me wwww try remove finish on00:24:263 (1) -
00:35:979 (2) - ^
00:55:861 (1) - ^
01:08:464 (1) - move to 01:08:109 - and remove 01:08:819 (3) - to make a brake would be better imo
01:14:322 (1) - remove this note? i think 01:13:435 (4,1,2) - is mainly follow vocal,but 01:14:322 (1) - follow drum, it is very odd to me

[

Oni]

00:55:861 (1) - same as muzu
01:09:884 (1) - change to k? base on vocal's accent
01:11:304 (1) - ^

That's all!
Pretty good map!

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2014-05-16T07:51:01+00:00

qoot8123

Hi! HabiHolic and ming

Here is a taiko mod that request by ming via in game chat

[

Muzukashii]

00:24:263 (1,1) - these two big notes are too strong to me wwww try remove finish on00:24:263 (1) - agree ww removed it
00:35:979 (2) - ^
00:55:861 (1) - ^ for these i keep mine because those finishers follow the finisher sounds well from the song and also it's not really strong there (except on 00:55:861 - , i will consider this again)
01:08:464 (1) - move to 01:08:109 - and remove 01:08:819 (3) - to make a brake would be better imo okay
01:14:322 (1) - remove this note? i think 01:13:435 (4,1,2) - is mainly follow vocal,but 01:14:322 (1) - follow drum, it is very odd to me hmm will consider this again. i followed the violin sounds after the last sound of the vocals come out on 01:14:145 - , and the violin sound starts on 01:14:322 -

[

Oni]

00:55:861 (1) - same as muzu will consider this again
01:09:884 (1) - change to k? base on vocal's accent you get it! changed
01:11:304 (1) - ^ same on here

That's all!
Pretty good map!

thanks for the mods, qoot >w<
m1ng's Muzukashii
m1ng's Oni

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2014-05-16T13:55:49+00:00

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272,56,75742,6,0,L|264:184,1,120,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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HabiHolic

5,416 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2014-05-20T00:14:57+00:00

Thanks mod
almost Fixed and Update~

Fuuyu

856 posts

Joined September 2013

Fuuyu 2014-06-03T03:15:51+00:00

Hello, From Mod Q . desu~

[General]

Easy :

HP Drain - OK
OD - OK

Normal :

HP Drain - OK
OD - OK

Hard :

HP Drain - 6
OD - OK

Timing - OK

[MOD]

Easy - seems fine to me

Normal :

00:00:300 until 00:17:900 Re - Construct ( Doesn't you hands get tired of spinning XD there's even a cut spin )
01:01:186 Add a finish hitsound
01:03:316 Add a note
01:03:671 ^
01:04:026 ^

K.Penguin's Hard - OK

That's All
Good Luck~

-Neipezi

2,266 posts

Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2014-06-06T21:53:36+00:00

m4m

[S o a p's Normal]
-video add please
- slider tick rate -1
00:00:300 (1,1) - spinner is too long.

[K.Penguin's Hard]
00:11:300 (1) - 이상한 슬라이드네요. (양쪽이 안맞게 느껴집니다.)
00:31:719 (5) - 뉴콤 추가
00:34:559 (5) - ^
00:35:801 (1) - 뉴콤 삭제
00:44:855 (1) - 클랩 추가
00:48:760 (5) - 뉴콤 추가
01:10:062 (4) - ^
01:15:298 (4) - 애로우에 있는 클랩 삭제
01:22:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 슬라이드로 처리해도 괜찮을텐데

[Kanto's Insane]
00:28:168 (3) - ctrl + g?
00:59:766 - circle add? here vocals
01:25:594 (16,1) - distance
01:25:683 - afterwards, i felt the emptiness.

[Gu's Insane]
00:23:908 (5) - NC add?
01:25:683 - same as all the Insane

[Insane]
00:40:239 (6) - 슬라이드가 가다가 내려가네. 변경하던지 다른걸로 바꾸던지
00:53:109 - 보컬로 따라가서 한거니까 스핀 추가 (00:55:151 - 끝)
01:20:003 (6) - 뉴콤 추가
01:25:683 - same as all the Insane

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KantoKun

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KantoKun 2014-06-07T04:57:43+00:00

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247,127,76985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,118,77162,6,0,L|531:113,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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181,84,77872,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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205,362,78405,2,0,P|212:320|208:269,1,83.9999974365235,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,278,78760,5,0,0:0:0:0:
307,335,78938,2,0,L|393:342,1,83.9999974365235,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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331,104,79648,2,0,L|338:18,1,83.9999974365235,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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436,78,80358,1,10,0:0:0:0:
230,59,80535,2,0,P|181:57|128:163,1,167.999994873047,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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135,171,81068,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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HabiHolic

5,416 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2014-06-10T00:58:52+00:00

-Neipezi wrote:
m4m

[S o a p's Normal]
-video add please
- slider tick rate -1
00:00:300 (1,1) - spinner is too long.

