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Coldplay - White Shadows

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Card N'FoRcE
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on giovedì 10 dicembre 2009 at 19.35.04

Artist: Coldplay
Title: White Shadows
Source: X&Y
BPM: 127,43
Filesize: 7377kb
Play Time: 02:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0,43 stars, 100 notes)
  2. Hard (4,4 stars, 449 notes)
  3. Normal (2,34 stars, 296 notes)
Download: Coldplay - White Shadows
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A simple map this time.
No Weird jump, no Impossible insanes, no storyboard.
A song, a background and the map with simple yet enjoyable spacing, like maps were in "old times" =3
Last edited by Card N'FoRcE , edited 22 times in total.
Lokamp
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Lokamp
...ok, semi-modded via irc, so have your happy star ^^
Andrea
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Andrea
[Overall]

- Set a preview point on all difficulties.

Timing is fine.

[Easy]

00:27:073 (2) - New combo.
02:17:089 (1) - This combo seems out of map. Remove new combo.
02:31:019 (1) - Never start spinners on blue lines if not necessary.

[Normal]

00:26:079 (3) - I don't like much a note silenced. Can confuse players.

[Hard]

02:57:020 (1) - This combo seems out of map. Remove new combo.
Diasios
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Diasios
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

00:39:097 (3) - New combo
00:41:086 (4) - ^

[Normal]

It's ok

[Hard]

It's ok

Starred~
Card N'FoRcE
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osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

- Set a preview point on all difficulties.

Timing is fine.

[Easy]

00:27:073 (2) - New combo. Uhm I noticed that before, but i think it feels weird.
02:17:089 (1) - This combo seems out of map. Remove new combo. It follows a completely different instrument, so it has to be a new combo, to me.
02:31:019 (1) - Never start spinners on blue lines if not necessary. It was supposed to start on white line, i dunno what happened o.o Fixed

[Normal]

00:26:079 (3) - I don't like much a note silenced. Can confuse players. Increased a bit the volume. Anyway, i think it's not a problem, since it's the last beat of the combo and there's a whole second of GAP.

[Hard]

02:57:020 (1) - This combo seems out of map. Remove new combo. Same thing as Easy 02:17:089 (1)
Thanks for modding ^^

@xxheroxx: i think those new combos are not useful, also i want followpoints (why does everyone ignore followpoints, i wonder)
yaya
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yo
try offset +6 ~~
[hard]
00:34:032 (5) - finish is better.
00:41:086 (1) - ^
00:54:010 (1) - normal hitsound .no whistle
00:56:045 (6) - ^
01:26:011 (2) - the finish of slider . why not soft finish.?
01:27:076 (3) - and delete this note? like you did it before. 01:18:058 (5,1) -
02:12:025 (1) - finish .instead of whistle...or finish + whistle . becuz you do it here. 02:19:078 (1) -

[Normal]
00:56:045 (6) - normal hitsound.
00:58:080 - add a note?
01:02:057 - ^
01:11:075 (2) - move to 01:11:099 ?
01:26:082 (2) - move to 01:27:005 ?
01:37:088 - add a note?
02:57:020 (2) - do like before
03:23:033 - add a note.
do it like this make it easier to catch the notes.

nice xD
Lokamp
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Easy
01:18:058 (3,4) - finish here
01:50:059 (2) - move it a square right and a square down
02:11:007 (4,5) - strange spacing... try to move the 5th beat (and next 1st, 2nd and 3rd orange) 1-2 squares right
02:25:043 (5) - move it 1-2 squares up

Normal
00:26:079 (3) - soft finish here
00:49:039 (1) - ^
01:11:099 - ... new soft finish beat here? I'm not sure...
01:18:058 (3,4,5) - move them a square left
01:27:005 - if you added the soft finish beat before, add here too ^^
01:33:064 (1,2,3,4) - move them a square up
02:57:044 - new soft whistle beat here
03:12:050 - ^

Hard
... already modded via Irc... remember? x3

As said before, this map is a clear example of how a map can be good without any special Storyboarding modifies... Keep up the GREAT work! ;3
Card N'FoRcE
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Thanks, both of you ^^
I didn't quote everything (it would have been looooooong)...

I applied some of what you both suggested, thanks for modding ^^
Yumiko
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starred :P
Luxary
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Luxary
I really like this map.
As Simple as Beautiful :D

Starred
nazenaze
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nazenaze
niiiiiice :D
really enjoyable hitsounds :D

catch a star :)
cesc
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cesc
I love Coldplay. I love Card N'FoRcE.

STARRED~
Teara
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I see no problems~

I suggest you silence the slider slide noise in all diffs~ ( see attachment for the blank sounds )

You also forgot too set a preview point in all your diffs~

Nice beatmap~ good job.

Star

Download: Blank sound sample.rar
Card N'FoRcE
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Teara wrote:

I see no problems~

I suggest you silence the slider slide noise in all diffs~ ( see attachment for the blank sounds )

You also forgot too set a preview point in all your diffs~

Nice beatmap~ good job.

Star
Thanks a lot for this suggestion ^^
Anyway, i didn't make it exactly as you told me ^^"
Since blank sound felt really "empty", i used the soft hitsound and only at the beginning. I think it's perfect now :)

I set preview points too.
Jinxy
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[Easy]
01:16:069 (1,2,3,4,5) - The timing points around this area seems weird...

