senya - Tsuki ni Murakumo Hana ni Kaze (PV ver.) [Osu|CatchT · forum

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-03-26T11:02:35+00:00

everything is updated (hitsound etc blablabla)
now only waiting for a year on KSHR's diff to be finished xD

MMd-

576 posts

Joined October 2012

MMd- 2014-03-27T09:53:05+00:00

requesting a place for taiko GD

RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2014-03-29T11:15:26+00:00

From my queue~
mod only finished standard diff

[General]

don't you add "(short,ver)" for title ?

[Normal]

00:04:580 (1) - awkward slider... you can make neeter
00:08:517 (2,3) - slider is better
00:17:705- finish?
00:52:017 (5) - I prefer slider: 00:52:017~00:52:205
00:55:017 (5) - ^

[Hard]

00:15:455 (5,1) - looks not good. I suggest to change 00:16:392 (1) - to other shape
01:09:830 (2) - delete

[Hinsvar's Lunatic]

00:37:580 (1) - I prefer curved slider in common with 00:38:330 (4) -
01:27:080~01:36:173- I recommend to add softsliderslide of silence in common with Vhy's diff

that's the one of my favorite song of senya!
~Good Luck~

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-03-29T13:00:45+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
mod only finished standard diff

[General]
don't you add "(short,ver)" for title ? eeeh? is this really needed? :3
[Normal]
00:04:580 (1) - awkward slider... you can make neeter alrite it seems normal wavy slider is better for now
00:08:517 (2,3) - slider is better nah
00:17:705- finish? i think it's no need to add finish since there is already has a clap to represent the cymbal sound here
00:52:017 (5) - I prefer slider: 00:52:017~00:52:205 nope, i want to make this simple
00:55:017 (5) - ^ ^
[Hard]
00:15:455 (5,1) - looks not good. I suggest to change 00:16:392 (1) - to other shape somehow i want to keep this unless there is a better shape that comes in mind
01:09:830 (2) - delete okay
that's the one of my favorite song of senya!
~Good Luck~

thanks for modding

EDIT : updated both :33

Last edited by Vhy 2014-03-29T13:33:23+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-03-29T13:11:40+00:00

Did the two things from RandomEffect's mod; thanks!

ahaha

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: tsuki ni.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62330
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Tsuki ni Murakumo Hana ni Kaze
TitleUnicode:月に叢雲華に風
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Vhy
Version:Hinsvar's Lunatic
Source:Touhou
Tags:
BeatmapID:387409
BeatmapSetID:158128

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Sey

1,406 posts

Joined October 2010

Sey 2014-03-30T10:56:39+00:00

Hi, mod from my queue.
Are these all CtB diffs so far or will you add another diff (because this is still in WIP)? If these are all diffs you should let them add your mapset to the CTB Modding Academy.

[Rain]

Solid Rain, I guess. Nothing really to complain. But it still feels very easy, so I will mention parts in my mod where you could add Dashes or HDashes.
In CtB difficulties AR and OD are always the same which means you need to change the OD to 9.
I highly suggest you to read the Catch the Beat Ranking Criteria again. We have two issues here which are simply not rankable. I refer to this: Do not place a note closer than 1/2 after a spinner. Due to the nature of spinners, upcoming notes are most likely too sudden and reduce the readability heavily. 1/4 could be acceptable in some cases where the bpm is low enough. We find that issue here: 00:10:580 (5,1) - and here: 01:36:080 (3,1) - . This is not rankable and has to be changed! So which possibilities do we have here? For the first spinner the following: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1466114, for the second spinner the following: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1466118
00:22:392 (9,1) - As I see you put a HDash here, which feels pretty fine. I want to see another HDash going to the left again at 00:22:580 (1,2) - . This creates a cool right-left-HDash movement and way better flow. Move (2) to x: 80 and it works fine.
00:25:205 (10) - Move this more to the left till a HDash appears.
00:46:767 (1) - Personally this spinner feels way too sudden since it just starts 1/2 after a previous note and is followed by a note 1/2 section later again. Consider erasing it and add a long slider instead or map this part on the beats.
00:55:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I really miss seeing HDashes here like you did at 00:52:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 00:49:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - =( I think you should remap this section and make build more challenge here. Especially I want to see a HDash at 00:56:705 (5,6) - and 00:55:767 (2,3) -
01:01:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This is really cool mapped, I like it a lot.^^ But I think you should consider of moving 01:03:080 (1) - more to the left because I feel too long pressed on the right screen side. I thought of something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1466199
01:17:142 (7) - Move it more to the left and create a Hyper here. Try x: 172

Ok another issue we have is the NC here. We have WAY TOO LESS New combos here. This is no standard mapping. In CtB mapping it's all about keeping the Ryuuta plate as empty as possible. in my maps I usually do a NC every stanza. Here a short list of place you can add NC's.

NCs for this map

00:03:080 (6) -
00:06:080 (5) -
00:15:080 (5) -
00:17:892 (5) -
00:21:080 (5) -
00:24:080 (5) -
00:27:080 (5) -
00:33:455 (4) - or 00:34:580 (7) -
00:37:017 (7) - definitely to keep clear a new Pattern (in this case triplet) starts here.
00:38:330 (5) -
00:42:080 (5) -
00:45:455 (6) -
00:51:267 (7) - or 00:51:642 (8) -
00:54:267 (7) - or 00:54:642 (8) -
00:57:267 (7) - or 00:57:642 (8) -
01:00:080 (5) -
01:01:955 (5) - and 01:02:330 (9) - because there are jumpy sections in this stream and it's good to lose some fruits during the jump to make your Ryuuta plate more readable for it.
01:04:580 (5) -
01:10:392 (4) -
01:16:580 (5) -
01:19:580 (5) -
01:26:892 (8,9) - Personally I suggest you to create a little HDash from (8) to (9) because this makes this whole section way more epic, since this is also the end of the Kiai. If you decide to do that, you should give (9) its very own combo to make this note more remarkable. I mean this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1466158
01:31:580 (4) -
01:34:580 (5) -

Really good Rain-difficulty. Good job so far!

[Xinely's Overdose]

Hi Xinely, wanna make clear I am not good in modding overdoses, so probably this won't help you. All I can do here is making suggestions.
I highly suggest you to read the Catch the Beat Ranking Criteria again. We have two issues here which are simply not rankable. I refer to this: 00:10:580 (10,1) - and 01:36:080 (11,1) - This is unrankable. You need to change that. Please check out what I suggested in the Rain because there the same error appears. You can change it exactly the same way as I suggested in the Rain difficulty.
00:22:580 (1,2) - I like that HDash but you know what would be nice? Two HDashes in a row. For that move 00:23:142 (2) - much more to the left and see how magic works.
00:53:705 (3) - Much more to the left. Try x: 40, a HDash suits very well here imo.
01:02:892 (4,1) - Why no HDash here? Kiai is starting and I want an epic start into it =(
01:35:892 (10,11) - I know you had to change the spinner here but if these notes still exist I do not recommend a HDash here because the rhythm is very chilling and meh.. dunno. But well this is an Overdose. Do it as you like. But please change these spinners. AT LEAST 1/2 distance though I normally prefer 1/1 distances much more x_x But that's totally up to you

NCs

So pretty much the same as in the Rain, this map needs more NCs (I gave you the reason for that in other CtB maps you made already). Here a few suggestions where you might add a NC.
00:03:080 (5) -
00:06:080 (6) -
00:09:455 (7) -
00:30:830 (7) - Maybe to adapt it to the piano voice
00:33:080 (4) -
00:35:705 (4) -
00:48:830 (3) -
00:51:455 (5) -
00:54:455 (5) -
01:28:580 (4) -
01:31:580 (5) -
01:34:580 (6) -

Ok well, very nice mapped, I must say~ I cannot really mod much here, the difficulty is pretty well made, so you guys get a star from me.~

