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Mafumafu

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Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2014-04-20T14:41:35+00:00

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Frostmourne

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Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2014-04-20T14:45:37+00:00

General
fine

Normal
00:14:212 increase the volume of this red line to 50% (the end of the spinner)
Remove this 00:43:434 green line. 5% volume is not very good.
00:44:211 (1) - add finish to emphasize the music?
01:16:542 (1) - this spinner as well, remove 5% volume on the end of this spinner also the green line after as well : (http://puu.sh/8geAg/389257e0d3.jpg)
you have to remove 2 green lines, basically.
01:21:516 (1) - ^

Hard
01:05:274 (1) - remove 5% green line volume on the end of this spinner and the green line after. as done in Normal diff
01:16:466 (1) - ^

Insane
01:04:418 (2,3,4) - spacing for this connection is not readable in my opinion. You could make spacings correlate to the music much more intuitive like this.
(stack 01:04:574 (3,4) - together as well)

SPOILER

01:08:460 (3,1) - this spacing can be confusing as well, I suggest you move 01:08:460 (3) - to where 01:07:216 (4) - 's start is. (head of the slider or x:112 y:184)
01:20:274 (4) - remove finish on this start (whistle no remove) and add finish on 01:19:963 (3) - 's tail instead.

yf's Insane
01:03:796 (5,1) - the spacing between this note is really confusing to read and the note after (01:04:418 (2) - ) will be hard to read at this point
I suggest you end a slider 01:03:796 (5) - at 01:03:952 (red tick) instead.

SPOILER

01:19:030 (1) - remove this new combo and add a new combo 01:19:496 (8) - to make patterns separated. They will be less confusing to read on this gap.

F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

F D Flourite 2014-04-20T15:19:41+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
General
fine

Normal
00:14:212 increase the volume of this red line to 50% (the end of the spinner)
Remove this 00:43:434 green line. 5% volume is not very good.
00:44:211 (1) - add finish to emphasize the music?
01:16:542 (1) - this spinner as well, remove 5% volume on the end of this spinner also the green line after as well : (http://puu.sh/8geAg/389257e0d3.jpg)
you have to remove 2 green lines, basically.
01:21:516 (1) - ^

Hard
01:05:274 (1) - remove 5% green line volume on the end of this spinner and the green line after. as done in Normal diff
01:16:466 (1) - ^

For the volume suggestion, I mostly turn the volume to more than 60% but still soft so that it won't be weird to add a sound there. Others are all fixed.

Insane
01:04:418 (2,3,4) - spacing for this connection is not readable in my opinion. You could make spacings correlate to the music much more intuitive like this. Fixed.
(stack 01:04:574 (3,4) - together as well)
SPOILER
01:08:460 (3,1) - this spacing can be confusing as well, I suggest you move 01:08:460 (3) - to where 01:07:216 (4) - 's start is. (head of the slider or x:112 y:184) Fixed.
01:20:274 (4) - remove finish on this start (whistle no remove) and add finish on 01:19:963 (3) - 's tail instead. Fixed.

yf's Insane
01:03:796 (5,1) - the spacing between this note is really confusing to read and the note after (01:04:418 (2) - ) will be hard to read at this point yf said he didn't want to...
I suggest you end a slider 01:03:796 (5) - at 01:03:952 (red tick) instead.
SPOILER
01:19:030 (1) - remove this new combo and add a new combo 01:19:496 (8) - to make patterns separated. They will be less confusing to read on this gap. Fixed.