SYNC.ART'S - Road to Departure

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Regou
我靠這圖有點兇殘(不對其實只是我弱
[Lunatic]
00:17:927 (6,1,2) - 我感覺這組不需要藏那麼深啊 感覺(2)可以更靠近(1)做出歌曲的那種感覺
00:21:115 (1,2,3,4) - 這組spacing增大?
00:23:740 (4) - 換掉這個?漏音太明顯了
00:30:396 - 想更鬼畜可以加個note...咳咳還是算了
00:34:615 (1,2,3,4) - 這組的spacing居然不一樣;w;
00:46:615 (1,1,1,1) - 感覺sv間距可以更大 比方說 0.75 1 1.25 1.5
00:48:115 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以試著blanket00:49:615 (1) - 的頭哦
01:00:865 (1) - 噢噢噢噢哦哦哦好棒
02:09:302 (2,4,5,6) - (nazi)弧度好像美麗
02:12:865 (1) - 試著往上移?
02:17:365 (7,8) - 或許可以參考那面01:04:240 (5)那樣哦 讓他們和(5,6)在同一個方向
02:18:115 (1) - missing clap
02:30:115 (1,3) - (nazi)好像沒疊好
03:05:177 (3,1) - ^
03:31:990 (3) - 疊在 03:31:240 (5) - 不好麼
03:37:052 (7,8,9) - 這個小spacing不科學啊
03:38:177 (3) - 這hitsound老覺得哪裡怪怪的...

[Hard]
00:10:990 (2) - 這個可以加個弧度哦
00:13:052 (4,2) - blanket?
00:17:365 (3,4) - 太靠近了
00:57:490 (2) - missing clap?
01:00:115 (1) - 考慮來個0.5的減速?後面那幾組也可以這樣弄
01:12:865 (4,5,6) - 這組感覺沒什麼打擊感啊;w; 對我來說flow好像不太好 後面那組也是
02:55:615 (1) - 這個的形狀好像不太好...

就這樣吧 挺好的
Topic Starter
sjoy

Regou wrote:

我靠這圖有點兇殘(不對其實只是我弱
[Lunatic]
00:17:927 (6,1,2) - 我感覺這組不需要藏那麼深啊 感覺(2)可以更靠近(1)做出歌曲的那種感覺已改
00:21:115 (1,2,3,4) - 這組spacing增大? 还是算了
00:23:740 (4) - 換掉這個?漏音太明顯了 感觉不对称了
00:30:396 - 想更鬼畜可以加個note...咳咳還是算了 算了;w;
00:34:615 (1,2,3,4) - 這組的spacing居然不一樣;w; 不要在意细节
00:46:615 (1,1,1,1) - 感覺sv間距可以更大 比方說 0.75 1 1.25 1.5 现在就够大了阿
00:48:115 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以試著blanket00:49:615 (1) - 的頭哦 fixed
01:00:865 (1) - 噢噢噢噢哦哦哦好棒
02:09:302 (2,4,5,6) - (nazi)弧度好像美麗 ;w;懒改
02:12:865 (1) - 試著往上移? 改了
02:17:365 (7,8) - 或許可以參考那面01:04:240 (5)那樣哦 讓他們和(5,6)在同一個方向 没看懂;w;
02:18:115 (1) - missing clap fixed
02:30:115 (1,3) - (nazi)好像沒疊好 fixed
03:05:177 (3,1) - ^ fixed
03:31:990 (3) - 疊在 03:31:240 (5) - 不好麼 好像出界了
03:37:052 (7,8,9) - 這個小spacing不科學啊 这样么我好好想想
03:38:177 (3) - 這hitsound老覺得哪裡怪怪的...
感觉还行
就這樣吧 挺好的
感谢了 ;)
Oracle

LZCSC wrote:

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Hard
00:06:677 (2) - x:238,y:234 fixed
01:09:021 - 加个circle?然后01:09:115 (1) - 在01:09:302 - 结束,01:09:490 - 加个circle
01:13:240 (6) - 01:13:427 - 停?然候01:13:802 (1) - 移到01:13:615 - ,01:13:990 - 加个circle?
02:25:240 (6,1) - ^?
后面三个我认为原来的还行,改起来变动太大了。就不动了;w;
谢谢mod~!

