luxoDeh wrote:

oook done
(final update? >.<)

CLSW wrote:

luxoDeh wrote:

oook done
(final update? >.<)

Sorry, but Krah pointed out a issue on 01:13:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9), so here is the LAST one. REALLY.

http://puu.sh/9AfbB/6770d9a430.osu

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From bubble random check

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.


[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Please remove "(TV Size) " in the title and add them in the tags because I found no evidence that it can be added... (Poping because of this) well, I know this thing about the (TV Size) but I don't want to remove: first of all because there are so many maps having it and still getting ranked with it (and this too https://osu.ppy.sh/s/172159 has the (TV Size) and it's ranked recnetly) and also because if I see a map without it I think it's a full version, and that's not the case.. :/

[Easy]
General
Wow~ interesting sliders~
Hitsound
01:28:618 - Really weak.. So maybe no whistle here? ok

[madabau's Normal]
General
Puzzling beats.. Hmm.. too many 1/2s in a normal diff in such a high BPM.. But.. yeah..
Beats
00:01:649 - For this kind of beat, I just suggest keep the 2 strong sound same note in the diff.. It's strange to hit one but have nothing on another one. So I just suggest removing the note here to keep the beats clear.(Don't forget to NC on next note) ok
00:06:346 (4) - Same as above. Though the distance is clear, the rhythm is really not good imo. fixed with a little change of rhythm, I used a 1/2 slider at the end, but it fit well now
00:14:073 (1) - Okay not that you want to use 1/2s, use it on 1/2 earlier, the sound is actually there~ same here
00:43:012 (1,2) - And for here, leaving the strong vocal blank is not that good imo. So I suggest that:

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ok, fixed

[Hard]
General
A little bit hard, but acceptable imo.
Beats
00:18:164 - Suggest a note here because of the vocal.. Though I know you don't want it be too hard.. not added because I wasn't really following vocals here and because there are also other part where there is the same rhythm pattern and I don't want to change them
Placement
01:13:921 (3,4,5) - Maybe a smaller distance is needed here to keep the difficulty controlled. Example:

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good, fixed
01:24:981 (3) - Also the jump is way too big for a hard. Try this pattern:

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ok, fixed this too

[Insane]
General
Fun diff~
Placement
00:47:861 (8) - this note is kinda over-emphasized by the big jump. It have no vocal and strong drum on it, just making a connection between previous and next notes, so maybe have a smaller jump and make it easier to read? Example:

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fixed
01:26:649 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - These jumps are just a bit hard for the mapset. Overall this diff is not as hard as here.. If you want to insist using it, I won't disagree, but also won't agree with it. After all it's really strong and good pattern and fitsthe music. But you see, strong beats are all on red ticks, but the jumps are quite equal, so for me, I'll make things like this:(Some thing is wrong with my puush now, and the pattern is hard to describe in pics, so I paste the codes here.. Just have a reference of the position) not a bad idea. I used it :3

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172,52,86649,5,4,0:0:0:0:
172,52,86800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,144,86952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,144,87103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,224,87255,5,0,0:0:0:0:
172,224,87406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,312,87558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,312,87709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87861,5,4,0:0:0:0:

Hitsound
01:13:467 - A finish here is mote fit imo. And I even suggest a finish spam on the 3 slider's end, really exciting and strong part of the music here. ok
01:28:618 - Really weak.. So maybe no whistle here? ok
NCs
01:21:043 (2) - NC on the slider to show the SV change. ok

Call me back~

Atrue wrote:

[General]
Please remove "(TV Size) " in the title and add them in the tags because I found no evidence that it can be added... (Poping because of this)

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from Mekakucity Actors official website

TetMax wrote:

no kds (one suggestion only)

Atrue wrote:

[General]
Please remove "(TV Size) " in the title and add them in the tags because I found no evidence that it can be added... (Poping because of this)

How about "(short ver.)" ?

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from Mekakucity Actors official website

Very good beatmaps good luck!

Atrue wrote:

Ah... Maybe in tags: TV Size but not (tv size)...

Still feel not that good in Normal diff.. The beats are just puzzling..
00:30:285 (4) - Try to extend the slider 1/2 early, I think the vocal is really strong to have a hit on it rather than your current set..

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And some more not that good but just ok beats for me.. But at least this one is still to be checked..

Sorry for the inconvenience, call me back when you are ready.

Gexigamma wrote:

congratz ^.^ Ranked the day the anime ends xD

Satellite wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/165743


Jin ft. MARiA from GARNiDELiA

luxoDeh wrote:

Satellite wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/165743


Jin ft. MARiA from GARNiDELiA

wait. I have as artist tihs: じん ft. メイリア from GARNiDELiA
and as romanised artist this: Jin feat. MARiA from GARNiDERiA

I don't think it's wrong. I remember someone told me to do that time ago! I just need to find it :/

luxoDeh wrote:

omg what? >.<

o.o

Satellite wrote:

luxoDeh wrote:

omg what? >.<

why use "DERiA" ..?

o.o

Krah wrote:

Hi,

Considering the artist I have to unrank your map.
If you read well the dainesl's mod he said you to have the same name in both romanized and not. So I think you have misunderstood.

Artist should be
じん ft. メイリア from GARNiDELiA
and
Jin ft. MARiA from GARNiDELiA


Fix this quickly (and only this) and poke me asap.

Krah wrote:

And we are back

Hope this will be last unrank ...orz