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-03-30T12:19:38+00:00

Sey wrote:
[Xinely's Overdose]
Hi Xinely, wanna make clear I am not good in modding overdoses, so probably this won't help you. All I can do here is making suggestions. Hi Sey, it's fine for me. mod = suggestion, don't think it useless or not helping mapper C:
I highly suggest you to read the Catch the Beat Ranking Criteria again. We have two issues here which are simply not rankable. I refer to this: 00:10:580 (10,1) - and 01:36:080 (11,1) - This is unrankable. You need to change that. Please check out what I suggested in the Rain because there the same error appears. You can change it exactly the same way as I suggested in the Rain difficulty. actually it wrote "after" a spinner. kinda confuse is it need for starting a spin too? well to make it sure, moved anyway
00:22:580 (1,2) - I like that HDash but you know what would be nice? Two HDashes in a row. For that move 00:23:142 (2) - much more to the left and see how magic works. sure, moved little bit to left
00:53:705 (3) - Much more to the left. Try x: 40, a HDash suits very well here imo. sure, nice idea
01:02:892 (4,1) - Why no HDash here? Kiai is starting and I want an epic start into it =( i'm one of kind mapper lol , but you're make me become devil now so moved become HDash xD
01:35:892 (10,11) - I know you had to change the spinner here but if these notes still exist I do not recommend a HDash here because the rhythm is very chilling and meh.. dunno. But well this is an Overdose. Do it as you like. But please change these spinners. AT LEAST 1/2 distance though I normally prefer 1/1 distances much more x_x But that's totally up to you some player told me like that too but let me keep first with reduce the spacing but keep the HDash
NCs
So pretty much the same as in the Rain, this map needs more NCs (I gave you the reason for that in other CtB maps you made already). Here a few suggestions where you might add a NC. yeah but as i read on ranking criteria is no more than 15 objects. but i'm agree to NC here to make easier to read xD
00:03:080 (5) -
00:06:080 (6) -
00:09:455 (7) -
00:30:830 (7) - Maybe to adapt it to the piano voice
00:33:080 (4) -
00:35:705 (4) -
00:48:830 (3) -
00:51:455 (5) -
00:54:455 (5) -
01:28:580 (4) -
01:31:580 (5) -
01:34:580 (6) -

Ok well, very nice mapped, I must say~ I cannot really mod much here, the difficulty is pretty well made, so you guys get a star from me.~

Sey for BAT , i mean thanks 4 helpful mod

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252,328,73205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,136,73392,6,0,P|132:104|208:148,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,256,73955,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,260,74048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,248,74142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,216,74236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,168,74330,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,152,74423,5,0,0:0:0:0:
236,176,74517,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,192,74611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,236,74705,2,0,L|289:233,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,184,74892,2,0,L|358:184,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,325,75080,6,0,P|296:347|360:312,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,256,75455,2,0,L|368:256,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,160,75830,2,0,P|248:172|328:144,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,76,76205,2,0,P|108:96|64:148,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,224,76580,6,0,L|356:140,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,212,76861,2,0,L|96:196,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,300,77142,2,0,L|332:388,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,296,77517,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,216,77705,2,0,P|246:212|198:224,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,308,78080,6,0,L|292:311,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,320,78642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,224,78830,2,0,P|232:224|288:192,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,168,79111,2,0,P|80:120|28:88,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,248,79392,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,320,79580,6,0,B|284:316|284:316|236:288,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,220,79861,2,0,B|156:212|156:212|208:220,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,160,80142,2,0,B|296:140|296:140|228:140,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,168,80517,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,288,80705,2,0,B|328:304|328:304|384:304,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,212,81080,6,0,P|140:188|32:240,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,336,81642,2,0,P|360:256|332:140,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,160,82205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,140,82392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,256,82580,6,0,P|140:244|80:260,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,312,82955,2,0,P|396:316|500:216,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,216,83517,2,0,P|320:204|376:212,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,83892,1,2,0:0:0:0:
492,144,84080,6,0,P|393:127|294:135,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
81,216,84642,2,0,L|176:184,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,312,85017,5,2,0:0:0:0:
264,320,85205,1,10,0:0:0:0:
512,312,85392,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,256,85580,6,0,L|420:216,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,204,85767,2,0,L|260:152,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,244,85955,2,0,L|200:259,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,168,86142,2,0,L|59:165,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,112,86330,2,0,L|196:164,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,200,86517,2,0,L|244:208,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,304,86705,2,0,L|200:240,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,212,86892,2,0,L|172:192,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,268,87080,6,0,P|272:284|168:236,1,150.000005722046,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,196,87830,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,192,88205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,252,88580,5,2,0:0:0:0:
160,264,88861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,252,89142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,188,89517,2,0,L|377:193,1,75.0000028610231
228,204,89892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,328,90080,6,0,L|331:274,1,150.000005722046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,260,90830,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,228,91111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,184,91392,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,156,91580,5,2,0:0:0:0:
56,116,91861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,72,92142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,156,92517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,180,92705,1,2,0:0:0:0:
488,216,93080,6,0,L|413:216,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,220,93455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,304,93642,2,0,P|87:323|158:303,1,150.000005722046,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,94205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,248,94392,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,252,94580,6,0,L|276:252,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,180,94955,2,0,P|108:160|188:176,1,150.000005722046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,184,95517,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,196,95705,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,176,95892,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,204,96080,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96267,12,0,98330,0:0:0:0:

Sey

1,406 posts

Joined October 2010

Sey 2014-03-30T12:22:58+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Sey for BAT

Probably won't ever happen, but that's fine. I also can help without having red letters.

About the rules in ranking criteria: The wording is extremely stupid. This expression should refer to "before and after" spinners but I guess this is still in discussion. However, just a 1/4 distance on that speed before a spinner is definitely too less.

MMd-

576 posts

Joined October 2012

MMd- 2014-03-30T13:14:04+00:00

It's better if you add (PV ver.) at the title (there is a track at Yuuhei Satellite's 千華繚乱 with a "PV ver." on it, if you ask), but since i don't know about where you got the .mp3, do whatever you want (~`3`)~

adding this because someone mentioned about it and I totally forgot about this

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-03-30T14:09:54+00:00

Sey wrote:
Hi, mod from my queue.
Are these all CtB diffs so far or will you add another diff (because this is still in WIP)? If these are all diffs you should let them add your mapset to the CTB Modding Academy. ummm i already posted my map there tho. about WIP thing, it's std diff not the ctb one and im not gonna add more ctb diff in the mapset

[Rain]
Solid Rain, I guess. Nothing really to complain. But it still feels very easy, so I will mention parts in my mod where you could add Dashes or HDashes.
In CtB difficulties AR and OD are always the same which means you need to change the OD to 9. uhh i really don't know about that. ok raise the OD by 1
I highly suggest you to read the Catch the Beat Ranking Criteria again. We have two issues here which are simply not rankable. I refer to this: Do not place a note closer than 1/2 after a spinner. Due to the nature of spinners, upcoming notes are most likely too sudden and reduce the readability heavily. 1/4 could be acceptable in some cases where the bpm is low enough. We find that issue here: 00:10:580 (5,1) - and here: 01:36:080 (3,1) - . This is not rankable and has to be changed! So which possibilities do we have here? For the first spinner the following: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1466114, for the second spinner the following: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1466118 awwee thanks for the info <3. to be honest i'd never reading the CtB ranking criteria before. looks like im gonna learn more about CtB mapping and stuff
00:22:392 (9,1) - As I see you put a HDash here, which feels pretty fine. I want to see another HDash going to the left again at 00:22:580 (1,2) - . This creates a cool right-left-HDash movement and way better flow. Move (2) to x: 80 and it works fine. im not sure about adding HDash after the note after a 2 HDash in a row for now, also somehow the music doesn't support it as well but yeah i guess it's okay to try this
00:25:205 (10) - Move this more to the left till a HDash appears. cool :3
00:46:767 (1) - Personally this spinner feels way too sudden since it just starts 1/2 after a previous note and is followed by a note 1/2 section later again. Consider erasing it and add a long slider instead or map this part on the beats. intentionally did thid and im never gonna change this heuheuhe
00:55:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I really miss seeing HDashes here like you did at 00:52:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 00:49:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - =( I think you should remap this section and make build more challenge here. Especially I want to see a HDash at 00:56:705 (5,6) - and 00:55:767 (2,3) - this should be more challenging
01:01:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This is really cool mapped, I like it a lot.^^ But I think you should consider of moving 01:03:080 (1) - more to the left because I feel too long pressed on the right screen side. I thought of something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1466199 creating a HDash here maybe better
01:17:142 (7) - Move it more to the left and create a Hyper here. Try x: 172 moved to x:148 instead because to improve the movement
Ok another issue we have is the NC here. We have WAY TOO LESS New combos here. This is no standard mapping. In CtB mapping it's all about keeping the Ryuuta plate as empty as possible. in my maps I usually do a NC every stanza. Here a short list of place you can add NC's. i know about the NC stuff is to clear the fruit at the ryuuta, i just was wondering is there any trick or hint to place NC's stuff? i've no idea .__.
NCs for this map
00:03:080 (6) -
00:06:080 (5) -
00:15:080 (5) -
00:17:892 (5) -
00:21:080 (5) -
00:24:080 (5) -
00:27:080 (5) -
00:33:455 (4) - or 00:34:580 (7) -
00:37:017 (7) - definitely to keep clear a new Pattern (in this case triplet) starts here.
00:38:330 (5) -
00:42:080 (5) -
00:45:455 (6) -
00:51:267 (7) - or 00:51:642 (8) -
00:54:267 (7) - or 00:54:642 (8) -
00:57:267 (7) - or 00:57:642 (8) -
01:00:080 (5) -
01:01:955 (5) - and 01:02:330 (9) - because there are jumpy sections in this stream and it's good to lose some fruits during the jump to make your Ryuuta plate more readable for it.
01:04:580 (5) -
01:10:392 (4) -
01:16:580 (5) -
01:19:580 (5) -
01:26:892 (8,9) - Personally I suggest you to create a little HDash from (8) to (9) because this makes this whole section way more epic, since this is also the end of the Kiai. If you decide to do that, you should give (9) its very own combo to make this note more remarkable. I mean this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1466158 etto.. i'll keep this because i think there's no need to add HDash here
01:31:580 (4) -
01:34:580 (5) -
applied thosel NC thing but not all of it. there is some part that i NC'ed my self

Really good Rain-difficulty. Good job so far!