Regou wrote:

我靠這圖有點兇殘(不對其實只是我弱

[Hard]
00:10:990 (2) - 這個可以加個弧度哦 比较喜欢现在的直线
00:13:052 (4,2) - blanket? okok~
00:17:365 (3,4) - 太靠近了 其实移动上是不近的,而且牵动太多,不好改。
00:57:490 (2) - missing clap? yesyes
01:00:115 (1) - 考慮來個0.5的減速?後面那幾組也可以這樣弄 容易导致combo break,还是不弄了
01:12:865 (4,5,6) - 這組感覺沒什麼打擊感啊;w; 對我來說flow好像不太好 後面那組也是 ;w;感觉还行
02:55:615 (1) - 這個的形狀好像不太好... 稍微动了一下

就這樣吧 挺好的
感谢来mod~

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343,170,144677,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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231,94,147021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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deejaydray
Hello, m4m here :) thanks moonlightleaf for your mod ^^

leaf's NORMAL:

00:09:115 (1) - no NC, but you need NC here 00:10:615 (3)
00:12:115 (1) - no NC here
00:33:490 (1) - remove NC and put it here 00:33:865 (2)
00:44:365 - add a circle here
00:56:177 - ^ same
00:57:677 - ^ same
01:08:927 (1) - delete NC
01:13:990 (1) - this object might be too close to the last spinner and some beginners can't see it because there's no much time to react. I have an idea:
:arrow: 01:13:990 (1) - delete this slider
:arrow: 01:14:365 - put a circle here

01:20:927 (1) - no NC here
01:54:865 (4) - better blanket ?
01:55:615 (1) - no NC here
01:56:552 (2) - NC here
01:57:865 (1) - no NC here
02:00:115 (1) - ^ same
02:20:927 (1) - ^ same
02:30:115 (1) - ^ same
02:32:927 (1) - ^ same
02:40:240 (1) - move the NC from here to this slider 02:40:615 (2)
02:44:740 (1) - again, move the NC from here to this slider 02:43:615 (5) then put NC at 02:46:615 (4)
02:48:865 (1) - delete NC
02:54:115 (1) - ^ same
03:08:927 (1) - ^ same
03:14:927 (4,5,1) - you should create a better blanket between these 3 objects
03:18:115 (1) - no NC here

That's all! ^^ Nice difficulty, some problems with NC here and there, but they can be solved easily :) Here's a star from me ^^ I want to see this beatmap ranked! :D
Satellite
Hi

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[SB]

  • 00:44:552 - 44552 - This is missing Lyrics "淀んだ心の答えは" better. a5 and a6 same as lyrics.


[General]
  1. Tag : add Gojou Kai and C81 kuroiwa satoshi


[leaf's Normal]
  1. 00:09:115 (1) - add Finish on End point.
  2. 00:10:615 (3) - ^
  3. 01:12:302 (1,1) - This spacing is really awkward.Need to rest a lot of diff in the simplest.
  4. 01:50:365 (1) - Remove Nc , because same as 00:38:365 (4) - here. you must be unified.
  5. 02:58:615 (1,1) - Same as 01:12:302 (1,1) - this.
  6. 03:24:115 (1,1) - ^


[Oracle's Hard]
  1. 00:32:646 (5) - Remobe note. I think silent part not fit this note.
  2. 00:33:771 (4) - ^
  3. 01:25:615 (1) - Move x248 y176 ? fit in SB o.o
  4. 01:56:365 (3) - Remove whistle 01:56:365 - here and add whistle 01:56:552 - here.


[Lunatic]
  1. Nothing to Say.


Really nice mapset :3 and nice map all. Good luck sjoy and guest ~
moonlightleaf

deejaydray wrote:

Hello, m4m here :) thanks moonlightleaf for your mod ^^

leaf's NORMAL:

00:09:115 (1) - no NC, but you need NC here 00:10:615 (3)
00:12:115 (1) - no NC here
00:33:490 (1) - remove NC and put it here 00:33:865 (2)
00:44:365 - add a circle here
00:56:177 - ^ same
00:57:677 - ^ same
01:08:927 (1) - delete NC
01:13:990 (1) - this object might be too close to the last spinner and some beginners can't see it because there's no much time to react. I have an idea: ----you are right
:arrow: 01:13:990 (1) - delete this slider
:arrow: 01:14:365 - put a circle here

