Papcio wrote:

EDIT: Ohohoh so i want to make gd ;_; I can map standard and taiko plz

Xinely wrote:

also i hate taiko diffs because so hard to get taiko bat for it >< you can mod it instead /runs

1. Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections (blame Rumia)
2. 02:46:207 is this timing point really necessary?
3. Just two combo colours look a bt bored, maybe add another one:
   

1. 00:01:967 (3) - this slider shape doesn't look nice IMO, try the one you used in 00:06:495 (3) - for consistency and also look better :p
2. 00:03:382 (1,2,3,4) - use the same distance between them, this will help you to improve the playability
3. 00:08:052 this sound a bit weird and doesn't work nicely with the melody, I suggest you to reduce the volume of the spinner <: (Spinner body)
4. 00:10:457 (2,3,4) - In my opinion this pattern is not ok for a hard diff, since the 1/4 jumps have a big spacing difference plus is almost the equal as the 1/2 spacing in 00:11:023 (4,5,6) - , I suggest you to avoid 1/4 jumps in hard diffs even if is low bpm
5. 00:14:986 (3,4) - same as above, if you don't agree wit changing the 1/4 jumps, atleast make the distance differences between 1/4 and 1/2 more noticeables, since this 00:14:986 (3,4) - is almost the same as 00:14:703 (2,3) - (visualy talking)
6. 00:16:684 (1,2,3) - try to make the blankets and the symmetry in your pattern a bit better, since doesn't look perfect actually
7. 00:20:929 (1) - even if you're following the vocals the sound in 00:21:212 - is really important and should be mapped as slider head or a circle
8. 00:22:203 (4) - nothing in the music here, I suggest you to remove this circle, if it is not in the music doesn't make much sense to add something there, thought
9. 00:28:571 (3,4,5,6) - probably the best rhythm you can use here is two 1/4 sliders , why even if you're following the vocals them are not accurate with the song tempo, for example the one that's supposed to be in 00:28:995 - doesnt sound in time, it sound like in 1/8 but not in 1/4, then yeah the best rhythm you can archive here is sliders, since the vocals are off :l, do something like this 01:36:494 (2,3) -
10. 00:32:533 (1,2,3,4) - same problem with 1/4 and 1/2 spacing try to make it more noticeable, since is almost the same and is really hard to notice in game
11. 00:34:797 (1,2,3) - spacing~ try to keep the same between them, since it doesn't play comfortable IMO
12. 00:38:193 (3) - this extended slider doesn't fit the music, since there is a clearly sound in 00:38:476 - and I believe 00:38:476 is the best place for ending the slider and fit the song correctly
13. 00:43:287 (4,5) - use a slider instead? this part is kinda hard to be accurate, since the vocal that should be in 4 sound a bit time before and yup due to the vocal being offbeat hit 4 in time is really hard D:, a slider is the better option here also will be consistent with 00:42:155 (2,3) -
14. 00:59:419 (4,2) - try to avoid the overlap here, it doesn't look nice
15. 01:08:476 (1,3) - Xinely-chan so evil desu~
16. 01:23:476 (3,4,5,6) - since you're trying to do a symmetrical pattern, It will look nice if you rearrange it to the center of the grid
17. 01:32:108 (3,5) - same as 00:28:571 -, the vocals are offbeat, that mean clicking that circles will be really painfull due that the vocals are offbeat, the best option is doing something like you did in 01:36:494 (2,3) -
18. 01:39:042 (2,3,4,1) - this flow doesn't really play comfortable, since the cursor movements there are not natural, but forced IMO, my suggestion is to CTRL G 01:39:891 (3,4) - and spacing a bit more 01:40:457 (1) - (also avoid the overlap with 01:39:042 (2) - if posible)
19. 01:44:702 (6,2) - try to avoid the overlap if posible
20. 02:20:504 you should add a circle here, since there is a drum sound
21. 02:21:070 same as above
22. 02:38:193 (3) - same as 00:38:193 -, here the sound at 02:38:476 is really clearly to be ignored imo
23. 03:03:665 (1,2,1) - try to make a perfect triangle <:, current one doesn't look nicely
24. 03:06:353 nothing in the music here, I suggest you to remove this circle, since it doesn't sound nice, also is weird cuz you ignore the beat with sound in 03:06:070 -, but you mapped the one without sound in 03:06:353
25. 03:18:665 (3,4) - this doesn't place nice, since the cursor movements feel really forced , maybe try to rearrange objects to improve the flow in this part IMO
26. 03:23:476 (4,5,6,7) - add more distance between the triplet and the next circle? actually them look really close and can be confused to play
27. 03:29:702 (3) - I really don't like this slider, since it doesn't fit the music due to it is finishing in such important beat in the music at 03:29:985 -, 2 circles is the better way to map this section <:
28. 04:03:098 this should be NC, due to your pattern and music
29. 04:03:240 add a spinner , it really fit the end of the song orz

Xinely wrote:

gave kudosu to luckman as Rumia's said that he/she did full time to set the keysound here

check natsu's mod asap

EDIT : added Rumia's diffs and pending now ~

yoshilove wrote:

hi~ from mania queue ~~

column : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[Rumi's NM]
01:24:042 - add note to 7 *
03:13:853 - add note to 2
03:17:532 ~ 03:19:514 - add note?
03:29:136 - add note to 5
03:46:683 - ^
fixed all!