[K.Penguin's Hard]
00:11:300 (1) - 이상한 슬라이드네요. (양쪽이 안맞게 느껴집니다.)
00:31:719 (5) - 뉴콤 추가
00:34:559 (5) - ^
00:35:801 (1) - 뉴콤 삭제
00:44:855 (1) - 클랩 추가
00:48:760 (5) - 뉴콤 추가
01:10:062 (4) - ^
01:15:298 (4) - 애로우에 있는 클랩 삭제
01:22:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 슬라이드로 처리해도 괜찮을텐데

[Kanto's Insane]
00:28:168 (3) - ctrl + g?
00:59:766 - circle add? here vocals
01:25:594 (16,1) - distance
01:25:683 - afterwards, i felt the emptiness.

[Gu's Insane]
00:23:908 (5) - NC add?
01:25:683 - same as all the Insane

[Insane]
00:40:239 (6) - 슬라이드가 가다가 내려가네. 변경하던지 다른걸로 바꾸던지
00:53:109 - 보컬로 따라가서 한거니까 스핀 추가 (00:55:151 - 끝)
01:20:003 (6) - 뉴콤 추가
01:25:683 - same as all the Insane

-> [AiMod]Your video's dimensions must not exceed 800x600 for the 4:3 format. 동영상 바꿔 / 그냥 둬도 됨 랭크기준 바뀜
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No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2014-06-21T03:52:04+00:00

no change

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2014-06-27T11:56:14+00:00

No_Gu wrote:
no change

Nardoxyribonucleic

osu! Alumni

3,009 posts

Joined May 2011

Nardoxyribonucleic 2014-07-20T04:29:46+00:00

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested by Habi.

[General]

Consider mapping the first 15 seconds (i.e. the 150 BPM part) ? A bit wasted if the part is not mapped, yet skipping it is also fine as now.

[m1ng's Muzukashii]

00:51:600 (2) - k ? The vocal pitch there is rather high, and you may want to diversify the 1/2 patterns throughout the diff.
00:53:553 (3,4,5) - sounds a bit strange to me. Maybe you can change the pattern so that it follows the style you used afterwards. One example is to add a note at 00:54:440 -
01:14:855 - maybe add a note here ? It sounds empty to me.
01:24:263 (2) - I think D here would be great.

[m1ng's Oni]

00:25:772 - add a note here to improve the linkage ? The background violin stretches from 00:25:683 to 00:26:038 -
00:27:281 (1) - k would be better. It has an identical sound as the previous 00:27:103 (1) - which is also k.
00:35:979 (2) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
00:52:488 (4) - maybe k here for the snare sound ?
00:53:553 (3,4,5) - same as Muzukashii
01:09:884 (1) - k would be nice to follow the relatively high-pitched vocal.
01:10:506 - maybe add a note here ? I feel like something is missing.
01:11:304 (1) - same as 01:09:884 (1) -

Nice maps michael~ Good luck~

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2014-07-24T10:21:17+00:00

Nardoxyribonucleic

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested by Habi.

[General]

Consider mapping the first 15 seconds (i.e. the 150 BPM part) ? A bit wasted if the part is not mapped, yet skipping it is also fine as now. okay, let i consider this later. for this first part which is just vocal i think it's a not a big problem to give a break (yeah because it's just a low vocal), but it's 15sec lol

[m1ng's Muzukashii]

00:51:600 (2) - k ? The vocal pitch there is rather high, and you may want to diversify the 1/2 patterns throughout the diff. actually the pitch is high and strong there, and i think it would be better with don for the strong one
00:53:553 (3,4,5) - sounds a bit strange to me. Maybe you can change the pattern so that it follows the style you used afterwards. One example is to add a note at 00:54:440 - ah those notes follow the shake sounds if i am not mistaken 00:53:553 (3,4,5) - even the sounds are really low there
01:14:855 - maybe add a note here ? It sounds empty to me. agree. added here
01:24:263 (2) - I think D here would be great. will consider this again

[m1ng's Oni]