01:20:927 (1) - no NC here
01:54:865 (4) - better blanket ?
01:55:615 (1) - no NC here
01:56:552 (2) - NC here
01:57:865 (1) - no NC here
02:00:115 (1) - ^ same
02:20:927 (1) - ^ same
02:30:115 (1) - ^ same
02:32:927 (1) - ^ same
02:40:240 (1) - move the NC from here to this slider 02:40:615 (2)
02:44:740 (1) - again, move the NC from here to this slider 02:43:615 (5) then put NC at 02:46:615 (4)
02:48:865 (1) - delete NC
02:54:115 (1) - ^ same
03:08:927 (1) - ^ same
03:14:927 (4,5,1) - you should create a better blanket between these 3 objects
03:18:115 (1) - no NC here

That's all! ^^ Nice difficulty, some problems with NC here and there, but they can be solved easily :) Here's a star from me ^^ I want to see this beatmap ranked! :D
all fix ~thanks for your modding~ :)

Satellite wrote:

Hi

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[SB]

  • 00:44:552 - 44552 - This is missing Lyrics "淀んだ心の答えは" better. a5 and a6 same as lyrics. ---OK,the mistake orz


[General]
  1. Tag : add Gojou Kai and C81 kuroiwa satoshi


[leaf's Normal]
  1. 00:09:115 (1) - add Finish on End point.
  2. 00:10:615 (3) - ^
  3. 01:12:302 (1,1) - This spacing is really awkward.Need to rest a lot of diff in the simplest.---the same as deejaydray said
  4. 01:50:365 (1) - Remove Nc , because same as 00:38:365 (4) - here. you must be unified.
  5. 02:58:615 (1,1) - Same as 01:12:302 (1,1) - this.
  6. 03:24:115 (1,1) - ^


Really nice mapset :3 and nice map all. Good luck sjoy and guest ~
all fix ~ thanks for modding ~ :)

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61615
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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Source:Touhou
Tags:Aihara Kaori Kaku Seiga CLAUDIA ZUN th13 Desire Drive moonlightleaf Oracle Gojou Kai C81 kuroiwa satoshi
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256,192,178615,12,4,180115,0:0:0:0:
308,272,180865,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,181615,1,4,0:2:0:0:
40,40,187615,5,4,0:0:0:0:
110,110,187990,1,8,0:0:0:0:
47,188,188365,2,0,L|79:244,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,320,188927,2,0,P|184:322|275:301,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,266,189865,2,0,L|334:205,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,75,190615,5,4,0:0:0:0:
391,50,190990,2,0,P|414:47|456:54,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,130,191740,1,8,0:0:0:0:
385,205,192115,2,0,B|353:256|366:301|366:301|306:304|280:351,1,200,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,328,193615,5,6,0:0:0:0:
58,230,193990,1,8,0:0:0:0:
89,134,194365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,84,194927,2,0,B|282:115|282:115|328:8|438:51,1,250,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,139,196240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
321,218,196615,6,0,B|374:263|452:218|452:218|505:247,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,331,197740,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,349,198115,2,0,P|306:351|241:342,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,318,198865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
47,149,199615,6,0,P|35:202|47:260,2,100,6|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,93,200927,2,0,B|229:80|229:80|280:100|351:90,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,54,201865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,136,202240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
439,227,202615,6,0,B|416:264|416:264|300:237|267:311,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,355,203740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,204115,12,6,205615,0:0:0:0:
344,269,206365,5,0,0:0:0:0:
484,217,206927,2,0,B|494:138|457:51,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,29,207865,2,0,P|320:46|258:33,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,35,208615,6,0,L|121:61,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,120,209365,2,0,L|266:172,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,179,210115,2,0,B|202:257|202:257|258:226|317:258,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,342,211615,5,6,0:0:0:0:
83,250,211990,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,152,212365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,72,212927,2,0,P|299:41|383:74,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,140,213865,1,2,0:0:0:0:
371,215,214240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
293,277,214615,6,0,P|245:289|181:275,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,199,215365,2,0,P|186:186|251:201,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,216115,12,4,217615,0:0:0:0:


http://puu.sh/8SyhS.png

图片命名a5.png 然后放SB里替换
moonlightleaf
老司机啊 我GD你随便改吧...我afk

关于歌词源文件(我用的photoshop cs5) psd ↓

http://puu.sh/8YJGD
Rizia
from my modding queue

各難度統一一下結果時間?
01:37:240 - sb這裡不錯
話說按道理letterbox during breaks不會勾?