[Rumi's HD]
00:13:571 - add note to 4? added at 3
00:16:118 - add note to 3? added at 4
01:24:042 - add note to 7 * added and added at 6 too
01:25:174 - add note to 1
01:37:343 - add note to 7
01:39:891 (99891|0) - add soft-hitclap3
03:24:608 - add note to 2[
added all above/box]
ganbatte~ arigatou>u<!

Yuutosan wrote:

Mania mod by request in PM
Oh hii rumi..

[General]
Aimod problem:
Too many kiai time that isnt snapped, please fix them..

[Rumi's NM]
Wow such keysound XD

00:01:967 (1967|2,2250|5,2391|1) - im suggest you to ctrl + h these one. as you can hear, there's piano note from low pitch into high pitch.... i know pitching relevancy is important , in this case i purposely ignore pitching ,considering as a normal diff , hand balance should be considered too..
00:07:344 (7344|4,7485|5) - ctrl + J , high pitch to into low pitch. (be wary with the keysounds, maybe you can move them manually without messed the keysound) the second note pitch is obviously higher
00:32:533 ~ 00:33:948 - suggestion : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544886 thanks for the suggestion but i changed to another pattern . still do change
00:39:325 (39325|6) - i think you should have to change this to normal note, its quite hard for NM. right , fixed
00:41:023 (41023|5) - then you can move this to 7 keeping 00:41:023 (41023|1,41023|5,41589|4,41589|0) - in uniform pattern
00:47:250 (47250|2,47816|1) - ctrl + j , low pitch to high pitch. fixed
00:48:382 (48382|3) - change this to hold and lift up to 00:48:382 (48382|3) fixed
00:49:503 (49503|1) - move down this to 00:49:223 and lift up to 00:50:624 better not , it looks cleaner this way
00:57:438 - add note, loud sound, im suggest to add to 1st col. its the same as other basses
00:58:853 (58853|1) - move to 1.. then....
00:59:419 (59419|2) - move this to 2
^ doesnt really change anything , keeping it
01:09:608 (69608|6) - delete, i think quite weird if you follow the vocal. its bass...
01:09:608 (69608|6) - add note to 7, loud sound. dont drunk pls yuuto xD ^ !!
01:13:004 - add note, loud sound. added
01:50:504 (110504|2) - move down this to 01:50:362 place it to 1st coloumn. and add note to 7 for loud sound.. theen.. following the instrument correctly
01:50:645 (110645|4) - delete this. there is an obvious sound there , why should delete it?
01:52:910 (112910|5) - ^ to follow these part 02:03:947 (123947|2,124513|2,124796|0,124796|1) . 02:05:079 (125079|4,125645|2,125928|6,125928|5) . etc no
01:59:419 (119419|5,119419|1) - why two noted? the right side note is bass
02:32:249 (152249|2) - move to 1 bass repeat

[Rumi's HD]
00:55:740 - add note at 2 to follow these part 00:53:476 (53476|4,53476|2,53476|6,54608|4,54608|2,54608|0) added
01:06:353 (66353|3) - move to 3
01:32:815 (92815|5) - move to 5
01:33:098 (93098|5) - move to 7
02:26:023 (146023|5) - move to 7
the bass repeat , and it feel great on same collumn so no changes on above^
03:00:268 (180268|6,180410|5) - ctrl + h . hand balance. re arranged
the rest is cool for me..

Absolutely good voice.. I hope this will be rank mapset soon!
Goodluck ..!!

osu! needs more sharlo! >w<

richardfeder wrote:

mark
mania mod request by Xinely and sharlo's naochanfen huehue
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HD

00:02:816 (2816|1) - move left to distinguish itself from 00:02:391 (2391|1) - i moved to right instead

00:18:948 (18948|1) - add (a pizzicato sound note + a slight beat just like 00:18:099 (18099|3,18099|6) - ) didnt add , looks messy

00:04:514 (4514|2,4655|6) - move two column left fixed
00:05:221 (5221|0) - move one column right and 00:05:080 (5080|4) - move two column right
pitch \:D/ since they are keysounded piano and you have plenty of space so would better follow pitch carefully fixed

00:06:778 (6778|0,6919|1) - ctrl+H fixed
00:07:344 (7344|4,7485|5) - move three column right left

00:33:099 (33099|1,33099|4,33240|3,33382|2,33523|3,33665|1,33665|4) - move one column right fixed

00:35:646 (35646|3) - 1/4 http://puu.sh/8nJlD.jpg i dont hear any 1/4 here o.o

00:38:476 (38476|2,38759|5,39042|1) - a relatively obvious 1/4 part consider add 1/4 note? but i really cant hear it /.\