00:25:772 - add a note here to improve the linkage ? The background violin stretches from 00:25:683 to 00:26:038 - hmm will consider this again later. i don't really follow the violin sounds that need 5-plets
00:27:281 (1) - k would be better. It has an identical sound as the previous 00:27:103 (1) - which is also k. don is better IMO
00:35:979 (2) - I think you may have missed the finish here ? yes it is ww added
00:52:488 (4) - maybe k here for the snare sound ? added~ also i changed the patterns there
00:53:553 (3,4,5) - same as Muzukashii same too
01:09:884 (1) - k would be nice to follow the relatively high-pitched vocal. okay sounds reasonable. changed here
01:10:506 - maybe add a note here ? I feel like something is missing. a note? i don't think that a note is useful there @@ nope then
01:11:304 (1) - same as 01:09:884 (1) - sure

Nice maps michael~ Good luck~

thanks for the mods, nardo~!

m1ng's Muzukashii
m1ng's Oni

wasonz

713 posts

Joined July 2013

wasonz 2014-08-25T12:16:09+00:00

Hi ~ from my queue

[m1ng's Muzukashii]
00:52:399 (3) - move to 00:52:222 (2) - : k ddd d k d d pattern are more fun to play

01:06:334 (2) - d : reflect to 01:05:091 (1,2,1,1) -

01:14:322 (1) - move to 01:14:500 - and remove finish : the drum are on here 01:14:500 -

[m1ng's Oni]
00:35:979 (2) - D : like your Muzukashii

00:46:186 (2) - dk ? i feel weird about this cuz your Oni pattern are simple if you are accept move 00:46:186 (2) - to 00:46:097 (2) - please it's fit to the drum ~

Good Luck ~

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2014-08-25T12:35:42+00:00

IMMoRTalS

Hi ~ from my queue

[m1ng's Muzukashii]
00:52:399 (3) - move to 00:52:222 (2) - : k ddd d k d d pattern are more fun to play i changed something by myself here

01:06:334 (2) - d : reflect to 01:05:091 (1,2,1,1) - actually i followed the vocals hue

01:14:322 (1) - move to 01:14:500 - and remove finish : the drum are on here 01:14:500 - that note on 01:14:322 - follows the violin sound well even the sound is really lowww

[m1ng's Oni]
00:35:979 (2) - D : like your Muzukashii it's already D D;

00:46:186 (2) - dk ? i feel weird about this cuz your Oni pattern are simple if you are accept move 00:46:186 (2) - to 00:46:097 (2) - please it's fit to the drum ~ changed something by myself again

Good Luck ~

thanks for the mods~

habi where are youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

m1ng's Muzukashii
m1ng's Oni

qoot8123

1,500 posts

Joined March 2011

qoot8123 2014-08-26T01:23:15+00:00

[General]

Remember to remove widescreen support
00:53:198 - change the volume of this green line to 60%, 80% still to loud to me

[

Muzukashii]

00:30:032 (8) - umm...this note seems not so necessary,i suggest you remove it or move this note to 00:30:210 -
00:30:298 - ~ 00:41:659 - try to make the pattern more simple, in order to make good spread with oni
00:53:020 - ~ 01:02:961 - i found that this part is same as oni,try to make muzu easier or oni harder

[

Oni]

00:50:003 (1) - consider removing this note? to enhance 00:49:825 (1,2) - these two big notes' power

call me back after changing these~

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2014-08-26T10:09:01+00:00

qoot8123

[General]

Remember to remove widescreen support
00:53:198 - change the volume of this green line to 60%, 80% still to loud to me hue my huge mistake ever for volumes. change here

[

Muzukashii]

00:30:032 (8) - umm...this note seems not so necessary,i suggest you remove it or move this note to 00:30:210 - sure here ww it follows the drum hits too~
00:30:298 - ~ 00:41:659 - try to make the pattern more simple, in order to make good spread with oni i have changed this before but i think habi hasn't updated it yet ;_;
00:53:020 - ~ 01:02:961 - i found that this part is same as oni,try to make muzu easier or oni harder nah just on this part i made a same pattern like Oni. well yah, this pattern follows vocals actually~

[

Oni]

00:50:003 (1) - consider removing this note? to enhance 00:49:825 (1,2) - these two big notes' power sure~!

call me back after changing these~

thanks for the mods, qoot~

habiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
m1ng's Muzukashii
m1ng's Oni