[Normal]
01:00:115 (1) - remove nc

[Hard]
00:17:740 (4) - 試試這個 flow會好點

00:45:865 (3) - 為何不map成跟00:45:115 (1,2) - 相同的梗

01:13:240 (6) - 尾finish
01:22:615 (5) - ^
01:24:115 - ^
01:24:302 (1,2) - 這兩個slider的紅線位置各自加一個clap
01:54:490 (2,3) - 怎麼不這樣放啊;w;

02:13:615 (1) - 頭finish
02:19:240 (5) - 考慮個soft finish在頭
02:25:240 (6) - ^
02:25:240 (6) - 然後尾巴在normal finish
02:34:615 (1) - finish
02:36:115 - ^
02:36:302 (1,2) - 跟前一個kiai一樣做法 如果你在前面有變動的話
02:52:615 (1,2,3,4) - 這個排法略醜 端正點的排法比較好看

最尾一個kiai沒什麼問題 finish和clap方面跟隨前面兩個kiai來改就可以了(也是如果前面有變動的話)

[Lunatic]
00:11:365 (3) - 加個nc 易讀點
00:37:990 (2) - stack在00:38:365 (3) - 上面 這裡右手停頓一下有點愉快
00:45:302 - 00:45:677 - whistle 之後remove 00:45:115 (1) - 的whistle
00:47:740 - 這裡有個3連 試試改成類似這樣的梗?

01:00:865 (1) - 有點不好看orz 可以轉為減速slider 後面也是

02:21:865 (4) - 改為一個1/2slider?
03:27:865 (4) - ^
04:01:708 (1) - 拉長到04:05:365 - 這裡停


聽著聽著就想到這首orz https://osu.ppy.sh/b/243303
Topic Starter
sjoy

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

from my modding queue

各難度統一一下結果時間?
01:37:240 - sb這裡不錯
話說按道理letterbox during breaks不會勾? 这个不能取消了阿

[Normal]
01:00:115 (1) - remove nc


[Lunatic]
00:11:365 (3) - 加個nc 易讀點
00:37:990 (2) - stack在00:38:365 (3) - 上面 這裡右手停頓一下有點愉快 感觉有点远
00:45:302 - 00:45:677 - whistle 之後remove 00:45:115 (1) - 的whistle
00:47:740 - 這裡有個3連 試試改成類似這樣的梗? 这里更想跟VOCAL

01:00:865 (1) - 有點不好看orz 可以轉為減速slider 後面也是减速就没有那个感觉了

02:21:865 (4) - 改為一個1/2slider? 后面的改了
03:27:865 (4) - ^
04:01:708 (1) - 拉長到04:05:365 - 這裡停


聽著聽著就想到這首orz https://osu.ppy.sh/b/243303
咦会像吗
不说的都改了
感谢MOD :D
Oracle

Satellite wrote:

Hi hi!!:3

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.



[Oracle's Hard]
  1. 00:32:646 (5) - Remobe note. I think silent part not fit this note.i think i will keep this as it's on the beat
  2. 00:33:771 (4) - ^^
  3. 01:25:615 (1) - Move x248 y176 ? fit in SB o.ocurrent one works pretty well to me!
  4. 01:56:365 (3) - Remove whistle 01:56:365 - here and add whistle 01:56:552 - here.great!


Really nice mapset :3 and nice map all. Good luck sjoy and guest ~
Thank you for modding!! :):)

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

from my modding queue

[Hard]
00:17:740 (4) - 試試這個 flow會好點还是用了原来的

00:45:865 (3) - 為何不map成跟00:45:115 (1,2) - 相同的梗因为音乐有不同

01:13:240 (6) - 尾finish
01:22:615 (5) - ^
01:24:115 - ^
01:24:302 (1,2) - 這兩個slider的紅線位置各自加一個clap
01:54:490 (2,3) - 怎麼不這樣放啊;w; ;w;感觉现在的更好

02:13:615 (1) - 頭finish
02:19:240 (5) - 考慮個soft finish在頭
02:25:240 (6) - ^
02:25:240 (6) - 然後尾巴在normal finish
02:34:615 (1) - finish
02:36:115 - ^
02:36:302 (1,2) - 跟前一個kiai一樣做法 如果你在前面有變動的話
02:52:615 (1,2,3,4) - 這個排法略醜 端正點的排法比較好看后面的flow会不好改

