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Kytoxid
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Mismagius
Woow, it's a difficulty!

What's n the difficulty?

Death.

Download: Kirsten Price - We Will Be Heroes (Kytoxid) [Blue Dragon].osu
Topic Starter
Kytoxid

Blue Dragon wrote:

Woow, it's a difficulty!

What's n the difficulty?

Death.
Thanks!

Obligatory mod:

You want to warn the 2x BPM somehow.

00:00:070 (4) - Probably could be shifted a grid up for spacing consistency.
00:06:091 (1,2) - Might as well stack the 1 on top of 00:07:094 (1).
00:07:094 (1,1,1,1) - Misaligned, and I recommend keeping these as a single combo.
00:26:077 (1) - Definitely not rankable, no clue where the slider goes after the W.
00:29:067 (1,1,1,1) - 1 combo?
00:31:043 (1) - Probably remove this spinner.
Mismagius

Kytoxid wrote:

Blue Dragon wrote:

Woow, it's a difficulty!

What's n the difficulty?

Death.
Thanks!

Obligatory mod:

You want to warn the 2x BPM somehow.

00:00:070 (4) - Probably could be shifted a grid up for spacing consistency. what
00:06:091 (1,2) - Might as well stack the 1 on top of 00:07:094 (1). what
00:07:094 (1,1,1,1) - Misaligned, and I recommend keeping these as a single combo. combo = no, align = yes
00:26:077 (1) - Definitely not rankable, no clue where the slider goes after the W. fixed
00:29:067 (1,1,1,1) - 1 combo? no
00:31:043 (1) - Probably remove this spinner. kay
I can't understand the 1st and 2nd mod :?
Topic Starter
Kytoxid
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Mismagius
Dusty
[Easy]
Feels empty.
00:02:155 () - Add a note here? Extend 2 to make a slider that ends here?
00:07:074 (1) - Sounds unnatural.
00:13:012 (1) - Finish.

[Normal]
00:03:081 (2,3,4,5,6) - It looks ugly and weird, so spread them around more.
00:06:091 (2) - Remove repeat?

[Hard]
00:14:036 (3) - Remove whistle from end of the slider?

[Blue Dragon]
00:01:074 (1,2,3) - Equilateral triangle?
00:06:039 (4) - Remove clap?
00:07:094 (1,1,1,1,1) - Symmetry? (I think you should feel free to play around with the spacing rules)
00:29:067 (1,1,1,1) - Symmetry?
Topic Starter
Kytoxid

Dusty wrote:

[Easy]
Feels empty.
00:02:155 () - Add a note here? Extend 2 to make a slider that ends here?
00:07:074 (1) - Sounds unnatural.
00:13:012 (1) - Finish.

[Normal]
00:03:081 (2,3,4,5,6) - It looks ugly and weird, so spread them around more.
00:06:091 (2) - Remove repeat?

[Hard]
00:14:036 (3) - Remove whistle from end of the slider?

[Blue Dragon]
00:01:074 (1,2,3) - Equilateral triangle?
00:06:039 (4) - Remove clap?
00:07:094 (1,1,1,1,1) - Symmetry? (I think you should feel free to play around with the spacing rules)
00:29:067 (1,1,1,1) - Symmetry?
Thanks! Things were changed except for BD's difficulty.
Kitty McWittles
I hate you ;_; friggin English Pokemon theme </3

[Insane]
00:26:077 (1) - Lol.
00:30:029 (1,1) - Turn this into a slider instead?

At least it's one of the less gay songs I guess... couldn't really find any problems so I'll just star it and be on my way~
Topic Starter
Kytoxid

Samurai_X wrote:

I hate you ;_; friggin English Pokemon theme </3

[Insane]
00:26:077 (1) - Lol.
00:30:029 (1,1) - Turn this into a slider instead?

At least it's one of the less gay songs I guess... couldn't really find any problems so I'll just star it and be on my way~
XD. Thanks for modding/starring, at least. :P

Blue Dragon:

The new slider W could be more symmetrical.
Kerensa
hey ^^

overview:
LOL @ the kiai time, it's like more than half the song LOLOL
okies...

Easy:
fine.

Normal:
00:07:948 [1]one small square to the left.. i tink.. it's to far away O.O

Hard:
meh =__= fine.

Blue_Dragon:
LOL @ this level. fine.

star star for you you ^^

haisha_
Topic Starter
Kytoxid

haisha_ wrote:

hey ^^

overview:
LOL @ the kiai time, it's like more than half the song LOLOL
okies...

Easy:
fine.

Normal:
00:07:948 [1]one small square to the left.. i tink.. it's to far away O.O

Hard:
meh =__= fine.