HabiHolic

5,416 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2014-09-01T17:10:33+00:00

mingmichael wrote:
qoot8123
[General]
Remember to remove widescreen support
00:53:198 - change the volume of this green line to 60%, 80% still to loud to me hue my huge mistake ever for volumes. change here
[ Muzukashii]

00:30:032 (8) - umm...this note seems not so necessary,i suggest you remove it or move this note to 00:30:210 - sure here ww it follows the drum hits too~
00:30:298 - ~ 00:41:659 - try to make the pattern more simple, in order to make good spread with oni i have changed this before but i think habi hasn't updated it yet ;_;
00:53:020 - ~ 01:02:961 - i found that this part is same as oni,try to make muzu easier or oni harder nah just on this part i made a same pattern like Oni. well yah, this pattern follows vocals actually~

[ Oni]

00:50:003 (1) - consider removing this note? to enhance 00:49:825 (1,2) - these two big notes' power sure~!

call me back after changing these~
thanks for the mods, qoot~

habiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
m1ng's Muzukashii
m1ng's Oni

Sorry for late~ Update~

XinCrin

2,846 posts

Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2014-09-02T03:05:47+00:00

Hi M4M Request /

Easy

00:44:514 (1) The curve from this slider looks a bit strong, try making it softer:
SPOILER
00:50:194 (1) What about to remove the second sliderpoint (middle)?. A linear slider will flow better with previous and next objects
00:58:360 (1) Maybe you could remove the Whistle from this circle, for consistency with 00:55:520 (1) , but more important, the whistle feels better when it's used to stand out vocals like the beginning from 00:58:715 (2).
01:07:236 (5) This circular slider feels a bit bad while playing since previous sliders are curved too. So, I suggest you to try with something a bit different like this:
Example
01:26:762 (2) Flow could improve if you move this circle to x:488 y:36

Normal

00:00:300 (1) The "Finish hitsound" sounds very strong here. I suggest you to change it for a Whistle as you did in Easy diff.
00:08:900 (5) The Whistle from this circle could be better if you remove it and add it in 00:08:100 (4) at slider end
00:53:034 I really want to click something here. So , What about to remove a reverse from 00:52:679 (6)?. And add a circle in 00:53:034. Please ;_;
01:07:946 I'm sure You know what to fix here. It's something about *combo stuff *
01:11:496 Here too (^). Why are you using short combos ?. Looks weird
01:26:052 (4) Will be better if you remove a reverse from this slider and add a circle in 01:26:762. A bit similar as you did in easy

Insane

00:00:300 (1) As I said in Normal *The "Finish hitsound" sounds very strong here. I suggest you to change it for a Whistle as you did in Easy diff.*
00:04:000 (3) orz Honestly this objects is making a bad triplet here, feels so weird. So, What about to remove it?.
00:04:800 (6) (^)
00:05:700 (1) In my opinion this is a bad place to make a high jump. At least try to decrease a bit the spacing here if you want to have this jump yet

I just wanted to point some suggestions , others diffs feels fine ~
Good luck HabiHolic

qoot8123

1,500 posts

Joined March 2011

qoot8123 2014-09-02T15:46:00+00:00

After rechecking taiko diffs,and they are pretty good to me

Taiko Icon'd~

HabiHolic

5,416 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2014-09-02T15:46:48+00:00

qoot8123 wrote:
After rechecking taiko diffs,and they are pretty good to me

Taiko Icon'd~

Thanks!

HabiHolic

5,416 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2014-09-03T04:51:57+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Hi M4M Request /

Easy

00:44:514 (1) The curve from this slider looks a bit strong, try making it softer:
SPOILER
00:50:194 (1) What about to remove the second sliderpoint (middle)?. A linear slider will flow better with previous and next objects
00:58:360 (1) Maybe you could remove the Whistle from this circle, for consistency with 00:55:520 (1) , but more important, the whistle feels better when it's used to stand out vocals like the beginning from 00:58:715 (2).
01:07:236 (5) This circular slider feels a bit bad while playing since previous sliders are curved too. So, I suggest you to try with something a bit different like this:
Example
01:26:762 (2) Flow could improve if you move this circle to x:488 y:36
Normal

00:00:300 (1) The "Finish hitsound" sounds very strong here. I suggest you to change it for a Whistle as you did in Easy diff.
00:08:900 (5) The Whistle from this circle could be better if you remove it and add it in 00:08:100 (4) at slider end
00:53:034 I really want to click something here. So , What about to remove a reverse from 00:52:679 (6)?. And add a circle in 00:53:034. Please ;_;
01:07:946 I'm sure You know what to fix here. It's something about *combo stuff *
01:11:496 Here too (^). Why are you using short combos ?. Looks weird
01:26:052 (4) Will be better if you remove a reverse from this slider and add a circle in 01:26:762. A bit similar as you did in easy