最尾一個kiai沒什麼問題 finish和clap方面跟隨前面兩個kiai來改就可以了(也是如果前面有變動的話)


聽著聽著就想到這首orz https://osu.ppy.sh/b/243303
没提到的都改了,很有用的hitsound mod,谢谢小柚子:>
Scorpiour
Hi there~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[Lunatic]
  1. 00:06:115 (1,2) - 这两个交换下位置感觉flow会更好
  2. 00:36:115 (1) - 我觉得折返不如用3/4+1/2的节奏,不但可以更平滑而且还可以兼顾一下00:36:490 - 的重音
  3. 01:00:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的跳感觉好别扭……
  4. 01:04:240 (5) - ctrl+g转回去
  5. 01:05:177 (4,5,6) - 感觉有点没有道理的三连
  6. 01:20:365 (4) - 没有必要被挡上一点
  7. 02:45:490 - 这里的空拍留得不是很舒服
  8. 02:47:365 (4,5,6) - 听旋律的话这里3/4+1/2的slider会更好吧,不要三连


我觉得还是我曾经和你说过的问题:这图如果仅仅从做图技术角度来说,没有什么明显的硬伤,但是除此之外也就再没有什么更多的了。看完之后的感觉就是你并没有真正用心去做这个图,太多对于间距,节奏和形状都是比较随意的顺着放下去就好,缺少认真的调整和思考。像上面给你指出来的那些地方,有些我认为应该在自己复查的时候就能注意到的东西。

整图的质量我只能说 - 比新人图好一点。然后就算是新人在达到可以泡的水准的时候,顺着flow和一般的节奏把note摆下去也不会和这个图有什么明显的差距。如果你是刚开始做图什么的我对此倒也没什么意见,但是拜托,已经9张rank了还在拿出这种程度的作品实在是会让人大失所望的。谱面本身不容易做出彩什么的也不是理由,最起码的去看看日本流把谱面做的更干净利落也是可以的吧?

去看看你自己的绿眼,我觉得唯一能解释这图的理由就是“没用心”三个字了。

恩,大概就是这样了。
Topic Starter
sjoy

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[Lunatic]
  1. 00:06:115 (1,2) - 这两个交换下位置感觉flow会更好
  2. 00:36:115 (1) - 我觉得折返不如用3/4+1/2的节奏,不但可以更平滑而且还可以兼顾一下00:36:490 - 的重音 我试试
  3. 01:00:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的跳感觉好别扭…… 我感觉还好
  4. 01:04:240 (5) - ctrl+g转回去
  5. 01:05:177 (4,5,6) - 感觉有点没有道理的三连 其实是这样的,都是单点 感觉有点单调,就尝试加了3连
  6. 01:20:365 (4) - 没有必要被挡上一点 改了
  7. 02:45:490 - 这里的空拍留得不是很舒服 加了物件
  8. 02:47:365 (4,5,6) - 听旋律的话这里3/4+1/2的slider会更好吧,不要三连 我感觉还好

thanks ~
我觉得还是我曾经和你说过的问题:这图如果仅仅从做图技术角度来说,没有什么明显的硬伤,但是除此之外也就再没有什么更多的了。看完之后的感觉就是你并没有真正用心去做这个图,太多对于间距,节奏和形状都是比较随意的顺着放下去就好,缺少认真的调整和思考。像上面给你指出来的那些地方,有些我认为应该在自己复查的时候就能注意到的东西。

整图的质量我只能说 - 比新人图好一点。然后就算是新人在达到可以泡的水准的时候,顺着flow和一般的节奏把note摆下去也不会和这个图有什么明显的差距。如果你是刚开始做图什么的我对此倒也没什么意见,但是拜托,已经9张rank了还在拿出这种程度的作品实在是会让人大失所望的。谱面本身不容易做出彩什么的也不是理由,最起码的去看看日本流把谱面做的更干净利落也是可以的吧?

