yes that's the intent. The spacing is depend on the malody and flow, not simply 1/4 > 1/6 blabla. Enjoy that with your cursor, eyes and ears , but not data :3
Priti wrote:
i think u mean enjoy it with my tears I can't even stream.
非常感谢~Hollow Wings wrote:
why so diao
似乎完工了就来看看果然连打成为新梗开发区hhh,不过似乎触卡和aho在这方面也是已经探索很远。。。 tsuka和AHO在stream的使用上比我走的远太多了,所以与其说是开发新梗不如说是在努力追赶吧Antares
- 00:44:013 (4) - 参考00:43:432 (1,2) - 的相对位置把4放在3的对应位置把?或许可以直接把45换成一个1/4滑条也行。。。 有点意思~okay
- 01:00:852 (4,5,6) - 好像直线差了点?还有01:53:497 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这种233不过略nazi 我也忘了当初是专门放的小弧线还是怎么来的了o_o
- 01:22:852 (1,2) - 提示高速连打的这个黄色柑橘和其他颜色相性不好啊,换成橙色之类的?和后面红色也协调的蛮好柑橘 橙色配色好难啊
- 01:30:465 (5,7,1) - 同间距? 可以有
- 01:58:336 (5,6,7,8) - 柑橘完全可以ctrl+g 转过来感觉有点怪怪的,本意是想和前面连贯在一起的8个小跳
- 02:01:432 (3,4,5,6) - 同上 跳的太猛了……
- 02:06:852 (1,2,3,4) - 果然顺序变成1432比较有感觉 这个可以有
- 03:05:691 (12) - 43,46 gooood
- 03:44:787 (2,3) - 不知道你信不信,这俩换一下位置打起来更简单(因为不换会有钝角跳接连打,非常别手,换了后全是锐角,而且还接在折返箭头后面所以很影响玩家对物件时间点的判定 可以试试看
- 03:52:336 (1,2,3) - 这个直线好像差略多? 貌似本来就不是直线o_o
- 03:57:465 (5) - ds调一下 not a big deal。其实这图里stream大部分都是没有开DS直接放的,完全看感觉owo
- 04:06:465 (4,5) - 这真的是有点难,主要是这种串里面只折返一次的话对下次物件的时间判定会有不小影响,特别是在这种串里面(顺便不得不想起婆婆连打orz 难度不是问题:>
- 07:36:271 (5,6,7,8,1) - 这个弧线修一下? 微调了一下
- 07:44:013 (1) - 这里为何要用黄色? 啊这里弄错了
- 08:15:174 (1,2,3) - 这个似乎应该是六分拍连打 对的
- 最后那个滑条应该是有5个音,改成1/12的折返 我看看怎么调整sv的
230+的移动连打真的是完全打不动了hhh, 上次打的时候前面其实还好,但是高bpm移动连打真的是要命,这个要玩起来或许比material还难也说不定。。。
good luck
thank you ~~~~Kiiwa wrote:
eeeeeeeee long time no mod[Antares]I don't know if you agree, but I think all 1/6 should be in a different colour, even if its only a slider.
- The OD in relation to the AR is really low, I should suggest to increase the OD by .5 ~ 1. adjusted
- I wish the hitsound volume was a little louder. i dont wanna the hitsounds overrides the music completely
- 00:02:787 (2,3) - Add whistle here is much better. sure~
- 00:13:820 (1) - Add whistle? ^
- 00:44:594 (9) - Add clap. ^
- 01:08:787 - 01:09:562 - This part is 1/6 or 1/8. piano here is 1/4
- 01:42:078 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe change these to 1/4 so you can get a sound at 01:43:045 - considering
- 01:52:142 (5) - Blanket can be better. This slider also breaks the rhythm and is hard to read when looking to 01:52:916 (1) - :)
- 02:37:045 (1,2,3) - Would be better if all of these were CTRL+G to be the same as 02:37:626 (4) - (4) is different from the prev 3
- 04:11:013 (4,5,8,9) - These jumps seemed completely random and unnecessary to me. i think it's fine
- 04:23:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - OMG I can't do it...
- 05:25:820 (1,2,3) - I suggest you change it to something like this: you miss the beat here...
