1. 01:58:888 (4) - x:421 y:136

1. 00:48:439 (1,2) - I prefer the same pattern as 00:47:091 (1,2) -
2. 01:31:921- add a note?

1. 01:27:708 (4,5) - exchange their position. I think it is better to make the rotated pattern in common with 01:28:888 (3,4,5) -
2. 01:42:371 (3,1) - skillful!
3. 01:54:337 (3) - how about the symmetric angled slider with 01:54:843 (5) - ?
4. 01:59:225 (1) - upward slder is better for smoother cursor moving

1. 01:17:091 (5,1,2,3,1) - 少し流れが悪く感じました。回転させるflowでつないでも良いと思います。
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   148,40,77091,2,0,P|164:88|164:120,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   214,270,77428,6,0,P|146:263|108:207,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   196,180,77933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   282,208,78102,2,0,P|315:185|355:151,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   321,77,78439,6,0,P|267:29|128:45,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 01:21:135- add a note
3. 01:30:573 (4) - x:128 y:17. ここはsmoothな流れにした方が良いと思います
4. 01:43:550 (3,4) - 平行にしない方がsmoothだと思います
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:46:247 (2) - x:376 y:57. blanketしない方がsmoothだと思います

1. 01:00:911 (2,3) - 位置逆にしてＤＳ調整した方が良いflowになると思います
2. 01:20:966 (2) - delete?

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Easy]

1. 01:58:888 (4) - x:421 y:136 fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:48:439 (1,2) - I prefer the same pattern as 00:47:091 (1,2) - i try to diversify my pattern >.<
2. 01:31:921- add a note? Yeah not bad added

[Insane]

1. 01:27:708 (4,5) - exchange their position. I think it is better to make the rotated pattern in common with 01:28:888 (3,4,5) - i prefer the current pattern
2. 01:42:371 (3,1) - skillful!
3. 01:54:337 (3) - how about the symmetric angled slider with 01:54:843 (5) - ? yup fixed
4. 01:59:225 (1) - upward slder is better for smoother cursor moving kay :

nice song! I love nano<3 me too <3
Star ~☆
~Good Luck~

Okoratu wrote:

General

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1. RANK WHEN (also dat 42 sec intro)
2. Srsly I won't find much here...

Insane

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1. plays nice except for some things that annoy me (which i'm going to try to point out in the following [also your streams are sexy])
2. 01:05:967 (3,4) - I have no idea what sound this is that they make on 01:06:388 - but it's so dominant that i'd suggest mapping it (or at least consider it if more ppl think that way) as you said i'll consider if more ppl notice this
3. 01:11:697 (2,3) - dunno they kind of threw me off as something unintuitive, because there's 01:11:360 (1) - which maps the same sounds but isn't jumping or anything...
   My suggestion would be either: Okay
   
   1. Make 01:11:697 (2,3) - a slider like 01:11:360 (1) -
   2. Or make 01:11:360 (1) - 2 sliders like 01:11:697 (2,3) -
4. 01:24:168 (1) - might change its shape to something more even like this:
   
   Example

   
5. 01:35:629 (1) - this might be hypocritical, but you could move it to better blanket fixed
   
   Example

   
   slider in the pic is at x: 468 y: 60
6. 01:47:090 (1) - moving this one closer to 01:46:416 (3) - would at least make this one more pleasant to play since it's a jump with a sharp angle flow done
   
   Example

   
7. 01:52:315 (6) - 2.70x jump, might consider lowering that one to sth around 2.30 - 2.40 at max imo fixed
   
   Example

   
   Putting it in the end of 01:51:135 (1) - actually lets you keep the triangle and lowers the distance to 2.40

Gl with your map!

popner wrote:

Sry for late.

[Insane]
00:59:563 (3) - missed clap added
01:29:899 (2) - ^ ^
01:28:045 (1,3) - nazi - they do not properly stack with each other.fixed
01:39:674 (4,1) - the spacing of this blanket is inconsistent with the others. You can move 01:40:180 (1,2,3) - up a bit and adjust the shape of 01:40:180 (1) - . Like: okay

SPOILER

01:42:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nazi - not a accurately straight path. You should move 01:42:371 (3,2) - left a little. the current way is good enough imo

[Guy's Hard]
01:29:225 (4) - missed clap added for him

[Easy]
00:51:641 (3) - missed clap on end added

Remember to check through all diffs on hitsounds consistency. Then call me back.

Waiting for BAT approval (26 days ago)

kanpakyin wrote:

Ranked!