Ok well, very nice mapped, I must say~ I cannot really mod much here, the difficulty is pretty well made, so you guys get a star from me.~

Thanks for modding and the star sey

MMd- wrote:
It's better if you add (PV ver.) at the title (there is a track at Yuuhei Satellite's 千華繚乱 with a "PV ver." on it, if you ask), but since i don't know about where you got the .mp3, do whatever you want (~`3`)~ naaah "PV ver." or "Short ver." is the correct one?. and about the mp3, you can see it at description :3

adding this because someone mentioned about it and I totally forgot about this

EDIT : updated :3

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-03-31T05:28:29+00:00

Probably a bit outdated but I post it anyways. Send me a pm if I should check it again. I modded this at last Friday. orz

[Rain]

OD should be the same as AR. (Well I personally dislike this rule.)
And HP7 is kinda cruel for Rain. Keep it for Overdose/Deluge level.

00:07:392 (1) - If you use sliderend at mainbeat you will unable to use good jumps on your maps. Using dash/HDash on mainbeat is always the best choice due because they are mostly high pitched. And to be honest you should ctrl+g 00:07:205 (9,1) - on the timeline to match with the correct rhythm.
00:08:892 (5) - ^
00:12:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Where is the stream in the music? Tell me and I will accept this pattern, otherwise remove it please.
00:17:892 (5,6,7,8,9) - This is a really hard pattern and since I saw the same one on Overdose I suggest you to remove it from this diff.
00:28:017 (6,7) - Again something which is kinda follows nothing. Except a tiny sound from the music but that is just the remainings of the previous note.
00:29:705 (3,4,5) - Add repeat to (3)?
00:49:767 (2,4) - I would like to keep the beats from these two slider only at 00:49:955 and 00:50:517. The other two is nothing important. Or just use long sliders to cover the drum part since it is the only sound here and the vocal is following it nicely too.
00:52:580 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:55:580 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:58:205 - Why is this empty?
01:22:392 (4) - you emphasized the main beat with finish, thats good, but at times like this it should be a jump too. Thats why I mentioned sliders like this before.
01:31:580 (4,5) - Maybe more like a repeat on (4)?

I won't point them out, but keep in mind that the fruits are stacking up on the ryuuta. If your combo is goes up to 10+ with sliders you need to think about sliderends too since they are at equal size as sliderstart tho they don't have own numbers. So if you have 11 in a combo with sliders thats basically 22 bigger fruit on the ryuuta (not counting the droplets). The best method for CtB is to use NC on every big white tick, but its still your choice, just try to keep the fruits number under 10.

To be honest the rhythm can be much better at some places since CtB is still a rhythm game even tho you need to catch those sounds.

[Overdose]

Not too much to mention. I can't properly test it currently.

01:13:298 - Is it for me, or something is still goes on in the background? Maybe add a circle?
01:16:861 (2) - Maybe convert this slider into a triple to cover the upbeat too. Its possible to keep the same size for them as the slider itself. (You have some similar sliders, maybe you should change them too during the kiai. This way the combo will be a little higher and makes the diff a little harder.)
01:25:017 (1) - Why is this sudden NC?
01:25:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Only this stream is worth for mentioning. Even tho this is an overdose, using different DS during 1/4 stream is a bad idea. Its way too hard to decide the distance for jump in this short time with high AR. Gradually lowering or increasing, and maybe if possible increasing at the first part then lower it at the end or lower then increase is still a good possibility but randomize it is the worst. Your previous stream is good, please try to do something similar here too. :3

Thats all I think. The remaining ones not really worth for mentioning and I'm not really and expert to point out "life saver" problems.
[]

Not bad, not bad. Tho the Rain can be a bit better. Good luck.

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-03-31T09:26:41+00:00

my Mod

Just a mod by me (CTB diffs)
[Timing]
my offset is -10ms. it feels good in my computer, if this offset is feel bad just leave it

[Rain]
00:08:892 (5,6) - i suggest try this

00:13:392 (7) - x472 y124
00:17:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - why this? change to normal stream
00:26:330 (3) - CTRL + G
00:36:830 (6) - x360 y192
00:35:330 (3) - change to circle like this

00:49:580 (1) - x316
00:52:111 (3) - x376

00:52:580 (1) - x196
00:58:017 (3,4) - ???? i think it fits with this

01:27:080 (9) - NC /me runs

01:28:861 (3) - x148
01:31:205 (3) - x328
01:02:705 (3,4) - drag it and move 3 to x284
00:48:080 (1,2) - x348

Result: Some jumps are too hard to reach, Hyperdash is nice and fits in song. your diff is good

[Xinely's Overdose]
00:21:736 (3) - x184
00:24:642 (2,3) - x192

00:30:830 (3) - x416
00:41:705 (6) - x360
01:02:892 (4) - why the?!?!? Ctrl g
01:10:580 (1) - x160
01:25:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Crystal style XD <- Marked it as "hard to mod"

Result: some 1/4 jumps are not bad, but i find some jumps who cannot reach well in overdose. but, im just trying to reach it and feels good.
Just an suggestion: more Hyperdashes in here, but not many 1/4 hyperdash. Just 1/2 hyperdashes, and 1/1 too

Sorry if my mod doesnt useful, just take it if you need XD

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-03-31T13:47:57+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Probably a bit outdated but I post it anyways. Send me a pm if I should check it again. I modded this at last Friday. orz

[Rain]

OD should be the same as AR. (Well I personally dislike this rule.)
And HP7 is kinda cruel for Rain. Keep it for Overdose/Deluge level. weeeh damn i forgot to raise the OD on last update. and yeah reduce the HP by 1

00:07:392 (1) - If you use sliderend at mainbeat you will unable to use good jumps on your maps. Using dash/HDash on mainbeat is always the best choice due because they are mostly high pitched. And to be honest you should ctrl+g 00:07:205 (9,1) - on the timeline to match with the correct rhythm. alright ctrl+g'ed and also moved the slider to x:256 to create Dash here
00:08:892 (5) - ^ yep
00:12:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Where is the stream in the music? Tell me and I will accept this pattern, otherwise remove it please. it's not because the stream in the music, ~~just my personal taste from the music~~. as you can see this part 00:13:580 is the music where it goes strong, and also there is a spinner back before so i guess it deserves a streams. just pretend it like insane on std. well that was my though hueheuheuhe so i'll keep it
00:17:892 (5,6,7,8,9) - This is a really hard pattern and since I saw the same one on Overdose I suggest you to remove it from this diff. oh wait, did a little replacement
00:28:017 (6,7) - Again something which is kinda follows nothing. Except a tiny sound from the music but that is just the remainings of the previous note. the vocal is still conneted :3
00:29:705 (3,4,5) - Add repeat to (3)? eeeh? the current sounds better to me
00:49:767 (2,4) - I would like to keep the beats from these two slider only at 00:49:955 and 00:50:517. The other two is nothing important. Or just use long sliders to cover the drum part since it is the only sound here and the vocal is following it nicely too. noooooo.. i want to keep this since this is my favorite rhythm and i really enjoy this playing
00:52:580 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same here
00:55:580 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:58:205 - Why is this empty? because there is 1/4 slider before and after?
01:22:392 (4) - you emphasized the main beat with finish, thats good, but at times like this it should be a jump too. Thats why I mentioned sliders like this before. done
01:31:580 (4,5) - Maybe more like a repeat on (4)? okay

I won't point them out, but keep in mind that the fruits are stacking up on the ryuuta. If your combo is goes up to 10+ with sliders you need to think about sliderends too since they are at equal size as sliderstart tho they don't have own numbers. So if you have 11 in a combo with sliders thats basically 22 bigger fruit on the ryuuta (not counting the droplets). The best method for CtB is to use NC on every big white tick, but its still your choice, just try to keep the fruits number under 10. it's... apllied on Sey's mod :3

To be honest the rhythm can be much better at some places since CtB is still a rhythm game even tho you need to catch those sounds.

