[NM]
00:01:185 to 00:08:295 i think better just remove the normal note? for normal diff i mean . it looks more simple and nicer to play
00:09:629 (9629|0,9740|1,9851|2,9962|3) - considering this is the easiest diff in the mapset , im not recommending you to put 1/4 stream on lowest diffs
00:11:073 (11073|0) - move to 3 for hand balace
00:16:295 (16295|2) - move to 2
00:20:295 (20295|2) - move this to 00:20:073 looks more consistent
00:23:851 (23851|2) - move to 4? take a look at the previous pattern 00:22:295 (22295|2,22517|0,22740|3,22962|1,23184|2,23406|0) - looks more uniform and neat
00:25:851 (25851|0) - i guess its better remove this hold or change it to normal note at 00:26:073
00:27:628 (27628|2) - ^ same case
00:28:740 (28740|3) - move to 1 for hand balance , and balancing pattern
00:29:406 (29406|2) - i dont think you should map short holds much on easier diffs , lowest diff shouldnt have too much holds
00:32:962 (32962|2) - suggest removing this , inconsistent in picking up the beat , and suddenly a hold there isnt a good way to chart.
00:34:739 (34739|2,36073|2) - ^ or you might just turn this to normal notes
00:36:962 (36962|2) - delete , inconsistent with next beat
00:38:406 (38406|3) - dont recommend you to put 1/4 style here , i guess its better just snap this to the double line *as for easiest diff
00:43:184 (43184|2) - i suggest delete this ,the vocal is emphasized nicely without this note
00:44:517 (44517|1,44628|2,44739|1,44850|2,44962|1) - as i mentioned before , dont recommend to put 1/4 on lowest diff
00:45:628 (45628|0,46073|1,46517|2,46961|3,47406|1) - waa?? this kind of pattern on normal diff . dont kill beginner's spirit please. help them learn by simple patterns.
00:48:184 (48184|2) - delete
00:48:739 (48739|0) - normal note
00:50:961 (50961|1,51406|2,51850|1,52295|2) - i dont recommend this too. its hard for beginner trust me . dont wall LNs in easiest diff , make a proper diffspread.
00:52:739 (52739|0,53628|1,54517|2) - i think its better to be a normal note .
00:55:295 (55295|3,55517|3) - again , 1/4
01:00:961 (60961|1) - delete , inconsistent again
01:02:406 (62406|2,62628|2) - again~
01:03:628 (63628|2,64517|2) - change to normal note
01:05:183 (65183|2,65628|0,66072|2,66517|1,66961|0) - suggest to be normal note
01:08:517 (68517|2) - delete , inconsistent beat again
01:09:517 (69517|2,69739|2) - again ~.~
01:12:294 (72294|0,72739|1,73183|2,73628|1) - normal note again
01:16:850 (76850|3,76961|1,77183|3,77183|0,77294|1,77405|2,77516|1,77572|2,77628|3) - aaaaaa its ok for HD diff to have this but totally no for normal.
01:21:849 (81849|1) - delete , 1 hold is enough to accent it
01:22:850 (82850|2) - delete , i know the instrument is strong . but take a look at 01:22:516 (82516|1,82516|0,82739|1,82961|3,82961|0,83183|2,83183|1,83405|0,83405|3) - its really nice consistent beat , and friendly for beginners.
