Timing check
BPM: 128
Offset: 252
Good luck~
BPM: 128
Offset: 252
Good luck~
Thanks for ur helpSonico Makaron wrote:
Timing check
BPM: 128
Offset: 252
Good luck~
thx for ur mod & yes , this map aimed for approvalBloodmoon wrote:
Hi hi!~
cYsmix saiko!!
I might recommend either AR8 or a larger circle size so that people can use mods on this. Prob too hard for DT though idk.
05:02:127 (4) - objects end is not snapped
00:56:970 (5) - i think you could curve this slider more to make it flow better
01:04:002 (3) - and this one, it looks too flat
02:45:252 (6) - weird slider shape that's all
02:50:408 (1) - move this down one
02:52:517 (9,1) - rotate these two sliders 33 degrees, move about 10 to the right
break is so long T_T
03:43:377 (6) - rotate -3 degrees to straighten up
03:44:548 (3) - rotate -4
03:45:017 (5) - move 5 left, down 2
03:53:689 (8) - super awkward XD
2nd break is k
04:47:595 (6) - too awkward, could replace with a repeating slider
05:04:236 (2) - doesn't line up with the song quite right
nice ending.
Very long map though, i would have shortened the song before mapping, but i guess this is aimed at approval rather than ranked?
the girl on bg should be Houjuu Nue instead of Youmu.. but well, this one is up to youEndemic wrote:
For a map to be approved, it need 6 minutes of drain time, this map only has 5m46s of drain time. You need atleast 14 more second of playtime for this to be able to get approved.
Endemic wrote:
For a map to be approved, it need 6 minutes of drain time, this map only has 5m46s of drain time. You need atleast 14 more second of playtime for this to be able to get approved.
Thx For modding , UpDateonoz wrote:
first time modding. sorry not really sure what i'm doing hahah i'll try my best
can't really play this song, so i cant say much
ps: i'm using 1/6 beatsnap
1. i think the volume is really too low in most sections, please increase it
2. 04:00:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - sounds awkward. maybe this?
3. 04:11:502 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - maybe this?
4. 05:46:189 (3,1,2,3,4) - similar to number 2
WVS wrote:
To be honest; there is still so many thing that needs to be fixed - but I'll just point out pretty much the important thing.
1.00:09:158 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1634223 :-)?
2. 00:11:033 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1634230 :-)?
3. 00:13:142 (2) - Move to http://puu.sh/8XyYl :-)?
4. 00:45:252 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) -
These kind of pattern are just.. ugh.. so hard to read, unless you know how the music was at first try.
At least add a New Combo on the slider? or better yet - NC + stack it on the last circle? that would be somewhat better.
But even something far more better yet; don't use these kind of pattern.
5. 01:00:252 (1,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1634241 :-)?
6. 01:56:658 (1) - New Combo -- and that sudden slider stream is a bit unexpected.. please fix this. (I don't have any suggestion for this sorry x_x)
7. 01:59:314 (9) - New Combo
8. 02:15:252 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same goes to this. (Read mod #4)
9. 03:00:486 - Increase the volume used in this section by 10%? (so it will be 20%)
10. 03:22:048 (1,2,3,4) - ._. What's with this sudden stream..
11. 04:00:720 - Sane goes to this. (Read mod #9)
12. 06:11:502 (1) - Add a whistle on the slider's end just like what you did to 06:09:627 (2) -
13. 06:18:767 (5) - Add a whistle
14. 06:22:517 (2) - ^
(And there's actually so -- much -- more -- many that I want to nazi, but that will just make my mod seem bad. Lol.)
15. 06:30:017 - Add a note here?
I guess that's all.
Personally; I don't think this map is ready for approval at all - I don't say that it is bad;
though it is not really well polished since you may not have enough mapping experience -- I do recommend a remap once you think you're ready.
I really like this song btw!
Good luck Nazalion~
All Done n Fixed , Thx to ur modLukerMaster wrote:
00:45:252 (1,2,3,4) - It's very easy to miss on patterns like this. (Or lose combo)
03:32:517 (7,8) - Remove jump.
04:38:689 (1,2,3) - Maybe a bit smaller jump?...
06:25:564 (5,6) - Move this to make a smooth pattern
04:26:033 (5) - Add NC?
05:16:892 (4) - Larger jump.
01:14:314 (3,4) - Invert this sliders on time line.
01:57:595 (1) - Move it closer to (2)
04:01:736 (3) - Remove this circle
04:05:408 (2) - Remove this slider and put http://puu.sh/9ArJt/19a8ddd79e.jpg
becos im following this song lolCrazyrabbitKGE wrote:
the song is epic and the beatmap as well, but i just feel like there are too many stops.