Not bad, not bad. Tho the Rain can be a bit better. Good luck.

Thanks for the mod and star kurokami

Fort wrote:
Just a mod by me (CTB diffs)
[Timing]
my offset is -10ms. it feels good in my computer, if this offset is feel bad just leave it 2 BATs said the offset is 80. look at the 1st page :3

[Rain]
00:08:892 (5,6) - i suggest try this did changes on kurokami's mod before
00:13:392 (7) - x472 y124
00:17:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - why this? change to normal stream did changes on kurokami's mod before
00:26:330 (3) - CTRL + G i'll keep this consistency
00:36:830 (6) - x360 y192
00:35:330 (3) - change to circle like this
00:49:580 (1) - x316
00:52:111 (3) - x376 why (4) is stacked with the note after? .__.
00:52:580 (1) - x196
00:58:017 (3,4) - ???? i think it fits with this not a big change
01:27:080 (9) - NC /me runs okay
01:28:861 (3) - x148
01:31:205 (3) - x328
01:02:705 (3,4) - drag it and move 3 to x284
00:48:080 (1,2) - x348

Result: Some jumps are too hard to reach, Hyperdash is nice and fits in song. your diff is good

Sorry if my mod doesnt useful, just take it if you need XD

sorry i'm not accepting coordinate mod in CtB, which means they all igroned unless you pointed a good reasons for it

anyway thanks for the mod

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-04-03T09:11:09+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Probably a bit outdated but I post it anyways. Send me a pm if I should check it again. I modded this at last Friday. orz

[Overdose]

Not too much to mention. I can't properly test it currently.

01:13:298 - Is it for me, or something is still goes on in the background? Maybe add a circle? sure
01:16:861 (2) - Maybe convert this slider into a triple to cover the upbeat too. Its possible to keep the same size for them as the slider itself. (You have some similar sliders, maybe you should change them too during the kiai. This way the combo will be a little higher and makes the diff a little harder.) well about rhythm i prefer to emphasize the music like i did it now
01:25:017 (1) - Why is this sudden NC? mistake, fixed
01:25:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Only this stream is worth for mentioning. Even tho this is an overdose, using different DS during 1/4 stream is a bad idea. Its way too hard to decide the distance for jump in this short time with high AR. Gradually lowering or increasing, and maybe if possible increasing at the first part then lower it at the end or lower then increase is still a good possibility but randomize it is the worst. Your previous stream is good, please try to do something similar here too. :3 changed then, hope it's fine now

Fort wrote:
[Xinely's Overdose]
00:21:736 (3) - x184 i don't want to make hyperdash on 1/4 except stream
00:24:642 (2,3) - x192 it feels too easy to catch
00:30:830 (3) - x416 344 then
00:41:705 (6) - x360 304 instead
01:02:892 (4) - why the?!?!? Ctrl g feel easy?!?!?!?!?!
01:10:580 (1) - x160 it working with well here
01:25:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Crystal style XD <- Marked it as "hard to mod" i love this one (๑╹ω╹๑)

Result: some 1/4 jumps are not bad, but i find some jumps who cannot reach well in overdose. but, im just trying to reach it and feels good.
Just an suggestion: more Hyperdashes in here, but not many 1/4 hyperdash. Just 1/2 hyperdashes, and 1/1 too

Sorry if my mod doesnt useful, just take it if you need XD[/box]

thanks 4 mods (๑╹ω╹๑)

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Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-04-04T00:25:51+00:00

updated ~

easy diff are done so moved to pending :3

KSHR

Global Moderator

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-04-04T01:24:35+00:00

SPOILER

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Title:Tsuki ni Murakumo Hana ni Kaze
TitleUnicode:月に叢雲華に風
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Vhy
Version:KSHR's Easy
Source:Touhou
Tags:Very Kawaii Cute Moe Yea So Yea The mapper is Kawaii Cute Moe Yea So Check It Out
BeatmapID:390101
BeatmapSetID:158128

Posted to archive.

Kuzino

Former osu!catch Champion: 2014

1,207 posts

Joined August 2009

Kuzino 2014-04-05T12:50:11+00:00

Hi

mod from Queue

[Rain]
00:12:455 (1) - , 00:12:548 (1) - add note. I think this is more natural.
00:18:830 (1) - move this slider x:512. It would be a lot easier to catch.
00:22:580 (1) - move this slider x:284. ^
00:24:080 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I suggest another pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1483800.
00:35:330 (3) - how about change like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1483855
00:46:205 (4,5,6) - Would be nicer if you space these out equally.
00:48:080 (1,2,3) - ^
00:48:830 (5,6,7) - ^
01:25:580 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - awesome
01:36:080 (3) - Hard to catch. Move this note slightly to the right.

[Xinely's Overdose]
very hard diff
00:05:142 (2) - Move this note slightly to the right. That is easier than before.
00:15:080 (1,2,3) - Decrease space.
00:17:892 (1) - Move this slider slightly to the left.
00:19:205 (4,5,6) - Would be nicer if you space these out equally.
00:21:455 (2,3,4,5) - Decrease space between slider and note.
00:38:330 (3,4) - Decrease space. hard to catch
00:39:080 (1,2) - ^
00:42:642 (3,4,5) - I think same space is more better.
00:43:392 (7) - Move this note slightly to the right.
00:48:830 (3,4,5,6,1) - Decrease space.
01:13:205 (4,5,1) - Would be nicer if you space these out equally.
01:13:955 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Remove hyper dash. that is unnecessary.
01:25:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Very hard. I think need to change.

Good Luck!

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-04-06T04:43:38+00:00

Kuzino wrote:
Hi

mod from Queue

[Rain]
00:12:455 (1) - , 00:12:548 (1) - add note. I think this is more natural. i think the current is good already. but might apply this in the future idk
00:18:830 (1) - move this slider x:512. It would be a lot easier to catch. it goes offscreen, and really offscreen. moved to x:376 instead :3
00:22:580 (1) - move this slider x:284. ^ i want to keep the HDash here
00:24:080 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I suggest another pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1483800. seems good. but since here the pattern has many clap and finish on it so maybe i'll keep this zigzag to match the hitsounding
00:35:330 (3) - how about change like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1483855 yes ofc my bad .__.
00:46:205 (4,5,6) - Would be nicer if you space these out equally. okay
00:48:080 (1,2,3) - ^ nope, i like the current
00:48:830 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
01:25:580 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - awesome aweeee <3
01:36:080 (3) - Hard to catch. Move this note slightly to the right. moved to x:400

Good Luck!

thanks for the mod Kuzino

moved back to WIP because added uncomplete Extra diff <3

Last edited by Vhy 2014-04-06T13:49:14+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

KSHR

Global Moderator

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-04-06T06:09:47+00:00

Just as a reminder.
p/2962723

To Very Hentai ~~Kawaii Cute Moe~~ Yea:
Let me know when the new Extra diff is complete. I'm willing to mod this map. (cant bubble tho)

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-04-06T14:37:06+00:00

KSHR wrote:
To Very Hentai ~~Kawaii Cute Moe~~ Yea:

sorry you are talking to the wrong person
please come back when you are feeling lucky xD

Lunaties

369 posts

Joined October 2012

Lunaties 2014-04-08T14:39:49+00:00

jiah elah nduuuk moso wes nyerah ckckck. ga seru ah

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-04-08T14:52:23+00:00

aek malah di post =="

moved to pending again. mapping extra is just a pain, out of my mapping skill k thankies bye ~

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-04-10T10:54:54+00:00

Kuzino wrote:
Hi

mod from Queue

[Xinely's Overdose]
very hard diff because overdose lol
00:05:142 (2) - Move this note slightly to the right. That is easier than before. sure
00:15:080 (1,2,3) - Decrease space. well actually a normal player like me able to catch this one
00:17:892 (1) - Move this slider slightly to the left. intentional to make 1/4 HDash btw
00:19:205 (4,5,6) - Would be nicer if you space these out equally. done
00:21:455 (2,3,4,5) - Decrease space between slider and note. same as 00:15:080 (1,2,3) -
00:38:330 (3,4) - Decrease space. hard to catch actually no need to use Dash for this one but okay
00:39:080 (1,2) - ^ pretty easy btw with use Dash
00:42:642 (3,4,5) - I think same space is more better. ok
00:43:392 (7) - Move this note slightly to the right. ok
00:48:830 (3,4,5,6,1) - Decrease space. no a challenge for this diff
01:13:205 (4,5,1) - Would be nicer if you space these out equally. ok
01:13:955 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Remove hyper dash. that is unnecessary. to make it more challenge
01:25:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Very hard. I think need to change. ok, should be pretty easy here