00:40:316 (40316|2) - add i think 1 note is enough

00:41:023 (41023|1,41165|2,41306|3,41448|2) - those are too weak to be heard under 100% rate playback, suggest to delete and instead emphasize 1/4 from 00:40:174 (40174|3) - here to 00:40:740 (40740|2) - here which are much more audible its still audible

00:54:183 (54183|4) - add?
00:55:032 (55032|6) - ^
fixed both ^
since I see you catch hihat sound later so I think maybe just catch them all? yes

01:01:400 (61400|0) - add or add at 6 (triple like 00:59:136 (59136|0,59136|5,59136|4,60268|4,60268|1,60268|5) - fixed~

01:08:617 (68617|6) - add added

01:10:032 (70032|2) - add (suggestion http://puu.sh/8nKd3.jpg&#41; thanks for suggestion , but i re-arranged it differently

01:19:230 (79230|2,79372|1) - you can make them double here but your choice >,< nice suggestion

01:20:645 (80645|1,80645|5) - delete didnt delete and add at 01:20:504 (80504|4) - added

01:30:834 - stair not so fit-in at here? http://puu.sh/8nKp0.jpg fixed thanks

01:48:664 - whathow about using hold here for 1/2 bass? ok

01:53:334 (113334|3) - and 01:53:476 (113476|5) - add and maybe change the pattern a little bit ok i just had a better idea , thanks

Just suggestions /.\ 02:10:740 - http://puu.sh/8nKFO.jpg thanks for suggestion , but i re-arranged it in different way , much simpler and playable

02:11:872 (131872|3) - add for guiter or hihat whatever but to keep the consistency I strongly recommend to add here added~

recommend to rearrange here:02:18:664 (138664|0) - move this long note to space and rearrange other notes in order to avoid 02:20:928 (140928|1,140928|4,141070|5,141070|2,141211|4,141211|6,141211|3) - this kind of pattern. also a LN in space will makes other notes more handy to handle yup , re-arranged

02:30:268 (150268|6) - and 02:30:268 (150268|0) - add yep good! added

02:33:806 (153806|4) - add added~

02:43:287 - add a green line with sv=1.08x
02:43:899 - add a green line with sv=1.00x
fixed
03:01:683 (181683|0) - add a note for pizzicato sound added

03:12:438 - add three 1/2 hold from here to 03:13:287 - ? looks inconsistent and too hard for hard diff lol

03:29:136 (209136|0) - add

03:29:985 - add finish

03:33:382 (213382|3) - add. a little bit weird to let here empty added
nice!

NM

beginning: pitch as I mention above /w\

00:32:108 (32108|1) - add dont want to make a 1/4 stream here

00:38:901 (38901|3) - add no sound?

00:39:325 (39325|6) - delete not necessary to add this note it is strong beat

01:09:042 (69042|1,69042|2,69325|4,69325|5) - ctrl+H fixed

01:09:891 - I think mapping 1/4 here is necessary fixed

01:38:193 - http://puu.sh/8nMqC.jpg good! fixed

01:41:023 (101023|5) - and 01:42:438 (102438|4) - add you miss pizzicato sounds here >.> dont want to make it harder so i only follow the drum

01:59:136 (119136|1,119277|0,119419|1,119560|2,119702|1) - a little bit too nazi for newbie although bpm is really low? hhhhhhhhhnvm there are parts which are much harder 233 i nerf it to 1/2 xD

02:11:164 (131164|4) - add ok lol

02:42:438 (162438|2) - add didnt feel like putting more notes here , the pattern looks clean enough

02:43:287 - add a green line with sv=1.08x
02:43:899 - add a green line with sv=1.00x
fixed!
03:05:504 (185504|3) - delete 03:05:363 (185363|4,185646|2) - is enough i like the snare ;_;

03:14:702 (194702|3,194844|3) - a hold in one hand and a very mini jack...? this is NM but also the easiest mania so I am not very sure about this <.< 233 ok i removed the hold and re-arrange the jack , eventhough its 106 bpm jack all ppl can do T.T

03:25:174 (205174|1) - move right and move 03:25:457 (205457|5) - to 1 i like the current pattern
don't do this 03:24:608 (204608|4,205457|6,205457|5) - T.T lol re-arranged , put the hold on 4th so its balanced
actually I already would like to point out when I see 03:15:551 (195551|6,196117|4,196117|5,197249|4,197249|5) - /.\
there are many place like this in your NM where one hand do double with a LN. most of the newbie will either combo break on LN or simply miss one or two of the double. just don't let one hand do everything , eh? i disobey the pitch just for hand balance though , have you testplayed it before you mod? its actually easy to catch , i asked few average player and they can score it without problems . 03:15:551 (195551|6,196117|4,196117|5,197249|4,197249|5) i just getting it a little intense for the ending part so player would focus more , its a long song , if giving easy things from beginning to 4 mins , they might get bored

03:46:966 (226966|1,227249|1) - move to space fixed!