去看看你自己的绿眼,我觉得唯一能解释这图的理由就是“没用心”三个字了。

恩,大概就是这样了。
MOD晚点看
其实是这样的 我作图的基本方式我就是这样的,我不会特意去摆什么梗,包括绿眼也是
我没有什么所谓特定的梗去摆只是跟随我自己的感觉,为了作图而作图我办不到,倒不如随心所欲按照自己的随意性去作图
既然你说没用心的话 那就算了反正就这样吧 :D





EDIT:我觉得我先好好思考一段再说
jonathanlfj
hihi

[General]
g1.png was not used, might want to remove it

[leaf's Easy]
set hp drain to 4, after all this is a normal diff so it should be slightly more challenging on difficulty settings
00:21:865 (5) - lower it a bit to get a better blanket with 00:21:115 (4)
00:29:365 (3) - NC here instead of 00:30:490 (1)
00:56:365 (2) - forgot clap on end
00:57:865 (2) - think you meant to put the clap at 00:58:240 instead of 00:58:052
01:48:865 (1,2,3) - hitsound this like 00:36:865 (1,2,3) for consistency
02:11:740 (3) - clap
02:54:865 (6,1) - the flow here is not that great, maybe you can arrange it like this:

03:00:865 (1,2) - maybe use a more symmetrical setup here, or just stack the two circles in the center
03:08:927 (4) - clap on end
03:26:365 (1) - try x:388 y:332

[Oracle's Hard]
00:09:865 (3) - kinda bothers me that this is not symmetrical
00:36:865 (4) - i find this jump slightly hard to perform with the pacing here, you can move 00:36:115 (1,2,3) more towards the left
00:40:615 (6) - forgot NC
00:51:865 (3) - clap end?
01:13:615 - there is a major downbeat here, i would rather have this as a circle than a slider end which doesnt give as much emphasis
01:22:615 (5) - NC
02:16:990 (2,3) - bring this a little closer so the 4 sliders look more symmetrical:

02:25:240 (6) - same problem as 01:13:615
02:36:302 (1,2) - this doesnt flow very well, try a placement like this:

03:19:521 - try adding a note here to capture the 1/4 drums
03:25:240 (6) - again like 01:13:615
03:25:802 (1) - bend this more downward to give a easier flow onto 03:26:177 (2,3)

[Lunatic]
00:36:865 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this stream can look better for the aesthetics (get the blanket on 00:36:490 (2,9) right)
00:43:990 (3,4,5) - this spacing change is not really evident of a rhythm change, you might want to shrink the distance on 00:43:990 (3,4)
01:00:865 (1) - this shape of this is kinda meh, i made you something more interesting to look at:
268,92,60865,6,0,B|296:64|328:92|332:136|280:152|228:128|228:128|176:104|124:132,1,270.000010299683,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:21:865 (4) - this blanket can look better
01:41:365 (4) - is the whistle in slider body intentional?
02:07:052 (4) - forgot clap on end
02:23:177 (4) - where you placed this note is not very flowy to play with, i would stack it with 02:23:740 (6)
02:47:740 - try adding a note here, makes the rhythm easier to play for me
03:14:740 (5) - clap
03:21:490 (2,3,4) - this back and forth doesnt play very well here, consider moving 03:21:865 (4) to x:200 y:380
03:36:302 (2,3) - try a ctrl+r here for a more interesting flow

我可以理解为什么scorpiour有些失望,这图在editor里的确不怎么上眼,但是身为“打的爽其他都不重要”党我觉得这图做的其实不错,起码遮挡梗比其他我看过的图好打多了,连打也处理的很自然。如果可以的话把图修的好看一些(比如说一些连打的形状和跳的位置),然后叫我声~
Oracle

jonathanlfj wrote:

hihi heyyy


[Oracle's Hard]
00:09:865 (3) - kinda bothers me that this is not symmetrical Can't really come up with a better placement. Sorry!
00:36:865 (4) - i find this jump slightly hard to perform with the pacing here, you can move 00:36:115 (1,2,3) more towards the left Yes yes
00:40:615 (6) - forgot NC Fixed.
00:51:865 (3) - clap end? Added.
01:13:615 - there is a major downbeat here, i would rather have this as a circle than a slider end which doesnt give as much emphasis Makes sense. Changed a bit.
01:22:615 (5) - NC orz..
02:16:990 (2,3) - bring this a little closer so the 4 sliders look more symmetrical: hao!!

02:25:240 (6) - same problem as 01:13:615 Changed.
02:36:302 (1,2) - this doesnt flow very well, try a placement like this: Tried both but i still prefer mine!

