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NicoNicoDouga - Untan Zone

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Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, December 04, 2009 at 11:33:40 PM

Artist: NicoNicoDouga
Title: Untan Zone
Source: K-ON!
Tags: Yui Hirasawa Mio Akiyama Ritsu Tainaka Tsumugi Kotobuki Red Zone
BPM: 165
Filesize: 12553kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.82 stars, 499 notes)
  2. Normal (4.02 stars, 151 notes)
Download: NicoNicoDouga - Untan Zone
Download: NicoNicoDouga - Untan Zone (no video)
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Last edited by Mafiamaster , edited 7 times in total.
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
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Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Tags? Source?
Consider using custom combo colours. (hey, I follow a format, k? Shush. :P)
Consider making an easier difficulty.

[Normal]

00:49:051 (6) - The section starting here and ending at the break seemed kinda messy; difficult to tell what's going on, at least during the first few playthroughs. (which matches the song, I suppose) Maybe put a new combo here (since it matches something in the lyrics anyways) and then arrange the subsequent beats to be a bit more readable for a newer player?

[Insane]

Epic.

00:36:097 (2) - Maybe put this right below 1? The slight side-step looks a bit awkward. (maybe keep all 4 beats in a single combo too)
00:38:042 (2) - ^
00:52:060 (1,2,3,4,5) - Centre?
01:40:051 (5) - New combo?
01:44:078 (4) - ^ (just to match the 3-note combos)

Yay for pickiness. Have a star~
Mafiamaster
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Topic Starter
Mafiamaster
Fixed Normal, Insane and color!
Cyril Scarlet
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Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
o..oh my finger...
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
GENERAL
Could you covert the format of your BG pic to jpeg ? PNG with the size of 1.22MB seems so large to me... xD

NORMAL
00:24:006 (2) - This play so weirdly, add another note here ? 00:24:243
00:41:051 (2) - So LOL ! So cute~~~
Otherwise, it's good !

INSANE
Sorry, can't mod this properly since my playing skill of endless streams sucks. xD *deja vu of Red Zone*
00:41:051 (9) - LOL WTH, this is FUNNY, good one ! I lol-ed too much on this, so cute~~

Hope you will map a Hard difficulty. Feel free to ask me for mod again if you do... xD

Star, and this song is cute~~ >w<
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Video: Yes.
Storyboard: No.
Custom Skin: No.
Background: Yes.
Source: No. (Add some source like K-ON!)
Tags: No. (Add some tags, too.)
File Size: 12,3MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing is perfect. Nice job.

[Difficulties]

[Normal]

Lower by 1 tick overall difficulty for balance with HP Drain.

A bit too hard for be the most easier difficulty, but it's passable.

00:33:051 (3) - New combo.
00:43:069 (5) - ^
00:46:060 (6) - ^

[Insane]

Increase more HP Drain? For an insane map will be nice.

No major problems found.
v2b
504 posts
Joined October 2008
v2b
MMM :(
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Shinxyn
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Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
@_@ Dunno what beats to follow
Yea, volume down, its kinda loud and too constant, you can probably mix in some soft sections to make the maps sound better, but might be too much extra work

Normal- Hard to follow, so I suggest overall diff up, makes it kinda easier to read?
00:42:078 - please add a note here... the chirping demands it?
00:45:069 - ^
00:48:060 - ^ @_@ maybe an extra 1/2 slider for these?
01:17:031 - add note cuz it make this sound like 01:20:006 (1,2)?
Yea, just my thoughts since its kinda hard to follow.. the "song"

Insane-
....
well, thats beyond my playing level
I have a feeling you're ganna get complains on the ending stream and how those sliders don't make sense (like how they complained for my Love-Coloured map >_<)
Nazi-
SPOILER
00:49:033 (1,3) - ultra nazi- change the new combo here for the... err.. music/song/vocal/background, I DON'T KNOW!
01:25:042 (6,7) - align? doesn't matter
01:35:069 (7) - new combo for that little gap in the beats?

@_@ make Hard pl0x
DJPop
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3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
LOL

~Normal~
01:33:051 (1) - remove hitfinish

~Insane~
00:36:516 - add circle, I heard the sound here o_o
00:36:880 - ^
00:37:971 - ^
00:53:069 (5) - use slider and end with hitfinish
01:25:334 - I heard the sound here
01:25:607 - ^
01:25:789 - ^


+Star
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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wow this beat map was crazy x3
Takuma
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Takuma
lol
Andrea
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
Ranked!
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
orz
Setdmais
4 posts
Joined April 2010
Setdmais
I've tried downloading this map for 3 days, and it just won't let me. It's like it can't connect to the download link, but i've had no problem downloading like 200 maps in the passed couple days. Could someone help me out please? Thanks in advance ^_^
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