Good luck /o/

1. 00:00:835 (1) - Err, whistle-nya gak ditaruh di ekor? Instrumen di sana suaranya lebih kuat daripada di kepala.
2. 00:02:391 - Also tambah whistle di sini dan remove yang di 00:02:816? Alasan sama kayak yang di atas.
3. 00:03:382 (3) - Sama kayak 00:00:835 (1).
4. 00:04:655 - Sama dengan 00:02:391 (remove whistle di 00:05:080).
5. 00:06:212 - Tambah whistle (lagi), soalnya instrumen di sini sama kuat dengan 00:05:646?
6. 00:06:495 (2) - Sama kayak hitsounding 00:01:967 (2,5) kalau ngikut saran kedua sama keempat, deh.
7. 00:14:985 (2,3,4) - Menurutku sih placement slider di sini terkesan agak acak-acakan, gak ada pola gitu. Seenggaknya, coba bikin 00:16:684 (3) melengkung kayak gini untuk improve flow (dan tampak lebih teratur juga sih)?
8. 00:43:571 - Again, add whistle buat ngikutin instrumen di sini?
9. 00:44:702 (5) - ^
10. 00:46:118 (1) - ^
11. 00:46:684 - ^ (Whistle everywhere ahue. IMO map ini masih kurang whistle untuk menekankan bunyi instrumen aja sih, jadi terasa kosong. Tambah-tambahin aja ``~)
12. 00:56:023 (5,6) - Dibikin kayak gini biar lebih rapi?
13. 01:01:683 - Add finish volume 35%? Ada cymbal yang agak kecil bunyinya di sini.
14. 01:22:060 - Tambah finish di sini (nemenin whistle-nya)? Pas aja sih sama musik di sini.
15. 01:26:306 (3) - Gak ada clap? Pas-pas aja kok.
16. 01:51:211 (3) - IMO clap ini (normal-hitclap) terlalu nyaring. Coba cari yang lebih kecil atau dikecilin sendiri (/plak), gitu?
17. 02:11:589 (6) - Add finish? Buatku sih pas aja dengan instrumen di sini yang bunyinya... Well susah dijelasin sih, intinya pas aja dah ``
18. 02:19:513 - Add whistle karena masih ada bunyi instrumen yang sama dengan 02:19:230?
19. 02:29:702 - Menurutku ini masih perlu clap; finish gak cukup buat ngikutin instrumen di sini.
20. 02:36:777 - Turunin volume buat finish di sini jadi 50%? Sekarang rasanya terlalu nyaring.
21. 03:04:231 (1) - Gak ganti dengan slider di 03:03:948 - 03:04:231 aja buat ngikutin cymbal di 03:03:948?
22. 03:15:268 - Sama kayak 01:01:683.
23. 03:25:457 - Sama dengan 02:36:777. Lagian cymbal di sini kalah nyaring dengan 03:24:608.
24. 03:29:985 - ^ (Berlaku buat semua finish yang kasusnya kayak gini.)
25. 03:53:759 (3) - Ganti ini dengan 1/2 slider dari 03:53:476 buat ngikutin instrumen di sana?
26. 04:00:551 (1) - Gak di-map pake slider sama circle aja, lalu buat spinner dua stanza dari 04:03:098? Rasanya gimana gitu sih, soalnya bagian ini bisa di-map dengan normal.

1. Semua saran hitsound di Normal berlaku di sini ``b
2. 00:01:684 - Tambah whistle buat ngikutin instrumen di sini? Rasanya kosong aja kalau gak ada apa-apa.
3. 00:03:382 (1,2,3) - Hilangin whistle di (1,3), lalu tambah di (2)? Alasannya udah tahu lah lol
4. 00:15:552 (5) - Pindahin ke (404,196)? Jadi lebih rapi aja kalau ngelihat 00:14:986 (3,4,5) sebagai satu pattern ``
5. 01:28:853 (5) - Pindahin ke (488,16) biar pattern 01:27:155 (1,2,3,4,5) jadi lebih rapi?
6. 01:44:702 (6) - Pindahin (hue) ke (256,52)? Flow di sini jadi lebih enak dan design-nya... lebih enak dilihat aja, IMO.
7. 02:34:513 (6) - Geser ke (64,172) agar... flow lebih enak?
8. 03:26:306 (3,4,1) - Umm, kalau bisa spacing di sini dibikin konsisten? Gak terlalu masalah sih, tapi lebih bagus aja kalau spacing-nya sama terus.
9. 03:40:740 (2,3) - Bikin agar spacing-nya 1,3x, biar konsisten (lagi)? Mungkin tarik (2) ke (484,168)?
10. 03:46:117 (3) - Geser 1 grid ke kiri untuk nyempurnain pattern 03:45:551 (2,3,4)? Somehow tampak lebih rapi.
11. 04:03:240 - 04:07:627 - Tambahin spinner di sini untuk ngikutin musik?

Hinsvar wrote:

Oke ``~

*Bold = Unrankable atau wajib di-fix; merah = Sangat disarankan untuk diubah; hitam = Hanya saran-saran kecil yang (mungkin saja) bisa bikin map-mu lebih baik.