Good Luck!

ty 4 mod ~

~

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Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-04-13T00:30:48+00:00

Hi hi hi ~ KSHR request

[General]

mmm just a small issue that I personally have with your pink combo colour:
as you can notice is really hard to see the approach circle with the current colour, changing it or making the pink a bit more dark can help maybe:

[Lunatic]

00:03:455 (2) - mmm I feel the rhythm here not nice, since an extended slider will fit better the vocals at 00:03:736 -, also will be consistent with the one at 00:03:080 (1) - and you mapped a similar one here too 00:05:611
00:08:423 I don't get what are you following here, since there is not a clearly sound in the repeat of this slider, I think is better if you map the vocal in 00:08:517 -, something like:
00:14:142 (3,4,5) - use the same distance between them? just to be more comfortable to play, moving 00:14:517 (4) - around x: 232 y: 24
00:15:080 (1,2,3) - similar as above, I think is more comfortable and consistent if you keep the same distance in the same combo
00:16:205 (6) - should be a stream here, will be more fun IMO
00:28:580 (1,3) - I kinda don't like this kind of overlaps, also I think is not really necessary, try to move (3) a bit to the right, like:
SPOILER
00:31:205 (3) - just a suggestion, but I feel 2 circles represent the vocals better, since the pitch is the same at both beats and due to this both need a click action
00:32:330 (3) - I can't listen a very audible beat at the start of this slider, I feel is better if you follow the vocals here, the importants spots for me are 00:32:142 - and 00:32:705 - my suggestion:
00:37:486 just a bit curious why you didn't map this beat
00:40:955 (2) - nazi, this is touching a bit the HP bar and doesn't look nice IMO, check if you can do something to avoid this
00:49:205 (1) - unnecessary NC, the tiny jump can be readed perfectly without it, also spamming combos just mess up the overall HP drain in the whole diff
00:53:517 (1) - same as above
00:52:580 (1) - finish fit better IMO
00:53:892 (1,2,3) - similar to 00:15:080
00:58:205 (1) - same as 00:49:205
00:58:580 (1,1,1,1) - D: this 1/4 jumps are really hard to play, also they are not readable in first play at least for me, they look more a difficult spike here, since you don't have anything more hard than this in the whole diff, I will prefer if you avoid the 4.0 1/4 jumps at 160 bpm
01:07:580 (1,2) - This is not even consistent with your previous rhythms, like 01:06:830 (1,2,3) - 01:04:580 (1,2,3) - 01:17:705 (2,3,1) - 01:19:580 (1,2,3) -
01:23:705 (1) - same as 00:49:205
01:24:830 (1) - ^

[Hard]

00:04:580 (1,2) - a slider will follow the vocals better, since your diff is following the vocals the most of time, a slider will represent the hold feeling of the vocals there IMO
00:07:580 (1,2) - a bit nazi, but this blanket with the sliders can be better, similar to this:
SPOILER
00:13:580 (1) - missing finish in the head
00:15:455 (5,1) - well the last part of your slider blanket look pretty off hue, try to add some more control points to improve it, like:
SPOILER
00:16:392 (1) - missing finish in the head too
00:17:611 mmm i'm a bit not ok with the rhythm here, since there are 2 more importants beats in 00:17:517 - and 00:17:517 - that I believe should be mapped, I know you're following the guitar, but also I found some times when you ignore the guitar like in 00:17:517 - 00:22:767 -, and I found them pretty inconsistent
00:19:580 missing finish
00:28:392 ending sliders in strong beats like the measure in 00:28:580 doesn't represent nicely the music, plus it broke your combo pattern, try this instead:
00:32:705 (3) - similar as above
00:37:392 the rhythm feel really empty here, the drums sound really clearly, adding circles in 00:37:392 - and 00:37:486 - will make a really nice emphasis with the song.
00:43:205 (4) - why are you breaking the square pattern here , also your spacing is wrong actually, move (4) to x: 256 y: 256 , you'll keep a nice square pattern and your spacing consistent
00:47:892 (3) - same as 00:28:392
00:48:830 (5) - this extended slider doesn't fit the song it should be a 1/2 slider, since the sound at 00:49:017 is really clearly and important and should be mapped properly IMO
00:49:580 (1) - finish fit better the music instead of clap
00:52:580 finish fit better the music that clap
00:59:611 (4,5) - stack this properly
01:06:642 (2,3,4) - with this sliders starting in upbeats you're breaking two importants things, 1 you're not following the strong beats in the song 2 you're not being consistent with your vocal mapping, try this instead:
01:09:080 I don't see a point of leaving a stanza as the repeat of the slider, also this is the plae where your NC should be, try this instead:
01:22:955 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - your combo pattern look not consistent here, since you should remove it here 01:24:080 - to keep your 2 stanzas pattern, I guess

[Normal]

00:05:611 (2) - this slider starting in a offbeat will be really hard to play, since clicking it is really hard and taking in consideration this is just a normal diff, I thing you should make the rhythm more simple and friendly for new players, maybe like:
00:10:580 (5) - following your combo pattern, every 2 stanzas, the circle at 00:10:580 (5) - should be a NC
00:10:955 (1) - this spinner should start in 00:10:767 -, also is consistent with hard diff
00:13:580 missing finish in the head
00:19:580 same as above
00:40:205 (4) - try to don't end sliders in strong beats as the stanza in 00:40:580 -, doing this don't fit the song and it broke your comboing, try to circles instead, since both spots need a click action
00:41:705 (3) - same as above
00:43:580 (1) - missing finish in the head
00:44:892 (2) - I don't get this rhythm here, also can be confused for non experienced players, try this instead:
00:46:580 (6) - missing NC, following your pattern, also you have one here in hard diff
00:48:080 (6,7) - look like a mistake, this spacing is really hard to be readed it looks like an 1/1 gap spacing but in the timeline the gap is biggest:
SPOILER
00:49:580 (1) - finish fit better the music instead of clap
00:50:705 (2) - I feel this rhythm a bit confused, mainly cuz the sound at 00:50:517 - is really important, try to make a 1/2 repeat slider instead like:
00:52:017 similar as above, ignoring the music in such important beats in 00:52:205 - and 00:52:392 - doesn't follow the song properly, also it can be confused to play using a 1/2 repeat as the previous suggestion will suit perfectly IMO
00:52:580 finish fit better the music that clap
00:53:705 (2) - same as 00:50:705
00:55:017 (5) - same as 00:52:017
00:56:705 (2) - same as 00:50:705
01:10:955 (1) - you should remove NC here following your 2 stanzas pattern, also with this slider you're breaking your combo pattern, since it is ending in the place where the NC should be 01:12:080 -, also that beat in 01:12:080 should be mapped as slider head or circle IMO
If you follow my previous suggestion, you should remove the NC in 01:12:830 (1) - too

[Easy]

00:10:580 (4,1) - the spinner is starting too soon after the circle, I know why you did it, but take in consideration this play really bad in mania mode and it will be really stressed to play for new players since they need to click and insta spin, that's why, starting the spinner in 00:10:767 - can work better
00:14:142 (1) - too soon after a spinner for an easy, even the normal is giving more recovery time after the spinner
00:48:830 (3,4,1) - this is too confuse to play for a new player, first to all the 1/1 stack is to hard to be clicked in time by a player who start playing the game today and after it you normalize the spacing again causing an uncomfotable movement, I suggest you to avoid the stack and use a properly spacing there
01:00:080 (3,1) - same as 00:10:580

GL nice song <3

Last edited by Natsu 2014-04-13T02:35:13+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-04-13T02:14:48+00:00