- 05:29:432 (11) - The song has actually the stream continuing through the slider, I think you should follow the song too. i think there's not ...
- 05:36:271 (1,1,3) - Please change these combo colours to reflect 1/6 as you did for the rest of the map. special color is used to emphasize 1/6 notes and some certain pattern
- 05:43:820 (1,2,3) - ^
- 06:26:594 (2,3) - Spacing is excessive. not hard here
- 06:45:562 - Start decreasing the hitsound volume here to follow the song until 06:48:658 - good~
- 06:56:594 (2,3,4) - Change combo colours to reflect 1/6.
- 06:58:142 (2,3,4) - ^
- 06:57:368 (2,3,4,1) - These should actually be in the shape the square, 06:57:174 (1) - not this one if you listen to the song~ the last one is highlighted by current pattern
- 07:03:368 (1) - Again, combo colour.
- 07:04:529 (1) - ^
- 07:05:303 (8,9) - ^
- 07:10:723 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
- 07:40:142 (2,3) - ^
- 07:50:787 (2) - ^
- 08:04:432 (8,1) - I think this flow isn't the best you could make it lol. you're right but i have no better idea now..
Nice one~
谢谢哇~~期待一下后面的Beren wrote:
[Antares]
01:08:400 (2) - 和1的距离还可以,和3的距离太近了 调整了一下
01:08:787 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - DS渐变? 可以越来越大 这个就算了………………
01:38:594 (4) - 可以换成2个note做一个跳 slider太平淡了 太邪恶了~
01:58:529 (6,7,8) - 增加DS,做成一个跳 看来确实要调整下这里了
02:38:207 (2) - ctrl+g 太太太太邪恶了=v=
后面的没空看了,下次补上
Appreciate~Satellite wrote:
Yoo
[General][Antares]
- I playing feel. AR9.5 is too Fast :3 Try AR9.3 Agree~
That's all
- 00:13:820 (1) - add whistle ? For main melody follow :3 added~
- 00:19:239 (1) - Please listen! Spinner Start 00:19:142 - here? maybe! you got it!
- 00:32:400 (1) - add Finish ~ ? ye it could be
- 00:43:045 (5,6) - Humm.. I think more better rhythm,follow like this :3 heard weird a bit to me...
- 00:44:594 (9) - Forgot add clap ? added~
- 00:44:787 (1) - Finish has been adapted to the whole. is it mistake ? nah it's intent~
- 01:09:562 (11) - add Nc ? for fit elsewhere ~ i think it's unnecessary
- 01:33:949 (4) - Forgot add clap on end ? fixed
- 01:38:594 (4) - add whistle on end more fit :3 fixed
- 01:40:336 (6) - add clap on head. fixed
- 01:40:529 (1) - add whistle on end. fixed
- 01:43:239 (4) - Forgot add whistle on head? fixed
- 01:43:626 (1) - why not use Finish? fixed
- 01:45:562 (4) - add whistle more fit ~ fixed
- 01:50:497 (3) - Overmapped? take it easy~
- 02:23:110 (2) - Overmapped? ^
- 02:31:626 (5,1) - Swap, Nc. because same as before part. okay
- 02:38:981 (4) - Try " Ctrl + G " i remake this pattern
- 02:40:916 (3,6,1) - add whistle. because for ease of play nice~
- 02:47:110 (2,6,1) - same as 02:40:916 (3,6,1) - here~ and After this, I do not say :3 If you are feel good. please add all part >w< okay~
- 02:56:787 (1) - Remove Nc, because same as this part? 02:54:852 (1,2,3,4) - okay~
- 02:57:755 (5,6) - Changed slider? This Pattern feel too hard > < i think it's fine~
- 03:50:594 - ~ 04:12:271 - main melody all add whistle? for ease of play. For ex : 03:52:916 (5,8,1,5,9,1) - add whistle etc... i need to consider that
- 04:18:852 (5,9) - add Nc? for other part. sorry i don't wanna change the nc here
- 04:23:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - /me dead lol
- 04:26:787 (8) - Hitsound mistake? (whistle) fixed
- 04:40:529 (2) - ~ Forgot use Additions : Drum ? Please check custom hitsound lol fixed all
- 05:38:594 (5) - add Nc? i think it's fine~
Good luck Sco ~ :3
非常感谢哇~[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
the spacing is depend on the malody and flow
00:16:916 (1) - 这个放在448:96怎么样啊 距离太夸张了,但是思路似乎可以有
00:43:239 (6) - 移到00:43:142 - 这里啊 配合这个节奏 比较喜感 位置不用动 倒是提醒了我!