Blue_Dragon:
LOL @ this level. fine.

star star for you you ^^

haisha_
Well if you look at it another way, there're only 15 seconds of kiai here. XD

I think that note's fine where it's snapped, thanks for the mod though!
Hanyuu
hi

nice skin :)
the source text is very long. should reduce it to
add Blue Dragon to tags

Easy:

it got some difficulty in it that should not be in a easy beatmap.
you should change the half beat repeat slider into normal sliders
nothing else to notice

Normal:

00:16:043 (2) - finish sound
00:26:015 (6) - feels wrong. it should be on white tick with a finish sound too

Hard:


00:14:077 (4) - whistle
00:16:043 (2) - remove clap
00:19:074 (5) - missing :(
00:20:015 (1,4) - whistle
00:22:063 (1) - clap here instead and finish on 2
00:29:067 (1,4,1) - whistle

Insane[/b]

00:09:018 (1,2) - too far
the bpmx2 warning would be easier to see if you put it over the stack
end spinner at 19:741
00:24:049 (1) - remove and add one at 25:120
00:26:077 (1) - ugly :?
Andrea
[Overall]

BPM: 145,00 - Offset: 287 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Easy]

00:07:094 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:083 (1,2) - Too hard for an easy map.
00:21:039 (4,5) - ^


[Normal]

Seems "Hard".

00:12:029 (1) - Spinner too short for a normal map.
00:18:091 (1,2) - Hard to read for a normal.

00:21:039 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Hard]

00:07:094 (3) - New combo.
00:08:015 (1) - Remove new combo.


[Blue Dragon's Insane]

00:09:018 (1) - Partially offscreen.
00:09:060 (2) - ^
Ephemeral
Modding as per request.

Bold indicates things that directly violate the ranking criteria and if left unaltered, will prevent your map from being ranked.
Italics indicates aesthetics suggestions
Underline indicates gameplay suggestions

Mods which are formatted more than once are indicative of issues which stem across categories.

Timing check:
BPM: 145 (OK)
Offset: -113 (original was +293 - this needs to be fixed)
[Do note that the offset fix applies only to align the stanzas properly. For all purposes intended, your current offset works fine, but is still technically wrong.]

The background is of a fairly low quality. You're probably better off finding a less specific but higher quality wallpaper - remember to keep it at 1024x768 if you do find one though.

[Easy]
No problems detected.

[Normal]
Tick rate should be 0.5

[Hard]
No problems detected.

[Blue Dragon's Insane]
Tick rate should be 0.5
00:09:060 (1,2) - Is ridiculous, but nothing technically wrong with it. Consider halving the jump at least.

No reason not to award a star. Maps this short are difficult to map - excellent job with what you have got to work with.
DJPop
~Easy~
Fine.

~Normal~
Fine.

~Hard~
Fine.

~Blue Dragon's Insane~
00:01:094 (2) - not symmetrical, move right 1 grid (Lv2)
00:09:018 (1,2) - (2) is offscreen, (1) will offscreen if play with Hard Rock
00:21:091 (1) - start on red tick
00:25:032 (4) - will offscreen if play with Hard Rock
00:26:077 (1) - maybe unrankable...
00:30:008 (1,1) - not symmetrical, move down 1 grid (Lv2)


+Star
Topic Starter
Kytoxid
Without quoting everyone, I'm done. Thanks for the mods! (except for Blue Dragon's diff, of course)
Mismagius
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Download: Kirsten Price - We Will Be Heroes (Kytoxid) [Blue Dragon's Insane].osu
Dusty
[Easy]
00:01:033 (2,3,4) - The same beats are whistle, whistle, normal in [Normal].
00:21:040 (4) - Whistle at end?
00:28:002 (4) - One less repeat?

[Normal]
00:00:070 (2) - It could look better. (move the top sliderpoint left and the left sliderpoint down?)

[Hard]
00:30:092 (1,3) - Remove whistle from one of them?
Topic Starter
Kytoxid

Dusty wrote:

[Easy]
00:01:033 (2,3,4) - The same beats are whistle, whistle, normal in [Normal].
00:21:040 (4) - Whistle at end?
00:28:002 (4) - One less repeat?

[Normal]
00:00:070 (2) - It could look better. (move the top sliderpoint left and the left sliderpoint down?)

[Hard]
00:30:092 (1,3) - Remove whistle from one of them?
Changed, thanks! (1 was supposed to be a clap on Hard, oops, lol)
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
00:08:016 (4) - Move the last slider point 1 grid right
No problems found :)

[Normal]
No problems found :)

[Hard]
No problems found :)

[Blue Dragon's Insane]
00:03:019 (1) - Shorten to 1/2 a beat
00:08:016 (1) - Move 1 grid right?
00:08:036 (1) - ^ and 1 grid down?
00:08:057 (1) - Move 1 grid down?