03:19:521 - try adding a note here to capture the 1/4 drums I don't want to increase the note density further more. -0-
03:25:240 (6) - again like 01:13:615 Fixed!
03:25:802 (1) - bend this more downward to give a easier flow onto 03:26:177 (2,3) yes yes
每次改你写的mod都感觉十分受用,这次也不例外!!谢谢看图
Topic Starter
sjoy

jonathanlfj wrote:

hihi

[General]
g1.png was not used, might want to remove it removed

[leaf's Easy]
set hp drain to 4, after all this is a normal diff so it should be slightly more challenging on difficulty settings changed
00:21:865 (5) - lower it a bit to get a better blanket with 00:21:115 (4) fixed
00:29:365 (3) - NC here instead of 00:30:490 (1) fixed
00:56:365 (2) - forgot clap on end fixed
00:57:865 (2) - think you meant to put the clap at 00:58:240 instead of 00:58:052 fixed
01:48:865 (1,2,3) - hitsound this like 00:36:865 (1,2,3) for consistency fixed
02:11:740 (3) - clap fixed
02:54:865 (6,1) - the flow here is not that great, maybe you can arrange it like this:
fixed
03:00:865 (1,2) - maybe use a more symmetrical setup here, or just stack the two circles in the center fixed
03:08:927 (4) - clap on end
03:26:365 (1) - try x:388 y:332

[Lunatic]
00:36:865 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this stream can look better for the aesthetics (get the blanket on 00:36:490 (2,9) right)try to fix it
00:43:990 (3,4,5) - this spacing change is not really evident of a rhythm change, you might want to shrink the distance on 00:43:990 (3,4) fixed
01:00:865 (1) - this shape of this is kinda meh, i made you something more interesting to look at:
268,92,60865,6,0,B|296:64|328:92|332:136|280:152|228:128|228:128|176:104|124:132,1,270.000010299683,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
..你为何这么屌..
01:21:865 (4) - this blanket can look better fixed
01:41:365 (4) - is the whistle in slider body intentional? removed
02:07:052 (4) - forgot clap on end fixed
02:23:177 (4) - where you placed this note is not very flowy to play with, i would stack it with 02:23:740 (6) fine~
02:47:740 - try adding a note here, makes the rhythm easier to play for me ok
03:14:740 (5) - clap fixed
03:21:490 (2,3,4) - this back and forth doesnt play very well here, consider moving 03:21:865 (4) to x:200 y:380 fine for me .
03:36:302 (2,3) - try a ctrl+r here for a more interesting flow

我可以理解为什么scorpiour有些失望,这图在editor里的确不怎么上眼,但是身为“打的爽其他都不重要”党我觉得这图做的其实不错,起码遮挡梗比其他我看过的图好打多了,连打也处理的很自然。如果可以的话把图修的好看一些(比如说一些连打的形状和跳的位置),然后叫我声~
感谢理解!我就这一句话了。。。
jonathanlfj
alright we can give this one a try

Bubbled~
Topic Starter
sjoy
thanks~ :)
Fushimi Rio
蜡烛
Delis
requested by Satellite~ all are suggestions!

[■ General]
  1. Add Flandre_ErMei in tags as moonlightleaf's new name.
  2. seems black2.png is not using in any diff, although please check by yourself to make sure since I'm not perfect at modding SB things. orz


[■ Lunatic]
  1. 00:13:615 - unnecessary green line
  2. 00:19:521 (10) - how about clap here :o
  3. 00:27:115 (1) - whistle on slider body is needed? remove if nah
  4. 00:51:302 (2) - the flow 00:50:927 (1) - to (2,3,4) feels awkward for me to play, move (2) to somewhere like this screen shot :

    or 00:51:677 (4,5) - somehow CTRL + G them (move 00:51:677 (4) - a bit higher place.
  5. 01:48:115 (1) - probably finish for the cymbal? it sounds much better.
  6. 02:40:615 (1) - additions : soft here?
  7. 02:42:865 (1,2) - switch the NC for consistency and umm making note the 1/1 blank.
  8. 03:05:552 (5) - direct this towards next slider as you have done at 00:53:552 (5) - , it will be more smooth flow.
  9. 03:12:021 (7) - clap in a row is better for me :>
  10. 03:54:021 - I would like you to add a circle here to make a triplet, like 03:50:927 (7,8,1) - the rhythm is much fun to play imo.
  11. 04:00:115 (1) - add a clap on tail? there's the sound which is similar to the place where you have added clap.