Insane

00:00:300 (1) As I said in Normal *The "Finish hitsound" sounds very strong here. I suggest you to change it for a Whistle as you did in Easy diff.*
00:04:000 (3) orz Honestly this objects is making a bad triplet here, feels so weird. So, What about to remove it?.
00:04:800 (6) (^)
00:05:700 (1) In my opinion this is a bad place to make a high jump. At least try to decrease a bit the spacing here if you want to have this jump yet
I just wanted to point some suggestions , others diffs feels fine ~
Good luck HabiHolic

Thanks Mod! Almost Fixed!

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2014-09-03T07:37:31+00:00

Hi~ HabiHolic

MP3 파일 음질이 128인데 뭐 언랭요소는 아니니까 .. 192로 변경하시면 또 바꾸기 불편하시겠고 ... 일단 뭐 그건 하비님이 원하시면 ㅇㅇ..
만약 192Kbps로 못바꾸신다면 바꿔드릴꺠여 'ㅅ'!!

[ Easy ]

00:03:500 (1,2,3) -

대충 이런식으로 해주시면 더 좋아보이는데 ..

둥글둥글 하면서도 간격도맞고 적당하다랄까 ..

00:51:614 (3) - 흐름상 아래쪽으로 해주시는게 ..

00:55:520 (1,2,1,2) - 각 2번 슬라이더를 조금더 펴주셔서 담요를 잘 만드시면 더 이쁠꺼같아요!

SPOILER

이렇게!!

01:12:916 (4) - 음... 이것도 흐름이 안좋기는 한데 ...

[ Normal ]

no problem

[ K.Penguin's Hard ]

00:25:786 (6) - 서클추가하면 더 재미있을꺼같아요!!

00:40:786 (2) - HP바 가리는거같은데 ..

[ Kanto's Insane ]

Hi~ kanto

00:28:537 (4,5) -

Bad flow , So I have a suggestion.

:3

00:29:425 (2) - If you like the above changes
x492 y112

00:42:916 (5) - x379 y331 Better than the previous flow

00:53:744 (2,3,4) - I think it's better to remove.

00:55:520 (2) - ~ 01:01:555 (1) - Rhythm changes recommended here

00:55:520 (2,1) -

00:55:520 (2) - ~ 00:56:940 (2) -

00:58:360 (2,1) -

00:58:360 (2) - ~ 00:59:780 (2) -

01:01:200 (1) - Add circle

[ Gu's Insane ]

Hi~ No_gu

no problem

[ Insane ]

00:29:957 (7) - 노트간격은 붙어있는데 시간간격은 떨어져있으므로 뉴콤보 추가해주세요.

00:52:324 (3,4,5,6) - 3 4 번 리버스 , 5 6 번 리버스 하면 흐름이 더 좋아지는거 같아요.

[ All Good map!! ]

= Star + 2!!

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-09-05T06:23:27+00:00

Never forgot your request,sorry late.

Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

Widescreen support option keep consistent?
Maybe can add a sliderslider hitsound? (Sounds like Easy parts in the front,seems the slidersound have bit noisy in there.)

[Easy]

00:05:100 (3) - Why not stack better in slider head with 00:03:500 (1) ?
00:11:100 (6) - Perhaps can delete this note make play to easy in Easy diff?
00:55:875 (2) - Sounds like this sliderslide have bit weird,suggest add a sliderslide sound to mute it.(00:58:715 (2),too)
01:04:395 (1) - Feel this kiai time parts clap hitsound have a bit low,maybe use volume (80~85%) here?
01:25:697 (1,2) - Make play to easy in this diff,combine with this objects to become a slider?

[Normal]

00:11:500 (1,1) - Feel this 2 spinner looks like have a bit close ? Maybe can use this rhythm :
SPOILER
00:13:100 (1) - The spinner is different with Easy diff,make keep consistent here?
01:04:395 (1) - Feel this kiai time parts clap hitsound have a bit low,maybe use volume (80~85%) here?

[K.Penguin's Hard]

01:09:898 (3) - Move up a bit make the pattern space consistent?
01:26:762 (5) - Make the slider end stack better?

[Kanto's Insane]

00:53:034 (1) to 01:00:845 (1) is a quiet parts,why not reduce some volume (40 or 50) here?

