This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, March 27, 2014 at 8:34:45 PM

Artist: ClariS
Title: Don't Cry
Source: Nexus
BPM: 123
Filesize: 5168kb
Play Time: 03:21
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.89 stars, 488 notes)
2. Normal (4.19 stars, 274 notes)

Download: ClariS - Don't Cry
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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MOE CLARIS!!
Normal:100%
Hard:100%
Special Thanks to: Loli - [Koinuri] for star

Hi. for m4m.



Fun map, good luck!

Loli -[Koinuri] wrote:

Hi. for m4m.

[Normal]
Nice Normal. I kind of feel that the 1/2 stream you occasionally have in this diff like 00:29:962 (1,2,3) might be too difficult for the Normal diff though.
You might need to make an Easy because this Normal is 4.17 stars, and the mapset needs a difficulty with star around 2.5-3.
A lot of blankets can use some fixing. Most of them are a bit off.

00:24:840 (2) - I think this would look and flow better if you replace the slider with a copy of 00:23:864 (1) rotated 180 degree shape. alright
00:29:230 (6) - Same thing here, except with 00:28:254 (5). alright but i shifted a bit to right
00:30:693 (4) - ^ with 00:29:230 (6)? Sorry if I'm being too Nazi, I find these kind of circular flow work better with the copy of itself. Making a new slider with similar shape feels inconsistent and random to me.
01:10:693 (1,2,3) - This beat is inconsistent with the rest of the notes around it. Move them back a red tick on timeline to be more consistent.
01:12:157 (3) - stack? Or remove this if you decide to follow ^ for consistencies i stacked
01:38:986 (4,2) - I don't really like the overlap here, maybe you can do something like this? oooo nice

01:50:206 (6,1) - Make it the same as 02:58:498 (1)? They're both mapped to the same part but one of them has a circle in the beginning then the spinner 1/4 after that, while the next one doesn't have any circle and start spinning right away. I personally prefer the 2nd spinner better because starting it 1/4 beat after a note might be too confusing for Normal diff i see what you mean fixed
01:51:669 - 02:07:035 There's plenty of stuff to map here, why put a break here ? You don't need to force a break in if the song doesn't sound like they have one. You mapped it for Hard diff too. (there's some 5 min no break ranked mapset) or is it just incomplete? i was considering making it permanent but i saw that i didn't like the break so i'm trying to map this part
02:09:230 (6) - I think moving this to around (364,260) ish would be better for flow. The turn kind of feel too sharp right now for a nice reflected C shaped flow. alright
02:47:279 (4,2) - Same thing as 01:38:986 (4,2) fixed

[Hard]
Decrease streams? x_x The BPM is pretty low, and I know this is the hardest diff of mapset, but the 7 note streams (including the repeat at the end) are bit too long for Hard imo. I also prefer the distance snaps to be more equal throughout the map, but eh.

Most of the spacings used with the blankets look very similar, and it might become a problem for notes that have different timings, such as 00:31:669 (1,2) and 00:32:889 (5,6). It's hard to visually tell whether they're 1/4 apart or 1/2 apart. I suggest increasing the spacing for all the 1/2 blankets you have in this map to make the difference clearer. eeeehhhh i'll get more opinions on this but i know what you mean

01:13:864 (3) - You can reduce all those white points and also make the slider easier to bend by adding a red point at the middle, like this. nice fixed

I also noticed some sliders in Normal/others in Hard with similar problem. Red points are useful to divide up the parts you want the white points to move, you should try them out
01:33:620 (5,6) - Too far for a 1/4 beat in Hard diff. I don't think these patterns are good idea. i'll also get more opinions on these

Fun map, good luck!

Thanks for the help

Hi there

This map contains mostly flow and blanket issues. Also you have strange New Combos (NC) on Hard.

[General]
02:42:401 - Kiai should start here, not at 02:34:596


[Normal]

Blanket issues:

00:28:254 (1) - *suggestion* NC should start here, not at 00:29:962 (3)
00:34:108 (4) - remove NC
00:38:010 (1) - ^
01:34:108 (2) - not really sure here.. I think this should be a NC from the rhythm.. maybe 01:33:132 (1) is a combo by itself?
02:41:425 (1) - same here

01:38:010 (2) - NC starts here
01:11:425 (2,3) - stack
02:17:767 (3,4) - ^
02:30:693 (3,4) - should be one long slider
02:40:206 (3,1) - bad overlap

02:41:425 (1) - remove finish
02:42:401 (2) - NC
03:09:718 (6) - NC

You also have flow issues
Combos like 00:35:571 (2,3,4) you should limit because it breaks the flow of the map
Another example 01:42:401 (2,3,4,5,6,1) and 01:47:523 (2,3,4,5)
not unrankable but for future you should be careful !

rhythm and hitsounds are nice


[Hard]

More blanket issues:


00:35:571 (6) - NC here, not at 00:36:303 (1)
00:41:181 (5) - NC here, not at 00:42:157 (1)
00:43:620 (2) - NC here, not at 00:43:132 (1)
00:48:498 (1) - I think it should be one combo
00:51:181 (2) - NC is here, also you should remove NC at 00:52:401 (1)

00:54:840 (2) - NC is here
00:56:791 (2) - ^
00:57:767 (1) - remove NC
01:03:620 (1) - ^
01:06:791 (4) - NC

01:08:742 (8) - NC here, not at 01:09:474 (1)
01:10:693 (3) - NC here, not at 01:11:425 (1)
01:19:474 (3,4) - should stack with 01:18:498 (1,2)
01:22:157 (2) - NC here instead
01:25:206 (9) - NC here

01:30:206 (2) - NC here instead
01:31:425 (1) - remove NC
01:37:767 (2) - NC here instead
01:42:645 (1) - remove NC, put NC 01:43:620 (3) instead
01:45:084 (1) - remove NC, put NC 01:45:815 (4) - instead

01:47:035 (1) - remove NC, put NC 01:47:767 (4) - instead
01:49:474 (12,13) - not stacked i think
01:59:474 (1,3) - should stack
02:02:645 (1,3) - ^
02:03:376 (2) - NC starts here instead

02:05:328 (2) - ^
02:11:181 (3) - NC here instead of 02:10:693 (1)
02:15:084 (1,3) - should stack
02:18:986 (2) - NC here, not at 02:18:742 (1)
02:19:962 (2) - NC here instead

02:20:937 (2) - ^
02:21:669 (1) - remove NC
02:34:596 (1,3) - should stack -- also bad blanket here 02:35:571 (3,4,5)
02:36:303 (4) - ok NC here, remove NC 02:37:767 (1), then add NC 02:38:254 (2), and remove NC 02:38:742 (1)
02:40:449 (6) - Then NC here if you did above

02:44:596 (1) - remove NC
02:45:571 (1) - same as above. put NC 02:46:059 (2) then remove NC at 02:47:035 (1) instead
02:45:571 (1,3) - bad stack -- also bad blanket here 02:46:547 (3,1,2)
02:51:913 (2) - NC here, not at 02:51:425 (1)
02:52:889 (1) - remove NC

02:54:108 (6) - NC
02:56:791 (1) - remove NC, put NC 02:57:767 (8)
03:03:620 (2) - NC here instead
03:07:523 (2) - ^
03:09:718 (4) - same as above. remove NC 03:08:986 (1)

03:11:669 (8) - NC
03:20:206 (1) - remove NC, put NC 03:20:937 (6)

Rhythm is nice.


It looks really long, but most are very quick to fix. I cheer you on~

FlawlessTea wrote:

Hi there

This map contains mostly flow and blanket issues. Also you have strange New Combos (NC) on Hard.

[General]
02:42:401 - Kiai should start here, not at 02:34:596 i like it the way it is


[Normal]

Blanket issues:

SPOILER

00:27:279 (4,5)
00:40:937 (4,2)
00:43:864 (1,2)
00:47:279 (1,2)
00:51:181 (2,3) - here there's actually a bad overlap with 00:50:449 (2)

00:54:108 (2,1)
01:35:084 (4,5)
01:39:718 (1,2) - here there's a bad overlap with 01:37:767 (1)
01:42:889 (3,4)
01:48:498 (3,5)

02:07:767 (3,4)
02:11:669 (2,4,5) - this is more subtle
02:18:986 (1,2) - bad overlap with 02:20:937 (3)
02:31:669 (6,7)
02:43:377 (4,5) - also i think 02:44:840 (6) is too close to the 4 slider

02:48:011 (1,2)
02:56:791 (3,5) - this is more subtle all fixed hopefully

00:28:254 (1) - *suggestion* NC should start here, not at 00:29:962 (3) i don't really like this. i'll keep it the way it is
00:34:108 (4) - remove NC alright
00:38:010 (1) - ^ alright
01:34:108 (2) - not really sure here.. I think this should be a NC from the rhythm.. maybe 01:33:132 (1) is a combo by itself? made the combo by itself
02:41:425 (1) - same here made it by itself

01:38:010 (2) - NC starts here i don't think so
01:11:425 (2,3) - stack they do(?)
02:17:767 (3,4) - ^ they do(?)
02:30:693 (3,4) - should be one long slider eeeh i don't really like it
02:40:206 (3,1) - bad overlap fixed

02:41:425 (1) - remove finish the finish fits with the cymbal here in the music
02:42:401 (2) - NC alright
03:09:718 (6) - NC alright

You also have flow issues
Combos like 00:35:571 (2,3,4) you should limit because it breaks the flow of the map
Another example 01:42:401 (2,3,4,5,6,1) and 01:47:523 (2,3,4,5)
not unrankable but for future you should be careful !

rhythm and hitsounds are nice


[Hard]

More blanket issues:

SPOILER

00:31:669 (1,2)
00:32:889 (5,6) - this is subtle
00:35:571 (6,1)
00:39:230 (1,2)
00:47:279 (1,2)