01:08:787 (3,4,5,6) - 放1/6啊! 考虑中
01:42:078 (1) - 加clap呀 恩
01:43:626 (1,5) - ^ ^
01:51:755 (3) - 不是应该叠上去吗一般来书 不是哇~这样不是比较好玩
02:40:723 (2) - 把结尾拉到02:40:868 。。。。
03:02:013 (5,6,7) - 1/6啊! 1/4啊,其实是不想放1/8
03:07:626 (2) - 让这个滑条的走向偏下一些233这个好~
好 美丽
13:23 Scorpiour: lol
13:25 Scorpiour: i would be appreciate that if you'd like to take a look at this map and criticize this
13:25 Scorpiour: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/162060
13:25 Jenny: :V:V
13:25 Jenny: I think I told you I find the 1/6 rather largely spaced
13:25 Jenny: Would probably go for more of a patterned stream-style
13:25 Scorpiour: thb, i don't know if i made it bad or not this time < <
13:26 Scorpiour: yes
13:26 Jenny: 04:35:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - like well, instead of this
13:27 Scorpiour: maybe double spaced stream ?
13:28 Jenny: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1921906
13:28 Jenny: like I would do smth like this
13:29 Jenny: like it has stronger angles between the notes but less superstraight-far spacing
13:29 Scorpiour: ahh i know what your mean
13:29 Jenny: more focus on how you move rather htan how fast
13:30 Jenny: you could probably generally make the 1/6 streams pairs of 6
13:30 Jenny: with an angle/shape difference on each whitetick
13:30 Scorpiour: i see
13:30 Scorpiour: it's really a nice point
13:30 Jenny: 04:27:949 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - also, it's rather hard to get into the stream at points like this
13:31 Jenny: 04:27:949 (2,3,4,5) - like this is practically the same soundpattern times two
13:31 Jenny: but you map it as a slider one time and as circles right after, and that's confusing
13:31 Jenny: I'd use sliders on 04:27:949 (2) - 04:28:142 (3) - 04:28:336 (4) -
13:32 Jenny: like, reverse kicksliders
13:32 Scorpiour: i see
13:32 Jenny: set more clear roles where you want to use sliders and where you want to use circles on the piano roll thingies
13:32 Scorpiour: could u please write these in thread then i can give you kds
13:32 Jenny: because the map is kinda brutal by sheer space etc already
13:32 Scorpiour: :>
13:33 Jenny: I generally just write things irc and post the, in the forum afterwards when the person in question asks me ingame :v
13:33 Scorpiour:
13:34 Scorpiour: i know the moving of sight focus, but i didn't think about that deeper
13:34 Scorpiour: it's my bad
13:34 Jenny: 00:11:497 (9) - less redpoints pls :V
13:35 Scorpiour: it is L
13:35 Scorpiour: capital letter 'L'
13:35 Jenny: yes, but the red points >:
13:36 Scorpiour: maybe i can make it more pretty w
13:36 Jenny: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1921931 feels much smoother]
13:37 Scorpiour: hmm could be
14:16 Jenny: mh.
14:16 Scorpiour: yes?
14:16 Jenny: I feel like you need to look out for beatpatterns more than shapes I:
14:17 Jenny: pointed a lot of explicit things out to like 3 minutes, the rest is practically just repeats of the same stuff in different places
14:17 Jenny: should I still write everything? s:
14:18 Scorpiour: if you'd like to :>
14:18 Scorpiour: or just point out an example then i can go through all the others
14:18 Scorpiour: up to you :>
14:18 Jenny: errr... 3.
14:19 Jenny: I'd rather not, it takes a lot of time ;_;
14:19 Scorpiour: :>
14:19 Scorpiour: completely up to you , i'm not newbie w