00:15:040 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 or 1/4 beat, then place a beat here. Shorten the spinner to 00:16:43?
00:18:092 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 or 1/4 beat, then place a beat here. Shorten the spinner accordingly

00:21:040 (1,1) - This just doesn't work for me. Can you possibly map this differently?


Overall, a good, short beatmap. Starred
Topic Starter
Kytoxid

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
00:08:016 (4) - Move the last slider point 1 grid right
No problems found :)

[Normal]
No problems found :)

[Hard]
No problems found :)

[Blue Dragon's Insane]
00:03:019 (1) - Shorten to 1/2 a beat
00:08:016 (1) - Move 1 grid right?
00:08:036 (1) - ^ and 1 grid down?
00:08:057 (1) - Move 1 grid down?

00:15:040 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 or 1/4 beat, then place a beat here. Shorten the spinner to 00:16:43?
00:18:092 (1) - Move the spinner forward 1/2 or 1/4 beat, then place a beat here. Shorten the spinner accordingly

00:21:040 (1,1) - This just doesn't work for me. Can you possibly map this differently?


Overall, a good, short beatmap. Starred
The slider has been straightened out, thanks!
askerlate47
STAR~
Tanmak
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Topic Starter
Kytoxid

askerlate47 wrote:

STAR~
Thanks!

Tanmak wrote:

Hello~~

[Normal]
00:12:300 (1) Oh..Spinner is short in Normal. Also After spinner, appear circle right away. You need to change another pattern instead of spinner.

[Hard]
00:06:093 (1) Move 1/2 lately, and respacing.

[Blue Dragon's Insane]
Volume is too low..T.T

Good~
Starred.
I think the Hard note is okay, but spinner was taken out of Normal and replaced. Thanks!
Agnes
Herp derp. Another mod request in the queue. <3

[Easy]

Flawless.

[Normal]

Flawless.

[Hard]

00:04:025 (2,3) - Check spacing?
00:04:438 (3,4) - ^
00:04:852 (4,5) - ^
00:05:266 (5,6) - ^

[Blue Dragon's Insane]

00:04:025 (2,3) - Check spacing
00:09:197 (1) - Off screen note.
00:25:025 (4) - Part of slider is off screen

Anyway, good mapping and nice collaboration. Also, I adore the skin. <3 Star'd~
Mismagius
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Download: Kirsten Price - We Will Be Heroes (Kytoxid) [Blue Dragon's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
Kytoxid
Updated. Hard spacing is okay. :)
Mismagius
Topic Starter
Kytoxid

Blue Dragon wrote:

You have a fixed slider.
I can has fixed slider? :D
Sushi
[Easy]
00:08:016 (4) - make it symetric?

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
Fine~

[BD's Insane]
00:10:043 (1,2) - align better?
00:25:033 (4) - the end of this slider is just ugly

you have my star!
Topic Starter
Kytoxid

Sushi971 wrote:

[Easy]
00:08:016 (4) - make it symetric?

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
Fine~

[BD's Insane]
00:10:043 (1,2) - align better?
00:25:033 (4) - the end of this slider is just ugly

you have my star!
Made it a bit more symmetric. Thanks!
Mismagius
Topic Starter
Kytoxid
Uploaded...again.
Vanmonky
As your request in my queue.

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
00:13:054 (1) - Too far away. Since this diff is commonly played by not-too-advanced-but-not-too-noob player.

[Hard]
Good.

[Blue Dragon's Insane]
00:25:033 (4) - OH NO OH NO! Fix that overlaping slider.
00:26:078 (1) - THIS ONE TOO! OMG!


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Yes, you may ignore them all ^^
And *star~
Topic Starter
Kytoxid
Oops. Fixed that oversight. Thanks!
ouranhshc
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Mismagius
anonymous_old
Dratini
SPOILER
Good.

Dragonair
SPOILER
Good.

Dragonite
SPOILER

00:17:087 (4) : Confusing.
00:30:029 (4) : Repeat one less time.

Blue Dragonite
SPOILER

00:12:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) : Slider it.
00:26:077 (1) : Ugly.