Natsu wrote:
[Lunatic]
00:03:455 (2) - mmm I feel the rhythm here not nice, since an extended slider will fit better the vocals at 00:03:736 -, also will be consistent with the one at 00:03:080 (1) - and you mapped a similar one here too 00:05:611 To be honest, I'm not sure whether the vocal lands there or on the red tick... It feels more natural if the slider ends on the red tick, anyway (talking about 00:03:455 (2)). Also, there's a crackling sound at 00:03:361 that's quite nice to be mapped, so...
00:08:423 I don't get what are you following here, since there is not a clearly sound in the repeat of this slider, I think is better if you map the vocal in 00:08:517 -, something like: Ah okay.
00:14:142 (3,4,5) - use the same distance between them? just to be more comfortable to play, moving 00:14:517 (4) - around x: 232 y: 24 Moved stuff.
00:15:080 (1,2,3) - similar as above, I think is more comfortable and consistent if you keep the same distance in the same combo ^
00:16:205 (6) - should be a stream here, will be more fun IMO Done.
00:28:580 (1,3) - I kinda don't like this kind of overlaps, also I think is not really necessary, try to move (3) a bit to the right, like: ^
SPOILER
00:31:205 (3) - just a suggestion, but I feel 2 circles represent the vocals better, since the pitch is the same at both beats and due to this both need a click action I feel that the vocal is "connected" to each other. It'd be weird if I have to use a slider.
00:32:330 (3) - I can't listen a very audible beat at the start of this slider, I feel is better if you follow the vocals here, the importants spots for me are 00:32:142 - and 00:32:705 - my suggestion: Let's try.
00:37:486 just a bit curious why you didn't map this beat It isn't that noticeable.
00:40:955 (2) - nazi, this is touching a bit the HP bar and doesn't look nice IMO, check if you can do something to avoid this Moved.
00:49:205 (1) - unnecessary NC, the tiny jump can be readed perfectly without it, also spamming combos just mess up the overall HP drain in the whole diff I won't say that this is a tiny jump. It's necessary, seriously.
00:53:517 (1) - same as above Okay, removed.
00:53:892 (1,2,3) - similar to 00:15:080 Done.
00:58:205 (1) - same as 00:49:205 They're a separate pattern from the previous combo, so there should be something to denote it.
00:58:580 (1,1,1,1) - D: this 1/4 jumps are really hard to play, also they are not readable in first play at least for me, they look more a difficult spike here, since you don't have anything more hard than this in the whole diff, I will prefer if you avoid the 4.0 1/4 jumps at 160 bpm Made the 1/4 jumps far easier D:
01:07:580 (1,2) - This is not even consistent with your previous rhythms, like 01:06:830 (1,2,3) - 01:04:580 (1,2,3) - 01:17:705 (2,3,1) - 01:19:580 (1,2,3) - I don't really want the rhythm to be too consistent, and it fits well with the vocal here, IMO.
01:23:705 (1) - same as 00:49:205 Sure.
01:24:830 (1) - ^ No, for the same reason as 00:58:205 (1).

Thanks for the mod!

I should map the full version in the next few months... or shouldn't I?

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KSHR

Global Moderator

1,668 posts

Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-04-13T03:17:29+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Hi hi hi ~ KSHR request
[Easy]
00:10:580 (4,1) - the spinner is starting too soon after the circle, I know why you did it, but take in consideration this play really bad in mania mode and it will be really stressed to play for new players since they need to click and insta spin, that's why, starting the spinner in 00:10:767 - can work better.
F
00:14:142 (1) - too soon after a spinner for an easy, even the normal is giving more recovery time after the spinner I
00:48:830 (3,4,1) - this is too confuse to play for a new player, first to all the 1/1 stack is to hard to be clicked in time by a player who start playing the game today and after it you normalize the spacing again causing an uncomfotable movement, I suggest you to avoid the stack and use a properly spacing there X
01:00:080 (3,1) - same as 00:10:580 E
D!

Plus.. fixed the following by myself.

00:16:580 (3) - Extended this slider by 1/2 beat to make consistent with 00:21:642 (3) - .
01:10:580 (2) - To follow the drum, added a normal hit normal sound to this note by changing the sampleset to Normal.
01:36:080 - Removed this green line since 25% sounded a bit too inaudible.

Thanks for modding, Doki-Natsu :p

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TitleUnicode:月に叢雲華に風
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Creator:Vhy
Version:KSHR's Easy
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Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-04-16T06:53:39+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Hi hi hi ~ KingSuperHentaiReally request

[General]
mmm just a small issue that I personally have with your pink combo colour:
as you can notice is really hard to see the approach circle with the current colour, changing it or making the pink a bit more dark can help maybe: okay make it a bit darker :3
[Hard]
00:04:580 (1,2) - a slider will follow the vocals better, since your diff is following the vocals the most of time, a slider will represent the hold feeling of the vocals there IMO done
00:07:580 (1,2) - a bit nazi, but this blanket with the sliders can be better, similar to this: hmmm
SPOILER
00:13:580 (1) - missing finish in the head okay
00:15:455 (5,1) - well the last part of your slider blanket look pretty off hue, try to add some more control points to improve it, like: im not good at blanket but yeah tried it
SPOILER
00:16:392 (1) - missing finish in the head too i hear no cymbal here :p
00:17:611 mmm i'm a bit not ok with the rhythm here, since there are 2 more importants beats in 00:17:517 - and 00:17:517 - that I believe should be mapped, I know you're following the guitar, but also I found some times when you ignore the guitar like in 00:17:517 - 00:22:767 -, and I found them pretty inconsistent idk how to explain this.. just want keep the current
00:19:580 missing finish okay
00:28:392 ending sliders in strong beats like the measure in 00:28:580 doesn't represent nicely the music, plus it broke your combo pattern, try this instead: fixed in other way
00:32:705 (3) - similar as above what's wrong with this .__.
00:37:392 the rhythm feel really empty here, the drums sound really clearly, adding circles in 00:37:392 - and 00:37:486 - will make a really nice emphasis with the song. done.. and adjust some pattern here
00:43:205 (4) - why are you breaking the square pattern here , also your spacing is wrong actually, move (4) to x: 256 y: 256 , you'll keep a nice square pattern and your spacing consistent fixed in other way
00:47:892 (3) - same as 00:28:392 errrr.. keep it!
00:48:830 (5) - this extended slider doesn't fit the song it should be a 1/2 slider, since the sound at 00:49:017 is really clearly and important and should be mapped properly IMO keep it also :3
00:49:580 (1) - finish fit better the music instead of clap nope i think
00:52:580 finish fit better the music that clap ^
00:59:611 (4,5) - stack this properly done
01:06:642 (2,3,4) - with this sliders starting in upbeats you're breaking two importants things, 1 you're not following the strong beats in the song 2 you're not being consistent with your vocal mapping, try this instead: done
01:09:080 I don't see a point of leaving a stanza as the repeat of the slider, also this is the plae where your NC should be, try this instead: keep it :3
01:22:955 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - your combo pattern look not consistent here, since you should remove it here 01:24:080 - to keep your 2 stanzas pattern, I guess it's no problem

[Normal]
00:05:611 (2) - this slider starting in a offbeat will be really hard to play, since clicking it is really hard and taking in consideration this is just a normal diff, I thing you should make the rhythm more simple and friendly for new players, maybe like: this is just an intro, i think it's not that hard. and also hiii,, im a noob and have no problem with reading this xD
00:10:580 (5) - following your combo pattern, every 2 stanzas, the circle at 00:10:580 (5) - should be a NC o k a y
00:10:955 (1) - this spinner should start in 00:10:767 -, also is consistent with hard diff okay
00:13:580 missing finish in the head okay
00:19:580 same as above yep
00:40:205 (4) - try to don't end sliders in strong beats as the stanza in 00:40:580 -, doing this don't fit the song and it broke your comboing, try to circles instead, since both spots need a click action done
00:41:705 (3) - same as above i guess it's okay here
00:43:580 (1) - missing finish in the head okay
00:44:892 (2) - I don't get this rhythm here, also can be confused for non experienced players, try this instead: keep it
00:46:580 (6) - missing NC, following your pattern, also you have one here in hard diff okay
00:48:080 (6,7) - look like a mistake, this spacing is really hard to be readed it looks like an 1/1 gap spacing but in the timeline the gap is biggest: intentionally? i dont think it's hard but okay fixed the DS
SPOILER
00:49:580 (1) - finish fit better the music instead of clap noooo
00:50:705 (2) - I feel this rhythm a bit confused, mainly cuz the sound at 00:50:517 - is really important, try to make a 1/2 repeat slider instead like: but i prefer the current
00:52:017 similar as above, ignoring the music in such important beats in 00:52:205 - and 00:52:392 - doesn't follow the song properly, also it can be confused to play using a 1/2 repeat as the previous suggestion will suit perfectly IMO still prefer mine
00:52:580 finish fit better the music that clap nope
00:53:705 (2) - same as 00:50:705
00:55:017 (5) - same as 00:52:017
00:56:705 (2) - same as 00:50:705
01:10:955 (1) - you should remove NC here following your 2 stanzas pattern, also with this slider you're breaking your combo pattern, since it is ending in the place where the NC should be 01:12:080 -, also that beat in 01:12:080 should be mapped as slider head or circle IMO errr mine is currently fine since im not that just add NC in every stanza but when it needed to place it. so yeah keep it
If you follow my previous suggestion, you should remove the NC in 01:12:830 (1) - too
GL nice song <3

Thanks for the mod dokidoki Natsu-san xD

all updated with xinely's diff through forum PM ~

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2014-04-21T14:20:05+00:00

[Rain]
00:13:205 (6,7) - reduce this jump a bit or add hyperdash.
00:20:142 (2,3) - make a jump.
00:28:205 (4,5) - make a jump to right. (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1533904 here is my recommend.)
00:30:267 (4,5,6) - you can expand this jump more.
00:34:580 (1,2,3,4) - reduce these jumps a bit.
00:36:455 (4,5,6,1) - ^

[Xinely's Overdose]
00:26:330 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't recommend hyperdashes on this part, please convert them to regular jumps.
00:37:392 (5,6) - hmm, it looks not good. x : 492 for 6 plz.
01:07:392 (5) - x : 160
01:14:705 (4,5) - X.X can you just use circles?