01:23:572 (83572|1) - delete , better change 01:23:405 (83405|0) - to hold instead
01:23:739 (83739|2,84127|0) - unsnapped
01:25:183 (85183|0) - move down to blue line
01:24:294 (84294|3) - move to 2 and change to hold to next double line , and delete 01:24:405 (84405|2,84516|0) -
01:25:961 (85961|1) - delete .
sorry if i modded too harsh , but you see , you need to improve in making a proper diffspread , as for lowest diff you dont have to focus on lead instrument at most of the time . you know spamming 1/4 notes is really hard , i've seen new players play and know its hard to read 1/4 notes . lowest diff shouldnt be so hard. if you have any rejection . please provide me a proper reason and not some
no thanks~.
try to keep your originality , pm me in game if any of my mod is unclear so i can explain it even better.
ok continue~
[HD]
00:03:518 (3518|2) - delete this
00:04:407 (4407|2) - ^
00:04:184 - add a note and hear again it suits the right instrument ( apply ^ too )
00:04:962 (4962|2) - move to 3 while add a note at 2 at 00:04:851
00:05:296 (5296|2) - move this note at 00:05:073 for better rhythm pick
00:06:407 (6407|2) - move this note at 00:05:962 at 1st collumn
00:09:740 (9740|1,9851|2,9962|1) - should be 1/6
00:12:962 (12962|1) - this hold should be at 00:12:851 , and delete the note at 1
00:15:851 (15851|3,15851|0) - this hold should be here 00:15:962
00:20:295 (20295|2) - suggest move to 1
00:20:740 (20740|1,20740|0,20851|3,20962|2,21073|1,21184|0,21295|1,21406|2,21517|3) - suggesting patern to be like this -
http://puu.sh/8suCT.jpg this also includes right placement of beat , there is no such stream here
00:22:517 (22517|1) - move here 00:22:406
00:23:406 (23406|3,23851|1) - not neccessary note in HD diff
00:23:962 (23962|0) - dont really have sound , and inconsistent , delete it
00:24:962 - add a note
00:25:629 (25629|2) - again unnecesary note
00:26:517 (26517|1,26962|2,27406|1) - ^
00:28:295 (28295|3,28740|0,29184|3,29628|0) - ^
00:32:073 - add a note
00:32:962 - ^
00:33:628 (33628|2,34073|1) - drop it 1/2 measure down
00:36:517 - add a note
00:37:628 add a note at 4 , strong beat
00:38:295 - add a note at 1
00:53:739 - add a note at 4
00:53:850 (53850|3) - this one i suggest re arrange like this -
http://puu.sh/8sv8k.jpg 00:59:850 (59850|0) - end the hold on the next white line
01:07:072 (67072|2) - delete , no sound and inconsistent
01:07:406 (67406|1) - move to 4
01:07:628 - add a note at 2
01:08:850 (68850|2) - move this note at 01:08:517
01:09:628 (69628|1) - move this note at 01:09:739
01:11:961 (71961|2) - move this note at 01:11:183
01:10:739 (70739|1,71628|0) - not meccessary to be a hold.
01:13:961 (73961|3) - move down to red line is better beat imo ,
01:15:628 - add a note
01:20:739 (80739|0) - unnecessary 3 notes again
01:28:072 (88072|1,88183|2,88294|3) - suggest remove . ending instrument arent recommended if it lays after a long pause.
[MX]
00:03:073 (3073|1) - move to 4
00:03:740 - add a note
00:06:073 (6073|3) - move to 1
00:08:518 - add a hold like this -
http://puu.sh/8svGY.jpg00:09:740 (9740|1,9851|2,9907|0,9962|1,10018|2) - 1/6 snap
00:11:073 (11073|0) - move this note to 00:10:962
00:14:518 - follow beat like this
http://puu.sh/8svRQ.jpg00:15:851 (15851|3,15851|0) - this hold shoud start at the next blue line
00:16:073 (16073|1) - delete
00:17:295 (17295|1) - delete
00:17:629 (17629|1) - ^
00:17:406 (17406|0) - move to 2
00:17:740 (17740|3,17962|1,18184|1,18406|1,18629|1) - delete , overmapping is really losing my hope T.T i dont want this no beat notes to be ranked. please delete it . hear the song properly , starting this part i cannot mod any further . because the rest of the part next to this is totally overmap beats. or i should say " remap or remove" . up to you. if you wished to keep this diff , refer 7K SC note placement . since i deep mod it.