And Skin-mod:

21:48 *Kytoxid is listening to Kirsten Price - We Will Be Heroes
21:48 <Kytoxid> : It's 30 seconds x 4 difficulties.
21:48 <Kytoxid> : lol
21:48 <Kytoxid> : (because every person that has modded has commented on that, so I'll comment before you can)
21:48 <Loogiesquared> : There's unessisary skinning here.
21:49 <Kytoxid> : Mine?
21:49 <Loogiesquared> : and i dislike the Porygon Slider-repeat.
21:49 <Kytoxid> : XD
21:49 <whymeman> : what the...?
21:49 <Kytoxid> : ?
21:50 <whymeman> : Porygon is upside down (; ._.)
21:50 <Kytoxid> : o_O
21:50 <Loogiesquared> : Button right, left, and middle are unused.
21:50 <whymeman> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/387
21:50 <Kytoxid> : Oh my.
21:50 <Kytoxid> : Hm. I shall fix that.
21:50 <Loogiesquared> : the pokeball cursor is stupid.
21:51 <whymeman> : . . .
21:51 <Kytoxid> : You're stupid. =P
21:51 <Kytoxid> : I just took BananasGoMoo's skin, tbh. (with his permission, of course)
21:51 <Loogiesquared> : menu-button-background is unused.
21:51 <supergarlic> : orz
21:52 <Loogiesquared> : star2 is unused, and try another sliderball.
21:52 <Loogiesquared> : that's my skinning mod, now onto the map.
Topic Starter
Kytoxid
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blissfulyoshi
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Topic Starter
Kytoxid

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Make tick rate the same in all diffs unless you have a reason to change it
Add Blue Dragon to all of your tags.
Offset: irc

Dratini:
00:29:660 (1) - silence the end of the spinner?

Dragonair:
needs a spinner to break ties
00:18:901 (1) - remove new combo to follow the lyrics
00:22:625 (1) - since you did not add new combos for nonvocal sections anywhere else in the song, remove new combo

Dragonite:
00:19:522 (4) - new combo for instruments

Blue Dragonite:
the 2x timing section does not fit the song
I didn't really understand how you added combos in this diff, so I did not mod combos.
00:30:694 (1) - The timing between this and the previous note threw me off

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Nice map. Star.
Thanks! Fixed it up.
Lokamp
Dratini (get it on the Safari zone is pretty hard... ^^)
00:02:076 (1) - this can be confusing for beginners... move this beat to the left!
00:08:014 (4) - soft finish on this slider's end
00:16:083 (1,2) - end these sliders with finish

Dragonair (even level up a Dratini on Lv.30 can be tricky... ^^")
[General] lower hitsounds's volume a bit during kiai time, the rest was ok :3

Dragonite (... Level 55... -_-")
00:06:007 (1) - finish here

Blue Dragonite (...shiny? x3)
[General] raise thie hitsounds's volume during kiai time
00:25:031 (4) - move it 4 squares down
00:30:028 (1) - clap here
00:30:090 (2,4) - clap the 2nd, finish the 4th

Short, well mapped beatmap with pokémon... I think it's enough to lend you my star :3
Topic Starter
Kytoxid
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Mismagius
Topic Starter
Kytoxid
Uploaded.
arien666
[Dratini]
No issues :3

[Dragonair]
No issues :3

[Dragonite]
00:27:17(2,3,4,5) - Make these notes like curve pattern :3 [My suggestion = How about move (4) ?]

[Blue Dragonite]
00:02:14(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?

Good map.
But I don't know these names :(...
[/me played Korean ver only...]

Here's my star XD
Topic Starter
Kytoxid

arken1015 wrote:

[Dratini]
No issues :3

[Dragonair]
No issues :3

[Dragonite]
00:27:17(2,3,4,5) - Make these notes like curve pattern :3 [My suggestion = How about move (4) ?]

[Blue Dragonite]
00:02:14(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?

Good map.
But I don't know these names :(...
[/me played Korean ver only...]

Here's my star XD
Thanks! (I don't think BD will really care about that 1 grid, lol)
whymeman
Hmm....

[Blue Dragonite]

00:29:066 (1,1,1,1) - Not neatly squared?

Other stuff to point out.....

Your spinner-circle.png looks a bit wobbly and not that neat around the edges. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/465 You can see the flat sides on the spinner. Also, pleas resize the comboburst, its too large. Make sure its not larger than 500px. Last, make sure to add blue dragon too ALL of the difficulty Tags.

That's about all I have to say. Remind me to do a recheck after the fixes and/or adjustments are done.
Topic Starter
Kytoxid

whymeman wrote:

Hmm....

[Blue Dragonite]

00:29:066 (1,1,1,1) - Not neatly squared?

Other stuff to point out.....

Your spinner-circle.png looks a bit wobbly and not that neat around the edges. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/465 You can see the flat sides on the spinner. Also, pleas resize the comboburst, its too large. Make sure its not larger than 500px. Last, make sure to add blue dragon too ALL of the difficulty Tags.

That's about all I have to say. Remind me to do a recheck after the fixes and/or adjustments are done.
Everything was changed, except the rectangle on BD's difficulty. I think I recall asking about that and him saying it was okay. I'll double-check.

EDIT: Okay, BD's difficulty is fixed too.
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