[■ Oracle's Hard]
wow I mod your map for first time
  1. 00:03:865 (3) - add a clap on tail?
  2. 00:04:427 (4,1) - I would move them to near place of 00:03:865 (3) - since jump the stack pattern is a bit uncomfortable to play (for me heh)
  3. 00:13:052 (4) - try adding a clap on head 3:
  4. 00:51:865 (3) - still no clap here, add clap as jonathanlfj mentioned.
  5. 01:56:927 - I want you to put a circle to follow the vocal orz it plays fine but feels a bit empty in edit mode...
  6. 01:58:427 - this too if possible.
  7. 03:37:615 - I would increase the volume by 10 - 20 as you set the volume at 1st kiai end, it's really comfortable to listen the finish sound since current one feels a bit low.


[■ leaf's Normal]
  1. 00:35:365 (3) - can you move few grid down to avoid overlapping here? the overlapping looks messy and avoiding the overlapping makes a blanket with (2)
  2. 01:00:115 (1) - add finish on the tail? for the cymbal sound.
  3. 02:08:927 (1) - remove nc?
  4. 02:57:490 (4) - the flow 02:57:115 (3) - to (4) seems forced, try to change to circular flow. it doesn't affect anything since there's a spinner after this one :
  5. 03:35:365 (2) - remove finish on the head (same as 1st kiai)
    some New Combos are inconsistent, okay if these are intentional. :)


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Topic Starter
sjoy

Delis wrote:

requested by Satellite~ all are suggestions!

[■ General]
  1. Add Flandre_ErMei in tags as moonlightleaf's new name.added it
  2. seems black2.png is not using in any diff, although please check by yourself to make sure since I'm not perfect at modding SB things. orz
deleted it

[■ Lunatic]all fixed
  1. 00:13:615 - unnecessary green line
  2. 00:19:521 (10) - how about clap here :o
  3. 00:27:115 (1) - whistle on slider body is needed? remove if nah
  4. 00:51:302 (2) - the flow 00:50:927 (1) - to (2,3,4) feels awkward for me to play, move (2) to somewhere like this screen shot :

    or 00:51:677 (4,5) - somehow CTRL + G them (move 00:51:677 (4) - a bit higher place.
  5. 01:48:115 (1) - probably finish for the cymbal? it sounds much better.
  6. 02:40:615 (1) - additions : soft here?
  7. 02:42:865 (1,2) - switch the NC for consistency and umm making note the 1/1 blank.
  8. 03:05:552 (5) - direct this towards next slider as you have done at 00:53:552 (5) - , it will be more smooth flow.
  9. 03:12:021 (7) - clap in a row is better for me :>
  10. 03:54:021 - I would like you to add a circle here to make a triplet, like 03:50:927 (7,8,1) - the rhythm is much fun to play imo.
  11. 04:00:115 (1) - add a clap on tail? there's the sound which is similar to the place where you have added clap.


[■ Oracle's Hard]the parts that are not mentioned are all fixed
wow I mod your map for first time
  1. 00:03:865 (3) - add a clap on tail?
  2. 00:04:427 (4,1) - I would move them to near place of 00:03:865 (3) - since jump the stack pattern is a bit uncomfortable to play (for me heh)
  3. 00:13:052 (4) - try adding a clap on head 3:
  4. 00:51:865 (3) - still no clap here, add clap as jonathanlfj mentioned.
  5. 01:56:927 - I want you to put a circle to follow the vocal orz it plays fine but feels a bit empty in edit mode...I pre fer keeping this rhythm the same as 1st part
  6. 01:58:427 - this too if possible. ^^
  7. 03:37:615 - I would increase the volume by 10 - 20 as you set the volume at 1st kiai end, it's really comfortable to listen the finish sound since current one feels a bit low.


[■ leaf's Normal] all fixed
  1. 00:35:365 (3) - can you move few grid down to avoid overlapping here? the overlapping looks messy and avoiding the overlapping makes a blanket with (2)
  2. 01:00:115 (1) - add finish on the tail? for the cymbal sound.
  3. 02:08:927 (1) - remove nc?
  4. 02:57:490 (4) - the flow 02:57:115 (3) - to (4) seems forced, try to change to circular flow. it doesn't affect anything since there's a spinner after this one :
  5. 03:35:365 (2) - remove finish on the head (same as 1st kiai)
    some New Combos are inconsistent, okay if these are intentional. :)


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