[Gu's Insane]

00:16:300 (1) - The spinner should be placed 00:17:800 ? (Look another ins diff)
00:53:034 (1) - The slider end should be placed the big white line? Feel this end be placed in red line have bit strange.
01:01:200 (3) - Add a note follow vocal? (If add it,remember swap NC here)

[Insane]

00:27:650 (2) - Stack better?
00:29:247 (3,5) - Perhaps can change this pattern?
SPOILER
00:29:957 (7) - Same as 00:27:650.
01:04:395 (1) - Feel this kiai time parts clap hitsound have a bit low,maybe use volume (80~85%) here?
01:20:372 (8) - Same as 00:27:650.

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2014-09-05T10:27:55+00:00

owh yeah thanks qoot

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-09-05T10:39:59+00:00

I swear... this song keeps haunting me, anyways. I noticed this on the front page and wanted to drop in quickly to correct the (TV Size) metadata.

The only source of TV Size is on mora.jp: http://mora.jp/package/43000025/HAISIN-92/

However, because this is a download site, we don't allow this to be used as an official label and must be removed.

Checking the official OST/Single release on the Black Bullet website shows no TV Size release. Both tracklistings can be found in the link below.
http://www.black-bullet.net/contents/cd/

Please remove the (TV Size) label from this map

(no KD please)

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2014-09-05T10:41:43+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Tokohana.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 63227
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Tokohana (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:トコハナ (TV Size)
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:HabiHolic
Version:Kanto's Insane
Source:ブラック・ブレット
Tags:black bullet kinema citrus ending koreapenguin no_gu KantoKun mingmichael
BeatmapID:428931
BeatmapSetID:168201

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
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HabiHolic

5,416 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

HabiHolic 2014-09-06T04:04:51+00:00

Ok Update mod and title fixed

litoluna

1,074 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2014-09-06T10:56:05+00:00

hi~
for m4m

[Easy]

00:33:863 (2) - missing body whistle?
01:12:916 (4) - NC pls
00:38:123 (3) - I think fiting whistle and finish here

[Normal]

00:38:123 (4) - I think fiting whistle and finish at end point
00:38:833 (1) - ^(head)
00:39:898 (3) - ^(end point)
00:42:738 (2) - remove whistle at end point. not Bass drums sound
00:45:579 (3) - ,00:48:419 (2) - ^
01:01:200 (1) - Ctrl+J. The one that located it on the top thinks a flow to be able to respond

[Hard]

nice diff

[Insane]

00:28:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:28:892 (1,3,5) - 00:29:070 (2,4,6) - I think that you should reverse it
SPOILER
00:40:253 (5) - add finish
00:47:354 (5) - add whistle
00:51:614 (1) - add finish at end point

skip guest insane diff

good luck~

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2014-09-08T12:22:35+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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TitleUnicode:トコハナ
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:HabiHolic
Version:Gu's Insane
Source:ブラック・ブレット
Tags:black bullet kinema citrus ending koreapenguin no_gu KantoKun mingmichael
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HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2014-09-13T08:38:18+00:00

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Aka

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koreapenguin

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koreapenguin 2014-09-19T14:20:08+00:00