00:54:352 (1,2)
00:54:840 (2,5)
01:06:791 (4,5) - also the tail of 5 doesn't stack well with 01:06:303 (3)
01:29:474 (1,2)
01:31:913 (2,5)

01:37:279 (1,2) -
01:39:718 (1,2) - more subtle
01:42:645 (1,2) -
01:43:620 (3,4) -
01:45:815 (4,5) -

01:47:035 (1,4) - also bad overlap with 01:48:254 (5)
01:54:108 (6,7) - also bad overlap with 01:55:084 (8)
02:00:937 (4,5) - could be better
02:04:596 (1,2,3)
02:07:279 (1,3,4) - 3 and 4 should blanket around the 1

02:30:449 (1,2) - also bad stack with 02:31:669 (3)
02:40:449 (6,7) -
02:52:645 (4,1) -
02:54:108 (6,9,1) -
02:57:523 (7,8) - could be better
03:00:449 (1,2) - ^ all fixed hopefully

00:35:571 (6) - NC here, not at 00:36:303 (1) alright
00:41:181 (5) - NC here, not at 00:42:157 (1) alright
00:43:620 (2) - NC here, not at 00:43:132 (1) alright
00:48:498 (1) - I think it should be one combo alright
00:51:181 (2) - NC is here, also you should remove NC at 00:52:401 (1) alright

00:54:840 (2) - NC is here sorry but no
00:56:791 (2) - ^ alright
00:57:767 (1) - remove NC alright
01:03:620 (1) - ^ alright
01:06:791 (4) - NC alright

01:08:742 (8) - NC here, not at 01:09:474 (1) alright
01:10:693 (3) - NC here, not at 01:11:425 (1) alright
01:19:474 (3,4) - should stack with 01:18:498 (1,2) they do...
01:22:157 (2) - NC here instead alright
01:25:206 (9) - NC here sorry but no

01:30:206 (2) - NC here instead sorry but no
01:31:425 (1) - remove NC alright
01:37:767 (2) - NC here instead alright
01:42:645 (1) - remove NC, put NC 01:43:620 (3) instead alright
01:45:084 (1) - remove NC, put NC 01:45:815 (4) - instead alright

01:47:035 (1) - remove NC, put NC 01:47:767 (4) - instead i made a different fix myself
01:49:474 (12,13) - not stacked i think there is no 13 but they stack
01:59:474 (1,3) - should stack fixed
02:02:645 (1,3) - ^ fixed
02:03:376 (2) - NC starts here instead sorry but no

02:05:328 (2) - ^ sorry but no
02:11:181 (3) - NC here instead of 02:10:693 (1) sorry but no
02:15:084 (1,3) - should stack i don't think so
02:18:986 (2) - NC here, not at 02:18:742 (1) sorry but no
02:19:962 (2) - NC here instead sorry but no

02:20:937 (2) - ^ no
02:21:669 (1) - remove NC sorry but no
02:34:596 (1,3) - should stack -- also bad blanket here 02:35:571 (3,4,5) fixed and fixed
02:36:303 (4) - ok NC here, remove NC 02:37:767 (1), then add NC 02:38:254 (2), and remove NC 02:38:742 (1) fixed
02:40:449 (6) - Then NC here if you did above alright

02:44:596 (1) - remove NC alright
02:45:571 (1) - same as above. put NC 02:46:059 (2) then remove NC at 02:47:035 (1) instead fixed
02:45:571 (1,3) - bad stack -- also bad blanket here 02:46:547 (3,1,2) fixed
02:51:913 (2) - NC here, not at 02:51:425 (1) alright
02:52:889 (1) - remove NC

02:54:108 (6) - NC alright
02:56:791 (1) - remove NC, put NC 02:57:767 (8) sorry but no
03:03:620 (2) - NC here instead sorry but no
03:07:523 (2) - ^ alright
03:09:718 (4) - same as above. remove NC 03:08:986 (1) sorry but no

03:11:669 (8) - NC alright
03:20:206 (1) - remove NC, put NC 03:20:937 (6) i only removed nc

Rhythm is nice.


It looks really long, but most are very quick to fix. I cheer you on~

Thanks for the help

Tags:クラリス Clara Aris
If you wanna rank this map ,I think you need a easy diff【under 3 stars】
and in hard diff，you should try to add sounds（clap in normal and whistle in soft） at 2/4 in streams too

[Normal]
00:42:645 (3) - move the end to x:128 y:276
00:43:132 (4) - ^ x:192 y:360
00:54:108 (2) - ^ x:192 y:200
01:11:425 (2) - blanket the head of01:10:693 (1) -

[Hard]
ummmm……try to make somewhere（00:51:181 (1,2) - 01:05:815 (2,3) - 01:26:303 (1,2) - )like this 00:32:889 (5,6) -
and sounds like here（01:17:523) volume under 10% is unrankable

I'd modding the map again，if you make some change