[Normal]
01:55:77 - Quite a few unused timing sections?
02:20:95 (3) - End 1/4 later.
03:33:69 - Unused timing sections?
04:06:41 (3) - End 1/4 later.

[Hard]
02:15:054 (1) - Mini darrinub slider detected.
04:00:099 (1) - ^

Starred.
Card N'FoRcE
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JInxyjem wrote:

[Easy]
01:16:069 (1,2,3,4,5) - The timing points around this area seems weird... Ok i fixed them, but i still don't understand the issue in this D:

[Normal]
01:55:77 - Quite a few unused timing sections? Fixed
02:20:95 (3) - End 1/4 later. No sorry i really like it that way D:
03:33:69 - Unused timing sections? Fixed (awww these are all Hard's timing points >.<)
04:06:41 (3) - End 1/4 later. Same as above

[Hard]
02:15:054 (1) - Mini darrinub slider detected.
04:00:099 (1) - ^ lol you're the only one who noticed that xD (yeah they're intentional)

Starred.
Thanks for modding ^^
Armin
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sei chiara come un'albaa
(ma anche no)
deadbeat
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nice map :)
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There are a few inherited timing points that are directly on top of notes, just skim through and check for them.

Normal/Hard
00:49:086 (2,3) [and other hitsounds patterns like this] To me it sounds better if the first two hits are Soft, and the last one Normal. Switching to Normal where it does now puts emphasis on the off-beat which sounds kind of off with the music.

Nice :)
Card N'FoRcE
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Ok, i cleaned up the most important timing sections.

About your suggestion, sorry, i don't like how it sounds >.<
Kamushi
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Okay, maybe i'm so weak in modding, but i really didn't found any mistakes. Or maybe that's because i love all Coldplay songs and music is more important for me than little mistakes. xD

Om, maybe one, but just a little.

04:16:053 (1) - Every spinner i saw in this song ends by "Finish" hitsound. This don't have it. :D

~star ★☆★
Card N'FoRcE
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Oh :O
Fixed ^^
Cyril Scarlet
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jockeytiyan
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Here's my mod. Well, actually, they are suggestions.

Easy:

00:37:015 (2) - Remove the whistle.
00:49:086 (2) - ^
01:45:088 (6) - ^
01:55:030 (5) - Don't silence.


Normal:

00:43:074 (4) - Again, remove the whistle.
01:30:035 (4) - You could add a beat here.


Hard:

00:38:009 (6) - Remove the whistle.


I actually didn't find anything very wrong with the map. It looks ready for ranking already, so I'll give this a star.
Card N'FoRcE
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jockeytiyan wrote:

Here's my mod. Well, actually, they are suggestions.

Easy:

00:37:015 (2) - Remove the whistle. D:
00:49:086 (2) - ^ D:
01:45:088 (6) - ^ Fixed
01:55:030 (5) - Don't silence. Actually, it had Soft hitsound, but yeah, fixed xD


Normal:

00:43:074 (4) - Again, remove the whistle. D:
01:30:035 (4) - You could add a beat here. Added


Hard:

00:38:009 (6) - Remove the whistle. D:


I actually didn't find anything very wrong with the map. It looks ready for ranking already, so I'll give this a star.
Thanks for modding ^^
Actually, why did you want me to remove those whistles at the beginning? D:
jockeytiyan
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Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Actually, why did you want me to remove those whistles at the beginning? D:
They just didn't sound right for me. I suggest you get a second opinion for better judgment. ^^
Gens
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Timing is kind of weird. :(
What I got is:

BPM: 127.435 (Precision is necessary if the song is around ~5mins)
Offset: 4,208

...which sounds good in the Timing tab, but not while playing.
Well, you should ignore the BPM, but you can try the offset. I always got 8ms late while testing, plus it sounds better in both cases.

Also, Low stack leniency is unrankable. I can't really see why do you want it low, personally.
In Hard, 02:15:054 (1), 04:00:099 (1) - what? I don't think this is allowed. If it is, it isn't pretty.

Everything else is good. :)
Sorry for the delay, by the way.
Card N'FoRcE
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Ok, i fixed those sliders (i don't want to hear anymore complains ._.)

About the timing, i'm really unsure, because i get SS without any problems O.o

Anyway, i'm gonna recheck this throughly soon.

Thanks for modding ^^
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jericho2442
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[Normal]
04:06:043 (3) - sounds better it you make it a lil longer so it ends on the red timing tick, also suits the pattern you are doing more ;)



thats all i could find, great maps, enjoy a star XD
whymeman
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The beatmap looks great overall, but I have one concern.

The stacking in [Hard] is a bit "on & off" which makes it look a bit funny in play mode. Try looking into adjust it enough to keep it from being randomly disabled. (Sorry for the late reply as well. Had issues to deal with)
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@jericho2442: sorry, i think it sounds better in blue tick D:

@whymeman: aaaaaawwwww >.< Do i really have to? D:
I always use that kind of stack because it looks better with 1/2 beats and still stacks 1/4 beats to make them readable.
I have some ranked maps using Stack Leniency 2, and noone complained when playing, so I won't disable it unless you give me a really good reason, sorry D:
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No problem, thanks for your time ^^
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