>Normal

1. 00:00:835 (1) - Err, whistle-nya gak ditaruh di ekor? Instrumen di sana suaranya lebih kuat daripada di kepala.
2. 00:02:391 - Also tambah whistle di sini dan remove yang di 00:02:816? Alasan sama kayak yang di atas.
3. 00:03:382 (3) - Sama kayak 00:00:835 (1).
4. 00:04:655 - Sama dengan 00:02:391 (remove whistle di 00:05:080).
5. 00:06:212 - Tambah whistle (lagi), soalnya instrumen di sini sama kuat dengan 00:05:646?
6. 00:06:495 (2) - Sama kayak hitsounding 00:01:967 (2,5) kalau ngikut saran kedua sama keempat, deh.
7. 00:14:985 (2,3,4) - Menurutku sih placement slider di sini terkesan agak acak-acakan, gak ada pola gitu. Seenggaknya, coba bikin 00:16:684 (3) melengkung kayak gini untuk improve flow (dan tampak lebih teratur juga sih)? nope, sengaja art slider tanpa node lengkung hehe
8. 00:43:571 - Again, add whistle buat ngikutin instrumen di sini?
9. 00:44:702 (5) - ^
10. 00:46:118 (1) - ^
11. 00:46:684 - ^ (Whistle everywhere ahue. IMO map ini masih kurang whistle untuk menekankan bunyi instrumen aja sih, jadi terasa kosong. Tambah-tambahin aja ``~)
12. 00:56:023 (5,6) - Dibikin kayak gini biar lebih rapi? little fix but ngancurin pattern sampe 5 detik. GG Badak
13. 01:01:683 - Add finish volume 35%? Ada cymbal yang agak kecil bunyinya di sini. 50 instead
14. 01:22:060 - Tambah finish di sini (nemenin whistle-nya)? Pas aja sih sama musik di sini. nope, bukan sampe cymbal jadi enggak
15. 01:26:306 (3) - Gak ada clap? Pas-pas aja kok.
16. 01:51:211 (3) - IMO clap ini (normal-hitclap) terlalu nyaring. Coba cari yang lebih kecil atau dikecilin sendiri (/plak), gitu? perasaan biasa aja o.o
17. 02:11:589 (6) - Add finish? Buatku sih pas aja dengan instrumen di sini yang bunyinya... Well susah dijelasin sih, intinya pas aja dah `` bukan cymbal jadi no
18. 02:19:513 - Add whistle karena masih ada bunyi instrumen yang sama dengan 02:19:230?
19. 02:29:702 - Menurutku ini masih perlu clap; finish gak cukup buat ngikutin instrumen di sini.
20. 02:36:777 - Turunin volume buat finish di sini jadi 50%? Sekarang rasanya terlalu nyaring. 60 instead
21. 03:04:231 (1) - Gak ganti dengan slider di 03:03:948 - 03:04:231 aja buat ngikutin cymbal di 03:03:948?
22. 03:15:268 - Sama kayak 01:01:683. sama
23. 03:25:457 - Sama dengan 02:36:777. Lagian cymbal di sini kalah nyaring dengan 03:24:608. sama
24. 03:29:985 - ^ (Berlaku buat semua finish yang kasusnya kayak gini.)
25. 03:53:759 (3) - Ganti ini dengan 1/2 slider dari 03:53:476 buat ngikutin instrumen di sana?
26. 04:00:551 (1) - Gak di-map pake slider sama circle aja, lalu buat spinner dua stanza dari 04:03:098? Rasanya gimana gitu sih, soalnya bagian ini bisa di-map dengan normal. tangan kiting

>Hard

1. Semua saran hitsound di Normal berlaku di sini ``b
2. 00:01:684 - Tambah whistle buat ngikutin instrumen di sini? Rasanya kosong aja kalau gak ada apa-apa.
3. 00:03:382 (1,2,3) - Hilangin whistle di (1,3), lalu tambah di (2)? Alasannya udah tahu lah lol
4. 00:15:552 (5) - Pindahin ke (404,196)? Jadi lebih rapi aja kalau ngelihat 00:14:986 (3,4,5) sebagai satu pattern ``
5. 01:28:853 (5) - Pindahin ke (488,16) biar pattern 01:27:155 (1,2,3,4,5) jadi lebih rapi?
6. 01:44:702 (6) - Pindahin (hue) ke (256,52)? Flow di sini jadi lebih enak dan design-nya... lebih enak dilihat aja, IMO.
7. 02:34:513 (6) - Geser ke (64,172) agar... flow lebih enak?
8. 03:26:306 (3,4,1) - Umm, kalau bisa spacing di sini dibikin konsisten? Gak terlalu masalah sih, tapi lebih bagus aja kalau spacing-nya sama terus.
9. 03:40:740 (2,3) - Bikin agar spacing-nya 1,3x, biar konsisten (lagi)? Mungkin tarik (2) ke (484,168)?
10. 03:46:117 (3) - Geser 1 grid ke kiri untuk nyempurnain pattern 03:45:551 (2,3,4)? Somehow tampak lebih rapi. fixed all
11. 04:03:240 - 04:07:627 - Tambahin spinner di sini untuk ngikutin musik? tangan player kiting bok