Hard thanks for mod Aka

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332,156,45934,6,0,P|352:228|292:300,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,288,46466,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,244,46644,2,0,L|80:260,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,360,46999,2,0,L|94:344,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,244,47354,6,0,B|144:208|152:164|152:164|108:160|84:108,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,40,47886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,72,48064,2,0,L|252:60,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,130,48419,2,0,L|296:120,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,148,48774,2,0,P|203:222|256:296,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,284,49307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,240,49484,2,0,L|488:252,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,128,49839,2,0,L|384:117,1,80,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,16,50194,6,0,P|344:96|300:164,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,168,50727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,116,50904,2,0,P|128:112|76:132,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,276,51259,2,0,P|136:284|176:272,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,204,51614,6,0,P|8:276|52:356,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,356,52147,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,308,52324,2,0,L|180:228,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,228,52679,2,0,L|328:308,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,53034,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55520,5,2,0:0:0:0:
176,280,55875,2,0,P|256:316|336:280,2,180.000006866455,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58360,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,104,58715,2,0,P|256:68|176:104,2,180.000006866455,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61200,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61555,12,0,62975,0:0:0:0:
256,272,63330,6,0,L|256:352,2,80,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,136,64395,6,4,P|272:156|336:104,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,76,64928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,76,65017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,76,65105,2,0,L|468:96,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,164,65460,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,208,65638,2,0,P|396:292|444:376,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,288,66170,2,0,P|272:288|224:312,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,333,66525,2,0,P|136:348|176:348,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,300,66880,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,232,67058,6,0,B|156:208|112:220|112:220|75:135,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,80,67591,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,60,67768,2,0,P|228:72|260:112,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,246,68123,2,0,P|270:218|260:180,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,96,68478,2,0,P|404:140|408:236,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,284,69011,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,284,69188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,328,69366,6,0,L|208:316,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,268,69721,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,204,69898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,160,70076,2,0,P|216:124|280:176,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,240,70608,2,0,P|192:276|128:224,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,160,71141,2,0,L|160:72,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,20,71496,6,0,B|320:28|320:28|356:52|356:52|424:60,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,116,72028,2,0,P|452:212|380:252,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,221,72561,2,0,B|306:209|306:209|332:216,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,328,72916,6,0,P|308:364|216:324,1,160,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,73449,2,0,P|194:308|125:380,1,160,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,368,73981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,300,74159,6,0,P|31:256|59:218,1,80,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,177,74514,2,0,P|163:190|124:192,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
9,87,74869,2,0,P|39:114|59:148,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,227,75224,2,0,L|18:275,2,40,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,192,75579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,204,75667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,216,75756,6,0,B|216:212|216:212|260:228|260:228|324:224,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,180,76289,2,0,P|399:104|368:31,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,24,76821,2,0,B|236:34|236:34|197:61|197:61|138:73,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,56,77354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
12,120,77531,2,0,P|12:160|36:208,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,220,77886,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,220,78241,5,8,0:0:0:0:
168,172,78419,2,0,P|244:172|308:236,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,348,78952,2,0,P|352:304|376:272,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,199,79307,2,0,P|475:222|436:228,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,192,79662,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,112,79839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,11,80017,6,0,P|284:50|296:88,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,112,80372,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,160,80549,2,0,L|432:240,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,320,80904,2,0,L|456:368,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,276,81259,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,276,81348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,276,81437,2,0,B|300:284|300:284|264:308|264:308|192:316,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,284,81969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,204,82147,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,156,82324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,196,82502,2,0,L|372:196,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,148,82857,5,2,0:0:0:0:
416,68,83034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,28,83212,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,72,83389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,152,83567,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,196,83744,2,0,P|348:240|336:280,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,316,84099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,248,84277,6,0,P|96:244|32:312,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,340,84809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,340,84987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,340,85342,5,2,0:0:0:0:
72,156,85697,1,4,0:0:0:0:
260,200,86052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,340,86407,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,336,86762,2,0,B|296:304|300:244|264:196|264:196|256:204,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

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Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-09-19T16:59:05+00:00

so

sry for delay ;;

general

・seems like you forgot to resnap the previewpoint in all diffs after the offset change
・spinners in your easy/normal/insane diffs end inconsistently. i swear i hear the sound disappearing on a white tick. would be logical to move it there for every diff. *though easy diffs need 4 beats of recovery time for ~160bpm, in your situation of 150bpm and that slight offset change imo that lasted 1/4,5 is pretty much enough.
・wait.. no combo colours..? lol

easy

・00:38:478 - , 00:49:839 (4) - the finisher would fit there perfectly
・00:55:520 (1,2) - 00:58:360 (1,2) - 01:04:395 (1,2) - the blankets could be improved
・01:26:762 (2) - spacing?

normal

・i'd reeeally recommend to use 0.9x or 1.0x for 1/2 overlaps ;_; the bpm is not that low and overall these overlaps look and feel huge, hard to aim. also you have them being inconsistent. i mean: there you have wtf 1.2x 01:17:886 (6,1) - ; there 1.0x 00:50:904 (2,3) - ; everywhere (almost) else 1.1x. fix this please and them be with the same spacing
・00:08:100 (4,5) - cause of the vocal thing there 00:08:500 - imo better to change the rhythm to emphasize the part like this