I love this song, have my star!

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-04-22T06:50:45+00:00

CLSW wrote:
[Rain]
00:13:205 (6,7) - reduce this jump a bit or add hyperdash.
00:20:142 (2,3) - make a jump.
00:28:205 (4,5) - make a jump to right. (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1533904 here is my recommend.)
00:30:267 (4,5,6) - you can expand this jump more.
00:34:580 (1,2,3,4) - reduce these jumps a bit. the current feels okay for me to catch
00:36:455 (4,5,6,1) - ^

else than that.. fixed all ~

I love this song, have my star!

thanks for the mod CLSW

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-04-23T07:46:43+00:00

CLSW wrote:
[Xinely's Overdose]
00:26:330 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't recommend hyperdashes on this part, please convert them to regular jumps. removed some. i just keep hyperdashes that i think its fit with music
00:37:392 (5,6) - hmm, it looks not good. x : 492 for 6 plz. ok
01:07:392 (5) - x : 160 ok
01:14:705 (4,5) - X.X can you just use circles? i can't. its match with music xD

I love this song, have my star!

thanks 4 mod ~

~

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TitleUnicode:月に叢雲華に風
Artist:senya
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Creator:Vhy
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296,264,54642,2,0,P|360:272|468:188,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,152,55205,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,172,55392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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112,212,58392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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104,296,59142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,256,59892,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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140,268,61955,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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20,176,62142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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500,304,69642,2,0,L|380:128,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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356,316,71892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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252,328,73205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,332,73298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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300,336,81642,2,0,P|360:256|332:140,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,160,82205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,140,82392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,256,82580,6,0,P|140:244|80:260,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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224,312,83892,1,2,0:0:0:0:
492,144,84080,6,0,P|393:127|294:135,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Serena-

454 posts

Joined December 2012

Serena- 2014-05-13T12:41:37+00:00

ah one of the song i luv :3

[Xinely's Overdose]
00:53:705 (3) - i recommend reducing the distance. the jump between 3 and 4 is quite big, making the player hard to control the ryuuta(since the HD is so fast) which is followed by another jump.
01:14:705 (4,5) - similar as above, vice versa.

no big problems, but this diff has lots of edge-jumps. abusing those jumps may make the diff hard, but it also makes the players frustrating. ill point out the jumps that i had a hard time catching. i'm not saying that these jumps are superhard, but you miss these if you hesitate for a moment. try reducing these jumps.

00:14:142 (4,5) -
00:43:580 (1) -
01:07:111 (4,5,1) -
01:10:580 (1) -
01:13:392 (1) -
01:14:705 (4,5) -
01:22:955 (2) -

this is just my opinion, no need to change if you don't feel like it xD

[Rain]
00:03:080 (1) - end this slider at 00:03:455
00:19:205 (3) - ctrl+h?
01:20:517 (4) - this jump is quite hard try reducing the distance

nice map have my star :3

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-05-14T14:46:52+00:00

Serena- wrote:
ah one of the song i luv :3

[Rain]
00:03:080 (1) - end this slider at 00:03:455 end at 00:03:361 instead to follow the vocal. why i didn't notice this orz
00:19:205 (3) - ctrl+h? i'll keep this
01:20:517 (4) - this jump is quite hard try reducing the distance aaah sure moved to the right by 20 points

nice map have my star :3

thanks for the mod and star

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,578 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2014-05-15T11:32:56+00:00

Oh I rested too long :3
Mod4Mod, thanks! (Link here

[Rain]
00:51:642 (2,3,4) - Streams should connect together

00:58:017 (3,4,5) - The circle put at last, while another slider move to the start

01:01:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The streams can be separated into 4 little streams

[Xinely's Overdose]
00:10:767 (1) - Spinner ends at 00:12:033
00:12:080 - 00:12:736 - Make some 1/4 streams here to suit the rhythm
00:16:392 (1) - Slider ends at 00:16:673
00:21:455 (2,3,4,5) - Make this part harder = better

00:24:361 - Add a circle here to suits the melody
00:24:455 (1,2,3,4) - This stream should have better pattern, because it's not hard enough

00:26:330 (3) - Remove this circle
00:26:517 (4) - Slider moves to 00:26:142
00:26:892 - Add circle
00:36:923 - ^
01:02:330 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend this part of streams can make harder (It looks better like this)

01:13:955 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Streams can be harder (Consider below)

01:25:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make streams farther to make it more overdose-r

The CTB diffs are great!

Good luck!
AFB

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-05-17T04:10:37+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
Oh I rested too long :3
Mod4Mod, thanks! (Link here

[Rain]
00:51:642 (2,3,4) - Streams should connect together i prefer my own pattern here

00:58:017 (3,4,5) - The circle put at last, while another slider move to the start this would be result as jump here. im not sure about this

01:01:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The streams can be separated into 4 little streams this is my first thought about making a streams here, but i decided to make it normal stream with a various distance

The CTB diffs are great!

Good luck!
AFB

sorry no changes on my diff..
thanks for mod

Minao

219 posts

Joined November 2013

Minao 2014-05-18T09:44:49+00:00

Hiiii!

I hope you're fine since the last time ^_^
I need a M4M please :3 I'm not very good at modding I will try to do my best :<

[KSHR's Easy]
00:06:080 (4) - Maybe use the same slider curve than 00:03:080 (2).
00:07:580 (2) - This can be* curved to fit with 00:07:205 (1), like this: http://puu.sh/8QRqJ.jpg
00:44:892 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - A suggestion for this part: http://puu.sh/8QRMW.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/8QRSL.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/8QRVV.jpg
I hope it's clear enough; I don't know how to show it better '-'
01:04:580 (3) - It can make a better triangle with previous objects: http://puu.sh/8QS4g.jpg
01:10:955 (3) - Same than previously: http://puu.sh/8QS6p.jpg
01:22:955 (3) - Same than previously: http://puu.sh/8QS9M.jpg
01:27:830 (2,3) - 2 can be curved a little more and 3 can fit even better to 2 first circle: http://puu.sh/8QSg4.jpg

[Normal]
00:00:830 (1,1) - I think it can be improved by something of this kind: http://puu.sh/8QSsL.jpg. If you don't like the green slider I made, at least consider to lean the rose one as on the screenshot: so it will seems straightless than a 100% vertical one and I think it's better. What do you think?
00:24:830 (3) - Only a suggestion: http://puu.sh/8QSYo.png (I stack all the objects to take screenshots so sometime it bugs and doesn't show the numbers)
00:44:892 (2) - Try to curve this a little more so it fits with the previous slider (not easy) http://puu.sh/8QT7s.jpg
01:00:080 (4) - I think it can be curved just a little bit more: http://puu.sh/8QTcd.jpg
01:09:080 (1) - I don't think this part fits very well with the music, I think it's too much symmetric... A suggestion too keep your first idea but change the symetrical aspect: http://puu.sh/8QTIL.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/8QTM2.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/8QTOo.jpg
01:34:955 (4) - I feel that it has to be placed here 01:34:767 but it's maybe a little difficult for normal diff, I don't know...

[Hard]
Until 00:10:580 - I think it can be better if objects are not stacked, with distance spacing at 1.4x they are not stacked anymore.
00:01:580 (1) - It can be curved a little more: http://puu.sh/8QU7p.jpg
00:07:580 (1,2,3) - This part is difficult to curve but I think it can be a little better: http://puu.sh/8QUd1.jpg
00:14:142 (2) - I think it can be curved a little more better: http://puu.sh/8QUj7.jpg
01:03:830 (3,4,5) - It can be even cuter is these are a little more curved: http://puu.sh/8QUuP.jpg
01:13:017 (2) - Can be curved a little more.
01:20:142 (7) - It is a little too much curved I think, it can fit with the previous slider curve better.
From 01:30:080 until the end: Same things than until 00:10:580 .

[Hinsvar's Lunatic]
00:30:080 (1) - It can be curved better
00:31:205 (3,1,2) - I think 1 can be more curved to fit with 2 curve, maybe like that? http://puu.sh/8QV1S.png
00:50:517 (4) - Can be more curved to fit with next slider: http://puu.sh/8QV9R.jpg

I hope you will like it :3

For your mod:
Cats on Mars is my first beatmap, Easy / Normal / Hard diff, it is completed and needs a little more mods to be ranked I think. I would really really prefer a mod on this map.