Itu aja mbak; banyakan hitsound ``~

Good luck ya hue

1. Uncheck wide screen support Hard,ManiaDiff

1. 00:13:853 (5) - ～ 00:41:023 (5) - Greenline offset +7
   00:23:476 (1,2) - I felt uncomfortable 　Greenline CS3 whistle(Head) - Finish(End)、excellent
   01:44:985 (1,2) - ＾
   00:48:382 (1) - Additions Normal or Soft whistle,To your favorite
   01:20:645 (2) - whistle(End)
   02:19:796 (6) - 02:20:362 - I think that was extended to the here and are able to follow the rhythm
   02:20:645 (7,1,2) - ↑Fix？ Beautiful Triangle
   Example

   
   02:25:740 (1) - umm Soft Finish Too strong Additions Normal Finish 　Very much

-Nanaka- wrote:

hihihi
from your request

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[Genneral]

1. Uncheck wide screen support Hard,ManiaDiff ok

[Nomarl]

1. 00:13:853 (5) - ～ 00:41:023 (5) - Greenline offset +7 thank you, fixed xD
   00:23:476 (1,2) - I felt uncomfortable 　Greenline CS3 whistle(Head) - Finish(End)、excellent too strong x.x
   01:44:985 (1,2) - ＾ ^
   00:48:382 (1) - Additions Normal or Soft whistle,To your favorite sure
   01:20:645 (2) - whistle(End) yes
   02:19:796 (6) - 02:20:362 - I think that was extended to the here and are able to follow the rhythm aa broken to following music so no
   02:20:645 (7,1,2) - ↑Fix？ Beautiful Triangle sure
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   02:25:740 (1) - umm Soft Finish Too strong Additions Normal Finish 　Very much too strong too

Sorry Quick Modding don't worry :3
Hard Diff、I will post at a later date

Lust wrote:

modding by request
more ebb and flow <3 yeah <3

I feel pretty strongly about this song, so I'll try to leave those thoughts out of this mod and just get to the basics!

General

1. AIBat tells me there are a lot of unsnapped green lines, might want to go back and fix them, since those mess with mania autoconverts from what I hear. (well you do have mania diffs, so i guess nobody will play the autoconverts anyway lol) aa gomen i just have aimod and aimod can't detect it orz
2. Pick a better preview point closer to the chorus? Seems kind of blah to me. sorry but sharlo want preview time to do here. since she is an artist here i can't say no :p
3. Really not a fan of the hitsounds, but since I mapped ebb and flow too I guess my feeling towards the song remain the same, so if they fit for you, then that is fine!

Normal

Very clean and calm normal!

1. 00:36:212 (5) - I don't think its a nice idea to have a strong hitsound on a passive object (the repeat). Its just not satisfying to play, try this rhythm
   yap
2. 01:09:042 (5) - ^ nope since the drum isn't really loud
3. 01:13:853 (5,6) - (Nazi) Blanket can be improved fix
4. 01:16:966 (3) - Same weird rhythm thing, try a circle and then a 1/2 in its place but repeat still emphasize it with nicely imo so let me keep
5. 01:21:494 (3) - ^
6. 01:34:513 (5) - Maybe have this slider blanket 01:35:928 (1) - hard to fix, i did as i can
7. 03:23:476 (6,1) - (Nazi) Blanket can be improved ok

Hard

Fun hard ;D Loved the triangle patterns, lots of nice flow too~ thank you >3<

1. 00:17:533 (3) - Maybe straighten this slider so that it blankets 00:16:684 (1) - more nicely ok
2. 00:59:702 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved
3. 01:12:721 (3,1) - (Nazi) Blanket can be improved
4. 01:38:193 (1) - Angle this reverse slider the other way so it slings down in to the next slider more cleanly and nicer
   
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5. 01:53:476 (5,6) - Weird cursor movement here that I found a bit awkward. Maybe move (6) to 324:184?
6. 02:13:853 (4,5) - ctrl+G for nicer flow and play
7. 02:26:589 (3) - I would again lessen the curve here so it would look a bit cleaner fix all
   
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8. 03:23:476 (4,5,6,7,1) - Now this looks and plays good! <3

Fun set, good luck with ranking!