SPOILER

00:04:900 (4,5) - same here (also spacing issue)
・00:28:537 - , 00:28:892 - 00:49:839 - finishers as well?
・00:55:520 (1,2) - 00:58:360 (1,2) - blankets could be improved o.o

koreapenguin's

/savelog

16:36 Aka: o
16:36 Aka: you have time for irc?
16:37 koreapenguin: yes :3
16:37 Aka: yaaay
16:37 Aka: okke so
16:37 koreapenguin: np plz :3
16:38 *Aka is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/410435 yanaginagi - Tokohana [K.Penguin's Hard]]
16:38 koreapenguin: thanks :3
16:38 Aka: seems like habi forgot to resnap the preview point so you could do it for her and snap it 01:03:241 - 
16:39 koreapenguin: done :3
16:39 Aka: 00:13:100 (1) - about this spinner
16:39 Aka: i dont think that putting the 10% here is a good idea
16:39 Aka: the sounds, that aaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAA getting louder
16:40 Aka: so 40% as it was is pretty much enough
16:40 Aka: o.o
16:40 koreapenguin: oki
16:40 Aka: k
16:41 koreapenguin: shi..t
16:41 Aka: a?
16:41 koreapenguin: 01:04:395 - what the canon sound D:
16:41 Aka: o3o
16:42 koreapenguin: suddenly.. booooooooooooooom
16:42 Aka: it suuuuuits
16:42 Aka: 00:19:484 (3,4) - i dont have anything against the sliders on red ticks but
16:42 Aka: umm
16:43 Aka: as for the very beginning of this part it felt a bit awkward
16:43 koreapenguin: http://puu.sh/bFhzN/acaa12f686.jpg :3 ?
16:43 Aka: o
16:43 Aka: should work too!
16:44 Aka: dont forget to make the hitsounds be properly set there :o
16:44 koreapenguin: done :3
16:47 Aka: have to afk for 5 min pls
16:47 Aka: brb
16:48 koreapenguin: nyaaa ~
16:54 Aka: k back
16:55 koreapenguin: no see long time
16:55 Aka: xD
16:56 koreapenguin: long time no see is right..D: english is so hard D:
16:56 Aka: yes :D
16:57 Aka: 00:33:508 (1) - whistle?
16:57 koreapenguin: add :3
17:04 Aka: mm
17:04 Aka: ar8 seems high a bit
17:05 *koreapenguin is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/417911 yanaginagi - Tokohana (TV Size)]
17:05 koreapenguin: how about 7.5?
17:06 Aka: yeah, i looked in another mapset's hard diffs
17:06 Aka: 7.5 is way low
17:06 Aka: i'd stick to 7.8
17:06 koreapenguin: ok :3
17:06 koreapenguin: then OD 6.2 :3 ?
17:07 Aka: why :O
17:07 koreapenguin: just joke :3
17:07 Aka: baka
17:07 Aka: :<
17:07 koreapenguin: OD 6 is okay :3
17:16 Aka: seems like everything else is okay
17:16 Aka: o.o

kanto's

・00:13:100 (1,1,1) - i dont really understand the logic of keeping the 10% of volume on these spinners. that aaaaaAAAA sound is rising and getting louder and louder. + i the thing i mentioned in general: i clearly hear the sound dissapearing on the white 00:17:900 - tick, wouldnt it be more logical to let the last spinner end there?
・01:21:437 (1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - the stream is not hitsounded at all while i hear that it could definitely be done with some claps. also 30% is way toooo low, i couldnt acc the last stream cause i didnt hear anything, the 50% would be better, as Gu's Insane has imo

gu's

・00:13:100 (1,1,1) - same as kanto's, also why not to rise the volume by following this sound? its way really more logical
・00:26:052 - any reson for skipping this downbeat?
・01:03:330 - unnecessary green thingy
・00:55:520 (1) - has to be quiter, make it 50% or smth
・00:28:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would be cool if you could slightly rise the spacing here, its kinda suitable and feels more interesting i guess owo

SPOILER

insane

・the thingy about spinner and white tick, mentioned in general
・00:09:500 (7,8) - not sure whether somewhere there the nc is needed, the combo is pretty high comparing to the previous comboing
・00:29:780 (6,1) - nonono please dont do such antijumps ;w; mmaybe smth like this?

SPOILER

・00:49:839 (4) - add finisher, like i mentioned in easy? there is a sound which is really obvious
・same as in kanto's insane, the last stream is not hitsounded at all, would be nice if you could add claps, like on each downbeat or like Gu did

pretty clean mapset, i've got almost nothing to say :о
also i didnt see the GDers respond to the mods. its not like i am not going to move this mapset without this further, but would like to make sure no mod post in the map thread has been ignored (mine as well), as i saw some suggestions which left unapplied.

call me back i suppose o.o

HabiHolic

5,416 posts

Joined October 2012

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HabiHolic 2014-09-20T02:05:52+00:00

Thanks Aka! all fixed~

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