But if you don't have enough time / don't like the first music you can mod Ref-Rain by Yuuhei Satellite: work in progress, only easy diff is over so it's only 1 diff to mod.

Thank you!

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-05-18T13:58:12+00:00

hweeeeeee it's MINAOOO!!!
long time no see you >////<
im not fine right now hueee, what bring you here? oh m4m? no need for m4m also you can ask me for a mod anytime since you helped me so much on my first map xD. but right now i still have some request to clean up first, so i'll mod your map later

Minao

219 posts

Joined November 2013

Minao 2014-05-18T14:31:28+00:00

It's okay mod it when you want ^_^ I only made some part of the skin you know XD I don't think I helped that much :p
If you're not fine now I hope you will be good soon >.<

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-05-19T12:08:47+00:00

Hi~Hi~，Mod request from BMT Modding Team，for Standard
Senya~Senya~Senya~
about the hitsounds，almost are flow my feeling，hope you like it

[KSHR's Easy]
00:03:642 add whistle
00:09:080 add whistle
00:15:080 (2) - slider end change to Drum addition then add whistle
00:56:892 (2) - slider end also add clap
01:25:955 (2) - change to finish
01:26:330 (3) - slider end change to finish ->I think these place continuously emphasize is so excellent，just my personal opinion
01:35:517 here add 30% may better

[Normal]
00:03:830 (4) - slider head add whistle
00:09:080 (3) - ^
00:18:830 (4) - whistle
00:22:580 change to finish
00:23:142 add finish
00:57:642 (4) - slider end change to finish
00:58:955 (2) - ^
01:00:080 (4) - head,end,reverse all change to finish
01:01:580 (1) - add finish
01:28:580 (3) - slider head add whistle
01:33:642 (2) - slider end add whistle
01:34:205 (3) - slider head cancel whistle

[Hard]
00:03:080 add whistle
00:03:830 (4) - slider head add whistle
00:19:580 (1,2,3) - actually this flow isn't good enough,change another one?
00:44:892 (1) - change to finish
00:46:580 (1,2,3) - here have a very important piano in 00:47:142，the slider should start at here imo，try this rhythm

SPOILER

00:58:205 (6) - slider head change to finish
01:01:767 (2) - delete this circle
01:08:142 (8) - slider head change to whistle，end change to clap
01:11:142 (5) - slider head add whistle
01:13:017 (2) - slider head change to clap
01:20:142 (7) - slider head remove clap

[Hinsvar's Lunatic]
cuz some stream which use N-hit are really loudly，maybe should reduce the vol. with the stream
00:16:392 (8) - add whistle
00:17:611 (6) - slider head add whistle
00:25:205 (2) - also add whistle
00:29:705 (4) - slider end add whistle
00:56:892 (1) - slider head also add whistle
01:13:580 (1) - add whistle
01:13:580 (1) - slider head also add finish
01:26:705 (1) - change to whistle

nice map

hope it help you ！
good luck~

Vhy

678 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Vhy 2014-05-20T05:59:39+00:00

Minao wrote:
Hiiii!
I hope you're fine since the last time ^_^
I need a M4M please :3 I'm not very good at modding I will try to do my best :<

[Normal]
00:00:830 (1,1) - I think it can be improved by something of this kind: http://puu.sh/8QSsL.jpg. If you don't like the green slider I made, at least consider to lean the rose one as on the screenshot: so it will seems straightless than a 100% vertical one and I think it's better. What do you think? ummmm,, at the very early part like this i prefer a normal flow here not blanketed one cz it's more natural
00:24:830 (3) - Only a suggestion: http://puu.sh/8QSYo.png (I stack all the objects to take screenshots so sometime it bugs and doesn't show the numbers) the current is fine already and also your screenshot shows that (1) is overlapped by (3)'s tail which is not good cz it's quite hard to read. on the next time if you want to show the screenshot that contains a lot of object, just SS it separately no need to stack them on timeline which may confuse the mapper
00:44:892 (2) - Try to curve this a little more so it fits with the previous slider (not easy) http://puu.sh/8QT7s.jpg the current is perfect already. try to prove it with approach circle D:
01:00:080 (4) - I think it can be curved just a little bit more: http://puu.sh/8QTcd.jpg yep a bit
01:09:080 (1) - I don't think this part fits very well with the music, I think it's too much symmetric... A suggestion too keep your first idea but change the symetrical aspect: http://puu.sh/8QTIL.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/8QTM2.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/8QTOo.jpg i did this intentionally. the rhythm is fits well with the music imo, but maybe not the pattern .__.
01:34:955 (4) - I feel that it has to be placed here 01:34:767 but it's maybe a little difficult for normal diff, I don't know... this object is placed at the right time

[Hard]
Until 00:10:580 - I think it can be better if objects are not stacked, with distance spacing at 1.4x they are not stacked anymore. no no no.. i'll keep the DS 1.2x. the reason why they're stacked (it's overlap obviously) is because im using lower SV here which in result lower the DS too..
00:01:580 (1) - It can be curved a little more: http://puu.sh/8QU7p.jpg move this further a bit
00:07:580 (1,2,3) - This part is difficult to curve but I think it can be a little better: http://puu.sh/8QUd1.jpg the current is okay
00:14:142 (2) - I think it can be curved a little more better: http://puu.sh/8QUj7.jpg ^
01:03:830 (3,4,5) - It can be even cuter is these are a little more curved: http://puu.sh/8QUuP.jpg ^
01:13:017 (2) - Can be curved a little more. ^
01:20:142 (7) - It is a little too much curved I think, it can fit with the previous slider curve better. ^
From 01:30:080 until the end: Same things than until 00:10:580 . this part song is calm here. that's why i lower the SV like before

Sellenite wrote:
Hi~Hi~，Mod request from BMT Modding Team，for Standard
Senya~Senya~Senya~
about the hitsounds，almost are flow my feeling，hope you like it

[Normal]
00:03:830 (4) - slider head add whistle ok
00:09:080 (3) - ^ ^
00:18:830 (4) - whistle ^
00:22:580 change to finish ^
00:23:142 add finish ^
00:57:642 (4) - slider end change to finish
00:58:955 (2) - ^
01:00:080 (4) - head,end,reverse all change to finish
01:01:580 (1) - add finish
01:28:580 (3) - slider head add whistle
01:33:642 (2) - slider end add whistle
01:34:205 (3) - slider head cancel whistle

[Hard]
00:03:080 add whistle ok
00:03:830 (4) - slider head add whistle ^
00:19:580 (1,2,3) - actually this flow isn't good enough,change another one? the angle is a bit hard right? but that's how i map this pattern
00:44:892 (1) - change to finish
00:46:580 (1,2,3) - here have a very important piano in 00:47:142，the slider should start at here imo，try this rhythm
SPOILER
i prefer my own rhythm here. and also the piano sound here isn't that loud if you compared with the vocal
00:58:205 (6) - slider head change to finish
01:01:767 (2) - delete this circle
01:08:142 (8) - slider head change to whistle，end change to clap
01:11:142 (5) - slider head add whistle
01:13:017 (2) - slider head change to clap
01:20:142 (7) - slider head remove clap
no reply means no changes :3

nice map
hope it help you ！
good luck~

thanks for mod and the star guys <3

Last edited by Vhy 2014-05-20T06:28:28+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2014-05-20T06:12:38+00:00

Minao wrote:
[Hinsvar's Lunatic]
00:30:080 (1) - It can be curved better How so? I don't have any idea lol
00:31:205 (3,1,2) - I think 1 can be more curved to fit with 2 curve, maybe like that? http://puu.sh/8QV1S.png I can't see anything wrong with the current pattern, and to be blunt, I don't really like the curve of your (1) o.o
00:50:517 (4) - Can be more curved to fit with next slider: http://puu.sh/8QV9R.jpg Done.

Sellenite wrote:
[Hinsvar's Lunatic]
cuz some stream which use N-hit are really loudly，maybe should reduce the vol. with the stream I don't think so... but I'll consider.
00:16:392 (8) - add whistle Done!
00:17:611 (6) - slider head add whistle The instrument here is weaker than the end of the slider.
00:25:205 (2) - also add whistle I personally feel that it's unnecessary and redundant.
00:29:705 (4) - slider end add whistle Done.
00:56:892 (1) - slider head also add whistle ^
01:13:580 (1) - add whistle ^
01:13:580 (1) - slider head also add finish I don't think the instrument here is that heavy...
01:26:705 (1) - change to whistle No; same reason as 00:25:205 (2).

Thanks for the mod!

ahue

osu file format v12

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