-Nanaka- wrote:

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
[Nomarl]
00:13:853 (5) - ～ 00:41:023 (5) - Greenline offset +7

1. Sharlo's voice is beautiful and the skin is so pretty!
2. Set preview time for Rumi's NM to 168382.

1. 00:32:533 (1) - Maybe add a whistle? You have one here for Hard.
2. 00:36:495 (6) - Missing a clap on head and finish on the tail?
3. 00:41:582 - Unsnapped green line, snap it to 00:41:589.
4. 01:01:400 (4,1) - The 25% volume increase between the two finishes here is a bit jarring, I think increasing it by 15% is enough. Consider using 75% volume for the green line at 01:01:966 and 60% at 01:02:108
5. 01:08:193 (3,4) - I would prefer you use a similar rhythm here as you had for your second kiai which fit the music way better. Since the accented hit is on the red tick it would fit the music way better if you mapped the sound there and left the big white tick empty:
   Example

   
6. 01:31:400 (1) - A little too loud here. I would reduce this finish to 70% volume as you had for Hard.
7. 01:54:042 (1) - You should add a whistle here to fit the music.
8. 01:56:306 (3) - Same as above, on the head.
9. 02:42:721 (5,1,2,3,4) - See if you can make adjustments to get this pattern to be perfectly centered!
10. 02:43:899 (1) - Not really a big deal but there's a minor spacing inconsistency here.

1. 00:10:457 (2,3) - The flow in this map is wonderful, however this part (and a later suggestion) are the only times I really felt like the movement was forced. See if you can get the heads of these 1/4 sliders closer together for a more comfortable jump distance similar to 00:28:571 (3,4).
2. 00:12:155 (1) - You can add a whistle to the tail for consistency with 00:17:250 (2). Alternatively, removing the whistle at 00:17:250 (2) is good.
3. 00:14:986 (3,4) - Similar case with the flow here. This one in particular doesn't play very well for me because of how sharp the back and forth movements are. Here's a placement that was very comfortable to play when I tested it, try it out:
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4. 00:19:797 (2,3) - These two could form a cleaner blanket. It might take a few adjustments but try to make it look like this:
   
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5. 00:20:080 (3) - There's both an instrument and vocal sound on the tail here. Perhaps a whistle to compliment them?
6. 00:22:203 (4) - The spacing in this triplet is uneven. Keeping it consistent would make it look nicer.
7. 00:24:042 (2,4) - Personally I find the use of whistles on these circles a bit excessive considering how the music plays here and how weak the vocals are. Try removing them and see if that works for you. If you agree maybe have a look at this for this part on Normal.
8. 00:26:306 (3) - The whistle here isn't emphasizing any easily identifiable sound in the music. I would prefer you use it on 00:26:589 (4) where you can hear the same instrument sound heard on 00:25:740 (1) which you had a whistle for.
9. 00:41:582 - Unsnapped green line, snap it to 00:41:589. In fact, I would prefer you delete this green line to leave the volume at 50%. The vocals are quite soft-spoken and the BGM isn't noticeably louder here so increasing the volume doesn't feel necessary.
10. 00:54:891 (4) - A whistle with 50% vol. would fit the sound here very nicely and fit with how you use them for this section.
11. 01:08:476 (1) - Whistle on the tail sounds so beautiful.
12. 01:19:372 (6) - Same as 00:22:203 (4).
13. 01:30:693 (5) - ^
14. 01:44:985 (1,3) - I feel that these two shapes could fit together better. Right now it doesn't look very good. Maybe you could curve (3) less so it wraps more nicely around the sliderbody? Kinda like 02:38:193 (3,1).
15. 01:53:759 (6) - This would sound better if it was a soft sampleset.
16. 01:58:004 (3) - Same as above, for the tail.
17. 03:15:268 (7) - There's a soft cymbal sound here that can be accentuated with a whistle or low volume finish.
    
    Wonderful mapset, the flow is really nice.

R e x 1 0 0 wrote:

[NM]
00:02:250 - Try to move this note here 00:02:108 - no , doesnt fit with rhythm , piano doesnt need 2 keys
00:02:391 - Try to move this note here 00:02:250 - ^
00:08:476 (8476|3) - Make this LN finish here 00:09:750 - its already finished there?
00:09:891 - Move notes 2 and 6 here 00:09:750 - ^
00:41:589 - Try to add note 3 here i only accent finishes using 2 notes for normal diffs
00:42:438 - Try to add note 5 here looks inconsistent and ugly , so no
00:52:910 (52910|6,52912|0) - Put these notes here 00:52:609 - why????dont even have sound?
01:14:985 - Add note 3 if you want inconsistent =_=
01:50:504 (110504|2) - Put this note here 01:50:362 - following the instrument , its in the correct placement
02:38:334 (158334|3) - This here 02:38:193 - its intentional triplet.. please understand my idea of mapping
02:48:382 (168382|5,168382|1) - These here 02:48:110 - no , its barely audible to be put 2 notes there

(i'll mod the HD early)

- R u m i a - wrote:

R e x 1 0 0 wrote:

[NM]
00:02:250 - Try to move this note here 00:02:108 - no , doesnt fit with rhythm , piano doesnt need 2 keys
00:02:391 - Try to move this note here 00:02:250 - ^
00:08:476 (8476|3) - Make this LN finish here 00:09:750 - its already finished there?
00:09:891 - Move notes 2 and 6 here 00:09:750 - ^
00:41:589 - Try to add note 3 here i only accent finishes using 2 notes for normal diffs
00:42:438 - Try to add note 5 here looks inconsistent and ugly , so no
00:52:910 (52910|6,52912|0) - Put these notes here 00:52:609 - why????dont even have sound?
01:14:985 - Add note 3 if you want inconsistent =_=
01:50:504 (110504|2) - Put this note here 01:50:362 - following the instrument , its in the correct placement
02:38:334 (158334|3) - This here 02:38:193 - its intentional triplet.. please understand my idea of mapping
02:48:382 (168382|5,168382|1) - These here 02:48:110 - no , its barely audible to be put 2 notes there

(i'll mod the HD early)

thanks for modding~
EDIT: @yuno up to you~ feel free to drop your suggestion , i wont bite

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arcwinolivirus wrote:

From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue! Req by. Rumia

Take note that I'm only focusing on note patterns, note placements and note consistency. Not the actual hitsound itself (Just in case if you already implemented hitsounds).

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[Rumi's NM]
already good for me /o/

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01:10:032 (70032|6) - move to 3 fixed

01:11:872 (71872|4) - move to 4 so it wont be the same as 01:12:721 (72721|4,72721|5) with different sound. thanks for suggestion but i like to keep the consistency in patterning , its easier to read for beginners

01:28:570 (88570|6) - suggesting to move to 3 for hand balance , good suggestion but hand balancing is already good here , and i dont want to repeat note with 01:28:004 (88004|2) -

02:10:457 (130457|6) - move to 2 ^ fixed

02:16:400 - add note here.it sound so dim , i decide not tu put any note here

02:16:542 - ^ ^

02:32:532 (152532|6) - what is this long note for? o.o If this is the long vocal sound it changes at 02:33:381 there is instrument there , not sure if its organ or violin xD

02:58:287 (178287|0,179136|0) - suggesting to move to 3 since different vocal, Ha to "Na" i like the consistent pattern here , its not really hard

03:01:400 (181400|6) - move to 1 different pitch. might be hard while index finger is holding a note

03:15:268 - add note to 4 added

03:34:514 - add note to 2 just like 03:33:665 (213665|5,213665|1) with same sound. added~

03:35:646 - add note to 5 stong sound. not really strong imo , 1 note is fine

03:38:476 - add note to 4 same snare sound as 03:38:759 (218759|3,218759|6) absolutely not

04:01:400 (241400|6) - suggesting to remove to avoid 3-noted with LN in NM :3 removed the hold instead

[Rumi's HD]

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00:23:193 - add note since it has beat sounds + hithat like 00:22:627 (22627|2,22627|4) dont want to make it too crowded here, the pattern looks nice already

00:26:589 - ^ ^

01:01:966 - add note since the sound here is so strong and impact. finish sound. like 02:12:155 (132155|6,132155|1,132155|5,132155|0) its already 3 noted o.o

02:02:532 - add note for the snare 3-noted. added

02:43:287 - ^^

02:58:287 (178287|0,179136|0) - move to 3 just like the previous mode. Different pitch and vocal, ha-na no too~

03:05:363 - add note low volume snare, atleast 2 noted. dont want to make it very hard , i think its good already , 2 noted looks messy
03:05:646 - ^ ^
03:06:212 - ^ ok i moved the previous snare to here so it have consistent 2 note
03:35:646 - ^ strong sound. no matter how strong its still hi hat , putting 2 notes rips the feeling.
03:38:476 - ^ snare sound. added
03:46:683 - ^ ^

04:03:098 (243098|0,243098|6) - suggesting to make these notes LN same as 04:03:098 (243098|3) got it!

[Overall]
Yey sharlo song~! here's my star~ go go rank >w<)b thank you for requesting~

Samah wrote:

From queue.

[Normal]
00:36:495 (6) - Maybe put a clap at the start to make it match 01:48:947 (5). yeah, i forgot. bakanely
02:01:400 (4) - Move the clap from this to the repeat of 02:02:249 (6). added instead

[Hard]
01:06:494 (1,2,3) - The huge difference in spacing here plays weird. Personally I'd stack (1) at the START of slider (4) rather than the end. actually it played with well but reduced spacing of 1,2,3 instead
03:08:193 (3) - Left a bit? yap for consistent of spacing

Lovely song, well mapped. Can't really pick on much. thanks <3

waxman wrote:

QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ I LOVE YOU!♥ arigatou lol

[Hard]
00:13:854 (3,4) - too far? not really, just emphasize the music
01:59:419 (2) - move to x:152 y:96? for blanket so no
02:13:853 (4,5) - far a bit, isn't it? yes, stacked
02:22:910 (3) - the end of the slider is x:104 y:212 little bit changed
02:25:740 (1) - x:340 y:260 Those spacing of 02:25:740 (1,2,3) will be fine. sure
02:32:249 (1,2,3) - like this one? that overlap is my mapping style

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03:09:325 (2,3) - too far? I guess yours is not intentional.really? i just emphasize the vocal
03:15:268 (7) - too far? x:372 y:180 those spacing will be fine. nope but reduced the spacing a little


GOOD LUCK!

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